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Thriller villain

story ki main heroine kaun ho sakti hai??.

  • rashmika

  • mohini

  • kajal

  • nisha

  • some one else


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A hero can kill someone to save the world...

but a villain can destroy the world to save one...


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Villain1825

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Oh to venky kajal se milne aaya hai, mohini ko bina bataye...
Well ... shaandaar, update, shaandaar lekhni, shaandaar shabdon ka chayan aur saath hi dilchasp kirdaaro ki bhumika bhi..

Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills :applause: :applause:
Ye thriller story hai ki erotica :hmm2:
khair.... So isse pehle ki venky us boss tak pahuch paaye, usse pehle hi uske gunde kajal ke ghar aa gaye venky ko pakadne ya phir maarne...

Kajal dhokhebaaj nikli... par kyun...
Shayad paiso ke liye..
wo kehte hai na sabe bada rupaya...

waise aaj venky fansha hai to sirf apne hawas ke chalte.....

Well ... shaandaar, update, shaandaar lekhni, shaandaar shabdon ka chayan aur saath hi dilchasp kirdaaro ki bhumika bhi..

Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills :applause: :applause:
thnkq...
keep supporting...
 
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Naina

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UPDATE - 12
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LOCATION - DUBAI
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PLACE-KAJAL's HOUSE
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kajal tumse yeh ummeed nahi thi itna bada dhoka q diya.....

KAJAL - mujhe paisa chahiye tha.... bahut saara jo boss ne diya tumhe marwaane ke lie....

Main - mujhse le leti paisa... waise ab tumhara pyaar kahan chala gaya....

Boss - tumne usko pyaar samjh liya tha kya... woh mera banaya hua plan tha...
tumhe kya laga kajal tumhe aise hi mil gayi thi maine kaha tha use tmhare saath pyaar ka natak karne ke liye.... aur tum dubai iske kehne pe nahi aaye ho maine bulwaaya tha.... tujhe maar ke phenk dunga kisi ko tera pata bhi nahi chalega kahan gaya tu.......

boss ka admi - boss isse baatcheet q kar rhe ho ise thok kar chalte hain yahan se...

Boss - ise ham log nahi marenge... ise maaregi kajal apne haathon se.... iske pyaar se ise marwayenge toh ise jyada dard hoga....

phir sab hansne lagte hain....

Boss - Kajal apni revolver nikalo... aur shoot kar do....

Kajal - meri revolver toh room main hai.... 1 min main leke aati hun.....

phir kaajal room main chali gayi... aur apni revolver nikaali uspe silencer set kiya aur chupke se darwaze ke paas aake aim lagane lagi boss ke ek bande par.... idhar maine bhi apne haath piche kiye hue the aur apni revolver pakdi hui thi....

tabhi piche se kajal ne boss ke admi ko direct seene pe goli maari isse pehle kisi ki nazar us bande pe jaaati dusre ko bhi kajal ne thok diya.... maine jaise hi girte hue dekha maine bhi saamne bache do main se ek bande ko sidha sir pe goli maarke thok diya dusre wale ko maarta usse pehle usne bhi goli chali di main sofe ke puche baith gaya... woh jaise hi sofe ke piche muda piche se kajal ne usko bhi thok diya...

ab scene yeh tha wahan ka ki ham do log the yani main aur kajal aur boss akela khada tha bhochakka use kuch samjh hi nahi aa raha tha ki kya ho gaya yahan...

main boss ke paas aaya aur use pakad ke sofe par bithaya abhi bhi kajal ne usko nishane pe liya hua tha...ki boss koi hoshiyari na kare.....

hnnn toh tum kya keh rhe the ki tumne plan banaya tha mujhe pakadne ka... galathhhh.....

maine banaya tha plan maine hi kajal se kaha tha ki woh tumhare paas jaye aur bole ki villain mumbai main hai.... tumne jaise hi yeh suna tumne kaha ki tum usko apne pyaar main fansao....lekin beech main maine kajal ko mana kar diya tha ki tum uske contact main mat raho.... 2 saal tak tumhe mere baaare main kuch pata nahi chala.....

lekin us din rocky ko maarne ke baaad jab main uska mobile utha laaya tha... tab ghar pe aake check kiya toh aakhiri call tumhara tha maine location check ki woh dubai ki dikha rhi thi.....

maine usi din kajal ko bulaya aur use dubai bheja tumhare liye qki mujhe pata tha jaise hi woh tumhe phone karegi... tum kutton ki tarah uske piche aaoge.... aur hua bhi aisa phir tumne usse kaha ki woh mujhe dubai bulaye.... aur main dubai aa gaya.... tumne kajal ko jo dawaiii di mujhe beshosh karne wali woh toh kajal ne kabki phenk di thi lekin pata nahi aur kya mila diya tha uski jagah pe lagta hai viagra mila di thi khair ab tum batao......

main - kaise marna pasand karoge....

boss - mujhe maar bhi doge toh mujhe koi gam nahi qki main boss nahi hun main uska dublicate hun.... hahahhahahah

main- hahhahahahahhah...

boss - mujhe hansta hua dekh ke woh tension main aa gaya....

main - mujhe bhi pata hai tu boss nahi hai.... tera boss toh gaadi main se tum logon par nazar rakh raha tha na tension mat lo usko mere admi utha le gaye hain..... ab tu mar... kajal maar de ise....

phir kuch admi aaye jinko lagta hai mere jigri ne bheja tha woh unhe utha le gaye.... phir ham dono ek dusre ke gale mile....

main - thanks meri jaaan....

kajal - thanks q yrrrr..... ab tumhare lie itna bhi nahi karooongi kya....

main-hmmmmm.... love u pgl....

kajal - love u 2.....

main - ek round aur ho jaye kya.....

kajal ne mere seene pe maarte hue kehne lagi....

kajal - nhiiiii yrrr i am so tired....

main - ok chalo sote hain.....

phir ham dono sone ke liye rooom main chale jaaate hain....

subah mere partner ke phone aane se meri neend khuli usme mujhse kaha bhai jldi aa jao yahan.....

maine kajal ko bhi jaga diya phir main jaaake fresh hua aur phir kajal bhi taiyaar ho gayi ham dono ne naashta kiya phir nikal liye apne adde pe wahan ja ke dekha toh kal jo admi un mare hue bandon ko uthane aaye the woh mare pade the....

mujhe thori tension hone lagi ki kahin boss bhaaag toh nahi gaya.... main andar room main gaya wahan mujhe sofe par mera partner baitha hua tha aur tbora tension main tha....

partner - yrrr main raaat ko sabko mitti main gaad ke boss ko yahan lakar band kar diya tha aur apne bandon se nigrani bhi karni krne ko kaha tha.....

pata nahi kaunse log raaat main aaye aur use churake le gaye aur saath main mere bandon ko bhi maar diya.....

yeh letter yahan pada hua tha maine tmhara naam likha dekha toh ise utha liya.... lo tumhi padho kya likha hai.....

" hello.....

villain...

kaise ho tumhe kya laga tha rocky ko maar loge toh sab ko aasani se maar loge... maaana ki tum bahut takatwar ho lekin kbhi kbhi dimaag ka istemaal bhi kar lia kro boss mere lie sabse zaroori banda hai islie maine uski protection ke liye kuch toh kiya hoga.....toh suno maine uske andar gps chip inject ki hui thi jisse uski location mujhe milti rahi.... kal raat mujhe khabar mili ki use kidnap kara ke tumne kahin rakha hua hai... maine apne bande bhejke use bacha liya.... ab tumhari baari hai marne ki sabse pehle us kajal ko maarunga..... phir tere partner ko phir tujhe...
byeeee.... byeeee.... marne ke liye taiyaaar raho.....

Avinash..... "

yeh padhke main hansne laga.....

main - partner maine jo bola tha woh kar diya tha ya nahi....

partner - hnnn bhai kar diya tha.....

main - toh phir check karo location....

mujhe pata ki boss ko kou bachane zaroor ayega.... isiliye maine kal raaat main hi boss ko behosh karke uske andar apni gps chip bhi inject kara di thi.... jiska pata na boss ko tha na hi avinash....

ab main avinash ke piche kab tak time barbaad karta islie socha 1 teer se 2 nishane laga lun....


note - avinash wahi teesra sakhs hai jisne mujhe teesri goli maari thi... yaani ki boss aur rocky ka boss aur mera bhi.......

phir partner ne computer on kiya aur location check karne laga....

partner - bhai uski location UP ki dikha rhi hai matlab woh india pahunch chuka hai.....

main - ohhh acha..... yeh up main kidhar hoga....

partner - bhai yeh abhi gaadi se chal rha hai aur yeh delhi ki side ja rha hai....

itni der se kajal jo chup baithi thi bol padi....

kajal - i think yeh apne agra wale adde le rukega....

main - hnnn mujhe bhi yahi lagta hai.....lekin ise ham abhi nahi maarenge abhi bahut jyada security hogi....thora time beetne do ise jab lagega ki ham ise nahi dhund sakte tab maarenge isko....

aur partner tum bhi yeh jagah ab chordo aur kahin aur apna adda banao smjhe... qki avinash ham dono se pehle tmhare piche jayega.... islie tum kuch ke liye kahin aur chale jao theek hai....

partner - theeek hai bhai...

phir ham sab wahan se nikalne lage... main aur kajal ghar ki taraf aa gaye aur partner apne ghar ki taraf chal diya....

maine ghar aake ticket book kiya aur kajal se kehne laga ki packing kar le....

kajal - itni jaldi ja rhe ho tum.... kuch aur din ruko na...

main - sirf main nahi ja rha tum bhi nahi rukogi ab yahan mere saath hi chalogi.. samjhi....

kajal - lekin q.... main toh rukungiiii....

main - pagal ho kya avinash ne kya kaha hai ki pehla number tumhara hoga aur main india agar chala gaya toh tum yahan akeli hogi.... main risk nahi le sakta tumhe chalna hoga mere saath....

KAJAL - theeek hai..... chalooongi lekin main tumhare saath hi rahoongi mumbai main.... theeek hai...

main - hnnnn thik hai.... acha suno abhi koi maaal chalna mujhe kuch lena hai...

kajal - thik hai.....

idhar mumbai main rashmika aur mohine mere ghar ke bahar khadi thi aaj sunday tha toh mohini ne rashmika se kaha ki aao chalte hain venky ke ghar kal se gussa hai phone bhi switch offf kar liya hai.... islie dono aayi thi venky se milne lekin yahan aake dekha toh uske apartment ke door main milk ki lacket latki hui thi islie inhone andaaza lagaya ki venky kal se ghar main nahi hai.....

woh dono sochne lagi ki aakhir venky gaya toh gaya kahan phir mohine ne call lagane ki koshish ki phir se udhar se aawaaz aayi...

" the number you calling is currently switched off please try again later.... "

yeh sunke woh dono apne ghar chali aayi mohini bahut tension main thi ki achanak venky kahan chala gaya hai.... jabse woh uske saath parh rha hai kabhi aisa nahi hua tha ki venky kahin gaya ho aur mohini ko pata na ho....

khair idhar main thori der rest karke utha flight raat ki thi iskie ham dono chal diye maal ki taraf.....

maal pahunch ke kajal ne gaadi Park ki phir ham dono maal main enter hue kaafi bada maaal tha yeh dubai maal..... ham dono ladies section main gaye aur main saree dekhne laga ek black ki saadi jispe nakkasi ki gayi thi woh maine leli saath main matching blouse bhi tha...... phir rashmika aur mohini ke liye bhi maine bracelets le liye kaafi achi design thi gold plated thi.....jispe naam likhwane main thora time lag gaya..... phir usko pack karake conter pe bill pay kiya phir pizzahut main jaake pizza khaya..... kajal ko cheese pizza bahut pasand tha isliye wahi liya maine.....

phir ham dono maaal se nikal aaye aur ghar ki taraf chal diye.....raaaste main hi tha ki mere dusre mobile main jiska number sirf kajal aur partner hi jaante the uspe call aane laga maine pick kiya....call partner ka tha.......

main - hnnnn bolo....

partner - bhai main nikalne ja rha hun airport par hun kuch din main uk main rahunga phir india aa jaunga....

main - theeek hai jao....

phir maine call cutcl kardi itne main ghar aa gaya ham log utre... aur andar chale gaye..... phir thori der ke baad kajal ne meri aur apni packing complete kr liii.... mera toh bag khula hi niiii tha abhi tak koi zaroorat hi nahi padi thi....


phir 6 baje airport ke liye nikal gaye......


aaj ke liye itna....
continued....
is updat mein jaise dono groups ke bich shataranj ki chaale chali jaa rahi ho.... dono taraf se ek se badhakar ek chaal chali... lekin ant mein lage ki shah aur maat venky & team dene wale hai us avinash & group ko....

hmmm..... to kajal isliye us boss ke andar kaam karne gayi kyunki ye venky ka hi idea tha....
bahot door ki soch ke planning ki hai usne..... us boss ke sath sath avinash se bhi badla lena chaahta tha wo...
waise usne thik hi kiya... kyunki isse pehle dushman us tak pahuche usse pehle hi us dushman ka khatma kar do taaki baad mei tention hi na rahe....
Aur yaha to kajal aur uska wo dost ki jindagi ka sawal tha....
sochne wali baat ye hai ki akhir sath kaam katne ye log dushman kaise ban baithe... Kyun dhokha diya venky ko...

lagta hai jald hi ek jabardast action scene create hone wala hai kahani mein..
Well ... shaandaar, update, shaandaar lekhni, shaandaar shabdon ka chayan aur saath hi dilchasp kirdaaro ki bhumika bhi..

Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills :applause: :applause:
 

Naina

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pehli brrr likh rhe hain kuch gltiii toh ho hi jayengi.....
thanks for the review...
keep supporting...
thanks mujhe nahi balki Sauravb ko kahiye.... Usine suggest ki hai mujhe ye story :approve: aur is story pe invite bhi....
btw story line badhiya hai :perfect:
 

Villain1825

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is updat mein jaise dono groups ke bich shataranj ki chaale chali jaa rahi ho.... dono taraf se ek se badhakar ek chaal chali... lekin ant mein lage ki shah aur maat venky & team dene wale hai us avinash & group ko....

hmmm..... to kajal isliye us boss ke andar kaam karne gayi kyunki ye venky ka hi idea tha....
bahot door ki soch ke planning ki hai usne..... us boss ke sath sath avinash se bhi badla lena chaahta tha wo...
waise usne thik hi kiya... kyunki isse pehle dushman us tak pahuche usse pehle hi us dushman ka khatma kar do taaki baad mei tention hi na rahe....
Aur yaha to kajal aur uska wo dost ki jindagi ka sawal tha....
sochne wali baat ye hai ki akhir sath kaam katne ye log dushman kaise ban baithe... Kyun dhokha diya venky ko...

lagta hai jald hi ek jabardast action scene create hone wala hai kahani mein..
Well ... shaandaar, update, shaandaar lekhni, shaandaar shabdon ka chayan aur saath hi dilchasp kirdaaro ki bhumika bhi..

Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills :applause: :applause:
thnkq....
keep supporting..
 
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thanks mujhe nahi balki Sauravb ko kahiye.... Usine suggest ki hai mujhe ye story :approve: aur is story pe invite bhi....
btw story line badhiya hai :perfect:
thanq....
 
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Naina

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Naina ji iss kahani mein Kajal hai jiski starting hi uske favourite kaam se hui hai. Aur aapne usko easily chorr diyaa. Kisliyeeee.
Chutiyadr sahab mujh se khafa hai.... kajal ko famous kar dene ki wajah se :D.... isliye kajal leke no roast :angel:
 
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