Incest Vihaan Aur Ashita - Bhai Behen ki kahani - Exclusively written for XFORUM(COMPLETED)

[Casinar]

Bahut bada turning point h...ab kya hoga...so worry about ashita...

thanks raaz bhai, haan turning point agaya magar aur bhi ziada ane wala hai, buss padhte chalna bhai aur reply bhi karte chalna saath saath

 

[Casinar]

OMG
Doctor to Tharki nikla
Sale ko itna bara secret Pata chal gya Ab to wo uske dam pe Ashita ko blackmail kar ke kuch v kar skta hai
Dekhna hai Ashita kuch krne degi ya nhi
Ab next week ka besabri se intezar .......

bahot shukriya Johny bhai, haan Doctor ko sab pata chal gaya,
bade fikr ki baat hai
chalo aaj dekhte hein kia hota hai

 

[Casinar]

donon updates bahut hi behtareen tarike se likha gaya hai
ek ek scene jeise enkhon ke saamne hum dekh sakte hein
aap itni details mein keise sab kcuh dikha sakte ho iss se mujhe tahjub hota ai
you are indeed a great writer casi dear
appreciated very much.
in the first update you showed the torments of Ashita and in the second one she takes the troubles to look for the mobile of her brother but found out the real face of the doctor.
amaing and unexpected turn in the story which was very intelligently planned by you.
so this is why the doctor was introduced in the story.
the hot and sexy part between ashita and the doctor was indeed hot
but how will she get out of that and how did the doc open the pics when fingerprints were needed to open the secure folder to see the pics?
casi dear you are very intelligent and this part is going like a thriller update
loved it very much.

thanks very very much for the appreciative post savi dear

 

[Casinar]

Mobile kaisey khola doctor ney

aaj padh lena usske baare mein

 

[Casinar]

Pehle socha tha vapas nahi aaunga es thread par
Lekin jab sala Nasha havy Hua to apne aap dil yaha le aaya
Sayad main vihaan se kuch jada hi relate kar raha hu
Vo apni behan ke liye Pagal tha aur hum kisi aur ki behan ke liye
Fark Bas etna hai ki uska pyaar uska intzaar kar raha hai aur humara pyaar kisi aur ka intzaar kar raha hai

Rahi baat update ki
Apne incest story me Dunia ki reality jis andaz se dikhae Hai Vo kabile a tarif hai
Har kisi se nahi ho Pata, mujhse to bilkul na ho
I guess that's makes you a great writer
I just want to make things right for vihaan
Because I know how it feels
How it feels to love someoone
How it feels when someone ignores you and even without any fucking reason
And how it feels when someone treats you like a piece of shit
And yes that father daughter bonding yeah that was good too
I'm happy that mother's character is a litter bit Grey but that the need of the story
You are giving a beautiful message here
Keep going this way
Stay strong
Big respect for you

aap ka bahot bahot shukriya itni achi comment ke liye Lone bhai.....
bahut acha laga aap ke iss comment ko pashke.
yes i also know how it feels when someone rejects you, i have also gone through all that and maybe that's why I can relate and write those emotions which please you all here....
thanks for the appreciation bro, and keep reading and giving your point of view whichmeans a lot to me.
thanks again. update coming in a few mins.

 

[Casinar]

Hmmm to doctor saala tharki nikla Vihaan ke mobile mein jo Ashita ke photos hai usne wo Sabhi dekh liya hai or ab usko Apna Hathiyar Banakar Ashita ka fayda uthane ki koshish kar raha hai,
Yahan to sab ulat pulat ho gaya bhai main to Anirudh ko galat samajh raha tha Kyunki wo donon Bhai Bahan Ke Pyar ke bare mein Jante Hue bhi doctor ke sath mein Ashita ka Rishta pakka kar diya lekin wo Bechara to abhi b donon ko support karne ki koshish kar raha hai,
Lekin Ashita Ko Itna Darne ki kya jarurat hai Kyunki Uske papa Anirudh ko donon Bhai Bahan Ke Pyar Ka Pata Hai doctor Agar Uske mom-dad ko batane ke liye bhi dhamki Dega to Uske papa Anirudh Sab handle kar lenge lekin Ashita Dar Ke Mare usko Aage badhane ka chance de rahi hai Kahin Aisa Na Ho ki tharki doctor usko pel De, khair dekhte hain ab aage kya hota hai.....

Waiting for next update_____

bahot bahot shukriya Siraj bhai, khushi hai ke aap ko update passand aya dost

 

[Casinar]

Ashita ko vihaan se baat krni chahiye thi papa se baat ke baare me
But shayad vihaan samajh nhi pata kyonki kachi umar ka pyar tha

Photos leak ka dar mujhe phle se lgta tha jb vihaan photos click kr rha tha
Doctor ke purpose krne and us time ashita ke clothes details se confirm ho gya ki lamba phasega

And last update was awesome

Ashita baad mein bataegi Vihaan ko ke ussne kyun baat nahin bataayi thi vihaan ko
chalo aaj dekh lete hein ke Ashita nikal paati hai dr. ke chungal se ya nahin

 

[Casinar]

Meri bhi yahi haalat hai brother..peene ke baad hi main is thread pe visit karta hu...utarne ke baad sochta bhi nhi agar sochunga to phir tikani padegi.

hahaha kia yaar mere thread ko maikhaane ka zarya bana diya tum ne to
wo koyi aur hai jo paani mila ke piye
Humto wo hai jo bottal hilla ke piye
aadaab arz hai janaab

 

[Casinar]

Madarchod hai saala ye doctor..ek doctor hoke ye kaam kar raha hai apni dignity ka to khayal rakhna chahiye..aur mobile uske paas hai ab wo ashita ko blackmail na kare..madarchod ne pyar ke liye nahi balki apni hawas mitane ke liye rishta maanga hai aur wo madarchod randi behan ki laudi suman usko vihaan se jyada is rishte ki padi hai..maa ki laudi ne paisa dekha hoga..aur khamkha me hum lgo ne Anirudh ke gaand faad di jabki fadni suman aur us bhadwe doctor ki chahiye..doctor aur Suman ki maa ka bhosda aur doctor aur Suman ki maa ki chut..ab dekhna ye hai ki ashita doctor se kaise deal karegi..Anirudh ko bataygi ya khud karegi..kyonki wo ab blackmail to karega apni hawas mitane ke liye jo usne shuruaat kar hi di hai..kahi ashita doctor se nipate ke chakkar me khud chud na jaye..kyonki wo ab shayad ye bolega ki ashita ne baat nahi mani to pics wo suman ya Anirudh ko dikha dega ya upload kar dega ya fir vihaan ke treatment ke naam pe bhi blackmail kar sakta hai...

yash bhai ap ke iss comment se main bahot hanssa, bahut hanssi aayi mujhe
wo iss liye ke aap ne doctor ko itna gaali de diya, aur Suman ko bhi ke hansste hansste mera jabda dukhne laga
dekh lena aaj shayad Ashita bhi aap ki language use kar le aap ke iss comment ko dekh kar.
bada maja aya aap ke iss comment ko p;adhke bhai.
aap ka ghussa uss doctor par jaayiz hai bhai.
weise kia hoga Ashita ke pics ka, doctor kia karta hai aj ki update mein zaroor dekhna Yash bhai.

 

[Casinar]

Ek baat hai casi...pahle xp aur ab xf pe tum mere favourite writer ho yaar..hats off brother ye meri first story hai tumhari likhi hui jo main read kar raha hun..and one more thing..is thread ke update padne ke baad main aadhe se jyada time is story ke baare me sochta hun..jabse maine ye story read karni start ki hai.aur jab jab update post hone ke baad main read karta hun to us time main, meri scotch and most probably rumhari ye story.padna fir uske baad sochna.aur baat kare tumhari writing skills ke baare me, to main kya kahu mujhe samajh nahi aa raha kaun sa word use karu. Speechless...and mujhe jab xp ke baare pata chala tha aur uske band hone tak main uska daily visitor tha mere pass ek hi kaam tha morning me utho aur xp ki stories read karo kyonki xp pe stories bhi kaafi thi..and uske band hone ke baad jab xf aaya to bhi main daily visit kaeta hun but main stories mostly read Karta hun but comment kam karta hun but jabse tumhare thread pe visit kiya hai aur jabse ye story padni start kari hai tabse comment regular kar raha hun..ye mere liye khud hi unexpected hai..kyonki main hamesha se hi ek silent reader raha hun...lekin sach me tumare likhe ka tareeka aur jis hisab se present kar rahe ho...wo kabeele taarif hai..

bahot bahot shukriya Yash bhai
Mujhe kitni khushi hui yeh jaan kar aap itnse saalon se ek silent readers the aur mere iss kahani ne aap ko comment karme pe majbor kiya yeh mere liye bahot khushi ki baat hai, aur aap ki saaf dili aur sach bataane ka ada mujhe behad pyara hai bhai.
aap ne mujhe izat bakshi yeh sab kehkar, aur main apne sabhi readers ka kadar karta hoon. kyun ke readerrs nahin to hamara likha to bekaar hai bhai
mujhe behad khushi hai aap jeise readers ko paa kar.
agar aap apne aap se heyraan ho iss thread par comment karke matlab aap ko bahot ziada passand aya yeh kahani aur aap ki zindagi se judi kuch eise chizein honge jiss ne iss kahani ke zarye aap ke dil ke taaron ko chedh diya hoga...
bahot bahot shukriya Yash bhai