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Thriller Waah! Life Ho Toh Aisi - The Merchant Of Death ( COMPLETED )

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Sharma

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7 updates...you broke all your previous records....thanks AP Boss...
7 updates padne m time lagega aaj time nikalna padega... Jaldi jaldi m maza nahi aata... Or situation samajh m v to aani chahiye.......
 
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Abhishek Kumar98

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And updates are unbelievable, fantastic and I dont have any words for this 7 updates
 
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Update-381(Trapped)


Humaari team finally uss warehouse k andar enter hui toh ek bahot bada hallway tha jiske end mein bahot saare cabins they, baaki teams niche cabins takk pohanch chuki thi and wohlog cabins clear kar rahe they.. Paul k bandon k pass 1% chance bhi nahi ths kyunki Bovice And Norman dono andar they wohlog ne literally unse aage kaa soch soch k maara unko and maarte he rahe.. Paul k bandey i guess marr chuke they koi ikka dukka bacha hoga maybe lekin Paul kaa koi idea humein abhi nahi tha, or Warehouse literally bahot bada tha toh agar woh yahaan hai toh usse dhundane mein time lagne waala tha.. Cabins k baad underground part tha and tunnels type area bhi tha jo warehouse ko Factory se connect karta tha issliye jagah bahot thi abhi, humlog ne ek ek corner clear karna suru kiya..

Main-Left clear..

Sara-Same here..

Randy - Let's move on..

Sara - Copy..

Warehouse kaa upper part pura clear tha issliye humlog ne underground area clear karna theek samjha, underground mein jyaada kuch tha nahi, ek bada sa hall tha jisme bahot saara industrial samaan tha humne thoroughly sab check kiya toh woh bhi clear tha bus ab bacha last part jo thi woh factory jiska raasta warehouse k andar se he tha, raasta kya ek puri tunnel he thi jisme lights wagairaah lagi thi harr jagah toh view clear tha, tunnel 100-150 meter lambi thi or tunnel k end par ek bada saa gate tha jo open tha and uske through humlog uss factory k andar enter hue, ab factory old thi kaafi old lekin renovation hua tha uska recently, yahaan bhi roshni k naam par keval badi badi lights he thi jisase andar pura ujaala faila tha warna bahaar se koi light nahi aa rahi thi andar.. Factory 2 floors mein divided thi and ek underground floor bhi tha usme..

Main Sara or Randy left waala portion cover kar rahe they, baaki sab ko bhi alag - 2 area milla hua tha jyaada kuch mill nahi raha tha kissi ko kyunki bandey they nahi bacha Paul khud jo yahin kahin tha i can feel it woh 100% yahin tha.. Or meri ye baat sach saabit hui tab jab ekdum se factory ki saari lights ek sath off hui or off hotey he kissi ne mujhe mere saamne se bahot jorr se push kiya jisase main piche hatta or uske turant baad he ek punch laga mere pait mein or punch k just baad ek kick lagi mere pait mein he or ye sab literally seconds mein hua, main or meri gun dono he niche jaake girre maine apni pistol nikalni caahi, lekin hath mein pistol lee he thi maine ki andherre mein ek or kick aake lagi mere hath k uppar or meri pistol bhi jaake girri durr mujhse.. Or main again kuch react kar paata usase pehle kissi ne meri taang pakkadi or mujhe full speed se aage ki taraf khincha main chilaaya dard ki wajah se lekin koi kuch kar paata usase pehle pata nahi kya hua, main niche jaake girra almost 7-8 feet girra hoga main jo awkward tha kyunki main ground floor par tha toh bhenchod girra kaise main, girrne se mere saare sareer ki gand fatti lekin bhenchod main jhatt se utha, mujhe Sara Randy and baakiyon k chilaane ki awaaj aarahi thi jo mere Uppar se aarahi thi.. Or tab mujhe laga ki mere aas pass koi orr bhi hai issliye main ready hua, andherra bahot jyaada tha mujhe literally kuch bhi nahi dikh raha tha issliye main sound ki help se figure out karna caah raha tha ki ho kya raha hai..

Main-Who the fuck are you??

Iska jawaab uss shaks ne diya jisski awaaj main kabhi nahi sunana caahunga Ji haan ye tha Paul..

Paul-Itani jaldi bhool gaye...

Or ussne itana bola tha ki lights on hui or maine Paul ko mere saamne kuch kadam durr khadda paaya or ye dekhtey he main turant piche mudda or waapis bhaaga lekin bhaagtey he rukk gaya kyunki mere saamne ek deewar thi, kanch ki deewar or keval mere saamne he nahi mere 4on taraf he kanch ki deewar thi, actually main ek kanch se bane kamre mein mojjud tha jo chaaron taraf se tightly sealed and locked tha, usme 2 doors they ek uppar jisme se main niche girra tha and ek mere piche jahaan Paul khadda tha or dono he gates filhaal bandh they..

Paul - Itana easy thodi hota hai Boss, yun he thodi koi kissi ki saalon ki mehnat barbaad kardega or badle mein usko kuch bhi nahi hoga, naa boss aise nahi hota, jo kiya hai woh bharrna toh padega he that's how things work around here..

Ye 25×25 kaa ek kaafi bada room tha issliye main bhagke gate k pass aaya or usse bahot jorr se hilaaya lekin uske Uppar koi ashar nahi hua..

Paul - Bulletproof glass hai ye bahaar or andar se keval mere fingerprints se he open hoga, bahaar se rocket launcher bhi lagaalo toh bhi nahi tuttega.. Pata hai ye maine kiske liye banwaya tha?? Specially Norman Bones k liye main chaahta tha ki unko yahaan haraaunga main or unko haraane k baad mujhe mukti mill jaaegi meri life puri hojaaegi main chain se jee shakunga. Tujhe pata hai jab main sone jaata hun toh mujhe bus wahi sab dikhta hai jab Norman ne mujhe harraya tha or meri saalon ki mehnat meri planning mera future sab kuch khatam kardiya tha unhone, i hate that man with a passion, mujhe nahi lagta tha uss shaks se jyaada nafrat main kissi se kar paaunga lekin tab tu aaya Mr Smartass, tune wahi sab kiya jo Norman ne kiya tha mere sath lekin tune Norman se bhi jyaada kiya or mere life k sabse important moment par kiya, meri saari mehnat meri power meri reputation mera bhai jaisa partner sab khatam kardiya tune, or mujhe gussa usase nahi aaya ki tune ye sab kiya na naa naa mujhe gussa iss baat kaa hai ki tune ye sab itani ashaani se karliya, you are special same jaise main special tha or tab maine tumhaare uppar research ki toh pata chala tum kon ho tum special ho obviously, fast ho, smart ho tum woh sab ho jo main tha lekin farak ye hai main better tha bahot jyaada better tumhaara baap he mere level par nahi tha toh tumhe usstak pohanchney mein he saalon lagenge lekin too bad tabtak tum jinda nahi rahoge, kyunki 1 mayaan mein 2 talwaar nahi reh shakti ye tumhe bhi pata hai issliye jab mujhe pata chala ki Mogui ne tumhe bachaane k liye juth bola ki woh mujhe yahin k yahin maar shakta hai toh main samjh gaya ki tum special ho or main woh sab tumhe maarke he achieve kar shakta hun jo main League and Hounds of Death k unn hajaaron agents ko maarke karta.. So AP are you ready??? Ready To Die...

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Nice update
 
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Update-382(Paul Vs Me)


Paul ne apna iraada saaf kardiya tha ki usse mujhe maarna tha kisi bhi keemat par jo bahot buri baat thi.. Sara Norman Bovice and Mogui wahaan aagaye they and baaki bhi aa he rahe they or wohlog ko meri tarah time nahi laga situation samjhne mein wohlog turant he samjh gaye or chilaane lage bahaar se or unki chillaane ki awaaj bahot he slow slow andar aarahi thi..

Mogui - You know i will kill you one way or another but if you touch that kid ill make sure each and every single bone of your body face my wrath.. I'll give you a death more painful then Death itself.. I promise you that..

Paul - Oh Master ye desperation aapki ye desperation he toh mujhe isko maarne par majburr kar rahi hai, aisa kya hai iss ladke mein jo Mogui the great ko iski jaan bachaani hai WOW this is really a shocker.. I Mean mujhe pata hai iska baap tumhara best friend tha lekin keval ek woh he reason toh nahi ho shakta isko bachaane kaa so go ahead tell me why?? Aisa kya hai isme??

Mogui - Oh you hope you never saw that thing.. I promise you tu dekhna nahi caahega..

Paul - Ok then.. So AP let's go.. Remember i dont joke around i dont fool around, you loose you die...

Ye bolke woh mere saamne aaya main still confused tha ki bhenchod issne mujhe aise kaise trap karliya maadarchod isko andherre mein dikhta hai?? Kyunki nightvision wagairaah kuch tha nahi toh kaise?? Or iss bich ek bhayanak laat aake paddi meri chaati mein or main literally half hawa mein jaake piche deewar se takraaya holy fucking shit that hurts.. Main jhat se khadda hua toh Paul mere saamne he khadda tha or usska bhayanak punch aaya meri taraf jisse maine apne hath se roukka..

Paul - Oh you are good.. You are good.. But not that good..

Ye bolke ussne apna ghutna diya mere pait mein jisase maine uska hath chhoda and again piche jaake deewar se takraaya, what the fuck was that.. Bhenchod itani speed aa kahaan se rahi hai maadarchod k andar..

Main firse utha aaram se kyunki abki baar Paul apni jagah par khadda mujhe he bula raha tha ishare se.. Main fir same galati kar raha tha suru mein distract hone ki, bhenchod kitani baar samjhaaya hai ye bakchodi matt kiya kar warna idhar gand marr jaaegi or ye koi aam banda nahi hai ye sabka baap hai kab jaan nikal jaaegi pata bhi nahi chalega.. Issliye focus the fuck up..

Ab maine apna dhyaan waapis uss room mein Paul k uppar lagaaya aaju baaju kaa sab ignore kiya maine jo mere liye kaafi easy tha. Paul meri taraf badha ussne kick maarni caahi mujhe jo ussne aaram se maari, kyunki woh caahta tha main uski kick ko pakkadun or tab woh dusara attack kare bitch i am smart.. Issliye maine uski laat ko apne hath se roukkane ki bajaae ulta uske pair par ek bhayanak kick di jisase woh langadaatey hue piche ko hatta or mujhe dekh k musquraaya..

Paul - Ok OK.. I see you.. I see you..

Woh fir meri taraf badha and abki baar speed se attack kiya ussne, punches maarne caahe mujhe ussne, maine kuch punches dodge kiye lekin bhenchod harr punch k sath uski speed increase horahi thi, jabki hona caahiye iska ulta, what the fuck is going on.. Bhenchod kisase ladd raha hun main..

Ab again mera chutiya dimag hua distract woh bhi half second k liye or ussi time mein usska ek punch laga mere munh k uppar jo kaafi tha ek lagtey he usse milli window and dusara punch bhi laga uska mere munh k uppar or uske sath-2 lagi ek laat mere pait mein jisase main apne ghutano par girra and next kick maari ussne meri chest mein jisase mera sirr takraaya piche deewar se jaake.. Main bhenchod blank hogaya tha ek baar k liye toh, meri aankho k aage andherra chaa gaya tha or iss bich ussne mujhe uthaaya or mera vision waapis aa paata tabtak ussne mere munh or pait mein behisaab punches jadd diye mera pura munh khoon se lathpath tha or mere ribs mein bhi right side bahot jyaada pain horaha tha or ye maadarchod punches maare he jaa raha tha issliye jaise he mera vision waapis aaya maine maara apna ghutna uske pait mein jisase woh piche jaake girra or mujhe finally aaya sans.. This guy is a fucking savage maa chod di maadarchod ne system ki..

Niche girte he woh jump maarke utha or uthtey he ussne kick maari mujhe jo bhenchod maine expect nahi ki thi kyunki bhenchod ye impossible tha aise jump karke khaddey hotey he kick kaise maardi issne, uski kick lagi mere munh k uppar and main girra again piche jaake or woh maadarchod apne pairon par land hua, what the fuck is this..

Paul - You are good but remember I am the best, i am the merchant of death.. I am the face of Death.. You can't win, you don't have a chance..

He is kind of right main almost haar chuka tha jabki isko maine theek se 1 waar bhi nahi kiya tha this is not going to work no way in fucking hell i can defeat him, no way..


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Awesome update bro
 
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Chaudhary47

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1st thanks for 7 updates 😍😍😍😍

Bhai kya review de?
ap ki writing skills already mind blowing he .

Much much thanks for superb story.

Wese bhagwan ko apni tareef sun ne ki kya zroorat 😛😛😛
 
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Badshah Khan

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So is tarah se Merchant of death ko markar AP khud THE MERCHANT OF DEATH bana
I must say shayad Mogui ka kehna sahi hai ki AP can't kill him kyunki jo banda agey wale ko us bhi behtar Jane aise mai usko marna next to impossible.
So ye jo bhi janwar hai AP ke andar ye pakka sure AP ki family ko lekar bohut zyada hi serious hai kyunki ye tabhi hi bahar nikla jab Baat family ki ayi
So once again AP proved that no one ever tries to fuck with his family.
But ab yaha Paul ko to kardiya aise mai jo iske consequences hai usse nipatna abhi baki hai kyunki bovice and gang ne Pehle hi keh diya tha ki Paul ko Jaan se nahi Maar sakte but again Mogui aisa kuch hoga uska Pehle se doubt tha ya Phir yu kahe sure tha to aise mai ane wali situation ke liye bhi kuch na kuch unhone sonch liya hoga.
 
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