Thriller Waah! Life Ho Toh Aisi - All Hell Broke Loose (Completed)

[Naina]

Fabulous update AP sir.......... great going....

 

[AP 316]

Update kafi mast tha specially Chang ka intro/uske marne ke tarike ka dar. But is update mei sirf ek word hi samjh nahi aaya "ELIGIBLE" jo Chang ne kaha tha Ap ke liye. Wo Ap ko kis chiz ke liye "ELIGIBLE" hone ke liye keh raha hai. Lagta hai kafi kuch hone wala hai future mei.

My opinion as a reader not writer
Eligible k yahaan kai meaning hain harr sense mein suit karega.. Lekin in my sense Eligible means a complete person without any limitations.. Like jaise AP hai uske dimag ki koi boundaries nahi hain yaani woh kuch bhi karne k eligible hai.. Lekin darr ki wajah se kamjor hogaya hai woh issliye Chang samjhaa raha hai usse..

As the writer of story mera point of view pucho toh. :- future mein bataaUnga

 

[AP 316]

Update kahe ka UPDATES
Gajab the bhai gajab...
Bas ek baat samjh na aayi, jab AP usae darta h to investigate kahe kar raha h?

Pichle updates mein nahi padha kya? AP ne kahaa tha ghar baithke kuch faayda nahi hai kuch toh karna he padega or ye issliye bhi easy hai kyunki ho shakta Hai issiliye he woh Chang ko sath leke jaaraha hai.. Ami bhi..

 

[RAJIV SHAW]

Super update hai bhai

 

[Naik]

Fantastic update brother
Keep posting
Waiting your next update thank you

 

[MAD]

Fantastic bro

 

[Acme]

Superb writing bhai... excellent update... keep writing

 

[Xfan]

Update kafi mast tha specially Chang ka intro/uske marne ke tarike ka dar. But is update mei sirf ek word hi samjh nahi aaya "ELIGIBLE" jo Chang ne kaha tha Ap ke liye. Wo Ap ko kis chiz ke liye "ELIGIBLE" hone ke liye keh raha hai. Lagta hai kafi kuch hone wala hai future mei.

My opinion as a reader not writer
Eligible k yahaan kai meaning hain harr sense mein suit karega.. Lekin in my sense Eligible means a complete person without any limitations.. Like jaise AP hai uske dimag ki koi boundaries nahi hain yaani woh kuch bhi karne k eligible hai.. Lekin darr ki wajah se kamjor hogaya hai woh issliye Chang samjhaa raha hai usse..

As the writer of story mera point of view pucho toh. :- future mein bataaUnga

Yaha pe eligible ka matalb hai uss ki koi kamjori nahi hai...
Us jaanwar ke dar ke wajah se AP bhag raha hai...
Us dar ka samna karo naa ki usse bhago...

Ab baki to writer hi jaane...

 

[Rajesh]

Kya bat hai Bhai aj to totally Merry Christmas Ho gaya do do updates Ke sath wah maza aa gaya

Aur is case ko investigation karne Ke liya jo idea AP ne chuna hai wo Bahut sahi hai

Aur sath me ami Aur Chang bhi hai to investigation aur bhi jyada details me hogi

Aur koi gadbad hone ka chance bhi nahi hai

Ab dekhte hai Ki aage kya kya hota hai

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I'm still waiting for the next update


Keep updating

 

[Rajesh]

Kya bat hai Bhai aj to totally Merry Christmas Ho gaya do do updates Ke sath wah maza aa gaya

Aur is case ko investigation karne Ke liya jo idea AP ne chuna hai wo Bahut sahi hai

Aur sath me ami Aur Chang bhi hai to investigation aur bhi jyada details me hogi

Aur koi gadbad hone ka chance bhi nahi hai

Ab dekhte hai Ki aage kya kya hota hai

++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

I'm still waiting for the next update


Keep updating