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Aaega flashback bhai.. Uske bina maja nahi aaega
..issliye Flashback toh jaruri Hai.
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Sorry AP 316 bhai kuch din se continue nahini tha.... Aur uss time to wo chiz pura hide kar diye the aur actual vertigo ka kya impact hua tha wo bhi story Maine nahini aaya tha matlab i know ki wo blackout hona mind place Maine jaana etc tha par wo sirf kuch hi palon ke liye hota tha wo kuch hi baar... Tab bhi jada tar AP uspe control karsakta tha ham uss stage ke bare Maine bhi jaan na hai ki jab vertigo ne pura kabja karna chaha dimag Maine tab kya hua.... Aur bhai plz request hai iss baar plz new year ke baad side character jitne hai family ke bahar unko bhi thoda time do kyun ki kuch hi character like anjali and group jo regularly aate hai story jitna bhi role ho par bohat se character hai jinhe to ya toh kuch. Story time na milrahi hai ya phir kuch bhi seen hi na aarahi even discussion hi nahini ho rahi hai.... Jiase ki flash back k jikar hua hai to bata doon pichle part Maine ek wo psyco kya naam tha uska yaad nahini aare wo surinder ki beti iss baar wo to aagayee thoda hi chalo par aaye ki haan kam se kam wo jinda hai par ek doosri bhi ladki thi i mean naam yaad naa raha jiske sath sex seen tha jiske liye college Maine maarpit hua tha aur murder case chala tha wo ladki ek important character thi uss time ke hisab se par kabhi uska jikar tak na hua iss part Maine I hope thoda bohat jikar karoge bhai.. I know ki itne sare character ke karan sab ko manage karna mushkil hota hoga par thoda bohat to seen dalo... Jaise ki riya ko hi dekhlo chalo aap bole the kisi uska kuch seen hai future Maine rakhige thik time aane Maine par bhai chalo uss time to riya ap pe gussa thi par itne time Maine unka thoda bohat bhi interacting na dikhaye aapne.....Aaega flashback bhai.. Uske bina maja nahi aaega
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Surender ki beti Arushi uska recently jikar hua tha lamba tagda jab Woh president college mein aaya tha
Ritu bhi Shubham gang k sath aa chuki hai uska or AP kaa kya scene hona tha woh maine suru mein he clear kardiya tha..
Long story Hai issliye Bahot jyaada characters hain yaar aise agar harr thode time baad side characters kaa jikar aaega toh story plot par kaise reh paaegi baat cheet mein he time chala jaaega..
Rahi baat Riya ki uska scene plot k hissab se ek timeline par suru hoga...
Thanks for the wonderful review keep supporting...
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Aare bhai bhai ye ritu ka seen kab aake chala bhi gaya pata nahini chala lagta hai phir se padhna padhega... Suru se....
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ओर जो फ्लैशबैक आएगा वो किसी धमाके को एक्सप्लेन करने के लिए होगा। सही कहा ना एपी भाई।
Aaega flashback bhai.. Uske bina maja nahi aaega
It's my first review on this story i spent 3 days on your story and i read it til end awesome story dude but don't use abusing word in the story it's AP time superb story plot keep it up waiting for next
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Rbcl.007
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Bhai maan na padega 3 din maine complete kardiya.. Agar aap first part read na kiya ho to plz usse bhi read kar le plz kahani kisi jada pakad ban jayegi....