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FANTASTIC & MINDBLOWING UPDATE.Bohat bohat Shukriya Bhai....
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Vikrant ke powers... Ka kya huva woh aagle update mein...
Surya ka Kya huva.... Aur neeli ankhon waleh ka suspense... Bus kuch updates mein....
Bus tab Tak Aise hi saath banaye rakhiyeh....
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Woh, kya story likh rahe writter sahab.... Brilliant update... bas ye itne suspense hai, ushe next update me open jorur kar dijiyega...UPDATE 31Dean Saabhi ko.... Uski lab mein aane ke.... Liyeh kehtah hai.... .
HUVAH VIKRANT KA APNI SACHAI SE SAMNAH
Rasten mein... Soham..... Grimm Raj.... aur Roy..... Mohit ki....body... Koh aakhri Salam deteh hai.... woh pass Ke.... Jungle me....hi use Dafnaah deteh hai....
saabhi Dean Ke.... Lab ki aur jahteh hai....
kyunki.... Kuch ghantoh me subaah..... hone wali thi....
Saab thak ke.... Aaram Kar rahe the.... Jwalaah ko hosh aagaya tha lekin.... Vikrant ko Abhi bhi... Hosh Nahi aaya tha...
Grimm.... Soham... Lab ki basement mein the.... Woh Shyam aur Sara ke hosh....me aane ki.... Raah dekh rahe the....
Tabhi.... Shyam aur Sara Koh hosh... Aatah hai... ... Lekin... Yeh jaan neke baad ki... Woh Aab vampire... Ban chuke hai... Unhe jaise Aab jeena... Gawarah Nahi tha...
Goliyon ke Ghaav Abhi Purih.... tarah se Nahi bhareh the... Ki unhe Aab dusreh ghaav mileh.... Jinkaa dard.... Goliyon ke ..... Ghaav se hi zyadaah lag Raha tha....
Tabhi Raj wahan aatah hai... Aur Shyam aur Sara ki aur.... Dekhtah hai.... Shyam Raj ko dekh ke.... Ghusse se.... kehtah hai....
Shyam- Sir... Hum jisse apna dushman manteh hai... Aur jin vampires ko.... maarne keh..... Liyeh hi yeh... Team banai hai.... Aap ne toh Humeh wahi banaa Diya....
Sara- Sir... Iseh toh accha hotah.... Humeh bhi Mohit ki... Tarah maar jahteh....
Soham- Main tum logoh ki.... Taklif samajhta Hun.... Main isse guzar chukah.... Hun... Saabhi vampires bureh... Nahi hoteh.... Jaisa tum soch rahe ho....
(Tabhi Raj.... Shyam aur sara ke pass jahtah hai...)
Raj- main jantah... Hun aap log.... Kya soch rahe ho.... Aur aap logon par Kya beet rahi hai....
Aap mere is .... Faisleh se kafi... Pareshan hai.... Aur mujh par Ghussa bhi aaraha hai....
par is tarah se.... sochon ki.... zindagi ne tumhe...ek aur mauka... Diya hai... jeene kaa...
Sach kahun... Toh Mujeh Mohit ke Janeh ka... Bohat dukh hai...
Par aap donoh Koh... Main khona Nahi chahatah tha... Jantah Hun vampire banneh keh baad... Zindagi kafi badal jayegi.... Lekin... Soham aur Grimm... Bhi toh Acche.... Vampires hai....
Tum unkeh saath ek.... Nayi shurvaat karon....
Tum janteh ho... jab 16 Saal pehleh.... Maine Saab kuch kho... Diya tha.... Yahantak ki apne pairon se lachar ho.... Chukah tha.... tumhari tarah.... mein bhi.... Zindah Nahi rehna chahata tha....
Par maine... Umeedh Nahi chodih aur haalat Koh bardaash kiyan... Us seh samjohtah Kiya... Aur Aaj Mujeh uska phal milah.... Vikrant ke Roop me...
Agar Vikrant ke.... Saath aisah kuch hotah... To main useh bhi tum logoh ki.... Tarah vampire.... Banakeh wapas latah.....
Aab Chahe Vikrant ko powers wapas.... Mileh yaa naa milen.... Par mein chahata hun.... tum vampire ki... Powers se Aab... Is team ki madad Karteh rahon.... Is Team ko... Tumhari zarurat hai.... Aur hamesha rahegi....
Agar tum Mujeh... Dil se... Sir kehteh ho...aur Mujeh... Apna maan teh ho... Toh Itna samajh loh... Ki...
Zindagi Kabhi Aasan Nahi Hoti....
Ise Aasaan Karnaa Padhtah Hai....
Kuchh Najar Andaaj Karkeh....
Kuchh halaat ko Bardaasht Karkeh....
Aankhon Mein Kuchh Khavaab liyeh....
Aur Dil Mein kuch Ummeeden bharkeh....
Aapni raah me aageh badhkeh.....
Har waqt apni zindagi ka maksaad..... Humeh talaash karna Padhtah hai....
Humeh Zindagi koh.... har haal mein... Jeena Padhtah hai.... Jeena Padhtah hai....
(Raj yeh kavitah... Keh ke... Wahan se.... Chalah jhatah hai... Soham aur Grimm bhi.... Unhe akelah chodh deteh hai....
Woh janteh the... Ki Shyam aur sara ko is waqt.... apneh Halaat koh samajne ke.... liyeh thodah waqt chahiyeh....tha....
Bahar saabhi Vikrant... Ke hosh me aane ki .. rah dekh rahe the.... Tabhi sam sawal kartah hai....)
Sam- Kya Vikrant koh is waqt... Asliyat batana thik hogah....
Soham- kaun si asliyat...
(Sam tabhi... Soham aur Grimm ko.... Batatah hai... Ki Vikrant... Raj ka khoya huva betah... Vicky hai....
Soham aur Grimm yeh...Saab kuch Sunke Chauk jateh hai.... Aur sochne laghteh hai....)
Soham- phir toh Vikrant.... Ko hosh me aane ke baad hi patah chalegah... Ki uski maan ki aur dimag ki... Halat kaisi hai....
(Vikrant ke papa... Kuch soch ke kehteh hai...)
V.papa- Mein use... Yeh Baat batane... Me pehle se hi bohat der... Kardi hai... Aab aur Nahi... Yeh sachai meh use... Aaj Batakeh rahungaa.... Vikrant ko kuch Nahi hogah....
(Grimm jwalaah se kehtah hai....)
Grimm- aapka Kya kehna hai.... Vikrant ke.... powers wapas... Kabhi bhi aa sakhteh hai... Yeah woh nasht ho Gayeh....
Jwalaah- Nasht.... Itni powers nahi... hai Mere pass ki mein aisa.... dark powers ko Nasht Kar sakun....
Mera akhri daav tha.... White soul dragon spell.... Is spell se... maine.... Insan ke andar ki.... Acchai ki Shakti... Uski burai ki ... Yani... Dark powers par.... Habbih ho jahtih hai... ..
Aur Vikrant ke... dark Powers wapas... Uskeh andar chaleh Gayeh.... Jaise taveez tutne se pehle the....
Woh taveez... sirf Vikrant ke powers ko.... Bahar aanese rokne.... Ke liyeh tha....
Beetel- Toh kya Vikrant... Wapas waisa shaitaan... Ban saktah hai....
Jwalaah- haan.... lekin
(Jwalaah apni Baat Puri Kar.... Patih ke tabhi.... Sonia bhaag Kar aati hai.... Aur kehti hai...)
Sonia- bhaiya ko hosh aagaya.....
(Yeh sunkeh Saab.... Kush hoteh hai.... Raj aapni ankhen baandh kartah hai... Aur bhagvaan ka shukriya... Adaa kartah hai.... Vikrant ke dad andar jateh hai..... Vikrant ke pass....
Vikrant ne... Aabhi apni ankhen kholi hi thi.... aur.... woh soch Raha tha.... Thodi der pehle woh.... ghayal tha.... Empire state building mein..... Aur Yahan kaise aagaya.... )
Vikrant- Sonia hum Kahan hai....
V.dad- Hum Dean ke.... Lab mein hai.... Beteh...
(Tabhi .... Vikrant samne apne dad... Koh dekhta hai.... Woh turant khadeh hokeh unse.... Galeh miltah hai..... )
Vikrant- (Roteh... huveh) dad.... I am sorry... Maine aap Saab se.... Chupkar dur Raha.... I am really sorry ..... Mein aapkoh khatreh mein... Nahi dalna chahata tha.... Isiyeh Maine aisa Kiya....
V.Dad- (Vikrant ki pith thap thapah teh hai....)common, Vikrant... Tu Mere Sher hai.... Mein toh jantah tha... Ki Tum zinda ho.... Par tum Kahan ho.... Kiss haal me hongeh.... thik hai ki Nahi.... Bus Yahi fikar khayeh ... Jaa rahi thi....
Vikrant- Maine maa... Koh bhi... bohat rulaya hai na.... Kaisi hai woh... Dad... Mujeh yaad karti hai.....
V.dad- tu khud hi... Milkar.... Puch le... Aapni MAA se....
(V.dad use aapne se.... Durr Karteh hai.... )
Vikrant- Mujmeh.. Aab unkeh saamne.. aane ki himmat Nahi....hai... Main MAA ko rotah.... Huva Nahi dekh saktah....
V.dad- Tu aapni MAA ki fikar mat.... Kar ... Tune Joh Kiya .... Bikul thik Kiya hai.... I am proud of you....my son...
Main Teri MAA Koh.... Samjha dunga... Chal Aab yeh Rona- dhona bankar.... Bahar Saab Tera intazar kar... Rahe Hain.... Aur maafi Toh... Mujeh bhi mangni hai.... Tujseh...
Vikrant- are ...Han dad.... Main aapkoh dekh... Ke bhul hi... Gaya... Yeh Saab kaise huva... Aur Kya huva....main yahan kaise.... Pohacha... Aap aur sonia kab aayeh....
V.dad- Bus...betah.... Aaj tujeh Tere hur sawalon.... Ka jawab.... Mil jayegaa...
Aaj tujeh mein Teri Zindagi ki aisi.... sachai batane Wala Hun.... Jiseh tu abhi anjaan hai....
Vikrant- Dad.... Yeh Saab aap Kya keh.... Rahen ho....
V.dad Vikrant ko... Bahar lekeh aateh hai... Saabhi Vikrant ki taraf dekhteh hai....
Grimm- aao Vikrant...
Soham Vikrant ke pass jatah hai.... aur useh galeh miltah hai.... Aur phir alag hokeh... Kehtah hai...
Soham- kaisa lag raha hai... Aab... Vikrant...
Vikrant- thik Hun....
(Phir Vikrant.... Saab Koh dekhtah hai.... Saab Koh dekhkar use.... woh raat ka manzaar.... Yaad aatah hai....
Woh yaad kartah... Hai... ki Woh vampire se... Ladh Raha tha... Aur Ronny aur Surya ne.... Uskeh peeth par Bhaaleh aur talvaar se.... vaar Kiya.... Tha....
Vikrant turant.... apneh ghaav check kartah hai.... Woh sochtah hai... Itni Jaldih Saare ghaav kaise....bhar gayeh....
Phir Vikrant ko.... Yaad aataah hai.... Surya ne phir soham ko.... Maarne ke liyeh kaha tha.... Vikrant soham ke samne dekhtah hai.... Aur useh kehtah hai....)
Vikrant- Soham.... Ronny tujeh maarnewalah tha.... Phir Kya huva.... Mujeh kuch.... yaad kyun Nahi... hum Saab yahan kaise pohache...
Yeh Saab ek sapnah hai.... Yeah haqiqat.... Mujeh kuch yaad... Kyun Nahi aaraha....
(Vikrant... Ekdum confused ho jhatah hai.... Woh yeh soch Raha tha.... Ki woh Empire state building me.... ghayal tha.... Aur yahan kaise... Pohach Gayah....)
Vikrant- Mujeh kuch yaad kyun Nahi.... Kuch samajh Nahi aaraha.... Hum saab yahan kaise aayeh...
Grimm- Vikrant tum... Pehle shan't ho jao.... Aur yahan sofeh par betho....
Vikrant- Nahi... Grimm... Abhi toh main... Ghayal padah tha.... Aur dusreh pal yahan lab mein kaise aa gayah.....
Beetel Vikrant ke..... Pass jahti hai.... Aur use pyaar se..... kehti hai.....
Beetel- Vikrant.... Hum ladai Jeet chukeh hai... Surya haar Gaya... Hai... Par tum ladai mein.... behosh ho chukeh the....
Yeah sunkeh Vikrant.... Shan't ho jatah hai... Aur beetel se sawal kartah hai....
Vikrant- kaise... kaise Jeeteh hum ladaai... Mein....
(Vikrant beetel ka... Haath kaske pakkad... Letah hai....Beetel Vikrant ke pass Baith jahti hai....)
Beetel- Uskeh liyeh.... Pehle tum shan't... Ho jao.... MeinTumhe.... Saab kuch batati Hun.....
(Vikrant aur beetel Baith jahteh hai... Beetel Raj ke samne dekhtih hai.... Raj apna seer.... hilakeh... Haan me ishara kartah hai...)
Beetel- bus Aab mein Joh kehti... Hun woh dhyan se sunoh.... Vikrant... Tum jab wahan ghayal.... Padeh the.... Aur yaad hai Soham... ne Taveez ki.... Baat ki thi....
Vikrant apneh.... Haathon mein check kartah hai.... phir use yaad aatah hai....)
Vikrant- par woh Taveez.... Toh.... Vampires ne.... Nikal liya tha.... Aur nashth kar Diya tha....
(Tabhi jwalaah woh Taveez.... Dikhati hai....)
Jwalaah- yeh raha woh Taveez.... Vikrant....
Vikrant....jwalaah ke samne dekh ke.... Yeh kaun hai.... Aur ise yeh Saab kaise patah hai..... Aur Mujeh kaise jantih hai.....
Beetel- Saab batati Hun.... Yeah Joh taveez Tumhe .... Tumhare dad ne... Diya tha... Woh Bureh sapne rokneh ke liyeh.... Nahi tha.... Tumhare andar.... Dark powers hai.... Useh rokneh ke liyeh tha....
Vikrant- Dark powers..... yeh Saab Aab kaun si.... Paheli hai....
V.dad- Betah yeh... Paheli ek sachai hai.... Yeh Sahi keh rahi hai.... Woh powers ki... Wajah se hi tumhare ghaav bharteh hain...
Par yeh powers... tumpeh haabih naa ho jayeh.... Isliyeh yeh taveez.... MaineTumhe Diya tha....
(Vikrant apne mann me sochata hai.... Yeah Saab ek... Magic jaisa lag Raha hai.... Par papa kabhi.... Juth Nahi bolteh.... Aur beetel... Par Mujeh vishwas hai....)
Vikrant- aage Batao Beetel....
Beetel- Phir....wahan... Surya ke ishare par.... Rohnny Mohit Koh maarne ke liyeh jabh aageh badah...... taabh humne tumhare andar.... Chupeh us powers ko... Jaganeh ke liyeh Tumhe.... Ghussa dilaya.....
(Vikrant yaad kartah hai...... Beetel Grimm... Aur Raj ne use.... soham ki madad ke liyeh.... Chilakar Keh rahe the....)
Vikrant- han.... Mujeh yeh yaad hai.... Par uskeh baad kah.... Mujeh kuch bhi... Yaad Nahi....
Beetel- Kyunki.... Woh dark powers... Taveez ke tutne par.... Azad ho Gayeh.... Aur tumhare Ghussa hone par.... Tumpar haabih ho... Gayeh...
Tum us Shakti keh kaabu mein the.... Aur tumhare samne Joh.... Bhi aaya... Use tumne maar Diya....)
Raj- Vikrant Sam.... Ka helmet... ladai ke dauran... wahan gir gayah tha..... par Usme... Kuch videos record... Huveh hai.... Useh tum dekh sakhteh ho.... Tum Kya ban Gayeh the....
(Roy Vikrant Koh.... Mobile detah hai... Vikrant video dekhke Chauk... Jahtah hai....usmeh woh ek shaitaan Koh.... Vampires se.... Ladhte huveh.... Dekhtah hai....
Vikrant dhyan se dekhtah... Hai... Woh samaj jhatah hai... Woh shaitaan aur koi Nahi.... Balkih woh khud hai.....
Phir Grimm aageh Vikrant se.... Kehta h hai.... )
Grimm- Vikrant tumne... Saabhi vampires ko maar Diya.... Rohnny ko bhi...phir Surya ne... ek... Bhediyeh ki takkat ka.... injection lagayah ...
Bhediyeh Bankeh.... woh ladah aur.... Woh bhi tumse haar Gaya....
Vikrant- Woh bhi... haar Gaya....
(Phir soham vikrant se.... kehtah hai...)
Soham- Vikrant.. phir Aageh Surya Koh harakeh.... Tum hamari taraf badeh.... Tumneh Grimm... Beetel aur Mujeh maarne.... Ki koshish ki.... Par tabhi.... Tumhare papa aur Sonia.... Jwalaah ko lekeh aagayeh...
(Soham jwalaah ki.... Aur ishara kartah hai...)
phir Vikrant ke.... Dad Kehteh hai... )
V.dad- Jwalaah ne aapni shaktiyon.... Se Tumhe... Ek kavach mein... Qaid Kiya... Par tumneh Saab todh Diya.... Phir tum Meri taraf badhen....
Vikrant- dad meine aapeh hamalah Kiya....
Jwalaah- Nahi Vikrant.... Tum hamala Karteh... Use pehle... Meine.... Tumhe ek kavach mein qaid Kar... Liyah.... Aur tum use nikal Nahi payeh... Aur behosh ho Gayeh....
Raj- Aur tumhare behosh hone... ke baad tum normal ... ho gayeh.... phir... Dean keh.... Kehne par... Hum Saab yahan... Aagayeh.... Aur Aab jakeh Tumhe hosh... Aayah....
Vikrant- (Saab ke samne dekhke....) Iska Matlab mein.... Ek shaitaan Hun..... Toh phir kyun bachaya.... Mujeh Marne diyah hotah....
Jwalaah- Tum shaitaan Nahi ho.... Vikrant.... Tumeh woh dark shaktiyan hai.... jab woh tumpeh haabih ho.... Jatih hai.... tabh Tum apni acchai ko bhul jateh ho....
Aur phir.... Tum ladaai koh.... sirf jeetne ke.... liyeh.... ladhteh ho..... Aur Saab Koh... Maarteh ho... Chahe woh accha ho ya burah.....
Vikrant- phir aisi shaktih... Koh kyun jagahya.... Joh aapnoh Koh hi maardeh...
Beetel- yeh hum Saab... Ka faisala tha.... Aur hum agar... Aaj zindah hai.... Toh sirf tumhari aur Jwalaah ki wajah se.... Varna Surya... Ek ke baad ek karke... Saab Koh maar detah....
Vikrant- par mujh mein... Yeh shaktiyan aayi Kahan se....
V.dad- Jis din tum humkoh.... mileh the.... Usi din....
(Yeh sunteh hi.... Jaise Vikrant ke pairon se.... Zameen khisak gai.... Jaise koi bhukam aagaya ho....)
Vikrant- Kya Kahan aapneh.... Abhi... Dad...
V.dad- yahi ki.... Tum Humeh mile the.... 16 Saal pehleh....
(Vikrant Sonia ke.... Samneh dekhtah hai... Sonia roneh lagtih hai...)
Vikrant- dad yeh aap Kya keh... Rahen hai.... Mujeh to yeh Saab kuch Aab ek.... Sapna lag Raha hai...
(Priya... Vicky ki... Taveer nikal Kar dikhati hai.... Aur kehti hai....
Priya- Is tasveer Koh... pehchanteh ho...
(Vikrant tasveer Koh.... Dekh ke.... )
Vikrant- yeh toh Meri tasveer hai... Par aisi tasveer... Kaab khichvayi thi.... Aur yeh tumhare pass kaise....
(Phir Priya... Ek aur tasveer dikhatih hai... Jisme... Vicky ko pakkad ke.... Reena baithi hai.... Vikrant us tasveer Koh.... Dekhtah hai...)
Vikrant- Yeh toh main Hun.... Par yeh aurat kaun hai.... Maine ise kahin dekha hai... .
(Han....yeh wahi aurat hai... Joh mere sapnoh mein aati hai.... Joh pull pe.... Sahaytah... Ke liyeh pukartih... Hai....
Par mein is aurat ke.... Saath.... Kaise.... Yeh saab kaab ki tasveeren hai.... Priya Tumhe yeh.... Tasveeren Kahan se mili....
Priya ek aur tasveer... Vikrant Koh.... Dikhati hai.... Jismeh Raj aur Reena vikcy.... Koh kiss Kar... Rahe the... Aur Vicky muh... Phulayeh... Khadah tha...
Vikrant us tasveer Koh dekhtah hai.... Aur usmen usi... Aurat aur khud koh dekhtah hai.... Par jab woh Usmen Raj Koh dekhtah hai.... To Chauk jahtah hai.....
Woh piche mudkeh.... Raj ki aur Dekhtah hai..... Aur kehtah hai...)
Vikrant- mein aapkeh saath .... Is tasveer main kaise.....
V.dad- kyunki yehi.... Tumhare asli pitah hai...
(Vikrant ki dhadkane.... Ekdum tez ho jaatih hai... woh Saab ke... Samne dekhtah hai.... saabhi jaise normal the..... woh Yeh samajh jatah hai... Ki uskeh alaava Saab janteh hai.... Is Baat Koh.....
Woh... Wapas us tasveer mein dekhtah hai.... Aur us aurat Koh dekh... Keh kehtah hai...)
Vikrant- toh... Phir yeh aurat kaun hai..... Is tasveer mein....
(Yeh sunkeh.... jaise Raj ki ankhon se.... ek Ansun girtah hai.... Aur woh kehtah hai....)
Raj- yeh Meri patni Reena hai.... Aur woh hai.... Jisne Tumhe.... Is duniya mein ...Janam diya.... Hai... Tumhari.... MAA.....
TO BE CONTINUED ................
Aagleh update mein.... Vikrant Koh powers.... Kaise mileh.... Aur 16 Saal pehle... Vikrant ke dad se kaise milah....
Vikrant keh powers.... Ke baare mein uskeh dad Koh kaise patah chalah..... Aur Taveez kisne banaya....
Aab vikrant Koh.... Apneh.... Aslih dushman ke.... Bareh mein patah.... Chalegah.... WARLOCK....
toh saath baneh rahiyeh.... Mere saath is kahani mein.....
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