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Awesome update
Bro like pure hone ke bad Or time dene ke bad bhi aap time pr update nhi dete ho
We are true lovers of your feed
Pls bro exam pr bhi focus kro pr pls 1 week me 1 update de do
Agar double like ho to me kr lunga pr pls na bro
U r outstanding in writing
So pls request he
just wow update
Bahot khubsurat update Diya Bhai ap news
Nice update
Msst update bro
Arav ke lie next stage ab aur tough ho jae gi
Dekhna ho gya kya hotta h agge
Eargerly waiting for next one
nice upsate
Mast update dia hai bhai.... next update ka intezar rahega....
Outstanding update
Bhai AP ke exam kb khatam ho ge
Great update. Yeh update ek tarah se pichle update ke continuation me hai. Game Master aur Caroline ke baare me detail me bataya hai.
Ab Game Master (Victor) ka past kafi emotional tha. Ek seedha-sada ladka galatfehmi ki vajah se apni maa se hi relation bana baitha aur usi samay usko system mila. Dusron ke mann ki baat jaan kar weh apne aap ko control nahi kar paya aur apni maa aur doston ko bhi maar dala, ek bedard hathyara bann gaya.
Caroline bhi apne pita ke hathyare se badla lene aayi thi, Aarav ke bina to uska kuch hota hi nahi, weh Becky ko bhi le doobti. Khair Aarav ne ek hamesha ke liye dost dhoond liya hai.
Dungeon Master ne bhi kya khoob khel khela hai, weh Aarav ko guilt se kamzor karna chah raha hai. Sabse interesting to tab hua jab Yoo-Jung ne apne ek hi bache huye haath se arrow ko bhale ki tarah fenk kar aage badh rahe player ko maar diya.
Ek doubt hai, kuch pledges dollars me hain aur kuch dngeon points me, dono me kya anter hai. $250K ka ek dungeon point hai. Kya dollars ko kisi challenge ko support karne ke liye lagate hain aur dungeon points ek tarah se reward ki tarah milte hain...
Waise abhi tak to Aarav ki team C.O.D. me survive kar rahi hai, lekin kab Aarav ki aankh aur Yoo-Jung ki arm theek hogi aur kab Elite Guild aur Fire Clan se koi link milega, shayad aage pata chalega. Aur kya Aarav aur uski team ka level C.O.D. me badh sakta hai...
Ma
Super update
Zabardast update
Bahut hi badhiya update diya ha aapne
Superb update bro superb
In less then 24 hours we had crossed half way of like guys be fast kya pata Tuesday ki jagah Sunday hi update mil jay hume
Har baar ke tarha jabardast
Very nice bro
Bahut umnda likha hai
Shandar,super
Waiting for nxt
Bhut hi jabardast update
To ye update pichle update ka hi second part tha
Isme victor or Caroline ka past bataya gaya ki aakir kyo victor aesa ban gaya or kyo Caroline COD me participate karna chahti thi
Ab dekte hai aarav ki team second stage par kya karti hai
Shandar update
Super update bro
Wow, that was a mind lasting update, dear bro. The real catch was no less either - Caroline's background and reason for her revenge. What a bloody turner it turned out to be - to hell with it, yet again you proved yourself to be a master story writer and why not - Episode after episode, you continue to churn out such mind boggling twists and turns; and it seems there's no dearth of them, either, phew... Let's wait and see what aces are up the sleeves of Dungeon master with which he plans to confront Aarav and his team, in your upcoming awesome, thrilling and mysterious updates, dear bro. Thank you once again dear bro for such a superlative .
Fabulous update bhai
Nice update
Waiting for next update
Brilliant update
Now 1st stage clear
Wait for next level
Super update
Bass ab 23 likes aisa laga raha hai panipat ki ladai ya angrezo ke shashank se bhi lamba time lega
Ek no mast mazedaar update brother
D
ing nice one keep posting
Only 11 likes left guys aj kar do shayad writer Monday hi update dede
Target completed man...
Waiting for another update
Bahut hi badhiya update diya ha
1. Victor ke past se to yahi pata chalta ha ki system use bahut galat time pe mila ha agar use system us time na milta to wo aaj aisa na bana hota lekin victor ne galat kiya system milne ke bad wo bahut kuchh kar sakta tha sare sapne sach kar sakta tha apne or apni maa ke lekin apne gusse ir nafrat me sab kuchh khud apne haton se barbad kar gaya or ban gaya villain
2. Idhar aye haya victor kitna ud raha tha game master banker sari hawa nikal di arav ne iski sabko nahi pata kinis gane ka hacker aa gaya ab is game me jo ki lagta ha ek ek ko lapete me lega me to chahta hun is malphas ko nhi lapete me le isko bhi dho dale bahut maje le raha ha ye sabke
3. Idhar caroline ne apna badla liya hum soch rahe the wahi hua caroline ne kisi apne ko jarur khoya tha is COD me lekin wo uske father honge ye nahi socha tha kher arav ne badhiya kiya jo caroline ke revenge me uska sath diya
4. Idhar deathwatchers ki najron me Arav uper uthta ja raha sabko impress karta ja raha ha jisse kuchh ki jal rahi hogi ir wo age chalker arav ke liye mushkil sabit ho sakte ha
5. Idhar dungeon master bhi khush nahi ha arav ke performance se kyonki pehli bar kisi ne uski game me ghusker uske player ko mara ha jahan ye log dusron ko marta dekhker khush hoker paisa kamate han wahin aaj logbag inke hi player ki mout per maje le rahe han jaise ko taisa pata nahi ye dungeon master kon ha or iska band kab bajega
6. Idhar dungeon master or malphas ne puri koshish ki arav and team ko todne ki dusron ki mout dikhaker unhe unka jimmedar tehraker lekin arav to lagta ha sar per ka kafan bandh ker nikla ha ki ya to ye COD rahegi ya me COD ki dhajiyan uda ke hi chain lega arav chalo sab stage 2 per aa gaye han dekhte han ki idhar konsa khatra inka intejar kar raha ha
Bhai shirf 5likes bache hai mar do and writer babu ap likhna shuru karo
Writer babu apke motivation ke liye itne like and comment mila kar kafi hai ki nahi
This update was too good bro .. i don't know why but jab se aarav prison se aaya hai he is so overpowered that no one seems to be his match . As in COD he looks like a king among all players. I hope someone will give him a tough play.
Someone will think why i am demeaning aarav but its reality aarav is too overpowered like a hacker in the whole game who simply uses some tactics to overplay the game itself.
By the way i am a huge fan of your writings keep it up brother waiting for next
One more thing i have noticed in this thread is that 100+update still it is on 745 pages .
Waiting bro
Write babu likes target done please reply on update
No one can ever figured it out that how badly aaush bro pushes writers to give the next update
Bhai jab tak update nahi dete tabtak ak nayi story start hui hai padh lo
https://xforum.live/threads/evolution-is-not-end-is-beginning.164146/
Kya karu bhai sare writers pata nahi kab kop bhawan me chale jau or story adhuri reh jaye jaise Koi to rok lo pritam das ji story itni pyari story adhuri hai or bhi bahut si hai so I am like this
Ha bhai Koi to rok lomeri bhi sabse favorite story hai....vo maine dusri site pe padhi thi.....Aaj tak uske jagah koi nahi le paya.
Bhai mene writer se ek baar baat bhi ki par writer babu ab us story me koi intrest nahi shayad ab ye sapna hi rehega ki kya hua age
Bolne ke baad thankyou agar dil se hai to update ke sath vo jo ap dusra wala update dete hai vo bhi do
Nahi ye pahle tha ye punishment hai ek loyal reader ki jo ki writer ko mani padegi or vo update kal hi chaiye
Bhai AP ne kaha tha sunde se phele target Pura ho ga to Monday ko update a Kaye gi ab AP Wednesday pe chale gye he ab a khud ziadti kr the ho or apni zuban se phir the ho
Bro mai ek baar phir kah deta hu insabki aapse personal dushmani hai
Bro take your time and make update better no best than your earlier ones in editing and also in many more aspects.i will be waiting for Wednesday night
meri bhi ... kriti n punnu
Bro in jaisi stories ko padhkar hi maine incomplete stories ko padhna chhod diya sala aage ka jaanne ka kabhi mauka nahi milega .
Isiliye jo running hai ya completed hai usko hi padhta hu .
Guide sama Mian current status update kar dian
Exame kab tk khatam ho ge
Mine too has exams in the coming months that will cost no loss of any updates to me .Good luck bro for your exams .
Waiting for tomorrow's update
Kab ayega update
Aaj update aayega na
Chalo wait kar lenge par bada update hai to like target mat badha dena bhai 130 like karwate karwate halath kharab ho jati hai
Ye hr baar ka h
Thank you dear bro for your kind reply. Take care of your health, please. We don't mind waiting for your superb updates, dear bro. Regards. T .C.
Take care bro ,we will be waiting for your update .
Par jo bhi ho bc badi hasrat se sign in kiya tha ki update aa gya hoga raat haseen ho jayegi par ye insani shareer ka koi thikana nahi kab kya ho jaye.
Ho ga hi writer bahi ka exam ha to time nikalana possible nahi hota
Waiting
Bhai Jan Wednesday Bhai gya. Ab Thursday ke 8. 30. Pm ho gye Apne abhi tk update nahi dia
wohi to hota he like karne ki liye bhi
kai baar vyakti bhi busy hota he or padh nahi pata jisase like kar sake
par bhi sahab ko to pahle 130 like hi chahiye koi adjustment nahi fir update wo bhi?
Writer bro ka fever nahi utra hoga .kal predict kiya hoga ki health sahi ho jayega to update de denge par lag raha hai fever abhi tak jaari hai .Take Care Of Yourself bro .we will wait .
Ek baat maine isi thread pe notice ki hai hi readers mein zeal nahi hai utsah thoda kam hai are bros is thread ko apna gossip adda hi samajh lo koi reader kuch likhe to uspe apni pratikriya do uska reply do taki thread pe bhi thoda crowding ho . Isse reader bhi khush aur thread owner bhi .
Update 104 has been posted Guys!!!