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Kaal sham ko aaj kuch kaam hai to late night ghar loutunga to likhne ka time hi nahi milega
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Bhai tum to kam se kam daily dedo update . Dusri stories k writer time lgate hain update dene me . Upar se is story ko pdhkr next update k liye wait karna mushkil hojata hai . To bhai request hai . Agr ho skke to daily update de do ya phir har dusre din .Thank you
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Bhai har dusre din hi deta hun mai per aaj kuch kaam hai to ghar bhi late jaunga to aaj sayad ho na paye per kal pakka.
Congratulations to all the participants who have participated in all disciplines of sports in Tokyo Olympics 2020
Medal tally
01 Gold
02 Silver
04 Bronze
Total medal = 07
Best ever medal tally in india's Olympics history
Medal tally
01 Gold
02 Silver
04 Bronze
Total medal = 07
Best ever medal tally in india's Olympics history
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Update 9
Master Ma aur Veer jaab uss darwaje ke ander gaye to wo ek hall tha bahut bada hall.
Veer : grandpa Ma kya aap mujhe martial soul hall ke bare mai kuch bata sakte hai.
Master Ma : han kyun nahi, haar baat to nahi per jo jaruri hai wo bata sakta hun, aur wese bhi mujhe jyada kuch pata nahi hai, kyun ki mai level 1 martial soul hall mai hun.
Ye sabse lowest level martial soul hall hai, aur ye sub-branch hall ke naam se jana jata hai, inka level 1 hota hai. Koyi city jinta bhi chota kyun na ho wanha pe level 1 ka sub-branch hall rehna jaruri hai. City jitna bada hoga martial soul hall ka level bhi utna bada hoga, aur hamme bhi level 2 sub-branch hall ko report karna padta hai. Sirf level 4 martial soul hall jisse ham Main hall kehte hai wo sirf In dono kingdom ke capital mai hi hai.
Level 4 ke upar bhi ek aur level hai wo level 5 isko sacred temple kaha jata hai. Aur ye sabse holiest place hai martial soul hall ka.
Levels of Martial soul hall
Level 1 – sub-branch hall
Level 2 – sub-branch hall
Level 3 – branch hall
Level 4 – main hall
Level 5 – scared temple.
Level 6 – legendary soul hall
sacred temple ke upar bhi ek aur level hai jisse legendary soul hall kaha jata hai uss level ke martial soul hall mai jane ke liye ek soul master ko highest soul level ka hona jaruri hai. Aur wo sabhi soul master ka dream hota hai Wanha jana.
Veer : thank you grandpa Ma itna saab kuch batane ke liye. Kya haam aab suru kar sakte hai.
Master Ma : ok suru karte hai, tumhara soul power test.
Fir master Ma apni ankh band karke kuch karne lagte hai fir unke dono hath ke bicho bich ek yellow colour ka ball aajata hai. Fir veer ko uska martial soul ko bahar nikal ne ke liye kehte hai.
Veer bhi apna martial soul bahar nikal leta hai uska blue silver plant uska right hand palm mai aajata hai jisse dekh ke,
Master Ma : kya ye Blue Silver Plant hai?
Veer : han..kya isme kuch problem hai grandpa Ma?
Fir dhire dhire yellow soul ring bhi veer ke charo taraf ghumne lagti hai.
Master Ma : ye 100 year soul ring hai. Isiki wajah se Blue Silver Plant mai itna changes aagaya hai. Ye iss baat prove hai ki tum ek ache teacher ko follow kar rahe ho Nouding school mai. Per dukh iss baat ka hai ki blue silver plant ka development bahut low hota hai.
Chalo chodo wo baat ko aab tum apna soul power ke upar concentrate karo, aur isme hath rakho.
Veer bhi wesa hi karta hai pehle apna soul power ke upar concentrate karta hai fir master Ma ke hath mai rakha yellow ball ke upar hath rakhta hai thodi der ke liye fir apna hath wanha se hata leta hai.
Veer ke hath hatane ke baad jaab master ma uss ball mai dekhte hai to wo heran reh jate hai.
Master Ma : ye….ye….
Wo baas kabhi Veer ko to kabhi uss ball ko hi dekh rahe thy, unki ankho mai herangi saaf dekha ja sakta tha, thodi der baad,
Master ma : tumhara soul power level 13 hai!!!!ye kese ho sakta hai, tumne 2 level kesse skip kiya, tumhara level 10 tha aur tumhe soul ring hassil ki to tumhara level 11 hona chahiye tha per ye level 13 hai. Kesse?
Veer kya tum mujhe bata sakte ho ki tumne konsa soul beast ko hunt kiya tha soul ring ke liye.
Veer : Datura snake
Master Ma : kya? Datura snake? Datura snake to beast soul hai. Plant branch kesse animal branch ka soul ring use kar sakta hai? Ye kesse possible hai?
Veer : ye possible hai grandpa Ma, mere teacher isse Martial soul Mimicry kehte hai.
Master Ma : tumhara teacher...kon hai wo?
Veer : sabhi unhe master kehte hai.
Master Ma : master? Li…… ye wanhi hai jisne ye theory diya tha kafi saal pehle martial soul hall ko, per sabhi isko galat bata diye aur iska majak bhi udaya aur Li ko martial soul hall se expelled bhi kar diya gaya tha.
Veer (mann mai) : master ka naam Li hai, aur wo martial soul hall se nikale gaye hai unki theory ki wajah se.
Master ma : Veer, kya tum hamare martial soul hall mai join honge.
Veer : grandpa Ma mai yanha iss liye nahi aaya tha.
Master ma : mera matlab wo nahi tha, aagar tum join karte ho martial soul hall mai, to tum martial soul hall ke exclusive soul master banoge. Aur tumhara aage ki padhayi martial soul hall ke special school mai hoga, jisse tumhara future aur bhi acha ho jayega, aur ye bhi ho skata hai ki tum future mai ek bahut acha soul master baan sako.
Veer : per grandpa Ma ye possible nahi hai. Mai already Nouding school mai padh raha hun.
Master ma : ohh…sayad ye baat ko bahut deri (late) ho gayi hai. Ye sach hai ham martial soul hall hai per iska matlab ye nahi ki haam kisiko dusre school se snatch karle.
Aur mujhe daar bhi iss baat hai ki aagar haam wo kar bhi le to bhi master Li sayad iss baat se agree ho ki tum hame join karo.
Ye saab Max ki galti hai, wo tumhe directly martial soul hall le aana chahiye tha.
Veer : aap yesa nahi keh sakte hai grandpa Ma, aagar mai pehle yanha aajata to, mujhe ye acha soul ring kesse milta?
Master Ma : ye bhi sahi hai. Wo saab chodo, mai tumhe officially welcome karta hun soul master team mai. Aap abhi se soul master ke tour pe honored hai iss Tian Dou Empire mai.
Fir veer wanha se chala aata hai, per master ma ke mann mai ek afsos reh jata hai ki Max ki wajah se Veer ke Jessa genius martial soul hall ke hatho se fisal gaya.
Veer bhi market mai ghumte ghumte ek blacksmith shop ki aur chal pada, uss shop mai se baas Tan…tan…ki awaj aarahi thy Veer ko awaj sunke uske papa se kiya hua wada yaad aajata hai ki Nouding city mai jake ek blacksmith shop mai apprentice ban jana. Isiliye Veer uss shop mai aagaya tha.
Veer ko shop ki aur aate dekh ke,
Admi : boy, ye place dangerous hai yanha se chale jao. Aagar tumhe kuch kharidna hai to kisi bade ke sath aao.
Veer directly uss admi se puchta hai, wo admi hi iss blacksmith shop ka leader tha.
Veer : hello sir kya yanha koyi apprentice ki jarurat hai.
Veer ki yesi baat sunke wo admi bhi apna kaam rok ke veer ko dekhta hai,
Admi : kid, khud ko dekho, tum ek blacksmith ke jesse lag bhi nahi rahe ho.
Veer : sorry apka time waste kiya, aap mujhe kuch time dijiye mai abhi aata hun.
Ye kehke veer wanha se chala jata hai, to sare worker Veer ke upar haste hai kyun ki unhe lag raha tha ki ye bacha unke sath majak kar raha tha.
Veer wanha se jake ek dress ki dukan mai jata hai aur ek aproon aur gloves karidta hai fir wapas aajata hai uss blacksmith shop pe.
Veer : sir, kya aab mai blacksmith ke Jessa dikh raha hun.
Admi : boy, kya tum mera majak uda rahe ho. Jao yanha se aagar yesi baat hai to.
Veer : sir, mai Nouding school mai apprentice hun, mere paas har afternoon ko time free rehta hai. Mere papa bhi ek blacksmith hai, aur mai unke paas se forging sikhi huyi hai, aur mere papa ne hi kaha tha ki koyi blacksmith shop mai jake apprentice ban jana jisse tum har din forging ki practice kar pao aur usse ache se nikhar sako aur jo paisa milega usse tum apna school ka aur khudka kharcha nikal sako.
Admi : aagr tumhe lagta hai ki tum ye kar loge to aajao, aur hamme ek apprentice ke roop mai serve kar sakte ho tum. Per tumhara salary inta high nahi hoga, per mai tumhe khane ko de sakta hun aur 50 soul coin ye kesa rahega?
Veer : mujhe manzur hai.
Veer ki baate sunke sabhi worker Veer ke upar hasne lagte hai aur ye sochne lagte hai ki ek chota bacha kya kaam karega, aur kya sach mai isko forging aati hai.
Admi : chup ho jao sabhi aur apna kaam karo. Aur aagar sabhi aajka kaam khatam kar diya to mere taraf se sabhi ko treat.
Sabhi : thanks leader, fir saab apne kaam mai busy ho jate hai.
Admi Veer se : tumhe kaha tha tum forging sikhe ho apne papa se. Wo tumhe kya sikhaye hai jaab ki tum abhi bhi itne chote ho.
Veer : forging aur kya, bhale hi mai chota hun per mai strong hun.
Wo admi baas Veer ko dekh raha tha jesse ye janne ki kosis kar raha ho ki kya ye bacha jo bol raha hai wo sach hai ya jhut. Sayad Veer bhi ye admi ki dil ki baat samajh jata hai.
Veer : sayad apko mere baat pe yakin nahi hai to mujhe kuch try karne dijiye jisse aapko believe aajaye mere baat pe.
Admi jo apne hath mai hammer pakda hua tha usko Veer ke samne kar deta hai,
Admi : aagar tum ye hammer ko carry kar sakte ho to mai tumhare bato per believe kar lunga.
Veer ke dimag mai to kuch aur hi chal raha tha, uss admi ke samne pade iron ko dekh ke,
Veer : kya aap iss iron se uska impurities remove kar rahe thy?
Admi : hmm
Fir veer wo garam iron ke tukde mo utha leta hai aur aag mai leke rakh deta hai, wanha le ek ladke ko,
Veer : kya aap isse aur jyada garam kar sakte hai, kyun ki ye itna garam nahi hai jitna mujhe chahiye.
Wo ladka bhi Veer ki baat sunke uska leader ko dekhta hai uska leader bhi han mai apna sar hila deta hai to wo ladka bhi Veer ki baat manke forge ko aur garam kar deta hai jitna Veer ko chahiye tha.
Iron ke garam hone tak Veer apne papa ke baare sochne lagta hai ki kesse uske papa ne usko forging sikhayi, aur kya kya karwaya wo sari baate.
Jaab wo iron sahi se garam ho jata hai to Veer usse bahar nikal ke work zone mai le aata hai, aur wo hammer jo uss admi ne uske samne kiya tha, usko dekhta hai fir uske upar hath rakh deta hai,
Dekha issliye kyun ki wo hammer uska height se baas 1 feet chota tha aur weight mai usse sayad 2-3 times jyada.
Veer uss hammer ke upar hath rakh ke usko ek hi jhatke mai hi hawa mai utha leta hai, aur uss iron ko hammering karne ke liye bilkul ready ho jata hai.
Veer ka uss hammer ko utha na hi un sabhi worker ko heran kar deta hai, wo to baas pehla shock tha, jaab veer hammering start karta hai unsabhi ko pehle wale se bhi jyada shock lagte hai.
Jaab Veer uss iron ka sara impurities hata deta hai aur hammer jammin pe rakh deta hai to samne aur charo aur dekhta hai ki sabhi usko hi dekh rahe thy.
Veer : kya hua?
Admi : ye continuous hammering hai random skill of hammering ka. Aur maine suna hai ki sabse jyada 81 times hi hammering kiya gaya hai, aur sabse best skill hai blacksmithing ka.
Random skill of hammering iss land ki best skill hai koyi iron ka impurities remove karne ke liye. Isko sirf kuch hi masters ne mastery ki hai. Aur maine sirf iske baare mai suna tha aaj dekh bhi liya.
Ye baate kar rahe thy ki Veer ko yesa laga koyi uske upar nazar rakh raha per jaab wo uss aur dekhta hai to wanha koyi bhi nahi tha. Per ye baat sach thy, jaab se wo iss market mai hai taab se koyi baas Veer ke upar nazar gadaye betha hai. Jo bhi hai apna presence se leke apna face taak saab kuch chupake rakha hua hai.
Veer ka wo skill dekh ke wo leader Veer ko apprentice ke roop mai rakh leta hai ek achi khasi paid karke, ye Veer ka kehne ke baad hua tha kyun ki usko jo lease time milta hai wo usme hi shop pe jayega, warna wo shop leader to Veer ko permanently rakhna chahta tha.
Yese hi Veer ka saal beet ta gaya, school se shop fir training fir school ka kaam, isi bich Veer aur Zara ki bhi achi khasi dosti ho gayi thy. Dekhte dekhte 1 saal bhi beet gaya, aab term bhi khatam ho chuka tha aur sabhi ko apne apne ghar jana tha, Zara to apne ghar gayi nahi pata nahi kyun per Veer ghar jane ke liye excited tha, Zara ne Veer se bhi pucha kya wo uske sath Veer ke ghar mai ja sakta hai to Veer bhi maan jata hai, fir Veer aur Zara Veer ke ghar ke liye nikal jate hai.
Bahut chalne ke baad,
Zara : Veer, aur kitna chalna padega tumhara village aane mai.
Veer : baas thoda aur....
Yese hi chalte chalte, Veer aur Zara Veer ke ghar pahunch jate hai,
Veer : papa mai wapas aagaya, aap kese hai?
Ye keh ke jaab ander ghusa to charo aur nazar gayi wo place Jessa tha wesa hi hai abhi bhi bilkul messy. Fir Zara ko bhi welcome karta hai aur aage badhke apna bag ek table pe rakh ke ander ka kamre ki aur chala jata hai janha uske papa hamesha rest karte thy.
Jaab wo uss aur ja raha tha uss kamre se uske papa to nahi per grandpa jack bahar nikal te hai,
Veer : grandpa jack….
Grandpa jack : Veer, tum akele kyun wapas aaye.
Veer : grandpa jack mera sath Zara bhi aayi hai.
Zara : hello grandpa jack.
Grandpa jack : hello little girl
Veer : grandpa jack mere papa kanha hai.
Grandpa jack : mai bhi tumhare papa ko leke jane wala tha tumhe pick karne ke liye. Per wo ye chod ke kanhi chale gaye hai.
Ye kehke ek letter Veer ke taraf badha dete hai.
Veer wo letter leke padhne lagta hai,
Mohan : Veer, jaab tum ye letter padh rahe honge taab taak mai ja chuka honga. Mujhe kabhi dhundna maat wo tumhare baas ke bahar hai.
Jesse ek eagle jyada uncha udta hai taab jaab wo independent hota hai. Tumhe bhi wesa hi udna hai bahut upar. Per mai ek useless hun jo ki kabhi bhi tumhara madat nahi kar paya. Tumne apna path choose kar liya hai, aur tum ussi pe hi focus karna, aur mai issliye ja raha hun ki mera kuch chiz hai kisike paas wo lena hai mujhe kisi bhi kimat mai.
Mere bare mai sochna maat, aur tension maat lena tum tumhare path pe aage badhte jana ham ek din jarur milenge. Ye wada raha mera aur aagar ye letter padh ke aagar tum tumhare path se bhatak gaye to sayad hi haam kabhi mil paye.
Veer, tumhara blue silver plant tumari maa ki martial soul thy, aur mujhe tumpe believe hai ki usko ek yesi uchayi pe le jaoge ki tum per tumara maa aur mai garv kar sakenge.
Aur ek baat jo maine taab bhi kaha tha aur aab bhi, tumhe kabhi yesa laga ki soul master path ek good occupation nahi hai to wapas aajana saint soul village, aur mere jesa blacksmith ban jana.
Mujhe miss maat karna aur dukhi bilkul bhi mat hona, aur tum mere bete ho iss baat ka garv hai mujhe. Bye Veer.
Veer wo padhke behed dukhi ho jata hai, kyun ki uska papa usko chodke kahi chale gaye thy. Zara bhi aage badh ke Veer ke kandhe pe hath rakh deti hai jesse usse ye keh rahi ko ki dhuki maat ho tum aur tumhare papa jarur ek na ek din miloge. Grandpa jack bhi wanha se chale jate hai Wanha se ye kehke ki kabhi bhi kuch jarurat hai to mujhe yaad kar lena. Veer bhi wapas apne ghar ke kaam mai laag jata hai jisme Zara bhi uski madat kar rahi thy, Veer apne apko sambhal liya tha akhir sambhale kyun na, ek 7 saal ke bache ke ander 36 saal ka admi ka dimag jo tha.
Wanhi mohan ek safar pe nikal chuka tha apna chiz lene ke liye kisi se jisko wo bahut saal pehle diya tha.
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