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Thriller villain

story ki main heroine kaun ho sakti hai??.

  • rashmika

  • mohini

  • kajal

  • nisha

  • some one else


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A hero can kill someone to save the world...

but a villain can destroy the world to save one...


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Jaguaar

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Chutiyadr sahab mujh se khafa hai.... kajal ko famous kar dene ki wajah se :D.... isliye kajal leke no roast :angel:
Baat toh sahi hai. Aapne itna famous kardiya hai Kajal ko ke ab jo bhi aapko jaanta hai woh Kajal naam dene ke pehle thoda sochta jarur hai. :lol1::lol1:
 

Naina

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Baat toh sahi hai. Aapne itna famous kardiya hai Kajal ko ke ab jo bhi aapko jaanta hai woh Kajal naam dene ke pehle thoda sochta jarur hai. :lol1::lol1:
actually ye janab new writer hai isliye only tarif ..... ;)
 

Villain1825

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Baat toh sahi hai. Aapne itna famous kardiya hai Kajal ko ke ab jo bhi aapko jaanta hai woh Kajal naam dene ke pehle thoda sochta jarur hai. :lol1::lol1:
Jaguaar bhai mujhe nhiii pata yeh kajal ka kya lafda hai kaho toh naam badal dun kajal ka....
 

Naina

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Lucky Villain:lol1::lol1:

Jaguaar bhai mujhe nhiii pata yeh kajal ka kya lafda hai kaho toh naam badal dun kajal ka...
ab change karke kya faida :dazed: .... already itne update aa chuke hai.... agar side character hoti to baat alag hoti..

lekin ye kirdaar lead characters mein se hai.... naam change karne se story line ke liye achha na ho....
 

Jaguaar

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Jaguaar bhai mujhe nhiii pata yeh kajal ka kya lafda hai kaho toh naam badal dun kajal ka....
Nhii nhii rehne do. Naam badalne ki jarurat nhi hai. Kyoki jaha tharak aur hawas rehta hai waha Kajal ka naam rehta hi hai.

Aur agar Kajal ke baare mein jaanna hai toh Chutiyadr shahab ki Kajal Series ki stories padh lenaa.
 

Naina

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UPDATE - 13
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LOCATION - DUBAI
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PLACE - DUBAI AIRPORT....
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main aur kajal 6 baje ghar se nikle Airport ke liye.....airport pahunchte pahunchte 7 baj gaye hamne boarding paas leke wahin baith kar check-in ka intezaar karne lage.... maine socha chalo kajal ke saath time paas hi karte hain.....


main - kajak ek baaat batao???

kajal - hnnn poocho???

main - agar main mar jaata aaj toh tum kya karti???

kajal - main marne hi na deti.... tumhe maarne se pehle unhe mujhe maarna padta.... aur tumhe kya laga tha maine tumhe aise hi bula liya tha.... maine kal hi partner se mili thi aur sab bata diya tha... maine usko bola tha 5 bande kal bhej dena raat main....

aur kal jab main tmhara lund choos rahi thi achanak main andar chali gayiiii thi tab mere peeche tum bhi aa gaye the.... us waqt main isiliye andar aayi thi q ki woh log bahar aa gaye the mere mobile main unlogon ka msg jaise hi dekha main andar chali aur phir woh log ghar ke andar aa gaye aur safe jagah dekh ke chip gaye alag alag jagah par.....

main - hnnn mujhe laga toh tha ki koi aaya hai lekin main itna jyada busy the sex ke nashe main ki mujhe aur kuch soojh hi nahi raha tha....

kajal - agar main boss ke bandon ko na maarti toh wo log maar dete.... tymhare upar goli lagne se pehle woh khatm ho jaaate....

Main - oooo so sweeet meri jaaaaan.....

kajal - 😊....

phir thori der main announcement hone laga check-in ka ham dono aake plane main baith gaye.... aur phir plane 1 baje mumbai main land hua.....airport se nikal ke taxi liii aur ghar aaa gaye.... kaafi jyada thakawat thi islie maine socha kal college nhi jaunga..... aur kajal ko jakad ke so gaya......

wahin dusri taraf boss aur avinash dubai se lautkar agra wale ghar main apna adda jamaya hua..... avinash ne apne bande se poocha....

avinash - kya khabar hai kahan hai un teeno ki.....

banda - bhai villain aur kajal toh kal raat main mumbai ke liye nikle the lekin uske partner ka pata nahi woh kidhar hai....

avinash - jldi se pata karo uske baare main sabse pehle use hi maarenge.... kya kehte ho boss....

boss - bhai mere khayal se ham dhoond kar villain ko pehle maaar den...

avinash - pehle uska dost aur kajal hi marengi tab use jyada dard hoga... aur waise bhi ho sakta hai villain 2 ya 3 din main nipat hi jaye qki koi uska apna hi use maarna chahta hai....

boss - uska toh koi apna nahi hai... jjtna mujhe bataya tha usne...

avinash - hai koi unke admi har kadam pe villain ki nigraani kar rhe hain sahi moka dekh ke thok denge.... uske baad ham log bhi kajal aur partner ko maar denge..... lekin tmhare theeek hone ke baaad.....

boss - ok bhaiiiii......

phir avinash uth ke chala jata hai aur boss so jaaata hai....

idhar subah 11 baje main uthta hun aur fresh hoke naasta banane lagta hun itne main kajal bhi jag jaaati hai... aur phir ham dono milke naasta karne lagte hain.....

itne main hi partner ki call aati hai.... aur woh mujhe sab kuch bata deta hai jo avinash aur boss ki baatein hoti hai....

main - tujhe yeh kaise pata... tune kaise suni yeh baatein....

partner - bhai maine gps tracker ke saath saath ek mini transmitter bhi laga diya tha.....

main - bahut acha kiya tha yeh.... acha suno unki baatein sunte koi naaam len toh mujhe batana.... aur khud ko safe rakhna....

aur phir phone cut ho jaata hai.....

main - kajal tumhe yahi rehna hai ya kahin aur shift hona hai....

kajal - mujhe toh yahi rehna tmhare paaass.... mujhe kahin nhi jaana....

main.... theeek hai yahin raho lekin jab main ghar pe nhi rahunga toh darwaza mat kholna.....

kajal - theeek hai jaaan.....

phir aise hi poora din beet jaaata hai....partner se bhi koi khaas khabar mhi mili thi.... aur raat main phir se ghamasan yudh hota hai kajal ke saaath aur phir so jaate hain.......

subah main uthta hun phir college ke liye taiyaar hone lagta hun aur apne bag main mam ki saree aur dono gifts rakh leta hun aur phir college ke liye bike se nikal jaaata hun.....

college pahunch ke bike parking main khadi karta hun aur class ki taraf chalne lagta hun aaj thora late ho gaya tha classes shuru ho gayi thi... phir main apne class ki taraf jaata hun aur piche ke door se chupke se andar ghus ke baith jaata hun qki sharika madam busy thi likhne main kuch.... rashmika aur mohini bhi aayi hui thi lekin woh bhi aage baithi thi islie unlogon ne bhi mujhe nahi dekha tha....

phir isi tarah likhte likhte classs over ho gaya.... mam staff room ke liye nikal gayi aur main bhi unke piche piche apna lekar unke cabin main enter hua...

main - good morning mam...

sharika - good morning... tum yahan kya kar rhe ho... class main q nahi the....

main - main class main hi tha thora late aaya tha toh chupke se piche baith gaya tha....

sharika - ohhh acha....

phir main mam ko unka gift dena lagta hun....

sharika - yeh kya hai....

main - aapne hi bola tha ki koi gift leke aana dubai se.... toh ham kaise na late....

sharika - ohhh so sweet..... thanq....

phir mam packet ko kholne lagti hai aur phir saree nikal leti hain....

sharika - ohhh yeh toh bahut achi sareee hai.... thanq venky.... lekin iska matlab yeh nahi hai ki main tumhare number badhaungi.....

main - 🤣🤣... uski koi zaroorat bhi nahi hai....

phir main cabin se bahar nikal aata hun aur mam bhi kuch sochke khus ho rahi thi.....

idhar main class main aata hun aur piche baith jaaata hun aur phir 3 classs aur hoti hai.... mohini aur rashmika ne abhi tak mujhe nhi dekha tha woh piche mudi hi nhi thi jaise unko yakeen ho nain nahi aaunga....

phir recess ki bell bajne lagti hai......

mohini - chalo canteen chalte hain.....

Rashmika - hnnn chalo....

phir dono uthti hai aur jaise hi piche mudti hai mujhe dekhkar dono khus ho jaaati hain.... aur mohini dod ke aake mere gale lag jaaati hai....

mohini - kahan chala gaya tha.... itna gussa ho gaya ki mobile bhi off kar rakha tha....

phir rashmika bhi paas aati hai woh ab khus nazar aa rhi thi....

main - aree yrrr main gussa nhi tha....

rashmika - toh mobile q off tha.... aur tumhare ghar gaye woh bhi locked tha...

Main - ghar bhi gayiiii thiiii....

mohini - hnnnn....

main - are yrr main dubai chala gaya tha...

mohini rashmika - dubai.... kya krne gaye the....

main - areeee ghooomne gaya tha.... acha chalo canteen main chalte hain...

phir main un dono ke saath canteen chal deta hun aur burger order kar deta hun phir waiter le aata hai.... aur ham log khane lagte hain.....

phir main bag se unke gifts deta hun....

mohini rashmika - yeh kya hai....

main - areee open toh karo....

phir woh dono gift wrap ko kholne lagti hai phir usme se bracelets nikalta hai...

rashmika - kaafi acha hai.... name bhi likha hua.....

mohini - thanq sweetheart.....

rashmika-thanq venky....

areee isme thanks ki kya zaroorat hai... acha chalo aaaj movie dekhne chakte hai....

mohini - yrrr abhi classes baaki hain....

main - choro yrrr...

mohini - thik hai chalo....

phir ham teeno bahar aate hain aur main un dono se kehta hun tum log auto se chalo main bike se aata hun....

phir main apni bike parking se le ke aata hun aur un dono ke peeche chalne lagta hun.....

tabhi sanjana kisi ko call karti hai aur kehti hai ki woh bahar nikal gaya hai aaaj kaaam kar dena theek hai.....
(sanjana toh yaad hi hogi aap logon ko wahi jisne venky ko direct propose kiya tha aur venky ne mana kar diya tha)

phir main mohini jisme baithi us auto ke piche ne nikal kar aage aage chalne laga... abhi maaal 10 min ki doori par tha ki saamne se ek scorpio car aati hui dikhayi di pehle toh woh simple tareeke se slow aur apni side chala raha tha... jaise hi woh mere paas aati achanak woh apni side se hatke meri side aa gayi aur speed bhi full ho gayi.... main kuch samjh paata usse pehle woh gaadi meri bike se aake takrayi.... takkar itna bhayanak tha ki main 20 metre door ja ke gira.... mohini aur rashmika ke auto ke saamne woh dono jaldi bahar nikal ke aaayiii.....

mere naak muh aur sar se bahut khoon nikal raha tha....

mohini - rote hue kehne lagi some body call the ambulance please....

rashmika baithi ro rahi thi.... aur soch rahi thi nahi venky tum mujhe aise chorke nahi ja sakte.... sab video banane main busy the lekin kisi ne ambulance ko call nhiiii kiya... tab mohini ne apne mobile se call karke ambulance ko bulane lagi....

jaise hi mohini ne phone cut kiya maine badi mushqil se itna kaha.....

main - mohini please call kajal....

mohini ne itna sunte hi mera mobile nikaal ke kajal ko call karke yahan jo hua sab kuch bata diya.... phir thori der baad ambulance bhi aa gayi aur kajal bhi qki mera ghar paas main hi tha.... ambulance main mujhe litaya gaya aur saath main mohini rashmika aur kajal bhi baith gyiiii....

Main - kajalllll.....

kajal - hnnn bolo venky....

main-kajal agar mujh kuch ho jaye toh tum partner ke saath milke un dono ko zaroor maar dena....

kajal - nhiii tumhe kuch nhiiiii hoga....

aur phir main itna sunte hi meri aankhein band hone lagi aur main behosh ho gaya.....


aur mujhe hospital laya gaya jahan kajal ne saare bill pay kiye aur mujhe operation theatre le jaaya gaya qki mere sar main aur pet main androoni chootein aayi thi.... aur main behosh toh tha hi behoshi ka injection phir bhi laga diya gaya....
idhar mohini kajal aur rashmika ka ro ro ke bura haaal tha.... teeeno mnnn main prathna kar rhi thi ki main bach jaun lekin pta nhi kismat main kya likha tha....

aur phir mera operation shuru ho gaya.....



dusri taraf -

sanjana - mom itna bhayankar accident karaya hai ki woh bach hi nhiiii sakta..

saamne se - matlab bachne ke chances hain maine kaha tha jaaan se maaarna....

sanjana - mar jayega aaap q tension leti ho....

saamne - mar hi jaye toh acha hai warna soch lena tum....


phir phone cut ho jaata hai.....

"maarna hai toh ek hi baar main maar do....
yeh chup chup ke maarna kaisa.....
agar bach gaya main yahan se zinda...

toh tum logon ka jeeena kaisa...."



" NOTE - NEXT KUCH UPDATES MAIN FLASHBACK COMPLETE HO JAYENGE....."

aaj ke liye itna hi...
continued.....
jaise jaise kahani aage badh rahi hai uske sath hi kuch raaz se parda bhi hat te jaa rahe hai...

yahan ek bahot choukane wala mod aaya hai kahani mein..... ki venky ko uske apne hi maarna chaahtein hai....

Waise.... agar hi dushman nikle to baaki paraye logo pe kya dosh dena... jab venky ko pata chala hoga ki uska koi apna hi ushe maarna chahta hai to kahi na kahi uske dil mein ek tees sir jarur lagi hogi. ..

Sanjana aur uski mom ka kuch to gehra rishta hai venky se.... I think.. wo jo avinash jikar kar raha tha venky ke kisi apne ke baare mein, wo apne shayad ye sanjana aur uski mom hi hai....
Lekin venky sath aisa kyun kar rahe hai wo log... kya bigada hai venky ne unlogo ka jo usko jaan se hi maar dena chaahte hai....

venky ki haalat naazuk hai.... hope ki wo jald se jald thik ho jaaye... kyunki uski is haalat ka faida uske dushman jarur uthayenge.....

Update jaise har rang se bhare ho khas taur par atyadhik thrilling aur emotional situation se...

shaandar update, shaandar lekhni shaandar shabdon ka chayan..
Aise hi likhte rahiye aur aur apni manoram lekhni se hum readers ka manoranjan karte rahiye...
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills :applause: :applause:
 

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UPDATE - 28
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LOCATION - DELHI
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Nisha : aaahhhhh yeasss yessss fuck me fuckkk fuckkk I am cumming i am cumming ohhhhh maaaaa AAIIIIII.........


ek baar phir se Nisha ka paani nikal gya..... aur main bhi khud ko rok nahi paya aur jldiiii jldiiii dhakke maarne laga 4 - 5 dhakkon main hi main chut ke andar hi jharne laga..... veerya ki ek ek boond jabtak nikal nhi gayi maine land ko andar hi daale rakha.......


phir maine land ko nikaaalke washrooom gaya.... aur aise hi aake nisha ke saaath so gaya.....


subah main utha toh nisha paas main nhi thi maine time dekha 9 baj rhe the....


main - ohhh teri itni der main kaise sota rha.....


phir main jldi se utha aur fresh hone chala gaya...... main jaise hi washroom se nikla saaamne kajal khadi thi.....


kajal - aaj bahut der tak soye.....


main - hnnn pata nhiiii q aaj itni der tak main sota raha....


kajal - ab raat main tabartod chudai kroge toh late hi toh uthoge..... waise kal room se aawazein bahut aaa rhi thi.....mera bhi mnnn krne laga tha chudne ka.....


main - toh tum bhi aaa jati.... threesome kr lete..... 😜


kajal - acha......


kajal ke baat krne ke tareeke se lag rha tha ki woh dukhi hai.....


main - kya hua kajal tum sad q lag rhi ho.....


kajal - main q sad hungi....


main - dekho mujhse jhoot mat bolo.....


kajal - venky tumhari shadi ho gayi hai nisha ke saath.... isliye ab main tumhare saath nhi reh sakungiiii pehle ki tarah.... yahi soch ke thora dukhi thi.....


main - pagal ho kya..... tu meri jaaan... kya hua agar meri shadi ho gayi toh.... hmara relation pehle ki hi tarah rehega.... samjhiiii....


kajal itna sunte hui khush ho gyiiiii qki use confirmation mil gaya tha kimain use khudse juda nhiiii karunga..... aur woh dodte hue aayi aur mujhe kiss krne lagi....



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phir kuch der hm logon ki kiss chali.....phir maine uske honthon se apne honth hataye hi the ki woh phir se unhe dabochne ki koshish krne lagi.... aur bahut hi kamuk nazron se mujhe dekh rhi thi.....


main - areee chordo kajal.... mujhe bhook lagi hai..... kal raat main bhii maine kuch nhiiii khaya tha.....


phir kajal ne mujhe khud se alag kiya aur ham dono room se bahar nikal aaye... phir main dining table pe aa gaya.... aur nisha mere lie naasta lagane lagi.... rahul ke saath khel rha tha.....



phir maine naasta kiya aur rahul ke paaas gaya aur usko uthake sofe par baith gaya..... woh totli zubaan main mujhe papa bula rha tha...... behnchod yeh shabd sunke bahut jyada khushi ho rhi thi..... maine use godi main bitha liya....


main - michael yahan kuch mila ya nhiiii.....


michael - bhai upar avinash ke rooom main ek tizori hai woh khul nhiii rhi hai.... baaki kevak drugs mile the jinhe maine jalwa diya......


main - bahut acha kiya unhe jala ke..... chalo upar Chalke tizori dekhte hai.....


main aur michael upar jaaane lge.... main dusre room main jaaane lga....


Michael - woh nhiiii yeh wala room hai bhai....


Main - acha.... mujhe lga yeh rooom hai....


phir ham dono us rooom main aa gaye.... saamne deewar se attached ek tizori thi aur woh paasword protected thi.... uspe 4 dot show ho rhe the matlab paasword koi 4 digit ka hi tha..... main sochne laga ki kya ho sakta hai paasword..... phir main hansne lga qki paasword mujhe pata tha......


Michael - boss hans q rhe ho... paasword pata chal gaya kya....


main - hnnn aisa hi kuch hai.... suno....


ek baar main avinash ke saath jab china ke mission par gaya tha..... toh woh baitha hua apne mobile main ek photo dekh rha tha.... tab maine poocha tha ki bhai kaun hai yeh..... tab usne bataya tha ki meri beti hai....


RUHI.....


Michael - bhai toh kya yahi paasword hai kya....


main - off course yahi hai yrrrr....


Michael - daaldun phir paasword....


main - hnnn paasword enter kro....


mere itna kehti hi Michael ne woh paasword enter kr diya..... aur phir turant tizori khul gayi .... behnchod tizori main bahut saara paisa bhara pada tha.....


main - saala itna paisa kaha se kamaya in gareebon ne.... par apne ko isse kya lena dena saara paisa nikaal ke apne adde par pahuncha do.....


michael - jiiii bhai....


ohir achanak meri nazar niche wali rake main rakhi ek file par gayiiii.... maine woh file uthaayi aur parhne laga....


main - michael yeh file lo aur agra nikal jaana yahan se wahan pe bhi avinash ke ghar main bahut kuch milega woh bhi wahin le aana.......


phir maine woh file Michael ko dii.... aur niche chala aaaya....


main - nisha packing kr lo ham log abhi 1 ghante main nikal rhe hain...


nisha - jiiiii.....


phir nisha uthke room main chali gayi.....


main - kajal toh tumne kya socha pehle kidhar jaogi.....


kajal - main toh yahin se nikal jaungi unhe dhoonde.....


main - tumhe har jagah nhiii dhoondna hai....woh tumhe kolkata main mil jayenge......


kajal - tum itne vishwaas se kaise keh sakte ho.....


main - bsss main jaanta hun.....



aaj ke liye itna hi....
continued....
Avinas ko maar ker Venky ko tow lottery nikal gayi itna saara paisa ab dekhte agra wale gher m kia milta h
Mere hisab se nisha se shadi kerli h tow Kajal se bhi ker lo kia farak padta h or nisha ko bhi koyi pareshani nahi hogi iss baat se
Dekhte h aage kia hota h
 

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sanjana us rooom ki taraf chal di aur door kholke andar aayi aur door lock kar lia ki koi andar na aa paye..... aur jor se hasne lagi..... 😂🤣😂
ye to bachho ki hasne wali emoji hai :D
to kya sanjana bachho jaise hansti hai :hippi:
 

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Update 14 - 15-16

flashback mein jo kar raha tha training ke naam par ek tarah se anjaane mein venky ek daldal mein dhansta chala jaa raha tha...
death fight jeetke aur first mission ke haan karke puri tarah se us daldal mein dhanch chuka tha wo....

Deniel koi kaatil nahi balki ya to koi amir aadmi hai jisse kidnap kar paise aaithne wale the ye log... ya phir koi powerful person jiske jariye koi kaam nikalwana chaahte the ye log ya phir unke group ka koi dushman jishe pakadna chaahte the ye log.... venky se to sarasar jhuth bola gaya ... parde ke piche ki baat to kuch aur hi thi...

Rahi baat nisha ki wo bas hawas mitane ke liye venky ko use kiya jab training khatam hua aur sath hi uska kaam bhi to wo nikal li...

Present mein.... venky ki haalat wo critical hai...
sanjana us rooom ki taraf chal di aur door kholke andar aayi aur door lock kar lia ki koi andar na aa paye..... aur jor se hasne lagi..... 😂🤣😂
sanjana - mere yeh samjh main nahi aa rha ki tum bach kaise gaye.... itna jordaar accident tha lekin phir bhi bach gaye.... tension matlo main aaungi phirse wapas aur abki brrrr jaaan se maarungi.... abhi toh main ja rhi hun qki maaa ne bulawa bheja hai... ydddd rakhna aaungi zarooor chalo....

ek hint de deti hun tumhe lekin tum sunoge toh hai nahi lekin phir bhi main bata deti hun tumhe ki main koi aur nahi tumhari sauteli behen ki beti hun main.....waise dhoondne ki koshish mat karna q ki dhoond tum paoge nahi....
pehle to shaq tha .... lekin ab is baat pe yakin hai ki is sanjana :crazy2: ke dimag ka kuch screws dhile hai... :hehe:
Pehli baat to ye ki itna risk leke bas baatein karne aayi wo,
Dusri ye ki ek coma mein rehne wala insaan se bas ye bolne aayi ki wo koun hai aur kya kar sakti hai in future... :crazy:

So matlab ye sanjana venky ki sauteli bahan hai :D
Kya baat hai... venky ke baap to heavy driver nikle...maujj kar di usne to jawani ke dino mein :roflol:

khair.... udhar venky ke partner ko pata chal gaya ki sanjana kya motive leke aayi thi...
gaur talab baat ye bhi hai ki agar sanjana hospital tak aa sakti hai to baaki ke dushman bhi aa sakte hai venky,kajal aur venky ke partner ko maarne ...
inlogo ko saavdhaan ho jana chahiye...
Kyunki ye teeno abhi us stithi mein nahi ki kisi dumdar dushman se lad sake...
let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills :applause: :applause:
 
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