Romance Waqt.....

[gautamking19]

Waise bat yah v hai paridhi ke liye Pawan ne jo kiya use wo Ahsan man sakti hai jab milegi to use sukriya kah degi are Pawan ke prati kitna v lagaw ho pyar to nahi kar sakti hai to akhir garib ya saitan hi avinash rich hai handsome hai

 

[gautamking19]

Mujhe ab lag raha hai Pavan or avinash alag alag hai kuch bada game khela ja raha hai waise aapki story se ye pakka ho gaya ki ladki ka dil se kav sochti hi nahi hai

 

[GaBBaR is BacK]

Chalo maine pahle hi bola tha avinash hi Pavan hai lekin ek bat hai paridhi ko to nahi pata tha wo Pawan se v pyar karti thi ab avinash se v ye to galat hai ab aap justify karoge dono ek hi hai is liye dil ki paridhi ne suni lekin ek bar socho kuch time ke liye ye v nahi socha Pavan ke bare me mujhe laga avinash najdik ayega paridhi ke to paridhi ko ahsas hoga ki wo pawav se pyar karti hai lekin ulta yaha paridhi hi propose kar rahi hai

Aap sahi the ki Avinash hi Pavan ho sakata hai...

Lekin phir bhi main apni baat pe ada rahunga ki.......
???

Bahut kuch suspence hai ???.... tabhi to kaha tha kiska patta katega ye badi majedaar wali baat hai....

For more suspence...

Refer this post of Akki ❸❸❸ bhai... on reply of your agar Avinash hi Pavan hai to.....
???

To phir vo dayri us motorcycle ke pass kaha se ayi

Akki ❸❸❸ bhai ki baat me bhi dum hai...

Aur jab motercycle wale ki baat aa rahi hai to sare suspence ko aur bhi krispi banata hu...

Maine post me likha tha ki jab Paridhi uss motercycle wale se uss raat ko milna huva tha tab Paridhi ko uss motercycle wale ki aankhe aur aawaj jani pahechani lag rahi thi...

Agar vo motercycle wala Pavan/Avinash hota to jab Avinash party wali night pe paheli baar Paridhi se mila tabhi uski aankho aur aawaj se Paridhi ko pahechan jana chahiye tha ki Avinash hi wo motercycle wala tha.. lekin kya esa huva?...

ye sochane wali baat hai....

 

[GaBBaR is BacK]

Mujhe ab lag raha hai Pavan or avinash alag alag hai kuch bada game khela ja raha hai waise aapki story se ye pakka ho gaya ki ladki ka dil se kav sochti hi nahi hai

gautamking19 bhai yahi to story ka maja hai...

har aek update me Waqt ka bahut shandar khel chal raha hai.... aurr main kai baar likh bhi chuka hu ki Waqt ka ye khel sab ki jindagiya badal dega...

aur jab Jigsaw puzzle ki tarah sare hisse judege to jo tasvir samane aayegi vo sach me fabulous/awesome/lajawab hogi....

 

[GaBBaR is BacK]

Chalo maine pahle hi bola tha avinash hi Pavan hai lekin ek bat hai paridhi ko to nahi pata tha wo Pawan se v pyar karti thi ab avinash se v ye to galat hai ab aap justify karoge dono ek hi hai is liye dil ki paridhi ne suni lekin ek bar socho kuch time ke liye ye v nahi socha Pavan ke bare me mujhe laga avinash najdik ayega paridhi ke to paridhi ko ahsas hoga ki wo pawav se pyar karti hai lekin ulta yaha paridhi hi propose kar rahi hai

Paridhi ka Pavan aur Avinash ke sath ke riste ko main kisi bhi tarah se ese justify nahi karunga ki Pavan aur Avinash aek hai isliye Paridhi ka Pavan se pyaar karna ya Avinash se pyaar karna aek hi baat hai....

Lekin Iss tarah se kahunga ki kahi bhi Paridhi ka Pavan ke liye pyaar hona esa specific mene kahi nahi likha.... likha hai to bus dil ke emotions jo dono ke bich pyaar panap ne ke kafi karib ke hai... lekin ye emotions ahesan ki wajah se bhi ho sakate hai....

Aur jesa mene likha tha ki jab se Paridhi ka najariya Avinash ke liye badala hai tab se unn dono ke bich ki najadikiya badhi hai... lekin phir bhi jesa mene update me likha hai ki Paridhi propose karte Waqt "Muje lagat hai..." inn specific words ka istemal kar rahi thi... vo abhi tak sure nahi hai... kyu ki shayad ye proposal dil se nikla hi nahi tha... shayad ye pyaar nahi sirf attraction ho....

Main story connection me sab kuch clear karta rahunga.... tab tak Waqt apna khel khelta rahega...

 

[GaBBaR is BacK]

Waise bat yah v hai paridhi ke liye Pawan ne jo kiya use wo Ahsan man sakti hai jab milegi to use sukriya kah degi are Pawan ke prati kitna v lagaw ho pyar to nahi kar sakti hai to akhir garib ya saitan hi avinash rich hai handsome hai

Paridhi aur Pavan ke bich pyaar bilkul panap sakata hai kyu ki dil ke emotions sachhe the.... kabhi to Paridhi apne dil ki sunegi tab dekhate hai ki garib bada hai ya amir....

 

[Akki ❸❸❸]

Aap sahi the ki Avinash hi Pavan ho sakata hai...

Lekin phir bhi main apni baat pe ada rahunga ki.......
???




For more suspence...

Refer this post of Akki ❸❸❸ bhai... on reply of your agar Avinash hi Pavan hai to.....
???

Akki ❸❸❸ bhai ki baat me bhi dum hai...

Aur jab motercycle wale ki baat aa rahi hai to sare suspence ko aur bhi krispi banata hu...

Maine post me likha tha ki jab Paridhi uss motercycle wale se uss raat ko milna huva tha tab Paridhi ko uss motercycle wale ki aankhe aur aawaj jani pahechani lag rahi thi...

Agar vo motercycle wala Pavan/Avinash hota to jab Avinash party wali night pe paheli baar Paridhi se mila tabhi uski aankho aur aawaj se Paridhi ko pahechan jana chahiye tha ki Avinash hi wo motercycle wala tha.. lekin kya esa huva?...

ye sochane wali baat hai....

 

[GaBBaR is BacK]

Bhai aap ka likhne ka tarika sahi hi mahi fabulous story main suspense bana rhahta h aage Kya hoga musjhe ismain koi bhi problem nahi h aur agar story aap hamare man see likhne lage to koi fayda hi nahi hoga

Thanks Arjun Singh 72 bhai....

Mera bas ye kahena tha ki meri taraf se agar kahi truti rah gayi hai to main use sudhar lu jiss se kahani aur bhi achhi ban sake.... main bas readers ke point of view se story ko janana chahata tha...

Lekin jesa ki aapne kaha ki story readers ke man ke hisab se likhane par koi fayada nahi bilkul sahi kaha aapne... aur isliye main apne hisab se hi update chote bade deta hu na ki readers ke hisab se... aur unn updates me breaks bhi apne hisab se hi lagata hu...

 

[GaBBaR is BacK]

Main kahani ka suspence to nahi bata sakata na...

isliye atarangi viewpoint hi sahi hai jo suspence banaye rakhane ke sath me suspence ko krispi bhi banaye...

 

[GaBBaR is BacK]

Awesome fabulous update
Kya super turn laye h agar Avinash Pawan h to Pawan Avinash kaise bana aur Kya hua tha to finally paridhi ko realized ho hi gaya h he is in love but i after that he is little bit confused
Ab to paridhi ka reaction Kya hoga ye delhna h aur Kya Paridhi ek baar apni taraf see Sach ka pata lagegi
Keep posting

Thanks Arjun Singh 72 bhai...

Waqt ka khel chal raha che jiske aek mod par super turn aaya hai.... aur abhi ye khel khatam kaha huva hai... yani ki aur bhi kai sare ese mod aa sakate hai...

Paridhi ne propose karte Waqt "muje lagata hai ki...." words ka istemal kiya hai yani ki vo abhi sure nahi hai... nahi kahi Paridhi ka Pawan ke liye pyaar ka izhaar huva hai sirf dil ke emotions hi bataye gaye hai...

Ab dekhate hai ki kya ye dil ke emotions pyaar ki shuruaat kar payenge?... kya Paridhi Avinash ke sath apne riste ke bare me sure ho payegi?..