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Thriller Waah! Life Ho Toh Aisi - The Merchant Of Death ( COMPLETED )

Which type of ending do you want for this part?


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Aakash.

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AP drives very well, i liked it and everyone else was surprised. Had fun. This time also Nadeem ran away, I did not like it, but all his goods are now in our possession.
I think he is not Nadeem because he does not have the courage and I know who he is but I will not tell because I think I will be proved wrong.
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.

Thank You...

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Mathur

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AWESOME ONE as always

BC kya shi scene chla mja aa gya matlab bina movie ke car scene mai thrill feel hua nice one
NADEEM ka luck sath hai uske i give him that BC varna 2 baar lawda aise bach jata jo bhi ho 3rd time shayad aisa na ho aur hona bhi nhi chahiye
haan l@wde logon ko jhatka kaafi shi lga hoga

obviously wild guess BOVICE ka hi hoga aur uski first appearance ke baad uska yeh 2nd thoda detail scene dekhne ko mile magar BOVICE ko kaise pta ke aaj hi AP jayega PARK jabki aaye huye 2-3 din toh ho hi gaye hain but still vo BOVICE hai uss se thodi puchenge ab g@nd phod ke puchega bhi nhi vo
halanki koi 1.0 ke level ka bhi ho skta hai kyunki iss time AP fully recovered nhi hai toh agar uske samne agar uske level ka yan 2.0 se niche level ka bhi banda aa gya toh vo currently handle na kar payega
pehle maine pucha nhi par ab puch leta hoon BOVICE akele kaam karta hai??? matlab HOSPITAL ke time bhi pura gher rkha tha security ne phir bhi BOVICE aaya aur ek trah se dhamkaya hi tha AP ko aur idhar bhi yehi kaand
HOSPITAL ke time vo akela hi ho skta hai kyunki jiske principle pe chalkar AP ek knife se 5-6 bando ko tapka skta hai vo khud kya nhi kar skta magar iss time shayad koi banda ho BOVICE ka jo uska koi message vagarh dene aaya ho yan DON'T FUCK AROUND bol kar nikal le
jo bhi ho mereko na pta kon hai aur kon nhi magar pta chal jaye toh badi meharbaani hogi dimag ka bhosda ho jata hai BC


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...MATHUR
 
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Gajjab mind blowing f&f level shit was amazing is baar feel aaya f&f wala and then Kya bhund diya dhaabe ko amazing...fuck bc Nadeem fir nikal gayaa naseeb achaa hai bnde but kaafi baj gayi maal pakdaa gayaa....and last mai AP k Gale Pai chaaku bc Itna fast abhi filhaal to ek hi bandaa ho skta hai jisko pal pal ki khbr hogi AP ki to wo hai Bovice and is SD k bich Bovice kuch task leke aaya to ye AP k liye kaafi tough job hoga kyuki AP Bovice ko na bol nhi sktaa or SD ko bhi taal nhi sktaa... Or agar by God sake esa na ho pr agar ye bndaa Dusty nikla kyuki ab tak to Dusty ko Sach ka pataa chal gayaa hoga to by God next level ki aafat aaygi...

Let's see my hota hai waiting for next..
 
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Mere Galle par knife tha jo park ki dim lights mein bhi shine maar raha tha main knife dekhtey he samjh gaya tha ki ye kon hai mere saamne Bovice khadda tha right "The Fear Himself".. Ussne chaaku hataaya toh Main turant uske saamne jukha apne ghutano par aake usko respect di.. Ussne apna hath kiya meri taraf jo maine apne mathe par lagaaya as a sign of showing respect .. Bhenchod mera pura sareer kaanp raha tha uss moment par.. Itane time baad Bovice mere saamne aaya tha hospital mein toh main kuch kar nahi paaya tha.. Lekin yahaan mere saamne darr khud khadda tha..

Bovice - Hello There AP..

Ussne mujhe uthaaya.. Main sir jukha k khadda hua uske saamne..

Main-Hello Bovice..

Bovice-How you been??

Main-Pretty good..

Bovice-Mera hospital aana helpful raha I see..

Main-Yep it was..

Bovice-You are a hard person to find AP..

Main-Really??

Bovice-No you are not AP even a street thug can find and kill you.. Thats how stupid you are..

Main-My bad.. So tum khud yahaan woh bhi subah 5 baje matlab issue koi bada he hoga.. Akele woh bhi..

Bovice - I am never alone AP...

Main-I know.. Who is it?? RANDY???Rose???

Mere ye boltey he Bovice k piche se ek banda aage aaya jo of course Randy tha Randy Bovice kaa sabse close banda hai Bovice kaa right hand hai ye.. And one of the most deadliest person in this entire world.. A fucking Psycho.. Uske baad ek lady bhi aage aai ye thi Rose Bovice ki second sabse close person.. And also one of the most dangerous Female in this entire world..

Randy-Yo it's me it's me Randy bullet Randy bullet..


Randy forcefully aage aake mujhse Galle Milla..

Randy-Wassup bro?? How you been.? All good?? Wanna kill some people??

Main-Chill Randy.. Backup..

Randy - OH fuck you, you boring peice of shit..

Bovice - Randy..

Ye sunke Randy waapis piche gaya..

Rose - AP..

Main-Rose..

Bovice - Now AP what's happening?? What's the progress??

Main-W. W. Woh actually i haven't started working on it..

Bovice - Wait what?? What??

Main-I am trapped boss I don't have time things keep happening...

Bovice - Wait wait wait I don't give a fuck about your petty things. Kya tumne abhi ye kahaa ki tumne abhi kaam suru bhi nahi kiya hai..

Main-Yyyyeah..

Ye suntey he bovice ne apna chaaku fir mere Galle par rakh diya..

Bovice-AP you are pissing me off you know I can't kill you but if you keep this stupid shit up I will fucking kill you..

Main-Chill chill.. Listen to me don't worry main karlunga woh..

Bovice - Woh toh karoge he ofcourse karoge woh toh karna padega.. Warna you know i will..

Main-I know I know the consequences Bovice..

Bovice-But the question is kab karoge??

Main-Soon let me deal with some stuff here first..

Bovice-I don't even know tum yahaan kar kya rahe ho..

Main-I am chasing the guy that tried killing me..

Bovice-Who??

Main-Shehbaj dalal...

Bovice-Who the fuck is That?? Randy??

Randy-I don't have a fucking clue boss.. Pehli baar naam suna hai. .

Main-He is a local gun dealer..

Bovice - What?? What?? So you are telling me ki tum mera kaam chhodke ek local sadak chaap gundey k piche apna time kharaab kar rahe ho..

Main--Yyeyyeyyeah kind of..

Ye suntey he Bovice ne diya ek bhayaaanak punch mere pait mein jiski power itani jyaada thi ki main hawa mein uchala or piche jaake girra.. Bhenchod Saara sareer ka Dard waapis aagaya ek he second mein... Fuck.... Khair main khadda hua..

Bovice-AP AP AP AP what the hell are you doing with your life.. You are chasing people that don't even matter... What happened to you AP.. You know Woh din bahot sad hoga mere liye jab main Tumhaari gardan Kaat dunga..

Main-But He tried killing me I have to take revenge..

Bovice-You talk about revenge?? Are you kidding me..Tumhe pata bhi nahi revenge hota kya hai.. You can't take revenge if you want revenge then let 2.0 come out he will take revenge for you.. Usse pata hai revenge kaise liya jaata hai.. Woh lega asli Revenge...

Main-Nono no..

Bovice-What do you mean no.. You know AP tumhe usse bulaana he hoga aaj nahi toh kal you can't just keep wasting your time on these dumb fucks.. You have bigger fishes to fry.. Agar aise he chalta raha toh tum in sab mein lage rahoge or tumhaare piche sab hojaaega.. Thats why i am saying let him come let him heal you 7 days you give him 7 days of his full potential and i promise he will cure all your issues.. You heard me? 7 din do usse keval 7 din tumhaara harr problem harr issue harr matter woh solve kardega keval 7 din mein... 7 din mein woh aadha India badal dega.. He know everything he lives to rule..

Main--And uss bich kitane log marrenge??

Bovice-Log toh waise bhi marrenge he AP you can't save everyone... People die everyday and they'll keep dying that's how this world works and you can't do shit about that.. So trust me and let him take the charge and he will fix everything.. He will take care of everything you want.. Because that's who he is.. Thats what he do.. You can't control him forever no you can't.. I can see him in your eyes just waiting, waiting to recover and once he recovers AP he will be back and there's nothing you can do to stop him.. So why not just let him come out and take care of everything..

Main-I can't you know i can't.. I can't.. I don't want that much of risk.. You don't worry let me deal with this issue and then I will start working on it..

Bovice-Oh you are so stubborn AP and I hate it.. But you know I like you and I believe you, it doesn't matter who you are 1.0 or 2.0 you do what you say.. So I trust you with this go fix your issues I give you time but don't try to oversmart me AP because first you can't oversmart me and second I will kill you and everyone you care about..

Main-Don't worry i got this..

Bovice-Also Randy help kardega Tumhaari yahaan par..

Main-I don't need help..

Bovice-I didn't ask.. Randy take care of his mess..

Randy-Sure boss.

Bovice - We don't fight weak people AP we just kill them straight away and get over it.. We don't waste our time on these people.. Remember "You Will Never Reach Your destination if you stop to throw stones at every dog that barks"..

Main-I know..

Bovice-AP you know main khud kahin bhi nahi jaata lekin tumhaare liye aaya hun jiske 2 reasons hain 1 care about you 2 I gave you a task and you promised me to complete it so you better.. I know you will but still take this as a fair warning and let him come out agar tum nahi kar shaktey toh main laa shakta hun usse bahaar, he listens to me its no big deal for me...

Main-No I got this.. Belive me boss..

Bovice - OK ok.. Go ahead.. Best of luck AP don't fail me because if you do consequences will take place and you don't want them to take place..

Main-I don't i really don't please trust me..

Bovice-Good luck AP...

Maine jukh k usko respect di.. Woh mudda uske sath sath Rose or Randy mudde..

Randy-I will be around AP... Don't worry thodi si help karunga jyaada ki umeed Matt rakhna, itana time nahi hai mere pass..

Bhenchod woh chaal alag he thi woh mujhe andar takk hilaa rahi thi that's like seeing a ghost walk past by...main Wahin bench par baith gaya or sochne laga kya mujhe Sachmein 2.0 ki help caahiye kya main sachi mein itana weak hogaya hun... I mean ussne sach he kahaa main harr cheej mein itana jyaada time lagaa raha hun.. 2.0 hota toh first day bhopal aatey he sabko thok k waapis.. Lekin dikkat ab Bovice ki thi mujhe nahi laga tha usko itani jaldi hai ab.. Fuck.. Ab karna toh padega he I can't oversmart Bovice no one can.. I have to do that. Main abhi bhi andar se kaanp raha tha pura hill gaya tha main... kyun?? Kyunki bhenchod maine expect nahi kiya tha ki subah 5 baje mujhe Bovice milljaaega yahaan.. Or iss baat ki seriousness kaa andaaja issi se lagaa shaktey ho ki woh khud aagaya mere liye 2 baar matlab he is serious..

Main wahin baitha ye sab sochta raha.. Kareeb 2 ghanton k baad main waapis bungalow par aaya sablog uth chuke they almost mera mood kaafi kharaab hogaya tha lekin still yahaan maine cheerfully behave karna theek samjha ye sab Main chang Ami yaa Abeer ko bhi nahi Bataane waala Tha warna befaltu ki tension Inse millegi.. Pehle isko niptaaa deta hun then Kuch kartey hain... Main room mein aaya nahaaya kapdey change karke waapis bahaar aaya 8 baje.. Sablog breakfast k liye baithey.. Sablog ek sath baithey they naastey k liye. Humlog ne naasta suru kiya he tha ki doorbell baji Jack ne gate khola toh woh ACP or woh inspector andar aae.. Unke cehre dekh kar lag raha tha ki kaafi khuss hain yaani kuch toh bakchodi ki hai in logo ne.. Wohlog andar aae salute walute kiya...Varrsha ne unhe side mein baithney ko bola..

Varsha-Haanji boliye..

ACP-Madam ji 2 kaam aaya tha ek toh kal jitane bhi arrest hue unki files leke dusara socha aaplog ko good bye boldun..

Varsha - Excuse me..

ACP-Main bataata hun actually 2 chance they aapke pass aaplog fail hogaye Nadeem par dhyaan diya aapne Shehbaj kaa kya?? Humein khabar milli hai ki woh gayab hogaya firse Nadeem k sath.. Or woh gayab hogaya matlab ab nahi dhund shaktey aaplog usko caahe pure haryana ki police yaa CBI bulaalo.. Nahi dhund paaoge.. Abtak toh Dubai mein bhi ho shakta Hai woh he hehe..

Anjali-What??

ACP-Ji Haan sahi suna... He is gone so aaplog try kar shaktey hain usko Bhopal mein dhundaney kaa koi issue nahi hai jabtak aaplog caahein lekin again millega nahi.. Mujhe laga tha CBI waale smart hotey hain madam ji high IQ wagairaah wagairaah lekin aapne toh hathon mein se 2 baar Nadeem ko Jaane diya or ACU inke toh charche he itane jyaada they ki pucho Matt kabhi fail nahi hotey wagairaah wagairaah lekin maine kaha tha Bhopal ki hawa bahot hard lagti hai AP sahaab..

Dubai bhenchod Dubai gaya hoga woh wahaan contacts hain uske pehle bhi toh Dubai he bheja tha Surendra ne usse no way bc no fucking way.. Ya yahi chupa hua hai.. Lekin yahaan kahaan itane confidence se bol raha hai ye matlab milna impossible hai uska..

ACP - So ye mission fail raha aaplog kaa ab lagta hai humein he ye case takeover karna padega.. Hehehehe...

Inspector-Ji Janaab.. Hum he CBI or ACU ban jaaenge.

Iss bich Varsha kaa phone baja jo humaare piche rakha tha Sam ne uthake Varsha ko diya he tha ki ussi time uss ACP kaa phone baja.. Dono ne phone uthaya..

Varsha-What?? How?? "

Varsha ne ye Bola or idhar uss ACP ne kuch suna or uske hath se phone he chutt kar niche girr gaya uski shakal aisi hogayi maano abhi Marr jaaega.. Uski aankhein bahaar aaane ko hogayi..

Main-What happened Varsha..??

Varsha-Kissi ne Shehbaj Nadeem or unki puri gang ko maardiya hai..

Main-What the fuck..

Ye bolke Varsha ne phone par baat kartey hue TV on kiya and new channel par lagaaya toh wahaan ki headlines dekh k meri gand fatt gayi, fatt sabki gayi lekin meri bahot jyaada fatti.. "Shehbaj uska bhai or uske kareeb 45-50 gurgon (gundon) ko mout k ghaat utaar diya gaya din dahaadey..

News mein live coverage chal rahi thi wohlog ek bandh factory k bahaar they or wahan local police pohanchi hui thi..

" Sutaron k mutaabik inke alaawa kaafi or log bhi maare gaye hain jinmein kuch prostitutes, Kokta police k 4 hawaldar 1 Sub inspector, Kokta Factory mein kaam karne waale 10 se bhi jyaada log sutaron k mutaabik ye khabar bhi mill rahi hai ki koi bada neta bhi andar mojjud tha jinki death hogayi hai haalanki iski pusti nahi hui hai lekin jinn gaon waalon ne police bulaai unke hissab se andar mout ka nanga naach hua hai kareeb 70 - 80 dead Bodies hain is factory mein Bhopal history ki sabse badi criminal event iss chote se gaon Kokta mein hui hai.. Aap bahaar se bhi dekh shaktey hain yahaan khoon he khoon dikh raha hoga aapko.. Police k mutaabik ye gangwar related lag raha hai.. Aapki jaankaari k liye bataadun ACU ki incharge Anjali Singh ne Bhopal police ko warn kiya tha media k saamne ki agar bhopal police ne jaldi kuch nahi kiya toh aisa kuch ho shakta Hai issliye isse Bhopal police ki naakaamyaabi he maana jaa shakta Hai unhone pata hotey hue bhi ye sab hone diya.. Or kokta police k adhikaari yahaan kiss maksad se aae they ye bhi abhi saaf nahi ho paaya hai.. Ye sab jo bhi hai ek bahot bade racket kaa parda faash hone waala hai bahot logon k naam saamne aane waale hain isme..


Oh my fucking God.. Oh my fucking God.. Bovice strikes ye thi uski thodi si help.. Ussne sabko marwaa diya Criminal ho yaa innocent ek baar suru hone k baad koi nahi bacha hoga.. Randy and his team fucking killed everybody in just 3 hours fucking 3 hours.. This is bad this is fucking bad.. No fucking way he did that. I am fuckeddddd.... This is fucking insane...

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