Bhai apane to ek taraf se ek update hi de diya kafi sahi kaha haincool AF
BC literally kaafi jyada acha scene tha bhai kya hi bataun ANAA ke sath scene refreshing type hi rehte hain aur kaafi light romance mai chalte hain
like yeh nhi ki BC daal hi do kya hi farak padega na na aisa na hai aur aisa kabhi hua bhi na hai storyline mai ki romantic scene jabardasti daale jayen sab ek dum natural hota hai like feel hota hai ki haan yeh aise hi hona chahiye tha kissi aur trah se nhi
story ke sabhi elements shi jagah pe hote hain that's tha biggest reason that this story is so awesome
well first update kaafi light nikla aur acha bhi ANAA ke sath toh sab acha hi iata hai aur 2nd vale mai hua hai kaand well mujhe nhi lgta ki yeh baat jyada badi hai kyunki sab naturally hua VINAYAK pe shak then uska drug lekar jana aur uski MAA ka ghar aa jana, AP ki college mai fight, vo DRUG(most important thing) and all but dikkat yeh hai ki iss time RANDY babysitting pe hai aur iska comparison CHANG se kiya gya tha i guess matlab yeh halke mai lene vali cheez toh katai na hai aur agar vaise hi guess karun toh RANDY apne baaki kaamon ke sath babysitting bhi kar rha hai jo usse frustrate karegi aur kaam ek hi baar mai nipata jayega jaise BHOPAL mai SD lite without notice nikal diya gya
overall baat yeh hai ki yeh baat badh bhi skti hai (like RANDY ka aana) aur kamm bhi ho skti hai (chances 90-10 due to RANDY)
literally that fight scene was dope BC college fight thi na issliye jo bhi ho brutality 1st part se badh gyi hai AP1.0 ki 2.0 is on GAWD level obviously
well jo bhi tha shi tha aur jo bhi hoga shi hi hoga alag level hi hota hai man sab vaise bhi
well agar puri story 1st part se rewind karun toh AP kitni baar emotional hua hai???
le AP*: i don't have time for that bitch
literally mereko 1 bhi yaad nhi hai jabki ek ek scene story ka chpa pda hai dimag mai well that's the biggest reason of his BAD-ASS attitude and his life style. RIYA ke time bhi frustrate hi tha vo well agar sidha bolu toh AP emotional nhi frustrate hota hai
magar iss update mai AP ko max. 1 raat ke liye toh sochne pe majboor kar hi diya hoga because that 1 word hurt more than a bullet
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...MATHUR
likhte time dhyaan na diyaBhai apane to ek taraf se ek update hi de diya kafi sahi kaha hain
Thanks BhaiGazab in small action se 2.0 aane ke liye ready ho rha hai
Yep side effects toh honge be for sure honge kya honge woh dekhna hai ab.. Keep supporting bhidu AK 24Brilliant update sir ji
Anna is the cutest thing ever in this story uske hone se AP khus ho jaata hai
Aur ye vinayak ki maa aur behen bhukh hadtal pe kyu baith gayi unhe AP ne bol to diya tha ki unhe kuch nahi hone dega wo lekin for bhi sayad koi reason hoga unka.
Aur action was awesome but jo sam ka character hai wo bhut mast hai, sala hasi dila hi deta hai kitna bhi intense movement kyu na ho beshak
Ab AP ne drugs liye hai galti se to iske kuch side effects to jaroor honge aur sayad AP na chahte huye bhi involve ho jaaye is case se
But wo jo vinayak ki maa ne maa wali line boli wo emotional kar gayi log bina soche samjhe bol dete hai
BTW,
Brilliant update as always
Eagerly waiting for the next
Thanks BhaiKatai jahar bossss
Maja agya ek dum
Thanks broYou rock bro
Superb
Dekhtey hain kya hone waala hai keep supporting ChinturockyAb ye Naya drug ka tension Aagaya. Kya 2.0 ki waapsi hone wali hai?
Maza toh aaega he for sure aaega keep supporting bhai Geniuscool man abhi ye last me frustration wala padhke laga ke kahin 2.0 to na jaga rahe ho
lakin abhi bakchodi me time hai thoda isliye jaane do khair life normal type ki to na ho sakti lekin anaa ka scene sahi tha
vinayak ki family ka scene bhi alag lag raha meko bc lakin AP ke gate par hain to safe hi rahenge..
abhi jo gussa aaya use dekh ke laga ke AP case me involve na ho to case isme ho jata hai
bhale hi chhota lage lakin clg ka mamla hai bc chhod bhi na sakta abhi maza aane wala hai
Thanks bhaiSuper update hai Bhai
Thanks Bhai Shyam SinghSuperb update..
First update k last me to emotional hi kr diya.. Ye ek word hi aisa h..
Second one kand krne ko mil hi gaya AP ko.. Ab ye drugs ka effect itni hi der k liye tha ya ye aur bhi jyada asar dekrega...
Waiting for next update
Thanks bhaisuperb update
Thanks bhai#Fee_lyings fab_ousloust
Dekhtey hain kya plan hai. Keep supporting bhidu Iron ManAwesome Super Fantastic Mind Blowing Dhanshu Update.
Surendra aur Red jon ka ap se ladai ka hashr dekhne ke baad koi Drugs ka dhanda karnewala Ap ke hi college me to jaan bujhkar Dhandha nahi karega . Ye to lagta hai ki 2.0 ko jagane ka paln hai ab AP ke sharir me drugs ja chuka hai eska koi asar hoga uspe ?
Anna ke sath seens cute aur Romantic the kafi ♥
Thanks BhaiSuperb update
Thanks Bhai..Behtreen update hai mitr.
Thanks.Awesome update bhai
ThanksMast updates bro keep updating
Thanks Bhai Black waterJabardast update bhai
Anaa ke sath time spend se lekar vinayak family ke sath batchit and last me dhamakedar fight maja aagya . AP ke andar jo drugs gaya hai uska side effect kya problem lekar aayega dekhna padega
Thanks bhaiAwesome update bhai
Excellent
Thanks BhiduBole to sb le li bidhu.
Mazza aagya update pdh ke.
Thanks BhaiWonderful update hai dost.
Uski entry toh hogi he bhai for sure hogi thoda time lagega but hogi toh sahi keep Supporting Rayder555Accha update tha bhai
Lakin ek baat kahna chahunga app ne ye part marchent of death ke liye suru kiya tha jo abhi tak dikha nhi hai waise kahani acchi ja rahi hai
Lakin bhai ab 2.0 ko dekna hai
Thanks bhidu Aakash. Keep SupportingWhenever AP and Ananya are close to each other, both should always be happy like this, seeing a very good feeling. Vinayak is a good family boy, so why is he doing such a thing. The nature of AP seems to me slightly altered. ? The fight scene was horrific, enjoyed, raged over by drugs. Well, now let's see what happens due to drugs.
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.
Thank You...
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Thanks bhaiBoth hi ????
Both hi ??????????❤ vadiya update Hy 2noAP bahi
Thanks BhiduIt's an amazing Story.. Keep it continue.. Lovely update...
Thanks bhai NaikGajab ka update bhai
Anna wala scene bahot achcha tha
Fight wala scene bahot zaberdast tha
Dekhte aage kia hota h
Thanks for lovely update
Thanks bhaiNice
Thanks bhaiSuperb update Bhai
Dekhtey hain bhai Boivce kya karega thanks for the support bhidu Naughty LoverIt is what it is...ye bahot chota sentence hai pr isko accept krna ye bahot badi cheez...
abhi filhaal shayad
vinayak ko kuch hoga nahi..pr Bovice ne kisi bhi kaam Mai haath nhi daalna bola tha usko pataa chalaa AP is handling behind all other mind to wo I guess vinayak ko thok hi na de... obviously Bovice khud aise tuche logo k liye kuch nahi krega...but who knows kesa sanki bandaa hai ye...let's hope for the best ki Vinayak is sab jhanjhat maari se nikal jaaye...
Waiting for next...
Thanks Bhai.Ultimate update bro maza aa gaya
Waiting for the next update bro
Yep possible hai ye bovice kaa plan ho shakta Hai but again woh local gundon ko kyun use karega iss kaam mein uske liye toh ye sab log exist bhi nahi kartey.. But again kuch bhi ho shakta hai so lets wait and watch. Keep Supporting bhai The ThinkerYe sab bovice ka kiya dhara ho skta h kyuki uska kaam bada h.... Jab vo itna strong h to AP hi kyu chahiye usko....kyuki usko pata h 2.0 k baare me... Use bahar laane k liye usne ye sab game khela ho sakta h.... Bhale hi bovice strong h khatarnaak h... Lekin 2.0 ki speed aur skills.... Iska andaja abhi tak lagaya nhi jaa skta... Jab bhi aata h pehle se jyada Tawatqar hoke aata h.... To finally..... 2.0 is coming.... And will do that ... Intjaar nayi update ka....
Thanks bhaiNice update
Thanks Bhidufinally got time to comment in this beautiful story sir
story is awesome is always sir
waiting for next update
yours john................................................................
Thanks Bhai..Zabardast update
Thanks Bhai VipulSala jab drug ghusane ki vajah se AP frustrate hua to mujhe laga 2.0 ka light version aa chuka hain waiting for new update
j baat thanks For the Update oh sorry review Mathur keep supporting as always bhidu..cool AF
BC literally kaafi jyada acha scene tha bhai kya hi bataun ANAA ke sath scene refreshing type hi rehte hain aur kaafi light romance mai chalte hain
like yeh nhi ki BC daal hi do kya hi farak padega na na aisa na hai aur aisa kabhi hua bhi na hai storyline mai ki romantic scene jabardasti daale jayen sab ek dum natural hota hai like feel hota hai ki haan yeh aise hi hona chahiye tha kissi aur trah se nhi
story ke sabhi elements shi jagah pe hote hain that's tha biggest reason that this story is so awesome
well first update kaafi light nikla aur acha bhi ANAA ke sath toh sab acha hi jata hai aur 2nd vale mai hua hai kaand well mujhe nhi lgta ki yeh baat jyada badi hai kyunki sab naturally hua VINAYAK pe shak then uska drug lekar jana aur uski MAA ka ghar aa jana, AP ki college mai fight, vo DRUG(most important thing) and all but dikkat yeh hai ki iss time RANDY babysitting pe hai aur iska comparison CHANG se kiya gya tha i guess matlab yeh halke mai lene vali cheez toh katai na hai aur agar vaise hi guess karun toh RANDY apne baaki kaamon ke sath babysitting bhi kar rha hai jo usse frustrate karegi (uska character 2.0 jitna nhi but kamm sanki bhi nhi lga mujhe BC) aur kaam ek hi baar mai nipata jayega jaise BHOPAL mai SD lite without notice nikal diya gya
overall baat yeh hai ki yeh baat badh bhi skti hai (like RANDY ka aana) aur kamm bhi ho skti hai (chances 90-10 due to RANDY)
literally that fight scene was dope BC college fight thi na issliye jo bhi ho brutality 1st part se badh gyi hai AP1.0 ki 2.0 is on GAWD level obviously
well jo bhi tha shi tha aur jo bhi hoga shi hi hoga alag level hi hota hai man sab vaise bhi
well agar puri story 1st part se rewind karun toh AP kitni baar emotional hua hai???
le AP*: i don't have time for that bitch
literally mereko 1 bhi yaad nhi hai jabki ek ek scene story ka chpa pda hai dimag mai (hoga toh bta dena yaad toh rahega) well that's the biggest reason of his BAD-ASS attitude and his life style. RIYA ke time bhi frustrate hi tha vo well agar sidha bolu toh AP emotional nhi frustrate hota hai
magar iss update mai AP ko max. 1 raat ke liye toh sochne pe majboor kar hi diya hoga because that 1 word hurt more than a bullet
KEEP WRITING
KEEP UPDATING
YOUR REGULAR READER
...MATHUR
Wow amazing brilliant update AP bhai tophir koi kand hone wala AP ke sngUpdate-34(What The Fuck Just Happened???)
Sam-Chill be maarna bandh kar behonsh hai woh..
Maine waapis jaake uss bandey ko pakkada or usse ghasitke bahaar leke aaya.. Woh bc almost behonsh hone ko tha..
Main-Idhar dekh bhosdk.. Mere sawaal kaa jawaab dey..
Aadmi-kkkkkya...?
Sam-Yahi ki Locker mein kya dhund raha tha..
Main-Nahi Ye drug fainkney kaa idea kiska tha.. Locker mein toh drugs dhund raha tha ye jo mill gaye hain..
Aadmi-Mmmujhe nahi maalum...
Maine usse uthaaya or fir kai punch uske khoon mein latpath thobdey par diye. "Mujhe nahi maalum" bola issne isase Atleast ye toh confirm hogaya ki 100 % woh already planned tha yaani achaanak se waise he nahi faink diya tha issne..
Main-Ab maalum chala???
Aadmi-N.... Nm...
Main thoda piche se ek lohe ki rod uthaake laaya jo bahot choti thi but kaafi thi.. Maine Uska hath pakkada or ussi par rod se maarne laga woh chilaaya idhar aas pass koi tha nahi abhi toh koi nahi aane waala Tha.. Lekin iss bich Abhi gang wahaan aagayi Jo humein pehle Mille they woh sab.. Abhi Ashish Anaa wagairaah Sab woh actually Anjali Ami or Jiya ko leke aae they...
Main-Haanji kuch yaad aaya..
Aadmi-Mmm. Ujhe...
Anjali-Oh my god already khatam kardiya...
Main-Bolega be... Munh khol..
Anjali-Don't worry main Thane mein puchlungi abhi hospital Jaane dey usko..
Main-5 seconds..
Maine woh rod fir uthaai he thi ki woh bol padda..
Aadmi-Sartaaajjjjjj kkk bhai ne...
Main - Ye kon??
Anjali-Apne district mein drug business kaa sabse uppar kaa banda hai Sartaaj.. Uska chota bhai and partner in crime hai Suresh..
Aadmi - Kal yahaan college mein dekha tttha usssssne tujhe kkkkaisse tu darrr gaya tha thodeyyyyyy se drugs se toh usssnnnee kaha aaaaj tu bichmeinnnn aaae toh yahi karun..
Main-Smart Haan.. Vinayak kahaan hai??
Aadmi-Ussssi k passs... Kahaan nnnahi maalum mujhe...
Tabtak ambulance aagayi wahaan or unhe daala gaya ambulance mein.. Uske locker mein se jo drugs Mille woh Anjali ne evidence mein liye..
Anjali-You ok??
Main-Yeah..
Main andar aaya lockers ki side wahaan munh dhoya jisase drugs uttare mere chehre se.. Uske alaawa logon kaa blood jo laga tha woh bhi saaf kiya maine.. Main bahot he ajeeb feel kar raha tha.. I mean for sure drugs mere mind k bahot bure lawde lagaatey hain.. Ye toh kam they or quality low thi inki warna wahi hota jo Delhi mein hua tha behosh wagairaah hota.. Naa caahtey hue bhi main involve hogaya but again ye self defense tha or ye count nahi hota.. Or Agar hota bhi hai toh bhi Randy unhe maardey toh bhi I don't give a fuck.. Lekin issue ye tha ab ye personal tha Sartaaj kaa bhai woh Suresh yaa jo bhi hai ussne kaafi galat kadam uthaaliya tha ye jaankaari thodi si galat paraapat hogayi thi usko.. Iss jaankaari k sath jinda toh nahi reh shakta tha woh nope not at all.. He needs to die he will die..
"AP"....???
Main apne khayalon se bahaar Aaya toh mere saamne Anaa khaddi thi...
Main-Yeah??
Anaa-You ok??
Main-Yeah.. I am good..
Anaa-What happened??
Main-Yeah.. Yep..
Anaa-AP??
Main-Yep??
Anaa-Kya yeah yep...? Theek ho tum..
Main-Yep.. Totally.. I am good kuch bhi toh nahi hua..
Anaa-Your eyes are so red oh my god..
Main-Yeah..
Anaa-Stop saying a single word AP kuch bolo..
Main sachi mein confused tha ki ho kya raha hai or main bol kya raha tha bc almost ye lagaalo daru k nashe mein tha main lekin bahot jyaada daru.. Main even bol bhi ek Nashedi ki tarah raha tha..
Main-Mujhe kaam Hai thoda I will be with you shortly..
Main uska jawaab sune bina canteen ki side aaya bc mere pair kaanp rele they main musqill se canteen mein aaya or seedha guffa mein ghussa.. Or andar jaatey he wahaan tuttey bed per Girr padda.. Bc sab kuch ghum raha tha gand he fatt gayi thi bc chakkar khaa khaa k.. Iss bich Laxman andar aaya ussne dekha tha mujhe andar aatey hue..
Laxman-Kya laaun gurudev..??
Main-Dustbin..
Laxman-Kya??
Main-Abe dustbin laa ulti karni hai jaldi bc..
Laxman bhaagke dustbin leke aaya lekin ulti nahi girri.. Main bed par baith gaya sir pakkad k Laxman mere sir ki malish karne laga.. or maine badi he musqill se Sam ko call kiya..
Main-Kahaan hai??
Sam-Idhadrrr...
Main-Jaldi guffa mein aajaao jaldi..
Call disconnected...
Main-Laxman maathey par malish kar toh..
Ashish - AP..??
Main-tu yahaan kya kar raha hai bhosdk..
Ashish - Woh Anaa ne bola check karun tujhe..
Main-Bhaag bhosdk..
Ashish-Theek hai tu??
Main-Haan be gandu Bhaag ab or munh khola toh gand fod dunga maar maar k teri... Bhakk..
Ashish gaya wahaan se or Sam Ravi Rohit enter hue.. Or unke enter hotey he maine ki uss dustbin mein ulti.. Haash bojh halka hogaya maano bc.. Gand fatt gayi thi chakkar khaa khaa k..
Sam Paani ki bottle laaya maine hath munh dhoye dustbin bandh kiya or Laxman usse legaya thikaane lagaaney..
Sam-Theek haibe??
Main-Abhi Haan 5 minute pehle nahi tha bc kahaan gand marwaane lag gaye they.. Bc dekha thaa naa drugs diye they mereko or tumhe maalum Hai jab mere andar drugs hon tab kabhi akela nahi chhodana mujhe.. Jabtak main naa kahun tabtak toh Atleast kabhi nahi..
Sam-Sorry men..
Main-fuck bc gand he Marr gayi thi.. Laxman I love you #NoHomo...
Main khadda hoke bahaar aaya toh puri Abhi gang ki najaar humaare gate par thi..
Main - Kya hua be??
Abhi - Theek ho tum???
Main-Yeah kyun??
Abhi-Andar se vomiting ki sound aarahi thi?? Kya hua??
Main-Woh Laxman tha usko hua tha kuch ab theek hai don't worry..
Ashish - pakka??
Main-Munh fod dunga main agar doobara Same question pucha toh..Oye Sam aaya main..
Ye bolke main bahaar aaya or Chang ko call kiya.. Mujhe badla caahiye tha or uss Sartaaj k bhai kaa marrna jaruri tha main yaa Chang kar nahi shaktey they kuch issliye Chang k through mereko Randy takk message pohanchaana tha..
Chang--Yep boss..
Main--Randy ko inform kar ki mujhe contact kare right now..
Chang-Right now?? Thoda musqill hoga inform kardunga main usko..
Main-Right now i said.. Suna?? RIGHT NOWWWWW..
Chang-OK ok chill.. Itana gussa kissliye.
Main-Koi issue hai hum dono kuch kar nahi shaktey issliye usko jaldi bol call kare mujhe..
Chang-OK main dekhta hun kya kiya jaa shakta Hai.. Hopefully abhi available hoga woh.
Call disconnected...
Bhenchod drugs kaa ashar kam jarur hua tha but still bahot buri haalat thi meri.. Fuck.. Main waapis canteen mein aaya pehle toh cold drink pee, Tab mera phone baja jo private number se tha...
Main-Hello..
Randy - Yeah.. Chang informed me. You wanted to talk??
Main - Yeah.. Ek issue hai..
Randy-Woh drug case jo kal suru hua??
Main-Yeah..
Randy-Ignore tumhaari police dekh rahi hai usse.. Dont get involved..
Main-Oh you are not getting my point here.. I want you to take care of that..
Randy-AP main koi local gunda nahi hun jo aise tuche logon k piche ghumta rahun.. You are hurting my ego.. Yelog exist bhi nahi kartey mere liye.. Tumhaari team dekh rahi hai dekhne do..
Main-Randy you need to listen to me..
Randy - Bro main ye nahi karne waala no way or naa he tum karne waale.. They are fucking nobody...
Main-Yeah and they Know how to slow me down..
Randy - Wait what???
Main-Yeah that's why...
Randy-Wait wait wait wait kya kaha tumne?? Unhe pata hai??
Main-Haan guess kiya ussne..he saw me reacting to drugs.
Randy-Hold on.. So tum keh rahe ho ki ek local gunde ko ye maalum Hai??
Main-Yeah.. Issliye I give you 2 choices give me drugs or kill thay guy.
Randy -This is nuts.. What the fuck.. Dont worry i got this.. You don't worry i got you.. You are not getting any drugs you hear me do not take any drugs I will kill him.. Stay the fuck away from drugs.
Main-Thank you.. Or Haan jo ladka hai woh Kal waala woh jinda rehna caahiye.. Rest wahaan kon hai kyun hai kaise hai I don't give a fuck.. Kill them all.. And there deaths should be horrifying..
Randy-Oh that's what I am talking about that's the AP I like.. I got you bro don't you stress it.. Just tune in the news.. I got you...
Main-Great..Thanks..
Call disconnected..
Haash finally...Woh Sab dekhlega ab thank god.. Main waapis canteen mein aaya Sam Ravi ko bulaaya bc mujhe nind aarahi thi or mereko ghar Jaake sona tha bc taaki ye ashar kam ho..fuck..Issliye Humlog Haweli aae koi nahi tha wahaan Babhi or Meenu bahaar gayi thi baaki sab kaam par issliye main seedha room mein aake pehle toh nahaaya then bc bed par Girr padda bc sab kuch ghum raha tha wahaan fuck.. Mereko 10 minutes mein nind aagayi but woh 10 minutes mein main bc Paagal hone ko tha almost.. Subah 10 baje toh firse sogaya main bc or meri nind khuli phone call se maine phone dekha toh private number tha.. Ye kon aagaya bhenchod..
Main-Hello..
Saamne se Randy ki awaaj aai..
Randy-Its done..
Main-Done what??
Randy - kya what... Jo bola tha tumne..
Main-Wait kya?? Maine kisko kya bola tha??
Randy - What the fuck I killed that Sartaaj his family his gang everybody..
Main-Sartaaj kon???
Randy - Bro drugs par hai kya?? Tumne literally mujhe call karke kahaa tha ki Sartaaj or uske bhai ko maardun kyunki usse tumhe Roukaney kaa tareeka maalum Hai or uss ladke ko bachaalun....
Main-What the fuck are you even talking about Randy.. I don't have a fucking clue what the fuck is going on..
Randy-You are fucking nuts dude fucking nuts.. I stopped all my tasks to do your task and that's how you thank me.. This is bullshit..I Killed a whole drug racket for you..
Main-Drugs.. Drugs.. Wait Drugs...
Ye words sunke mereko laga ek jhatka wait wait wait.. Kya hua tha?? Randy kya bol raha hai maine call kiya??? No way.. Drugs??? Oh wait wait wait.. I was in college wahaan ladaai hui uss bich kissi ne drugs daale mere uppar then kya hua?? What the fuck?? Main ghar kaise aaya.. What the fuck am I missing.. Oh i remember i remember.. Mujhe halka saa yaad aaya maine Chang ko call karke bola tha.. Then Randy ko task diya tha.. No fucking way.. Maine Randy ko task diya?? Itana bada risk liya maine no fucking way..Kya tha woh?? Blackout?, Intoxication?? My Brain?? A Glimpse of 2.0??? No way it can't be 2.0.. 2.0 nahi ho shakta woh kissi ko kaam karne kaa nahi bolta woh khud jaake maarta usse.. Toh kya tha?? What the fuck was that..
Randy- you dead?? Hello.???
Main-Yeah yeah i am here.. I don't remember what happened..
Randy - Oh my god.. Drugs liye they??
Main - Liye nahi they mere uppar daale gaye they.. Toh Haan..
Randy-Oh Hell yeah iska matlab my dude 2.0 is coming back.. Thats what happens when he starts to wake up.. Oh it'll be fun now..
Main-No he is not coming back.. That was not 2. 0 he doesn't need someone's help he just does things on his own... That was something else some fucked up shit by my brain...
Continued...