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Update 15 Distance maintained
Kia Ashita ko pata tha ke wo Vihaan ko kitna takliff pahuncha rahi thi? Kia wo uss insaan ko itna dukh de sakti thi jo ussko itna pyar karta tha? kia yehi karne ko kaha tha usske papa ne? Aaj Vihaan ka waqt keise guzrega college mein? Lunch box to liya hi nahin tha Vihaan ne, Ashita ne apni tiffin le liya tha magar ussko pata hi nahin tha ke Vihaan bina khana ke ghar se nikal gaya….. kia hota hai college mein agle update mein dekhenge…..
Ab aguey…….
College pahunchne se pehle hi bus mein kuch aur hua. Wo lady jisske paas Ashita baithi thi, agle bus stop par utar gayi, Vihaan ko 5 seat piche jagah mili thi baithne ko aur wahan se dekh raha tha jab wo lady utar rahi thi. To first thing karna yeh tha ke ussko jaldi se jaa kar Ashita ke paas baithna tha nah?
Magar Vihaan nahin gaya. Jaan bujh kar nahin gaya, thoda ghussa tha usske andar Ashita ki berukhi se aur dekhna chahta tha ke Ashita ussko wahan expect karegi ke nahin, piche se Ashita par hi apne nazrein gadaaye hue tha. Usska mann to bahot hi kar raha tha usske paas baith kar ussko jakarne ko, usske baalon se khelne ko, ussko chumne ko, uss se baatein karne ko, usske berukhi ko todne ko, magar nahin gaya.
Ab Ashita bhi of course yehi expect kar rahi thi ke Vihaan jaldi se usske paas aega, magar jab dekha ke seat khali reh gayi aur bus chalne lagi kyunke koyi aur nahin aya bus mein uss bus stop par, to Ashita sochne laga ke kyun Vihaan nahin aya…. Ussko pata bhi nahin tha ke Vihaan kidhar baitha tha bus mein, ab mudhkar dekhna to chahti thi magar ussko pata tha ke Vihaan piche se ussko dekh raha hoga aur mudhkar dekhne mein ussko ab ajeeb lagne laga.
Aur Vihaan issi intezaar mein tha ke Ashita ussko mudhkar dhunde bus mein, iss liye usska nazar ussi par tika hua tha. Aur jiss position mein Ashita baithi thi, vihaan ko usski left side bahot saaf dikh raha tha, usski profile ko vihaan ne apne mobile mein quaid karna shuru kiya, kayi pics liye ussne Ashita ko wahan baithe hue aur mobile ko video mode mein karke Ashita par hi jamaye rakha Vihaan ne iss umeed mein ke ek bar Ashita mudh kar dekhe ke Vihaan ussko Camere mein record kare….
Aur agla bus stop aya, bus ruka kyunke ab koyi chadh raha tha bus mein aur sirf Ashita ke paas hi ek jagah tha to iss baar jab Ashita ne dekha ke koyi araha hai usske paas baithne to mudhkar bus mein piche dekha Vihaan ko dhundne ke liye yeh sochte ke kyun jagah khali hone par bhi wo nahin aya usske paas, aur Vihaan ne khushi se Ashita ko record kiya, usski pyari nazrein apne bhai ko dhundte hue bus mein, usski honth, usski expression bahot hi khubsurat aaye video mein, koyi 10 seconds tak to Ashita ki nazrein pehle dhundti rahi aur jab usski nazar Vihaan par pari, tab ussne wapas aguey apna chehra kiya ek halki si muskurahat ke saath… uss halki si muskurahat ko hi recording mein Vihaan baar baar rewind karke dekh raha tha.
Jab tak school nah pahunche donon alag hi baithe rahe aur utarne ke baad phir Ashita aguey chalti gayi bina piche dekhe aur college ke andar daakhil ho gaye donon aur apne apne classes mein chale gaye.
Break mein Ashita aaj Vihaan ke paas nahin aayi. Wo apne classmates, Priya aur dusre doston ke beech hi rahi. Magar Vihaan ko usski nazrein dhund rahi thi. Uss jagah par jahan hamesha donon baithte the udhar Ashita ki nazrein Vihaan ko dhund rahi thi.
Aur Vihaan jaan bujh kar kahin aur khada ussko nihaar raha tha apne doston ke saath. Vihaan ke paas to kuch khaane pine ko tha nahin buss 10 mins ki break mein eise hi Ashita ko dekhta raha.
Lunch break mein Ashita phir Priya ke saath baithi khana khane ke liye. Aur phir uss jagah par dekha jahan har roz wo aur Vihaan baithte the. Jab ussko Vihaan nahin dikha to ussko kuch ajeeb laga aur socha ke Vihaan uss se naraaz hai issi liye wo udhar nahin aya hai aaj.
Vihaan ne to tiffin liya hi nahin tha, iss liye bina kuch khaaye hi raha din bhar. Bhook to badi zor se lagi thi usse bhi aur usska mann kar raha tha ke jaa kar Ashita ke lunch se kuch maang kar khaaye, wo zaroor share karti apne bhai ke saath magar jaan bujh kar Vihaan nahin gaya. Eise hi raha. Kuch kharida bhi nahin canteen mein.
Jab lunch time end hone ko aya tab Ashita charon taraf Vihaan ko dhundne lagi. Aur Priya se pucha, “tumne Vihaan ko dekha kia kahin?”
Priya ne kaha, “nahin to, are haan aaj tum aur wo ek saath kyun nahin ho? jhagda kiya hai kia apne bhai ke saath tumne? Break mein bhi tu mere sath hi baithi thi, har roz to apne bhai ke saat khana khati ho nah?!”
Ashita apne toes par khade hokar students ke bhid mein charon taraf nazar ferrte hue Priya ko eise hi jawaab diya, “nahin buss eise hi aaj tiffin alag alag laaye hein hum donon….”
Aur din guzra phir school end hone ke baad bus stop par Ashita ek group mein khadi thi jahan bus mein ghussne ke liye sabhi students ke beech dhakam dhaka hua karta hai, ladke aur ladkiyan bhi hote hein saath mein aur uss dauraan kuch badmaash ladke ladkiyon ke skirt uthaate hein aur haath ferrte hein….
Vihaan kuch doorie banaaye hue tha khud Ashita se aur dekh raha tha ke wo keise bus ke andar jaati hai. Har roz hota yeh tha ke Ashita ko apne saamne rakhta tha Vihaan aur baaki logon ko push karte hue Ashita ko pehle bus mein andar jaane deta usske baad wo andar ghussta tha magar aaj buss dekh raha tha. haan ussko pata tha ke ladke ladkiyon ko chhute hein uss waqt aur wo wohi dekh raha tha ke koyi Ashita ko kahin chhue nah…..
Kuch ladke Vihaan se bhi bade classes ke the, jo Vihaan se umar mein aur kad mein bhi bade the, aur har tarah ke ladke the, badmaash, sharif, gunde type ke bhi, dil feink aur Romeo type bhi the of course…. Ek buss bhar jata to dusre ka wait kiya jata tha, ya teesre ka bhi kabhi kabhi…. To aaj Vihaan ne soch liya tha ke agar ussko first bus mein jagah nahin mila to Ashita ko akeli jaane dega wo baad mein dusre bus mein jaega…..
Aur jab pehla bus aya aur bus ke andar jaane ke liye jab dhakka shuru hua to Vihaan ne dekha ek ladka Ashita ke peeth par apna haath ferr raha hai aur ek usski pichware ko daba raha hai….. bade ghusse mein, Vihaan daud kar udhar gaya aur donon ladke ke collar pakar kar pura zor lagaake apne taraf khincha aur donon ko zameen par gira diya, unn mein se ek ladka Vihaan se bada tha aur ooncha bhi, tab tak bus bhar gaya aur jaane laga, Ashita ko bhi uss mein jagah nahin mili aur idhar ladaayi shuru ho gayi Vihaan aur unn donon ladkon ke beech. Jo ladka Vihaan ke umar ka tha ussne sorry kaha aur ek taraf ho gaya magar jo bada tha ussne Vihaan ko uthkar ek ghunssa mara seedhe usske chehre par, jiss se Vihaan do kadam ladkhadaate hue niche gid pada aur wo ladka jaa hi raha tha Vihaan ko aur maarne tab tak Ashita aur Priya beech mein aakar uss ladke ko gaaliyan se nehlaane lage. Phir baaki ke ladkiyan bhi inn donon ka saath dene lage, to wo bada ladka wahan se nikal gaya chup chap. Ashita jaldi se Vihaan ke paas gayi aur ussko uthne mein madad kiya magar Vihaan ne Ashita ka haath jhatakte hue ussko alag kiya. Bahot ghusse mein tha wo ab. Vihaan ke honth ke kone se thoda sa khoon nikal pada tha jissko Ashita ne apne rumal se ponchna chaha magar phir Vihaan ne usske haath ko hattaya. Priya ne sab dekha aur dhire se Ashita se kaha,
“hmm zaroor tum donon mein ladaayi hui hai, hai nah? issi liye wo tujhse baat tak nahin kar raha, kyun re kia hua tum donon ke beech?!”
Ashita Vihaan ke chehre mein dekhte hue Priya ko jawaab diya, “kuch bhi to nahin!”
Aur vihaan wahan se hatt gaya, ek taraf chala gaya, kuch doorie par….
Aur Priya ne pucha,
“Vihaan ne kyun zameen par patka tha unn donon ko kia unn donon ne tere saath kuch kiya tha kia?!”
To Ashita ne kaha, “bhid mein shaayad kissi ne mujhe chhua tha, kissi ne mere skirt ke niche apna haath dala tha, aur Vihaan to piche khada tha to ussne zaroor dekha hoga tabhi to yeh sab hua!!”
Tab Priya ne kaha, “hmmm tera bodyguard yahin tha aur sab dekh raha tha piche se hein; wah re wah tera bhai to tujhe protect karta hai re, tujhe to khush hona chahiye ke eisa tera rakhsha karne wala bhai hai tere saath, kaash mera bhi eisa bhai hota!”
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Aakhir mein dusre bus mein donon ko jagah mile aur same bus mein donon wapas ghar aaye magar alag alag seat par baith kar.
Ghar aate hi Ashita ki nazar Vihaan ki tiffin box par padi, aur jahldi se box uthakar kholte hue dekha phir mudhkar Vihaan ko ensoo se bhade hue enkhon se dekhte hue kaha,
“bhai tumne kyun tiffin box nahin liya tha? Tum aaj din bhar bhooke rahe kia? Bhai kyun eisa kiya tumne!”
Aur wo phoot phoot kar rone lagi, rote hue niche zameen par baith gayi haath mein uss tiffin box ko liye hue.
Vihaan wahin khada ussko rote hue dekh raha tha aur usske enkhen bhi bhar aaye magar ek shabd nahin kaha ussne. Buss Ashita ko dekhta raha, apne pyar ko rota dekh kar kitni der weise khada rehta, Ashita zor se ro rahi thi aur Vihaan se Ashita ko rote hue nahin dekha jaata, bachpan se hi jab bhi Ashita roti to wo jhat se ussko gale se lagata tha aur ussko chhup karata tha, aur aaj keise ussko aur ziada rote hue dekh sakta tha, uss se raha nah gaya aur usske paas baith kar ussko gale se lagana chaha, magar Ashita uth khadi hui aur rote hue hi, thoda ghusse mein kaha,
“Mujhe pata hai tumne jaan bujh kar mujhko dukh dene ke liye eisa kiya, main ne separate tiffin box liye iss liye tum ne eisa kiya, mat chhuo mujhe jao chale jao, apne cybercafé chale jao abhi se hi, mujhe akela chorr do tum!”
Vihaan wahin khada ussko dekh raha tha aur phir kaha,
“chala jaun? Sach mein chala jaunga bina kuch khaaye piye, jaun kia?!”
Ashita ne ziada rote hue kaha,
“jo karna hai karo mujhse kyun puch rahe ho?”
Aur Vihaan phir usske taraf badha ussko baahon mein bharne ke liye magar Ashita piche hatt gayi aur kaha,
“Main ne kaha nah mat chhuo mujhe, jao apna khana kaho, main chai banati hoon pee kar tab jana!”
Vihaan apne mann ko maarte hue baith gaya khaane ko kyunke assal mein ussko bade zor ki bhook lagi thi. Usska mann to Ashita ko baahon mein kasske jakar kar ussko bahot saare chummiyan dene ko kar raha tha, Ashita se bahot pyar karne ka mann kar raha tha magar apne andar apne armaanon ko dabaate hue wo khaane laga Ashita ko kitchen mein chai banaate hue dekhte.
Koyi ek ghante baad Vihaan ka jaane ka time hua. Ab ussko himat nahin thi Ashita ke ziada karib jaane ko. Dil to bahot karta tha usse, ke Ashita ko baahon mein bhare, ussko kiss kare, usske sath bed par kuch time guzare, usski jism ki khushbhoo ko apne andar basaaye, magar jiss tarah se Ashita behave karne lagi thi wo usski himmat ko tod rahe the, to ghar se nikalne se pehle sirf itna kaha Ashita se,
“Mera wait karegi ya apne kamre mein chali jaegi tu? Abhi se hi bata de to main apne khayaalon mein sapnon ke mehel ko aur ziada nahin badhne dunga….”
Ashita ne ek taraf dekhte hue kaha,
“agar homeworks complete kar liya to chali jaungi, aur tum mujhe har raat apne room mein expect karna ab bandh kar dena, aur wapas ane ke baad so jana yeh mat expect karna ke wapas yahan aungi main, weise main ne papa se mera alag room banane ko keh diya hai lounge ko separate karke, tab main yahan bilkool nahin aungi, ussi room mein homeworks karungi aur so jaungi….”
Vihaan ne kaha,
“matlab sab sapne tut gaye mere? Yaane ke hum ek dusre se bilkool alag ho gaye yehi kehna chahti ho nah? aur hamare pyar ka kia hua? Pyar karti ho mujhse ya wo bhi khatam ho gaya? Meri girlfriend ho ab bhi ya nahin yeh jaanna hai mujhe!”
Ashita ne Vihaan se peeth karte hue kaha,
“wo hota hai nah break up? Samajh lo ke apne girlfriend se tumhara break up ho gaya, aur ab jao, tumko late nahin ho raha?!”
Vihaan wahan se zor se rote hue nikla aur paagalon ki tarah raaste par daudne laga, tez raftaar se dauta gaya jeise kissi anjaane manzil ke taraf badh raha hai…..
To be continued immediately in next post
the first part, travelling in the was cute. the way even Ashita was expecting vihaan to come near her and when she turned to look back at him was interesting and i loved that part, especially when vihaan shot her and rewinded to watch her lightly smiling.... that was too cute....
in the college compound when Ashita was looking for him in the break and lunch was interesting too.
see I can understand that she loves him secretly. she does not want to show but she loves him dearly and she wants him to keep a distance from her.... but the only thing she is not realising is that she is hurting him
the fight at the bus stand was funny but Ashita again showed she cares for him, that was good but Vihaan looked very angry, even with Ashita
anyhow when reached back home and Ashita found the tiffin at home and she started crying proves again that she was sad and hurt that her brother remained without food all day..... here i felt sad when Ashita cried telling him that he does that intentionally to hurt her...
you have wonderfully described the desires of vihaan, how far he wished to spend time with her, to touch her, to love with her, to smell her etc, you have written that perfectly well. too good.
And their conversation turned sour when Ashita told him that she will not wait for him and soon she is going to get a new room and bed. then when she mentioned that he must understand that they have had a break up..... that was tough and a blow on vihaan and i feel very sad for him
splendid update caasinar ji
