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Veer aur jack apne manjil ki aur ja rahe thy abhi wo ek market ko cross kar rahe thy,

Jack : veer, mai tumhe school mai chodke wapas chala jaunga immediately. Tum teachers ki baate manna, aur school mat chodke kahi bahar maat ghumna, school ke permission ke bina aur baas padhayi pe dhyaan dena, thik hai yese hi najane kitne baate boli, fir last mai, Jaab tumhara term khatam hoga to mai aajaunga tumhe lene ke liye.
Veer : aap itni jaldi wapas chale jayenge grandpa jack?

Jack veer ki baato se haste huye : dekho Veer, hamara village yana ek hotel mai rehna ya khana bhi afford nahi kar sakta hai rehne khane ke liye. Chalo wo chodo, next time jaab haam milenge taab tum isse bhi acha ho jana aur isme tum tumhara sara effort dena ok, aur pehla ring pa ke soul master ban jana.

Veer : thik hai grandpa jack.

Jack : good boy….Chalo…..

Fir chalte chalte school ke paas aajate hai, dono baas school ko bhaar se hi dekh rahe hote hai, school ka gate bahut bada tha aur school ka top hi dikh raha tha. Veer kafi excited lag raha tha.

Abhi Veer aur jack school ke ander ki aur ja hi rahe thy ki school ke main gate mai khada ladka inko rokh deta hai.

Ladka : rukh jao tum dono, tum jesse villagers ko kon allow kiya hai yanha?

Tabhi piche se 2 ladke aate hai veer ko dhake de ke ander ghush jate hai sorry kehke kyun wo late ho rahe thy. Veer ne bhi jyada mind nahi kiya.

Jack : beta, ham saint village se hai. Ye hamare village ke taraf se aaya hai padhayi ke liye. Iske liye Kya kuch procedure hai jo hame follow karne hai?

Ladka inka khili udata hai,

Ladka : dekho koi yanha moon ko pane ke liya aaya hai. Kya villagers ke paas bhi soul power hote hai? Maine kabhi ye suna nahi koyi recombination mai aata hai school to Tum log jarur fake hi ho.

Jack uss ladke ki baat sunke apni dant bhich leta hai, fir….

Jack : ye letter hai martial soul temple ke officer max ki.

Wo ladka bhi wo letter ko leke padhne lagta hai,

Ladka : blue silver plant full soul power ke sath?

Wo ladka ye Padhke kafi zor se hasta hai.

Ladka : Mai yanha pichle 4 saal se iss school mai kaam kar raha hun, aur maine kabhi ye suna nahi ki koi bacha full soul power ke sath born hua ho. Ye letter bhi tumhare tarah fake hai. Fir wo letter fenk deta hai.

Jisse jack bahut tez gussa aata hai.

Jack : tum…..tum hamare liye ye difficult bana rahe ho. Thik hai ham yanhi wait karenge. Aur school ke kisi teacher se madat lenge. Veer chalo chalte hai side mai. Fir jack veer ko leke wanhi mai. Gate ke paas hi Jane lagta hai.

Wo ladka abhi bhi hase ja raha tha aur inko suna raha tha : saint village, mujhe lagta hai ki bhuk mangna hi tumhe suit karta hai.

Jack aur Veer ja hi rahe thy ki wo ladke ki baate sunke jack ko gussa aata hai aur jack palat ke usko jawab dete hai.

Jack : tumne kya kaha?

Ladka : kya ? Tum isse agree nahi hote ho? Maine kaha tum begaar ki village se ho. Kya mai galat hun? Khud ko dekho, poor aur pathetic dikh rahe ho. Yanha se chale jao. Aur kanhi aur jake bhik man-go.

Nouding school ek charity association nahi hai, get lost.
Fir aage badhne dhake marne hi wala tha ki Veer uska hath pakad leta hai aur usko ek muka marta hai wo ladka bhi school ka door ko todke jake 20-25 feet dur jake girta hai.

Jack : Veer, tumne….

Wo ladka bhi wapas khade hoke bhagke Veer ke paas aane lagta hai,

Veer (mann mai) : third rule mystrious Clan ka, jaab enemy ka identity confirm ho jaye, aagar tum use marne ke liye cable ho, to usse koi bhi mercy nahi dikhao. Warna tumhe hi usse problem hoga.

Veer bhi apna hidden weapon se ready ho jata hai war karne ke liye, aur apna hath us ladke ke taraf kar deta hai, Veer ke hath mai laga hua arrow shooter ready ho jata hai, jo ki uske dress ke ander hi tha.

Ruk jao sabhi....

Veer aur jack ke piche se ye awaj aati hai, jo ladka bhi bhag ke aaraha tha wo bhi uss awaj wale ko dekh ke rukh jata hai.

Ladka : aap wapas aagaye, master?

Wo person bhi chalte huye Veer aur jack ke samne ajata hai aur palat ke unko dekhne lagta hai.

Admi : mister, kya mai dekh sakta hun wo letter jo martial soul temple se hai?

ye isliye bola tha ki kyun wo ladka kafi zor se wo letter padh raha tha jaab ye admi piche aaraha tha wo saab sun raha tha aur Veer ko dekh raha tha, jis tarah se wo apna soul power use karke uss ladke ko dur fenka te admi usse dekh ke heran tha.

Jack bina kuch bole wo letter de deta hai. Wo admi bhi usko padhne lagta hai. Aur padhne ke baad ek nazar Veer pe dalta hai.

Admi : ye genuine hai…mister, mai apko maffi mangta hun jo bhi school ke taraf se hua hai abhi apke sath. Aap mujhe iss kid ko mere hath mai de dijiye.

Jack : nahi..nahi aapko sorry bolne ki jarurat nahi hai. Thik hai mai ye kid aapko handover karta hun. Fir veer ke taraf palat ke,

Veer apko inko ko follow karna hai, thik hai. Mai tumhe wapas lene aajaunga ke liye aajaunga jaab tumhara term khatam hoga.

Veer : thik hai grandpa jack, goodbye, mai apna pura effort dunga padhayi pe.

Fir jack wanha se chale jate hai, wapas village ki aur. Veer aur wo admi wanhi khade hoke jack ko jate huye dekh rahe thy.

Wo admi wo ladke ko : mai tumhe iss baar chod raha hun, aur ye first and last time hai, aagar dubar tum pakade gaye to yanha se chale jana.
Ye kehke Veer ko leke ander chale jate hai.

Veer : thank you sir….

Admi : sir? Mai yanha nahi padha ta baas free mai khana aur rehna mil jata hai to aajata hun.

Veer : kya? Aapne abhi abhi nahi kaha tha ki aap school ke taraf se hai?

Admi : apko kisne kaha ki sirf school ke teacher hi school ko represent kar sakte hai?

Veer : samajh gaya, aap jarur school principal honge ya fir leader.

Master : tum smart kid ho. Per tumhara har guess galat hai.

Veer : to fir aap….

Admi : mai sirf ek guest hun. Tum mujhe master keh sakte ho jese har koi kehta hai yanha.

Veer : ji teacher....

Master : Veer, kya mai apka master ban sakta hun? Kya tum mere paas se martial soul ka knowledge lena pasand karoge?

Veer : kya aap mujhe martial soul training sikhane ja rahe hai?

Master : kya aap sikhne ko tayar hai?

Veer bhi apni sar ho han mai hila deta hai.

Master : good, aap sach mai ek smart kid hai. Gifted and cleaver bhi. Yesa lagta hai ki mujhe iss baar yanhi bane rehna ki jarurat hai. Kyun ki aap third person hai jiske paas twin martial soul hai iss century ki.

Master ki baate sunke Veer apne mysterious clan ki rule ko yaad karne lagta hai, aur apna hidden weapon bhi ready kar deta hai,

Veer : first rule, kabhi bhi kisi yese person ko allow na de apni true capacity janne ke liye. jis per aap puri tarah se bharosha nahi kar sakte.

Master : aap puch sakte hai ki mujhe kese pata hai ki aapke paas twin martial souls hai, ye letter ke wajah se. Maine Blue Silver Plant ke 647 person ko dekha hai aur study bhi kiya hai. Unme se sirf 16 ke paas sirf level 1 soul power hi thy. Lekin aap ke paas level 10 ya fir full born soul power hai.

Martial soul ke 10 main core power mai se ek ke compare mai apki soul power aur martial soul ki amount aur quality ko dekh te huye, blue silver plant clearly ye satisfy nahi kar sakta hai apka soul power ko.

Isiliye mujhe pura yakin hai ki aapke paas ek aur martial soul hai aur wo bhi behed hi powerful.

Veer : hamesha ye ek exception bhi ho sakta hai, mai wo kyu nahi ho sakta? Ya fir mere paas bhi baas ek hi martial soul hai koi dusra nahi ho....

Master : aap sahi hai, ye hamesha ek exception hota hai, per ye 100 saal mai even hamara dono kingdom, North Heaven kingdom aur south Heaven kingdom mai….sirf ek hi person hai jiska twin martial soul hai, per full soul power ke sath 19 person hai, mai unka martial souls ko behed ache se janta hun aur study bhi kiya hai aur ek baad wo sabhi behed hi strong masters mai gine jate hai, even youngest one bhi Great Soul master level tak pahunch gaya hai….

Aur unme se 5 person exceptional hai, kyun ki unka martial souls mutated hai. Per mere itne saalo ki research ke hisab se mutated martial souls mai kabhi bhi blue silver plant mutated nahi hota hai.

Aur tumhara blue silver plant ek normal one hai, isiliye mujhe lag raha hai ki, aur mai sure bhi hun ki, meri prediction bilkul perfect hai.

Veer : mutated martial soul, wo kya hai?

Master : wo suru hua tha inheritance of martial soul se. Normal situation ke ander, ham hamare kisi parent ke martial soul ham ko paas on hota hai. Per kuch exceptional case mai hamara martial soul mutated ho jata hai.

Mutated martial soul stronger bhi ho sakte hai, aur kuch to full soul power ke sath born hote hai. Per jyada tar mutated martial soul, sirf weaker hi hote hai.

Mutated martial soul sirf near-kin marriage ki product ki tarah hi hai. Aap retarded (mand budhi) hone ka jyada tar possibility hai, lekin aap ek extraordinary bhi ho sakte hai.

Veer ne sari baate sunne ke baad apne ghutne ke baal pe beth jata hai,

Master : tum ye kya kar rahe ho?

Veer 3 baar Kowtow hota hai master ke samne, fir bolta hai,

Veer : please mujhe apka apprentice ke hisaab se accept kar lijiye.

Veer ki ye harkat dekhke master hasta hai fir,

Master : silly kid, ye kehne ke liye tumhe kowtow hone ki kya jarurat thy. Kya tumhe pata nahi ye sirf aap king aur apke parents ke liye hi use kar sakte hai. Tumhe sirf bow hona hota hai bakiyo ke samne jisse tum sanman dena chahte ho.

Veer : ek teacher hamesha ek teacher hi rehta hai. Aap mere kowtow hi deserve karte hai.

Master : thik hai….per aap apne life mai sirf ek hi teacher ke apprentice hi reh sakte ho?

Veer : thik hai, manjur hai…..

Master : thik hai mai apko aaj se mera apprentice chunta hun.

Veer bow hoke : thank you teacher….

Master bhi Veer ke sar pe hath ferata hai, fir dono chalte huye school ke ander jate hai aur ek aur chale jate hai aur ek room ke ander ghus jate hai, uss room ke ander 2 admi pehle hi moujud thy, jaab master aur Veer ander gaye to un dono ki bhi najar inpe padi, to unme se ek,

Admi 1 : master….

Master baas uss admi ko Veer ka letter pakda deta hai, aur Veer ke taraf munh karke,

Master : apko ye teacher apka registeration mai help kar denge. Mujhe abhi nikal na hai, mai apko baad mai milta hun.

Veer : thik hai, good bye teacher.

Admi : kid, tumne unhe teacher kaha? Wo hamare school ke teacher nahi hai.

Veer : per wo mere teacher hai.

Admi 1 : kya tum master ke apprentice ho?

Veer : kya wo galat hai?

Admi 1 : nahi..nahi..maine kabhi ye socha nahi tha ki wo kabhi apna disciple choose karenge.

Fir veer ka letter wo pehla admi dusre admi ko de deta hai.

Admi 2 : Veer, right?

Ek school ke teache ke roop mai, mujhe ye yaad dilane ki jarurat hai ki, aap sirf ek person ko apne master/teacher ke roop mai nahi le sakte ho thik hai.

Ooh..aap full soul power ke sath born huye hai….

Admi 1 : kya? Full soul power ke sath born Hua hai?

Admi 2 : han per martial soul Blue Silver Plant hai.

Admi 1 : ohh…Blue Silver Plant.

Admi 2 : har soul master apne life mai sirf ek hi master ko chun sakta hai, warna log apko nicha dikhayenge. Kya apko sach mai lagta hai ki wo aap ke liye perfect hai?

Veer : kyun kuch kharabi hai?

Admi 1 : sayad Wo thode ajib hai, per wo martial souls ki knowledge mai invincible hai. Chuki apke paas sirf blue silver plant hai, isiliye kisi ko bhi apna master maan lena thik hai.

Admi 2 : thik hai, ye school ke taraf se complimentary hai, ye kehke Veer ko school ki dress de deta hai, aap hostel ke dorm no.7 mai rahenge. Ek student ke roop mai apka kaam ki dekhbhal karne ke liye wanha ek teache hai.

Veer : thank you.

Fir Veer wanha se chala jata hai. Jaab darwaja band karke jane lagta hai to admi 1 aur admi 2 Veer ke teacher ke baare mai baate karte hai to Veer bhi wanhi bahar khade hoke unki baate sunne lagta hai,

Admi 1 : master sach mai ek invincible hai, lekin ye sirf theoretically roop se hai, unke theories ko practice ke sath hi sahi mai kaam karne mai laya ja sakta hai.

Admi 2 : director, maine martial soul ki unki 10 core Martial soul ke baare mai suna hai.

Admi 1 : han maine bhi aur mujhe wo behed majedar lagta hai.

Admi 2 : han per usse koi bhi dubara sahi sabit nahi kar pa rahe hai, lekin iska matlab ye nahi hai ki wo galat hai.

Admi 1 : fir bhi martial soul ki duniya mai master behed famous hai.

Admi 2 : nahi director, wo sirf ek famous clown hai, aur log baas unko majak ke roop mai le rahe hai.

Admi 1 : Aab baas karo wo hamare Dean ke dost hai unhe criticizing karna band karo.

Admi 2 : per ye to sach hai....

Admi 1 : han wo to hai....

HaHaHaHaHaHa, fir dono hasne lagte hai.

Veer bhi wanhi darwaja ke paas khada hoke in dono ke upar apne mann hi mann has raha tha,

Veer (mann mai) : master ne baas mere letter ko dekh ke hi bata diya ki mai twin martial soul ka malik hun. Wo kese joker ho sakte hai? Chalo dekhte hai ki kon last mai hasta hai kiske upar.

Fir veer chala jata hai apne hostel ki taraf. Wo hostel ki dorm no.7 ki abhi darwaja khola hi tha ki uske ander se ek ladke ne uske uapar attack kar deta hai, Veer ne uska hath ko pakad leta hai aur soul power use karke usko dur fenk deta hai, wo ladka bhi ek aur baar khada hoke uske uppar fir se attack karta hai,

Veer iss baar bhi usko pakad leta hai per pichli baar ki tarah iss baar usko fenkta to hai per uska hath marod deta hai apne soul power ka use karke. Wo ladka sidha jamin pe jake girta hai.

Veer : tum kon ho? Mere pe attack kyun kar rahe ho?

Wo ladka khada hota hua,

Ladka : hi mai W (iss ladke ki jyada roll nahi hai iss liye W likhunga), mai iss dorm no.7 ka boss hun. Thank you mere upar mercy dikhane ke liye.

Aur apna hath badha deta hai, Veer bhi uska hath tham leta hai.

W : jaab tumne mujhe hara diya hai, to tum aab iss dorm no.7 ka new Boss ho.

Uss kamre mai rahe sare bache Veer ke samne bow ho jate hai aur ek hi sath Boss kehte hai.

Veer : mai? Mai yanha study karne aaya hun boss banne nahi.

W : per ye hamara rule hai, jo bhi ye battle jitega wo hi boss hoga.

Sare bache : yes, wo hi rule hai.

W : kya tumne muj per abhi apni soul power ka use kiya tha?

Veer : han....


Abhi sare bache Veer ko ghere thy ki ek awaj aati hai unke piche se wo behed hi sweet si voice thy.

Kya ye dorm no.7 hai hostel ki?

Jaab sare bache piche palat te hai to ek cute si ladki khadi thy.
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Veer aur jack apne manjil ki aur ja rahe thy abhi wo ek market ko cross kar rahe thy,

Jack : veer, mai tumhe school mai chodke wapas chala jaunga immediately. Tum teachers ki baate manna, aur school mat chodke kahi bahar maat ghumna, school ke permission ke bina aur baas padhayi pe dhyaan dena, thik hai yese hi najane kitne baate boli, fir last mai, Jaab tumhara term khatam hoga to mai aajaunga tumhe lene ke liye.
Veer : aap itni jaldi wapas chale jayenge grandpa jack?

Jack veer ki baato se haste huye : dekho Veer, hamara village yana ek hotel mai rehna ya khana bhi afford nahi kar sakta hai rehne khane ke liye. Chalo wo chodo, next time jaab haam milenge taab tum isse bhi acha ho jana aur isme tum tumhara sara effort dena ok, aur pehla ring pa ke soul master ban jana.

Veer : thik hai grandpa jack.

Jack : good boy….Chalo…..

Fir chalte chalte school ke paas aajate hai, dono baas school ko bhaar se hi dekh rahe hote hai, school ka gate bahut bada tha aur school ka top hi dikh raha tha. Veer kafi excited lag raha tha.

Abhi Veer aur jack school ke ander ki aur ja hi rahe thy ki school ke main gate mai khada ladka inko rokh deta hai.

Ladka : rukh jao tum dono, tum jesse villagers ko kon allow kiya hai yanha?

Tabhi piche se 2 ladke aate hai veer ko dhake de ke ander ghush jate hai sorry kehke kyun wo late ho rahe thy. Veer ne bhi jyada mind nahi kiya.

Jack : beta, ham saint village se hai. Ye hamare village ke taraf se aaya hai padhayi ke liye. Iske liye Kya kuch procedure hai jo hame follow karne hai?

Ladka inka khili udata hai,

Ladka : dekho koi yanha moon ko pane ke liya aaya hai. Kya villagers ke paas bhi soul power hote hai? Maine kabhi ye suna nahi koyi recombination mai aata hai school to Tum log jarur fake hi ho.

Jack uss ladke ki baat sunke apni dant bhich leta hai, fir….

Jack : ye letter hai martial soul temple ke officer max ki.

Wo ladka bhi wo letter ko leke padhne lagta hai,

Ladka : blue silver plant full soul power ke sath?

Wo ladka ye Padhke kafi zor se hasta hai.

Ladka : Mai yanha pichle 4 saal se iss school mai kaam kar raha hun, aur maine kabhi ye suna nahi ki koi bacha full soul power ke sath born hua ho. Ye letter bhi tumhare tarah fake hai. Fir wo letter fenk deta hai.

Jisse jack bahut tez gussa aata hai.

Jack : tum…..tum hamare liye ye difficult bana rahe ho. Thik hai ham yanhi wait karenge. Aur school ke kisi teacher se madat lenge. Veer chalo chalte hai side mai. Fir jack veer ko leke wanhi mai. Gate ke paas hi Jane lagta hai.

Wo ladka abhi bhi hase ja raha tha aur inko suna raha tha : saint village, mujhe lagta hai ki bhuk mangna hi tumhe suit karta hai.

Jack aur Veer ja hi rahe thy ki wo ladke ki baate sunke jack ko gussa aata hai aur jack palat ke usko jawab dete hai.

Jack : tumne kya kaha?

Ladka : kya ? Tum isse agree nahi hote ho? Maine kaha tum begaar ki village se ho. Kya mai galat hun? Khud ko dekho, poor aur pathetic dikh rahe ho. Yanha se chale jao. Aur kanhi aur jake bhik man-go.

Nouding school ek charity association nahi hai, get lost.
Fir aage badhne dhake marne hi wala tha ki Veer uska hath pakad leta hai aur usko ek muka marta hai wo ladka bhi school ka door ko todke jake 20-25 feet dur jake girta hai.

Jack : Veer, tumne….

Wo ladka bhi wapas khade hoke bhagke Veer ke paas aane lagta hai,

Veer (mann mai) : third rule mystrious Clan ka, jaab enemy ka identity confirm ho jaye, aagar tum use marne ke liye cable ho, to usse koi bhi mercy nahi dikhao. Warna tumhe hi usse problem hoga.

Veer bhi apna hidden weapon se ready ho jata hai war karne ke liye, aur apna hath us ladke ke taraf kar deta hai, Veer ke hath mai laga hua arrow shooter ready ho jata hai, jo ki uske dress ke ander hi tha.

Ruk jao sabhi....

Veer aur jack ke piche se ye awaj aati hai, jo ladka bhi bhag ke aaraha tha wo bhi uss awaj wale ko dekh ke rukh jata hai.

Ladka : aap wapas aagaye, master?

Wo person bhi chalte huye Veer aur jack ke samne ajata hai aur palat ke unko dekhne lagta hai.

Admi : mister, kya mai dekh sakta hun wo letter jo martial soul temple se hai?

ye isliye bola tha ki kyun wo ladka kafi zor se wo letter padh raha tha jaab ye admi piche aaraha tha wo saab sun raha tha aur Veer ko dekh raha tha, jis tarah se wo apna soul power use karke uss ladke ko dur fenka te admi usse dekh ke heran tha.

Jack bina kuch bole wo letter de deta hai. Wo admi bhi usko padhne lagta hai. Aur padhne ke baad ek nazar Veer pe dalta hai.

Admi : ye genuine hai…mister, mai apko maffi mangta hun jo bhi school ke taraf se hua hai abhi apke sath. Aap mujhe iss kid ko mere hath mai de dijiye.

Jack : nahi..nahi aapko sorry bolne ki jarurat nahi hai. Thik hai mai ye kid aapko handover karta hun. Fir veer ke taraf palat ke,

Veer apko inko ko follow karna hai, thik hai. Mai tumhe wapas lene aajaunga ke liye aajaunga jaab tumhara term khatam hoga.

Veer : thik hai grandpa jack, goodbye, mai apna pura effort dunga padhayi pe.

Fir jack wanha se chale jate hai, wapas village ki aur. Veer aur wo admi wanhi khade hoke jack ko jate huye dekh rahe thy.

Wo admi wo ladke ko : mai tumhe iss baar chod raha hun, aur ye first and last time hai, aagar dubar tum pakade gaye to yanha se chale jana.
Ye kehke Veer ko leke ander chale jate hai.

Veer : thank you sir….

Admi : sir? Mai yanha nahi padha ta baas free mai khana aur rehna mil jata hai to aajata hun.

Veer : kya? Aapne abhi abhi nahi kaha tha ki aap school ke taraf se hai?

Admi : apko kisne kaha ki sirf school ke teacher hi school ko represent kar sakte hai?

Veer : samajh gaya, aap jarur school principal honge ya fir leader.

Master : tum smart kid ho. Per tumhara har guess galat hai.

Veer : to fir aap….

Admi : mai sirf ek guest hun. Tum mujhe master keh sakte ho jese har koi kehta hai yanha.

Veer : ji teacher....

Master : Veer, kya mai apka master ban sakta hun? Kya tum mere paas se martial soul ka knowledge lena pasand karoge?

Veer : kya aap mujhe martial soul training sikhane ja rahe hai?

Master : kya aap sikhne ko tayar hai?

Veer bhi apni sar ho han mai hila deta hai.

Master : good, aap sach mai ek smart kid hai. Gifted and cleaver bhi. Yesa lagta hai ki mujhe iss baar yanhi bane rehna ki jarurat hai. Kyun ki aap third person hai jiske paas twin martial soul hai iss century ki.

Master ki baate sunke Veer apne mysterious clan ki rule ko yaad karne lagta hai, aur apna hidden weapon bhi ready kar deta hai,

Veer : first rule, kabhi bhi kisi yese person ko allow na de apni true capacity janne ke liye. jis per aap puri tarah se bharosha nahi kar sakte.

Master : aap puch sakte hai ki mujhe kese pata hai ki aapke paas twin martial souls hai, ye letter ke wajah se. Maine Blue Silver Plant ke 647 person ko dekha hai aur study bhi kiya hai. Unme se sirf 16 ke paas sirf level 1 soul power hi thy. Lekin aap ke paas level 10 ya fir full born soul power hai.

Martial soul ke 10 main core power mai se ek ke compare mai apki soul power aur martial soul ki amount aur quality ko dekh te huye, blue silver plant clearly ye satisfy nahi kar sakta hai apka soul power ko.

Isiliye mujhe pura yakin hai ki aapke paas ek aur martial soul hai aur wo bhi behed hi powerful.

Veer : hamesha ye ek exception bhi ho sakta hai, mai wo kyu nahi ho sakta? Ya fir mere paas bhi baas ek hi martial soul hai koi dusra nahi ho....

Master : aap sahi hai, ye hamesha ek exception hota hai, per ye 100 saal mai even hamara dono kingdom, North Heaven kingdom aur south Heaven kingdom mai….sirf ek hi person hai jiska twin martial soul hai, per full soul power ke sath 19 person hai, mai unka martial souls ko behed ache se janta hun aur study bhi kiya hai aur ek baad wo sabhi behed hi strong masters mai gine jate hai, even youngest one bhi Great Soul master level tak pahunch gaya hai….

Aur unme se 5 person exceptional hai, kyun ki unka martial souls mutated hai. Per mere itne saalo ki research ke hisab se mutated martial souls mai kabhi bhi blue silver plant mutated nahi hota hai.

Aur tumhara blue silver plant ek normal one hai, isiliye mujhe lag raha hai ki, aur mai sure bhi hun ki, meri prediction bilkul perfect hai.

Veer : mutated martial soul, wo kya hai?

Master : wo suru hua tha inheritance of martial soul se. Normal situation ke ander, ham hamare kisi parent ke martial soul ham ko paas on hota hai. Per kuch exceptional case mai hamara martial soul mutated ho jata hai.

Mutated martial soul stronger bhi ho sakte hai, aur kuch to full soul power ke sath born hote hai. Per jyada tar mutated martial soul, sirf weaker hi hote hai.

Mutated martial soul sirf near-kin marriage ki product ki tarah hi hai. Aap retarded (mand budhi) hone ka jyada tar possibility hai, lekin aap ek extraordinary bhi ho sakte hai.

Veer ne sari baate sunne ke baad apne ghutne ke baal pe beth jata hai,

Master : tum ye kya kar rahe ho?

Veer 3 baar Kowtow hota hai master ke samne, fir bolta hai,

Veer : please mujhe apka apprentice ke hisaab se accept kar lijiye.

Veer ki ye harkat dekhke master hasta hai fir,

Master : silly kid, ye kehne ke liye tumhe kowtow hone ki kya jarurat thy. Kya tumhe pata nahi ye sirf aap king aur apke parents ke liye hi use kar sakte hai. Tumhe sirf bow hona hota hai bakiyo ke samne jisse tum sanman dena chahte ho.

Veer : ek teacher hamesha ek teacher hi rehta hai. Aap mere kowtow hi deserve karte hai.

Master : thik hai….per aap apne life mai sirf ek hi teacher ke apprentice hi reh sakte ho?

Veer : thik hai, manjur hai…..

Master : thik hai mai apko aaj se mera apprentice chunta hun.

Veer bow hoke : thank you teacher….

Master bhi Veer ke sar pe hath ferata hai, fir dono chalte huye school ke ander jate hai aur ek aur chale jate hai aur ek room ke ander ghus jate hai, uss room ke ander 2 admi pehle hi moujud thy, jaab master aur Veer ander gaye to un dono ki bhi najar inpe padi, to unme se ek,

Admi 1 : master….

Master baas uss admi ko Veer ka letter pakda deta hai, aur Veer ke taraf munh karke,

Master : apko ye teacher apka registeration mai help kar denge. Mujhe abhi nikal na hai, mai apko baad mai milta hun.

Veer : thik hai, good bye teacher.

Admi : kid, tumne unhe teacher kaha? Wo hamare school ke teacher nahi hai.

Veer : per wo mere teacher hai.

Admi 1 : kya tum master ke apprentice ho?

Veer : kya wo galat hai?

Admi 1 : nahi..nahi..maine kabhi ye socha nahi tha ki wo kabhi apna disciple choose karenge.

Fir veer ka letter wo pehla admi dusre admi ko de deta hai.

Admi 2 : Veer, right?

Ek school ke teache ke roop mai, mujhe ye yaad dilane ki jarurat hai ki, aap sirf ek person ko apne master/teacher ke roop mai nahi le sakte ho thik hai.

Ooh..aap full soul power ke sath born huye hai….

Admi 1 : kya? Full soul power ke sath born Hua hai?

Admi 2 : han per martial soul Blue Silver Plant hai.

Admi 1 : ohh…Blue Silver Plant.

Admi 2 : har soul master apne life mai sirf ek hi master ko chun sakta hai, warna log apko nicha dikhayenge. Kya apko sach mai lagta hai ki wo aap ke liye perfect hai?

Veer : kyun kuch kharabi hai?

Admi 1 : sayad Wo thode ajib hai, per wo martial souls ki knowledge mai invincible hai. Chuki apke paas sirf blue silver plant hai, isiliye kisi ko bhi apna master maan lena thik hai.

Admi 2 : thik hai, ye school ke taraf se complimentary hai, ye kehke Veer ko school ki dress de deta hai, aap hostel ke dorm no.7 mai rahenge. Ek student ke roop mai apka kaam ki dekhbhal karne ke liye wanha ek teache hai.

Veer : thank you.

Fir Veer wanha se chala jata hai. Jaab darwaja band karke jane lagta hai to admi 1 aur admi 2 Veer ke teacher ke baare mai baate karte hai to Veer bhi wanhi bahar khade hoke unki baate sunne lagta hai,

Admi 1 : master sach mai ek invincible hai, lekin ye sirf theoretically roop se hai, unke theories ko practice ke sath hi sahi mai kaam karne mai laya ja sakta hai.

Admi 2 : director, maine martial soul ki unki 10 core Martial soul ke baare mai suna hai.

Admi 1 : han maine bhi aur mujhe wo behed majedar lagta hai.

Admi 2 : han per usse koi bhi dubara sahi sabit nahi kar pa rahe hai, lekin iska matlab ye nahi hai ki wo galat hai.

Admi 1 : fir bhi martial soul ki duniya mai master behed famous hai.

Admi 2 : nahi director, wo sirf ek famous clown hai, aur log baas unko majak ke roop mai le rahe hai.

Admi 1 : Aab baas karo wo hamare Dean ke dost hai unhe criticizing karna band karo.

Admi 2 : per ye to sach hai....

Admi 1 : han wo to hai....

HaHaHaHaHaHa, fir dono hasne lagte hai.

Veer bhi wanhi darwaja ke paas khada hoke in dono ke upar apne mann hi mann has raha tha,

Veer (mann mai) : master ne baas mere letter ko dekh ke hi bata diya ki mai twin martial soul ka malik hun. Wo kese joker ho sakte hai? Chalo dekhte hai ki kon last mai hasta hai kiske upar.

Fir veer chala jata hai apne hostel ki taraf. Wo hostel ki dorm no.7 ki abhi darwaja khola hi tha ki uske ander se ek ladke ne uske uapar attack kar deta hai, Veer ne uska hath ko pakad leta hai aur soul power use karke usko dur fenk deta hai, wo ladka bhi ek aur baar khada hoke uske uppar fir se attack karta hai,

Veer iss baar bhi usko pakad leta hai per pichli baar ki tarah iss baar usko fenkta to hai per uska hath marod deta hai apne soul power ka use karke. Wo ladka sidha jamin pe jake girta hai.

Veer : tum kon ho? Mere pe attack kyun kar rahe ho?

Wo ladka khada hota hua,

Ladka : hi mai W (iss ladke ki jyada roll nahi hai iss liye W likhunga), mai iss dorm no.7 ka boss hun. Thank you mere upar mercy dikhane ke liye.

Aur apna hath badha deta hai, Veer bhi uska hath tham leta hai.

W : jaab tumne mujhe hara diya hai, to tum aab iss dorm no.7 ka new Boss ho.

Uss kamre mai rahe sare bache Veer ke samne bow ho jate hai aur ek hi sath Boss kehte hai.

Veer : mai? Mai yanha study karne aaya hun boss banne nahi.

W : per ye hamara rule hai, jo bhi ye battle jitega wo hi boss hoga.

Sare bache : yes, wo hi rule hai.

W : kya tumne muj per abhi apni soul power ka use kiya tha?

Veer : han....


Abhi sare bache Veer ko ghere thy ki ek awaj aati hai unke piche se wo behed hi sweet si voice thy.

Kya ye dorm no.7 hai hostel ki?

Jaab sare bache piche palat te hai to ek cute si ladki khadi thy.

Bahot behtareen zaberdast shaandaar update
 

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Friends ek announcement hai, pehle mujhe maaf kar dijiye, mai abhi 10 din tak iss story mai update de nahi paunga, kyun ki mera pehla story khatam hone ko aaya hai agle 10 din ke ander wo khatam ho jayega uske baad iss story mai update ayega.
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Update 3
Mohan : kabhi nahi !!!! Ye kafi jor re kahi thy mohan ne….
Jise sunke jack ko bahut gussa aagaya…..
Jack : kya? Tumhe pata hai ye itna precious chance hai Veer ke liye. Ye hamare village ki khush nasibi hai, kyun ki hamare village ne ek soul saint master diya hai iss kingdom ko isiliye haam haar saal ek bache ko school bhej sakte hai padhne ke liye wo bhi free mai. Warna dusre village kitne muskil ka samna karte hai ye pata bhi hai tumhe. Samajh rahe ho na tum ?
Ye chance ko agar Veer ache se use kare to Veer future mai ek successful person ban sakta hai.
Mohan : successful hone se kya hoga ? Aur Veer ke jane ke baad mera khane ka kya hoga, koun dega mujhe ? Aur sabse badi baat blue silver plant ko train karke kya fayeda. Ye to baas ek useless martial soul hai aur hamesha rahega.
Ye sari baate mohan ne jack ko bina dekhe hi keh raha hota hai.
Jack : per Veer full soul power ke sath born hua hai. Jitna jaldi wo apna pehla soul ring pa lega, agar wo kamjor bhi kyu na ho, usko train kiya ja sakega aur wo soul warrior se soul master baan jayega.
Soul master, samajh rahe ho na.
Aur ye kayi saal ho gaye hai jaab hamara village mai pehli baar koi soul master banega. Warna to koi soul worrior hi ban jaye wo badi baat hogi.
Mohan : to tumhara maksad iske piche ye tha, mai sahi keh raha hu na? Maine mana kiya na wo nahi jayega. Aab tum ja sakte ho.
Jack (jor se) : mohan……
Mohan : mai sun sakta hun, tumhe chilane ki koi jarurat nahi hai. Aab tum ja sakte ho.
Veer : grandpa jack, gussa mat hoyiye, papa sahi keh rahe hai. Blue silver plant ek useless martial soul hai. Aur mai bhi ye soch raha hun ki yahi acha hoga ki mai na padhu martial soul ability ke baare mai.
Thank you grandpa jack aapne itna saab kiya mere liye….
Jack : Veer, mai gussa nahi hun….thik hai mujhe abhi jana chahiye. Fir jack jane lagte hai Veer ke ghar ke bahar aur Veer bhi unke sath hi tha unko chodne ja raha tha.
Jack jate jate darwaje ke paas rukh jate hai aur wapas palat ke mohan ko,
Jack : mohan sayad tumne pehle hi ye decide kar liya hai ki yese hi rahoge, per Veer abhi bacha hai, kya tum Veer ke baare nahi soch sakte ek baar bhi, usko sikhna chahiye aur ye uske liye jaruri bhi hai jine ke liye, aur jine ke liye kuch to skills pata hona chahiye.
Usse roko nahi, agar tum wo na de sako to….jisse ke liye future mai kabhi Veer tumhe galat samajhega ye hone na do.
Mai abhi ja raha hun aagar tum apna mind change karte ho to mujhe aake mil lena. Abhi bhi 3 months hai school mai registration ke liye.
Fir jack chale jate hai aur Veer unhe ghar ke bahar chod ke ander aajata hai.
Jaab Veer ander aata hai to uska dad abhi beth ke pi rahe hote hai….
Mohan : Veer mere liye aur leke aao….
Veer bhi bina kuch kahe jake ek bottle utha ke le aata hai aur mohan ka glass bharne lagta hai jaab glaas bhar jata hai mohan ek hi jhatke mai usse khatam kar deta hai.
Mohan : kya tum disappointed ho mere decision se? Kya tum soul master banna chahte ho?
Veer : nahi papa mai blacksmith banna chahta hun aapki tarah. Ham usse hi to jite hai mai usse kese chod sakta hun. Aur aapne promise bhi kya hua hai….mujhe sikhayenge farm tools banna.
Mohan : soul master ka kya use hai pata hai? Aur useless martial soul ko apne dimag mai se nikal ke batao aur yesa socho ki tumhare paas best martial soul hai.
Ye sari baate mohan gusse mai puch raha hota hai jiska effect uske ghar mai pad raha hota hai, sari chize hil rahe thy. Aur Veer usse saaf mehsus kar raha hota hai.
Veer : papa gussa may kijiye, mujhe soul master banna hi nahi hai, mai hamesha apke sath hi rahunga, aur mai isme hi khush hun aur hamesha apke liye khana bhi banaunga.
Mohan : mujhe dikhao tumhara martial soul.
Veer : thik hai….
Ye kehke Veer apna martial soul release kar deta hai, uska blue silver plant baki ke blue silver palnt se alag tha jo saaf dekh sakta tha mohan.
Jaab mohan ne ye dekha to face pe ek smile aagayi, per usse show hi nahi kiya,
Mohan (mann mai) : ye same hai uske Jessa….
Aur ek hi jhatke mai khada ho jata hai, aur mohan ko iss tarah se khade hone se Veer bhi do kadam piche chala jata hai.
Veer : papa…?
Mohan khade hoke ander ke kamre ki aur chala jata hai ye kehke ki mujhe koi distrub nahi kare.
Mohan ke jane baad Veer uske piche,
Veer : per mere paas ek aur martial soul hai. Fir apna left hand aage karke wo hammer ko summon karta hai.
Pata nahi keese mohan sayad uska yehsaas paake kamre se bahar aajata hai. Aur Veer kodekhne lagata hai aur apne atit ke pane mai kho jata hai,
Kuch loog thy jo Chal ke uske samne se aarahe thy, aur mohan ghayal hua pada tha, aur ek mahila kuch bol rahi hoti hai.
Mahila : unhe jane do, mai tumhare sath chalungi.
Aur wo mahila bhi wanhi mohan ke samne hi khadi thy, aur uske hath mai ek bacha tha. Fir wo bache ko mohan ke hath mai thama deti hai, mohan bhi usko pakad leta hai.
Mohan : nahi….
Mohan : nahi….Sital….
Fir wo mahila agae badh jati hai aur asaman ki taraf hath karke uska martial soul ko summon karti hai, ye bhi blue silver palnt hi tha per alag yesa lag raha tha ki ye sabse last evolve tha, jo ki bade se tree ke jesse nazar aaraha tha.
Aur uss mahila ke charo aur ek red colour ka ring ghum raha tha.
Jaab wo mahila ye kar rahi thy to wo sare admi jo inke taraf aarahe thy wo bhi hamala kar diya.
Mohan : nahi…..sital…..nahi…..
Fir apne hosh mai aake wo aage badh ke veer ka left hath ko pakad leta hai….
Mohan : ye….
Veer : kya kuch galat hai papa?
Mohan : ye twin martial soul hai. Ye twin martial soul hai. Beta….
Ye kehke mohan Veer ko kash ke gale laga leta hai.
Veer : papa….
Ye pehla din tha jaab veer ke papa ne usse hug kiya hua tha, usko kafi acha lag raha tha.
Veer : wait, mera inner power yese increase kese ho raha hai? Kya ye saab iss hammer ki wajah se ho raha hai. Aagar yese hi chalta raha to mai papa ko hurt kar dunga.
Veer : papa mai aapko aur hug nahi kar sakta.
Kyun ki abhi wo hammer ki wajah se pura ghar hilna suru ho gaya tha.
Mohan bhi Veer ko chod deta hai.
Mohan : isse wapas lelo….
Veer bhi usse wapas rakh leta hai to saab rukh jata hai.
Mohan : ye hamesha yaad rakhna, tum apna plant protect karna hammer ki madat se. Hamesha.
Veer apna dono hath ko dekhte huye : papa mai promise karta hun.
Dopeher ka time tha…..
Tan..tan….tan….
Veer ek lohe ko tukde ko jo garam tha ek hammer se mare ja raha tha,
Veer (mann mai) : iss duniya mai twin martial soul rare hai. Isiliye dad ne yesa bola ki hammer soul ko na dikhaun kisiko.
Abhi Veer hammering kar hi raha hota ki mohan bhi kamre se bahar nikal aata hai aur ek nazar Veer pe deke wo jake beth jata hai.
Veer bhi ek nazar apne pita ko dekh ke wapas apne kaam mai lag jata hai….
thodi der baad,
Mohan : ruko….
Fir mohan khade hoke veer ke paas aajata hai. Aur Veer ke hath se hammer le leta hai aur usko wanha se side mai kar deta hai….
Mohan : agar tum yese hi kaam karte rahe to tum isse kabhi bhi bana nahi sakte
.
Veer : to mujhe kya karna chahiye?
Mohan : dekho….
Ye kehke mohan hammering karne lagta hai. Aur Veer usse ache se dekhne lagta hai.
mohan : dekh liya maine kitne baar mai ye kiya.
veer : papa ye 81 strike hai...
mohan veer ke jawab sunke : right....(mann mai ; isne ek pal bhi apni ankhe nhi jhapkayi aur pehli baar mai hi thik answer de diya, ye sach mai talented hai)
Fir veer hammering wese hi karne lagta hai to usse ho nahi pa raha tha to mohan usse apne hatho se sikhane lagta hai.
Ye Veer ke jivan mai sabse acha din tha jaab uske dad ne uska hath pakad ke kuch sikhaya tha.
Yese hi kayi din nikal gaye aur Veer bhi aab ache se hammering karne lag jata hai bilkul apne papa ki tarah per abhi tak wo 81 strike pura nahi kar paya tha aur issi bich wo apne mystrious Clan ka kuch chota mota hidden weapon bhi bana diya tha.
Veer : finally, kuch to hidden weapon ban hi gaya hai. Aab mere pas kuch jyada material nahi hai jisse mai jyada se jyada aur behetar hidden weapon bana saku. Aagar kahi se jugad ho jayega to mai ek arrow shooter bhi bana sakunga.
Inn 3 mahine se papa baas mujhe sikha hi rahe hai apna hammering skill, aur aab maine 24 time strike kar sakta hun ek hi baar mai, abhi 81 strike bahut dur hai.
Per aab ye baad ki baat hai abhi mujhe mere skill ke bare mai kuch sochna hoga
Fir uthke kitchen ki taraf chala jata hai aur khana nikalna lagta hai veer, fir apne papa ko bulane lagta hai,
Veer : papa aajao khate hai….
Per mohan aaya hi nahi,
Veer : aam tor pe to papa aajate thy itne waqt mai, kya wo bimar pad gaye hai?
Abhi Veer uss kamre mai jane hi wala tha ki, mohan main door se ander aata hai.
Veer : papa kanha gaye thy itne subha ye apne mann mai sochta hai fir, papa chalo khate hai.
Mohan : thik hai.
Fir Veer apna aur apne pita ka khana laake table pe rakh deta hai,
Mohan : Veer aaj tumhe hammer train karne ki koi jarurat nahi hai. Tum apna luggage pack kar lo, kal tumhe jack Nouding city le jayenge.
Veer : Nouding city? Kis liye?
Mohan : kya tum padhna nahi chahte ho martial soul ke baare mai. Aur tumhe banna nahi hai soul master? Jack tumhe chod aayega beginner soul master school mai. Tum wanha padh sakte ho jo tumhe chahiye.
Veer : papa aapne aapka mind kyun change kiya?
Mohan : tum jana chahte ho ya nahi ?
Veer (mann mai) : to issliye papa subha subha chale gaye thy, kyun ki unko grandpa jack se milna tha.
Veer : aagar mai chala jaunga to apka khane ka kya hoga.
Mohan : tumhe sach mai lagta hai ki mujhe tumhara jarurat hai? Tum jao….tumne ye path chuna hai, sirf wanhi hammering technique use karna jo maine tumhe sikhaya hai aur wanha ka blacksmith shop mai apprentice ban jana, wo kafi hoga tumhara income ke liye.
Mai tumhe itne ashani se Nouding city nahi bhejunga, jane se pehle promise karo mujhe kuch.
Veer : mai promise karta hun.
Mohan : tumne ye pucha hi nahi mai kya chahta hun aur tum pehle hi promise kar diye. As a men kabhi bhi tumhara promise break maat karna.
Veer : aap kahe aur wo mai na maan ye kabhi nahi hoga. Kyun ki aap jo bhi kahenge wo mere bhale ke liye hi hoga.
Mohan : thik hai, mai ye promise chahta hun ki,
mujhe usse kuch farak nahi padta ki tum kese tumhara soul power train karte ho, kabhi bhi koi bhi soul ring iss hammer mai add nahi karoge, aur koi bhi iska existence bhi jese na jaan paye, aur koi bhi ye na jaan paye ki tum ek twin martial soul ke malik ho.Kya tum ye kar paoge?
Veer : blue silver plant ka kya?
Mohan : wo tum kabhi bhi use kar sakte ho, jesse chahe.
Veer : iska matlab mai sirf blue silver plant use kar sakta hun, right?
Mohan : yes….
Veer : thik hai papa….mai ye promise karta hun apse, koi bhi ye nahi jaan payega ki mai twin martial soul owner hun.
Mohan : thik hai chalo khana khate hai….
Jaab Veer jane wala tha school ussi din subha subha jack bhi aajate hai veer ke ghar Veer ko lene ke liye.
Jack Veer ke ghar ke ander jaake,
Jack : Veer, tumne tumhara saman pack kar liya hai?
Jaab Veer wo sunta hai to,
Veer : ssssshhhh, ye bahut loud hai grandpa jack, papa ko disturbance pasand nahi hai jaab wo sote hai taab.
Jack : Veer, aab bhi tum tumhare dad ke baare mai soch rahe ho, tumhare school jane ke wajaye.
Veer : grandpa jack mujhe aur kuch samay de.
Fir Veer bhi chup chap apna saman lata hai aur jack ke sath chala jata hai bina apne pita ko bataye, kyun ki pichle raat ko hi wo bata diya tha aur mohan ne bhi han kar di thy aur mohan ne ye bhi bola tha ki subha subha usse disturb na kare.
Per Veer jane se pehle ek letter chod deta hai, jo ki jaab mahan utha taab wo padha.
Letter,
Papa mai grandpa jack ke sath ja raha hun, aap apna khyal rakhna, bhulna maat, khana bana diya hai kha lena.
Aaj mohan veer ko bahut miss kar raha tha wo khana ko dekhte huye, aur Veer ke baare mai soch raha tha, per Veer jane se pehle hi mohan ne usse keh diya tha,
Mohan : Veer, aagar kabhi bhi ye lage ki ye decision galat hai to wapas aake blacksmith ban jana. Aur jo bhi ho mai tumhare sath hun.
Raste mai Veer aur jack,
Jack : Veer, tum jyada village ko miss karoge….ya apne piyakad pita ko….
Veer : dono ko…. Grandpa jack, kya aap mujhe school ke baare mai kuch bata sakte hai? Aur aas paas ke area ke baare mai bhi?
Jack : han..han..kyun nahi..kya janna chahte ho?
Veer : papa ne kaha hai ki mujhe blacksmith shop mai kaam karna hai school ke baad.
Jack : kya kaam karna hai blacksmith shop mai? Wo pagal ho gaya hai kya? Tum aabhi bahut chote ho uske liye. Tum baas apne padhayi pe dhyaan do.
Yese hi baate karte karte dono Nouding city pahunch gaye, Veer to baas city ko hi dekh raha hota hai, bade bade alishan ghar, unchi unchi building bhi thy, aur bahut hi jyada khubsurat tha, wo dono ek market ke ander se chale ja rahe thy school ke aur.

Good update
 
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