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Jaab Veer master ke paas pahunchta hai to master ke right hand mai snake bite ke nisaan thy, aagar koyi tumhare Martial soul ko nukshan pahunchayenge to wo impact aap pe bhi dikhega aur master ke sath yanhi hua tha, jaab Datura snake ne jaab Pao ko apne munh aur danto se pakada tha to wo bite ke nishan master ke hath mai bhi pada. Sayad pakadte time Datura snake poa ko bite kar diya tha.
Aur datura snake ke bite mai jo toxic hota hai to wo toxic bhi master ke body mai chala gaya tha jiss ke wajah se wo behosh ho gaye hai aur marne ke karib bhi jake gaye.
Per Veer kesse unhe marne deta, apne pichle jindegi mai Veer bahut se poison ke bare mai janta tha aur unko handle bhi kiya tha to wo isko bhi handle karta hai, pehle master ke hath mai ek chota sa cut lagata hai, fir apne soul power ki madat se uss poison ko spread hone se suppress karne lagta hai. Aur us cut ke through wo poison ko bahar nikal leta hai, fir ek kapda usme ache se tightly bandh deta hai.
Thodi der baad master ko hosh bhi aajata hai aur Veer ko pani mangte hai Veer bhi unhe pani pilata hai aur ache se betha deta hai.
Thodi de rest lene ke baad,
Master : Veer tumne mujhe bachaya?
Veer : yes master, mere papa ne bata diya tha thoda bahut ki kesse poisonous wound ko treat karte hai. Master aap abhi bhi weak hai aap wait kijiye mai ham dono ke liye kuch khane ko banata hun.
Master : wait Veer, kya tumne soul ring completely absorb kar liya hai.
Veer master ki baat sunke apna blue silver plant ko yaad karta hai, aur uska martial soul uske right hand mai aajata hai. Master bhi usko dekh ke khush thy wo ye bhi dekh sakte hai ki pehle ke mukawale ye wala bahut alag hai.
Master : iska toughness kesa hai, aur iska soul skill kya hai.
Veer usko demonstrate karta hai, blue silver plant ka kuch branches nikal ke charo aur fail jati hai aur ek ped ko jakad leti hai, jisse Veer ne target ke roop mai select kiya tha.
Veer : mai abhi 50 meter ki radius mai kahi pe bhi attack kar sakta hun. Aur iska skill baas winding hai.
Master : ye feature controlling branch’s soul master ka hai aur iska toughness bhi acha hai. Agar mai galat nahi to, isme datura snake ki toxin bhi add hai.
Veer : yes master. Per sirf paralytic effect datura snake ki toxicity nahi hai.
Master : Ye dono winding and paralytic combination bhi thik hai. Jaab tak apke opponent ke paas aapse do soul ring se jyada na ho iss winding se bachna ashan nahi hoga. Chalo aab jaldi karo haame school bhi louta na hai.
Veer : per master….
Master : mai abhi thik hun Veer, chalo chalte hai….
Fir dono nikla jate hai forest se aur school pahunch jate hai fir Veer master ko unke cabin mai chodne Jata hai aur master ko unke bed pe leta ke,
Veer : Master aap ache se rest kijiye aagar kuch bhi jaruri ho to mujhe batana mai kar dunga apne aap ko takleef mat dena.
Master : maine kabhi ye socha nahi tha ki iss baar mai bach jaunga. Mai bahut jald recover bhi kar lunga. Per tumhara practice interrupted nahi hona chahiye. Mujhe wo second book ko lake do jo bookshelf ke third row ke left side mai hai.
Veer wo book jake nikal leta hai,
Master : isko apne paas rakho, ye book mai mere research hai soul power practice ke upar. Tum isse pura padh lena aur practice bhi karna. Per abhi ke liye jake Nouding city martial soul hall mai register karlo. Iske baad tum haar mahine soul master allowance milta rahega. Aur tumhe apprentice hone ke jarurat bhi nahi hai.
Veer : thik hai master, aap abhi rest kijiye, mai jata hun.
Fir veer master ke cabin se bahar nikal aata hai, jaab wo bahar aata hai to school close hone ka bell bhi bajta hai,
Veer : class khatam ho gaya hai, chalo chalte hai Zara aur W aur baki sabhi dorm 7 dosto se milte hai. Ye sochte huye Veer nikal jata hai Wanha se.
Per yanha school mai hala macha hua tha sabhi mai baas ek hi baat pe aaj charcha ho rahi thy, ki koyi apprentice boss Joe ke sath fight karne wali hai. Aur wo sabhi iss fight ko dekhne ke liye bade utable thy.
Aur ek ground mai do group khade huye thy ek Joe ka aur ek Zara ka, dono amne samne thy.
Joe : little girl, tum abhi bhi piche hat sakti ho.
Zara : kyun tum dar gaye ho ek choti ladki se har jaoge isliye, agar yesa hai to fir mere follower ho jao.
Joe : kya kaha mai dara hua hun aur tumse…hun….aur tum samajhte kya ho mujhe. W ye apprentice pagal ho gayi hai kya mujhse fight karne ke bare mai soch rahi hai.
Zara : tumhara ye bekar ki baate band karo, fight karna hai to karo.
Joe : maine suna hai ki tumhara martial soul Rabbit hai. Aagar tum harna chahti ho to, mujhe bura nahi lagega tumhe apna pet banane mai.
Tum bhi 10 admi ho aur ham bhi 10. Battle ground mai ek ke baad ek entry karenge jo jite ga wo next opponent ke sath battle karega aur jo last mak khada rahega wo jitega.
Zara : thik hai, aajao jo bhi pehle aana chahta hai.
W : boss….
Joe (mann mai) : little girl, tum strong ho to kya hua baki saab to trash hai. Lagatar battle karne se tumhara energy jyada consume karega aur tum ashani se haar jaogi.
Fir Joe ek ladke ko aage bhej deta hai, idhar se Zara aage ane lagti hai to W usse rok deta hai.
W : boss, mujhe pehle jane do.
Zara : kya tum sure ho.
Ladka : loser, W aagar mai tumhe aaj hara na diya to mera surname Liu nahi hoga.
W bhi confident ke sath uss ladke ke samne aake khada ho jata hai,
W : agar tum haar jaoge, to future mai tumhara fallen angel naam hoga.
Ye kehke W apna martial soul bahar nikal leta hai W ka martial soul beast soul tha, ye ek Red Tiger tha. W ke baad wo ladka bhi apna martial soul bahar nikal ta hai uska martial soul ek danda (monkey King dekha hai na monkey king ka hatiyar Jessa)tha.
W bina deri kiye uss ladke ke upar attack kar deta hai, wo ladka bhi W ka attack ko block karke W ko piche ke taraf phenk deta hai, W bhi piche aane ke baad fir se ek baar aur attack karne lagta hai per wo ladka ne apne martial soul se W ke pet pe marta hai jisse W firse piche ke taraf jake padta hai.
Fir bhi W har nahi manta hai, wo ek aur baar uthke uss ladke ke upar attack kardeta hai per iss baar jaab ladka W ko marne wala tha ki W ne uska danda pakad leta hai apne hath se. Per wo ladka bhi ye dekh ke hasta hai fir danda uska hath se gayab ho jata hai aur wo ladka anti clock wise ghum jata hai aur ghumne ke time hi uska danda ek baar wo uske hath mai aajata hai jisse wo W ke back pe ek jabardast maar jaad deta hai. Jisse W udte huye Apne team mate ke paas padta hai aur uska martial soul bhi gayab ho chuka tha.
Aur idhar Veer bhi ye news sun ke tayar hoke inke taraf hi aaraha tha.
Idhar Joe khush tha aur Zara baas gusse mai dikh rahi thy. Aur Veer ye saab dekh chuka tha matlab W ka fight.
Veer : W bahut impulsive hai aur wo amne samne fight mai kabhi bhi jit nahi sakta hai usko close fight leni hogi jitne ke liye.
Zara jaab uss awaj sunti hai to piche mudti hai to wanha Veer khada tha.
Zara : Veer tum wapas aagaye. Kya, aab tum ye maat bolna ki mai bhi impulsive hun, ye kehke apna munh fula leti hai.
Veer : nahi tum sahi ho, haam apprentice hai iska matlab ye nahi hai ki haam hamesha hi bully ho. Per tumhe mera wait karna chahiye tha jaab taak mai wapas na aajata taab taak.
Zara : mai kyun wait karu? Aur mai kesse janungi ki tum kaab wapas aaoge? Aur wo to pehle se hi haame bully karne ke liye aagaye. Aur wo ladka khud ko boss Joe kehta hai. Aur mera martial soul ko wo apna pet banna chahta hai.
Idhar W ek baar aur uth ke Uss ladke ke sath fight karne lagta hai aur W baas maar kha raha tha. Per Veer aab W ko maar khate huye nahi dekh sakta tha to wo secretly W ki madat karta hai, apne 24 moonlight belt se kuch chote chote pathar bahar nikal ta hai aur apne soul power ke help se uss opponent wale ladke ki sabhi 4 joints (hath ka 2 leg ka 2) ko marta hai jisse wo piche ke taraf chala jata hai, aur W ko ye mouka mil jata hai, to W usko marne lagta hai aur maar maar ke usko Out kar deta hai battle ground se. Aur wo ladka bhi out hoke wanhi behosh ho jata hai, aur isiki sath W pehla match jit leta hai.
W : I won….I won……I won….yaaaaahoooooo……yaaaahhhoooo…..
Zara : Joe haar maan jao, aur mere follower ban jao mai tumhe maaf kar sakta hun.
Zara ki baate sunke Joe gusse mai laal ho jata hai aur uska team ka do bande ko bhej deta hai gira hua banda ko lane ke liye wo dono bhi jake uss ladke ko le aate hai,
Joe (gusse se) : ham hamara pehla battle har gaye hai, Lee aab tum jao.
Lee ko dekh ke Veer Zara ke kaan mai kuch kehta hai,
Zara : W aap wapas aajao, iss battle mai Veer ko jane do.
W bhi Zara ki baat maan ke battle ground se bahar aajata hai aur uski jagah Veer jake khada ho jata hai.
Lee bade hi confidence ke sath battle ground mai khade hoke Veer ko ghur raha tha, kehte hai na confidence thik per over confidence galat hai yanha bhi wanhi hua Lee thoda over confidence ho gaya jisse chalte uske uska martial soul bhi use nahi kiya aur sidha Veer pe attack kar deta hai, per Veer ne usko koyi mouka hi nahi diya usne apna jade hand ka use karke Lee ka attack ko block karta hai aur Lee ke upar ek punch jaad deta hai apna jade hand se jisse Lee dur jake girta hai aur behosh ho jata hai.
Joe ki gang ka sabhi member including Joe saab munh fade Veer ko dekh rahe thy,
Joe gang : ye kya tha?
Veer : next….
W : ye kessa tha Joe? Tumhe kuch problem hai isse? Veer ne apna martial soul aur soul power use hi nahi kiya hai. Tumhe abhi isiwaqt haar maan leni chahiye jisse ki tum baad mai koyi pareshani na ho.
W ki baat sunke Joe khud battle ground mai aane ka faisla karta hai per pehle do ladke ko bhej ke Lee ko battle ground se bahar le jata hai aur fir wo khud entry leta hai.
Joe : Joe, martial soul Red Wolf, eleventh rank war soul master ek soul ring ke sath.
Ye kehke apna martial soul bahar nikal leta hai aur uske charo taraf ek white soul ring aajati hai, aur uske sar ke upar ek red wolf.
Veer : Veer, martial soul Blue silver plant.
Joe and gang : kya!!!!blue silver plant?
Ye kehke sabhi hasne lagte hai.
Veer : eleventh rank tool soul master.
Baas yahi baat thy ki saab chup ho gaye.
Joe : tumne abhi kya kaha?
Veer : eleventh rank tool soul master ek soul ring ke sath.
Ye kehke ke apna martial soul Blue silver plant ko bahar aane deta hai, aur uske charo taraf ek yellow soul ring aajati hai aur fir uske right palm mai Blue Silver Plant ka 2nd evolve bhi.
Abhi jo munh fade khade thy wo sabhi soul ring dekh ke aur bhi munh faad lete hai.
Joe (mann mai) : ye hundred year soul ring hai. Ye kesse ho sakta hai. Ek apprentice jo pehle saal hi aaya hai to wo war soul master kesse ban sakta hai.
Joe gang : boss Joe haara do isse….ye baas blue silver plant hai. Uske paas bhale hi powerful soul ring hai per uska martial soul useless hai.
Joe : shut up!!! Stupids....
(Mann mai) Ye ladke ka background kya hai? Iska pehla soul ring hi 100 years ka hai. Kya ye koyi badi family se belong karta hai? Fir Joe ka nazar Veer ke belt pe jati hai jo Veer ke kamar mai lagi huyi thy,
Ye jo belt hai koyi aam apprentice (matlab jo kissi sifarish se school mai admission lete thy) isko kabhi bhi afford nahi kar sakta hai.
Veer se,
Kya tum sach mai apprentice ho?
Veer : yes, kya ham aab fight suru kar sakte hai.
Joe : thik hai. Ye kehke wo attack kardeta hai veer pe.
Veer (mann mai) : amne samne ki fight thik hai aajao.
Joe (mann mai) : ye kid mere sath face to face fight karne ke bare mai soch raha hai, aur usne apna Martial soul bhi withdraw kar liya hai iska dimag mai kya chal raha hai.
Ye soch te huye Joe ne apna pehla attack Veer pe kar deta hai, Veer bhi Joe ki attack ko apne jade hand ki madat se rok deta hai, aur Joe ko piche ke taraf kiska deta hai. Fir aage badh ke uska ek hath pakad leta hai Joe abhi bhi sambhal nahi pata tha Veer ke through jaab piche kiska diya gaya tha, fir Veer Joe ko apne tarf khinch leta hai aur Joe ki pet mai ek punch jaad deta hai.
Joe uss punch ke impact se piche ke taraf jake padta hai. Per wo immediately khada bhi ho jata hai. Uska sare team mate apne munh pe hath rakh diye thy jaab Joe maar khaya tha wo bhi opponents se ek yesa opponent jo apna martial soul aur soul power bhi use nahi kiya tha.
Veer : mujhe aur bhi kuch kaam hai jo abhi karna hai, to isse jald se jald khatam karna hai mujhe.
Ye kehke apna martial soul ek aur baar yaad karta hai aur martial soul mai apna soul ring ki power transfer karta hai fir,
Veer : blue silver plant, winding….
Joe gang : boss….
Ye issliye kyun ki Veer ke kehte hi uska blue silver plant ke branches aage badh jate hai aur Joe ko jakad lete hai jisse Joe chatpatane lagta hai.
Joe gang : ye kid normal nahi hai.
Joe : ye kya hai? Mai hil bhi nahi pa raha hun.
Veer : tum isse nikal nahi sakte, to usko break karne ke bare mai sochna bhi mat warna khud ko hi takleef hogi. Aur mera blue silver plant mai Datura snake ki toughness hai aur Datura snake ki thodi toxicity bhi hai. Aur aagar tum ye soch rahe ho ki tum aur ladh paoge mujhse to mai bura nahi manuga tumhe isse bhi jyada punish karne mai.
Joe : nahi nahi…mai apna haar manta hun mujhe nikalo isse.
Joe ki baat sune Zara ki gang mai khusi ki leher doud jati hai sabhi Veer naam leke chilane lagte hai aur Joe ki gang ka sar niche ho jata hai.
Veer : thik hai jaab tum haar gaye ho to, tum wanhi karna jo tumne Zara se wada kiya tha.
Joe : mai tumhe apna boss kahu ya fir usse.
Veer : tum Zara ko hi boss kahoge kyun ki mai bhi Zara ko hara nahi paya hun warna to mai hi dorm 7 ka boss hota.
Zara bhi Veer ke side aagayi thy aur uske kadhe pe hath rakh ke,
Zara : thank you very, tumhe acha kaam kiya hai.
Veer : thik hai mujhe abhi jana hai to yanha ka baki ka kaam tum sambhal lena. Aur mujhe lagta hai ki future mai tum iss pure school ki bacho ki boss ban jaogi.
Zara : thik hai, aab tum ja sakte ho jo bhi tumhara kaam hai wo karne ke liye.
Zara : aur tumhe Joe, tumhe kuch problem hai mujhe apna boss kehne mai, chalo pehle mai apne bare mai bata deta hun.
Mera naam Zara hai, iss year ki apprentice, mera martial soul Rabbit hai, twelve level beast war soul master ek soul ring ke sath.
Joe : kya?
Fir Zara apni martial soul ko yaad karti hai per sab se iska alag tha iska koyi bhi soul iske sar ke paas nahi aaya balki ye khud kuch kuch rabbit ki tarah dikhne lagi thy per sabhi ki tarah iske charo aur bhi ek yellow ring aajati hai.
Sabhi apne maan mai baas yahi soch rahe thy ki iss year ke apprentice kissi Demon se kaam nahi hai.
Joe : boss Zara, mai ye manta hun ki aaj se aap mere boss ho aur aap future mai iss Nouding school ka bhi boss banegi. Sabhi aage aajao aur boss Zara ko greet karo.
Joe gang ke sare bache Joe ki baat maan ke Zara ke samne aake apna sar jhuka lete hai aur boss Zara..boss Zara kehne lagte hai.
Zara Veer ke taraf dekhke : Veer tumhe kuch kaam tha na to tum yanha kya kar rahe ho.
Veer aab taak baas Zara ko dekhe ja raha tha, fir aage badhke Zara ke rabbit ear ko sahlane lagta hai,
Veer : Zara, tum sach mai ek rabbit ho kya?
Zara Veer ki baate sunke kuch sochti hai fir apna munh fula leti hai aur gusse se,
Zara : kya? Tumme mujhe rabbit kesse kaha.
Aur Veer ko marne ke liye aage badhti hai ki Veer wanha se bhag jata hai, Veer bhag ke school ke bahar aajata hai aur aage chalne lagta hai wo abhi Nouding city ke bicho bich ja raha tha janha Martial soul hall moujud hai.
Veer (mann mai) : akhir kaar mai mera skill ko breakthrough karke next level mai le aaya aur wo problem bhi solve ho gaya aur mai mera pehla soul ring bhi pa liya.
Aur master kehte hai ki iss land mai bahut se clan hai. Kya mai iss land mai ek naya clan Mystrious clan bana sakta hun.
Yese hi kafi kuch sochte sochte Veer martial soul hall ke paas pahunch jata hai aur uske ander jane lagta hai ki usko guards usko rok deta hai.
Guard : ruk jao kid. Ye martial soul hall isme tum bina wajah entry nahi le sakte ho.
Veer : hello, mai mera martial soul ko advanced identification ke liye aaya hun yanha.
Guard : thik hai ander aajao aur first floor ke reception mai jake master Ma se mil lo.
Veer bhi entry Kar leta hai aur ander jane lagta hai ki usko Max mil jata hai to Max bhi Veer ka Martial soul hall aane ka reason puchta hai to Veer bhi usko wanhi batata hai jo usne bahar Guard se kaha tha.
To Max Veer ko ek room ke paas le jata hai aur usko thodi der wait karne ka kehke ander chala jata hai janha pe master Ma moujud thy ander aake Max, master Ma ko Veer ke baare mai bata te hai aur fir bahar jake Veer ko ander le aata hai.
Veer : hello mister Ma.
Max, master Ma ko : yehi wo kid mai jiske baare mai maine apko abhi bataya, aur ye full soul born ke sath hi paida hua hai, per iska martial soul Blue silver plant hai.
Master Ma : Max, tum sure ho ki ye kid yanha apna martial soul ki advanced identification ke liye aaya hai, na koyi martial soul Awaken ke liye.
Max : maine khud iska martial soul awaken kiya hai.
Master Ma : thik hai.
Max : Veer master Ma tumhe le jayenge wanha tumhara advanced identification ke liye. Mujhe kuch kaam hai to mai ja raha hun abhi.
Veer : bye mister Max.
Fir Max wanha se chale jate hai aur uss room mai abhi baas Veer aur Master Ma hi thy.
Master Ma : Veer mere sath aao.
Veer : thik hai mister Ma, aur sorry apko takleef dene ke liye.
Master Ma : mujhe tum mister na bulao ye awkward lagta hai tumhara munh se.
Veer : to fir grandpa Ma kesa rahe ga.
Master : han ye thik rahega, tum mujhe grandpa Ma bula sakte ho.
Fir master Ma aur Veer aage badh jate hai ek kamre ki aur jo uss kamre ke akhir mai tha.

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Jaab Veer master ke paas pahunchta hai to master ke right hand mai snake bite ke nisaan thy, aagar koyi tumhare Martial soul ko nukshan pahunchayenge to wo impact aap pe bhi dikhega aur master ke sath yanhi hua tha, jaab Datura snake ne jaab Pao ko apne munh aur danto se pakada tha to wo bite ke nishan master ke hath mai bhi pada. Sayad pakadte time Datura snake poa ko bite kar diya tha.
Aur datura snake ke bite mai jo toxic hota hai to wo toxic bhi master ke body mai chala gaya tha jiss ke wajah se wo behosh ho gaye hai aur marne ke karib bhi jake gaye.
Per Veer kesse unhe marne deta, apne pichle jindegi mai Veer bahut se poison ke bare mai janta tha aur unko handle bhi kiya tha to wo isko bhi handle karta hai, pehle master ke hath mai ek chota sa cut lagata hai, fir apne soul power ki madat se uss poison ko spread hone se suppress karne lagta hai. Aur us cut ke through wo poison ko bahar nikal leta hai, fir ek kapda usme ache se tightly bandh deta hai.
Thodi der baad master ko hosh bhi aajata hai aur Veer ko pani mangte hai Veer bhi unhe pani pilata hai aur ache se betha deta hai.
Thodi de rest lene ke baad,
Master : Veer tumne mujhe bachaya?
Veer : yes master, mere papa ne bata diya tha thoda bahut ki kesse poisonous wound ko treat karte hai. Master aap abhi bhi weak hai aap wait kijiye mai ham dono ke liye kuch khane ko banata hun.
Master : wait Veer, kya tumne soul ring completely absorb kar liya hai.
Veer master ki baat sunke apna blue silver plant ko yaad karta hai, aur uska martial soul uske right hand mai aajata hai. Master bhi usko dekh ke khush thy wo ye bhi dekh sakte hai ki pehle ke mukawale ye wala bahut alag hai.
Master : iska toughness kesa hai, aur iska soul skill kya hai.
Veer usko demonstrate karta hai, blue silver plant ka kuch branches nikal ke charo aur fail jati hai aur ek ped ko jakad leti hai, jisse Veer ne target ke roop mai select kiya tha.
Veer : mai abhi 50 meter ki radius mai kahi pe bhi attack kar sakta hun. Aur iska skill baas winding hai.
Master : ye feature controlling branch’s soul master ka hai aur iska toughness bhi acha hai. Agar mai galat nahi to, isme datura snake ki toxin bhi add hai.
Veer : yes master. Per sirf paralytic effect datura snake ki toxicity nahi hai.
Master : Ye dono winding and paralytic combination bhi thik hai. Jaab tak apke opponent ke paas aapse do soul ring se jyada na ho iss winding se bachna ashan nahi hoga. Chalo aab jaldi karo haame school bhi louta na hai.
Veer : per master….
Master : mai abhi thik hun Veer, chalo chalte hai….
Fir dono nikla jate hai forest se aur school pahunch jate hai fir Veer master ko unke cabin mai chodne Jata hai aur master ko unke bed pe leta ke,
Veer : Master aap ache se rest kijiye aagar kuch bhi jaruri ho to mujhe batana mai kar dunga apne aap ko takleef mat dena.
Master : maine kabhi ye socha nahi tha ki iss baar mai bach jaunga. Mai bahut jald recover bhi kar lunga. Per tumhara practice interrupted nahi hona chahiye. Mujhe wo second book ko lake do jo bookshelf ke third row ke left side mai hai.
Veer wo book jake nikal leta hai,
Master : isko apne paas rakho, ye book mai mere research hai soul power practice ke upar. Tum isse pura padh lena aur practice bhi karna. Per abhi ke liye jake Nouding city martial soul hall mai register karlo. Iske baad tum haar mahine soul master allowance milta rahega. Aur tumhe apprentice hone ke jarurat bhi nahi hai.
Veer : thik hai master, aap abhi rest kijiye, mai jata hun.
Fir veer master ke cabin se bahar nikal aata hai, jaab wo bahar aata hai to school close hone ka bell bhi bajta hai,
Veer : class khatam ho gaya hai, chalo chalte hai Zara aur W aur baki sabhi dorm 7 dosto se milte hai. Ye sochte huye Veer nikal jata hai Wanha se.
Per yanha school mai hala macha hua tha sabhi mai baas ek hi baat pe aaj charcha ho rahi thy, ki koyi apprentice boss Joe ke sath fight karne wali hai. Aur wo sabhi iss fight ko dekhne ke liye bade utable thy.
Aur ek ground mai do group khade huye thy ek Joe ka aur ek Zara ka, dono amne samne thy.
Joe : little girl, tum abhi bhi piche hat sakti ho.
Zara : kyun tum dar gaye ho ek choti ladki se har jaoge isliye, agar yesa hai to fir mere follower ho jao.
Joe : kya kaha mai dara hua hun aur tumse…hun….aur tum samajhte kya ho mujhe. W ye apprentice pagal ho gayi hai kya mujhse fight karne ke bare mai soch rahi hai.
Zara : tumhara ye bekar ki baate band karo, fight karna hai to karo.
Joe : maine suna hai ki tumhara martial soul Rabbit hai. Aagar tum harna chahti ho to, mujhe bura nahi lagega tumhe apna pet banane mai.
Tum bhi 10 admi ho aur ham bhi 10. Battle ground mai ek ke baad ek entry karenge jo jite ga wo next opponent ke sath battle karega aur jo last mak khada rahega wo jitega.
Zara : thik hai, aajao jo bhi pehle aana chahta hai.
W : boss….
Joe (mann mai) : little girl, tum strong ho to kya hua baki saab to trash hai. Lagatar battle karne se tumhara energy jyada consume karega aur tum ashani se haar jaogi.
Fir Joe ek ladke ko aage bhej deta hai, idhar se Zara aage ane lagti hai to W usse rok deta hai.
W : boss, mujhe pehle jane do.
Zara : kya tum sure ho.
Ladka : loser, W aagar mai tumhe aaj hara na diya to mera surname Liu nahi hoga.
W bhi confident ke sath uss ladke ke samne aake khada ho jata hai,
W : agar tum haar jaoge, to future mai tumhara fallen angel naam hoga.
Ye kehke W apna martial soul bahar nikal leta hai W ka martial soul beast soul tha, ye ek Red Tiger tha. W ke baad wo ladka bhi apna martial soul bahar nikal ta hai uska martial soul ek danda (monkey King dekha hai na monkey king ka hatiyar Jessa)tha.
W bina deri kiye uss ladke ke upar attack kar deta hai, wo ladka bhi W ka attack ko block karke W ko piche ke taraf phenk deta hai, W bhi piche aane ke baad fir se ek baar aur attack karne lagta hai per wo ladka ne apne martial soul se W ke pet pe marta hai jisse W firse piche ke taraf jake padta hai.
Fir bhi W har nahi manta hai, wo ek aur baar uthke uss ladke ke upar attack kardeta hai per iss baar jaab ladka W ko marne wala tha ki W ne uska danda pakad leta hai apne hath se. Per wo ladka bhi ye dekh ke hasta hai fir danda uska hath se gayab ho jata hai aur wo ladka anti clock wise ghum jata hai aur ghumne ke time hi uska danda ek baar wo uske hath mai aajata hai jisse wo W ke back pe ek jabardast maar jaad deta hai. Jisse W udte huye Apne team mate ke paas padta hai aur uska martial soul bhi gayab ho chuka tha.
Aur idhar Veer bhi ye news sun ke tayar hoke inke taraf hi aaraha tha.
Idhar Joe khush tha aur Zara baas gusse mai dikh rahi thy. Aur Veer ye saab dekh chuka tha matlab W ka fight.
Veer : W bahut impulsive hai aur wo amne samne fight mai kabhi bhi jit nahi sakta hai usko close fight leni hogi jitne ke liye.
Zara jaab uss awaj sunti hai to piche mudti hai to wanha Veer khada tha.
Zara : Veer tum wapas aagaye. Kya, aab tum ye maat bolna ki mai bhi impulsive hun, ye kehke apna munh fula leti hai.
Veer : nahi tum sahi ho, haam apprentice hai iska matlab ye nahi hai ki haam hamesha hi bully ho. Per tumhe mera wait karna chahiye tha jaab taak mai wapas na aajata taab taak.
Zara : mai kyun wait karu? Aur mai kesse janungi ki tum kaab wapas aaoge? Aur wo to pehle se hi haame bully karne ke liye aagaye. Aur wo ladka khud ko boss Joe kehta hai. Aur mera martial soul ko wo apna pet banna chahta hai.
Idhar W ek baar aur uth ke Uss ladke ke sath fight karne lagta hai aur W baas maar kha raha tha. Per Veer aab W ko maar khate huye nahi dekh sakta tha to wo secretly W ki madat karta hai, apne 24 moonlight belt se kuch chote chote pathar bahar nikal ta hai aur apne soul power ke help se uss opponent wale ladke ki sabhi 4 joints (hath ka 2 leg ka 2) ko marta hai jisse wo piche ke taraf chala jata hai, aur W ko ye mouka mil jata hai, to W usko marne lagta hai aur maar maar ke usko Out kar deta hai battle ground se. Aur wo ladka bhi out hoke wanhi behosh ho jata hai, aur isiki sath W pehla match jit leta hai.
W : I won….I won……I won….yaaaaahoooooo……yaaaahhhoooo…..
Zara : Joe haar maan jao, aur mere follower ban jao mai tumhe maaf kar sakta hun.
Zara ki baate sunke Joe gusse mai laal ho jata hai aur uska team ka do bande ko bhej deta hai gira hua banda ko lane ke liye wo dono bhi jake uss ladke ko le aate hai,
Joe (gusse se) : ham hamara pehla battle har gaye hai, Lee aab tum jao.
Lee ko dekh ke Veer Zara ke kaan mai kuch kehta hai,
Zara : W aap wapas aajao, iss battle mai Veer ko jane do.
W bhi Zara ki baat maan ke battle ground se bahar aajata hai aur uski jagah Veer jake khada ho jata hai.
Lee bade hi confidence ke sath battle ground mai khade hoke Veer ko ghur raha tha, kehte hai na confidence thik per over confidence galat hai yanha bhi wanhi hua Lee thoda over confidence ho gaya jisse chalte uske uska martial soul bhi use nahi kiya aur sidha Veer pe attack kar deta hai, per Veer ne usko koyi mouka hi nahi diya usne apna jade hand ka use karke Lee ka attack ko block karta hai aur Lee ke upar ek punch jaad deta hai apna jade hand se jisse Lee dur jake girta hai aur behosh ho jata hai.
Joe ki gang ka sabhi member including Joe saab munh fade Veer ko dekh rahe thy,
Joe gang : ye kya tha?
Veer : next….
W : ye kessa tha Joe? Tumhe kuch problem hai isse? Veer ne apna martial soul aur soul power use hi nahi kiya hai. Tumhe abhi isiwaqt haar maan leni chahiye jisse ki tum baad mai koyi pareshani na ho.
W ki baat sunke Joe khud battle ground mai aane ka faisla karta hai per pehle do ladke ko bhej ke Lee ko battle ground se bahar le jata hai aur fir wo khud entry leta hai.
Joe : Joe, martial soul Red Wolf, eleventh rank war soul master ek soul ring ke sath.
Ye kehke apna martial soul bahar nikal leta hai aur uske charo taraf ek white soul ring aajati hai, aur uske sar ke upar ek red wolf.
Veer : Veer, martial soul Blue silver plant.
Joe and gang : kya!!!!blue silver plant?
Ye kehke sabhi hasne lagte hai.
Veer : eleventh rank tool soul master.
Baas yahi baat thy ki saab chup ho gaye.
Joe : tumne abhi kya kaha?
Veer : eleventh rank tool soul master ek soul ring ke sath.
Ye kehke ke apna martial soul Blue silver plant ko bahar aane deta hai, aur uske charo taraf ek yellow soul ring aajati hai aur fir uske right palm mai Blue Silver Plant ka 2nd evolve bhi.
Abhi jo munh fade khade thy wo sabhi soul ring dekh ke aur bhi munh faad lete hai.
Joe (mann mai) : ye hundred year soul ring hai. Ye kesse ho sakta hai. Ek apprentice jo pehle saal hi aaya hai to wo war soul master kesse ban sakta hai.
Joe gang : boss Joe haara do isse….ye baas blue silver plant hai. Uske paas bhale hi powerful soul ring hai per uska martial soul useless hai.
Joe : shut up!!! Stupids....
(Mann mai) Ye ladke ka background kya hai? Iska pehla soul ring hi 100 years ka hai. Kya ye koyi badi family se belong karta hai? Fir Joe ka nazar Veer ke belt pe jati hai jo Veer ke kamar mai lagi huyi thy,
Ye jo belt hai koyi aam apprentice (matlab jo kissi sifarish se school mai admission lete thy) isko kabhi bhi afford nahi kar sakta hai.
Veer se,
Kya tum sach mai apprentice ho?
Veer : yes, kya ham aab fight suru kar sakte hai.
Joe : thik hai. Ye kehke wo attack kardeta hai veer pe.
Veer (mann mai) : amne samne ki fight thik hai aajao.
Joe (mann mai) : ye kid mere sath face to face fight karne ke bare mai soch raha hai, aur usne apna Martial soul bhi withdraw kar liya hai iska dimag mai kya chal raha hai.
Ye soch te huye Joe ne apna pehla attack Veer pe kar deta hai, Veer bhi Joe ki attack ko apne jade hand ki madat se rok deta hai, aur Joe ko piche ke taraf kiska deta hai. Fir aage badh ke uska ek hath pakad leta hai Joe abhi bhi sambhal nahi pata tha Veer ke through jaab piche kiska diya gaya tha, fir Veer Joe ko apne tarf khinch leta hai aur Joe ki pet mai ek punch jaad deta hai.
Joe uss punch ke impact se piche ke taraf jake padta hai. Per wo immediately khada bhi ho jata hai. Uska sare team mate apne munh pe hath rakh diye thy jaab Joe maar khaya tha wo bhi opponents se ek yesa opponent jo apna martial soul aur soul power bhi use nahi kiya tha.
Veer : mujhe aur bhi kuch kaam hai jo abhi karna hai, to isse jald se jald khatam karna hai mujhe.
Ye kehke apna martial soul ek aur baar yaad karta hai aur martial soul mai apna soul ring ki power transfer karta hai fir,
Veer : blue silver plant, winding….
Joe gang : boss….
Ye issliye kyun ki Veer ke kehte hi uska blue silver plant ke branches aage badh jate hai aur Joe ko jakad lete hai jisse Joe chatpatane lagta hai.
Joe gang : ye kid normal nahi hai.
Joe : ye kya hai? Mai hil bhi nahi pa raha hun.
Veer : tum isse nikal nahi sakte, to usko break karne ke bare mai sochna bhi mat warna khud ko hi takleef hogi. Aur mera blue silver plant mai Datura snake ki toughness hai aur Datura snake ki thodi toxicity bhi hai. Aur aagar tum ye soch rahe ho ki tum aur ladh paoge mujhse to mai bura nahi manuga tumhe isse bhi jyada punish karne mai.
Joe : nahi nahi…mai apna haar manta hun mujhe nikalo isse.
Joe ki baat sune Zara ki gang mai khusi ki leher doud jati hai sabhi Veer naam leke chilane lagte hai aur Joe ki gang ka sar niche ho jata hai.
Veer : thik hai jaab tum haar gaye ho to, tum wanhi karna jo tumne Zara se wada kiya tha.
Joe : mai tumhe apna boss kahu ya fir usse.
Veer : tum Zara ko hi boss kahoge kyun ki mai bhi Zara ko hara nahi paya hun warna to mai hi dorm 7 ka boss hota.
Zara bhi Veer ke side aagayi thy aur uske kadhe pe hath rakh ke,
Zara : thank you very, tumhe acha kaam kiya hai.
Veer : thik hai mujhe abhi jana hai to yanha ka baki ka kaam tum sambhal lena. Aur mujhe lagta hai ki future mai tum iss pure school ki bacho ki boss ban jaogi.
Zara : thik hai, aab tum ja sakte ho jo bhi tumhara kaam hai wo karne ke liye.
Zara : aur tumhe Joe, tumhe kuch problem hai mujhe apna boss kehne mai, chalo pehle mai apne bare mai bata deta hun.
Mera naam Zara hai, iss year ki apprentice, mera martial soul Rabbit hai, twelve level beast war soul master ek soul ring ke sath.
Joe : kya?
Fir Zara apni martial soul ko yaad karti hai per sab se iska alag tha iska koyi bhi soul iske sar ke paas nahi aaya balki ye khud kuch kuch rabbit ki tarah dikhne lagi thy per sabhi ki tarah iske charo aur bhi ek yellow ring aajati hai.
Sabhi apne maan mai baas yahi soch rahe thy ki iss year ke apprentice kissi Demon se kaam nahi hai.
Joe : boss Zara, mai ye manta hun ki aaj se aap mere boss ho aur aap future mai iss Nouding school ka bhi boss banegi. Sabhi aage aajao aur boss Zara ko greet karo.
Joe gang ke sare bache Joe ki baat maan ke Zara ke samne aake apna sar jhuka lete hai aur boss Zara..boss Zara kehne lagte hai.
Zara Veer ke taraf dekhke : Veer tumhe kuch kaam tha na to tum yanha kya kar rahe ho.
Veer aab taak baas Zara ko dekhe ja raha tha, fir aage badhke Zara ke rabbit ear ko sahlane lagta hai,
Veer : Zara, tum sach mai ek rabbit ho kya?
Zara Veer ki baate sunke kuch sochti hai fir apna munh fula leti hai aur gusse se,
Zara : kya? Tumme mujhe rabbit kesse kaha.
Aur Veer ko marne ke liye aage badhti hai ki Veer wanha se bhag jata hai, Veer bhag ke school ke bahar aajata hai aur aage chalne lagta hai wo abhi Nouding city ke bicho bich ja raha tha janha Martial soul hall moujud hai.
Veer (mann mai) : akhir kaar mai mera skill ko breakthrough karke next level mai le aaya aur wo problem bhi solve ho gaya aur mai mera pehla soul ring bhi pa liya.
Aur master kehte hai ki iss land mai bahut se clan hai. Kya mai iss land mai ek naya clan Mystrious clan bana sakta hun.
Yese hi kafi kuch sochte sochte Veer martial soul hall ke paas pahunch jata hai aur uske ander jane lagta hai ki usko guards usko rok deta hai.
Guard : ruk jao kid. Ye martial soul hall isme tum bina wajah entry nahi le sakte ho.
Veer : hello, mai mera martial soul ko advanced identification ke liye aaya hun yanha.
Guard : thik hai ander aajao aur first floor ke reception mai jake master Ma se mil lo.
Veer bhi entry Kar leta hai aur ander jane lagta hai ki usko Max mil jata hai to Max bhi Veer ka Martial soul hall aane ka reason puchta hai to Veer bhi usko wanhi batata hai jo usne bahar Guard se kaha tha.
To Max Veer ko ek room ke paas le jata hai aur usko thodi der wait karne ka kehke ander chala jata hai janha pe master Ma moujud thy ander aake Max, master Ma ko Veer ke baare mai bata te hai aur fir bahar jake Veer ko ander le aata hai.
Veer : hello mister Ma.
Max, master Ma ko : yehi wo kid mai jiske baare mai maine apko abhi bataya, aur ye full soul born ke sath hi paida hua hai, per iska martial soul Blue silver plant hai.
Master Ma : Max, tum sure ho ki ye kid yanha apna martial soul ki advanced identification ke liye aaya hai, na koyi martial soul Awaken ke liye.
Max : maine khud iska martial soul awaken kiya hai.
Master Ma : thik hai.
Max : Veer master Ma tumhe le jayenge wanha tumhara advanced identification ke liye. Mujhe kuch kaam hai to mai ja raha hun abhi.
Veer : bye mister Max.
Fir Max wanha se chale jate hai aur uss room mai abhi baas Veer aur Master Ma hi thy.
Master Ma : Veer mere sath aao.
Veer : thik hai mister Ma, aur sorry apko takleef dene ke liye.
Master Ma : mujhe tum mister na bulao ye awkward lagta hai tumhara munh se.
Veer : to fir grandpa Ma kesa rahe ga.
Master : han ye thik rahega, tum mujhe grandpa Ma bula sakte ho.
Fir master Ma aur Veer aage badh jate hai ek kamre ki aur jo uss kamre ke akhir mai tha.

superb fantastic update bhai maza aa gya
 

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Jaab Veer master ke paas pahunchta hai to master ke right hand mai snake bite ke nisaan thy, aagar koyi tumhare Martial soul ko nukshan pahunchayenge to wo impact aap pe bhi dikhega aur master ke sath yanhi hua tha, jaab Datura snake ne jaab Pao ko apne munh aur danto se pakada tha to wo bite ke nishan master ke hath mai bhi pada. Sayad pakadte time Datura snake poa ko bite kar diya tha.
Aur datura snake ke bite mai jo toxic hota hai to wo toxic bhi master ke body mai chala gaya tha jiss ke wajah se wo behosh ho gaye hai aur marne ke karib bhi jake gaye.
Per Veer kesse unhe marne deta, apne pichle jindegi mai Veer bahut se poison ke bare mai janta tha aur unko handle bhi kiya tha to wo isko bhi handle karta hai, pehle master ke hath mai ek chota sa cut lagata hai, fir apne soul power ki madat se uss poison ko spread hone se suppress karne lagta hai. Aur us cut ke through wo poison ko bahar nikal leta hai, fir ek kapda usme ache se tightly bandh deta hai.
Thodi der baad master ko hosh bhi aajata hai aur Veer ko pani mangte hai Veer bhi unhe pani pilata hai aur ache se betha deta hai.
Thodi de rest lene ke baad,
Master : Veer tumne mujhe bachaya?
Veer : yes master, mere papa ne bata diya tha thoda bahut ki kesse poisonous wound ko treat karte hai. Master aap abhi bhi weak hai aap wait kijiye mai ham dono ke liye kuch khane ko banata hun.
Master : wait Veer, kya tumne soul ring completely absorb kar liya hai.
Veer master ki baat sunke apna blue silver plant ko yaad karta hai, aur uska martial soul uske right hand mai aajata hai. Master bhi usko dekh ke khush thy wo ye bhi dekh sakte hai ki pehle ke mukawale ye wala bahut alag hai.
Master : iska toughness kesa hai, aur iska soul skill kya hai.
Veer usko demonstrate karta hai, blue silver plant ka kuch branches nikal ke charo aur fail jati hai aur ek ped ko jakad leti hai, jisse Veer ne target ke roop mai select kiya tha.
Veer : mai abhi 50 meter ki radius mai kahi pe bhi attack kar sakta hun. Aur iska skill baas winding hai.
Master : ye feature controlling branch’s soul master ka hai aur iska toughness bhi acha hai. Agar mai galat nahi to, isme datura snake ki toxin bhi add hai.
Veer : yes master. Per sirf paralytic effect datura snake ki toxicity nahi hai.
Master : Ye dono winding and paralytic combination bhi thik hai. Jaab tak apke opponent ke paas aapse do soul ring se jyada na ho iss winding se bachna ashan nahi hoga. Chalo aab jaldi karo haame school bhi louta na hai.
Veer : per master….
Master : mai abhi thik hun Veer, chalo chalte hai….
Fir dono nikla jate hai forest se aur school pahunch jate hai fir Veer master ko unke cabin mai chodne Jata hai aur master ko unke bed pe leta ke,
Veer : Master aap ache se rest kijiye aagar kuch bhi jaruri ho to mujhe batana mai kar dunga apne aap ko takleef mat dena.
Master : maine kabhi ye socha nahi tha ki iss baar mai bach jaunga. Mai bahut jald recover bhi kar lunga. Per tumhara practice interrupted nahi hona chahiye. Mujhe wo second book ko lake do jo bookshelf ke third row ke left side mai hai.
Veer wo book jake nikal leta hai,
Master : isko apne paas rakho, ye book mai mere research hai soul power practice ke upar. Tum isse pura padh lena aur practice bhi karna. Per abhi ke liye jake Nouding city martial soul hall mai register karlo. Iske baad tum haar mahine soul master allowance milta rahega. Aur tumhe apprentice hone ke jarurat bhi nahi hai.
Veer : thik hai master, aap abhi rest kijiye, mai jata hun.
Fir veer master ke cabin se bahar nikal aata hai, jaab wo bahar aata hai to school close hone ka bell bhi bajta hai,
Veer : class khatam ho gaya hai, chalo chalte hai Zara aur W aur baki sabhi dorm 7 dosto se milte hai. Ye sochte huye Veer nikal jata hai Wanha se.
Per yanha school mai hala macha hua tha sabhi mai baas ek hi baat pe aaj charcha ho rahi thy, ki koyi apprentice boss Joe ke sath fight karne wali hai. Aur wo sabhi iss fight ko dekhne ke liye bade utable thy.
Aur ek ground mai do group khade huye thy ek Joe ka aur ek Zara ka, dono amne samne thy.
Joe : little girl, tum abhi bhi piche hat sakti ho.
Zara : kyun tum dar gaye ho ek choti ladki se har jaoge isliye, agar yesa hai to fir mere follower ho jao.
Joe : kya kaha mai dara hua hun aur tumse…hun….aur tum samajhte kya ho mujhe. W ye apprentice pagal ho gayi hai kya mujhse fight karne ke bare mai soch rahi hai.
Zara : tumhara ye bekar ki baate band karo, fight karna hai to karo.
Joe : maine suna hai ki tumhara martial soul Rabbit hai. Aagar tum harna chahti ho to, mujhe bura nahi lagega tumhe apna pet banane mai.
Tum bhi 10 admi ho aur ham bhi 10. Battle ground mai ek ke baad ek entry karenge jo jite ga wo next opponent ke sath battle karega aur jo last mak khada rahega wo jitega.
Zara : thik hai, aajao jo bhi pehle aana chahta hai.
W : boss….
Joe (mann mai) : little girl, tum strong ho to kya hua baki saab to trash hai. Lagatar battle karne se tumhara energy jyada consume karega aur tum ashani se haar jaogi.
Fir Joe ek ladke ko aage bhej deta hai, idhar se Zara aage ane lagti hai to W usse rok deta hai.
W : boss, mujhe pehle jane do.
Zara : kya tum sure ho.
Ladka : loser, W aagar mai tumhe aaj hara na diya to mera surname Liu nahi hoga.
W bhi confident ke sath uss ladke ke samne aake khada ho jata hai,
W : agar tum haar jaoge, to future mai tumhara fallen angel naam hoga.
Ye kehke W apna martial soul bahar nikal leta hai W ka martial soul beast soul tha, ye ek Red Tiger tha. W ke baad wo ladka bhi apna martial soul bahar nikal ta hai uska martial soul ek danda (monkey King dekha hai na monkey king ka hatiyar Jessa)tha.
W bina deri kiye uss ladke ke upar attack kar deta hai, wo ladka bhi W ka attack ko block karke W ko piche ke taraf phenk deta hai, W bhi piche aane ke baad fir se ek baar aur attack karne lagta hai per wo ladka ne apne martial soul se W ke pet pe marta hai jisse W firse piche ke taraf jake padta hai.
Fir bhi W har nahi manta hai, wo ek aur baar uthke uss ladke ke upar attack kardeta hai per iss baar jaab ladka W ko marne wala tha ki W ne uska danda pakad leta hai apne hath se. Per wo ladka bhi ye dekh ke hasta hai fir danda uska hath se gayab ho jata hai aur wo ladka anti clock wise ghum jata hai aur ghumne ke time hi uska danda ek baar wo uske hath mai aajata hai jisse wo W ke back pe ek jabardast maar jaad deta hai. Jisse W udte huye Apne team mate ke paas padta hai aur uska martial soul bhi gayab ho chuka tha.
Aur idhar Veer bhi ye news sun ke tayar hoke inke taraf hi aaraha tha.
Idhar Joe khush tha aur Zara baas gusse mai dikh rahi thy. Aur Veer ye saab dekh chuka tha matlab W ka fight.
Veer : W bahut impulsive hai aur wo amne samne fight mai kabhi bhi jit nahi sakta hai usko close fight leni hogi jitne ke liye.
Zara jaab uss awaj sunti hai to piche mudti hai to wanha Veer khada tha.
Zara : Veer tum wapas aagaye. Kya, aab tum ye maat bolna ki mai bhi impulsive hun, ye kehke apna munh fula leti hai.
Veer : nahi tum sahi ho, haam apprentice hai iska matlab ye nahi hai ki haam hamesha hi bully ho. Per tumhe mera wait karna chahiye tha jaab taak mai wapas na aajata taab taak.
Zara : mai kyun wait karu? Aur mai kesse janungi ki tum kaab wapas aaoge? Aur wo to pehle se hi haame bully karne ke liye aagaye. Aur wo ladka khud ko boss Joe kehta hai. Aur mera martial soul ko wo apna pet banna chahta hai.
Idhar W ek baar aur uth ke Uss ladke ke sath fight karne lagta hai aur W baas maar kha raha tha. Per Veer aab W ko maar khate huye nahi dekh sakta tha to wo secretly W ki madat karta hai, apne 24 moonlight belt se kuch chote chote pathar bahar nikal ta hai aur apne soul power ke help se uss opponent wale ladke ki sabhi 4 joints (hath ka 2 leg ka 2) ko marta hai jisse wo piche ke taraf chala jata hai, aur W ko ye mouka mil jata hai, to W usko marne lagta hai aur maar maar ke usko Out kar deta hai battle ground se. Aur wo ladka bhi out hoke wanhi behosh ho jata hai, aur isiki sath W pehla match jit leta hai.
W : I won….I won……I won….yaaaaahoooooo……yaaaahhhoooo…..
Zara : Joe haar maan jao, aur mere follower ban jao mai tumhe maaf kar sakta hun.
Zara ki baate sunke Joe gusse mai laal ho jata hai aur uska team ka do bande ko bhej deta hai gira hua banda ko lane ke liye wo dono bhi jake uss ladke ko le aate hai,
Joe (gusse se) : ham hamara pehla battle har gaye hai, Lee aab tum jao.
Lee ko dekh ke Veer Zara ke kaan mai kuch kehta hai,
Zara : W aap wapas aajao, iss battle mai Veer ko jane do.
W bhi Zara ki baat maan ke battle ground se bahar aajata hai aur uski jagah Veer jake khada ho jata hai.
Lee bade hi confidence ke sath battle ground mai khade hoke Veer ko ghur raha tha, kehte hai na confidence thik per over confidence galat hai yanha bhi wanhi hua Lee thoda over confidence ho gaya jisse chalte uske uska martial soul bhi use nahi kiya aur sidha Veer pe attack kar deta hai, per Veer ne usko koyi mouka hi nahi diya usne apna jade hand ka use karke Lee ka attack ko block karta hai aur Lee ke upar ek punch jaad deta hai apna jade hand se jisse Lee dur jake girta hai aur behosh ho jata hai.
Joe ki gang ka sabhi member including Joe saab munh fade Veer ko dekh rahe thy,
Joe gang : ye kya tha?
Veer : next….
W : ye kessa tha Joe? Tumhe kuch problem hai isse? Veer ne apna martial soul aur soul power use hi nahi kiya hai. Tumhe abhi isiwaqt haar maan leni chahiye jisse ki tum baad mai koyi pareshani na ho.
W ki baat sunke Joe khud battle ground mai aane ka faisla karta hai per pehle do ladke ko bhej ke Lee ko battle ground se bahar le jata hai aur fir wo khud entry leta hai.
Joe : Joe, martial soul Red Wolf, eleventh rank war soul master ek soul ring ke sath.
Ye kehke apna martial soul bahar nikal leta hai aur uske charo taraf ek white soul ring aajati hai, aur uske sar ke upar ek red wolf.
Veer : Veer, martial soul Blue silver plant.
Joe and gang : kya!!!!blue silver plant?
Ye kehke sabhi hasne lagte hai.
Veer : eleventh rank tool soul master.
Baas yahi baat thy ki saab chup ho gaye.
Joe : tumne abhi kya kaha?
Veer : eleventh rank tool soul master ek soul ring ke sath.
Ye kehke ke apna martial soul Blue silver plant ko bahar aane deta hai, aur uske charo taraf ek yellow soul ring aajati hai aur fir uske right palm mai Blue Silver Plant ka 2nd evolve bhi.
Abhi jo munh fade khade thy wo sabhi soul ring dekh ke aur bhi munh faad lete hai.
Joe (mann mai) : ye hundred year soul ring hai. Ye kesse ho sakta hai. Ek apprentice jo pehle saal hi aaya hai to wo war soul master kesse ban sakta hai.
Joe gang : boss Joe haara do isse….ye baas blue silver plant hai. Uske paas bhale hi powerful soul ring hai per uska martial soul useless hai.
Joe : shut up!!! Stupids....
(Mann mai) Ye ladke ka background kya hai? Iska pehla soul ring hi 100 years ka hai. Kya ye koyi badi family se belong karta hai? Fir Joe ka nazar Veer ke belt pe jati hai jo Veer ke kamar mai lagi huyi thy,
Ye jo belt hai koyi aam apprentice (matlab jo kissi sifarish se school mai admission lete thy) isko kabhi bhi afford nahi kar sakta hai.
Veer se,
Kya tum sach mai apprentice ho?
Veer : yes, kya ham aab fight suru kar sakte hai.
Joe : thik hai. Ye kehke wo attack kardeta hai veer pe.
Veer (mann mai) : amne samne ki fight thik hai aajao.
Joe (mann mai) : ye kid mere sath face to face fight karne ke bare mai soch raha hai, aur usne apna Martial soul bhi withdraw kar liya hai iska dimag mai kya chal raha hai.
Ye soch te huye Joe ne apna pehla attack Veer pe kar deta hai, Veer bhi Joe ki attack ko apne jade hand ki madat se rok deta hai, aur Joe ko piche ke taraf kiska deta hai. Fir aage badh ke uska ek hath pakad leta hai Joe abhi bhi sambhal nahi pata tha Veer ke through jaab piche kiska diya gaya tha, fir Veer Joe ko apne tarf khinch leta hai aur Joe ki pet mai ek punch jaad deta hai.
Joe uss punch ke impact se piche ke taraf jake padta hai. Per wo immediately khada bhi ho jata hai. Uska sare team mate apne munh pe hath rakh diye thy jaab Joe maar khaya tha wo bhi opponents se ek yesa opponent jo apna martial soul aur soul power bhi use nahi kiya tha.
Veer : mujhe aur bhi kuch kaam hai jo abhi karna hai, to isse jald se jald khatam karna hai mujhe.
Ye kehke apna martial soul ek aur baar yaad karta hai aur martial soul mai apna soul ring ki power transfer karta hai fir,
Veer : blue silver plant, winding….
Joe gang : boss….
Ye issliye kyun ki Veer ke kehte hi uska blue silver plant ke branches aage badh jate hai aur Joe ko jakad lete hai jisse Joe chatpatane lagta hai.
Joe gang : ye kid normal nahi hai.
Joe : ye kya hai? Mai hil bhi nahi pa raha hun.
Veer : tum isse nikal nahi sakte, to usko break karne ke bare mai sochna bhi mat warna khud ko hi takleef hogi. Aur mera blue silver plant mai Datura snake ki toughness hai aur Datura snake ki thodi toxicity bhi hai. Aur aagar tum ye soch rahe ho ki tum aur ladh paoge mujhse to mai bura nahi manuga tumhe isse bhi jyada punish karne mai.
Joe : nahi nahi…mai apna haar manta hun mujhe nikalo isse.
Joe ki baat sune Zara ki gang mai khusi ki leher doud jati hai sabhi Veer naam leke chilane lagte hai aur Joe ki gang ka sar niche ho jata hai.
Veer : thik hai jaab tum haar gaye ho to, tum wanhi karna jo tumne Zara se wada kiya tha.
Joe : mai tumhe apna boss kahu ya fir usse.
Veer : tum Zara ko hi boss kahoge kyun ki mai bhi Zara ko hara nahi paya hun warna to mai hi dorm 7 ka boss hota.
Zara bhi Veer ke side aagayi thy aur uske kadhe pe hath rakh ke,
Zara : thank you very, tumhe acha kaam kiya hai.
Veer : thik hai mujhe abhi jana hai to yanha ka baki ka kaam tum sambhal lena. Aur mujhe lagta hai ki future mai tum iss pure school ki bacho ki boss ban jaogi.
Zara : thik hai, aab tum ja sakte ho jo bhi tumhara kaam hai wo karne ke liye.
Zara : aur tumhe Joe, tumhe kuch problem hai mujhe apna boss kehne mai, chalo pehle mai apne bare mai bata deta hun.
Mera naam Zara hai, iss year ki apprentice, mera martial soul Rabbit hai, twelve level beast war soul master ek soul ring ke sath.
Joe : kya?
Fir Zara apni martial soul ko yaad karti hai per sab se iska alag tha iska koyi bhi soul iske sar ke paas nahi aaya balki ye khud kuch kuch rabbit ki tarah dikhne lagi thy per sabhi ki tarah iske charo aur bhi ek yellow ring aajati hai.
Sabhi apne maan mai baas yahi soch rahe thy ki iss year ke apprentice kissi Demon se kaam nahi hai.
Joe : boss Zara, mai ye manta hun ki aaj se aap mere boss ho aur aap future mai iss Nouding school ka bhi boss banegi. Sabhi aage aajao aur boss Zara ko greet karo.
Joe gang ke sare bache Joe ki baat maan ke Zara ke samne aake apna sar jhuka lete hai aur boss Zara..boss Zara kehne lagte hai.
Zara Veer ke taraf dekhke : Veer tumhe kuch kaam tha na to tum yanha kya kar rahe ho.
Veer aab taak baas Zara ko dekhe ja raha tha, fir aage badhke Zara ke rabbit ear ko sahlane lagta hai,
Veer : Zara, tum sach mai ek rabbit ho kya?
Zara Veer ki baate sunke kuch sochti hai fir apna munh fula leti hai aur gusse se,
Zara : kya? Tumme mujhe rabbit kesse kaha.
Aur Veer ko marne ke liye aage badhti hai ki Veer wanha se bhag jata hai, Veer bhag ke school ke bahar aajata hai aur aage chalne lagta hai wo abhi Nouding city ke bicho bich ja raha tha janha Martial soul hall moujud hai.
Veer (mann mai) : akhir kaar mai mera skill ko breakthrough karke next level mai le aaya aur wo problem bhi solve ho gaya aur mai mera pehla soul ring bhi pa liya.
Aur master kehte hai ki iss land mai bahut se clan hai. Kya mai iss land mai ek naya clan Mystrious clan bana sakta hun.
Yese hi kafi kuch sochte sochte Veer martial soul hall ke paas pahunch jata hai aur uske ander jane lagta hai ki usko guards usko rok deta hai.
Guard : ruk jao kid. Ye martial soul hall isme tum bina wajah entry nahi le sakte ho.
Veer : hello, mai mera martial soul ko advanced identification ke liye aaya hun yanha.
Guard : thik hai ander aajao aur first floor ke reception mai jake master Ma se mil lo.
Veer bhi entry Kar leta hai aur ander jane lagta hai ki usko Max mil jata hai to Max bhi Veer ka Martial soul hall aane ka reason puchta hai to Veer bhi usko wanhi batata hai jo usne bahar Guard se kaha tha.
To Max Veer ko ek room ke paas le jata hai aur usko thodi der wait karne ka kehke ander chala jata hai janha pe master Ma moujud thy ander aake Max, master Ma ko Veer ke baare mai bata te hai aur fir bahar jake Veer ko ander le aata hai.
Veer : hello mister Ma.
Max, master Ma ko : yehi wo kid mai jiske baare mai maine apko abhi bataya, aur ye full soul born ke sath hi paida hua hai, per iska martial soul Blue silver plant hai.
Master Ma : Max, tum sure ho ki ye kid yanha apna martial soul ki advanced identification ke liye aaya hai, na koyi martial soul Awaken ke liye.
Max : maine khud iska martial soul awaken kiya hai.
Master Ma : thik hai.
Max : Veer master Ma tumhe le jayenge wanha tumhara advanced identification ke liye. Mujhe kuch kaam hai to mai ja raha hun abhi.
Veer : bye mister Max.
Fir Max wanha se chale jate hai aur uss room mai abhi baas Veer aur Master Ma hi thy.
Master Ma : Veer mere sath aao.
Veer : thik hai mister Ma, aur sorry apko takleef dene ke liye.
Master Ma : mujhe tum mister na bulao ye awkward lagta hai tumhara munh se.
Veer : to fir grandpa Ma kesa rahe ga.
Master : han ye thik rahega, tum mujhe grandpa Ma bula sakte ho.
Fir master Ma aur Veer aage badh jate hai ek kamre ki aur jo uss kamre ke akhir mai tha.

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Jaab Veer master ke paas pahunchta hai to master ke right hand mai snake bite ke nisaan thy, aagar koyi tumhare Martial soul ko nukshan pahunchayenge to wo impact aap pe bhi dikhega aur master ke sath yanhi hua tha, jaab Datura snake ne jaab Pao ko apne munh aur danto se pakada tha to wo bite ke nishan master ke hath mai bhi pada. Sayad pakadte time Datura snake poa ko bite kar diya tha.
Aur datura snake ke bite mai jo toxic hota hai to wo toxic bhi master ke body mai chala gaya tha jiss ke wajah se wo behosh ho gaye hai aur marne ke karib bhi jake gaye.
Per Veer kesse unhe marne deta, apne pichle jindegi mai Veer bahut se poison ke bare mai janta tha aur unko handle bhi kiya tha to wo isko bhi handle karta hai, pehle master ke hath mai ek chota sa cut lagata hai, fir apne soul power ki madat se uss poison ko spread hone se suppress karne lagta hai. Aur us cut ke through wo poison ko bahar nikal leta hai, fir ek kapda usme ache se tightly bandh deta hai.
Thodi der baad master ko hosh bhi aajata hai aur Veer ko pani mangte hai Veer bhi unhe pani pilata hai aur ache se betha deta hai.
Thodi de rest lene ke baad,
Master : Veer tumne mujhe bachaya?
Veer : yes master, mere papa ne bata diya tha thoda bahut ki kesse poisonous wound ko treat karte hai. Master aap abhi bhi weak hai aap wait kijiye mai ham dono ke liye kuch khane ko banata hun.
Master : wait Veer, kya tumne soul ring completely absorb kar liya hai.
Veer master ki baat sunke apna blue silver plant ko yaad karta hai, aur uska martial soul uske right hand mai aajata hai. Master bhi usko dekh ke khush thy wo ye bhi dekh sakte hai ki pehle ke mukawale ye wala bahut alag hai.
Master : iska toughness kesa hai, aur iska soul skill kya hai.
Veer usko demonstrate karta hai, blue silver plant ka kuch branches nikal ke charo aur fail jati hai aur ek ped ko jakad leti hai, jisse Veer ne target ke roop mai select kiya tha.
Veer : mai abhi 50 meter ki radius mai kahi pe bhi attack kar sakta hun. Aur iska skill baas winding hai.
Master : ye feature controlling branch’s soul master ka hai aur iska toughness bhi acha hai. Agar mai galat nahi to, isme datura snake ki toxin bhi add hai.
Veer : yes master. Per sirf paralytic effect datura snake ki toxicity nahi hai.
Master : Ye dono winding and paralytic combination bhi thik hai. Jaab tak apke opponent ke paas aapse do soul ring se jyada na ho iss winding se bachna ashan nahi hoga. Chalo aab jaldi karo haame school bhi louta na hai.
Veer : per master….
Master : mai abhi thik hun Veer, chalo chalte hai….
Fir dono nikla jate hai forest se aur school pahunch jate hai fir Veer master ko unke cabin mai chodne Jata hai aur master ko unke bed pe leta ke,
Veer : Master aap ache se rest kijiye aagar kuch bhi jaruri ho to mujhe batana mai kar dunga apne aap ko takleef mat dena.
Master : maine kabhi ye socha nahi tha ki iss baar mai bach jaunga. Mai bahut jald recover bhi kar lunga. Per tumhara practice interrupted nahi hona chahiye. Mujhe wo second book ko lake do jo bookshelf ke third row ke left side mai hai.
Veer wo book jake nikal leta hai,
Master : isko apne paas rakho, ye book mai mere research hai soul power practice ke upar. Tum isse pura padh lena aur practice bhi karna. Per abhi ke liye jake Nouding city martial soul hall mai register karlo. Iske baad tum haar mahine soul master allowance milta rahega. Aur tumhe apprentice hone ke jarurat bhi nahi hai.
Veer : thik hai master, aap abhi rest kijiye, mai jata hun.
Fir veer master ke cabin se bahar nikal aata hai, jaab wo bahar aata hai to school close hone ka bell bhi bajta hai,
Veer : class khatam ho gaya hai, chalo chalte hai Zara aur W aur baki sabhi dorm 7 dosto se milte hai. Ye sochte huye Veer nikal jata hai Wanha se.
Per yanha school mai hala macha hua tha sabhi mai baas ek hi baat pe aaj charcha ho rahi thy, ki koyi apprentice boss Joe ke sath fight karne wali hai. Aur wo sabhi iss fight ko dekhne ke liye bade utable thy.
Aur ek ground mai do group khade huye thy ek Joe ka aur ek Zara ka, dono amne samne thy.
Joe : little girl, tum abhi bhi piche hat sakti ho.
Zara : kyun tum dar gaye ho ek choti ladki se har jaoge isliye, agar yesa hai to fir mere follower ho jao.
Joe : kya kaha mai dara hua hun aur tumse…hun….aur tum samajhte kya ho mujhe. W ye apprentice pagal ho gayi hai kya mujhse fight karne ke bare mai soch rahi hai.
Zara : tumhara ye bekar ki baate band karo, fight karna hai to karo.
Joe : maine suna hai ki tumhara martial soul Rabbit hai. Aagar tum harna chahti ho to, mujhe bura nahi lagega tumhe apna pet banane mai.
Tum bhi 10 admi ho aur ham bhi 10. Battle ground mai ek ke baad ek entry karenge jo jite ga wo next opponent ke sath battle karega aur jo last mak khada rahega wo jitega.
Zara : thik hai, aajao jo bhi pehle aana chahta hai.
W : boss….
Joe (mann mai) : little girl, tum strong ho to kya hua baki saab to trash hai. Lagatar battle karne se tumhara energy jyada consume karega aur tum ashani se haar jaogi.
Fir Joe ek ladke ko aage bhej deta hai, idhar se Zara aage ane lagti hai to W usse rok deta hai.
W : boss, mujhe pehle jane do.
Zara : kya tum sure ho.
Ladka : loser, W aagar mai tumhe aaj hara na diya to mera surname Liu nahi hoga.
W bhi confident ke sath uss ladke ke samne aake khada ho jata hai,
W : agar tum haar jaoge, to future mai tumhara fallen angel naam hoga.
Ye kehke W apna martial soul bahar nikal leta hai W ka martial soul beast soul tha, ye ek Red Tiger tha. W ke baad wo ladka bhi apna martial soul bahar nikal ta hai uska martial soul ek danda (monkey King dekha hai na monkey king ka hatiyar Jessa)tha.
W bina deri kiye uss ladke ke upar attack kar deta hai, wo ladka bhi W ka attack ko block karke W ko piche ke taraf phenk deta hai, W bhi piche aane ke baad fir se ek baar aur attack karne lagta hai per wo ladka ne apne martial soul se W ke pet pe marta hai jisse W firse piche ke taraf jake padta hai.
Fir bhi W har nahi manta hai, wo ek aur baar uthke uss ladke ke upar attack kardeta hai per iss baar jaab ladka W ko marne wala tha ki W ne uska danda pakad leta hai apne hath se. Per wo ladka bhi ye dekh ke hasta hai fir danda uska hath se gayab ho jata hai aur wo ladka anti clock wise ghum jata hai aur ghumne ke time hi uska danda ek baar wo uske hath mai aajata hai jisse wo W ke back pe ek jabardast maar jaad deta hai. Jisse W udte huye Apne team mate ke paas padta hai aur uska martial soul bhi gayab ho chuka tha.
Aur idhar Veer bhi ye news sun ke tayar hoke inke taraf hi aaraha tha.
Idhar Joe khush tha aur Zara baas gusse mai dikh rahi thy. Aur Veer ye saab dekh chuka tha matlab W ka fight.
Veer : W bahut impulsive hai aur wo amne samne fight mai kabhi bhi jit nahi sakta hai usko close fight leni hogi jitne ke liye.
Zara jaab uss awaj sunti hai to piche mudti hai to wanha Veer khada tha.
Zara : Veer tum wapas aagaye. Kya, aab tum ye maat bolna ki mai bhi impulsive hun, ye kehke apna munh fula leti hai.
Veer : nahi tum sahi ho, haam apprentice hai iska matlab ye nahi hai ki haam hamesha hi bully ho. Per tumhe mera wait karna chahiye tha jaab taak mai wapas na aajata taab taak.
Zara : mai kyun wait karu? Aur mai kesse janungi ki tum kaab wapas aaoge? Aur wo to pehle se hi haame bully karne ke liye aagaye. Aur wo ladka khud ko boss Joe kehta hai. Aur mera martial soul ko wo apna pet banna chahta hai.
Idhar W ek baar aur uth ke Uss ladke ke sath fight karne lagta hai aur W baas maar kha raha tha. Per Veer aab W ko maar khate huye nahi dekh sakta tha to wo secretly W ki madat karta hai, apne 24 moonlight belt se kuch chote chote pathar bahar nikal ta hai aur apne soul power ke help se uss opponent wale ladke ki sabhi 4 joints (hath ka 2 leg ka 2) ko marta hai jisse wo piche ke taraf chala jata hai, aur W ko ye mouka mil jata hai, to W usko marne lagta hai aur maar maar ke usko Out kar deta hai battle ground se. Aur wo ladka bhi out hoke wanhi behosh ho jata hai, aur isiki sath W pehla match jit leta hai.
W : I won….I won……I won….yaaaaahoooooo……yaaaahhhoooo…..
Zara : Joe haar maan jao, aur mere follower ban jao mai tumhe maaf kar sakta hun.
Zara ki baate sunke Joe gusse mai laal ho jata hai aur uska team ka do bande ko bhej deta hai gira hua banda ko lane ke liye wo dono bhi jake uss ladke ko le aate hai,
Joe (gusse se) : ham hamara pehla battle har gaye hai, Lee aab tum jao.
Lee ko dekh ke Veer Zara ke kaan mai kuch kehta hai,
Zara : W aap wapas aajao, iss battle mai Veer ko jane do.
W bhi Zara ki baat maan ke battle ground se bahar aajata hai aur uski jagah Veer jake khada ho jata hai.
Lee bade hi confidence ke sath battle ground mai khade hoke Veer ko ghur raha tha, kehte hai na confidence thik per over confidence galat hai yanha bhi wanhi hua Lee thoda over confidence ho gaya jisse chalte uske uska martial soul bhi use nahi kiya aur sidha Veer pe attack kar deta hai, per Veer ne usko koyi mouka hi nahi diya usne apna jade hand ka use karke Lee ka attack ko block karta hai aur Lee ke upar ek punch jaad deta hai apna jade hand se jisse Lee dur jake girta hai aur behosh ho jata hai.
Joe ki gang ka sabhi member including Joe saab munh fade Veer ko dekh rahe thy,
Joe gang : ye kya tha?
Veer : next….
W : ye kessa tha Joe? Tumhe kuch problem hai isse? Veer ne apna martial soul aur soul power use hi nahi kiya hai. Tumhe abhi isiwaqt haar maan leni chahiye jisse ki tum baad mai koyi pareshani na ho.
W ki baat sunke Joe khud battle ground mai aane ka faisla karta hai per pehle do ladke ko bhej ke Lee ko battle ground se bahar le jata hai aur fir wo khud entry leta hai.
Joe : Joe, martial soul Red Wolf, eleventh rank war soul master ek soul ring ke sath.
Ye kehke apna martial soul bahar nikal leta hai aur uske charo taraf ek white soul ring aajati hai, aur uske sar ke upar ek red wolf.
Veer : Veer, martial soul Blue silver plant.
Joe and gang : kya!!!!blue silver plant?
Ye kehke sabhi hasne lagte hai.
Veer : eleventh rank tool soul master.
Baas yahi baat thy ki saab chup ho gaye.
Joe : tumne abhi kya kaha?
Veer : eleventh rank tool soul master ek soul ring ke sath.
Ye kehke ke apna martial soul Blue silver plant ko bahar aane deta hai, aur uske charo taraf ek yellow soul ring aajati hai aur fir uske right palm mai Blue Silver Plant ka 2nd evolve bhi.
Abhi jo munh fade khade thy wo sabhi soul ring dekh ke aur bhi munh faad lete hai.
Joe (mann mai) : ye hundred year soul ring hai. Ye kesse ho sakta hai. Ek apprentice jo pehle saal hi aaya hai to wo war soul master kesse ban sakta hai.
Joe gang : boss Joe haara do isse….ye baas blue silver plant hai. Uske paas bhale hi powerful soul ring hai per uska martial soul useless hai.
Joe : shut up!!! Stupids....
(Mann mai) Ye ladke ka background kya hai? Iska pehla soul ring hi 100 years ka hai. Kya ye koyi badi family se belong karta hai? Fir Joe ka nazar Veer ke belt pe jati hai jo Veer ke kamar mai lagi huyi thy,
Ye jo belt hai koyi aam apprentice (matlab jo kissi sifarish se school mai admission lete thy) isko kabhi bhi afford nahi kar sakta hai.
Veer se,
Kya tum sach mai apprentice ho?
Veer : yes, kya ham aab fight suru kar sakte hai.
Joe : thik hai. Ye kehke wo attack kardeta hai veer pe.
Veer (mann mai) : amne samne ki fight thik hai aajao.
Joe (mann mai) : ye kid mere sath face to face fight karne ke bare mai soch raha hai, aur usne apna Martial soul bhi withdraw kar liya hai iska dimag mai kya chal raha hai.
Ye soch te huye Joe ne apna pehla attack Veer pe kar deta hai, Veer bhi Joe ki attack ko apne jade hand ki madat se rok deta hai, aur Joe ko piche ke taraf kiska deta hai. Fir aage badh ke uska ek hath pakad leta hai Joe abhi bhi sambhal nahi pata tha Veer ke through jaab piche kiska diya gaya tha, fir Veer Joe ko apne tarf khinch leta hai aur Joe ki pet mai ek punch jaad deta hai.
Joe uss punch ke impact se piche ke taraf jake padta hai. Per wo immediately khada bhi ho jata hai. Uska sare team mate apne munh pe hath rakh diye thy jaab Joe maar khaya tha wo bhi opponents se ek yesa opponent jo apna martial soul aur soul power bhi use nahi kiya tha.
Veer : mujhe aur bhi kuch kaam hai jo abhi karna hai, to isse jald se jald khatam karna hai mujhe.
Ye kehke apna martial soul ek aur baar yaad karta hai aur martial soul mai apna soul ring ki power transfer karta hai fir,
Veer : blue silver plant, winding….
Joe gang : boss….
Ye issliye kyun ki Veer ke kehte hi uska blue silver plant ke branches aage badh jate hai aur Joe ko jakad lete hai jisse Joe chatpatane lagta hai.
Joe gang : ye kid normal nahi hai.
Joe : ye kya hai? Mai hil bhi nahi pa raha hun.
Veer : tum isse nikal nahi sakte, to usko break karne ke bare mai sochna bhi mat warna khud ko hi takleef hogi. Aur mera blue silver plant mai Datura snake ki toughness hai aur Datura snake ki thodi toxicity bhi hai. Aur aagar tum ye soch rahe ho ki tum aur ladh paoge mujhse to mai bura nahi manuga tumhe isse bhi jyada punish karne mai.
Joe : nahi nahi…mai apna haar manta hun mujhe nikalo isse.
Joe ki baat sune Zara ki gang mai khusi ki leher doud jati hai sabhi Veer naam leke chilane lagte hai aur Joe ki gang ka sar niche ho jata hai.
Veer : thik hai jaab tum haar gaye ho to, tum wanhi karna jo tumne Zara se wada kiya tha.
Joe : mai tumhe apna boss kahu ya fir usse.
Veer : tum Zara ko hi boss kahoge kyun ki mai bhi Zara ko hara nahi paya hun warna to mai hi dorm 7 ka boss hota.
Zara bhi Veer ke side aagayi thy aur uske kadhe pe hath rakh ke,
Zara : thank you very, tumhe acha kaam kiya hai.
Veer : thik hai mujhe abhi jana hai to yanha ka baki ka kaam tum sambhal lena. Aur mujhe lagta hai ki future mai tum iss pure school ki bacho ki boss ban jaogi.
Zara : thik hai, aab tum ja sakte ho jo bhi tumhara kaam hai wo karne ke liye.
Zara : aur tumhe Joe, tumhe kuch problem hai mujhe apna boss kehne mai, chalo pehle mai apne bare mai bata deta hun.
Mera naam Zara hai, iss year ki apprentice, mera martial soul Rabbit hai, twelve level beast war soul master ek soul ring ke sath.
Joe : kya?
Fir Zara apni martial soul ko yaad karti hai per sab se iska alag tha iska koyi bhi soul iske sar ke paas nahi aaya balki ye khud kuch kuch rabbit ki tarah dikhne lagi thy per sabhi ki tarah iske charo aur bhi ek yellow ring aajati hai.
Sabhi apne maan mai baas yahi soch rahe thy ki iss year ke apprentice kissi Demon se kaam nahi hai.
Joe : boss Zara, mai ye manta hun ki aaj se aap mere boss ho aur aap future mai iss Nouding school ka bhi boss banegi. Sabhi aage aajao aur boss Zara ko greet karo.
Joe gang ke sare bache Joe ki baat maan ke Zara ke samne aake apna sar jhuka lete hai aur boss Zara..boss Zara kehne lagte hai.
Zara Veer ke taraf dekhke : Veer tumhe kuch kaam tha na to tum yanha kya kar rahe ho.
Veer aab taak baas Zara ko dekhe ja raha tha, fir aage badhke Zara ke rabbit ear ko sahlane lagta hai,
Veer : Zara, tum sach mai ek rabbit ho kya?
Zara Veer ki baate sunke kuch sochti hai fir apna munh fula leti hai aur gusse se,
Zara : kya? Tumme mujhe rabbit kesse kaha.
Aur Veer ko marne ke liye aage badhti hai ki Veer wanha se bhag jata hai, Veer bhag ke school ke bahar aajata hai aur aage chalne lagta hai wo abhi Nouding city ke bicho bich ja raha tha janha Martial soul hall moujud hai.
Veer (mann mai) : akhir kaar mai mera skill ko breakthrough karke next level mai le aaya aur wo problem bhi solve ho gaya aur mai mera pehla soul ring bhi pa liya.
Aur master kehte hai ki iss land mai bahut se clan hai. Kya mai iss land mai ek naya clan Mystrious clan bana sakta hun.
Yese hi kafi kuch sochte sochte Veer martial soul hall ke paas pahunch jata hai aur uske ander jane lagta hai ki usko guards usko rok deta hai.
Guard : ruk jao kid. Ye martial soul hall isme tum bina wajah entry nahi le sakte ho.
Veer : hello, mai mera martial soul ko advanced identification ke liye aaya hun yanha.
Guard : thik hai ander aajao aur first floor ke reception mai jake master Ma se mil lo.
Veer bhi entry Kar leta hai aur ander jane lagta hai ki usko Max mil jata hai to Max bhi Veer ka Martial soul hall aane ka reason puchta hai to Veer bhi usko wanhi batata hai jo usne bahar Guard se kaha tha.
To Max Veer ko ek room ke paas le jata hai aur usko thodi der wait karne ka kehke ander chala jata hai janha pe master Ma moujud thy ander aake Max, master Ma ko Veer ke baare mai bata te hai aur fir bahar jake Veer ko ander le aata hai.
Veer : hello mister Ma.
Max, master Ma ko : yehi wo kid mai jiske baare mai maine apko abhi bataya, aur ye full soul born ke sath hi paida hua hai, per iska martial soul Blue silver plant hai.
Master Ma : Max, tum sure ho ki ye kid yanha apna martial soul ki advanced identification ke liye aaya hai, na koyi martial soul Awaken ke liye.
Max : maine khud iska martial soul awaken kiya hai.
Master Ma : thik hai.
Max : Veer master Ma tumhe le jayenge wanha tumhara advanced identification ke liye. Mujhe kuch kaam hai to mai ja raha hun abhi.
Veer : bye mister Max.
Fir Max wanha se chale jate hai aur uss room mai abhi baas Veer aur Master Ma hi thy.
Master Ma : Veer mere sath aao.
Veer : thik hai mister Ma, aur sorry apko takleef dene ke liye.
Master Ma : mujhe tum mister na bulao ye awkward lagta hai tumhara munh se.
Veer : to fir grandpa Ma kesa rahe ga.
Master : han ye thik rahega, tum mujhe grandpa Ma bula sakte ho.
Fir master Ma aur Veer aage badh jate hai ek kamre ki aur jo uss kamre ke akhir mai tha.
 

NewWriter23

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Bahut badiya update tha Bhaii


Veer ki fight jor k sath bahut jabardast rhii

Soul datura snake Veer ki power jabardast badaya h

Dekhte h grandpa Mo kya naya sikhte h
Thank you, aur brother Grandpa Ma kuch sikhayenge nahi wo baas Veer ki soul power test karenge ki kitna badha hai.
 

NewWriter23

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Superb update
Bahut badiya update tha Bhaii


Veer ki fight jor k sath bahut jabardast rhii

Soul datura snake Veer ki power jabardast badaya h

Dekhte h grandpa Mo kya naya sikhte h
Thank you
 
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