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Thriller Waah! Life Ho Toh Aisi - All Hell Broke Loose (Completed)

Part 3 kaa title kya hona caahiye?

  • Waah! Life Ho Toh Aisi - The Merchant Of Death

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Aakash.

Aakash.

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AP has just completed a mission and suddenly Duster gets a call, so his mood gets very bad, By the way, I also wanted to see Duster, I want to see how much strength in him because everyone's fear is reflected whether it is AP or Chang.
Adya is doing this again always speaks to AP, it's not my fault, I don't like this Adya at all. Seeing AP serious, now I'm scared too, because I don't know what will happen next. Adya is bastard, kill her first.
I cannot understand anything and upon seeing the Duster I was horribly scared. For the first time someone is speaking in front of AP and AP is standing silent and watching as if AP is helpless, I don't like it at all.
Eventually 2.0 is back, but it has both advantages and disadvantages because 2.0 doesn't listen to anyone and kills everyone. Duster got scared listening to 2.0's dialogues, though everyone is afraid of 2.0. 2.0 is speaking to kill Ananya, it is not getting any good at all, for the first time it seems that 2.0 will ruin everything.
Till date I have not read any such story, I have now finished the words. Ananya, Abir, Ami are all AP's special friends and 2.0 wants to kill them, everything is going wrong. The end of the story is causing many questions in my mind and the answer will probably be found in the next part of the story.
Fuck.!!!​
 
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2.0 said:
No worries mate thanks for the review. Feeling express ki aapne that was great.. I hope you enjoy part 3...

Pro Tip :- Main South Movies nahi dekhta even last Indian movie I watched was Dangal in 2016.

Again thanks for the review.. Keep Supporting
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AP bhai zabardast update laga mereko sorry kaafi busy tha me kaam se so late reply kiya ab part 3 jldi launch karna and I hope usme zyada maza action and thora Anaa k sath scene hoga like a Bhabhi
 
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No no no no no no no.....


This is bad this is bad bad bad very very bad

The merchant of death is back

Back with a bang



Oo my god

He is more dangerous more cruel more unhappy ooo this is very scary

So scary to explain how is that feel when you read a masterpiece like this


Bro you are really a great writer a very very talented writer


Waiting for next part soo badly


Fuck.......
 
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iss update ne jo li hai na vo gajab level pe hai BC

mereko literally lga tha ki ADYA kuch na kuch karegi aur hoga vo AP ke khilaf hi kyunki mereko new characters mai se jo HC yan LEAGUE se related hain unnpar 0.000001% ka bhi bharosa nhi hai inke alag level pe hi kaand hote hain
aur usme ADYA ka kya kahna issne 2 baar betray kiya hai 2.0 ko aur vo jaate jaate bhi bolkar hi gya tha ki vo iss baat ko yaad rakhega aur ADYA ke piche khud aayega bhi aur yahan jo halat ho rkhi thi na ADYA ki 2.0 ke samne kasam se jo satisfaction lga mereko dekh kar i feel awesome BC ki kar double cross ab kar na double cross BC aur jab vo OVERLORD bolte huye rone jaise expression mai bol rhi thi na uss time alag hi satisfaction mil rhi thi BC but still bahut jyada bade vala kaand ho gya hai idhar

2.0 aaya pure unexpected way mai mereko toh yehi lga tha ki 2.0 haal hi mai gya hai toh thoda time lagega magar story ki timeline dekhen toh 2 hafte bhi na huye they usko gaye ki vo aaya vo bhi full power ke sath aur yeh kaafi jyada goosebumps de kar gya mereko i just love that scene jo bhi ho entry unexpected aur gaand phad rhi

DUSTY ki literally phat ke hath mai aa rhi thi aur ADYA ka toh jaise yeh haal tha ki yeh 1 second bhi usse 2.0 ki vajah se mila hai jeene ko so vo kuch bhi karegi chahen usse kuch aur second hi kyun na milen aur jo yeh kaand bola hai na 2.0 ne ki ANAA ko tapka de ADYA agar usse safe rehna hai vo sidha sidha 1.0 se badla le rha hai 2.0 aur yeh koi nayi baat nhi hai kyunki first part se jab se 2.0 ki personality ko base mila hai usne 1.0 se ajaadi hi chahi hai yeh 1.0 aur 2.0 ka jhanjhat nhi chahiye usse, usse chahiye sirf AP 2.0 aur kuch nhi aur mereko aisa hi lag rha hai ki yeh 2.0 ne abhi saari situation par gor karne ke baad hi plan kar liya hai (mere hissab se vo shayad kaafi time pehle se aise moment ka hi wait kar rha ho) jo bhi ho 2.0 ne chahi hai ajaadi 1.0 se (mere hissab se) aur vo uske liye 1.5 saal mai bhi kuch na kuch kar chuka hi hoga personality difference bahot jyada hai 1.0 aur 2.0 ka. 1.0 ko chahen kitni hi badi dikkat kyun na ho vo na chahta hai ki 2.0 bahar aaye. jo bhi ho agar ANAA ko kuch hua toh hogi bahut badi vaali bakchodi vaise toh vo GOVERNER ki beti hai aise hi na tapak skti vo but still ADYA kuch bhi karegi apni jaan bachane ko aur 2.0 usse yeh sab karne ke baad chor dega iske bhi.0.0001% chance hai as uski ego vakai bahut jyada badi hai BC first part se padhta aa rha hoon itna surety ke sath keh hi skta hoon. halanki ANAA ko maarna kaafi galat hoga 1.0 ke liye toh kuch jyada hi
ab CHANG ko bola hai ABEER, AMI ko maarne ke liye aur 2.0 ko koi farak bhi nhi padega magar idhar ho gya hoon main confuse kyunki 2.0 aur 1.0 ki fundamental personality ke 2-3 points toh same hi they like NO ONE HURTS MY FAMILY AND LIVE magar idhar vo khud peilne lga hai aur agar fundamental point dekhun toh ABEER ke bachne ke chance hain as vo jaisa bhi hai FAMILY hai AP ki magar AMI ka koi idea na hai mereko upper se ABEER agar bach bhi gya toh condition uski kuch shi nhi hogi
matlab mereko nhi pta ki kya hoga BC aur dimag mai bhasad alag hi machi hui hai ki iss bande ne ANAA ko marne ke liye bol diya matlab kyun BC aise 1.0 se badla lega yan aise usse hurt karega BC yeh vakai bahut burra hai literally bahut burra (burra keh bhi kisse rha hoon main)
mushkil se toh ROMANCE ki feeling aayi thi story se aur yeh toh bass L lgane ke piche hi pada hai BC

ab 1.0 gya hai lachari mai vo bhi puri trah magar ek hint de gya hai ki ABEER aur AMI jitni jaldi ho ske mille jakar BOVOICE se ab yeh new character kon hai aur 1.0 ne ABEER ko isko hi kyun bola milne ke liye yeh toh 3rd part mai hi pta chalega kyunki iss part mai uska itna reference na mila hai

jo bhi ho mera dimag hai hilla hua iss time kyunki yeh bilkul unexpected tha aur 2.0 aakar sidhe yeh order dega yeh toh bilkul bhi socha nhi tha completely thoughts block ho rkhe hain iss update ke shock se BC

STORY mereko literally 1st part se kai parts mai better lagi ACTION toh pehle ke hissab se high level hai hi, STORY LINE ke bare mai main kuch kehne se rha kyunki abhi dhang se plot clear na hua hai toh STORY iss position pe hai aage ka toh kya hi kehne phir , COMEDY pehle se kamm hui hai, THRILL toh bhai sahab godaam bhar bhar ke tha iss part mai harr unexpected scene pe goosebumps toh mile he hain mereko for sure, ROMANCE ka scene rha pehle jaisa kamm matra mai santushti layak
but yeh sab chalta hai story mai so let's see kya hota hai aage

aur story next part mai probably iss point se shuru na ho matlab vo shuru ho uss time jab AP aur ABEER nikle they 1st part ke end mai yan starting mai koi condition bane jahan 1.5 saal ka past aaye kyunki main literally marra ja rha hoon vo part dekhne ko aur ab mereko dekhna hai ki aaj jahan khatam kiya vahan se aage kya hota hai matlab literally readers ka kar rkha hai dimag kharab pehle 1.5 saal dekhna tha mereko aur ab mereko yahin se story continue chahiye
BAVLA ho jaana hai maine BC

mereko ANAA safe aur hashth pushth chahiye aur obviously zinda hi chahiye beshak ABEER aur AMI yeh soch nhi sakenge ki 2.0 ne ANAA ke khilaf bhi koi order diya hoga magar plz BC bacha lo usko aur RIYA kahan hai abhi tak sirf ek incident ke time hi aayi thi vo 2nd part mai aur agar aayi he thi toh mere hissab se mere liye iska matlab yehi nikalta hai ki vo story mai zinda hai aur aayegi bhi ab kaise aayegi yeh na pta (2.0 ke plan ka part hogi BC) kuch smjh na aa rha lag rha hai ki 2.0 aur RIYA banayenge WORLD'S BADASS COUPLE (yeh kahan se aaya mereko koi idea nhi hai ignore it BC)

jo bhi ho bhai maine literally yeh journey enjoy ki hai beshak start se nhi tha chahen 1st part ho yan 2nd part magar mereko maja aaya story padhkar i literally love your story and writing style (pta hi hai yeh aapko vaise) aur mereko literally sabar na hai agle part ka but ek cheej pakki hai ki main iss baar starting se hi sath hounga (high hopes BC)

KEEP WRITING
KEEP UPDATING

EAGERLY WAITING FOR NEXT PART
YOUR'S BIG FAN
...MATHUR
 
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