Superb update hai dear.
Aap kitna acha likh rahe ho. Bahut hi badhya my dear.
Aap har character ke munh se eise shabd bulwate ho ke sab real lagta hai, har situation par right words keise likhte ho aap? Bahut hi badhya lagta hai.
Har situation k hisaab se perfect shabd too good.
Jiss situation mein Ashita thi wo bahot hi gambhir thi ek bali umar ki ladki k liye eise situation ko handle karna. Usska rona to laazmi tha hi aur aap ne bahut perfect tarike se iss update ko situation k hisaab se handle kiya. Nah kum nah jiada, perfect timing se likha hai. Wonderful. Hats off casi dear.
Bechari Ashita. Aakhir sach ugal hi diya apne baap ko ussne.
Ab kia baap isska faeda uthaega ya wo yeh sab jaanne k liye Ashita ko phussla rahe the aur ab sab jaanne k baad wo koyi gambhir kadam uthaega? Kahin wo donon ko door to nahin karega hamesha k liye?
Umeed hai sab thik hoga. I pray for good to happen.
Very beautiful update.