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Incest Vihaan Aur Ashita - Bhai Behen ki kahani - Exclusively written for XFORUM(COMPLETED)

Casinar

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Aaawwwww casi ji uff!!
Mujhe pehle se pata tha ye update mujhe bahut rulaegi. Casi ji kitna rulaoge aur.
Main ruk ruk kar rote hue iss update ko padha.
Pooja ki chithi mili to laga ab jaan mein jaan aayi magar yaar ussko padhte waqt to aur bhi jiada rona aya.
Kia likhte ho aap casi ji. Shaayad ji net par koyi lekhal eise aur itne emotional likhta hai aap k ilawa.
Jabardast, laajawab update hai casi ji. Out of the world category wala update hai ye.
Maa aakhir maa hoti hai ye saabit kar diya aap ne Suman ki maa wali roop dikha kar aakhir. Big surprise tha yeh. Jhatka diya aap ne Suman ki iss roop ko dikha kar. Aap ne usski jajbaat ko chupaye rakha tha jo sahi time par jaahir kiya. Ye bade wtiter ki quality hoti hai.
Khub rulaya humko magar end mein chain mili ye jaan kar k ab 2 supports ho mil gaye Vihaan aur Ashita ko.
To ab kia hona baaki hai?
Sb samaaj se ladna baaki hai nah?
Phhhhuuuu...okay dekhte hein ab kia hota hai.
WONDERFUL, FANTASTIC MINDBLOWING, EXCELLENT UPDATE.
:yourock: :yourock: :yourock: :yourock:

thanks very much Savi ji appreciation ke liye
 

Casinar

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About update 35 & 36

Dono hi update shaandar tha.Magar 36 no kuch zyada hi acha tha.Doctor ke sath milke Vihaan ki plan ki scene best tha.Ye accident ka natak Ashu ko paane ke liye Vihaan ne rachaya.Magar doctor Agarwal kiu Vihaan ki madad ki?
Usske pahle Ashu ne Amit se sab kuch clear kor dia.Isse Amit ki sapna to tut gya magar is kate ko Vihaan aur Ashu ki jeevan se nikalne ki sakt jarurat thi.

Nice update CASINAR bro....
Aab agla update padta hu....

bahot shukriya Friday bhai, mujhe khushi hui yeh dekh kar ke aap ek bagal se updates padhte aa rahe ho :thumbup:
 

Casinar

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Aaj kaa update bhut hi jaada emotional tha bhai aansu bah gye room lock krke ke padha hu ki koi dekh na le mere aansu ko
Puja ka dard bhut achhe tarike se dikhaya aapne

Suman ka character ekdam badal gya bhai
Lekin shayad koi bhi maa apne bachho ko bhut pyar krti h chahe koi bhi paishthiti ho

Lekin samaj me badnami ke karan kuchh bda kadam uthate h

bhai likhte waqt khud mere ensoo nikla pade the yaar :D
bahot bahot shukriya bhai saath dene ke liye aur appreciation ke liye
 

Casinar

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The love story of Anirudh and Pooja is very beautiful and emotional. Everyone has become an enemy of two lovers. Everyone saw the result of forcibly separating the two. Pooja commits suicide but she is still alive in Anirudh's heart. I am very sad to read. After reading today's update, I remembered a poetry....
"Khuda Kare Ki Kisi Par Koi Fida Na Ho,
Agar Ho To Maut Se Pahale Juda Na Ho."
Suman is very angry at Ashita because what she thought happened. The entire atmosphere of the house has deteriorated.
The update was great as always, now let's see what happens next in the story....:heart:

thanks very very much for the appreciation Aakash bro...
the shayiri is very very beautiful and suits the update :D
thanks very much bro
 

Casinar

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About update 37 & 38...

to doctor na hi ye plan ki asli mastermind hai.Vihaan ka accident koi natak nahi tha.Magar uska ilaz ki time ko kuch din ke liye doctor ne plan ko anzam dene ke liye bada dia.
Acha hua ki Vihaan ne Ashu ko sab sach bata dia.Magar fir bhi Ashita nahi samja aur khud ki room me chala gya.
Dekhte hai Ashita aage kia korta hai?

Nice update casinar bro....
Aab agla update padta hu....

thanks very very much friday baio, padhte chaliye bai jald hi aap current update par reach ho jaoge
 

Casinar

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About update 39 & 40

Nice update Casnar bro.
Pahle Ashita gussa hua uske bad Vihaan ki number aya.
Ashita ne papa ki raaz Vihaan ko bata dia.Dono me Viswash bad raha hai.Realation mazbut ho raha hai.
Last me dono ki pyara sa nokzok bhi bahut acha tha.

Good update.....
Aab agla update padta hu....

bahot baot shukriya Friday bhai passand karne ke liye dost
 

Casinar

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Shah bhai mujhe pakka yakeen tha k ye update bhi mujhko rulaega. Pichle update ko jahan aap ne roka tha to aap k writing ko jeise Vijay/Aisha aur Samir /Shanaya wale stories mein padhe the to ki writing se hum waqif hai iss liye pehle hi pata lag gaya tha ke iss update mein bahut jabardast emotion hoga aur rona to hoga hi hoga. Iss liye main me bhi khud ko lock kar liya tha loveshuda ki tarah tah ke koyi mujhe rota na dekhe.
Anirud aur Pooja ki story se aap ek short story ka winner ban sakte the magar issko aap ne 2 update bana diye. Kia baat hai bhai what a magnificent writer you are my dear. Hats off.
Mere aankh se ensoo behte rahe hab tak Pooja k bare mein padhta raha. Anirud jab tak bolta raha tab tak ashk behte rahe mere. Jab Pooja khat ki baari aayi to samjhlo mushladhaar baarish shuru ho gayi aankhon se.
Bahut rulaya yaar.
Itni gehraayi se asp emotion ko bayaan keise karte ho bhai? Fantastic.
Aur aakhir flashback end hui.
Ye aap ne bhut hi acha kiya sirf 2 update mein flashback end karke wapas Vihaan Ashita par chale aaye varna present fade out ho jata.
Brilliantly worked out update.
Suman ki negative se positive mein tabdili dekh kar bahut acha laga. Main soch hi raha tha k ek maa keise apni beti se itna nafrat kar sakti hai. Chalo maamta ne apni roop dhaaran kiya aur ab donon ko double support mil gaye.
Anirud sochega k uss k time mein kyun eisa nahin hua tha. Bechara Anirud.
Ab samaajh se ladna hai.
Dekhte hein aap keise issko aage badhaate ho.
Jabardast, dhamakedaar, lajawab update tha bhai, wo bhi bahut bada update almost 3k words ka 1 update.
Bahut shukriya Shah bhai.
:applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause:

bahot shukriya itni khubsurat review ke liye husein bhai :hug:
 

Casinar

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Casi ji ab main kia kahun!
Last weekend aap ne ek bahut sensual update dekat humko itna garam kar diya tha aur iss weekend ko humko rulakar bhigo diya aap ne.
Ensoo ki barsaat karwa diya aap ne iss update se.
Pooja aur Anirud ki past bahut dukh se bhara hua tha eisa bilkool nahin socha, Haan pata tha k usski sis ne atmahatiya kiya tha magar itne saare dukhon se gujre the donon ye padhne k baad ensoowon mein doob kar pata chala.
Aap ne itni achi tarike sab kuch likha hai k seedhe dil ki gehraayi tak chale gaye aap ki script. Dil k andar ghuss kar hillaya humko.
Ek ek pal jo Pooja aur Anirud ne kaate the unn dinon sab humko gehraayi se mehsus hua. Ye aap ki likhne ka kamaal hai ke sub hum tak direct pahunche. Hats off.
Aur Suman ne sach me sab ko surprise kiya donon ko gale se lagaa kar.
Excellent update, fadu update, lajawaab update.
:yourock: :yourock:

bahot shukriya Komal ji itna passand karne ke liye aur appreciation keliye
 
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