Fantasy Vengeance ~ Revenge is sweet [ᏚᎩᏚᎢᎬᎷ]

[Salty~Otaku]

Schedule​

UPDATE#​	DATE​
Update 117​	November 28th 11:30 PM​
Update 118​	December 4th 11:30 PM​
Update 119​	December 8th 11:30 PM​
Update 120​	December 12th 11:30 PM​
Update 121​	December 17th 11:30 PM​

 

[Salty~Otaku]

Bhai ek request hai ho sake pori karna story main ap english words bahut zada use kar rahe ho jiske wajah kafi chize saaf nhi ho pa Rahi or na he padhne main maza aa raha hai ho sake tho Kam use Karo

Hmm! Main samajh sakta hu, Baat ye hai ke main ke manhua Reader hu to most dialogue mujhe english me kick dete the, Lekin main ap ka nazariya bhi samajhta hu, Ye ek desi forum hai to story ko bhi uss hisaab se hona chahiye, Long dialogue hindi me likhe ki koshis karu ga aur English me likhe shabd explain hote rahe gye, little little changes ker ke daikhte rahe gye

 

[Salty~Otaku]

Bhai update ke baare me kya hi khu ek dam ! Bhai lekin aap ne abhi Tak ye nhi bataya ki akash aur arav ka kya connection hai ye samaj me nhi lekin ho sakta hai ki aage aane Wale update me mile.

Aakash Aakash ki backstory se bohat kuch connected hai to aise he nahi saamne aye hi wo, Lekin jab aye gi to maza aye ga

 

[Salty~Otaku]

Areee bhai ye kya tha kaise itna sab soch liye

Ye last Update first Update se planned tha, Haan samay ke saath changes huwe hai, Lekin pura plot ye wale update per he tha

har ek 1 fight ek dusre se jude huwe
Yoo Jung ne bhi apni sister

Ap ke review ke beech se shabd chuhe kha gaya hai Sabhi fights mujhe alag alag likhni per gayi thi ke kanhi kuch mixup na ho jaye, Tabhi ye Update itna samay lia tha

To bhai pack hoga ki khtam kya sare pack member bhi aarav ke shat infinte Prison mein honge pata nahi I think ab hoga kya inki ma dimag ka dahi krdiya

Pack ka kia ho ga ab? Ye sawal ap ka jawab ap ko Update ke beech me he mil jaye ga, Main ne future ke liye bohat se spoilers diye hai Update me

 

[Salty~Otaku]

Nice story

It's shocking update

Ding

Nice and fantastic update bhai keep posting

Unbelievable

Bro dhamekdar update bro

 

[Salty~Otaku]

I can say this is the best update ever delivered by you. story jab start hui thi to lag rha tha k thk hai werewolf ne is forum system genre introduce krwaya hai to sabhi ab isi k pichey bhagne lag gaye hai. even I had heard about this story from Werewolf's thread.

Story ke liye ye forum select karne ka ek reason Werewolf ki story he thi, Uss ne kitni mehnat ki hai main utni karne ki soch ker he shayad give up ker deta Lekin mujhe start me he kuch senior's ne support kia aur guide kia to mere liye sab kuch easy ho gaya

but now i admit you're a fucking genius, the way you wrote this update SPEECHLESS. tareef k liye words nahi mil the.

pehly lga k arav apne father ka badla le ga after his father's flashback. but us mein khaas nai tha k yeah normal shit. par is update k bad story ne apne name k sath insaaf kiya hai. ab samj mein aya hai bisi is ka name vengeance q hai

Plot change ker raha tha tab story wohi route pakar rahi thi! Lekin main khud satisfied nahi tha to Readers ko kaise uss plot per achi story de sakta tha, Story ka pura Plot ye Update per he tha, Lekin ye Update he puri story nahi thi

one thing I've just clicked KYA HUMARA PROTAGONIST AB EK VILLIAN HO GA qk k ab mujhy esa hi lag rha hai k arav ab soft-hearted hero nahi rhe ga he'll be just a cold-hearted killer who just wants his revenge. lekin is k liye main sure bhi nahi hun qk shyd arav mein kuch had tak us ka true nature rhe ga we'll see then

See! Purane Updates per dhayan dene ka ye he benifit hai ke story ke saath ap ache se connect hote ho, Sirf current update per he ap puri story nahi judge ker sakte ho, That's why ap ke Reviews ka mujhe bhi intezar rehta hai ke ap kia kuch pick ker sake ho, Aage kia hone wala hai wo ap ko agle Arc me pata lag jaye ga, aise he dhayan se parhte rehna

urvi ka character fav tha almost sabhi readers ka is ki death dikhana is a very bold step by write I appreciated that. agar ye plot requirement hai to is barey mein writer ko force karna means story ka kabara karwane jesa hai. mujhy khushi hai k ap ne plot ko change nahi kiya warna hume itna zbardast update kese parhne ko milta.

Exactly! Mere liye Plot badalna utni bari baat nahi thi lekin wo originality khatam ho rahi thi, Tab wo story intrested rehti he nahi agar sab kuch expected hota to, Mere liye readers important hai lekin story ke saath bhi insaan karna hai mujhe to kuch bold steps lene he pare gye

to yoo-jung LUNA hai arav k pack ki to kya ye humare liye hint hai story ki heroien yehi ho gi?

Harem

yoo-jung ka character to shuru se hi ek strong character tha assassin skills plus leadership bhi nazar aai hai is character mein and most importantly yoo-jung ek bold steps lene wali personality hai. is ka one of the bold move hume arav k death k bad nazar aya hai aur ek leadership bhi nazar aai thi k agar sabhi emotional ho gaye to un ki death easily ho sakti hai then she took a charge.

Yoo-Jung ka character Personality realistic hai sirf idealist nahi hai, Usse situation Accept karni ati hai, Yoo-Jung ki intelligence bina System ke bhi 70 thi, Remember

pehly dar tha k yoo-jung apne clan ki wajah se arav ko betray kar sakti hai lekin ab to fire clan khud is ka enimy hai to kuch relief mili ko chlo abhi to esa kuch nai ho ga.

lekin pta nahi q yoo-ri ki death ka bohat dukh hua hai yoo-jung k ane se lga tha k yes she can save her PER.... urvi ki death se zeyada dukh yoo-ri ki death ka hua hai qk urvi ki death k scene mein aur bhi kafi scene chal rhe the to itna feel karne ka time nahi tha lekin yoo-ri k scene ko maine dil se feel kiya .

Yoo-ri ke scene me Hope dikh rahi thi ke Yoo-Jung bacha le gi, Lekin wo bilkul alag huwa uss ke baad Urvi ka kuch expected ho gaya tha, Aur ye main ne janbujhkar kia tha

kya yoo-jung k bhi mind se arav ki memories mit jayein gi ?

Ek simple Spoiler du ga

Spoiler

Dono Fights kab huwi hai wo daikho

akanksha ka kya scene hai phir is ka zrur btana bhai qk i forget k in kya patch up hua tha ya nai

Akanksha Manohar ki beti hai na Larayi he kab huwi ghe ke patch up hota Uss k ye Arc me itna role nahi tha to kuch khaas nahi likha

bhenchod vansh kya ploting kar geya sala. bhai agar to isey main villain rakhne ka soch rhe ho jo k esa nahi ho ga lekin agar phir bhi soch rhe ho to bhai rehne do ye deserve nahi karta.

Ek heroine nahi rakha to ek Villain kiu rakhu ga Ap lutf lete rahiye

aur archana kya bakchodi pel gai yahan pe bisi itna sweet character tha lekin acha hai ab revenge mein maza aye ga. i think akash ne jo vansh k sath kiya tha to us ne archana ko btaya ho ga to apne bete ko bachane k liye ye sab kar diya ho ga. vanshika bhi udr hi thi lift mein lekin q sabhi same time pe same place pe.

Bohat kuch daikhne ko milne wala hai agle Arc me Sab kuch first Update se plan tha to socho likhte huwe meri thinking kahan ho gi

i think akash ki security hoti thi kuch urvi k liye agar main galat nai hun to us ka kya wo kidr gai.

arav prison mein keyd ho geya aur us ki memories mostly removed ho chuki hain ab to koi us ki help bhi nai kar sakta ho gai lekin ek minute arav ka pack ko to sab yad rehna hi chahiye aur us pack mein se 2 log earth pe hi hain yoo-jung aur belle inhe arav ka dard aur pareshani feel honi hi chahiye nah bhai warna pack ka feel nai aye ga. chahe ek anjana sa dar ya kuch bhi ek hint to milti hi chahiye inhe

agar bhai prison ko explore karne ka mood hai to bhai thora fast forward hi karna agar to plot requirement hai to phir to kuch ho hi nahi sakta baat hi khatam.

Kuch bhi bekar likh ker Update nahi kheenchne wala main, Direct Plot per he story chale gi

yr 15 20 din wait nahi ho sake ga kushish karna k thora jaldi hi update continue kar dena is update k bad to wese bhi intzaaar karna bohat mushkil hai

6 maheene se rela break nahi lia tha main koi, Jab Update lete hote bhi to main kuch ker raha hota ya Story ke baare me soch raha hota, Abhi mind relax karne ki zaroorat thi to break zaroori tha aur abhi + Pubg pass bhi hai to samajh jao phir

keep

keep posting

waiting for the next update

for your precious and detail review! Aise he saath bane rehna

 

[Salty~Otaku]

Bhenchod! Mood off hi ho gya.....

1st point ek hindi story mein jarurat se jyada english use ho rahi hai jisme kuch words sar ke upar se hi nikal jate hai....

Wo har Update me aise he likhi thi, Overnight ye cheeze nahi sudharti samay lagta hai, Next Arc per in sab per he kaam karne wala hu

2nd point archana ka dhokha jisko maa ki muraat dikha raha tha writer aur ab ek raand bana diya....

“The saddest thing about betrayal is that it never comes from your enemies, it comes from those you trust the most”

3rd aur gandu aarav kisi ko maarke urvi ki maut ka badla bhi nahi le paya maza tab ata jab woh vahi ke vahi marta sab ko verna lambe time baad to kutta bhi pather marne wale ko kaat ke apna badla le leta hai.....

Ap ko shayad samajh nahi ayi ke Aarav ne jaate huwe kia kaha tha Ap ko sach me lagta hai ke Aarav ke liye wahan Vansh ko maarna mushkil tha? Lekin uss ke khud ke liye wo kafi nahi tha

Totallly disappointing update urvi ki death

Update me kuch acha na lagne aur Update acha na hone me antar hota hai! 10K words ke Update me agar ap ko sirf wohi sab dikha to uss me main kuch nahi ker sakta Lekin aage parhte rahiye ga hope ke ap ko samajh aa jaye ye Update aise kiu likha gaya tha

 

[Dark_Raj]

Waiting for update bro...

 

[S M H R]

Hmm! Main samajh sakta hu, Baat ye hai ke main ke manhua Reader hu to most dialogue mujhe english me kick dete the, Lekin main ap ka nazariya bhi samajhta hu, Ye ek desi forum hai to story ko bhi uss hisaab se hona chahiye, Long dialogue hindi me likhe ki koshis karu ga aur English me likhe shabd explain hote rahe gye, little little changes ker ke daikhte rahe gye

Hmm thanks bro
Tell me what about update kab se shuru kar rahe ho

 

[drx prince]

Bhai yoo jung ke sath ghati ghatna 2 04am aur aarav ke sath ghati ghtna after 5am to kaise clear hoga ki yoo jung ki memory se aarav delete hua hai ya nhi

 

[Salty~Otaku]

Bhai yoo jung ke sath ghati ghatna 2 04am aur aarav ke sath ghati ghtna after 5am to kaise clear hoga ki yoo jung ki memory se aarav delete hua hai ya nhi

Update ek baar dobara parhiye ap ko samajh aa jaye gi