Incest Vihaan Aur Ashita - Bhai Behen ki kahani - Exclusively written for XFORUM(COMPLETED)

[FRIDAY]

About Update 13 & 14

Dono hi update badiya tha.
Vihaan se zyada dukh Ashita ko ho raha hai.Dono hi raat me thik se so nahi paye.
Ashita ne Vihaan se duri bana rakha.Aur ye Vihaan ko dukh pauncha raha hai.Update 13 me Vihaan ko thaapad marne ka scene sabse best tha.
Kiu Vihaan ka din kaise jaye ga ye subah ki us thaapad ke jariye ek purvavs tha.
Vihaan bechara ki halat kharap ho gya aur Ashu ki behaviour se ek ke bad ek jhatka hi kha raha hai.

Nice update....
Dekhte hai aagle update me kia intejaar kor raha hai....

 

[Kratos]

Kya kahe yaar..i have no words to express my feelings...apne pyar me positivity lane ke chakkar me vihaan is kadar tak tut chuka hai..ye ashita ko dikhai nahi diya ki vihaan ne apni kya haalat kar rakkhi hai..sharab, berukhi wo is kadar tut gaya hai ki ab accident ho gaya..ab shayad ashita ko realise hoga ki usne kya khoya hai aurkya kiya hai...ab dekhte hai ki vihaan kya karta hai jab ashita usse maafi mangegi. Itni jaldi ashita ko maafi nahi dilwana..use bhi to feel hone do vihaan ke dard ka ki wo kaise jiya hai ab tak til - til markar Ashita ne vihaan ki jaan nikal ke jinda chor diya.

 

[Loveshuda111]

Kya jaandaar love incest story h bhai
Or mostly update emotional kr deta
Dekhte h vihan ka kya hoga or wo kaise behave krta h
Aapki ye story khamoshiyan loverboy ki yaad dilati h

 

[Kratos]

too much emotional update dear
i hope vihaan ko jyada chot na aayi ho
ashita is too rude for her brother
at least she should have explained reason of her ignorance once to vihaan
parents should be happy they got success to separate them

Ya brother I'm also agree..she should have to explained reason of her ignorance, rudeness to vihaan

 

[Savi]

Casi dear thanks very very much for update 15 &16. They are just PHENOMENAL. Wonderful updates my dear.
You got my eyes filled with tears with both these updates. You have wriiten with perfection. Very well narrated and described. Not everyone can write and describe emotion that well. You are too good in that.
Vihaan suffered a lot. Too much. And now Ashita got a blow when she realised that life is so short and she could suddenly lose Vihaan in a matter of seconds. Now she realises that she has made him suffer and wants to apologise.
Well lets see how you develop this ahead. So far you hv been doing too good. Awesome script, awesome writing.
Hats of Casi

 

[Nayan Radhee]

Update 15 Distance maintained​

Kia Ashita ko pata tha ke wo Vihaan ko kitna takliff pahuncha rahi thi? Kia wo uss insaan ko itna dukh de sakti thi jo ussko itna pyar karta tha? kia yehi karne ko kaha tha usske papa ne? Aaj Vihaan ka waqt keise guzrega college mein? Lunch box to liya hi nahin tha Vihaan ne, Ashita ne apni tiffin le liya tha magar ussko pata hi nahin tha ke Vihaan bina khana ke ghar se nikal gaya….. kia hota hai college mein agle update mein dekhenge…..

Ab aguey…….

College pahunchne se pehle hi bus mein kuch aur hua. Wo lady jisske paas Ashita baithi thi, agle bus stop par utar gayi, Vihaan ko 5 seat piche jagah mili thi baithne ko aur wahan se dekh raha tha jab wo lady utar rahi thi. To first thing karna yeh tha ke ussko jaldi se jaa kar Ashita ke paas baithna tha nah?

Magar Vihaan nahin gaya. Jaan bujh kar nahin gaya, thoda ghussa tha usske andar Ashita ki berukhi se aur dekhna chahta tha ke Ashita ussko wahan expect karegi ke nahin, piche se Ashita par hi apne nazrein gadaaye hue tha. Usska mann to bahot hi kar raha tha usske paas baith kar ussko jakarne ko, usske baalon se khelne ko, ussko chumne ko, uss se baatein karne ko, usske berukhi ko todne ko, magar nahin gaya.

Ab Ashita bhi of course yehi expect kar rahi thi ke Vihaan jaldi se usske paas aega, magar jab dekha ke seat khali reh gayi aur bus chalne lagi kyunke koyi aur nahin aya bus mein uss bus stop par, to Ashita sochne laga ke kyun Vihaan nahin aya…. Ussko pata bhi nahin tha ke Vihaan kidhar baitha tha bus mein, ab mudhkar dekhna to chahti thi magar ussko pata tha ke Vihaan piche se ussko dekh raha hoga aur mudhkar dekhne mein ussko ab ajeeb lagne laga.

Aur Vihaan issi intezaar mein tha ke Ashita ussko mudhkar dhunde bus mein, iss liye usska nazar ussi par tika hua tha. Aur jiss position mein Ashita baithi thi, vihaan ko usski left side bahot saaf dikh raha tha, usski profile ko vihaan ne apne mobile mein quaid karna shuru kiya, kayi pics liye ussne Ashita ko wahan baithe hue aur mobile ko video mode mein karke Ashita par hi jamaye rakha Vihaan ne iss umeed mein ke ek bar Ashita mudh kar dekhe ke Vihaan ussko Camere mein record kare….

Aur agla bus stop aya, bus ruka kyunke ab koyi chadh raha tha bus mein aur sirf Ashita ke paas hi ek jagah tha to iss baar jab Ashita ne dekha ke koyi araha hai usske paas baithne to mudhkar bus mein piche dekha Vihaan ko dhundne ke liye yeh sochte ke kyun jagah khali hone par bhi wo nahin aya usske paas, aur Vihaan ne khushi se Ashita ko record kiya, usski pyari nazrein apne bhai ko dhundte hue bus mein, usski honth, usski expression bahot hi khubsurat aaye video mein, koyi 10 seconds tak to Ashita ki nazrein pehle dhundti rahi aur jab usski nazar Vihaan par pari, tab ussne wapas aguey apna chehra kiya ek halki si muskurahat ke saath… uss halki si muskurahat ko hi recording mein Vihaan baar baar rewind karke dekh raha tha.

Jab tak school nah pahunche donon alag hi baithe rahe aur utarne ke baad phir Ashita aguey chalti gayi bina piche dekhe aur college ke andar daakhil ho gaye donon aur apne apne classes mein chale gaye.

Break mein Ashita aaj Vihaan ke paas nahin aayi. Wo apne classmates, Priya aur dusre doston ke beech hi rahi. Magar Vihaan ko usski nazrein dhund rahi thi. Uss jagah par jahan hamesha donon baithte the udhar Ashita ki nazrein Vihaan ko dhund rahi thi.

Aur Vihaan jaan bujh kar kahin aur khada ussko nihaar raha tha apne doston ke saath. Vihaan ke paas to kuch khaane pine ko tha nahin buss 10 mins ki break mein eise hi Ashita ko dekhta raha.

Lunch break mein Ashita phir Priya ke saath baithi khana khane ke liye. Aur phir uss jagah par dekha jahan har roz wo aur Vihaan baithte the. Jab ussko Vihaan nahin dikha to ussko kuch ajeeb laga aur socha ke Vihaan uss se naraaz hai issi liye wo udhar nahin aya hai aaj.

Vihaan ne to tiffin liya hi nahin tha, iss liye bina kuch khaaye hi raha din bhar. Bhook to badi zor se lagi thi usse bhi aur usska mann kar raha tha ke jaa kar Ashita ke lunch se kuch maang kar khaaye, wo zaroor share karti apne bhai ke saath magar jaan bujh kar Vihaan nahin gaya. Eise hi raha. Kuch kharida bhi nahin canteen mein.

Jab lunch time end hone ko aya tab Ashita charon taraf Vihaan ko dhundne lagi. Aur Priya se pucha, “tumne Vihaan ko dekha kia kahin?”

Priya ne kaha, “nahin to, are haan aaj tum aur wo ek saath kyun nahin ho? jhagda kiya hai kia apne bhai ke saath tumne? Break mein bhi tu mere sath hi baithi thi, har roz to apne bhai ke saat khana khati ho nah?!”

Ashita apne toes par khade hokar students ke bhid mein charon taraf nazar ferrte hue Priya ko eise hi jawaab diya, “nahin buss eise hi aaj tiffin alag alag laaye hein hum donon….”

Aur din guzra phir school end hone ke baad bus stop par Ashita ek group mein khadi thi jahan bus mein ghussne ke liye sabhi students ke beech dhakam dhaka hua karta hai, ladke aur ladkiyan bhi hote hein saath mein aur uss dauraan kuch badmaash ladke ladkiyon ke skirt uthaate hein aur haath ferrte hein….

Vihaan kuch doorie banaaye hue tha khud Ashita se aur dekh raha tha ke wo keise bus ke andar jaati hai. Har roz hota yeh tha ke Ashita ko apne saamne rakhta tha Vihaan aur baaki logon ko push karte hue Ashita ko pehle bus mein andar jaane deta usske baad wo andar ghussta tha magar aaj buss dekh raha tha. haan ussko pata tha ke ladke ladkiyon ko chhute hein uss waqt aur wo wohi dekh raha tha ke koyi Ashita ko kahin chhue nah…..

Kuch ladke Vihaan se bhi bade classes ke the, jo Vihaan se umar mein aur kad mein bhi bade the, aur har tarah ke ladke the, badmaash, sharif, gunde type ke bhi, dil feink aur Romeo type bhi the of course…. Ek buss bhar jata to dusre ka wait kiya jata tha, ya teesre ka bhi kabhi kabhi…. To aaj Vihaan ne soch liya tha ke agar ussko first bus mein jagah nahin mila to Ashita ko akeli jaane dega wo baad mein dusre bus mein jaega…..

Aur jab pehla bus aya aur bus ke andar jaane ke liye jab dhakka shuru hua to Vihaan ne dekha ek ladka Ashita ke peeth par apna haath ferr raha hai aur ek usski pichware ko daba raha hai….. bade ghusse mein, Vihaan daud kar udhar gaya aur donon ladke ke collar pakar kar pura zor lagaake apne taraf khincha aur donon ko zameen par gira diya, unn mein se ek ladka Vihaan se bada tha aur ooncha bhi, tab tak bus bhar gaya aur jaane laga, Ashita ko bhi uss mein jagah nahin mili aur idhar ladaayi shuru ho gayi Vihaan aur unn donon ladkon ke beech. Jo ladka Vihaan ke umar ka tha ussne sorry kaha aur ek taraf ho gaya magar jo bada tha ussne Vihaan ko uthkar ek ghunssa mara seedhe usske chehre par, jiss se Vihaan do kadam ladkhadaate hue niche gid pada aur wo ladka jaa hi raha tha Vihaan ko aur maarne tab tak Ashita aur Priya beech mein aakar uss ladke ko gaaliyan se nehlaane lage. Phir baaki ke ladkiyan bhi inn donon ka saath dene lage, to wo bada ladka wahan se nikal gaya chup chap. Ashita jaldi se Vihaan ke paas gayi aur ussko uthne mein madad kiya magar Vihaan ne Ashita ka haath jhatakte hue ussko alag kiya. Bahot ghusse mein tha wo ab. Vihaan ke honth ke kone se thoda sa khoon nikal pada tha jissko Ashita ne apne rumal se ponchna chaha magar phir Vihaan ne usske haath ko hattaya. Priya ne sab dekha aur dhire se Ashita se kaha,

“hmm zaroor tum donon mein ladaayi hui hai, hai nah? issi liye wo tujhse baat tak nahin kar raha, kyun re kia hua tum donon ke beech?!”

Ashita Vihaan ke chehre mein dekhte hue Priya ko jawaab diya, “kuch bhi to nahin!”

Aur vihaan wahan se hatt gaya, ek taraf chala gaya, kuch doorie par….

Aur Priya ne pucha,

“Vihaan ne kyun zameen par patka tha unn donon ko kia unn donon ne tere saath kuch kiya tha kia?!”

To Ashita ne kaha, “bhid mein shaayad kissi ne mujhe chhua tha, kissi ne mere skirt ke niche apna haath dala tha, aur Vihaan to piche khada tha to ussne zaroor dekha hoga tabhi to yeh sab hua!!”

Tab Priya ne kaha, “hmmm tera bodyguard yahin tha aur sab dekh raha tha piche se hein; wah re wah tera bhai to tujhe protect karta hai re, tujhe to khush hona chahiye ke eisa tera rakhsha karne wala bhai hai tere saath, kaash mera bhi eisa bhai hota!”

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Aakhir mein dusre bus mein donon ko jagah mile aur same bus mein donon wapas ghar aaye magar alag alag seat par baith kar.

Ghar aate hi Ashita ki nazar Vihaan ki tiffin box par padi, aur jahldi se box uthakar kholte hue dekha phir mudhkar Vihaan ko ensoo se bhade hue enkhon se dekhte hue kaha,

“bhai tumne kyun tiffin box nahin liya tha? Tum aaj din bhar bhooke rahe kia? Bhai kyun eisa kiya tumne!”

Aur wo phoot phoot kar rone lagi, rote hue niche zameen par baith gayi haath mein uss tiffin box ko liye hue.

Vihaan wahin khada ussko rote hue dekh raha tha aur usske enkhen bhi bhar aaye magar ek shabd nahin kaha ussne. Buss Ashita ko dekhta raha, apne pyar ko rota dekh kar kitni der weise khada rehta, Ashita zor se ro rahi thi aur Vihaan se Ashita ko rote hue nahin dekha jaata, bachpan se hi jab bhi Ashita roti to wo jhat se ussko gale se lagata tha aur ussko chhup karata tha, aur aaj keise ussko aur ziada rote hue dekh sakta tha, uss se raha nah gaya aur usske paas baith kar ussko gale se lagana chaha, magar Ashita uth khadi hui aur rote hue hi, thoda ghusse mein kaha,

“Mujhe pata hai tumne jaan bujh kar mujhko dukh dene ke liye eisa kiya, main ne separate tiffin box liye iss liye tum ne eisa kiya, mat chhuo mujhe jao chale jao, apne cybercafé chale jao abhi se hi, mujhe akela chorr do tum!”

Vihaan wahin khada ussko dekh raha tha aur phir kaha,

“chala jaun? Sach mein chala jaunga bina kuch khaaye piye, jaun kia?!”

Ashita ne ziada rote hue kaha,

“jo karna hai karo mujhse kyun puch rahe ho?”

Aur Vihaan phir usske taraf badha ussko baahon mein bharne ke liye magar Ashita piche hatt gayi aur kaha,

“Main ne kaha nah mat chhuo mujhe, jao apna khana kaho, main chai banati hoon pee kar tab jana!”

Vihaan apne mann ko maarte hue baith gaya khaane ko kyunke assal mein ussko bade zor ki bhook lagi thi. Usska mann to Ashita ko baahon mein kasske jakar kar ussko bahot saare chummiyan dene ko kar raha tha, Ashita se bahot pyar karne ka mann kar raha tha magar apne andar apne armaanon ko dabaate hue wo khaane laga Ashita ko kitchen mein chai banaate hue dekhte.

Koyi ek ghante baad Vihaan ka jaane ka time hua. Ab ussko himat nahin thi Ashita ke ziada karib jaane ko. Dil to bahot karta tha usse, ke Ashita ko baahon mein bhare, ussko kiss kare, usske sath bed par kuch time guzare, usski jism ki khushbhoo ko apne andar basaaye, magar jiss tarah se Ashita behave karne lagi thi wo usski himmat ko tod rahe the, to ghar se nikalne se pehle sirf itna kaha Ashita se,

“Mera wait karegi ya apne kamre mein chali jaegi tu? Abhi se hi bata de to main apne khayaalon mein sapnon ke mehel ko aur ziada nahin badhne dunga….”

Ashita ne ek taraf dekhte hue kaha,

“agar homeworks complete kar liya to chali jaungi, aur tum mujhe har raat apne room mein expect karna ab bandh kar dena, aur wapas ane ke baad so jana yeh mat expect karna ke wapas yahan aungi main, weise main ne papa se mera alag room banane ko keh diya hai lounge ko separate karke, tab main yahan bilkool nahin aungi, ussi room mein homeworks karungi aur so jaungi….”

Vihaan ne kaha,

“matlab sab sapne tut gaye mere? Yaane ke hum ek dusre se bilkool alag ho gaye yehi kehna chahti ho nah? aur hamare pyar ka kia hua? Pyar karti ho mujhse ya wo bhi khatam ho gaya? Meri girlfriend ho ab bhi ya nahin yeh jaanna hai mujhe!”

Ashita ne Vihaan se peeth karte hue kaha,

“wo hota hai nah break up? Samajh lo ke apne girlfriend se tumhara break up ho gaya, aur ab jao, tumko late nahin ho raha?!”

Vihaan wahan se zor se rote hue nikla aur paagalon ki tarah raaste par daudne laga, tez raftaar se dauta gaya jeise kissi anjaane manzil ke taraf badh raha hai…..

To be continued immediately in next post

Casi bhai maar dala yaar, iss update ne maar dala sach mein.
Bahut dard bhara update hai bhai, phir bhi aap ki daat deta hoon yaar kia likha hai aap ne. Shabash yaar. Eise likhna asaan kaam nahin hai. Itne emotions likh kar bayaan karna mamooli baat nahin aur aap sab kuch itne ache se likh kar humare dil tak pohnchaya isske liye thanks very very much casi bhai.
Vihaan ki haalat ne enkhon ko bhigo diya yaar. Bechara.
Ashita uss se door rehkar ussko kitna takliff ponhcha rahi hai isska ashita ko koyi andaza bhi nahin. Apne baap.ki baat ko maan kar bhai ko taklif deti jaa rahi hai. Poor Vihaan, feeling deeply sorry for him.
Reading the nxt one.

 

[Nayan Radhee]

Update 16 And Sometime later in life….​

Eisa kayi dinon tak chala, phir hafte guzre aur kayi mahine beete….

Ashita ke liye naya room ban gaya, ek nayi almaari bhi kharid liya gaya aur Ashita ka Vihaan ke room mein jana bilkool bandh ho gaya.

Eise bahot mauke aaye inn donon ke beech jab takraar hue, oonche awaaz mein baatein hue, rona dhona hua, ghusse aur pyar ke darmiyaan mein chhupe jazbaaton ke milaawat mein emotion ke izhaar hue….

Sex ko lekar kayi eise situations hue jahan Ashita ne Vihaan ko usse jhaankte ya usski tasveer lete hue paaya, magar kuch nahin kaha buss ek teerchi nazar kaafi hota tha….

Ek baar to jab Ashita naha rahi thi Vihaan mobile se ussko shoot karne ki koshish mein bhi laga magar nakaamyaab hua…. Kayi baar jab Ashita apna darwaza lock karne bhool gayi ya lock karne se pehle needh aagayi to Vihaan chhup kar usske kamre mein ussko nihaarne jaata, usski videos banata, usski nightie mein usske jaanghon ke upar nighty ko uthaakar pics leta, usski boobs ko record karta, phir unn videos ko dekh kar muth maarta apne kamre mein…..

Kariban ek saal eise hi guzre donon ke beech. Magar andar hi andar Vihaan jeise khokla hota jaa raha tha, usske dil ke kayi tukde ho chuke the, ussko apne dil ka haal bayan karna ata hi nahin tha, sab bhool gaya tha, Ashita ke pyar mein itna dooba ke ab ussko sharaab ki zaroorat pad gayi uss gham ko bhulaane ke liye jo ussko khud usski Ashita ne diya tha….

College mein usske marks girrte gaye aur Ashita ke badhte gaye; Vihaan ko classes repeat karna pada to donon ek hi class mein paaye gaye.

Tab Vihaan se bardaasht nahin hua jab donon ek hi class mein mile kyunke tab tak Ashita ki berukhi jeise Vihaan ki dushmani mein tabdil ho chuki thi….. Vihaan se dekha nahin jata jab Ashita male classmates ke saath hoti, unnse dosti karti, ya unnke saath lunch leti ya baatein karti….. Vihaan ke liye sab bardassht ke baahar hota jaa raha tha, aur ussne college chorrne ka faisla kiya, aaguey studies ko nahin karna chahta tha, sab sirf Aashita ki vajah se ho raha tha aur Ashita ko jeise kuch maloom hi nahin tha ya maloom tha magar anjaan ban rahi thi….. iss ke baare mein sochkar Vihaan pareshaan tha ke keise Ashita ussko fail hote dekh sakti hai, keise usske samajh mein nahin ata ke usske vajah se Vihaan padh nahin paa raha hai….. kyun ashita par koyi farak nahin par raha ke Vihaan ki studies itna affected hua usske liye…….

Ashita ke pyar mein jitna positivity aya tha Vihaan ke zindagi mein ab ussko lagne laga ke uss se ziada negativity aane lage the…..

Ek raat Vihaan barah baje ghar wapas aya to nashe mein dhuth tha…. aur anaap shanaap bak raha tha, shor karne laga tha aur Ashita ki bewafaayi ka zikr kar raha tha…..

Ashita ne suna to maa baap ko pata nah chale iss liye dhire se uthkar Vihaan ko sambhala aur usske room mein ussko sulaane ko legayi, aur Vihaan ne ussko jakar liya aur kaha, “tu bewafa nikli re, meri girlfriend ne mujhse bewafaayi ki, main ne kitna pyar kiya tujhe aur badle mein kia mila mujhe? Khokla kar diya tere pyar ne mujhe, kyun pyar kar baitha main tujhse ri, kia hai tujh mein jo main iss kadar niche agaya tere pyar mein? Hein? Tuhi bata nah kia kar diya tu ne mujhe re meri Ashu?!”

Ashita ne koyi jawaab nahin diya, ab wo 18 se upar ki ho chuki thi, bahot hi hot aur sexy dikhne lagi thi, ek flimsy nighty mein thi bina bra ke, usski jism ek aurat ki jism thi, jab wo Vihaan ko bed par leyta rahi thi to usski boobs Vihaan ke seene se satt raha tha, aur vihaan ne sar utha kar usske boob ko chumma, aur Ashita ne jeise ignore kiya, jeise ussko pata nahin chala ke Vihaan ne ussko wahan kiss kiya, wo ussko kambal odha rahi thi uss waqt, aur jaane se pehle Ashita ne Vihaan ke gaal par halke se kiss kiya aur nikal gayi usske kamre se…… Vihaan uss waqt needh mein tha, ussko nahin pata chala ke Ashita ne ussko kiss kiya…..

Ab ek raat kuch eisa hua…. Raat ke 3 baj chuke the aur Vihaan ghar wapas nahin aya tha….. Ashita do baar uth kar dekhne gayi aur Vihaan ko apne kamre mein nah paakar wo apni maa ko uthaane gayi.

Sab lounge mein mile to sab bahot heyraan hue ke subha ke 3 baje tak Vihaan kyun wapas nahin aya tha… baap ghar se baahar nikla raaste par dekhne ke liye, magar Vihaan ka koyi pata nah tha…. Ashita bahot fikar karne lagi aur apne papa ko ussne cybercafe mein jaakar dekhne ko kaha…..

Thik tabhi ek police ka jeeb ruka ghar ke saamne, inspector ne pucha kia Vihaan yahin rehta hai to baap ne haan kaha to police ne kaha ke usska accident ho gaya wo iss waqt hospital mein bharti hua hai…..

Yeh sunkar Ashita zor se chilaayi aur bahot zor se rote hue aur chillaate hue usske munh se yeh baatein nikle,

“Kia ho gaya mere bhai ko? Mere Vihaan ko kia ho gaya? Nahin eisa nahin ho sakta; papa mujhe abhi uss se milna hai mujhe uss se bahot kuch kehna hai, mummy abhi issi waqt chalo mujhe bhai se bahot kuch kehna hai, mujhe uss se maafi maangni hai, main ne uss par bahot zulm kiye hein,bahot sitam dhaaye hai main ne, main ne ussko bahot dukh diye hein papa mujhe jaldi hospital lechalo mujhe apne Vihaan se milna hai abhi issi waqt!!!!!!”

Ussko uss tarah se rote dekh kar donon maa aur baa rone lage…..

To be continued………………… (3309 words from both updates)

Oh my Gid what a fantastic update yaar pheeeeeewwwwww
Mujhe saans lene dow bhai
Jo kuch padha sab enkhon k saamne ghum rahe hein jeise ek movie mein a dramatic scene dekha abhi main ne. Asp ki wrting ka assar hai Casi bhai wooowww!!!
Bhai matlab iss update mein jo hua last mein ab kuch saal guzarne ki baat hai am I right?
2 and a half years ho gaya nah bhai? Correct me if i am wrong.
TO AAYI UNTH PAHAAR KE NICHE HAHAHA..... ASHITHA ab samjhi. Ab usdko akal aayi jab bhai ko choat lagi aur hospitalised hua. Are ladkitu ne ussko bahut jiada choth pohchayi hai ye kyun nahin samajhti tu...

Chalo bhai iss gajab ki update k liye dil ki gehraayi aap dhanyavaad kehta hoon. Aap ko padhke raat ko bahut arasm milta hai. Addicted ho gaya hoon asp ki kahani ko padhne ko. Har raat aap ko stories ko padhta hoon. Abhi last week dovara samir aur shanaya ko padha. Aur filhaal Aisha aur Vijay ko phir padh raha hoon aap ki writing mein jadu hai bhai. Hamare liye likhte rehna casi bhai. Bhagwaan aap ko hamesha khush aur salaamat rakhe.

 

[Amity]

Casinar ji I am extremely sorry as I could not reply on yesterday's update. Had a late night and slept early yesterday.
I just finished reading updates 13, 14, 15 and 16. Oh my Gawd! Uffff i am like breathless....
Okay I am going to relply on each of them one by one. Okay Casinar ji, hope that will please you if I reply that way. So here they come...

 

[Amity]

Update 13 – The Distance….
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Jhapat ke ensoo bhare enkon se ussne Ashita ko kaske baahon mein bharke rone laga, aur shikayat karta gaya sisakte awaaz mein, “kyun? Eisa kyun kiya tumne? Kyun mera intezaar nahin kiya aaj? Chaar ghanton se paagalon ki tarah ghum raha hoon ghar mein, mujhko kyun sata rahi hai itna tu? Kia ho gaya? Kyun mere paas nahin aayi sone? Kyun? Kyun? kyun? Ashita buth bani khadi thi usske baahon mein bina kuch kahe…… Vihaan usski garam saansein apne gardan par feel kar raha tha aur usska jawaab ka intezaar kar raha tha……

Ab aguey…..Ashita phir bhi kuch nahin boli aur Vihaan ka haath apne upar se hatta kar wapas apne papa ke kamre ke taraf badh hi rahi thi ke daud kar piche se Vihaan ne usska haath thaama aur apne taraf khinchte hue pucha,

“Aakhir hua kia? Kuch to bata baat kyun nahin kar rahi hai tu? Mere paas nahin soegi aaj?”

Ashita ne nah mein sar hillaate hue apna haath jhatka Vihaan ke haath se aur wapas jaane lagi.

Vihaan ro pada aur rote hue kaha, “main aaj kuch laaya hoon, tumko dikhana tha dekh le phir chali jana please baby, please!”

Ashita ruki, mudhkar Vihaan ko dekha magar usske chehre par koyi bhi expression nahin thi, koyi bhaav, koyi udaasi, koyi ranjh, kuch bhi nahin dikh raha tha usske chehre mein, buss plain, normal look thi…..

Vihaan ne ussko rukte hue dekha to jaldi se apne kamre ke taraf badha aur Ashita ahiste ahiste chal kar usske kamre ke darwaze tak aayi magar andar nahin gayi darwaze par hi khadi wait kar rahi thi ke Vihaan ussko kuch dikhayega.

Vihaan kamre ke andar se mudhkar Ashita ko darwaze ke paas dekh kar hataash sa gaya aur thoda ghusse mein kaha, ab kia kamre ke andar ane ke liye tera peyr parun kia?”

Ashita wahan se nahin hilli….. Vihaan ke samajh mein nahin araha tha ke kia karen wo. Usne kia kia socha tha aur ab Ashita ke iss vyohaar se wo bilkool tut sa gaya aur dard bhari awaaz mein Ashita se kaha,

“Main sirf tum ko sochte hue wapas aya, mere dil o dimaagh mein sirf tum bassi ho aur yeh, yeh mobile lekar iss khusi se aya ke aate hi tumhara pics lunga, hum ek saath selfies lenge, tum kitni khush hogi, main tumko khush dekh kar kitna khush ho jaunga magar tu eisa kyun behave kar rahi hai aakhir hua kia tujhe? Tu bimaar hai kia? Teri period hui hai kia? Peth dukh raha hai baby?!”

Ashita ne ek bhi jawaab nahin diya sirf mobile ko dekh kar usske chehre mein thodi se Khushi ki jhalak dikhaayi diye magar jab Vihaan phir baat karne laga to Ashita firse wohi buth ban gayi…..

Vihan ne kaha, “andar to aah idhar light mein teri kuch pics le lun, main ne socha pehla pics tera hi lunga… andar aah nah meri girlfriend!”

Magar Ashita lautne lagi wahin se…..

Rote hue Vihaan ne kaha,

“ek kissy to deti jaa, gudnite kiss to de de mujhe, ek baar apne baahon mein to jakarti jaa nah, Ashu…..”

Phir usske papa ke kamre ke darwaze ko bandh karte suna Vihaan ne jissko Ashita ne bandh kiya andar daakhil hote hue…

Vihaan dekhte reh gaya jahan khada tha wahin usske donon paon jeise zameen mein satt gaye the Ashita ki uss vyohaar ko dekh kar….. usske samajh mein nahin araha tha ke wo kia karen, zoron se chilla kar rone ka mann kar raha tha usse, sab kuch tod fod dene ka mann kar raha tha….. ghussa bhi bahot aa raha tha use….

Aur udhar Ashita apne bed par jaakar takiye mein munh daba kar rone lagi… usska dum ghutne laga…. Wo khud ko mazbut banaane ki koshish kar rahi thi Vihaan se door rehne ke liye magar bahot katheen tha usske liye…. Wo bhi bilkool nahin soyi raat bhar, wo bhi andar se sirf Vihaan ko hi soch rahi thi, jab Vihaan corridor mein walk kar raha tha uss waqt Ashita bed par baith kar sunne ki koshish kar rahi thi ke Vihaan kia kar raha hai… usska bhaag kar Vihaan se mile ka mann to bahot kar raha tha magar apne papa ke baaton ko har baar soch kar unn baton ko jeise ek dhal bana leti thi Vihaan ke paas nahin jaane ke liye magar subha 3 baje Ashita se bhi nahin raha gaya aur sirf Vihaan ko dekhne ki chaah ne ussko kamre se baahar aane par majboor kiya, apne dil se majboor thi… ussne soch liya the ke buss ek baar wo Vihaan ko dekh lein aur Vihaan ussko dekh lein tab sone chali jaegi issi liye baahar nikli thi, ussko achchi tarah se pata tha ke Vihaan nahin soya hoga aur bahot bechain hoga, aur tadap raha hoga….. to buss ussko apna chehra dikhaane nikal aayi thi kamre se….. ab wapas aakar khub royi Ashita.

Aur uss taraf Vihaan ka bura haal tha. kitna kuch socha tha ussne , kuch bhi nahin kar paaya, normal photos bhi nahin le paaya Ashita ki, sexy wale ki to alag baat hai normal pic tak nahin le paaya…. Bahut dukh hua ussko, usska dil bahot hi dukhne laga tha, rone se bhi dard nahin ruk raha tha….

Vihaan soch mein dooba raha ghanton tak ke kia hua hoga, sochne laga ke zaroor maa ne Ashita ko mara peeta hoga usske gardan mein lovebites ke kaaran, pata nahin kia beeti hogi uss par yeh sab sochne laga Vihaan… khud ko dilasha dilate hue Vihaan ne khud se kaha,

“koyi baat nahin subha ko mummy papa ke jaane ke baad main sab set kar dunga, apni sweetheart ko mana lunga aur khub kiss karunga, sharaarat karunga aur bahot pics lunga…. Dekhta hoon keise mana karti hai, abhi shaayad ghusse mein hai ya darri hui hai, subha ko mana lunga ussko main aakhir kab tak mujhse door reh sakti hai bhala!”

Eise positive soch ke saath Vihaan ke enkhon mein akhir needh aa hi gayi, uss waqt subha ke 5 bajne wale the, aur uss taraf thik ussi waqt Ashita ki bhi rote rote enkh lag gayi…..

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Next morning……….

Anirud aur Suman tayaar hokar kaam ke liye nikal rahe the aur ek baar Vihaan ke kamre mein maa aayi Vihaan ko jagaane ke liye, aur udhar Anirud ne Ashita ko hilla kar jagaya yeh kehte hue ke weh log jaa rahe hein ziada der tak nahin sone ko…..

Vihaan uth gaya aur apne sar ko bahot bhaari sa paaya, ussko aur bahot sone ka mann kar raha tha magar iss liye ke Ashita se bahot baat karna tha iss liye wo utha. Jeise hi maa aur baap nikal gaye Vihaan jaldi se Ashita ke paas gaya, wo kambal ke niche thi, ab neendh mein thi ya naatak kar rahi thi pata nahin magar Vihaan jaldi se kambal uthaa kar usske niche ghuss gaya aur Ashita ko apne baahon mein bhar liya aur uske gardan par apna naak ferrte hue ussko sunghte hue kaha, “kitna miss kiya main ne apni girlfriend ko raat bhar, main thik se soya hi nahin kal raat ko, sab teri vajah se pata hai!”

Vihaan ne ahiste se apna haath Ashita ke jaaghon par ferte hue upar ke taraf haath badhata gaya aur apne kamar ko usski peth ke thoda niche thik usski pussy ke upar dabaa kar thoda sa ragadhne ki koshish kiya; tab jhat se Ashita ne kambal hattaate hue Vihaan ko ek bade zor ka thapad mara!!!!

Vihaan hakbaka gaya aur bahot heyraani se Ashita ke chehre mein dekhte hue kaha, “kia hua? Kia hum pehli baar yeh kar rahe hein? Kal hi to kiya tha, main jhada bhi tha tere panty par aur hum ne usse milkar dhoya bhi tha to ab kia ho gaya ?!”

Bina koyi jawaab diye Ashita uthkar chali gayi ek taraf dekhte hue. Ussne Vihaan ko mudhkar dekha bhi nahin jeise Vihaan hawaa se baatein kar raha tha….

Vihaan ko bahot ghussa bhi aya magar usske dil ke andar ek toofaan sa macha hua yeh jaanne ke liye ke aakhir baat kia hui hai ke Ashita ka vyohaar itni badal gayi hai. Wo to hamesha ki tarah ussko pyar kar raha tha aur raat bhar ki duri ko mitaane ke liye wohi kar raha tha jo donon hamesha karte aaye hein, to itna zor ka thapad aur wo bhi bahot gambhirta se, mazaak mein nahin, zaroor koyi baat thi Vihaan ne socha aur usske piche dhadpadaate gaya jahan Ashita brush kar rahi thi.

Ashita ke piche khade hokar Vihaan ne ussko aine mein dekha wash basin ke paas, Ashita ke munh mein Toothpaste ki jhaach padi hui thi magar ussne Vihaan ke taraf nahin dekha buss brush karti gayi. Usske baal khule hue the, aur usske kaandhe par usski nighty ke strap par hokar usski gori baazuwon par lehraa rahe the jisko Vihaan ne apne haath mein lekar naak se lagaya aur sunghte hue kaha, “hmmm as always smells so good.”

Tab Ashita ne ek nazar ussko dekha, usske gaal ko dekha jahan thapad lagaayi thi ussne, wo gaal laal tha. Vihaan ne ussko use dekhte hue dekha aur kaha,

“Kitni taaqat agayi hai ri tere haath mein ke uss thapad se mere kaan mein ek goonjh uth gayi, strong hoti jaa rahi ho hehehe chalo aakhir meri girlfriend jo thehri, strong to hona hi hai, eise hi thapad lagana agar kissi ladke ne tang kiya tujhe to okay sweetheart?”

Phir vihaan jaldi se apna mobile lekar aya aur ussi mirror mein brush karte hue ussne Ashita ki ekaat pics liye, Ashita dekh rahi thi magar mana nahin kiya, phir Vihaan ne khud brush karna shuru kiya aur donon ke selfies liye brush karte hue, Ashita teerchi nazar se camera mein dekh rahi thi, ek bahot hi halki si Muskaan aayi usske chehre mein jab 5th selfie liya Vihaan ne, tab Ashita ne kulli karne ke baad kaha,

“eisi gandi selfies leta hai koyi toothbrush karte hue chhee!”

Vihaan ke jaan mein jaan aayi apni premika ki awaaz sunkar. Aur bina kuch kahe ussne ne bhi jaldi se munh dho liya aur Ashita ko apni nighty mein shoot karne laga, usski lambe baal usske kaandhe par the, usski bra ki strap usski nighty ke strap ke saath usski kaandhe par dikh rahe the aur Vihaan shoot kiye jaa raha tha, phir usski boobs ka round form ko shoot kiya nighty ke upar aur usska bada mann kiya usse dabaane ko… Ashita towel se apna chehra ponch rahi thi jab Vihaan ne jhat se usske gaal par kiss kiya jaldi se aur hatt gaya kahin aur ek thapad nah par jaaye, piche hatte hue Vihaan Ashita ko chalte hue shoot karta gaya….

Jab Ashita kitchen mein donon ke liye chai serve karne lagi wo sab bhi Vihaan ne shoot kiya, tab bhi Ashita ussi nighty mein thi jiss mein wo behad hot aur sexy dikh rahi thi, aur Vihaan ka khada ho gaya ussko Ashita ke saath bed par leyt kar ishk farmaane ka mann karne laga, to ussne socha ke chai peene ke baad ussko bed tak lekar jaega photos click karne ke bahane aur ussko bed par leytaega, aur pyar karega, iss umeed se ke dobara thapad nah khana pade….

Table par chai aur bread butter khaate waqt donon ek dusre ke opposite baithe the, Vihaan Ashita ko nihaar raha tha aur baar baar usski tasveerien le raha tha mobile se, ek baar to ussne apne haath lapha kar table ke uss taraf Ashita ki nighty ke strap ko niche karke jhat se ek pic clik kiya, aur Ashita ne buss ussko teerchi nazron se dekha, aur Vihaan uss pic ko dekhne laga apne mobile par, uss mein Ashita ki safed bra ki strap usski kaandhe par saaf nazar aa rahe the aur usski nighty ki strap usski baazu par latke dikh rahe the, phir vihaan ne ussko wo pic dikhaya, Ashita ne dekh kar apne naak mod kar usske chehre mein dekha bina kuch kahe.

To be continued in next update immediately….

Breathtaking update casinar ji.
As usual perfectly written and wonderfully narrated and described.
With so much love and eagerness Vihaan had brought the mobile with the hope of taking Ashita's pics, but it was so painful to read the way Ashita just looked at it and did not show the pleasure Vihaan expected to see on her face.
The way he held her when she came out of her dad's room I thought she will get melted and hug him back firmly but she was so cold that even I wished to cry for Vihaan. He has so much love for her and in return she was behaving so bad that breaks the heart.
When Vihaan said "ek kissi to deti jaa, gudnite kiss to de de mujhe, ek baar apni baahon mein to jakarti jaa nah Ashu"
This got my eyes filled with tears Casi.
You write so wonderfully my dear. Hats off.

 

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Update 14 Ashita’s Rudeness​

Ashita ke dil mein uss waqt kia chal raha tha? kia wo khush thi ke usska bhai usski pics le rahe the, kia weise sexy pic lene se Ashita ko ghussa nahin aya? Kia Ashita ko achah laga? Ussne kyun kuch nahin kaha?

Vihaan ussko ghurrte jaa raha tha aur kuch maskari bhi karte jaa raha tha jeise Ashita ko chidhana, usske baal khinchna, ussko eise weise baatein kehna jiss se Ashita react kare, magar Ashita sirf honth ya naak mod kar respond kar rahi thi magar kuch bol nahin rahi thi…

Jab chai ho gaya to Ashita uthkar pehle bartanon ko dhone gayi sink ke paas aur jaldi se Vihaan mobile ke saath wahan pahuncha ussko shoot karne ko, khada hokar Ashita ko shoot karte hue ussne kaha,

“ari ek Muskaan to lao apne chehre par, itna serious tum kabhi bhi nahin rehti ho aur jab shoot kar raha hoon to hitler bani hui ho, smile please!!!”

Ashita ki hanssi chhut gayi Vihaan ko sunkar, aur jaldi se Vihaan ne usski uss hanssi ko shoot kiya aur kaha,

”yeh hui nah baat, my girlfriend has the best laugh and smile in the world, muuuuuah!”

Vihaan ke dil ko thodi si raahat mili magar yeh sirf ek pal ke liye tha aguey jo hona tha uss se Vihaan ke dil ke tukde hone wale the……

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Vihaan wait kar raha tha ke jab Ashita change karne jaegi tab usski tasveerein lega, bra aur panty mein ussko click karne ka mann to pehle se hi tha aur yeh baat wo pehle keh chuka tha Ashita ko, to Ashita ko iss baat ka pata tha.

Ab tayyaar hone ke liye to Ashita ko uss kamre mein hi jana tha kyunke almaari aur kapde sab Vihaan ke room mein tha.

To jab waqt aya wahan jaane ka to Ashita andar gayi aur mobile haath mein liye Vihaan piche pada usska. Aur jab Ashita ne apni almari kholi to piche khada Vihaan ne ek do pose click kiye aur kaha,

“Wait sweetheart, ahiste ahiste kapde utaarna, tumko dhire dhire shoot karunga, ek ek pal ko capture karna hai mujhe, tere jism ki ek ek hisse ko haule haule shoot karunga, badi khubsurat aegi dekhna….”

Ashita ne mudhkar usske chehre mein dekhte hue kaha,

“bhai aur tum samajhte ho ke main wo sab hone dungi? Hargiz nahin, khabardaar agar tumne mujhko weise shoot kiya to, agar kiya to mummy ko bata dungi!”

Vihaan shocked hua Ashita ki jawaab se aur mobile rakhte hue usske karib gaya usski baahon ko pakar kar ghusse mein khincha aur bed par dhakel kar usske upar chadh kar apne donon tangon se ussko daba kar, usski kamar par chadh kar chilla kar kaha,

“kia nakhrein kar rahi hai tu? Kal raat se hua kia hai tujhe kaun si nayi baat kar raha hoon main, yeh sab to hamari aadat hai aur mujhe yeh sab karna hai, utaar apni nighty mujhe tere jism ka har ek hisse ko chumna hai, tujhe kiss karna hai, yahan ragadhna hai, mujhe ejaculate karna hai teri panty ke upar; ya aaj to iss panty ko bhi utaarunga main, theher tu abhi batata hoon aur teri nakhron ko bhagaata hoon main!!”

Ashita full force se Vihaan ko push kar rahi thi aur jeise donon mein bed par ek jung ho raha tha, ladaayi ho rahi thi jeise donon kushti ladh rahe the, aur Ashita rone lagi sisakte hue yeh kehne lagi,

“Bhai chorro mujhe, main kehti hoon chorro mujhe varna main aur zor se chillaungi aur pados ke log yahan ajaenge, main police mein jaakar kahungi ke tum mera rape karna chahte the, college mein principal ko bataungi, chorro mujhe bhai!!!”

Yeh sab sunkar Vihaan yakayak jeise ussko zabardast jhatka laga, ussne kabhi bhi nahin socha the ke Ashita itna virodh karegi aur eise batein bhi kahegi usske khilaaf, usske liye yeh batein sapnon mein bhi sunna impossible tha, Ashita eisa kabhi nahin kar sakti, kitna pyar karti thi wo uss se, to kia jo kuch Ashita ne kaha wo Ashita hi thi ya koyi aur? Vihaan yeh sochne par majboor hua ke wo usski pyari behen Ashita nahin balke koyi aur ladki thi…..

Ashita ko bilkool chorr diya ussne aur ghaur se usske chehre mein dekhte hue dard bhari awaaz mein kaha,

“tum meri Ashu hi ho nah? Kissi ne koyi jaadu tona to nahin kiya nah tujh par? tum mere khilaaf bol rahi thi abhi? Tu mujhko police mein degi? Tu mere khilaaf principal ko bolegi? Kia tu eisa kar sakti hai? Mere khilaaf? Mujhko tu jail jata hua dekh sakegi? Mujhse door reh sakegi? Kia ho gaya ek raat mein Ashu? Hua kia bata to sahi tab nah mujhe pata chalega?... kia mummy ne tujhko bura bhala kaha kal raat ko? Bata kia hua kal raat ko kia kaha mummy ne tere chaati ke lovebites ke baare mein aur dikha mujhe, mujhe uss jagah ko dekhna, chhuna kitna passand hai, tu to apne aap sab karne deti thi mujhe aaj kia ho gaya baby? Mujhse koyi ghalti hiui kia? Mujhse khafa hai tu? Main ne tujhko koyi dukh pahunchaya kia meri jaan? Bata mujhe, main tumse pyar karna chahta hoon yeh hamari roz ki aadat hai nah? wohi to kar raha hoon, aaj kaun si nayi baat ho rahi hai hamare beech bhala? Bol kuch to bol nah Ashu!”

Ashita ne bina koyi jawaab diye apne kapde liye aur apni mummy ki kamre mein chali gayi change karne ko halaan ke har subha ko Vihaan ke saamne kapde badalti thi aur Vihaan ussko har roz nihaarta tha, chhuta tha, kiss kiya karta tah aur donon ek dusre ko passionately kiss karke tab ready hote the aur ghar se nikalne se pehle har subha donon lambi kiss karte the koyi 5 minat tak…. Wo sab Vihaan ko chahiye the, aur Ashita inkaar kar rahi thi…… to Vihaan paagal hota jaa raha tha!!

Vihaan apne kamre mein baitha raha aur ekaat boondh ensoo ke tapkaaye ussne, tab wo bhi tayyaar hua college ke liye. Tab tak Ashita tayyaar hokar kitchen mein tifin box tayyaar kar rahi thi, aur ussne apne bhai se kaha,

“bhai tumhare tiffin box rakh diya main ne mez par, aur apni tiffin apne paas hai, tum lena mat bhoolna main nikal rahi hoon bye!”

Aur ek bada jhatka laga Vihaan ko. Har roz tiffin usske paas hota hai, ek hi tiffin box mein donon ke khana hota tha itne saalon se, Ashita kabhi tiffin nahin carry karti thi, sirf Vihaan tifin lejata tha aur Ashita ki share ussi mein hota tha aur lunch aur break mein donon ek saath khaate the college mein, aur aaj pehli baar Ashita ne apni tiffin khud liya aur Vihaan ka alag se diya!

Buss yehi nahin har roz donon ek saath nikalte the ghar se aur ek saath college jaate the, bus mein ek saath baithte the magar aaj pehli baar Ashita akeli nikli Vihaan se pehle. Keise bhala Vihaan ko jhatka nahin lagta! Aur to aur ek kiss bhi nahin diya Vihaan ko Ashita ne, gaal par bhi nahin, munh mein 5 minat tak kiss karte the donon har roz, aur aaj kuch nahin aur wo chali bhi gayi Vihaan ko chorr kar….. Vihaan ka dil bade zoron se dhadakne laga aur tezi se wo tayaar hokar nikla bina tiffin liye Ashita ke piche bhaagte hue raaste mein ussko catch kiya aur usske bagal mein chalte hue pucha,

“Yeh berukhi kyun Ashu? Kia bigara hai main ne tumhara? Aaj pehli baar humne kiss nahin kiya, tumko baahon mein nahin liya main ne, aur tum? Tumne bhi to mujhe baahon mein nahin liya? Aaj ka din keise guzrega Ashu? Keise padh paunga main? Aur tu? Kia tu apni studies mein concentrate kar paegi aaj? Hmm? Kia ho gaya hamare beech? Kisski nazar lag gayi hum donon ko Ashu? Bol tu kia chahti hai main karne ke liye tayyar hoon tu bata to sahi main kia karun?!”

Ashita kuch nah boli aur saamne dekhte hue chalti gayi bus stop tak aur bus aya to jaldi se pehli andar gayi aur ek two seater par jahan ek aurat baithi thi wahan baith gayi….. aur ek badlav… har roz ek saath baithte the, pyar karte hue jaate the college tak, phussur phussur karte aur kiss karte bhi jaate the girlfriend boyfriend ki tarah aur aaj jaan bujh kar Ashita pehle daakhil hui bus mein aur ek aurat ke paas baith gayi taake Vihaan usske paas nah baithe……

Inn sab se vihaan par kia beet raha tha yeh wohi jaanta tha….

Kia Ashita ko pata tha ke wo Vihaan ko kitna takliff pahuncha rahi thi? Kia wo uss insaan ko itna dukh de sakti thi jo ussko itna pyar karta tha? kia yehi karne ko kaha tha usske papa ne? Aaj Vihaan ka waqt keise guzrega college mein? Lunch box to liya hi nahin tha Vihaan ne, Ashita ne apni tiffin le liya tha magar ussko pata hi nahin tha ke Vihaan bina khana ke ghar se nikal gaya….. kia hota hai college mein agle update mein dekhenge…..

To be continued…………. (3600 words from both updates)

The title of this update suits it with perfection.
in the beginning, the way Ashita reacted when Vihaan was taking her pics, I felt she was as if happy and will soon return to normal, but i was wrong. and this was so rude from her part when she said it: "“bhai aur tum samajhte ho ke main wo sab hone dungi? Hargiz nahin, khabardaar agar tumne mujhko weise shoot kiya to, agar kiya to mummy ko bata dungi!”
And when Vihaan could not hold himself and pushed her over the bed and mounted over her I thought she will now let Vihaan, but she said ths and even I got shocked reading it,
“Bhai chorro mujhe, main kehti hoon chorro mujhe varna main aur zor se chillaungi aur pados ke log yahan ajaenge, main police mein jaakar kahungi ke tum mera rape karna chahte the, college mein principal ko bataungi, chorro mujhe bhai!!!”
This was really unexpected and what you have in your brain casi that is the treasure you share with us which i adore.
well the pain of Vihaan is wonderfully described and the rudeness of Ashita as well...
will post more with the next two updstes casinar ji,
i hope you will like my way of posting my POV