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A hero can kill someone to save the world...

but a villain can destroy the world to save one...

 

[Siraj Patel]

For completing 100 pages on your thread.
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[Naina]

Flashback main hero kisi ko nhiii dikhaya ja rha bsss jo venky ke pariwaar ke saath ab tak hua hai wahi bataya ja rha hai...... ab kya poora update rajesh aur anamika ki pyaar bhari baaton main hi nikaal dete toh flashback hi chalta rehta 100 updates tak......

ek kahani mein agar raaz chupa hai atit mein to kam se kam kahani ke hisap se 20% update flashback pe adhaarit honi chahiye.... ab ye writer ke upar hai ki ek sath flashback dene wale hai kahani ke flow ke hisap se ya phir kisto mein dene wale hai....
Best books critics bhi yehi kehte hai ki agar flashback mein total suspense open nahi hua details ke sath to samajh lijiye ki kahani ka vartmaan hints mein hi simat kar reh jaayegi...
Kam se kam 100 update ki kahani, hero kke maa dad & family +lead characters ke atit + unki story
us hisaap se kam se kam 15se 20 update hone chahiye...
Kyunki yaha sirf unki nahi balki hero ke pita ke ghar ke members bhi jude huye hai.... Even flashback mein jo negative characters the unki kahani bhi judi huyi hai....aur sabse aham baat kahani Thriller prefix pe hai..
mahaz 4-5 update mein cover karne gaye to bahot si jaruri ankahi baatein atit mein hi dafan hoke reh jaani hai jise jaanna bahot jaruri hai aage ki vartmaan kahani ke liye ...

meri nazar mein hero aur uski family ke atit ke bare mein jis hisap likh rahe hai writer sahab wo kaafi kaabile tareef , arthpurna aur behad jaruri hai ....
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[Villain1825]

For completing 100 pages on your thread.
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Shukriya Siraj Patel bhai

 

[Villain1825]

ek kahani mein agar raaz chupa hai atit mein to kam se kam kahani ke hisap se 20% update flashback pe adhaarit honi chahiye.... ab ye writer ke upar hai ki ek sath flashback dene wale hai kahani ke flow ke hisap se ya phir kisto mein dene wale hai....
Best books critics bhi yehi kehte hai ki agar flashback mein total suspense open nahi hua details ke sath to samajh lijiye ki kahani ka vartmaan hints mein hi simat kar reh jaayegi...
Kam se kam 100 update ki kahani, hero kke maa dad & family +lead characters ke atit + unki story
us hisaap se kam se kam 15se 20 update hone chahiye...
Kyunki yaha sirf unki nahi balki hero ke pita ke ghar ke members bhi jude huye hai.... Even flashback mein jo negative characters the unki kahani bhi judi huyi hai....aur sabse aham baat kahani Thriller prefix pe hai..
mahaz 4-5 update mein cover karne gaye to bahot si jaruri ankahi baatein atit mein hi dafan hoke reh jaani hai jise jaanna bahot jaruri hai aage ki vartmaan kahani ke liye ...

meri nazar mein hero aur uski family ke atit ke bare mein jis hisap likh rahe hai writer sahab wo kaafi kaabile tareef , arthpurna aur behad jaruri hai ....
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Yahi toh main un bhaisahab ko samjha rha tha..... Shukriya Naina jiii

 

[Bilal jan]

Congratulations for pages complete

 

[Rajesh]

UPDATE - 40
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LOCATION - DELHI PLACE
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PLACE - ST. MARY. MEDICAL COLLEGE / HOSTEL
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Malti - rajneesh please mujhe maaf mar do.......



Rajneesh - chal dafa ho......



aur itna kehke woh wahan se bahar nikal gaya.......



idhar hostel ke ek room main rajesh bed pe leta hua tha aur kisi ke khayalon main gum tha..... kis ke khayalon main rajesh dooba hua iske lie chalte hai 1 week peeeche......



1 august ka woh din tha..... saare students class main baithe hue the tabhi saamne se ek ladki claas main enter hui...... ladke toh ladke the ladkiyaan bhi usi ki aur dekhne lagi thi......black salwar suit main woh hema malini maafik lag rhi thi.....andar aate hi use teacher ne saamne rok liya......



Teacher - kaun hain aap.... aaj pehla din hai kya college main.....



Ladki - sir mera naam anamika hai.....jiii sir aaj mera pehla din hi hai college main qki kal hi mera admission hua hai.......



Teacher - okkk.... jao baith jao....



phir woh ladki matlab anamika rajesh ke aage wali bench pe baith gayi...... idhar saare ladkon ki nazar ab bhi us bala si khoobsurat ladki par hi thi..... lekin phir rajesh ne apna dhyaan padhai par kendrit kar diya....... phir aise hi poora din guzar gaya.... rajesh ne us ladki par jyada dhyaan nhiii diya......



ek din anamika class main enter hui lekin use baithne ke liye aage koi jagah khali nhi dikhi..... wahan 3rd row main ek bench par 1 hi ladka baitha hua tha.... woh wahan ja ke baith gayi...... abhi tak anamika ne kisi se dostii nahi ki thi..... aisa nahi tha ki uske paas koi aaya nahi tha dosti karne......



aaye toh bahut the lekin usne kisi se dosti nhiii ki thi.... usne notice kya ki class ke saare ladke lagbhag uske paas aa chuke hain lekin abhi woh jiske paas baithi thi woh kbhi nhi aaya tha....usne socha yeh meri type ka padhne wala banda lagta hai isse dosti kar leti hun.....usne uski taraf haath badhate hue.....



Anamika - hiii.... i am anamika....



Rajesh - Namaste.... main rajesh....



ohhh sanskaar toh koot koot ke bhare hain is ladke main......



Anamika - frnds???



rajesh kuch sochte hue waise chahta toh woh bhi tha anamika se dosti karna qki use woh pehli nazar main bha gayi thi......



Rajesh - ok.....



yahi sab hostel ke room main pada hua soch raha tha rajesh ki aaage kaise propose kiya jaye anamika....... aise hi 1 mahina beet gaya.... dono ekdoosre ke bahut kareeb aa gaye the....... dono jyadatar time ek saath bitate the......kahin na kahin anamika ke dil main bhi rajesh ke lie pyaar tha.....



lekin woh sochti thi kya pata rajesh mujhse pyaar na karta ho ek din dono garden main baithe hue baaat kar rhe the....



Rajesh - anamika.... main tumse bahut dino se ek baat kehna chahta hun.... lekin darta hun ki kahin tumhe meri baat buri na lag jaaye aur tum gussa ho ke dosti bhi tod do.....



Anamika - main dosti kbhi nhi todungi tum bolo..... waise mujhe bhi tumse kuch kehna tha.....



Rajesh - theek hai tumhi pehle bolo....



Anamika - pehle tum....



Rajesh - maine jab tunhe pehli baar dekha tha tabse hi tum mujhe bahut achi lagti thi...... lekin dheere dheere tumse kab pyaar ho gaya pata hi nhiiii chala......ab toh har waqt bsss tumhare hi khayalon main khoya rehta hun...... i love you Anamika.....



Anamika - main kabse yeh sunna chahti thi..... main bhi tumse yahi kehna chahti thi lekin main bhi darti thi...... i love you rajesh......



phir thori baatcheet aur hoti hai..... phir dono apne apne hostel chale jaaate hain..... rajesh jaise hi room main pahunchta hai..... tabhi koi rooom ka darwaza khatkhatane lagta hai...... rajesh turant darwaza khol deta hai.....saamne uske neeeche ke floor ka ek ladka khada hota hai....



Rajesh - kya hai bhai.....



Ladka - bhai aapke ghar se phone aaya hai.... warden sir ne aapko niche bulaya hai......



Rajesh - acha... chalo...



phir rajesh dodte hue warden ke room main pahunchta hai aur saamne table pe jake phone utha leta hai......



rajesh - hello..... maa



upasna - hnnn beta .... kaise ho



Rajesh - main thik hun maa aap kaisi ho aur ghar main sab kaise hain.....



Upasna - main bhi thik hun.... aur ghar main bhi sab thik hai....



Rajesh - acha....



Upasna - padhai kaisi chal rhi hai teri.....



Rajesh - theek chal rhi hai..... agle mahine se exam hain.....



Upasna - acha sun 15 September ko tere bhai ki shadi hai..... toh tu kab aa rha hai......



Rajesh - aa jaunga maaa.... 14 tak....



Upasna - aaj toh 10 hai hi.... ab kitne din bache hain..... ek kaam kar kal hi aaja tu main gaadi bhej dungi.....



Rajesh - theek hai maaa. jaisa tum theek samjho.....



Upasna - kal 2 baje tak taiyaar rehna.....



Rajesh - theek hai.....



phir udhar se phone cut jaata hai...... dusre din woh class attend karke chutti ke baad anamika ke saath garden main baith jaata hai.....



Anamika - kya hua kuch gumsum lag rhe ho.....



Rajesh - hnnnn aaj main ghar ja rha hun.....



Anamika - itni achanak.... ghar main sab thik toh hai.....



Rajesh - hnnn ghar main sab theek hai....



Anamika - toh phir itni achanak q jaane ka plan ban gaya.....



Rajesh - woh kal yahan se jaane ke baad maa ka phone aaya tha aur keh rhi thi ki bhai ki shadi hai 4din baad.... islie kal hi ghar aa jao.... toh isiliye main ja rha hun....



Anamika - ohhh acha..... jao maje karo shadi main.....



Rajesh - hmmmm.....



Anamika - hmmm ke bachche kisi aur ko na pasand kar lena wahan warna taangein tod dungi......



Rajesh - nhiii yrrr aisa kbhi nahi hoga koi aur nahi pasand ayegi tumhare siwa.....



Rajesh ne time dekha toh 2 baj rhe the.....



Rajesh - ab mujhe chalna chahiye..... gaadi aane wali hogi.....



Anamika - ok jao.....



Rajesh - byeeee....



Anamika - byeee....



rajesh wahan se hostel aaya aur apna bag uthake bahar aake khada ho gaya
....... thori der main ghadi aa gayi....




(Note - anamika koi aur nahi rajesh ki dusri patni aur venky ki maa hain....jab dono pehle hi mil gaye the toh q anamika dusri patni bani rajesh ki jaane ke liye padhte rahiye flashback)




Aaj ke liye itna hi.....
continued.....

Superb update bro

 

[Villain1825]

Congratulations for pages complete

Superb update bro

Thnkq....
keep supporting....

 

[Nevil singh]

UPDATE - 45
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LOCATION - JHANSI
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PLACE - VIRENDRA's HOUSE
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Saamne se - woh jo wakeel hier kiya tha aapne banglore wala.... wahin ke mere ek bande ne bataya hai ki usko kisi ne dara dhamka ke case band karne ko kaha hai.....



Main - uski tention tum mat lo main woh matter sambhaal lunga.... tum yeh pata kro ki chaanbeen karne wale kaun log the.....



Saamne se - thik hai....



phir maine phone cut kar dia.....



Main - ab bahut raat ho gayi.... baaaki ki story kal sunana vandana jiii.....



Vandana - thik hai.....



Dusre din main aur michael phir pahunch gaye vandna ke ghar.... vandana ne phir aage ki story batani shuru ki........



FLASHBACK CONTINUE



aise hi dheere dheere time guzarta gaya aur priya aaye din rajesh se milne aa jati thi shuru shuru main toh anamika ne koi aitraaz nahi kya lekin jab yeh silsila badhta chala gaya toh woh bhi sochne par mazboor ho gayi..... ki ho na ho inka koi chakkar hai..... aur yeh baaat ek din confirm ho hi gayi.......



Us din rajesh exam deke hostel jaldi nikal gaya tha..... abhi anamika apni frnds ke saath campus main khadi thi tabhi priya wahan aa gayi.....



Priya - hiiii anamika kaisi ho.....



Anamika - main thik hun tum kaisi ho.....



Priya - main nhi thik hun.....



Anamika - q kya hua.....



Priya - jab tak tum rajesh ki life se chali nahi jaogi.... tabtak main kaise theek ho sakti hun.....



Anamika - yeh kya bakwaas kar rhi ho......Rajesh mujhse pyaar karta hai.... aur ham dono study complete karke.......shadi kar lenge.....



Priya - main kya bakwaas kar rhi hun.....bakwaas toh tum kar rhi ho pyaar shadi......



Anamika - sach main ham dono ek dusre se pyaar karte hain....tumhe maanna ho maano ya na mano.....



Priya - bsss yahi toh museebat hai ki woh tumse pyaar karta hai.... asal main baat yeh hai ki....



Anamika - kya baat hai.....



Priya - meri aur rajesh ki shadi jab uske bhai ki shadi thi tabhi pakki ho gayi hamari mangni bhi ho chuki hai...... main bahut khus thi ki uski study complete hote hai hamari shadi ho jayegi..... isiliye jab main yahan aayi toh mujhe kisi se pata chala ki woh tumse pyaar karta hai...... ab tumhi batao main kya karun..... main tumhare aage haaath jodti hun..... please uski zindagi se chali jao..... main uske bina mar jaungi.....



Anamika - lekin usne mujhe kabhi nahi bataya..... tmhare baare main.....



Priya - kaise batata woh tumse pyaar karta tha.... agar tumhe yakeen nahi ho rha toh yeh dekho mangni ki ring..... aisi hi ring rajesh bhi pehenta hai....woh ring bhi mangni ki hai......



(asal main yeh plan bahut dino se priya ke dimaag main tha isikiye usne rajesh ke jaisi ring kharid li thi)



Anamika - hnnn keh to tum sahi rhi ho..... aisi hi ring pehenta hai woh..... main ek baar rajesh se milke baat karna chahti hun......



Priya - aisa karogiiii..... toh woh mujhe apne paas kabhi bhatakne bhi nahi dega.... plzzz tum use bina bataye yahan se chali jao.... agar woh mujhe nahi mila toh main mar jaungi..... meri zindagi aur mautcab tumhare hathon main hai......



Phir anamika aage kuch bhi bole bina wahan se chali gayiiiii..... priya ka toh samjho kaam ho gaya tha.... woh wahan se apne Ghar ko chal di.......



Anamika hostel jaate hue soch rhi thi ki priya ki baat sach toh lagti hai use uski zindagi se chale jaana chahiye...... usne hostel aake apna saara samaan pack kiya q ki aaj aakhiri exam tha thori der main uske papa waise bhi lene aane wale the..... phir usne ek letter likha aur ek ladki ko bola ki agar rajesh aaye toh use de dena......



kuch der baad anamika ke papa aaye aur woh unke saath chali gayi...... idhar rajesh ko thora fever tha islie woh college se jaldi aa gaya tha.....aur hostel aake so gaya tha sham ko woh so ke utha toh thora acha feel kar rha tha..... woh fresh hua phir chal dia.... Anamika se milne.....



Hostel ke bahar pahuncha toh wahan woh ladki khadi thi JisE anamika ne letter diya tha.... usne jaise hi rajesh ko dekha woh uski tarah chal di aur letter uski aur badha diya......



Rajesh - yeh kya hai.....



Ladki - anamika ne aapko dene ko kaha tha.....



Rajesh - woh q nahi aayi yahan.....



Ladki - woh yahan ho tab aaye na....



Rajesh - q kahan gayi.....



Ladki - uske papa bulane aaye the woh unke saath chali gayi ghar....



Rajesh - kya......



Ladki - hnnnn..... jiiiii....



Rajesh - kamaal hai usne mujhe bataya tak nahi ki aaaj chali jayegi woh...... (mnnn main) ho sakta hai koi urgent kaam aa gaya ho islie bina bataye chali gayi..... usne woh letter apni pocket main rakha aur chal diya wapas hostel ki taraf......



wahin idhar gaon main Upasna aur malti taiyaar thi kahin jaane ke lie.....



Upasna - bahu rajneesh se kaho ki ham log ko chor aaye padhan ji ke ghar tak....



Malti - acha abhi kehti hun.....



phir woh chal di apne room ki taraf jahan rajneesh leta hua tha.....



Malti - aye jiii....



Rajneesh - hnnn kya hua....



Malti - woh maa ji keh rhi ki ham logon ko padhan jiii ke yahan chor aaiye....



Rajneesh - wahan kya karne ja rhi ho.....



Malti - woh rajesh ke lie ladki dekhne ja rhe hain.....



Rajneesh - saala uski hi kismat achi hai..... chalo aata hun......



phir woh bahar aaya aur un dono ke pradhan ke ghar tak chor aaya.....



pradhan ka ghar kaafi bada bana hua tha ghar kya haveli kaho use...... woh dono haal main aayi saamne hi Abhijeet pradhan baithe hue the saath main unki dharam patni sudha bhi thi.... jaise hi unhone Upasna ko aata dekha..... uthke unka swagat karne lage......



Phir sab wahan kursiyon par baith gaye..... phir naukraani ne naasta laga diya.... sab log naasta karne lage.....



Malti - abhijeet ji ab beti ko bulwa lijiye.....



Abhijeet - jiiii..... sudha jao Sandhya ko le aao.....



phir sudha wahan se chali gayi..... thori hi der baad ek ladki haathon main tray liye aati hun dikhayi di..... pariyon jaisi Khubsurat thi woh.....Upasna use dekhte hi apni bahu maan chuki thi.....



Upasna - mujhe aapki ladki bahut pasand hai..... aapko koi aapatti toh nhiii is rishte se.....



Abhijeet - nhiii bhabhi jii....mujhe koi aapatti nahi hai.....



Upasna - toh kisi din aake mere bete ko bhi dekh lijiye..... agar pasand aaye toh baat aage badhayenge phir.....



Abhijeet - mujhe aapka ladka pasand hai..... maine use rajneesh ki shadi main dekha tha.... mujhe bahut gudwaan aur acha laga tha..... iskie meri taraf se bhi rishta pakka hai.....



Upasna - theek hai phir mera beta 2 din main aa jayega.... toh phir mangniyki tareek rakh lenge.....



Abhijeet - jaisa aap uchit samjhen......



Upasna - bsss ek vinti hai aapse....



Abhijeet - jii kahiye.....



Upasna - dekhiye rajesh ke babuji ki tabiyat theek nahi rehti iskie woh chahte hain ki unke jeete ji rajesh ki bhi shadi ho jaye.... toh main yeh keh thi ki ho sake tho shadi 1 mahine ke andar hi kar dena......



Abhijeet - aao nischint rahiye.... jaisa aap kehengi waisa hi hoga.... ab aap sandhya se baat karo.... mujhe kuch kaam hai seher main islie mujhe nikalna parega...



Upasna - theek hai aao jaiye...... warna aapko late ho jaega.....



idhar abhijeet nikal gaya seher ke lie udhar hostel main rajesh besudh pada hua apne bed par aankhon se aansoo jaari aur uske sir ke aage ek letter pada hua tha jisme likha tha.....



Aaj ke lie itna hi....
continue.....

Bemishaal update bhai

 

[Nevil singh]

UPDATE - 46
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LOCATION - DELHI
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PLACE - ST.MARY MEDICAL COLLEGE (HOSTEL)
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Abhijeet - aao nischint rahiye.... jaisa aap kehengi waisa hi hoga.... ab aap sandhya se baat karo.... mujhe kuch kaam hai seher main islie mujhe nikalna parega...



Upasna - theek hai aao jaiye...... warna aapko late ho jaega.....



idhar abhijeet nikal gaya seher ke lie udhar hostel main rajesh besudh pada hua apne bed par aankhon se aansoo jaari aur uske sir ke aage ek letter pada hua tha jisme likha tha.....


Rajesh.....





Kahan se shuruaat karun kuch samajh main nahi aa rha..... qki meri shuruaat hi galat thi..... shuruaat hi kya main hi galat thi....... jo tumse pyaar kar baithi..... kitni baaar tumse kehna chaha ki hamari shadi nahi ho sakti lekin darti thi ki kahin yeh baat sunke hamari dosti hi na toot jaye...





asal main jab main 2 saaal pehle ghar gayi thi toh mere papa ne meri shadi tay kar di thi kisi ke saath..... main tumse shadi karke apne pitaji ki beizzati nahi kara sakti kisi ke saamne.....






Ek aas thi tumhare saath zindagi bitane ki lekin yeh mumkin nhiiii raha..... main tumhari shukrguzaar hu ki tumne mujhe bepanaaah mohabbat ki lekin kismat main judaayi hi likhi thi toh kya kar sakte hain......






hosake toh mujhe bhoool jaana main bhi koshish karungi tumhe bhulane..... maana ki yeh mumkin toh nhi mujhe bhool paaana..... lekin namumkin bhi nahi...... ho sake toh jldi se ek achi ldki dekh ke shadi kar lena.....

Anamika......​

rajesh kuch der tak aise hi leta raha..... phir achanak bol pada.......



Tute dil ko rone ki jagah nhi mili,
Iske dard ki kahi koi dawa nhi mili,
Sab ko mili thi apni sachi mohabbat To
kyo meri hi mohabbat ki mujhe wafa nhi mili.



Phir woh utha aur beman se apna samaan pack karne laga..... samaan pack karne ke saath saath dard bhari aawaz main kuch bolta bhi ja rha tha......



Koi dikha kar roye, koi chupa kar roye......
hame rulane wale hame rulakar roye......
Marne ka maza toh tabhi hai yaaron......
Jab kaatil bhi janaaze par aake roye.......



woh samaan pack karke niche warden ke rooom main aaya..... aur apne ghar phone lagane laga..... idhar upasna bhi pradhan ke ghar se laut aayi thi..... aur rishta pakka hone ki baat sabhi ko bata rhi thi..... usne socha ki chalo rajesh se bhi phone karke pooch leti hun ki kab ayega..... tabhi phone ki ghanti bajne lagi..... usi ne jaake phone utha liya......



Upasna - kaun.....



saamne se - main bol rha hun maaa.... rajesh



Upasna - areee beta tum ho..... main bhi tumhe phone karne ja rhi thi abhi......



Rajesh - acha maa.... aap kaisi ho aur baba...



Upasna - main thik hun aur baba bhi thik hain..... tu kaisa hai aur kab aa rha hai....



Rajesh - main thik hun maaa..... maine isiliye phone kiya tha ki kal kisi ko bhej dena gaadi leke......



Upasna - acha beta..... waise tere lie ek khuskhabri hai.....



Rajesh - kya maaa....



Upasna - jab tu yahan ayega tabhi bataungiiiii.....



Rajesh - theek hai maa.... acha main phone rakhta hun kal 10 baje tak kisi ko bhej dena....



Upasna - theeek hai....



Phir rajesh phone rakh ke hostel ke bahar nikal jaaata hai.....idhar Upasna us room se nikal ke bahar aati hai..... aur driver ko bulwa bhejti hai.... thori der main driver aa jata hai....



Upasna - suno raju.....



Raju - jiiii maalkin..



Upasna - kal tumhe 10 baje hostel pahunch jaana hai rajesh ke....



Raju - jiii main pahunch jaunga aao nischint rahiye.....



idhar priya ko jaise hi khabar lagti hai ki anamika hostel se chali gayi hai aur rajesh ki life se hmesha hmesha ke lie..... (anamika ki room mate priya ki freind hai toh anamika ne use bata diya tha ki woh rajesh se brkup kar rhi hai ajr ek letter rajesh ko dene ke lie kehkar chali gayi thi wahan se yeh baat usne priya ko foran bata di aur letter bhi parhke suna diya tha.... jahan letter main apna naam na paake woh bahut khush thi.....) uske lie aage ki raah ab bahut aasan lagne lagi thi...... usne foran apni malti didi ko phone laga diya......



phone ki ghanti bajne lagi abhi sab log khana kha rhe the.....



Upasna - ab kiska phone aa gya..... beti ja ke dekh kiska phone hai.....



Malti - jiii maaa



Malti ne jaake phone pick kiya....



Malti - hello kaun....



Saamne se - main bol rhi didi priya.....



Malti - kaisi ho priya......



Priya - main thik hun..... aap kaisi ho.....



Malti - main bhi thik hun...



Priya - aap toh jaise mujhe bhul hi gayi hain phone hi nahi karti kabhi....



Malti - aree aaj kal bahut busy thi....



Priya - q kya dukaan par aap hi baithne lagi (hanste hue)...



Malti - nhiiii pagal....



Priya - toh....



Malti - woh daily ladki dekhne ja rhi thi.... ab aaj jaake rishta pakka hua hai....



Priya - kiska rishta pakka ho gayaa.....



Malti - ab mera ek hi toh dewar hai rajesh.... usi ka aur kiska.....



itna sunte hi priya ne call cut kardi......


Malti - ajeeb ladki hai poori baat sune bina hi call cut kar diya.....



malti wahan se nikal ke haal main wapas aa gayi.....



Upasna - kiska phone tha....



Malti - priya ka tha.....



Upasna - acha... aao khana khao....



Malti - jiiii



priya jo thori der pehle bahut hans rhi ab uski hansi nadarad ho chuki hai..... usne kya kya nahi kiya anamika ko hatane ke lie apne raaste se lekin yahan toh kisi aur ne uski jagah leli....




Aaj ke lie itna hi.....
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[Nevil singh]

Ish sunehri kahani ka partham shatak mubarak ho bhai