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[Villain1825]

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A hero can kill someone to save the world...

but a villain can destroy the world to save one...

 

[Villain1825]

Zabardast update

thnkq....
keep supporting...

 

[Villain1825]

Super update

thnks bro...
keep supporting...

 

[Bilal jan]

UPDATE - 28
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LOCATION - DELHI
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PLACE - BOSS'S RESIDENCE
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Nisha : aaahhhhh yeasss yessss fuck me fuckkk fuckkk I am cumming i am cumming ohhhhh maaaaa AAIIIIII.........


ek baar phir se Nisha ka paani nikal gya..... aur main bhi khud ko rok nahi paya aur jldiiii jldiiii dhakke maarne laga 4 - 5 dhakkon main hi main chut ke andar hi jharne laga..... veerya ki ek ek boond jabtak nikal nhi gayi maine land ko andar hi daale rakha.......


phir maine land ko nikaaalke washrooom gaya.... aur aise hi aake nisha ke saaath so gaya.....


subah main utha toh nisha paas main nhi thi maine time dekha 9 baj rhe the....


main - ohhh teri itni der main kaise sota rha.....


phir main jldi se utha aur fresh hone chala gaya...... main jaise hi washroom se nikla saaamne kajal khadi thi.....


kajal - aaj bahut der tak soye.....


main - hnnn pata nhiiii q aaj itni der tak main sota raha....


kajal - ab raat main tabartod chudai kroge toh late hi toh uthoge..... waise kal room se aawazein bahut aaa rhi thi.....mera bhi mnnn krne laga tha chudne ka.....


main - toh tum bhi aaa jati.... threesome kr lete.....


kajal - acha......


kajal ke baat krne ke tareeke se lag rha tha ki woh dukhi hai.....


main - kya hua kajal tum sad q lag rhi ho.....


kajal - main q sad hungi....


main - dekho mujhse jhoot mat bolo.....


kajal - venky tumhari shadi ho gayi hai nisha ke saath.... isliye ab main tumhare saath nhi reh sakungiiii pehle ki tarah.... yahi soch ke thora dukhi thi.....


main - pagal ho kya..... tu meri jaaan... kya hua agar meri shadi ho gayi toh.... hmara relation pehle ki hi tarah rehega.... samjhiiii....


kajal itna sunte hui khush ho gyiiiii qki use confirmation mil gaya tha kimain use khudse juda nhiiii karunga..... aur woh dodte hue aayi aur mujhe kiss krne lagi....

phir kuch der hm logon ki kiss chali.....phir maine uske honthon se apne honth hataye hi the ki woh phir se unhe dabochne ki koshish krne lagi.... aur bahut hi kamuk nazron se mujhe dekh rhi thi.....


main - areee chordo kajal.... mujhe bhook lagi hai..... kal raat main bhii maine kuch nhiiii khaya tha.....


phir kajal ne mujhe khud se alag kiya aur ham dono room se bahar nikal aaye... phir main dining table pe aa gaya.... aur nisha mere lie naasta lagane lagi.... rahul ke saath khel rha tha.....


phir maine naasta kiya aur rahul ke paaas gaya aur usko uthake sofe par baith gaya..... woh totli zubaan main mujhe papa bula rha tha...... behnchod yeh shabd sunke bahut jyada khushi ho rhi thi..... maine use godi main bitha liya....


main - michael yahan kuch mila ya nhiiii.....


michael - bhai upar avinash ke rooom main ek tizori hai woh khul nhiii rhi hai.... baaki kevak drugs mile the jinhe maine jalwa diya......


main - bahut acha kiya unhe jala ke..... chalo upar Chalke tizori dekhte hai.....


main aur michael upar jaaane lge.... main dusre room main jaaane lga....


Michael - woh nhiiii yeh wala room hai bhai....


Main - acha.... mujhe lga yeh rooom hai....


phir ham dono us rooom main aa gaye.... saamne deewar se attached ek tizori thi aur woh paasword protected thi.... uspe 4 dot show ho rhe the matlab paasword koi 4 digit ka hi tha..... main sochne laga ki kya ho sakta hai paasword..... phir main hansne lga qki paasword mujhe pata tha......


Michael - boss hans q rhe ho... paasword pata chal gaya kya....


main - hnnn aisa hi kuch hai.... suno....


ek baar main avinash ke saath jab china ke mission par gaya tha..... toh woh baitha hua apne mobile main ek photo dekh rha tha.... tab maine poocha tha ki bhai kaun hai yeh..... tab usne bataya tha ki meri beti hai....


RUHI.....


Michael - bhai toh kya yahi paasword hai kya....


main - off course yahi hai yrrrr....


Michael - daaldun phir paasword....


main - hnnn paasword enter kro....


mere itna kehti hi Michael ne woh paasword enter kr diya..... aur phir turant tizori khul gayi .... behnchod tizori main bahut saara paisa bhara pada tha.....


main - saala itna paisa kaha se kamaya in gareebon ne.... par apne ko isse kya lena dena saara paisa nikaal ke apne adde par pahuncha do.....


michael - jiiii bhai....


ohir achanak meri nazar niche wali rake main rakhi ek file par gayiiii.... maine woh file uthaayi aur parhne laga....


main - michael yeh file lo aur agra nikal jaana yahan se wahan pe bhi avinash ke ghar main bahut kuch milega woh bhi wahin le aana.......


phir maine woh file Michael ko dii.... aur niche chala aaaya....


main - nisha packing kr lo ham log abhi 1 ghante main nikal rhe hain...


nisha - jiiiii.....


phir nisha uthke room main chali gayi.....


main - kajal toh tumne kya socha pehle kidhar jaogi.....


kajal - main toh yahin se nikal jaungi unhe dhoonde.....


main - tumhe har jagah nhiii dhoondna hai....woh tumhe kolkata main mil jayenge......


kajal - tum itne vishwaas se kaise keh sakte ho.....


main - bsss main jaanta hun.....


aaj ke liye itna hi....
continued....

Lajwab Awesome Superbbbb Speechless update..........
Bohat khob superbbb.....

 

[RAANAA]

 

[Naina]

UPDATE.. 1


CITY:-MUMBAI:-



PLACE- UNDERGROUND FIGHT ARENA....



PLACE INFO----


(DEATH FIGHTING) ...


Ek ladka jo dikhne main average tha i mean saanwla tha lekin usne body apni achi banayi hui thi...
sunsaan raasto se guzar raha tha. raaat ke dus baj chuke the aamtor par mumbai main toh itne time bahut chehel pehel hoti hai.. qki yeh mashoor hai mumbai dekhna hai toh raaat ko dekho q raaat ka nazara hi kuch aur hota hai.... anyway ab kahani pe aate hain toh yeh jagah mumbai ki bheed bhaad ilake se dooor thiiiiii.....
aur woh chalte hue ek factory ke gate ke paas ruka aur aas paas dekhne laga use koi dikh hi nahi raha tha ... Aur woh gate khol ke ander jaane laga... dekhne main woh factory kaafi purani lag rhi thi machines jyadatar kharab padi hui thiiiii.......
Woh dheere aage badhne laga jitna aage ja rha tha utni hi chillane ki aawaz aa rahi thi....
aage chalte hue use niche jaane ke lie stairs mili woh niche jaaane laga....
niche ek haaaal bana hua tha aur bich main ek ring bani hui thi aur aas paas lagbhag 700 log the sab apne apne fighter ka naaam lekar unhe cheer kar rahe the.... dheere woh ladka paas gaya ring ke aur dekha ki ek fighter ko dusra fighter uske upar baithke mukke maaar raha tha aur pehla fighter chupchap jameen par pada hua tha lag rha tha woh mar gaya tha.... phir refiree ne dusre fighter ko uske upar se hataya aur pehle fighter ko check karne laga aur phir announced kiya fighter is dead... and the winner is sam.....
aur phir public cheer up karne lagi... sam.. sam. sammmmmm. sammm.....
sam- sam ko harana mushqil hi nahi namumkin hai....
hai koi maai ka laal jo sam ko hara sake...
phir bheed se nikal ke woh ladka bahar aaaya aur ring ke andar chala gaya aur kehle laga...
itna gumaan mat kar apni taqat par tujhse jyada takatwar insan mitti main mil gaye...

sam- tu ladega bol.... bakchodi mat kar...

ladka- off course ladunga beta.

sam - yeh death match hai....
yahan se bachke zinda nahi jayega abhi tere khelne khane ki umar hai chala ja yahan se warna maara jayegaa...

ladka - q dar gaya kya??

sam- nahi main q darunga tujh jaise chuze se..

ladka - chal phir aaja fight kar jhaaaantu...

yeh sab sunke sam ko bahut gussa aata hai aur wo fight ke liye haaan kar deta hai...
refiree rules samjhata hai ki is fight main koi rules nahi hai....
phir horn bajta hai aur fight shuru ho jaaati hai
sam us ladke ke paas aata hai aur ek flying kick maarta hai ladke ki ribs par aur ladka gir jaaata hai...
woh ladka uthne wala hota hai ki sam uske paas jaata hai aur uske face aur ribs pAr punch maarne lagta hai phir sam khada hota hai aur jump karke us ladke ke upar girta hai....
aur ladke muh se khooon behne lagta hai....

sam- kaha tha na mat kar fight maara jayega chuze....

yeh sun ke woh ladka khada ho jaata aur kehta hai beta main kuch kar nahi raha toh islie apne aapko bahut bada fighter samajhne laga chal aaja be harami ki aulad...
yeh sunke sam uske paaas dodke aane lagta hai use maaarne ke lie aur apna haath upar uthata hai lekin sam uski taraf dor ke uski gardan par punch maaarta hai aur sam 2 kadam door jaaake girta hai aur uth hi nahi pata dobara...
phir refiree check karta hai aur kehta how it is possible... dead??
phir public shor machane lagti hai.
yahoooooo. yoooo..... lekin naaam toh koi jaanta nahi tha islie sirf yooo aur yahooo hi keh rahe the....
phir refiree us ladke ke paaas aaya aur kehne laga...
kaun ho tum?????



KEHNE KO TOH MAIN RAVAN BHI HUN RAM BHI HUN....
PAR IN JAISO KE LIYE MAIN HUN......
viLLAiN.......

Kabhi kabhi jarurat se taakatwar hone se, fame mil jaane se insaan ahankaar mein sure ho jaate hai... aur us ahankaar mein sur hoke is kadar andha ho jata hai ki kayi saari galtiyaan kar baithta hai....
yahan sam ne apne opponent ko kam aanka... dushman ko kamjor samajhna.. ye sabse badi galti hai kisi bhi ladayi mein.... yahan bhi wohi hou.. ghamand ke chalte sam ko apni jaan gavaani padi...
Waise ye baat hai ki sam ka opponent matlab ladka hero hai is kahani ka...

Well ... shaandaar, update, shaandaar lekhni, shaandaar shabdon ka chayan aur saath hi dilchasp kirdaaro ki bhumika bhi..

Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills

 

[Naina]

UPDATE 2



LOCATION - MUMBAI
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PLACE - VENKY's RESIDENCE
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Venky Ko yahan Aaye 4 saal ho gaye the.....
usne mumbai main hi 12 complete kiya aur ab yahan paas ke hi Sagar University main usne aaj hi Btech main admission liya tha .... Kehne ko toh duniya main uske liye is duniya main koi nahi tha... Woh yahan akela rehta tha....
University se wapas aa ke fresh hua phir hua phir khana banane laga...
khana banake woh apne room main aaaya aur apni almirah se photo album nikal ke dekhne laga....
Aksar woh jab sad hota tha album nikaal leta tha...
aaaj bhi yahi kiya usne album main pehli tasweer thi ek aurat ki jo dikhne main kafi khoobsurat thi age lagbhag 40 ki hogi... us photo ko dekh ke uske aankhon se aansun nikal aaye aur woh rote hue kehne laga.....
MAA.....

Ji haaan yeh thi uski maaa anamika..

aur saath main thi uski behen komal aur papa rajesh.....
photo dekhte dekhte woh so gaya aur chala gaya bachpan ki yaadon main.....

LOCATION - BANGLORE
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PLACE - RAJESH's RESIDENCE
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venky uth ja beta teri behen taiyaar baithi hai school jaane ke liye... aaj summer vacation ke baaad school open ho rahe hain yddd hain na tumhe ya bhool gaye... maa ke itna jagane ke baad bhi venky nahi utha toh unhone chadar pakad ke kheench liii...

VENKY - Kya maa sone bhi nahi deti ho..
MAA - kitna soyega chal aaja maharani taiyaar hai agar woh upar aa gayi na toh teri khair nahi...
waise teri saari aadatein toh usme hai judwaa jo tehri teri ( ji haan sahi suna aapne ham dono bhai behen judwaa hain) par pata nahi aaj q jaldi uth gayiii..
chal aaja mere raja bete jldiiii....
yeh kehkar maa chali gayi aur venki uthkar taiyaaar hone laga.... phir fresh hoke woh niche aaya hi tha ki komal ne shuru ki apni badhaas nikalna shuru...

KOMAL - Aa gaye bhai aaap itna late karaoge toh main kisi din kahin chali jaungi tumse door phir rehna akele....
VENKY - jldi se uske paas aaaya aur gale laga ke bolne laga ab aisi baat dobara mat kehna... tu meri behen hi nahi meri jaaaan hai.. agar tu chali gayi toh main kaise jiyunga....
in dono bhai behen ka pyaar dekhke maa ki aankhon main aansu aur woh kehne lagi... ki mere ghar ko kisi ki nazar na lage....
lekinnnn.
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use bhi Kahaan pata tha ki jiski nazar lagni thi uski toh lag chuki hai is ghar ko....
tring... tring.. tring..

LOCATION - MUMBAI
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PALCE - VENKY's RESIDENCE
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phone ki ghanti ki wajah se venky jag gaya time dekha toh 8 baj rahe the....
8 missed call padi hui thi mohini ki (mohini school classmate and best freind of venky)...
missed call dekh ke venky sochne laga ki call krunga ab toh yeh sunayegi bahut islie usne mobile side main rakha aur fresh hone chala gaya.....
wapas aake pehle dnr kiya phir balcony main jaake cigrette phunkne laga...
cigrette abhi khatm bhi nahi hui thi ki phirse call aane laga...
usne call pick hi kiya ki saamne se.....
MOHINI - kutte kahan mar gaya tha call q nahi attend kar raha tha.. ek toh akele akele admission kara liya aur bataya bhi nahi... main jab wahan admission lene pahunchi tujhe gate pe dekha tha wapas aate hue... tujhe pukara maine lekin tu ruka bhi nahiiiii...
VENKY - are maine suna nahi tha... aur tujhe bataya toh tha kal ki main admission lene jaunga kal tu bol sakti thi ki mujhe bhi jaaana hai...
MOHINI - Chal koi niii kal chalega na college...
VENKY - off course pagal chalunga... thik hai kal milte subah college mainn...
MOHINI - ok...
VENKY - Bye
MOHINI - bye


ACHE LOGON KO KAUN YAAD RAKHTA HAI
ISILIYE MAIN BURA HUN BAHUT BURA...

ITS VILLAIN

lagta hai venky ke flashback mein kuch to anhoni hua hai... ya to uske sath ya phir uske family ke sath ya phir aisa kuch ghatana ghati ho jiske chalte ya to uska pura parivaar bikhad gaya ho ya phir usko apne parivaar se alag hona pata....
well hone ko to kuch bhi ho sakta hai par itna jarur hai ki kuch to bura hua hai venky ke past mein...

waise uski family ab hai kaha...
wohi dusri taraf ek aur lead kirdaar ne entry li hai story mein jo venky ki best friend hai...

... shaandaar, update, shaandaar lekhni, shaandaar shabdon ka chayan aur saath hi dilchasp kirdaaro ki bhumika bhi..

Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills

 

[Naina]

UPDATE - 3
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LOCATION - MUMBAI
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PLACE - SAGAR UNIVERSITY
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sagar university bahut badi University thi aaage kaafi bada maidaaan tha aur side main students ke liye parking ki jagah thi....

venky ne college ke main gate se enter kiya aur parking main apni bike park ki...
aur academic block ki taraf chalne laga....

woh abhi garden main hi tha ki saaamne use bheed dikhi.....
venky udhar hi jaaane laga....
wahan pahunch ke dekha toh mohini ro rahi thi....
maine usse poocha kya hua....

MOHINI - main yahan aaayi aur chair par baith gayi tabhi in logon ne gande comments karne shuru kr diye aur mujhe apne paas bulaya...

10 mins ago....

SENIOR 1 - new commer???

MOHINI - yes..

SENIOR 2 - which branch???

MOHINI - Btech

SENIOR 1- name kya hai???

MOHINI - Mohini

SENIOR 3 - thori moh hame bhi dedo....

MOHINI - WHAT.??

SENIOR 1- kuch nahi... chalo ab dance kr ke dikhao

MOHINI - Mujhe dance nahi aata

SENIOR 1-dance nahi aata toh phir kiss krni padegi aman (SENIOR 2) ko

MOHINI - plzzz mujhe jane dijiyeee

mohini ki ankhon se aansu nikalne lage the yeh wahi time tha jab venky ki entry hui thi wahan pe....

venky yeh sunke senior 1 ke paas gaya aur ek jabardast punch diya uske muh par...
thabbbbb.....

punch itna jordar tha ki woh senior zameen par gir bada aur uske muh aur naaak se khooon aa gaya tha....

itne main piche principle ki gaadi aa gayi aur sabhi students jaaane lage...

SENIOR 2 (AMAN) - - dekh lenge tujhe sham ko mil bahar tu.....

VENKY - Chal ja na be apna kaaam kar....

phir venky mohini ke paaas aata hai aur usse kehta hai ____

VENKY - pagal kal se mere saath aaana...

MOHINI - ok mere fighter......

phir woh dono class main aate hai aur first bench par baith jaate hainn....

pehla class applied maths ka tha teacher aaye aur sabka introduction lene laga...
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sir my name is______

jaise hi yeh aawaaz suni woh piche mudkar use dekhne laga bahut khoobsurat thi woh ladki Usne black suit pehna hua tha qayamat mat dha rhi thiiii......

woh ladki use kuch kuch jaaani pehchani lagi......


UNKNOWN GIRL - sir my name is rashmika...
and i m from banglore....


Banglore sunte hi usne sochna start kiya kahin yeh meri rashmi toh nhiiii....


nhiii nhiiii woh kaise ho sakti hai qki uski toh aadat thi ldkon ke jaise kapde pehenne kiiii....

aur phir venky brrr brrr use dekh rha tha aur isi tarah se 2 classes aur lagi phir recess ho gaya dono uthke canteen jane lage....

toh woh ldkiiii rashmika ham logon ke paas aaayiiiii......


RASHMIKA - hiii i am...

VENKY - RASHMIKA.... i m venky aur yeh hai mohini....

RASHMIKA - can we frnds...

MOHINI - offcourse...

VENKY - yeah... why not...

_______aur phir teeno canteen main gaye aur ek khaali table par baith gaye.....
venky chala gaya tha order dene....

wapas aake woh bhi baith gaya...

aur phir aapas main study related discussion hone laga aur phir thori der main....
unka order aa gaya aur woh teeno khane lage.....

venky - so spicy yrrrr.... ymmmmy
maza aa gaya yrrrrrr.

RASHMIKA - YEAH.....
ache the samose...

MOHINI - Hmmmmm

phir wahan se nikal kar class main aaaye aur baaaki ki classes attend ki... uske baaad mohini, rashmika aur venky parking ki taraf jaane lage parking main pahuncha hi tha gate ke paas use bheed dikhi aur woh mohini ke paas aaya aur kehne laga.........


VENKY - Ek kaaam kar aaj tu rashmika ke saaath ghar chali ja mujhe thora kaaam hai...

MOHINI - hmmmm thik hai...

VENKY - rashmika koi dikkat toh nhi hogiiiii...

RASHMIKA - nhi yrrr dikkat kaisi main chor dungi mohini darling ko....

VENKY - mujhe tere irade thik nahi lag rhe rape wape mat kar dena mohini ka....

RASHMIKA - hahhhhhahahhahahh......

MOHINI - bhk pagal....

RASHMIKA - chalo mohini chalte hain...
bye venky

MOHINI - BYE

VENKY - BYE


__________________In logon ke jaate hi venky ne bike start ki aur bahar aane laga


aur bahar dekha usne kamse kam 30 - 40 ladke khade with their hathiyaar....
venki bike bahar lekar aaya aur full speed main bhaga di..

woh seniors bhi apni bikes par baithe aur picha karne lage.....

AMAN - (senior 2) kahan bhaaag raha hai be hijde

vivek (senior 3) - itne ladkon ko dekh kar fat gayiii....

ruk na be madarchod, ek baap ki aulad hai toh ruk....

saala yeh hai hi nahi ek baab ki aulaaad iski maa ne kaafi jayad kele khaye hain lagta hai....


venky yeh sab sunke unsuna kar raha tha lekin uska gussa badhta ja raha tha uski aankh gusse ki wajah se laal hoti ja rhi thiiii......

aur aage jaake ek sunsaan ilake main ek maidaan main gaadi khadi kar di aur intezaaar krne laga seniors ka.....
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AMAN - Q be darr gaya tha kya jo bhaag raha tha.....

VIVEK - chal tujhe ek moka diya maafi maang le pair pakad ke maaf kr denge tujhe...

VENKY - main bhi tumhe ek moka deta hun bhaag jao warna uthne ke kaabil nahi chorunga log aake uthakar le jayenge....

ya ho sakta hai kisii ko milo hi na.....

AMAN - Yeh sunke aman aur vivek ke saaath sab hansne lage....

aman ne apne ek bande ko ishare se mujhe maarne ko kaha us bande ne hockey hawa main uthayi aur mujhe maarne hi wala tha ki ek punch pada uske chest pr aur dher.......

woh banda uske baad na hila na dhula lekin yeh dekh kar abki brrrr 10 bande ek saaath meri taraf badhe......

do logon ne mujhpe ek saath attack ek ne hockey mere haath par maarni chahi main niche baith bach gaya aur phir kood ke dusre bande ki gardan padi aur ghuma diiii......
krrrrrr. rrrrrr........ dead.....

ab mere andar gussa badhta ja rha tha.... jisne mere upar hockey se waar kiya tha uski hocket pakad ke kheeenchiii aur usi ke sir le de maaari....

dhabbbb... aaaahhhhh....

uska sir fat gaya tha....

bache hue 8 ek saaath war karne lage lekin main bachaaw kar rha tha kisi tarah unse.... phir unme se ek thora paas aaaya maine di flying kick uski chest pe aur dusre ko punch maaara muh pe.... teesre ko maari hockey stick uske haaath mainnn.... aur phir uska haaath pakad ke dislocate kar diya phir woh chillane laga... gaaand phaaad dard ho raha tha uski chillahat aur dard ka anumaaan laga kar kar baaaki sab toh bhaaag gaye the....

lekin 2 log bache the....


aman aur vivek........ kaha tha na bhaaag jao warna bhaaagne ka mauka nahi dunga.......

AMAN - Abe ham q bhaagenge.... bhagega toh tu abhi 5 ko maaar kar khud ko don samajhne laga hai.....
piche dekh abhi bahut khade hain....

VENKY - HAHAHAHAHHA.......

VIVEK - hans q raha hai pagal ho gaya hai kya......

VENKY - Abe apne piche mud ke dekh kaun hai mujhe toh koi nahi dikh raha....

jaise hi dono ne piche mudke dekha.... wahan koi nahi tha yeh dekhke unki ab fatne lagi.....
qki jis tarah venky maaar raha tha unhe ab bachna mushqil lagne laga tha....

woh jaise hi piche dekh ke mude saamne ki taraf....

venky uske muh ke paaas tha aur usne diya ek punch unki naaak pe jisse khoon behnelaga......

aur phir venky ne vivek aur aman ke upar hockey stick se maarna shuru kr diya....

dhabbbbbb..... dhabbbb..... fattttttt....fattttt......dhabbbbbbbb.....dhaabbbbbb...

aaaaahhh......aaaahhhhhhhhh........aaaaaahhhhh...........

maaaf kr do bhai gltiiiiiiii ho gayiiiiiii......
ab aisa dobara nahi krenge...... plzzzz bhai...... woh dono mere pair padne lage.....

VENKY - jinda rahoge tab gltiiii ka sochoge na....... main jinda hi nahi chorunga....
Tum log student toh ho nahi.... sagar university ke maine pata kiya aaaj lunch main.....
daily wahan aate ho ladkiyon ko cherna tmhari aadat haiiiiii.....
students ko drugs supply krte ho..... aur kya naaam hai tmhare us baaap ka (drugs
supplier)......

hnnnnn ydddd aaaya ROCKY..... tum logon ko bhi maaarunga aur use bhi maaarunga.....
dekh lena lekin tum log dekhoge kaise itna bol ke maine un done ki gardan ghuma di aur..... unko unki gaaadi main bharke niche khaayi ki taraf ludka diya..... aur unki gaaadi niche jaise hi takrayi hai..... boooooommm...

So college ka first day, ragging , ladki ka rona, hero ki entry phir seniors ke sath garma garmi... etc. etc
aam taur pe sabhi kahaniyon mein yahi hota hai yahan bhi kuch alag nahi..

Lekin ek twist hai yahan is kahani se is update mein... jiske chalte ye jo bhi hua update mein dusre kahaniyon se bilkul alag dikhata hai is kahani ke is update ko...
Kyunki wo jo log mohini ko disturb kar rahe the ghatiya harakatein karke ,wo log to us college ke students the hi nahi balki nashile padaarth bechne wale the... jo college mein nashile padaarth bechne ke sath sath ladkiyon ke sath bhi bad behave karte the....
lekin shayad aaj unka ye last time tha... ya ye kahi jaaye ki unlogo ne khud jaake apni jaan venky ke jholi mein gira di...

Khair...venky ne bahot buri maut di hai vivek aur aman ko....
hmm... lagta hai ab wo Rocky entry lene wala hai... jiska jikar kar raha tha venky...

Waise Waqt ke sath sath insaan bhi badal jaate hai, ye rashmika bhi badal gayi hogi maybe...

Well ... shaandaar, update, shaandaar lekhni, shaandaar shabdon ka chayan aur saath hi dilchasp kirdaaro ki bhumika bhi..

Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills

 

[Naina]

UPDATE - 4
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LOCATION - MUMBAI
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PLACE - VENKY's RESIDENCE
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un logo ko maar ke main ghar wapas aaya aur fresh hoke so gaya.....

aaj khana banana nahi tha qki kajal aa rhi thi isiliye bahar se hi manga lenge baad main....

aur so gaya.... thori der main....
kisi ne darwaze pe knock kiya toh venky ne uth ke darwaza khola saamne dekha toh kajal thiiii.....

kajal ne dodke venky ko gale lagaya..... aur kehne lagi i miss u so much....
(frnds kajal venky ki frnd hai.... lekin in done ke beeech sex relation hai islie yeh mat samjhma ki yeh venky ki gf hai.... kajal dikhne main bahut khoobsurat hai iske booobs aur gaand bahut bade hai...... jiske wajah se yeh dikhne main bahut jyada attractive aur hot lgti hai......)

KAJAL - Toh aaj ka kya plan hai.....

VENKY - Plan wahi puran haiiii....

itna sunte hi kajal ne jump laga di venky ke upar.....

aur venky ke sir ke piche hath rakhkar uske sir ko jhukati hai aur apne larzte hue hontho ko venky k hontho se mila deti hai

Ummmmm ahmmmm ummmmm........

Dono me kiss shuru ho jati hai venky alag hi dunia ke anand main dooba ja rha tha kajal ke nazuk mulayam hontho ka ehsaas use romanchit kar rha tha aisa maza to kisi ke sath bhi sex krte hue nhi aya tha venky ko.....

Ummmmm mmmmmuuaaaah ummmmmm seerrraaaap ummmmmm mmmuaaahhh.........

Dono ek dusre k hontho ko choos rhe the...... ummmmm.. seerraaaapp.... mumm.... ummmmmmm... mmmmuuaaaahhhh....


Thodi der kiss karne ke baaad kajal ne saans lene k liye chehra piche kiya to usne mehsoos kiya ki uske honth poori tarah dono k thook se bheeg gye the......

venky to poora madhosh ho chuka tha kajal ki nazren venky ki nazron se mili aur bina ek pal gawaye dono ke honth phir jud gye....
kajal venky ka kabhi nichla honth choos rhi thi kabhi upar wala aur fir usne apni jeebh venky ke muh me daal di......

Kajal venky ki jeebh ko choos rhi thi aur venky kajal ko follow kar rha tha phir venky ne bhi kajal ki jeebh ko choosna shuru kar diya.....

Ummmm suurrerup mmmuaaa ummmmmm.......

venky sirf kajal ko follow kar rha tha phir kajal ne venky ka ek hath pakadkar apne booobs par rakh diya aur halke se dabakar use ishara kiya.......

venky bhi kajal ka ishara samjh gya aur usne kajal ke bade boobs ko dabana shuru kar diya........

venky pehle dheere dheere phir zor se boobs ko press karne lga jiski wajah se kajal ko thoda dard bhi hua aur uske muh se siskariyan nikalne lagi magar usne roka nhi venky ko balki wo is mithe mithe dard ko enjoy karne lagi......

“ aah unhhh aaah cccccc ooohhh ccccc aaaahhh aise hi dabao inhe aaaahhhhh ccccc dusra bhi dabao ooohhhhh hmmmmm aaaaahhh ccccc kas kar dabao ooohhhhhh ccccc........ ’

kajal ki chut me pani aa gya tha aur uski uttejna ab teji se bad rhi thi......

phir kajal ne jaldi se venky ki tshirt utar kar venky ke seene par hath firane lagi aur uski chhati par kiss karne lagi,venky toh is ehsas me khota chala ja rha tha use ab yeh sab control nhi ho rha tha......

kajal kiss karti hui neeche badhne lagi aur venky ke lower ko nikaaal diya uske underwear se hi uske land ka ubhaar saaf jhalak raha tha jo is bat ka gawah tha ki venky is waqt anand ke sagar me doob chuka hai......

‘ aaahhhh oooooohhhhh kyaaaaa kaarrrrr rhiiiii ho ooooohhhhhhh cccccc ‘.....

venky ke muh se siskiyan nikal rhi thi agle hi pal kajal ne venky ka underwear bhi neeche khinch diya aur venky ka land uchhalta hua bahar aa gya.....
venky ka land koi mamuli land nhi tha balki 8 inch lamba aur 4 inch mota tha.....


Venky : kya hua kajal kya pehli baaar dekh rhi ho mera land.......


Kajal : nhi nhi aisa nahi hai.... darasal tumhare land ka akar pehle se bahut bada lag raha hai.... toh main soch rhi thi k main ise jhelungi ya nahiiiii.....

Fir kajal land ko pakad leti hai aur masalne lagti hai...

jisse land ka tanav aur bad jata hai aur uspar nasen ubharne lagti hain......

venky ka land bahut garam tha jiska ehsas kajal ko ache se ho rha tha......

kajal ki choot bahut jyada pani chhodne lagi thi.......

phir kajal apne kapde utarne lagti hai aur sirf bra panty main let jaati hai...

venky kajal ke safed tarashe hue badan ko dekhkar mantra mugdh ho gya tha uska muh apne aap khul jata hai aur halak khushk hone lagta hai kitni haseen thi kajal koi bhi dekhe to pagal ho jaye........

venky ne kajal ke bra ke hooks khol ke bra ko bahar nikalta hai....

Bra khulte hi boobs uchhalkar bahar aa jate hain
Kya haseen nazara tha doodh se safed aur perfect shape k thos sudol boobs jinpar brown color k chhote chhote nippal the jo is bat k gawah the ki unko jyada chheda nhi gya hai

‘ aah ccccc venky ab inhe maslo pyar se inhe dabao inhe muh main leke chooso ‘

venky farmabadaar gulam ke jaise aadesh sunkar dono hatho se doodh ko dabane lagta hai aur fir ek doodh ka nipple muh me le ke choosne lagta hai fir thodi der baad dusre nipple ko muh me leta hai pehle wale ko dabane lgta hai
kajal toh anand ke sagar me doobti ja rhi thi itna maza use kabhi nhi aya tha
‘ aaaahhhhhh oooohhhhh cccccccc aaaaaahhhhh uuuuiiiiiii ummmmmmm aaaaaaahhhhhh aise hi aaaaaahhhhhhh oooooohhhhhhh shabash aise karo aaaahhhhhh oooohhhhhhh maaaaaaa cccccccc’

‘ ab penty bhi utaro jaldi se ‘
venky doodh ko chhodkar kajal ki penty kheench kar utarne lagta hai jisme kajal kamar uthakar uski madad karti hai
kajal ki penti poori kamras se bheegi hui thi jise venky ek bar gaur se dekhta hai aur sunghta hai, ek alag hi khushbu use mehsus hoti hai......

kajal ye dekhkar khus ho jati hai magar ab usse apni choot ki aag bardasht nhi ho rhi thi....

‘ venky ab tum dheere dheere apna land choot main daalo....

‘ dekho venky tumhara land zara araam se daalna agar main kahun ruk jao to ruk jana aur jab poora chala jaye tabhi jor se karna ‘
venky kehta hai meri jaaaan jaisi tmhari mrziiii.....ham toh gulaaam hai aapki choot ke......

kajal apni taange utha kar khol deti hai aur venky uski tango ke beech ghutno par baith jata hai magar venky ki position sahi nhi thi..... isliye woh takiya maangta hai.......

‘venky takiya kajal ki kamar ke niche rakhta hai aur khud Bhi ghutne failakar neeche ho jata hai ab land ka topa choot k samne tha....


kajal apne muh se thoda thook lagakar land par apne hath se lagati hai aur land ko pakadkar choot par set karti hai....


‘Ab ghusao aram se '
Venky apne land par zor deta hua land ko andar ghusane ki koshish karta hai magar venky ke land tope ke mukable choot ka muh chhota tha... qki kaafi dino se dono ne sex nahi kiya jiski wajah se choot kass gayi thiii thoriiii....


kajal ko takleef mehsus hone lagti hai....


venky lagatar zor bda rha tha pukk ki awaz se land ka agla hissa choot me gus jata hai.....


‘ aaaahhhhhh cccccc oooooohhhhhh maaaa marrrrr gyiiiiiii oooohhhhhhh ccccc cc’.....


kajal ko dard hone lagta hai uski choot ekdam kas gyi thi aur aise lag rha tha jaise koi khanjar daalkar uski choot ko faad rha ho.....


venky kajal ke chehre ko dekhkar samjh jata hai ki use bahut takleef ho rhi hai isliye wo ruk jata hai....


‘Aaahhhhh cccccc tum rukkkk kyunnn gyeeee aage badaooooooo dheere dheere ccccccc oooohhhhh’.....


venky phir se land par zor dene lagta hai aur ek inch aur land andar ghus jata hai ab tak 3 inch hi land andar gya tha magar kajal ki to jaise jaan hi nikal rhi thi....


‘venkyyyyyyy cccccccc sath me mere doodh bhi dabao isse mujhe thoda aram milega ‘......


venky jhat se doodh dabane lagta hai kajal thodi relax hoti hai toh venky ko jhatke se land andar karne ko kahti hai, venky uski bat mankar ek halka jhatka mar deta hai aur land 2 inch aur andar ghus jata hai magar kajal ki jaan halak me aa jati hai
Yahan tak to wo pehle bhi land le chuki thi venky ka lekin bahut dino se kiya nahi isliye bahut dard ho raha tha...


‘ ooohhhhh aaaaaahhhhhh maaaaaa cccccccc oooohhhhh maaarrrrrr gyiiiii cccccccc ooohhhhh ‘......


Thodi der venky kajal ke doodh dabata rehta hai jisse 5 minutes baad kajal thoda normal ho jati hai aur venky ko itne hi land ko andar bahar karne ko kehti hai....


venky utne hi land ko dheere dheere andar bahar karne lgta hai pehle to kajal ko takleef hoti hai magar fir dheere dheere land apni jagah bna leta hai aur use acha lagne lgta hai......


venky toh ankhen band larke mza le rha tha aur sath me doodh dba rha tha kajal bhi ab rang me aane lagi thi.....


‘ aaaahhhhh cccccc ummmmmm ooohhhhhhh aaaahhhhhh ccccc aise hi karoooooo aaahhhhh mmaaaaa aur tej dhakke maro aaaahhhh cccccc’.....


venky kajal ki awaz sunkar apni gati bda deta hai aur tez dhakke marne lagta hai....


‘ aise hiii aaaahhhhh oooohhhhhh mmaaaaa reeee aur zzzzzooooorrrrrr sseeeee maaaroooo aaaahhhhh
Poooraa ghussaaa dooo aaahhhhh meri parwaaahhhhh cccccccc oooohhhh mat karooooo ummmmm ghusa do poooraaaaa cccccc ooohhh’.....


venky kajal ki awaz sunkar ek tez dhakka marta hai aur uska land 1.5 inch aur andar ghus jata hai.....


kajal ke muh se cheekh nikal jati hai.....


‘ohhhhh......mmmmaaaaaaaaa. .....Aaaaahhhhhh.......


kajal ki ankhon se aansoo behne lage the jise dekhkar venky ruk jata hai....


‘ kya karun tumhara land meri jaan lelega aisa lag rha hai kisi ne khanjar ghusa diya hai pet me aaaahhhh maaaaa ‘......


venky phir se kajal ke doodh dabane lagta hai aur 5 minutes me halke dhakko se aur doodh dabane se ab wo normal ho gyi thi ab venky itne hi land se kajal ki choot me dhakke marne lagta hai aur kajal bhi anand me doob jati hai.....


‘ aaahhhh aaahhhh aaaahhhh cccccc ooohhhhh aisee hiii aaaahhhh zor se karoooo aaahh zor lagao aaahhhhh ccccc ummmmm aaaaa’......

venky ne apni gati aur bda di thi kajal se aur bardasht nhi hota aur uski choot sikudne lagti hai 2 minute bad hi uska paani nikalne lagta hai.....

‘ aaahhhhh main aaaaaaa rhiiiiii huuuunnnnnnn aaaaaahhhhhh maaaaaaa maaainnnnn gyyyyiiiiiii.....
Ohhhhhhh mmmmmmmaaaaaa’......
venky dekhta hai ki kajal teji se kamar uthane lagi hai to moka dekhkar akhri bacha hua land bhi tej dhakke se choot me ghusa deta hai.....

kajal ki ankhen palatne lagti hai ye aakhri dhakka usse bardasht nhi hua tha anand ki charam seema main venky ne aakhri prahar kar ke choot ki dhajjian uda di thi...

venky ka land kajal ki bachedaani me ghus gya tha aur land ki sakhti ki vajah se use bahut jyada dard ho rha tha.. use lag rha tha wo nhi bachegi choot se bhi khoon behne lga tha.....

kajal ka jism sir kati murgi ki tarah fadfadane laga tha kajal besudh ho gyi thi
venky kajal ki aisi halat dekhkar bed k sirhane pade gilas se pani jaldi se kajal ke chehre par dalta hai aur kajal ko hosh ata hai.....

‘ aaaahhhhhh maaaaa nikaloooooo baharrrr maaaaa aaaiiii main mar jaaungiii ccccc aaaaaaah please nikalo bahar aaaaaaa fattttt gyi meriiiii choooot aaaaaahhhhhhh ccccccc maaaaa nikalo ise ‘......

venky chupchap bas kajal ke doodh dabaye ja rha tha.. use aur kuch nhi pta tha ki wo kya kare kuch der baad kajal ka dard kuch kam hota hai magar wo abhi bhi siskar rhi thi....

‘ ccccc oooohhhhhh aaaaaahhhhhh Maaaa cccccc. ccccccc aaaa.....

kajal venky ko dhakke marne ko bolti hai...

venky dhakke marne shuru kar deta hai kajal ki choot ek bar pani chhod chuki thi jis vajah se ab land aram se andar bahar hone laga tha land ne choot ko apne hisab se khol diya tha....

‘Aaaahhhhh uuuummmmmm aaaaaaahhhhh cccccccc..... ccccc aaaissseee hiiiii maaaa rreeeee ccc. Aaaah zor se maroooo aaaahhhhh’

‘Yeh lo kajal aur lo aur zor se ye lo...... aaahhhhh mmmaaaaa aaissseeee hiiii cccc mmaaaa....

aaaaaaahhhhhhh ccccc maaaa..... cccccc ooooohhhhhh.... aaaaaa cccccc aur Zoor seee maaaro....

Aaaahhhhhh ccccccc...... aise hi daily chodega na mujhe aaaahhhhh ccccc bol chodega na mujhe?’.....

‘ tum jo kahogi wo karunga kajal daily chodunga tmhe.... ccccc bas mujhe chhodkar kahin mat jana ‘....

‘ kahin nhi jaungi cccccc aaaahhhhh aur tez karo cccccc mmaaaa ummmmmm aaaaahhhhh ab to main teri gulam ho gyi hun.....

10 minutes k bad phir se kajal charam par pahunch gyi thi magar venky abhi bhi lga hua tha....

‘ aaaaahhhhhh aur tez karo aaaaahhhh maaaaa ccccccc ummmmmm oooohhhhhh aur tezzzzzz aaaaaahhh main aaaaaa rhiiii hunnnnn aaahhhhh’.......

kajal jhatke lete hui pani chhod deti hai.....

Magar venky abhi laga hua tha dono paseene me nahaye hue the ab venky bhi bardasht se bahar ho rha tha....

venky aur tez tez jhatke maarne lagta hai venky ki bechaini badne lagti hai...

venky kajal ki taango ko dono hatho se pakad kar kajal ke doodh par uske ghutne lga deta hai... kajal ke paon uske sir k paas aa gye the uski paon ki payal uske chehre k pass chhann chhann ka madhur sangeet bja rhi thi jo venky ki uttejna ko charm par le jate hain....

venky poora zor lgakar dhakke marne lagta hai.....

kajal se itni tabadtod chudai bardasht nhi hoti aur ek bar fir se uski choot pani chhodne k liye fadfadane lagti hai.....

‘ aaahhhhh mmmaaaaaa meri kamarrrrrr ooohhhhh main gyiiiii ‘

‘ mera nikalne wala hai kajal'

‘ use nikalne de mere andar hi nikal use ‘

‘ nikalne wala hai kajal aaahhhh cccc ooohhhh’

‘ aaane de aaahhhh ccccc jaldi kar main aur jhel nhi paungi jaldi kar aaaahhhhh ‘

Isi ki sath venky ka land dam tod deta hai aur uske land se lava behne lagta hai...

venky ka land poora choot me ghusa hua tha venky ka jism akad gya tha aur uske land ka ras seedha kajal ki bachedaani me gir rha tha
Bachedaani me ras k girte hi kajal ne bhi fir se paani chhod diya tha
kajal is chudai se poori past ho gyi thi.....

venky kajal ke upar hi let gya tha aur dono apni sanso ko durust kar rhe the.....

kajal se venky ke jism ka bhar bardasht nhi ho rha tha wo venky ko side main palta deti hai aur apni taange sidhi kar k venky ko bahon me kas leti hai.... rat ke 9 baj gaye.....

venky uthta hai apna mobile uthata hai aur mobile se zomato par khane ka order karta hai.....
phir fresh hone chala jaaata hai.... fresh hone ke baaad kajal ko jagata hai aur woh bhi fresh ho ke nighty pehen leti hai.....

thori der main khana aa jata hai aur dono milke khana khate hain aur phir thori der baaad phir shuru kar dete hain apni raasleeela.....

aaaj ke liye itna hi.....
continued...

ViLLAiN

ohh....
To is story mein tharak bhi hai...

ye story characters to mujhe hi favour kar rahe ki kis kadar inki roast karu

aur kahani kajal hai to tharak to hona lazmi hai

Khair chhodo...
Well ... shaandaar, update, shaandaar lekhni, shaandaar shabdon ka chayan aur saath hi dilchasp kirdaaro ki bhumika bhi..

Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills

 

[Naina]

UPDATE - 5
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LOCATION - MUMBAI
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PLACE - ROCKY's ADDA
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rocky bahut gusse main tha jabse usne suna tha ki uske bandon ko kisi ne maaar diya hai......

ROCKY - kaun tha be woh???
tum log kuch bolte q nahi ho.....

BANDA 1 - Bhai wo bahut dangerous hai.... bahut kharab maaarta hai....

ROCKY - Meri gang main ho ke tu usse darta hai.... namard hai re tu.....

phir rocky ne apni pistol nikali aur usko thok diya....
saala uski tareef karta tha behnchod.......chalo re batao uske baare main.....

BANDA 2 - bhai woh ladka sagar university main padhta hai.... qki aman ne hame wahi bulaya thaa. aur wahin se uska picha kiya tha ham logon ne.....

ROCKY - theeek hai apni pooori team leja..... aur usko utha ke lao..... yahan kaise bhi karke....

agar nahi la paye toh yahan mat aana qki uske baad ka hasr toh jaante hi ho kya hoga tum logon ka.....

BANDA 3 - Jii bhai utha layenge..... aap befikr rahiye......

phir wahan se woh 50 bande aur hathiyaar leke niakalne lagte hainnn......

ROCKY - ruko ruko be tum log..... apna woh inspector ka kya naaam hai.....

BANDA 2 - Rajesh.....

ROCKY - hnnn usko phone laga ke de zara mere ko.....

woh phone lagata hai jaise hi rajesh call pick karta woh banda mobile rocky ko de deta hai......

ROCKY - hello..... isspector sahab..... ek kaaam tha aapse.....

RAJESH - hnnn boliye rocky bhai.....

ROCKY - ek bande ko utana hai.... aap jaoge toh jyada locha nahiii hoga.... mere bande jayenge..... toh marpeeet toh pakkka hogi.....

isliye aap jao use arrest karna phir mere bandon ke hawale kar dena use aaage ja ke.....

RAJESH - thik hai kaaam ho jaega.... lekin apne ek bande ko mere saath bhej dena use pehchanne ke liye....

ROCKY - thik hai main kisi ko bhej dunga....

RAJESH - ok main team taiyaar karta hun.....

ROCKY - apne wafadaar bando ko le jaana inspector...aur hnnn tmhara cut time pe mil jayega......

RAJESH - OK bhai......

phir rocky ek bande se kehta hai ki tu inspector ke paas chale jaaana aur tum 5 log ek gaaadi leke thora aage rehna ...inspector use tmhare hawale kar dega.... koi gadbad nahi honi chahiyeee......

aur baaaki sab log niklo apne apne kaaam par aaaj kal bahut kam marketing ho rhi hai drugs ki.....ise badhao jaake......

phir sab wahan se nikalne lagte hain......
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PLACE - VENKY's RESIDENCE
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venky subah 7 baje so ke uthta hai..... phir kajal ko jagane lagata hai......

VENKY - Uth na kajal kitna soyegiiiii....

KAJAL - yrrrr venky q preshan kar raha hai..... tu ja na college mujhe kaunsa college jaaana hai...tu ja taiyaar ho aur mujhe sone de.... waise bhi meri raaat ko flight hai dubai ke liye.....
so plzzz ab tu jaa aur mujhe sone de......

VENKY - OK....
chal tu so..... main chala fresh hone.....

phir venky fresh hota hai aur kapde pehen ke paidal hi university chal deta.... aaj uska mnnn bike se jaane ka j nahi tha..... islie taxi se nikal liya University....
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PLACE - UNIVERSITY
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TIME - 9:00AM
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University pahunch ke venky idhar udhar dekhta hai phir left main use mohini aur rashmika dikhti hain.... udhar hi chal deta hai venky.....

VENKY - Hiii mohini, hiii rashmika....

MOHINI - HIII VENKY...

RASHMIKA - HIII VENKY....
Kaise ho....
aaj late aaye thora....

VENKY - Hnnn woh aaj main taxi se aaya hun na....

MOHINI RASHMIKA - q......

VENKY - mnnn kar raha tha islie.....

MOHINI - ohhh acha.... chalo classs chalte hainnn......

VENKY RASHMIKA - hmmmmm chalo..

IN CLASS.....

Class main pahunchkar yeh teeeno piche baith jaate hai qki aage sab full thi.....

MOHINI - Venky teri wajah se piche baithna pad raha hai......

VENKY - koi niii kal se aage baith jaana....

phir class main chemistry teacher ki entry hoti hai .....

VENKY- (mnnn main) ufff kya gazab teacher hai.... dil aa gaya hai re....

TEACHER - toh bacho iss semester ke assignments note kr lo... aur 7 8 assignment de dale ek saaath.....

VENKY - lagta hai madam maar ke hi dam lengi....itte saare assignment koi deta hai kyaa....

RASHMIKA - ruko zara sabr kro.......
abhi sabhi denge assignment itne hiii...

MOHINI -

VENKY - yrrr kitna zulm kar rhe hain ham logon pe......

phir jo bhi teacher aata gaya aur assignment deta chala gaya.....

RECESS TIME.....
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Yeh log canteeen main ja ke baith gaye... aur order karke wait karne lage.....
phir unka order aa gaya aur woh khake jaane lage.... door par pahunche hi the ki....

tabhi.....

UNKNOWN GIRL - hey can i talk to you???

VENKY - YEAH.....

VENKY - tum log chalo main aata hun class....

yeh sunke woh log class chali gayi.....

VENKY - hnnn toh kahiye kya keh rhi thiii aaap??

UNKNOWN GIRL - i am sanjana....

VENKY - Kya kaam hai mujhse?.

SANJANA - I LOVE YOU.....

VENKY - Sorry..... mujhe gf nahi banana abhiii.... Chaho toh frnd ban sakti ho...

SANJANA - (SAD FACE) okkk.....

yeh kehke sanjana jaane lagi toh.....

VENKY - Udaas q hoti ho sochenge iske baare main....

SANJANA - OK BYEEEE....

VENKY - BYE.....

phir isi tarah classes khatm ho gayiiiiii.....

PLACE - OUTSIDE UNIVERSITY......

inspector rajesh apni jeep main baitha intezaar kar rha tha.....

ROCKY - kab ayega be garmiii main baithe baithe preshan ho gaya hun.....

ROCKY's BANDA - abhi aa hi raha hoga.... woh dekhiye jo saamne se aaa raha hai na black shirt aur blue jeans main wahi hai venky.....

venky udhar se nikal raha tha ki tabhi inspector rajesh uske saamne aaya aur kehne laga....

RAJESH - you are underarrest....

VENKY - lekin kis jurm main....

RAJESH - kal kitno ko maara tha tune 8 logon ko yaad aaya yeh raha gawaaah saaath main hi leke aaya hun....

VENKY - SIR maine kisi ko nahi maara....

RAJESH - thane chal tujhe sab kuch yaad aa jayega....

phir ek constable ne hathkadi lagayi.... aur jeep main daaal diya venky ko....

aur jeep chal di apni manzil par..... phir aaage jeeep ruki ek jagah par aur venky ko shift kar diya rocky ki gaadi main.....

VENKY - sir mujhe kahan le ja rhe ho..

RAJESH - tu special jail ja raha hai....

aur sab hansne lage.....

phir use rocky ke adde par le jaaane lage.... raaste main usne kaha ki mujhe toilet karna hai..... toh uski hathkadi khol di aur woh toilet krke gaadi main aake baith gaya....

woh chahta toh bhaag sakta lekin use dekhna tha ki kahan leke ja rhe hain use.... jab un logon ne dekha ki woh wapas aa gaya hai bhaagne ki koshish nahi ki hai toh phirse hathkadi nahi lagayi aur yahi sabse badi galti thi unki.....


gaadi main 2 bande aage the driver ko mila ke aur 2 venky ke saaath piche baithe hue the.....venky ne chupke se dono ki gun gayab ki...
aur silencer toh laga hi hua tha gun main usne ek ek karke dono ko maut ki neend sula di .....

aage jo baitha use kuch shaq hua ki yeh dono bol q nahi rahe hai jaise hi woh uthke piche dekhne laga.....

venky ne use headshot de diya.... driver kuch karta usse pehle uske sir pe bandoook taan di venky ne.....

aur bola chupchaap jahan ja rha tha wahi chal....

driver ne gaadi ek cement factory ke aage roki...dekh ke lagta tha ki yahan kaaam hota tha kuch din pehle tak....

venky us driver ke saath andar gaya saamne.....

ROCKY aur uski paltan khadi.....

ROCKY - abe akela q aaya hai baaki sab kahan hai...

BANDA - bhai isne sabko thok diya....

ROCKY - Kya sabko thok diya... leke aa ise mere paas....

venky khud hi aage chalne laga jaise hi saamne aaya rocky ne uska chehra dekha....

Rocky ke hosh hi ud gaye maut jo saamne khadi thiiii.... woh bhaag ke apne cabin main gaya aur andar se door lock kar liya... aur apne phone se kisi ko call lagane laga.... call pick hote hi....

ROCKY- Bhai woh.... wohhhh... zinda hai... zinda hai....

SAAMNE SE - kaun zinda hai.....

ROCKY - VILLAIN.......

AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI......

paise ke laalach mein apne farz ko apne iman ko bech diya rajesh ne, waise jab rakshak hi bhakshak ban jaaye aise gundo ke sath milke to koi kare bhi to Kya kare..

waise baat venky ki nahi actually us rajesh jis a tarah bol raha tha ... ushe padh hanshi hai ki ruk hi nahi nahi hai.. aur wo comedian Rocky apne ek gunde bol raha ki rajesh ko phone ke mobile ushe dena
...... kya yaar ye kaisa boss hai jiske mobile mein balance hi nahi

are ye kya,is Rocky ne kab apna mobile recharge karwaya....
So APNE PHONE se call lagake Kisiko bataya ki venky is back..... matlab yahan pe ek aur raaz ki baat chupi hai...

Well ... shaandaar, update, shaandaar lekhni, shaandaar shabdon ka chayan aur saath hi dilchasp kirdaaro ki bhumika bhi.. plus heavy comedy ke liye tahe dil se sukriya

Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills

 

[Naina]

UPADTE - 6
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LOCATION - MUMBAI
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PLACE - ROCKY's ADDA
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BOSS - kaun zinda zinda....

ROCKY - bhai villain....

BOSS - kahan hai woh???

ROCKY - mere bandon ke saamne khada hai...

BOSS - maar do use.... paiso se tol dunga tujhe...

ROCKY - Boss woh maardega mujhe bhiiiii....

BOSS - nahi maroge use toh main tmhe maar dunga....

ROCKY - ok bosss... kuch karta hun....

BAHAR HALL MAIN... MM

VENKY - 1, 2, 3, 4,.......10 hi ho bssss..... chalo sab saath main aaao.....

Phir venky ne apna chaku nikala.... aur uspar haath phairne laga.... bahut dino se shikaar nahi kiya hai kisi ka isse...

woh sab aage bhadne lage....
ek banda aage aaya aur usne punch maarne ko try kiya venky ke chest pe venky ne uske haath ko pakda aur dusre haath se chaku uski gardan main ghonp diya......

abki baar 4 bande ek saath aaye pehle ne face pe maara toh venky niche baithe aur dusre wale ko phenk ke maara chaku.... woh uske gardan main ghus gaya phir jump lagake uske paas gaya aur chaku nikala hi tha ki kisi ne uspe goli chalayi.... goli uske haath ke paas se nikal gayiiii....

venky jump lagake ek pillar ki piche chip gaya.... aur dekhne laga unki position sab ke paas revolver thi... un teeno ko chorke jinhe abhi venky maar raha tha....

woh sab saamne hi khade the... usme se ek ne jaise hi dekha ki venky ka chehra dikh raha hai usne fire kr diya lekin woh bhi khali chala gaya...

abki brrr venky ne apni dono revolver nikala aur aim lagake do ko head shot maar diya....

woh ab bhagne lage safe position lene ke liye....itna time bahut tha venky ko unko maarne ke liye....
aur kuch hi der main woh sab zameen par pade the....

yeh wahi time tha jab rocky boss se baaat kar rha tha... call cut hote hi usne jaise hi door khola saamne ka nazara dekhte hi uske rongte khade ho gaye....

door ke side se venky achanak nikalke uske saamne aa gaya....

HELLO ROCKY....

rocky - villain bhai mujhe maaf kar do....

VENKY - maaf kar dun.... tujhe toh pata hai ki main maaf nahi karta kisi ko....

2 saal tune mere saath kaaam kiya itna toh tujhe pata hi hoga.... ki main maaf nahi karta.....

Chal bata tera boss kahan hai tujhe chor dunga... aaj pehli brrr kisi ko main maafi wala option de raha hun...

VENKY - (mnnnn main) agar maine isko boss ka pata bata diya toh boss meri family ko maar dega.... nhiii main yeh hone nahi dunga... main ise boss ka pata nahi bataunga... ise mujhe maarna hoga toh maar lega......

VENKY - Kya sochne laga budbak.....jldi bata mere paas time nahi hai....

ROCKY - bhai mere ko nahi pata hai.....

(aap yeh soch rahe honge ki rocky maarne ka try q nahi kar raha venky ko... qki rocky ko pata agar use usne maara aur venky bach gaya toh woh use tadpa tadpa ke marega islie woh abhi chup hi tha) lekin venky ne use maarne ka mauka hi nahi diya aur rocky ka ' na' sunke use bahut jyada gussa aa raha tha gusse ki wajah se uski aankhein laal ho gayi thi yeh dekh ke rocky aur dar gaya... tabhi

venky ne rocky ka ek haath pakda aur use tod diya.... phir dusra bhi tod diya.....

Rocky dard se chillane laga aur tadapne laga.... use ab dard saha nahi ka raha tha lekin kya karta agar kuch batata toh family chali jaati islie usne apna muh band hi rakha.....

VENKY - ab bhi nahi batayega.....

ROCKY - muuujheee naaaahiiiii paaataaaaaa... (dard ki wajah se uski aawaaz nahi nikal rahi thi sahi se) ....

VENKY nai ab apna chaku uthaya aur dheere dheere uske seene pe cut karne laga....

aaahhhhhhhh......bhaaaaaiiiiiii.....mujheeeeee.... nahiiiiii..... pata..... hai..... sach...... main..... chor..... do..... mujhe......

chor dun tujhe behnchod tujhe chor dun meri poori life barbaad kardi tere aur tere boss ke ek jhuth ne.... aur main tujhe chor dun.....

phir venky ne chaku se uske upar anginat waaar kiye jabtak uski ek saaans chalti rahi tab tak waaar karta raha uske upar....

VENKY - le chor dia.....

Phir venky utha wahan se aur usne apne kapde dekhe toh usme bahut khooon laga tha usne....

rocky ke cabin main dekha toh wahan almari main kapde thode dheele the lekin usne pehen liya......

phir generator room main gaya wahan dekha toh petrol rakha hua tha do karpe utha laya aur poori factory main daalne laga.....

phir sabki bodies ko ek jagah ekhatta kiya....

aur unpar bhi petrol chidakne laga.... phir use yaaad aaya usne rocky ka mobile liya aur use off karke jeans main daaal liya....

phir gate ke paas aaya aur lighter jala ke andar phenk diya aur piche ke gate se nikal gaya....

thori door aaage chalke woh ruka aur piche mudkar dekha toh aag poori factory main fail gayi thi.... uski aankhon main aansu bhi thi.... aur chehre pe khushi bhi thi.....

DOSTI BHI USNE ....
NIBHAAYI THI BAHUT ACHE SE....
LEKIN DUSMANI MAIN BHI......
USNE KOI KASAR NAHI CHORI....

aaj ke liye itna hi...... continued

ViLLAiN

bahot behtareen tarike se pesh kiya gaya action scenes

hmm.... so kuch raaz ki baatein dhire dhire saamne aa rahi hai..... Shayad atit mein Rocky aur uska boss kuch aisa kand kiya hoga jiske chalte venky ko khamiyaza bhugatna para.... shayad ho na ho apni family se bhi aaj un logo ki Galti ke wajah se dur hai wo....

btw Rocky to gaddar nikla...
khair....
finally Rocky ka chapter closed ab us ki baari hai maybe...

Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills