Incest Vihaan Aur Ashita - Bhai Behen ki kahani - Exclusively written for XFORUM(COMPLETED)

[Casinar]

Casinar ji oh my Gawwwwddd!!!
You always excel in writing emotion and make me cry like a kid. Here you did it again.
Although I was aware this update would be an emotinal one, was not expecting it to be so much engrossed with such intensity of emotions regarding the love, the unsuccessful love of Pooja and Anirud.
You always make me wonder how on earth can someone portray emotion with such perfection. You are just fantastic a writer Casinar ji. You never stop impressing us. Pheeeeeeeewww.
When you made Anirud relate all that to the two here, how did you find those perfect words to place in his mouth that would talk of Pooja in such a way that only tears will flow? I never cease to think how do you think of such beautiful and touching situation when you are writing?
How did you even create the story of Anirud and Pooja?
Was this planned when you has started Vihaan and Ashita? Or did this just came in your mind like this during the narration?
Anyhow you did a brilliant job Casinar ji. You succeeded to make us cry which is what I suppose the update was meant to be. So Bravo on the succeess.
Yes glad to see Suman now in favour of the two lovers.
Remains the society to fight with.
Want to see how you are going to unfold this ahead.
Thanks very much for giving us an update on two consecutive weekends.
Wonderful, excellent, fantastic update.

thank you so very much for the lovely review and appreciation Amity dear

 

[Casinar]

About update 41....

Bahuti hot,spicy aur eroctic update tha CASINAR bro.
Padhke maza a gya.Enjoyed every bit of it.
Lagta hai Ashita ne socha hai ki Amit aur thakri doctor ke bareme sab kuch Vihaan ko batane ke bad hi wo Vihaan ki gupt ango ko aapne andar lega.

Very hot update bhai....
Aab agla update padta hu....

thanks again Friday bhai

 

[Casinar]

Main ne update padhne k baad sabke comments padhe. Dekhna chahti think Kia meri tarah kissi aur k ensoo bahe ya nahin. Aur pata chala k aap ne sabko rulaya iss update se casi ji. This is the sign of a great writer woooooww
Kamaal ki update likha hai aap ne casi ji. Shuru se end tak main roti rahi. Kayi rukna pada. Naak behne lagi. Mummy ne pucha kia hua teri breakup ho gayi kia jo itna ro rahi hai.
Phir padhna continue kiya, fir royi. Kia casi ji itna to mat rulao dear.
Fantastic, wonderful, amazing update.
Itna bada updte likhna, itna emotion likhna, sabke dil mein utarna, sabko rulana casi u r a BIG writer. Hats off.
Main update k bare mein kuch nahin likhungi varna aur rona aega mujhe. Buss aap ne lajawaab likha hai, yeh ek bahut hi kamaal ki update hai.

thanks very much for the appreciation dear Swathi

 

[Casinar]

Jhakaas, jabardast, faaduu, lajawab, gajab ki update hai casi bhai.
Kaleja jeise fatt gaya padhte hue.
Ensoowon k band tut gaye yaar kia likhs hai aap ne vah.
Itna emotional update casi bhai baap re.
Pooja aur Anirud ki love story to jeise laila majnu ta heer ranjha wali thi yaar. Wahan gaon me jhan koo bhi nahin tha bechara Anirud ko support karne k liye bechara akele ladhta raha rota raha aur udhar bechari bhut bechari pooja akeli sabhi ghatwale usske khilaaf ek quaidi ki tarah bandh kamre mein apne pyar se door tadap rahi thi ussko ek najar dekhne k liye. Kia bhai itna dardnak situations yaar uff
Bhut hi badhya likha hai aap ne bhai.
Ye iss story ki one the most beautiful and strong update raha hai ab tak ki. Matlab dono Anirud and pooja wale update jabardast rahe
Suman ne to sach mein chahunka hi diya apna pyar bachon k liye dikha kar vah.
Ab kia hoga? Dushman zamane se ladna hoga chaaron ko. Asp n kia socha hai age aap hi jaanon bhai.. kia kahani end honr vali hai kia ab??
Aap sach mein chhah gae ho casi bhai.
Likhte rahein bhai

bahot bahot shukriya iss pyari appreciative post ke liye Indian bhai

 

[Casinar]

Casi bhai nahn pata tha ke kal aap ne update diya tha
vo to abhi eise hi dekh raha tha to dikh gaya.
thanks very much iss dilchasp uspdate ke liye casi bhai,
kia bhai rula diya nah!
bahut hi emotional update hai yaar.
itna kuch gujra tha anirud par eisa to bilkool hi nain socha tha.
aap ne bahut hi behtareen tarike se sab kuch explain kiya hai bhai hats off yaar
ek ek shabd seedhe dil mein utar rahe the padhte waqt.
kia scenes create kiye hein aap ne wonderful, excellent yaar
bahut stromg update tha bhai bilkkol taarife kaabil
aur eh kia Suman ki maamta ubhar aayi mushkl ghari mein apne aulad ke taraf ho gayi
very good bhai superb

appreciation ke liye bahot shukriya Nayan bhai

 

[Casinar]

Bidu apun sakht insaan hai sala rota hich nahin magar sala bidu tere update ne rula diya yaar.
Kia update diyela hai sala jigar apun k munh me agiya.
Kia baap bole to ekdum faaaduuuu update diyela hai boss

bahot bahot shukriya dost

 

[Casinar]

Kia faadu update diya hai bhai. Ekdum jhakass.
Bhut hi emotional yaar. Ensoowon ko rokna NAAMUMKIN tha bhai.
Pooja aur Anirud ki pyar ki daastan bahut hi badhya raha casi bhai.
Ab Suman bhi apne bachon ki taraf ho gayi ye majedar turn hai
To ab samaj se ladna baaki hai.
Lajawab shaandaar update bhai

thanks very much Shambhu bhai

 

[Casinar]

I was not aware that you updated yesterday casi bro.
And What an update mate wow!! mind-blowing, breathtaking update my dear.
very emotional and heart touching.
The love of Anirud and Pooja is told in detail and what a tale Casi bro, fantastic my dear.
since you excel in writing emotional updates you have been perfect in relating the events that happened over there and bro you got my eyes moistened all along with the read my dear.
To start with all the mental torments that Pooja and Anirudh went through were just too sad to read and al our sympathy went to them.
The way you have described and narrated their separation, one closed n a room to be let out when one is absent, and not even be able to see each other for a month that was terrible and hear breaking casi bro. phewww!
The way they were treated by the family member and then in the village court to be judged, oh my god that was to tough for young lovers like that to be humiliated! does that really happen somewhere in the country? I wonder!
Cai bro you have told all excellently and I have no words to talk more about the events.
Your narration is impeccable. this is update is from far one of the best of this series.
hats off my friend, I am speechless really ad dont know what I am writing....
you just rock my friend, keep writing and entertaining us casi bro. you really are a genius in writing.
About Suman, I was expecting that at the last moment she will show her love, and it happened great work.

oh my god, Rowdy bro in turn Its me who appreciate you review and lovely appreciation bro. thanks loads my dear

 

[Casinar]

No words for update.........

bahot shukriya dost

 

[Casinar]

Super lovely update dil bhar aya

Rula rakha hai zamane bhar ko teri terir ne
Thama di kalam tere hath me jisne wo insan kaisa tha
Casi bhai lagta hai kisi ko bahut tut k chaha tha apne bhi Anirudh ki tarah

bahot shukriya Shivam bhai main ne socha ke aap ne update nahin ddekha at last aap ke comment aaye bahut dhanyavaad bhai