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Thriller villain

story ki main heroine kaun ho sakti hai??.

  • rashmika

  • mohini

  • kajal

  • nisha

  • some one else


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A hero can kill someone to save the world...

but a villain can destroy the world to save one...


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UPDATE 2



LOCATION - MUMBAI
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PLACE - VENKY's RESIDENCE
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Venky Ko yahan Aaye 4 saal ho gaye the.....
usne mumbai main hi 12 complete kiya aur ab yahan paas ke hi Sagar University main usne aaj hi Btech main admission liya tha .... Kehne ko toh duniya main uske liye is duniya main koi nahi tha... Woh yahan akela rehta tha....
University se wapas aa ke fresh hua phir hua phir khana banane laga...
khana banake woh apne room main aaaya aur apni almirah se photo album nikal ke dekhne laga....
Aksar woh jab sad hota tha album nikaal leta tha...
aaaj bhi yahi kiya usne album main pehli tasweer thi ek aurat ki jo dikhne main kafi khoobsurat thi age lagbhag 40 ki hogi... us photo ko dekh ke uske aankhon se aansun nikal aaye aur woh rote hue kehne laga.....
MAA.....

Ji haaan yeh thi uski maaa anamika..

aur saath main thi uski behen komal aur papa rajesh.....
photo dekhte dekhte woh so gaya aur chala gaya bachpan ki yaadon main.....

LOCATION - BANGLORE
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PLACE - RAJESH's RESIDENCE
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venky uth ja beta teri behen taiyaar baithi hai school jaane ke liye... aaj summer vacation ke baaad school open ho rahe hain yddd hain na tumhe ya bhool gaye... maa ke itna jagane ke baad bhi venky nahi utha toh unhone chadar pakad ke kheench liii...

VENKY - Kya maa sone bhi nahi deti ho..
MAA - kitna soyega chal aaja maharani taiyaar hai agar woh upar aa gayi na toh teri khair nahi...
waise teri saari aadatein toh usme hai judwaa jo tehri teri ( ji haan sahi suna aapne ham dono bhai behen judwaa hain) par pata nahi aaj q jaldi uth gayiii..
chal aaja mere raja bete jldiiii....
yeh kehkar maa chali gayi aur venki uthkar taiyaaar hone laga.... phir fresh hoke woh niche aaya hi tha ki komal ne shuru ki apni badhaas nikalna shuru...

KOMAL - Aa gaye bhai aaap itna late karaoge toh main kisi din kahin chali jaungi tumse door phir rehna akele....
VENKY - jldi se uske paas aaaya aur gale laga ke bolne laga ab aisi baat dobara mat kehna... tu meri behen hi nahi meri jaaaan hai.. agar tu chali gayi toh main kaise jiyunga....
in dono bhai behen ka pyaar dekhke maa ki aankhon main aansu aur woh kehne lagi... ki mere ghar ko kisi ki nazar na lage....
lekinnnn.
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use bhi Kahaan pata tha ki jiski nazar lagni thi uski toh lag chuki hai is ghar ko....
tring... tring.. tring..

LOCATION - MUMBAI
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PALCE - VENKY's RESIDENCE
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phone ki ghanti ki wajah se venky jag gaya time dekha toh 8 baj rahe the....
8 missed call padi hui thi mohini ki (mohini school classmate and best freind of venky)...
missed call dekh ke venky sochne laga ki call krunga ab toh yeh sunayegi bahut islie usne mobile side main rakha aur fresh hone chala gaya.....
wapas aake pehle dnr kiya phir balcony main jaake cigrette phunkne laga...
cigrette abhi khatm bhi nahi hui thi ki phirse call aane laga...
usne call pick hi kiya ki saamne se.....
MOHINI - kutte kahan mar gaya tha call q nahi attend kar raha tha.. ek toh akele akele admission kara liya aur bataya bhi nahi... main jab wahan admission lene pahunchi tujhe gate pe dekha tha wapas aate hue... tujhe pukara maine lekin tu ruka bhi nahiiiii...
VENKY - are maine suna nahi tha... aur tujhe bataya toh tha kal ki main admission lene jaunga kal tu bol sakti thi ki mujhe bhi jaaana hai...
MOHINI - Chal koi niii kal chalega na college...
VENKY - off course pagal chalunga... thik hai kal milte subah college mainn...
MOHINI - ok...
VENKY - Bye
MOHINI - bye



ACHE LOGON KO KAUN YAAD RAKHTA HAI
ISILIYE MAIN BURA HUN BAHUT BURA...


ITS VILLAIN
Nice update
 

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PLACE - SAGAR UNIVERSITY
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sagar university bahut badi University thi aaage kaafi bada maidaaan tha aur side main students ke liye parking ki jagah thi....

venky ne college ke main gate se enter kiya aur parking main apni bike park ki...
aur academic block ki taraf chalne laga....

woh abhi garden main hi tha ki saaamne use bheed dikhi.....
venky udhar hi jaaane laga....
wahan pahunch ke dekha toh mohini ro rahi thi....
maine usse poocha kya hua....

MOHINI - main yahan aaayi aur chair par baith gayi tabhi in logon ne gande comments karne shuru kr diye aur mujhe apne paas bulaya...

10 mins ago....

SENIOR 1 - new commer???

MOHINI - yes..

SENIOR 2 - which branch???

MOHINI - Btech

SENIOR 1- name kya hai???

MOHINI - Mohini

SENIOR 3 - thori moh hame bhi dedo....

MOHINI - WHAT.??

SENIOR 1- kuch nahi... chalo ab dance kr ke dikhao

MOHINI - Mujhe dance nahi aata

SENIOR 1-dance nahi aata toh phir kiss krni padegi aman (SENIOR 2) ko

MOHINI - plzzz mujhe jane dijiyeee🙏

mohini ki ankhon se aansu nikalne lage the yeh wahi time tha jab venky ki entry hui thi wahan pe....

venky yeh sunke senior 1 ke paas gaya aur ek jabardast punch diya uske muh par...
thabbbbb.....

punch itna jordar tha ki woh senior zameen par gir bada aur uske muh aur naaak se khooon aa gaya tha....

itne main piche principle ki gaadi aa gayi aur sabhi students jaaane lage...

SENIOR 2 (AMAN) - - dekh lenge tujhe sham ko mil bahar tu.....

VENKY - Chal ja na be apna kaaam kar....

phir venky mohini ke paaas aata hai aur usse kehta hai ____

VENKY - pagal kal se mere saath aaana...

MOHINI - ok mere fighter......

phir woh dono class main aate hai aur first bench par baith jaate hainn....

pehla class applied maths ka tha teacher aaye aur sabka introduction lene laga...
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sir my name is______

jaise hi yeh aawaaz suni woh piche mudkar use dekhne laga bahut khoobsurat thi woh ladki Usne black suit pehna hua tha qayamat mat dha rhi thiiii......

woh ladki use kuch kuch jaaani pehchani lagi......


UNKNOWN GIRL - sir my name is rashmika...
and i m from banglore....


Banglore sunte hi usne sochna start kiya kahin yeh meri rashmi toh nhiiii....


nhiii nhiiii woh kaise ho sakti hai qki uski toh aadat thi ldkon ke jaise kapde pehenne kiiii....

aur phir venky brrr brrr use dekh rha tha aur isi tarah se 2 classes aur lagi phir recess ho gaya dono uthke canteen jane lage....

toh woh ldkiiii rashmika ham logon ke paas aaayiiiii......


RASHMIKA - hiii i am...

VENKY - RASHMIKA.... i m venky aur yeh hai mohini....

RASHMIKA - can we frnds...

MOHINI - offcourse...

VENKY - yeah... why not...

_______aur phir teeno canteen main gaye aur ek khaali table par baith gaye.....
venky chala gaya tha order dene....

wapas aake woh bhi baith gaya...

aur phir aapas main study related discussion hone laga aur phir thori der main....
unka order aa gaya aur woh teeno khane lage.....

venky - so spicy yrrrr.... ymmmmy
maza aa gaya yrrrrrr.

RASHMIKA - YEAH.....
ache the samose...

MOHINI - Hmmmmm

phir wahan se nikal kar class main aaaye aur baaaki ki classes attend ki... uske baaad mohini, rashmika aur venky parking ki taraf jaane lage parking main pahuncha hi tha gate ke paas use bheed dikhi aur woh mohini ke paas aaya aur kehne laga.........


VENKY - Ek kaaam kar aaj tu rashmika ke saaath ghar chali ja mujhe thora kaaam hai...

MOHINI - hmmmm thik hai...

VENKY - rashmika koi dikkat toh nhi hogiiiii...

RASHMIKA - nhi yrrr dikkat kaisi main chor dungi mohini darling ko....

VENKY - mujhe tere irade thik nahi lag rhe rape wape mat kar dena mohini ka....

RASHMIKA - hahhhhhahahhahahh......

MOHINI - bhk pagal....

RASHMIKA - chalo mohini chalte hain...
bye venky

MOHINI - BYE

VENKY - BYE


__________________In logon ke jaate hi venky ne bike start ki aur bahar aane laga


aur bahar dekha usne kamse kam 30 - 40 ladke khade with their hathiyaar....
venki bike bahar lekar aaya aur full speed main bhaga di..

woh seniors bhi apni bikes par baithe aur picha karne lage.....

AMAN - (senior 2) kahan bhaaag raha hai be hijde

vivek (senior 3) - itne ladkon ko dekh kar fat gayiii....

ruk na be madarchod, ek baap ki aulad hai toh ruk....

saala yeh hai hi nahi ek baab ki aulaaad iski maa ne kaafi jayad kele khaye hain lagta hai....


venky yeh sab sunke unsuna kar raha tha lekin uska gussa badhta ja raha tha uski aankh gusse ki wajah se laal hoti ja rhi thiiii......

aur aage jaake ek sunsaan ilake main ek maidaan main gaadi khadi kar di aur intezaaar krne laga seniors ka.....
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AMAN - Q be darr gaya tha kya jo bhaag raha tha.....

VIVEK - chal tujhe ek moka diya maafi maang le pair pakad ke maaf kr denge tujhe...

VENKY - main bhi tumhe ek moka deta hun bhaag jao warna uthne ke kaabil nahi chorunga log aake uthakar le jayenge....

ya ho sakta hai kisii ko milo hi na..... 😠😠

AMAN - Yeh sunke aman aur vivek ke saaath sab hansne lage....

aman ne apne ek bande ko ishare se mujhe maarne ko kaha us bande ne hockey hawa main uthayi aur mujhe maarne hi wala tha ki ek punch pada uske chest pr aur dher.......

woh banda uske baad na hila na dhula lekin yeh dekh kar abki brrrr 10 bande ek saaath meri taraf badhe......

do logon ne mujhpe ek saath attack ek ne hockey mere haath par maarni chahi main niche baith bach gaya aur phir kood ke dusre bande ki gardan padi aur ghuma diiii......
krrrrrr. rrrrrr........ dead.....

ab mere andar gussa badhta ja rha tha.... jisne mere upar hockey se waar kiya tha uski hocket pakad ke kheeenchiii aur usi ke sir le de maaari....

dhabbbb... aaaahhhhh....

uska sir fat gaya tha....

bache hue 8 ek saaath war karne lage lekin main bachaaw kar rha tha kisi tarah unse.... phir unme se ek thora paas aaaya maine di flying kick uski chest pe aur dusre ko punch maaara muh pe.... teesre ko maari hockey stick uske haaath mainnn.... aur phir uska haaath pakad ke dislocate kar diya phir woh chillane laga... gaaand phaaad dard ho raha tha uski chillahat aur dard ka anumaaan laga kar kar baaaki sab toh bhaaag gaye the....

lekin 2 log bache the....


aman aur vivek........ kaha tha na bhaaag jao warna bhaaagne ka mauka nahi dunga.......

AMAN - Abe ham q bhaagenge.... bhagega toh tu abhi 5 ko maaar kar khud ko don samajhne laga hai.....
piche dekh abhi bahut khade hain....

VENKY - HAHAHAHAHHA🤣😁😂.......

VIVEK - hans q raha hai pagal ho gaya hai kya......

VENKY - Abe apne piche mud ke dekh kaun hai mujhe toh koi nahi dikh raha....

jaise hi dono ne piche mudke dekha.... wahan koi nahi tha yeh dekhke unki ab fatne lagi.....
qki jis tarah venky maaar raha tha unhe ab bachna mushqil lagne laga tha....

woh jaise hi piche dekh ke mude saamne ki taraf....

venky uske muh ke paaas tha aur usne diya ek punch unki naaak pe jisse khoon behnelaga......

aur phir venky ne vivek aur aman ke upar hockey stick se maarna shuru kr diya....

dhabbbbbb..... dhabbbb..... fattttttt....fattttt......dhabbbbbbbb.....dhaabbbbbb...

aaaaahhh......aaaahhhhhhhhh........aaaaaahhhhh...........

maaaf kr do bhai gltiiiiiiii ho gayiiiiiii......
ab aisa dobara nahi krenge...... plzzzz bhai...... woh dono mere pair padne lage.....

VENKY - jinda rahoge tab gltiiii ka sochoge na....... main jinda hi nahi chorunga....
Tum log student toh ho nahi.... sagar university ke maine pata kiya aaaj lunch main.....
daily wahan aate ho ladkiyon ko cherna tmhari aadat haiiiiii.....
students ko drugs supply krte ho..... aur kya naaam hai tmhare us baaap ka (drugs
supplier)......

hnnnnn ydddd aaaya ROCKY..... tum logon ko bhi maaarunga aur use bhi maaarunga.....

dekh lena lekin tum log dekhoge kaise itna bol ke maine un done ki gardan ghuma di aur..... unko unki gaaadi main bharke niche khaayi ki taraf ludka diya..... aur unki gaaadi niche jaise hi zameen se takrati hai..... boooooommm...
Amazing update
 

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Nice update
Thnkq.....
keep supporting..
 

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Waiting villan bhai for next update
Bhai 1 dec ko update ayega
 

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LOCATION - MUMBAI
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PLACE - ROCKY's ADDA
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rocky bahut gusse main tha jabse usne suna tha ki uske bandon ko kisi ne maaar diya hai......

ROCKY - kaun tha be woh???
tum log kuch bolte q nahi ho.....

BANDA 1 - Bhai wo bahut dangerous hai.... bahut kharab maaarta hai....

ROCKY - Meri gang main ho ke tu usse darta hai.... namard hai re tu.....

phir rocky ne apni pistol nikali aur usko thok diya....
saala uski tareef karta tha behnchod.......chalo re batao uske baare main.....

BANDA 2 - bhai woh ladka sagar university main padhta hai.... qki aman ne hame wahi bulaya thaa. aur wahin se uska picha kiya tha ham logon ne.....

ROCKY - theeek hai apni pooori team leja..... aur usko utha ke lao..... yahan kaise bhi karke....

agar nahi la paye toh yahan mat aana qki uske baad ka hasr toh jaante hi ho kya hoga tum logon ka.....

BANDA 3 - Jii bhai utha layenge..... aap befikr rahiye......

phir wahan se woh 50 bande aur hathiyaar leke niakalne lagte hainnn......

ROCKY - ruko ruko be tum log..... apna woh inspector ka kya naaam hai.....

BANDA 2 - Rajesh.....

ROCKY - hnnn usko phone laga ke de zara mere ko.....

woh phone lagata hai jaise hi rajesh call pick karta woh banda mobile rocky ko de deta hai......

ROCKY - hello..... isspector sahab..... ek kaaam tha aapse.....

RAJESH - hnnn boliye rocky bhai.....

ROCKY - ek bande ko utana hai.... aap jaoge toh jyada locha nahiii hoga.... mere bande jayenge..... toh marpeeet toh pakkka hogi.....

isliye aap jao use arrest karna phir mere bandon ke hawale kar dena use aaage ja ke.....

RAJESH - thik hai kaaam ho jaega.... lekin apne ek bande ko mere saath bhej dena use pehchanne ke liye....

ROCKY - thik hai main kisi ko bhej dunga....

RAJESH - ok main team taiyaar karta hun.....

ROCKY - apne wafadaar bando ko le jaana inspector...aur hnnn tmhara cut time pe mil jayega......

RAJESH - OK bhai......

phir rocky ek bande se kehta hai ki tu inspector ke paas chale jaaana aur tum 5 log ek gaaadi leke thora aage rehna ...inspector use tmhare hawale kar dega.... koi gadbad nahi honi chahiyeee......

aur baaaki sab log niklo apne apne kaaam par aaaj kal bahut kam marketing ho rhi hai drugs ki.....ise badhao jaake......

phir sab wahan se nikalne lagte hain......
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venky subah 7 baje so ke uthta hai..... phir kajal ko jagane lagata hai......

VENKY - Uth na kajal kitna soyegiiiii....

KAJAL - yrrrr venky q preshan kar raha hai..... tu ja na college mujhe kaunsa college jaaana hai...tu ja taiyaar ho aur mujhe sone de.... waise bhi meri raaat ko flight hai dubai ke liye.....
so plzzz ab tu jaa aur mujhe sone de......

VENKY - OK....
chal tu so..... main chala fresh hone.....

phir venky fresh hota hai aur kapde pehen ke paidal hi university chal deta.... aaj uska mnnn bike se jaane ka j nahi tha..... islie taxi se nikal liya University....
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University pahunch ke venky idhar udhar dekhta hai phir left main use mohini aur rashmika dikhti hain.... udhar hi chal deta hai venky.....

VENKY - Hiii mohini, hiii rashmika....

MOHINI - HIII VENKY...

RASHMIKA - HIII VENKY....

Kaise ho....
aaj late aaye thora....

VENKY - Hnnn woh aaj main taxi se aaya hun na....

MOHINI RASHMIKA - q......

VENKY - mnnn kar raha tha islie.....

MOHINI - ohhh acha.... chalo classs chalte hainnn......

VENKY RASHMIKA - hmmmmm chalo..

IN CLASS.....

Class main pahunchkar yeh teeeno piche baith jaate hai qki aage sab full thi.....

MOHINI - Venky teri wajah se piche baithna pad raha hai......

VENKY - koi niii kal se aage baith jaana....

phir class main chemistry teacher ki entry hoti hai .....

VENKY- (mnnn main) ufff kya gazab teacher hai.... dil aa gaya hai re....

TEACHER - toh bacho iss semester ke assignments note kr lo... aur 7 8 assignment de dale ek saaath.....

VENKY - lagta hai madam maar ke hi dam lengi....itte saare assignment koi deta hai kyaa....

RASHMIKA - ruko zara sabr kro.......
abhi sabhi denge assignment itne hiii...

MOHINI - 😂😂

VENKY - yrrr kitna zulm kar rhe hain ham logon pe......

phir jo bhi teacher aata gaya aur assignment deta chala gaya.....

RECESS TIME.....
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Yeh log canteeen main ja ke baith gaye... aur order karke wait karne lage.....
phir unka order aa gaya aur woh khake jaane lage.... door par pahunche hi the ki....

tabhi.....

UNKNOWN GIRL - hey can i talk to you???

VENKY - YEAH.....

VENKY - tum log chalo main aata hun class....

yeh sunke woh log class chali gayi.....

VENKY - hnnn toh kahiye kya keh rhi thiii aaap??

UNKNOWN GIRL - i am sanjana....

VENKY - Kya kaam hai mujhse?.

SANJANA - I LOVE YOU.....

VENKY - Sorry..... mujhe gf nahi banana abhiii.... Chaho toh frnd ban sakti ho...

SANJANA - (SAD FACE) okkk.....

yeh kehke sanjana jaane lagi toh.....

VENKY - Udaas q hoti ho sochenge iske baare main....

SANJANA - OK BYEEEE....

VENKY - BYE.....

phir isi tarah classes khatm ho gayiiiiii.....

PLACE - OUTSIDE UNIVERSITY......

inspector rajesh apni jeep main baitha intezaar kar rha tha.....

ROCKY - kab ayega be garmiii main baithe baithe preshan ho gaya hun.....

ROCKY's BANDA - abhi aa hi raha hoga.... woh dekhiye jo saamne se aaa raha hai na black shirt aur blue jeans main wahi hai venky.....

venky udhar se nikal raha tha ki tabhi inspector rajesh uske saamne aaya aur kehne laga....

RAJESH - you are underarrest....

VENKY - lekin kis jurm main....

RAJESH - kal kitno ko maara tha tune 8 logon ko yaad aaya yeh raha gawaaah saaath main hi leke aaya hun....

VENKY - SIR maine kisi ko nahi maara....

RAJESH - thane chal tujhe sab kuch yaad aa jayega....

phir ek constable ne hathkadi lagayi.... aur jeep main daaal diya venky ko....

aur jeep chal di apni manzil par..... phir aaage jeeep ruki ek jagah par aur venky ko shift kar diya rocky ki gaadi main.....

VENKY - sir mujhe kahan le ja rhe ho..

RAJESH - tu special jail ja raha hai....

aur sab hansne lage.....

phir use rocky ke adde par le jaaane lage.... raaste main usne kaha ki mujhe toilet karna hai..... toh uski hathkadi khol di aur woh toilet krke gaadi main aake baith gaya....

woh chahta toh bhaag sakta lekin use dekhna tha ki kahan leke ja rhe hain use.... jab un logon ne dekha ki woh wapas aa gaya hai bhaagne ki koshish nahi ki hai toh phirse hathkadi nahi lagayi aur yahi sabse badi galti thi unki.....


gaadi main 2 bande aage the driver ko mila ke aur 2 venky ke saaath piche baithe hue the.....venky ne chupke se dono ki gun gayab ki...
aur silencer toh laga hi hua tha gun main usne ek ek karke dono ko maut ki neend sula di .....

aage jo baitha use kuch shaq hua ki yeh dono bol q nahi rahe hai jaise hi woh uthke piche dekhne laga.....

venky ne use headshot de diya.... driver kuch karta usse pehle uske sir pe bandoook taan di venky ne.....

aur bola chupchaap jahan ja rha tha wahi chal....

driver ne gaadi ek cement factory ke aage roki...dekh ke lagta tha ki yahan kaaam hota tha kuch din pehle tak....

venky us driver ke saath andar gaya saamne.....

ROCKY aur uski paltan khadi.....

ROCKY - abe akela q aaya hai baaki sab kahan hai...

BANDA - bhai isne sabko thok diya....

ROCKY - Kya sabko thok diya... leke aa ise mere paas....

venky khud hi aage chalne laga jaise hi saamne aaya rocky ne uska chehra dekha....

Rocky ke hosh hi ud gaye maut jo saamne khadi thiiii.... woh bhaag ke apne cabin main gaya aur andar se door lock kar liya... aur apne phone se kisi ko call lagane laga.... call pick hote hi....

ROCKY- Bhai woh.... wohhhh... zinda hai... zinda hai....

SAAMNE SE - kaun zinda hai.....

ROCKY - VILLAIN.......


AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI......
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BOSS - kaun zinda zinda....

ROCKY - bhai villain....

BOSS - kahan hai woh???

ROCKY - mere bandon ke saamne khada hai...

BOSS - maar do use.... paiso se tol dunga tujhe...

ROCKY - Boss woh maardega mujhe bhiiiii....

BOSS - nahi maroge use toh main tmhe maar dunga....

ROCKY - ok bosss... kuch karta hun....

BAHAR HALL MAIN... MM

VENKY - 1, 2, 3, 4,.......10 hi ho bssss..... chalo sab saath main aaao.....

Phir venky ne apna chaku nikala.... aur uspar haath phairne laga.... bahut dino se shikaar nahi kiya hai kisi ka isse...

woh sab aage bhadne lage....
ek banda aage aaya aur usne punch maarne ko try kiya venky ke chest pe venky ne uske haath ko pakda aur dusre haath se chaku uski gardan main ghonp diya......

abki baar 4 bande ek saath aaye pehle ne face pe maara toh venky niche baithe aur dusre wale ko phenk ke maara chaku.... woh uske gardan main ghus gaya phir jump lagake uske paas gaya aur chaku nikala hi tha ki kisi ne uspe goli chalayi.... goli uske haath ke paas se nikal gayiiii....

venky jump lagake ek pillar ki piche chip gaya.... aur dekhne laga unki position sab ke paas revolver thi... un teeno ko chorke jinhe abhi venky maar raha tha....

woh sab saamne hi khade the... usme se ek ne jaise hi dekha ki venky ka chehra dikh raha hai usne fire kr diya lekin woh bhi khali chala gaya...

abki brrr venky ne apni dono revolver nikala aur aim lagake do ko head shot maar diya....

woh ab bhagne lage safe position lene ke liye....itna time bahut tha venky ko unko maarne ke liye....
aur kuch hi der main woh sab zameen par pade the....

yeh wahi time tha jab rocky boss se baaat kar rha tha... call cut hote hi usne jaise hi door khola saamne ka nazara dekhte hi uske rongte khade ho gaye....

door ke side se venky achanak nikalke uske saamne aa gaya....

HELLO ROCKY....

rocky - villain bhai mujhe maaf kar do....

VENKY - maaf kar dun.... tujhe toh pata hai ki main maaf nahi karta kisi ko....


2 saal tune mere saath kaaam kiya itna toh tujhe pata hi hoga.... ki main maaf nahi karta.....

Chal bata tera boss kahan hai tujhe chor dunga... aaj pehli brrr kisi ko main maafi wala option de raha hun...

VENKY - (mnnnn main) agar maine isko boss ka pata bata diya toh boss meri family ko maar dega.... nhiii main yeh hone nahi dunga... main ise boss ka pata nahi bataunga... ise mujhe maarna hoga toh maar lega......

VENKY - Kya sochne laga budbak.....jldi bata mere paas time nahi hai....

ROCKY - bhai mere ko nahi pata hai.....

(aap yeh soch rahe honge ki rocky maarne ka try q nahi kar raha venky ko... qki rocky ko pata agar use usne maara aur venky bach gaya toh woh use tadpa tadpa ke marega islie woh abhi chup hi tha) lekin venky ne use maarne ka mauka hi nahi diya aur rocky ka ' na' sunke use bahut jyada gussa aa raha tha gusse ki wajah se uski aankhein laal ho gayi thi yeh dekh ke rocky aur dar gaya... tabhi

venky ne rocky ka ek haath pakda aur use tod diya.... phir dusra bhi tod diya.....

Rocky dard se chillane laga aur tadapne laga.... use ab dard saha nahi ka raha tha lekin kya karta agar kuch batata toh family chali jaati islie usne apna muh band hi rakha.....

VENKY - ab bhi nahi batayega.....

ROCKY - muuujheee naaaahiiiii paaataaaaaa... (dard ki wajah se uski aawaaz nahi nikal rahi thi sahi se) ....

VENKY nai ab apna chaku uthaya aur dheere dheere uske seene pe cut karne laga....

aaahhhhhhhh......bhaaaaaiiiiiii.....mujheeeeee.... nahiiiiii..... pata..... hai..... sach...... main..... chor..... do..... mujhe......

chor dun tujhe behnchod tujhe chor dun meri poori life barbaad kardi tere aur tere boss ke ek jhuth ne.... aur main tujhe chor dun.....

phir venky ne chaku se uske upar anginat waaar kiye jabtak uski ek saaans chalti rahi tab tak waaar karta raha uske upar....

VENKY - le chor dia.....

Phir venky utha wahan se aur usne apne kapde dekhe toh usme bahut khooon laga tha usne....


rocky ke cabin main dekha toh wahan almari main kapde thode dheele the lekin usne pehen liya......

phir generator room main gaya wahan dekha toh petrol rakha hua tha do karpe utha laya aur poori factory main daalne laga.....

phir sabki bodies ko ek jagah ekhatta kiya....

aur unpar bhi petrol chidakne laga.... phir use yaaad aaya usne rocky ka mobile liya aur use off karke jeans main daaal liya....

phir gate ke paas aaya aur lighter jala ke andar phenk diya aur piche ke gate se nikal gaya....

thori door aaage chalke woh ruka aur piche mudkar dekha toh aag poori factory main fail gayi thi.... uski aankhon main aansu bhi thi.... aur chehre pe khushi bhi thi.....


DOSTI BHI USNE ....
NIBHAAYI THI BAHUT ACHE SE....
LEKIN DUSMANI MAIN BHI......

USNE KOI KASAR NAHI CHORI....


aaj ke liye itna hi...... continued

ViLLAiN
Fantastic 😍 update
 

ANUJ KUMAR

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LOCATION - MUMBAI
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PALCE - SAGAR UNIVERSITY
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NOTE - AB SE STORY MAIN VILLAIN AUR VENKY KI JAGAH PE " MAIN "USE HOGA....
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(PRESENT TIME)

maine bike ko parking main khadi ki... aur apni nigahen idhar udhar dodane laga ki shayad bahar hi rashmika aur mohini mil jayen....

lekin aisa hua nahi.... islie maine socha chalo pehle canteen main kuch pet pooja hikar lete hain.... islie main canteen ki taraf chal diya.... abhi canteen thori hi dooor thi..... ohhh teri yeh period toh sarika mam ka hai.... main yeh kaisa bhool gaya....

jaldi chal venky warna madam ki entry scene nahi dekh payegaa.....

phir main lagbhag dodte hue class main enter hua aur piche wali sit pe baith gaya.....

aur tabhi saamne se prakat hui laakhon dilon ki dhadkan
hmari sarika jain.... ufff kya lag rhi thi..... pink colour ka blouse aur saath main black colour ki saadi aur mathe pe black colour ki hi bindi lagayi hui.....

bole toh doston ek dam kaatilana loook tha... bsss aisa lag raha tha swarg se koi apsara dharti pe utar aayi ho....

(kuch jyada toh nahi ho gayi tareef frnds😂😂😂)....

madam ke enter karte hi sab good morning wish karne lage....

maine bhi good morning wish kiya mam ko aur phir mam ne sabko baithne ko kaha.....
sab apni apni sit par baith gaye... phir mam ne padhana start kiya aur hamne unhe taadna start kiya....

aise hi 20 minutes nikal gaye...

wahin rashmika aur mohini ne piche mudkar kai brrr dekha toh main unhe nahi dikha qki main toh desk pe sar rakh ke mam ko dekh raha tha isiliye unhe main nhi dikha....

Rashmika aur mohini yahi soch rhi thi ki main nahi aaya hun aaj.....

MOHINI - rashmi lagta hai aaj kutta nahi aaya....

RASHMIKA - lagta toh hai ki nahi aaya....

MOHINI - bata deta toh main bhi nahi aati.... bahut boring lag rha hai.....

RASHMIKA- hnmm yrrrr.... yeh class padh len phir garden main baithenge kya bolti ho??? qki aaj half day bhi hai 4 hi class hogi....

MOHINI - hnnn thik hai.....

phir dono padhai pe dhyaaan kendrit karne lagi.... tabhi mam piche mudhi aur unki nazar achanak mere upar gayi.... lekin main unhe hi dekhta raha... yeh dekhkar mam ko gussa bahut aaya....

aur woh kehle lagi.......

SARIKA - hey..... you stand up.....what's your name???

jaise hi mam ne yeh kaha sabhi log piche dekhne lage aur mere uthte hi rashmika aur mohini bhi mujhe dekh gayiiiiii......aur dono khush ho gayi jaise ko khazana mil gaya ho unhe...
MOHINI - aaya toh hai... abhi iski class leti hun....

MAIN - VENKY......

SARIKA - kya kar rhe the tum abhi???

MAIN - kuch nahi mam.... woh note kr rhe the black board pe jo likha hua tha.....

mam mere paas aayi aur dheere se bolne lagi.....

SARIKA - acha black board mere badan pe laga hua hai kya???

MAIN - nhiiii mam.... main aapko q dekhunga......

SARIKA - apni copy dikhao mujhe.....

meri copy mam ne uthayi aur check karne lagi.... aaaj tak maine kuch likha hi nahi tha copy main
...

KAJAL - tumne aaj tak kuch likha hi nahi hai....

VENKY - mam... jispe likhte the woh wali copy ghar pe reh gayi hai....

KAJAL - is period ke baad mujhe tum staff room main milo.... smjhe.....

VENKY - theeek hai mam....

phir maine chupchap likhte hue.... poori class khatm ki phir period khatm hone ki bell baji... aur mam nikalne lagi class se aur main bhi chal diya unke piche - piche staff room ki taraf....

mam ke peeche chalte hue main gaana gaate hue ja rha tha qki woh lag hi rhi thi itni khoobsurat.....



"" Chalun main tere peeche peeche

Baaki saare bandhan tod doon
Jo tere tak na jaaye
Us raste ko chhod doon
Har khwab mera umeed meri
Main tujhe jod doon

Sab rishte naate hans ke tod doon

Bas tujh se dil ka rishta jod doon
Jod doon ""

itne main staff room aa gaya aur mam apne cabin main chali gayi.... main bahar khada ho gaya.... phir thori der baad mujhe bulaya main andar chala gaya....

SHARIKA - hnnn toh bolo kya kar rhe the tum??.

Main - Kuch nahi mam....

SHARIKA - sach batao warna principle sir se kehke rusticate karwa doongi....

Main - ( main sochne laga agar bata dunga toh bhi gussa hongi aur nahi bataya toh rusticate kara Dengi.... chalo bata hi deta hun...)
mam woh main aapko dekh raha tha aaj aap bahut khoobsurat lag rhi thi....

SHARIKA - gusse main mujhe dekhte hue.... kya vichaar aaye mnnn main phir.....

main - kuch nhiiii mam...

SHARIKA - acha theek hai aainda khayal rakhna main tmhari teacher hun.... meri class main sahi se baithna.... samjhe....

main- ji mam.... waise mam bura mat manna.... aao sachme bahut khoobsurat ho....


yeh sunke mam thora blush karne lagi....

Sharika - acha... acha.... thanq.....
ab tum jao apne class main 2nd period shuru ho gaya hoga.....

MAIN - mam main kalse 4 din nahi aaunga....

SHARIKA - Q kya ho gaya.... q nahi aaoge....

MAIN - mam woh main bahar ja rha hun.... dubai...
islie nahi aaunga college.....

SHARIKA- okkk.... okkk... jao.... mere liye koi gift leke aan wahan se....

MAIN - OKKK mam zaroor....




phir main staff room se nikal ke class main aa gaya class main abhi teacher nahi aaye the....

main apna bag uthake mohini ke paas chala gaya aur unki seat par baith gaya... woh dono aapas main baat kar rhi thi aur mujhe ignore karne lagi....

mujhe yeh acha nahi laga aur maine bag uthaya... aur seedhe class ke bahar aa gaya aur bahar ki taraf chal diya....

woh dono mujhe pukarti hui class ke bahar aayi lekin main ruka nahi....

RASHMIKA - dekha gussa ho gaya.... bola tha ignore mat kro use...

MOHINI - are chilll kr yrrr jaega kahan wapas phir yahin ayega....

Rashmika - yrrr tmhari wajah se main bhi nahi boli usse abhi abhi toh main frnd bani thi uski itni jldi frndship toot jayegi yrrr...

MOHINI - kuch nhiiii hoga yrrrr... woh aisa hi hai thori der gussa rehta hai... phir sahi ho jata hai... abhi dekhna thori der baad garden main baithke class aa jaega....

phir woh dono mere piche piche garden main aaayi aur tabhi unhone dekha ki main bike le ke gate se nikal raha hun....

MOHINI- aaj ise pata nahi kya ho gaya.... pta nhiii kahan ja rhi hai class miss karke....

RASHMIKA - lagta hai aaj kuch jyada hi gussa ho gaya hai....

phir woh dono wapas class jati hain lakin unka bhi mnnn nahi lagta hai... aur dono ek class karke apne apne ghar chal deti hainnn.....

main ghar aaya aur fresh hone laga.... fresh hoke apne kapde pack kar ke so gaya.... phir 4 baje utha toh dekha mohini ki call aa rhi thi.... maine mobile uthake switchoff kar diya.....

phir kapde pehen ke bahar aaya aur auto main baith ke Airport aa gaya....

Airport par maine apna boarding paas liya.... phir thori der baad main ja ke plane main baith gaya.....


phir kuch waqt ke baad announcement hone lga....


“Ladies and gentlemen, this is vikram and I’m your chief flight attendant. On behalf of (Captain Roy and) the entire crew, welcome to Airdubai flight... non-stop service from mumbai to dubai....

At this time, make sure your seat backs and tray tables are in their full upright position and that your seat belt is correctly fastened. Also, your portable electronic devices must be set to ‘airplane’ mode until an announcement is made upon arrival.

Thank you.”

phir main thori der baad so gaya q ki mujhe flight main neend bahut aati hai....

3 ghante baad meri flight land ho gayi.... airport se nikal ke main bahar aaya aur taxi pe jaake baith gaya aur use location de di ( kal hi maine kajal se uski location maang li thi qki use surprise dena tha pabunch ke)...

phir thori der baad ek ghar ke saaamne gaadi ruki aur maine use kiraya dia aur bag uthake chal diya door ki taraf....

maine knock kiya....
kajal ne jaise hi gate khola maine bola surprise....
aur aake lag gayi mere gale.....

aaj ke liye itna hi....

continued...


ViLLAiN
Nice update
 

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