Thriller Waah! Life Ho Toh Aisi - All Hell Broke Loose (Completed)

[Naughty Lover]

Bc Kya khauf 2.0 ka jabra fan ho gayaa mai to...like death ki bhikh seriously man this fear is something next level each and everything I have imagined esa lagaa Jese Meri aankho k saamne hua ho fucking hell update...

Waiting for next....

 

[Awan Badshah]

Behad hi shandar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.

Aage ka intjaar

 

[Iron Man]

Update-215(Found Him)


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Lawn mein ghumke humlog waapis andar aaye toh sab clear hogaya tha udhar se.. Forensics waale photo or baaki saboot legaye they toh scene clear tha..

Main-Ab karein kya yahaan..?

Ami-Baithke kissi or ko maarne kaa plan banaao or kya..

Main-What the fuck you mean..?

Ami-I mean I know you Love killing people so much..

Main-Toh iska matlab serial killer ban jaaun..?

Ami-Ban shaktey ho tum no doubt..

Main-Ek punch mein thobda fod dena hai tera maine...

Ami-Yeah sure in your dreams..

Main-(Hanske) You made me laugh..

Ami-I am serious..

Main--tujhe kya lagta hai tu mujhe harra shakti hai?? Drugs lene lag gayi kya??

Ami-Nope drugs kaa kaam tumhaara hai.. Or Haan Mujhe 100% surely lagta hai main tumhe haraa shakti hun.. I mean main lagaataar practice kar rahi hun daily or tum bus sotey ho logon ko maartey ho drugs letey ho and so jaatey ho..

Main-You know agar main 10 saal coma mein rahun and then uthun or tum unn 10 saal takk rojj practice karo tab bhi tum mujhe nahi haraa shakti... Issliye din mein sapne lene bandh kar..

Ami-Yeah sure..

Main-Ek second mujhe thoda kuch yaad aaraha hai hmm 7-8 months pehle kahaan kaa scene tha..? Hmmm Arrey jidhar tu akeli fass gayi thi or koi help nahi kar raha tha tab god like entry maarke chatt se zipline lagaake kon aaya tha tujhe bachaane.. Ummm!! Shayad main he tha..

Ami-Bangladesh...

Main - Haan Bangladesh kaa he toh scene tha.. Or uske baad ek or kuch yaad aaraha hai mujhe jab teri gardan se saamne waale ka Chaaku 3 inch ki durri par tha or tu apne last sans lerahi thi tab un sabko silent sniper banke kissne tapkaaya tha.. Ummm! Oh Haan Maine.. Ye kahaan kaa scene tha ummm! Thimphu kaa Bhutan..


Ami-OK...

Main-Or Haan ek or scene yaad aaraha hai mujhe Jab tu Chang or Abeer Iron Man banke akele Ghuss gaye they kahin toh bhi or 3 seconds mein kidnap hogaye they tab kon aaya tha... Umm Main.. Haina...? Uss din bhi kya bhenchod log maare they maine 23 ghanton mein 2 countries ki 4 different cities mein 18-20 log maare they..

Ami-23...

Main--Haan 23..

Ami-I am not gonna lie that day was sick as fuck..

Main-I know....or ek yaad aaraha hai mujhe...

Ami-Oh shut up I know meri life bahot baar bachaai hai tumne ginwaane ki need nahi hai..

Main-Exactly... Issliye betu know your place...

Ami-By the way what's your plan.. I mean tum waapis jaa shaktey they wahaan par lekin gaye nahi ho abtak..

Main-Oh fuck that shit main waapis nahi Jaane waala.. I don't like them at all.. Mujhe nahi Jaana udhar..

Ami-Subu ko maara even uska death contract tha Jisske pass usse bhi maara high Command k regional manager ko bhi maara.. Lag toh yahi raha hai ki tum surely waapis Jaana caah rahe ho...

Main-Woh toh bus ego satisfy karne k liye.. Mera koi interest nahi hai Jaane mein.. Or waise bhi it doesn't matter main tu kya caahtey hain Jaana toh paddega he aaj nahi toh Kal...

Ami-I know.. But sabse buri haalat Tumhaari hogi.. No one cares about me or Chang hum nikal jaaenge aapka kya hoga boss..

Main-Meri mujhe sochne de.. I am motherfuckin AP, I can make a plan in 10 seconds so woh main dekhlunga..

Ami-OK ok we will see..

Hum baithey they toh woh Mandeep Rajan or Anaa wahaan aagaye..

Mandeep-Ok saare guards ko bhej diya hai maine..

Main-Wait what the fuck..? Bhejdiya.. What do you mean bhejdiya..

Mandeep-Haan tumhaare guards aaenge naa or tabtak tumlog ho he..

Main- You are so dumb kam se kam puch toh leta bhai..

Mandeep-What do you mean Abhi takk gaye nahi hai wohlog roukk shaktey hain agar tum caaho toh..

Main-Nahi fir shakk ho jaaega.. Ami tu yahin rukk main aata..

Ami-Wait what do you mean main aata...?

Main-Abe unmein ek or guard tha jo killer k sath tha usko range hath pakadna tha issliye main sabko bhejne waala Tha or uska picha karta..

Ami-What the fuck..

Mandeep- Abhi bhi kar shaktey ho just sablog duty sign off karke nikal he rahe hain.. Humaari he Van chhodke aaegi unhe..

Main-Oh hell yeah.. Itana bhi useless nahi hai tu.. Uss Van waale kaa number de mujhe.. Ami I gotta go..

Ami-I can't let you go alone main sath aarahi hun..

Main-Nope you are needed here.. I gotta go.. Just stay I don't want to waste my time.. Ami k pass mera number hai uss Van waale ka number send karo mere pass i am out..

Anaa-be careful AP...

Main bhaagke bahaar aaya toh main gate k bahaar woh Van thi or ussi mein Sab guards almost baith chuke they... Actually ek or gurad tha jo Red John kaa banda tha mujhe kaise pata kyun pata sab baadmein bataaUnga... Filhaal mera plan tha usko follow karna kahin naa kahin toh leke jaaega mujhe woh.. Kyunki abtak jitane bhi log Mille hain Red John k sab 3 k groups mein they or I don't think so yahaan bhi koi pattern tutta hai bhenchod chindi chor logon ko maarne k liye 3 bheje or Raajypaal k liye 1 banda naa naa bc... Hopefully ye bhi 3 he honge or yahaan keval 2 he they confirm toh mujhe lagraha tha ki 100% iss guard k sahaare kam se kam ek or ko pakad lunga..issliye jaise he woh Van nikali main andar se bahaar aaya or apni gaadi mein baitha or uss gaadi kaa picha karne laga.. Kaafi durr se lekin.. Subah kaa time tha toh utana traffic nahi millne waala Tha or uppar se uss Van kaa colour or banaawat kaafi unique thi issliye durr se bhi aaram se dekh paaraha tha main Uss Van ko main.. Or main 100% sure tha iss Van k driver or front passenger seat k alaawa koi bhi banda ye nahi dekh shakta tha ki piche kon aaraha hai.. Or woh guard middle mein tha issliye mujhe koi dikkat thi nahi.. Mujhe maalum tha woh 100% apni exact location par nahi uttarega... Van city k inside enter hui 1 banda wahaan uttara lekin apne waala abhi takk andar he tha.. Maine uss driver k pass call kiya..

Main-chup rehna bolna kuch nahi Gaadi normal speed par chala main piche hun.. AP bolraha hun..

Driver-Haan Haan theek beta hojaaega aake kardunga ye kaam..

Call disconnected..
Nice samajhdaar banda hai Driver bhi.. next stop par 1 guard or uttara.. Ab gaadi mein 3 guards mojjud they..humlog city se bahaar nikal gaye or Next stop city k bilkul outside hua wahaan Van puri tarah khaali hui.. 3no uttare or hath wagairaah milaake 2 ek side nikal liye or woh single guard seedha nikal gaya.. Maine gaadi Van k bagal mein lagaai..

Driver-Seedha nikal gaya Sahaab...

Main-Thanks.. Dikh raha hai mujhe nikalo tum baksish mill jaaegi..

Driver-Ji ji...

Maine gaadi wahin side mein lagaai or paidal he nikala uske piche.. Crowded ilaaka tha lekin itana crowded nahi ki woh dikhe naa... Main apna distance Banaa raha tha usase... Lekin woh bc chill maarke chal raha tha... Ye ilaaka high crime rate waala lag raha tha mujhe kyunki log bc Sab gundey mawaali type he they or pata nahi kyun mujhe toh aise ghurr rahe they maano khaa he jaaenge.. Humlog ek bajaar se gujjar rahe they filhaal.. Woh ek do dukaandar ko "Hi-Hello, Namastey kartey hue chalta jaaraha tha.. Isase pata chalta hai ki yelog kitane sharp minded hain yahaan aake aise settle hogaye maano yahin k log hon kissi ko shakk nahi hoga bc inke uppar.. Khair bajaar paar karke humlog galiyon mein aaye ab woh thoda satark hua idhar Udhar dekhne laga matlab uska ghar kamra yaa jahaan bhi woh rehta hai woh pass aaraha tha ab main ek grocery shop mein he ghuss gaya uske chaltey..dukaandaar jhat se aage aaya..

Shopkeeper - Haan beta kya loge..?

Lekin maine uski taraf dhyaan nahi diya as main dekh raha tha woh guard konsi side turn lega..

Shopk-Beta..? Hello.. Kya loge..? Bologe..?

Main--Condom hai???

Ye sun ussne mujhe aise ghurra maano uski beti ki chut maangli ho maine..

Shopk-N. Nahi ye sab yahaan nahi milta..

Main-Toh bhosdk budhau gand marraane ko baar - 2 puchraha hai jab kaam ki cheej hai he nahi toh..

Woh uss par kuch react kar paata usase pehle main nikal gaya.. Yahaan se right gaya tha woh main right gaya toh bc saamne koi nahi aage galli bhi bandh hogayi thi ek factory k piche waale hisse ne uss galli ko bandh kar rakha tha yaani woh yahin kahin kissi ghar mein gaya hai iss galli mein 3 he ghar they jinmein se 2 toh locked they like kaafi time se aisa lag raha tha.. Bc mere pass gun bhi nahi thi.. Main uss third ghar k side gaya 100% issi mein gaya hoga woh.. Main uss ghar ki taraf badha socha pehle taank jhaank karke situation kaa pata lagaa lun..Lekin jaise he main uss ghar ki khidki k pass jaata mujhe thodi si aahat hui.. Like koi piche tha mere.. Or itana toh seekh chukka hun main aisi situations mein kya karna hai main jhatak se palta toh mere piche woh guard khadda tha or ussne Chaaku se mujhpe waar kiya tha lekin palatne k kaaran uska chaaku mere hath mein laga bhenchod... Right hand par mere chaaku kaa cut laga or main piche ki taraf jaa girra... Lekin main jhatke se utha kyunki ye kaafi tejj tha agar jyaada time lagaata niche toh bhenchod gand Marr jaati... Ab main uske saamne khadda tha uske hath mein tha chaaku.. Or mahool tha 1 vs 1 kaa.. Lets go baby...


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[Iron Man]

Update-216(Won)


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Woh just mere saamne khadda tha attack karne ko ready.. Mujhe defensive khelna tha becuase uske pass chaaku tha or main samjh gaya tha ki usse isko Chalaana ache se aata hai.. Issliye woh meri taraf badha chaaku se waar kiye main bacha easily or fir usko push kiya like dhakka maara.. Mujhe laga isase uska balance bigadega or woh niche girrega tab mujhe mouka millega.. Lekin woh sambhal gaya bhenchod.. Or turant he firse mere uppar jhapta ab iske liye main ready tha nahi actually or abki baar fir main off guard pakkada gaya or abki baar chaaku laga mere left hand par... Fuck... Dono hathon se khoon behna suru hogaya tha or dikkat ye thi ki ye kaafi tejj tha.. Or main isse halke mein le raha tha.. Issliye maine ek kadam piche liya or fir defensive hogaya mujhe bus ek baar woh chaaku hataana tha uske baad main attack mode mein aajaunga lekin jabtak uske pass chaaku hai mujhe Backfoot par rehna padega.. Woh fir mere uppar jhapta caahku ghonpna caaha main hatta fir dusara waar hua main jukha then tesra main fir piche hatta.. Bhenchod kaafi speed thi iske pass.. 48-50 ki age hogi uski easily lekin furti 20-22 ki umar se bhi jyaada thi.. Ye sab training or experience kaa Kamaal tha... Ab ussne apne hath mein chaaku show off k liye ghumaaya or fir meri taraf jhapta.. Bhenchod piche deewar agayi thi issliye main jukh k bacha lekin chaaku se bacha toh ussne Ek laat mere pait mein di jisase main deewar se sattgaya ekdum or ussi time issne firse chaaku se waar kiya maine side hattna caaha lekin puri taraf kamyaab nahi hua or woh chaaku meri shoulder ko cut kargaya.. Ye cut kaafi gehra tha kaafi Dard bhi hua bhenchod lekin main uske or deewar k bich se nikal gaya.. Ab mera dimag jaaga Jab Dard mehsoos hua bhenchod aise toh gand Marr jaani thi kya kiya jaaye kya kiya jaae.. Blood loss kaafi hojaaega aise toh.. Gand Marr jaaegi agar ek do jagah or chaaku lag gaya toh.. Kya karun be dimag..


Ab mere dimag ne sujhaaya mujhe naya idea.. Fuck defensive attacking hojaa..bhenchod gand Marr jaaegi chaaku hai uske pass..
Toh defensive hoke chaaku se konsa bach paa raha hai tu.. Attacking mode mein aa bc defensive mein slow hai usase tu or attacking mein usase kahin jyaada tejj...


Ab risk toh lena he tha.. Ab main fir aaya uske saamne abki baar main uske uppar jhapta uske liye ye unexpected tha issliye ek badhiya saa punch uske jabde par jadd diya maine jisase woh piche ko hogaya..


Main-Wassup bitch..


Ussne munh se khoon thooka or fir meri taraf badha.. Lekin abki baar main tha taiyaar maine ek kadam piche lene ki bajaae aage ussi ki taraf badha or woh mere takk pohanch paata usase pehle maine dee uske pait mein ek kick ab kick lagtey he woh niche girrra.. Or girrtey he maine di uske hath par laat jisase chaaku side mein girra uske or chaaku girrtey he usko niche paddey paddey he 3-4 laat di maine pait mein khadda he naa hone diya bhenchod ko.. Or fir apne juttey se uska galla dabane lagaa full power se bc lekin uska right hand iss bich chaaku takk pohanch gaya or main kuch samjh paata usase pehle woh chaaku ussne mere takkne (ankle) or ghutne (knee) k bichon bich ghonp diya abki baar main chilaaya or piche ko hatt gaya bhenchod chaaku pair mein he reh gaya maine chaaku nikaala jukh k bc gand he Marr gayi or chaaku nikaal k uppar utha he tha ki ussne di ek full powerful laat meri chest mein jiske jorr se main piche ko jaa girra.. Woh meri taraf badha lekin bhool gaya ki chaaku mere pass tha or kuch toh kar nahi paaya main bhenchod faink k maara chaaku or itana tejj maara ki woh react karr paata usase pehle woh chaaku uske shoulder mein jaa ghussa..Ab woh hua distract or main hua khadda ussne chaaku nikaal liya tha or fir hum dono aamne saamne they.. Lekin firse chaaku uske pass tha..


Main usko harra shakta tha no doubt lekin mujhe dikkat thi iske or sathiyon ki issliye main usko fight kartey time pura dhyaan rakh raha tha idhar udhar.. Kyunki uss factory se itani sound aarahi thi ki pairon ki awaaj se nahi pata chalega kab koi piche aake gand maar jaae.. .. Woh fir aaya meri taraf.. Waar kiye main bacha..


Guard - Kaise pata challa tujhe..?


Main-Tumlog jitane shyaane Bantey ho utane shyaane ho nahi.. Jab dusare guard ne bataaya ki ussne tujhe jagaaya jab ussne awaaj suni.. Or tum dono alag - 2 side se gaye tab tu Jaan bujh k uss side se gaya jahaan se deewar tutti hui thi or even tu chilaatey hue gaya aisa konsa guard hai bhenchod jo aise shor Sharaaba kartey hue pakkadega killer ko tumhaare pass walkie talkies they usme hop shakta tha tu silently.... Lekin tera plan ye tha ki teri awaaj woh killer sunne or samjh jaaye ki uski poll khull chukki hai or woh Bhaag jaaye.. Or aisa he hua tune awaaj di ussne sunni woh bhaaga tune usse bhaagte hue dekha bhi kyunki no chance ki tu wahaan pohanchey usase pehle woh bhaag shake time lagta hai uss deewar par Chaddne mein maine dekha hai.. Then aaya Dogs waala part mereko maalum tha Raajan k wahaan kuttey they or woh sab ek sath beemar hojaaein no way.. Maine doctor se baat ki toh ussne bataaya Khaane mein kuch ulat pulat khaaya hai inhone.. Then Mandeep se pata chala mujhe ki last kuch din se kutton ko khilaane ki duty teri thi.. Bus mera shakk yakeen mein badal gaya or main yahaan pohanch gaya..
Ussne fir mere uppar chaaku se Waar kiye maik fir bacha.. Ab main padh gaya tha usko issliye easy tha..


Guard - shyaana hai tu I give you that.. Lekin too bad or shyaanpatti k liye jinda nahi rahega...


Main-Oh don't worry next 2 minutes mein teri dead body yahaan niche paddi hogi and you know what main yaheen paddi rehney dunga shyam takk tabtak galli k kuttey noch-2 k teri saari body khaa jaaenge uske baad call in karunga ki teri gand maine he maari hai..


Guard-Itana ashaan nahi hai AP...


Main-Agree maanana paddega tere pichle 7 friends mein se ek tu he hai jissne mujhe thoda pareshaan kiya hai warna woh toh bhenchod kutton ki mout marre sab k sab..


Ye sun woh fir aage badha chaaku se Waar kiya but main Jaan gaya tha abtak usko issliye jaise he ussne chaaku se Waar kiya maine right hand se uske hath ko rouka or ussi time laat di uske lawde par woh piche ko hatta or turant maine di ek laat uchall k uske thobdey par jo bhayanak lagi or lagtey he woh filmy type ghumke niche girra or niche girrtey he Maine ek k baad ek kai laat uski Ribs or Thobadey par di woh khadda takk na ho paaya chaaku fir uske hath se chutta maine uthaaya toh usse mouka mill gaya or woh mujhe push karke khadda hogaya lekin Turning point yaani woh chaaku mere pass tha..woh thoda Injured tha as bahot saari laatein padi thi usko.. Khair ab woh defensive hua lekin main uski tarah chutiya nahi tha maine pehle left hand se usko punch maarna caaha jisase woh bacha lekin ussi time mere right hand mein jo chaaku tha woh uski chest mein ghonpdiya woh chillaya buri tarah lekin sunaney waala koi tha nahi As already idhar kaafi shor Sharaaba horaha tha.. Maine chaaku nikaala jhatke se toh woh niche jukha or jukhtey he maine di uske thobadey par laat juttey k toe end se jo waakai mein bahot buri lagi usko kyunki force se woh piche ko jaa girra laat exact uski naak k uppar laggi thi or 100% uski naak permanently gayi hogi kyunki uska Saara thobda khoon se bhar gaya tha.. Ab gaya tha woh chaaku or ye waar se woh 50% gaya tha.. Issliye jaise he ussne uthney ki koshish ki maine bhaagke laat maari uski ribs mein football k maafik woh fir ludakata hua jaa girra... Main fir uski taraf bhaaga or bhaagke fir niche paddey paddey k lawde par di laat woh utha or uthtey he fir uski chest mein laat jadd di... Usko uthney he naa diya maine agle 1 minutes mein usko maine laat maar maar k almost behosh kar diya tha.. Ab hillega nahi woh issliye main niche baitha..


Main-Baaki saathi kahaan hain tere..?


Guard -. Gh. Huehhhaahahha..


Woh munh se khoon uggaltey hue hansa jo frankly speaking bahot he waahiyaat tha..


Main-Red John k baare mein nahi puchraha maalum Hai uska nahi pata hoga tujhe.. Mujhe bus ye bata jo tere sath they woh kidhar hai...


Guard-kk.. Kabhi nnnahi pakkadd paaega tu usssko... Woh apna k. Kkaam kardega... Tere saamne eee hoga toh bhi nahi dekh paaega tu usse..


Main-Ek second.. Wait a fucking second... Wait a fucking second... Bc Woh driver tha naa tera sathi..


Ye sunke woh safed hogaya..


Main - Jaa bhosdk ab teri jarurat bhi nahi hai gandmarre...


Ye bolke maine bina uske jawaab kaa wait kiye woh chaalu seedha uske dil k bichon bich ghonp diya...woh fadfadaaya lekin abtak derr ho chuki thi... John k ek or sathi ne dum toda.. Nice nice nice...


Main khadda hua mere pass mera phone nahi tha maine gaadi mein he chhod diya tha jaldbaaji mein or ab mujhe jaldi se gaadi mein pohanchke Ami k pass call karni thi ki woh Van driver he John kaa banda hai jo abhi sab guards ko drop kar raha tha.. Kaise pata chala bataata hun.. Jaise he woh last k 3 guards uttare or main uske pass gaya toh woh bola ye guard iss taraf gaya hai.. Lekin uss bhenchod ko kaise pata main issi ko chase kar raha hun kissi dusare ko nahi jabki maine usko bataaya he nahi tha ki main kiske piche hun.. Tab main iske piche itana busy tha ki uske uppar dhyaan he nahi diya.. Bhenchod gajab baat ye hai ki woh apne dost ko bachaane nahi aaya balki apna mission pura karne gaya pehle ye kaafi khatarnaak cheej hai isase pata chalta hai kitane motivated hain wohlog apne mission k liye..




Khair main usko chhodke wahaan se nikala mere dono hathon mein or shoulder mein cuts they chaaku k uske alaawa mere pair mein chaaku kaa bhaari ghaav tha... Issliye main thoda slow chal raha tha or jaise he main uss sunshaan galli se nikala or bajaar mein aaya toh pura bajaar saaf hochuka tha like dukaanein khulli thi or log baag bhi they lekin galli mein koi nahi tha sab ek side hogaye they dukaanon mein gharon mein galli puri khaali thi sab log mujhe he ghurre jaa rahe they.. tab mujhe mere saamne se koi 15/20 log hathon mein dandey, rod, talwaar wagairaah leke meri taraf aatey dikhe... What the fuck is this shit..wohlog merese thodi durr aake rukkey sab hattey kattey shakal se he gundey lag rahe they bhenchod.. Unmein se ek banda jo ofcourse unka leader he hoga meri taraf aaya.. 6"6 feet kaa woh jaanwar type banda tha uske hath mein talwaar thi...mujhe dekh k woh jaanwar ki tarah hansa..


Main-Who the fuck are you..?


Aadmi-AP AP AP... Tu sachi mein he Paagal Hai haina..? Ahahahaha..


Main-Kya kehna caah raha hai saaf saaf bol be..


Aadmi-Ye jagah konsi hai maalum Hai Tujhe??? Main bataata hun Ye" Gudla" hai yahaan pichle 10 saal se koi police waale ne kadam naa rakha akele or tu khud chala aaya yahaan... Tere bhai ki aukaat naa hui kabhi yahaan aane ki toh tu kya cheej hai Haan..?


Oh Fuck! Bus yahi nikala mere dimag se.. Kyunki abhi toh nahi pehle time mein jab hum school jaatey they tab maine bhai ko kehtey suna tha ki kuch bhi karna Raju k area mei jaao yaa Vithal k area mein lekin kabii bhi galati se bhi "Gudla" mein Matt ghuss Jaana wahaan se nikalna bahot musqill hai specially humaari family ko Yahaan k log alag he hate kartey hain... Fuck not now i dont have time for this shit..


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[A.B.KING]

Oo shit


Bc ye hai 2.0 means,
Yaar khouf sa hojata hai andar jab marchent of death ke bare mein story me zikr hota hai


Too good update bro
Bahut sahi hai bhai itna to dar hona chahiye 2.0 ka

Kya fadu update diya hai bro love it

 

[Rajesh]

Wakai me bahut hi jyada khatarnak flash back tha itna dar ki marne se pehle hi khud ko mara hua Maan Gaye aur shayad wo jante the ki isi me bhalai hai

Aur Devraj to aj bhi us Manzar Ko yaad kar ke dar jata hai nice bo


Superb update bro
Waiting for the next update

 

[rAge K]

Nice update

 

[Shyam Singh]

Mind blowing updates... Merchant of is fucking hell..

 

[Vipul]

that's dope BC literally dope

normal banda itni feel karke na likhta hai ki padhne vale ko bhi feel ho ki baat kiss level pe ho rhi hai aur chal kya rha hai issliye aapki writing skills aur iss kahani ka plot BC out if the world type vibe deta hai
it makes me feel like i just can't handle a day without an update

point to point aaunga BC update ne dimag ko hilaya hai

AP aur group ki fight kaafi shi thi like typically feel hua ki 1.0 level ki gand masti hai yeh aur yeh sardard vahi handle kar skta hai 2.0 hota toh ab tak aadha town phoonk chuka hota

mereko BC phir se galat vibe aa rhi hai AP-ANAA ki life story se ek toh ANAA ko yeh khoon-khraba pasand hai nhi aur bhai sahab AP toh yahan aaya hi KHOON(tapkane HARI ko) karne hai matlab aisa lag rha hai ki yeh jodi aage kaafi jyada conditions pe chalegi but still 15 ghanto se acha hai yeh (vaise uske jaise 15 ghante bhi kahin nhi they) aur AP handle karke ANAA ke pass hi jayega so hopefully yeh jodi kaafi aage chalegi chahen conditions jo bhi ho (writer ke mood pe yeh jodi 100% depend karti hai yeh main condition hai ?)

AMI DOCTOR bhi hai yeh majaak mai bola yan AP serious tha uss time pta nhi no one knows ki AP kab kya aur kiss purpose ke liye baat kahe. isko majaak mai lekar chalen toh chora ja skta hai point lekin vahin seriously sochen toh yehi lgta hai ki AMI trained hai aur trained person first-aid toh janta hi hai vahin kya pta AMI koi trained assassin type doctor hi ho BC (dimag ka bhosda aise hota hai?? )
ek toh AMI ka pura background pta hai nhi issliye kuch bhi guess ho rha hai mujhse so dunno AP ka iss baat se kya matlab tha yan reference tha yan BC kuch mtlb tha bhi ?

right now i am be like (arguing to myself about every freaking point that what the fuck that even supposed to mean)

AP to CHANG be like :- tu kya mast kaam krta hai COMMANDER BHAI

FLASHBACK ka chota sa scene hi BC epic level ka tha toh FLASHBACK toh another world type hi feel hoga iske liye kaafi jyada hyped hai apun vaise bhi

yeh chota sa scene shayad uss time ka hai jab 2.0 apni peak pe hoga kyunki kaafi juada darr dikhaya hai uska aur RON ki jo position thi uske baavjood vo mout ki bhekh mang rha tha yeh baat itna saaf btati hai ki 2.0 full mode mai kaise lgta hai BC no one stand a chance in front of him in that position
DEVRAJ bhul ke bhi iss gali nhi aayega aur vo ladki AYESHA yan jo bhi thi vo bhi uss level pe stand nhi karti ki uss mohalle se bhi gujre toh ab baat hai HARI aur AP ke bich ki LEAGUE ki bakchodi hone se rahi yahan aur inn dono ka support chle jaane se HARI vaise bhi panic hi ho jayega high level baat na hogi matter exactly vaisa hi lagega jaisa AP ne plan kiya tha ki bakchodi HARI be shuru ki aur AP ke hathe chad gya

jaise FLASHBACK mai RON ne kaha ki ant tera bhi aayega aur tab LEAGUE, HOD, ROW, HIGH COMMAND sab uske khilaf honge like AP unke kaam ka nhi rahega toh usse nikal phekenge dodh mai padi makhi ki trah
AJJI L mera 2.0 is freakingly smart he is always dozens of step ahead of anything (hopefully?) toh usko pta hogabki aise time pe usse kya krna hai yan aisi situation kaise aane hi na deni hai wagairah wagairah matlab meri bet 2.0 pe hi hai ki vo dekh lega sab he is always on top (according to me) and always will be
let's see aur kya jhalak milti hai flashback ki milegi bhi yan nhi

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Update-278(The Fear of 2.0)




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Chang or Maine Headphones lagaae abhi normal baat chal rahi thi jisase pata lag raha tha ki Devraj pohanch gaya hai Ayesha kaa wait kar raha hai.. Or kuch minutes baad Ayesha bhi aagayi wahaan par... Un dono ne room khaali karwaaya woh 2 he they wahaan, then hui baat chaalu..

Devraj-Hari se palla jhaadna padega humein...

Ayesha-Kya matlab??

Devraj-Matlab ye ko hum Hari ki Madad nahi karenge ..

Ayesha-Ye kya bol rahe ho Devraj bhai aisa kaise ho shakta Hai humaara partner hai woh.. Humaara kitana nuksaan hoga uske Jaane k baad pata hai??

Devraj-Agar uske sath rahe toh kuch bhi nahi bachega.. Tu samjh nahi rahi hai.. Main teri he bhalaai k liye bol raha hun.. Its all business at the end of the day..

Ayesha-Lekin hua kya or kyun?? I can't understand anything you are saying right now..

Devraj-Usko Log Marra hua he dekhna caahtey hain.. Wohlog jo humaare bus se bahaar hain. Or iss Hari ne leliya iss Haryana waale AP se panga toh un bade logon kaa kaam befaltu mein horaha hai issliye unhone mana kiya hai humein Taang adaane se.. Hari agar nipta lega iss AP se toh bach jaaega or Agar Marr raha Hai toh marrne do..

Ayesha-Aisa kon hai??

Devraj-Naam nahi hai uska bus khouff hai..

Ayesha-Fir bhi kuch toh pata hoga... Kon hai kya caahta hai kya karta hai?? Kya cheej hai..?

Devraj-In sab sawalon k jawaab hain mere pass woh Mout hai, Logon ko maarna caahta hai or Logon ko maarne kaa he kaam karta hai or bahot he bhayaaanak cheej hai woh.. Tujhe ek Kahaani sunaata hun jisase andaaja lag jaaega tujhe kon hai woh..


~~~~FLASHBACK ~~~~




Devraj - (Ayesha Se) Kareeb 1.5 saal pehle ki baat hai main or Ben tab Sara k Indian accounts dekh rahe logon ko protection de rahe they... Ben Sara kaa Left hand hai bahot power hai uske pass issliye Sara ne usse lagaaya tha iss kaam par mere sath bahot jyaada paisa tha or kaafi Accountants lage they uss kaam par or unki safety Ben, Main or Meri team dekh rahe they .... Shinobi clan jo East Asia k top clans mein se ek hai or Nepal, Bhutan, Taiwan, Mayanmar or India mein Sabse jyaada active hai wohlog Ki najar thi Sara k paise par..wohlog sab hadapne ki planning kar rahe they Or Sara kuch kar nahi shakti thi kyunki League or Shinobi clan kaa samjhota hogaya tha usase 7 months pehle.. Ye bus Kehne ko samjhota tha lekin Real mein hua ye ki Shinobi Clan ne kissi bandey se pmaga leliya tha or ussne pura clan hilaa diya tha or uss ek bandey se woh pura clan darr gaya tha or Usse League kaa support caahiye tha uss bandey se bachne k liye issliye unhone League se samjhota kar liya yaani woh log ekdusare k kaam mein taang nahi adaaenge.. Jo Shinobi k liye kaafi faaydemand raha agle 6-7 months takk Shinobi clan k uppar koi attack nahi hua tab unhe laga ki woh banda bhool gaya hai unhe issliye unhe laga ki ab League k support ki kya jarurat issliye woh samjhota toddna caahtey they Sara kaa paisa hadap kar.. Kyunki Shinobi k liye ab khatra koi tha nahi..Issliye Shinobi clan k Co leader Ron or uske kuch Bandon ne mujhe Or Ben ko kidnap karwaaliya kyunki Paise ki location keval Humein he pata thi hum dono ko Bhutan leke gaye woh ek ghar mein.. Lekin Sara is a fucking sick minded woman and you know that... Ussne Ben or Mujhe nikalwaane kaa contract diya ussi bandey ko jisase Shinobi abtak darrta tha "The Merchant of Death" ye naam se bulaatey they sab usko tumne bhi suna hoga ye naam lekin jyaadatar logon ne usse dekha he nahi tha ki kaisa dikhta hai kon hai kahaan se hai kya karta hai.. Bus uska khouff itana tha ki jahaan woh khadda hojaata wahaan gang wars khatam hojaatey they or nahi hotey toh woh gangs ko he khatam kardeta tha or ye nahi koi 20 saal se tha woh business mein naa bus kuch time pehle he aaya tha or jhatke se uss jagah pohanch gaya tha itane kam time mein. Na woh League kaa tha Naa Row kaa naa he HOD kaa naa he HIGH Command kaa.. Lekin jaisa maine kahaa khouff tha uska or ye sab maine bhi suna tha or main jabtak koi cheej khud se dekh naa lun tabtak mujhe vishwaash nahi hota lekin uss din vishwaash hogaya mujhe.. Hum dono ko ek hall mein rakha tha unhone or uss hall mein 7 guards they Shinobi k sabke pass unki world famous talwaarein thi Shinobi clan kabhi goli barood use nahi kartey wohlog apni talwaar chaaku wagairaah Sab he pass rakhtey hain fir bhi woh bahot jyaada effective hain..


Devraj-(Ayesha Se) Shyaam k 5 baje they wohlog sab baithey they humein torture karke thakk gaye they woh issliye rest le rahe they wohlog, or main bhi apne breaking point par aa chuka tha main unhe sab kuch bataane he waala Tha kyunki or nahi sehan kar shakta tha main hum dono tuttey futtey ek kone mein paddey they.. Tab mujhe gate se bahaar kuch cheekein sunaai di bahot he bhayaaanak cheekein.. Woh sablog hue taiyaar apne hathyaar uthaake.. Tab gate khulaa or ek banda bhaagte hue andar aaya uske cehre par khouff main saaf dekh paa raha tha uska chehra safed padd gaya tha or woh puri tarah kaanp raha tha..

Aadmi1-Hheheheehhe... He is hereeeeee...

Ron-What happened??? Who is here???


Aadmi - It's Him..

Devraj - (Ayesha Se) Uss bandey ne koi naam badbadaaya jo mujhe samjh nahi aaya lekin Ron or baaki sab samjh gaye unhe maano kaato toh khoon nahi Ron Shinobi clan kaa Co Leader tha uska khouf itana tha ki pucho Matt lekin uss time main uske cehre mein khouff saaf - 2 dekh paa raha tha woh wahin k wahin jamm gaya tha.. Yahaan takk ki Ben Bhi samjh gaya or woh laga hassne...


Ron-No No no no thisss is not possible oh no no we messed up... Oh no no... Oh God No...

Ben-Ha haha hahaha... Ahahahaha ha... You done fucked up now Ron.. Oh look at you mama's boy is scared now.. Oh so cute you loook when you are scared.. And more cute you'll look when you and everyone you know will be dead..

Ron-shut Up Ben.. Shut Up.. Chup reh..

Ben-Hahahahahahahahahah... You guys are so dead..

Ron-(Chilaake) Listen guys sab kaan khol k suno listen with your ears fucking open.. If you want to save your family and everyone you care about and you want to save there life and you yourself don't want to suffer.. Just surrender get on your knees and die.. Just die...Dont cry, don't fight back, don't beg, don't threaten.. Do not even flinch when you die then it'll be quick... Belive me if you do not listen to me you'll get most painful death there ever will be.. And everyone you know will die.. Suna maine kya kahaa?? Shinobi clan apne sacrifice k liye Jaana jaata hai or apne family or friends k liye aaj tumhe bhi sacrifice dena hai... Tum mein se kuch jaantey hain woh kon hai woh samajh gaye hain kya karna hai lekin jo nahi jaantey maine jo kahaa waise he karna Apne gutano par aajaao or jaise woh andar aae naa he rona, Naa he gidgidaana, Naa he jindagi ki beekh maangana or naa he khuss hona even palak bhi naa jhapkaana apni, bus marrjaana.. Ye karoge toh faayde mein rahoge warna tumhe woh mout millegi ki marrne k baad bhi chain nahi millega or yahi haal hoga tumhaare family or friends kaa.. Usski taraf aankh uthaake dekhna bhi nahi...Issliye just shut up and die.. Just Die..

Devraj-(Ayesha Se) Ron ki awaaj ukhad gayi thi woh Rona caahta tha but ro nahi shakta tha kyunki usse ek example set karna tha apne logon k liye apne clan k liye ki sacrifice kya hota hai.. Mujhe kuch samjh nahi aaraha tha lekin itana samjh gaya tha ki ye jo bhi cheej hai mout se bhi badtar hai.. Tab humein sunaai di pairon ki awaaj jo humaari taraf he aarahi thi..

Ron-He is here...do it now... Bow down..

Or ye sun woh sab k sab ne apne hathyaar daale or sab apne gutano par aae or sir niche jukha liya... Maine dekha usse uss gate se andar aaya woh koi jaanwar nahi tha woh inshaan he tha normal inshaan saree mere jitna he hoga uska koi speciality nahi thi.. Lekin ek cheej jo thi woh thi uski aankhein ussne cehre par mask lagaaya tha kapde kaa lekin usme se uski woh laal surkh aankhein saaf dikh rahi thi....woh ahista-2 aage aaya uske hath mein ek Katana thi koi special katana thi.. ... Woh aage aaya or rukk gaya then hansa woh hansi uss pure hall mein gunji.. Usko aata dekh Ben jo half tutta padda tha woh bhi khadda hoke apne gutano par aagaya tha.. Lekin main nahi aa paaya main pura tutta tha.. Woh aage badha or wahaan side mein rakha paani peeya uthaake.. Woh sab kaanp rahe they.. Ye meri samjh se bahaar tha woh 8 bandey woh akela fir bhi itana darr ye mere dimag se bahaar tha main kuch nahi samjh paa raha tha sabse bada sacrifice hota hai khudki Jaan dedena or yelog wahi kar rahe they lekin kyun aisa kya tha.. Maine suna tha woh sab sach horaha tha meri aankhon k saamne.. Tab uske munh se Pehli baar awaaj nikali aisi awaaj maano mout khud bol rahi ho..

Merchant-What the hell is this Ron?? Oh my god tu bhi itana kaayar nikala oh my god main 1000 km aaya hun iss kaam k liye or ye karega tu ab...

Ron-Just finish us.. Apni pyaas bhuja or nikal le.. Yahaan koi satisfaction nahi milne waala tujhe...

Merchant - Ufff... Sacrifice... Shinobi clan kaa biggest sacrifice... Tu Legend banana caahta hai Haan??? So sad..

Woh unki taraf badha Ron k sath kuch naye log bhi they or woh bhaanp gaya tha unko issliye ussne suruwaat ki puraane members se...


Merchant - Ufff... So you ready..

Guard1-Yess...

Merchant-I don't care...

Ye bol ussne kiya apna pehla war or uss guard ki khopdi dhadd se alag hoke girri.. hum sabki ruhh maano kaanp gayi... Kaanpni he thi agla number unka tha.. Uske baad 3 or gaye.. Unke sareer ko cheerti hui uski kataana chal rahi thi or wohlog khussi khussi Marr rahe they... Maano aasaan mout mill gayi ho.. Ab wahaan 3 guards or Ron khud bache they.. Or jaise he woh 4th banda Marra baaki 3 ki himmat tutt gayi or yahi chaal thi uski ki wohlog kuch karein issliye ussne unhe aakhiri takk rakha tha... Un teeno ne uthaali talwaarein...

Ron-(chilaake) Noooooooooo... Kya kar rahe ho tumlog.. Nooooooo.. Just die just die.. Don't do this... No...

Guard5-Hum aise apni life nahi waste kar shaktey... We will fight.. He is alone for God's shake.. ..

Ron-No Please... Please..

Guard5-Come on bitch you are not a God..

Merchan - I am Not A God I am "DEATH".....

Ron-Please... Stoppppp...


Merchant - OH i love it i love it... I love every second of it dekha Ron Mera satisfaction milgaya naa.. ..


Ron-You are a wicked human being you know that..

Merchant - OH i know..

DEVRAJ-(Ayesha Se) Then hui fight woh 3 woh akela.. Tab dikha mujhe ki pehle waale guards kyun itani khussi - 2 margaye.. Ayesha maine aisi tabaahi kahin nahi dekhi aisa jaanwarpan.. Mout kaa nanga naach.. Wohlog usse touch takk nahi kar paae touch takk nahi Ayesha woh 3 they Shinobi clan k one of the best.. Woh uske aas pass bhi nahi aa paae Ayesha it was insane... Or ussne unke itane tukkadey kiye ki wohlog marrne se pehle saikdon baar marre... Or sabse dardnaak baat ye thi harr tukkadey se nikale Dard ko feel kiya unlog ne marrne se pehle... Woh cheekein woh Dard.... Dekhne waala behosh hojaae..Uss bandey ne harr Dard ko nashe ki tarah feel kiya harr waar ko enjoy kiya ussne... Unko maartey time ek alag he chamak thi uski aankhon Mein maano koi phsyco ho..unko maarke maano koi power mill rahi ho usse... Ron dekhta raha kuch nahi kar paaya woh.. Un teeno ko khatam karke Ron k pass aaya woh..

Merchant - OH i fucking love every second of it.. Mera yahaan aana complete hogaya... Ron Ron Ron tujhe kya laga tha bhool jaaunga tujhe Haan?? Ye sab merese panga lene se pehle sochana tha. Karwaaliya naa naach.. Ab khus.. I don't care main toh bahot khuss hun..

Ron-Just finish me.... Finish meeeeeee....

Merchant - Finish you??? Why?? Tujhe kyun maarun main?? Tujhmein kya special hai bhai jo tujhe maarun???... Ulta mere hath se marrke Clan mein naam hojaaega tera.. Fuck no nahi maarunga tujhe.. Inke anteem sanskaar k liye toh caahiye naa koi.. Iss bojh k sath jinda rehna tu ki tere bandey marwaa diye tune dekhta raha bus Ufff.... Ye kalank rahega tere uppar...


Ron-You know ek din tera bhi aakhiri time aaega or tu bhi aise he marega.. Ye League, HOD, Row or High command sab millke maarenge tujhe ek kuttey ki mout jo tu hai... Tujhe sahara dene waala koi nahi millega... Teri aukaat kya hai?? In sabka paaltu kutta he toh hai tu.. Or ye tujhe bhi maalum Hai.. Jabtak unke kaam aaega tu jinda hai bus..

Merchant - Shut up Ron... Mujhe pata hai ye sab... Tujhe kya lagta hai tu mujhe gussa dilaadega toh tujhe maardunga main nice try Ron nice.. ?? Shut the fuck up... Ben how are you, you peice of fucking shit..?

Ben-Pretty good.. Thanks for the help.. Sara madam khuss hongi tumse...

Merchant - I know.. Lets go.. Have a great Life Ahead Ron..

Continued...

yeh banda kuchh bhi kar sakta hain. AP bhai bina koi vajah kuch nahi bolta aur aise moke par to bilkul bhi nahi isi liye mujhe bhi yahi lagta hain ki AP bhai kuch hint dena chahta ho ya fir assasion training main use first aid and operation karne ki training di gai ho
may be yeh ho sakta hain ki ami ko HC ya league se ajad hone ke liye AP ne help ki ho ya koi ami ko marna chahta jise AP ne bachaya tha aur ab woh AP ki Body Guard ban gayi ho is kahani main kuch bhi ho sakta hain yeh kahani sirf ek aise ladke thi jo clg student bhi nahi tha kyoki woh 12 bhi complete nahi kiya tha aur ab woh jo koi bhi use ulajana nahi chahega aur league wale use apana member bana chahate hain isi se pata chalta hain ki woh kya hain...