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Fantasy Vengeance ~ Revenge is sweet [ᏚᎩᏚᎢᎬᎷ]

Who are your two favorite male characters in this story?


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Salty~Otaku

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To ankush ne shadi nhi ki kyunki varsha uski wife h duniya ki najro me......sachcha 👏aashik bhai .....yaha ladki k bachche ho gaye lekin bhai wait krta raha ....jiska fal use bad me mila bhi...well played ankush bro👏
( 🤔wait iska matlab avinash ki shadi se pehle hi duniya ne use ankush ki wife man liya tha ) now got it... Duniya hi chutiya h....ya indono ne milke sabko banaya ....jisme avinash ki bhi manjoori thi

Bura to sabse jyda isi baat ka hi laga ki wo uske pas wapis chali gayi.....

Aur kewal surname change krne se .....wo safe ho gai ....matlab jo log pichhe pade h...ya padne wale the..... wo ab chutiya h..... Jo unko apna target hi pehchanna nahi aata .....

Uski pehchan QI user ki h .....jise kewal suraname change krne se chhipaya ja sakta h .......
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Main explain karna pasand nahi karta hu kyu ke usme bohat spoiler nikal ate hai! Lekin ab karna he ho ga :sigh:

Varsha ke father ne uski identity ko secret rakha huwa tha! Ye he kaaran tha ke clan ko khatam karte huwe uske upar koi saval nahi uthaya gaya, Sirf kuch chuninda logo ko he uski existence ke baare me pata tha aur usme Avinash ki family ati thi.


Secondly Varsha ke dushman nahi hai! Lekin uski Spirit Clan ki identity reveal hone per uske peeche log per sakte the, Jaise hum ne daikha bhi tha ke Derek ke Qi Use karne per clan meeting me uska zikr aa gaya tha.


Varsha ka aage ke updates me aur clear karne wala tha to uska intezar karna! Baaki Ankush ne mujhe nahi lagta ke puri story me he kuch galat kiya hai...Usko sirf negative feelings per villain banaya hai sab ne, Ek baar peeche ke kuch updates aur dhayan se padh lena.


Varsha ne Kyu ye couple ka dhong racha hai ye bhi aage clear ho ga! :declare:
 

Looteraaa

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Main explain karna pasand nahi karta hu kyu ke usme bohat spoiler nikal ate hai! Lekin ab karna he ho ga :sigh:

Varsha ke father ne uski identity ko secret rakha huwa tha! Ye he kaaran tha ke clan ko khatam karte huwe uske upar koi saval nahi uthaya gaya, Sirf kuch chuninda logo ko he uski existence ke baare me pata tha aur usme Avinash ki family ati thi.


Secondly Varsha ke dushman nahi hai! Lekin uski Spirit Clan ki identity reveal hone per uske peeche log per sakte the, Jaise hum ne daikha bhi tha ke Derek ke Qi Use karne per clan meeting me uska zikr aa gaya tha.


Varsha ka aage ke updates me aur clear karne wala tha to uska intezar karna! Baaki Ankush ne mujhe nahi lagta ke puri story me he kuch galat kiya hai...Usko sirf negative feelings per villain banaya hai sab ne, Ek baar peeche ke kuch updates aur dhayan se padh lena.


Varsha ne Kyu ye couple ka dhong racha hai ye bhi aage clear ho ga! :declare:
Mera mood kaafi dino tak ise lekar kharab raha.... aaj aapne reply kiya to shayad kuchh jyda hi puchh liya mene


Wese m bhi ye likhna chahta tha jo hua achha hua bc...... Jo uska saya nahi tha aarav par


Hnn 🤔ankush istemal hua ....aur khud ko hone de rha h ...aage badh jata ...


Baaki agar me koi Chinese ya Korean drama dekhta hu....to unme aisa kuchh dekhne mil jata h in that perspective that's ok ....aise log hote h (varsha jese) ....aur yaha wese bhi ye log kabhi france kabhi spain .....to kabhi kahi hote h


To ab koi sawal nii ....h ...... (adultry/ incest likhne wala khud ki story pr wo anubhav nahi karta jo padhne wala karta h) to us hisaab se aap hi karta dharta ho aur aage ka sb soch samjhkar hi likh rhe ho....... To aap waisa to bilkul nhi sochte jo hm updates padhne wale soch bethte h......
 
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Salty~Otaku

ᴺᵒ ᴹᵃᵗᵗᵉʳ ᵂʰᵃᵗ ᴵ’ᵐ ᶜˡᵒᶜᵏⁱⁿᵍ ᴼᵘᵗ ᴮʸ ˢⁱˣ
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Mera mood kaafi dino tak ise lekar kharab raha.... aaj aapne reply kiya to shayad kuchh jyda hi puchh liya mene


Wese m bhi ye likhna chahta tha jo hua achha hua bc...... Jo uska saya nahi tha aarav par


Hnn 🤔ankush istemal hua ....aur khud ko hone de rha h ...aage badh jata ...


Baaki agar me koi Chinese ya Korean drama dekhta hu....to unme aisa kuchh dekhne mil jata h in that perspective that's ok ....aise log hote h (varsha jese) ....aur yaha wese bhi ye log kabhi france kabhi spain .....to kabhi kahi hote h


To ab koi sawal nii ....h ...... (adultry/ incest likhne wala khud ki story pr wo anubhav nahi karta jo padhne wala karta h) to us hisaab se aap hi karta dharta ho aur aage ka sb soch samjhkar hi likh rhe ho....... To aap waisa to bilkul nhi sochte jo hm updates padhne wale soch bethte h......
Maybe kyu ke main Story ko bohat aage se samajh raha hu to main ap ke current thoughts ko samajh nahi sakta hu! Lekin aage chal ker ap mujhe samajh sako gye :approve:

I'm happy ke ap story ko itna serious le rahe ho aur ye mere liye motivation he hai! Replies karna mere liye bohat mushkil hota hai kyu ke main kuch samay se ek part time job bhi ker raha hu to mere liye time manage karne me bohat issue ho raha hai.


Lekin ab baaki replies karne ke baad hum current reviews per aa jaye gye aur har update ke saath he reply bhi ate rahe gye :good:
 

Devil0011

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Cure bana diya....kya main kuchh miss kar rha hu.....aap yad dila do....mujhe to laga tha aarav ki wajah se sab bache......kya ab ye sb possible ho gaya h ki QI user aur normal vyakti k sambandh ban sake aur koi gadbad na ho

Is baat se tou mere maan main bhi a raha hai. Maybe cure ban chuka hai lakin abhi tak story main yah charcha nahi hoi. Kyu ke Arav ka beta Derek bhi to un bacho jaisa e hai. Arav aik Qi User hai aur Derek ki Maa (abhi naam bhul raha hu) Qi Holder nahi thi. Phir bhi Derek thik hai usy baakio jaise koi problem nahi hoi. Tou maybe Cure ban chuka hai.
 

Looteraaa

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Is baat se tou mere maan main bhi a raha hai. Maybe cure ban chuka hai lakin abhi tak story main yah charcha nahi hoi. Kyu ke Arav ka beta Derek bhi to un bacho jaisa e hai. Arav aik Qi User hai aur Derek ki Maa (abhi naam bhul raha hu) Qi Holder nahi thi. Phir bhi Derek thik hai usy baakio jaise koi problem nahi hoi. Tou maybe Cure ban chuka hai.
Yrr ye problem tab aati thi jb twins hote the.....
Sprit clan wale logo ne pehle bhi to jabarjasti sambandh banaye the.....aisa hi bataya tha shayad...
 
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