Thriller Waah! Life Ho Toh Aisi - All Hell Broke Loose (Completed)

[Xfan]

Thanks for the overwhelming response bhailog ab jaisa ki sharif banda bhai ne bataaya ek do or pm aae hain mujhe ki story slow chal rahi hai reason maine uppar waale quote mein bataa diya hai ki kyun chal rahi hai kyunki sab kuch jaruri Hai college bhi Ladkiyaan bhi or family bhi lekin still agar aapko lagta hai toh Aaj maine report kardi hai jaldi he poll change hojaaega story kaa or jaise he naya poll add hoga please Sablog Vote karein kyunki fir uske according he hum story ko aage badhaa paaenge...


Thanks for the support everyone keep supporting..

Bc agar story likhana hai to plot ke according likh agar bakchodi karega to maar khayega...


Aur jisko apani manpasnd story chahiye hoti hai wo yaha pe aapni apni dukan hi khol ke baithe hai aur adhi-adhuri story likh ke bhag khade hote hai...
Hindi section ke last page pe dekh lena aisi bahut si storiya padi hai...

 

[spritemathews]

Super update

 

[Mkapil]

Superior

 

[Rajesh]

awesome update bhai



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waiting for the next update

 

[AP 316]

New Poll Added Guys Don't forget To vote. Taaki uss hissab se Story continue ki jaa shake...

 

[Tahirtahir111]

Zabardast update

 

[white ĎĚVÎŁ]

I LOVE YOUR STORY jitni b aj tak parhi hn sab sy best hy
waiting for next update

 

[Rbcl007]

Superb bhai... Actually thoda plot scattered he aur update bhi thoda slow he. Toh story thoda Boring ho jati he..... Dont mind apne hisab se chalao.. But mere hisab se jo main problem he wo he extra character ko main character jitne he unse jada story time milna.... Jaise rally maine jitne bande the unmaine se aanaya ka important thi par uska to ek dialouge bhi nahini par wo abhi gang ke chutiye bande bhi do chat dialouge bol jaa rahe haine... Iss liye story maine wo feel nahini aati aur main character side character se bhi kam valuable lagti he... Just a suggestion... Waiting for next UPDATE

 

[Raj142]

Lajwab update bhai

 

[Rohit tyagi]

Lajwab story h bhaii jitne naye plots ban rhe h utna hee interest or bad rha h
Bs ese hi story aage badate raho
Bs ek request h update jaldi diya kro vo kya h na ki agge kya hoga jaane ke wait karna bahut muskil h