Fantasy War of Gods

[Sandeep singh nirwan]

Aj toh update ana chahiye tha

 

[Asif khan]

Update 1 (Reborn)

Mystrious Clan, ye clan apne aap mai hi ek mystry hai, na koi isse hara paya hai na hi koi isse jhuka paya hai.​

Iss clan ko sabse mystry banata hai iss clan ke bilkul akhri chore pe baase ek pahad jisko sabhi "Devil mountain" ke naam se jante hai.​

Kehte hai ki ye mountain khud Devil ki den hai, aur aagar ek bade se pathar ko iss pahad ke upar se niche fenke to wo bhi 19 taak ginti leti hai niche se uska girne ki awaj aane ke liye. Aur ye bhi kehte hai ki niche jane ke liye isme 18 level hai jo ki khud Devil ne hi rache hai, jisko aaj tak koi bhi bhed nahi paya hai.​

Ye clan do bhago mai bata hua hai ek inner sect aur dusra outer sect, inner sect mai blood relate member hi rehte hai aur unka rehna, khana, pehen na, padhna, practice, saab kuch outer sect se bilkul alag aur ache hai.​

Outer sect mai wo disciple rehte hai jo ye clan ke dwara rehne diya gaya hai, isiliye unko kuch khas diya nahi jata tha, per outer sect ek chiz mai ache thy wo thy poison ka use karne mai.​

Per dono hi sect mai hidden weapon bhi bahut jyada matra mai use hote thy per alag alag, jese ki aapko bola tha ki outer sect se inner sect acha hai to jahir si baat hai unka hidden weapon inse acha hi hoga aur kuch mystrious bhi.​

Ye tha kuch iss clan ke bare mai, chaliye story pe chalte hai;​

Aaj mystrious Clan mai har taraf shanti hi chayi huyi thy, per ye shanti ki bich aaj kuch ho raha tha clan mai.​

Ek ladka blue colour ka dress pehne baas bhag raha tha aur uske piche 8-10 white kapde mai loog aarahe thy.​

aur ye blue colour ka dress mystrious Clan ka outer sect ka tha aur white colour inner sect ka.​

wo ladka abhi bhag hi raha tha ki unme se ek admi ne kuch needdles ko apne qi inject karke maare uss ladke ki taraf.​

Wo ladka bhi wo jaan gaya to wo bhi apna skill show karke bach gaya, jaab wo admi ye dekha to wo pehle kuch samajh nahi paya to wo ek aur baar pichli baar se jyada needdles ko apne qi ke sath mara.​

Iss baar bhi wo ladka apna pichli baar ki hi skill show kiya to jaab wo admi ne wo dekha to uske munh se baas ek hi naam nikla,​

Admi : Purple demon eye....​

Kyun ki jaab wo ladka wo skill use kiya to uska ankhe bilkul purple colour ka ho gaya tha, aur ye inner sect ka hi ek mystrious skill tha.​

per iss baar wo elder jaab ye jaan gaye to wo fir se pichle baar je jyaada qi ke sath baar kiye, per unhe kya pata tha ki aab ki baar ek aur jhatka dega wo ladka.​

jaab wo admi waar kiya to iss baar uss ladke ne ek aur skill show kar diya jisse uski speed behed hi jyada badh gayi, jiske sahare wo unn waar se bach ke nikal gaya.​

Jaab ye skill dekha wo admi iss baar bhi uske munh se uss skill na naam nikla aur ankho mai herani liye uske piche badhe ja tha.​

Admi : Ghostly Trace, kya talented ladka hai ye bhi usne sikh liya hai.​

per iss baar wo admi aur kuch waar na karke apna hidden weapon chalane ka faisla kiya aur chala bhi diya.​

Admi : aab iske bachke dikhao....​

jaab wo hidden weapon use hua to uske ander se ek sath kayi sare deadly needles nikle jo ki uske raste mai jo bhi aata chahe ped, pathar un sabhi ko tabah karte huye ja rahe thy.​

jaab wo ladke ko uska yehsas hua to uske munh se apne aap hi word nikal gaya,​

ladka : second elder (wo admi inner sect ka second elder hi thy) hidden weapon use kaar rahe hai.​

fir ek smile ke sath wo apna ek aur skill ka show kiya, jisake sahare wo ladka wo sare needles ko apne bare hand se hi reflect karte huye bhag raha tha aage ki aur.​

Second elder : jade hand, ye jade hand hai.....usne mera pear blossom shower ko bhi block kar sakta hai, ye sach mai ek talented kid hai.​

Wo ladka bhagte bhagte Devil mountain ke taraf chala gaya aur jake uss Devil mountain ke khayi ke paas khada ho gaya, kyun ki aab wo na aage ja sakta hai na hi piche.​

Aage khayi hai aur piche wo saare elder ne usse gher ke khade hai, uske saare bhagne ke raste aab band ho gaye thy.​

Second Elder : aab bahut ho gaya bhagna Veer, aab aapne aapko surrender kar do, tumne inner sect mai chori chipe gusske inner sect ki secret skill ko padha hai. Aab tum yanha se bhag nahi sakte.​

ji han wo ladka ka naam Veer hi hai aur hamare story ka Main lead.​

Veer ne second elder ki baate sunke uske chehre pe ek smile nach uthi, fir....​

Veer : han mai ye manta hun ki main wo chori chipe padhi hai, aur uska practice bhi chori chipe kiya hai....​

aab thoda serious hoke,​

Per mai kasam khata hun iss heaven ki, mai Veer jo bhi sikha ya padha hai wo kisko nahi bataya hai.​

maine ye aapko bata raha hun ye iss liye nahi ki mai aapse forgiveness ki icha rakhta hun, ye iss liye bata raha hun ki maine kabhi bhi mera roots ko nahi bhula hun.​

Mai ye kabhi nahi bhula hun na kabhi bhu lunga jo bhi mujhe milla wo ye mystrious Clan ki den hai chahe wo life ho ya ability hi kyu na ho wo saab clan se hi hai.​

Veer apni baate puri karke apne dress mai se ek hatiyar nikal ta hai jisse dekhne ke baad first elder,​

first elder : usne clan ka no.1 hidden weapon bhi bana liya hai.​

Veer : aab kuch bhi ho jaye mai mystrious Clan ka hi hissa nahi rahunga chahe mai maar bhi kyun na jaun.​

Mai ye bhi janta hun aap kabhi ye allow nahi karenge ki marne ke baad bhi mera Jessa outer disciple jo clan ka rule break kiya hua hai wo clan mai rahe.​

isiliye mai ye chahta hun ki mera bone yanhi clan mai hi spread ho jaye marne ke baad, issiliye mujhe jo bhi karna hai wo karke hi rahunga.​

Koi kuch samajh pata Veer Usse pehle hi Devil mountain se niche khud gaya aur sath hi mai wo hatiyar ko first elder ke taraf fenk diya, aur jate jate baas yahi bolta gaya,​

Veer : mystrious Clan ko mere taraf se akhri toufa....per afsos ki isko koi bhi yaad nahi rakhe hai mera kaam pura waste hi gaya. Mai ye clan mai khali haat aaya tha aur iss clan se khali hath hi ja raha hun, aur jo kitab maine churaya hai wo room mai second tiles ke niche mil jayega.​

Jaab saab elder kuch samajh pate taab tak bahut late ho gaya tha Veer khayi mai kud gaya tha....​

First elder : nahi!!!!!!​

Nahi chilate huye first elder uss khayi ke kinare jaane lage to second elder aur kuch elder unko pakad liye.​

First elder : Veer mujhe nahi pata tumne ye kyun kiya, per tumne aaj bahut se surprise diye mujhe aur baki ke elders ko bhi.​

second elder jo first elder ke paas hi thy unhone wo sari baate sun li to unhone first elder ko kaha,​

Second elder : brother aap uss chor ke baare mai soch ke dukhi kyu ho rahe hai.​

second elder ke baate sunke,​

First elder : koun kaha ki wo chor hai ? ​

saare elders first elder ki baate sunke unko dekhne lage, ​

apni baate jari rakhte huye;​

tumne kabhi dekha hai ki yesa chor jo hamare clan ke secret ko pake bhi bhaga nahi ? Yesa chor dekha hai jo ki apni sincerity apne clan ke dikhate huye mout ka gale lag gaya ? Ek yesa chor jiske paas wo hatiyar thy jiske zariye wo haam sabhi ko mar sakta tha aur clan mai kya ye pure continent mai raaz kar sakta tha per wo yesa kiya hi nahi ? Yesa chor jo iss duniya ki sabse no.1 hidden weapon hai jisko 200 saalo taak koi nahi bana paya usko banaya hi nahi balki hamare clan ko gift de diya ?​

Baas ye akhri baat hi tha wo saare elders kuch kuch samajh gaye ki wo jo hatiyaar abhi first elder ke hath mai wo kya hai.​

second elder : first brother....kya...ye...wanhi hai mai jo soch raha hun.....​

first elder : han ye wanhi hai, no.1 hidden weapon hamre clan ka jo ki aaj tak koi bhi banane mai kamiyab nahi hua....​

"Budha Fury Lotus"​

apni baat jari rakhte huye,​

Veer chor nahi hai, wo ek extraordinary genius tha pure 200 saal mai.​

Second elder : per first brother, usne chupke se wo saab sikha aur....​

first elder, second elder ki baato ko kat te huye,​

First elder : aagar tum bhi ye Budha fury Lotus bana sakte ho, mai apni ankhe band kar lunga ye kabhi nahi puchunga ki tumne ye kese sikha, chahe chori karke hi kyun na sikhe ho.​

Tum galat thy second brother, aur tumhare sath mai bhi. Aur isike sath hamare ankho ke samne hi wo chance miss ho gaya jiske madat se hamara clan ka glory ek baar fir establish ho sakta tha.​

Aab aur kuch bhi nahi bolna second brother....Mera order sabhi jagah paas kar do, ek team tayar karo jo ki devil mountain ke niche jayenge Veer ko dhundne ke liye.​

mujhe uska body dekhna hai chahe wo jinda ho ya fir maar gaya ho.​

aaj se nahi abhi se Veer mera inner disciple hai aur aagar wo jinda hai to mere baad wo hi first elder ka seat lega aur iss clan ha head hoga.​

sabhi elder : yes head....​

fir sare elders wanha se chale jate hai.​

dusre taraf jaab Veer niche gir raha tha to uske kaan mai kuch awaj hi paad rahi thy,​

"usko lena hai to mere dead body ke upar se Jana hoga" ye ek admi ka voice tha.​

"unko jane do" ye ek mahila ki voice thy.​

Nahiiiii......mujhe chod ke maat jao, ye ussi admi ka voice tha wo baas ro raha tha, sayad wo mahila usko chod ke chali gayi thy.​

Veer baas niche girte huye gin raha tha aur apne mout ka wait kar raha tha.​

Seventeen..eighteen..nineteen.....​

jaab nineteen taak ho gaya fir bhi Veer ko kuch nhi hua to usne apni ankhe khol li, aur hilne ki bhi kossis ki per wo hil hi pa raha tha, kyun ki wo bacha ban gaya tha.​

Veer : mai kanha hun?​

Ye pehla sawal tha uske mann mai fir jaab uske apna hath hilake dekha to wo chote chote ho gaye thy jese hi kisi baby ke ho, to dusra sawal utha tha,​

Veer : kya mai bacha ban gaya hun, matlab mai mara nahi firse bacha ban gaya hun ye fir maar ke ban gaya hun?​

6 saal baad​

Saint village ke ek side ek behed hi sundar sa pahad ke upar ek ladka betha hua apna dhyaan kar raha tha.​

ye aur koi nahi 6 saal ka hi Veer hai jo bacha ban gaya tha aur coincidently iss duniya mai bhi iska naam Veer hi rakha gaya tha.​

wo uss Devil mountain se niche girte waqt hi iss duniya mai aagaya tha ek bacha banke aaj 6 saal ho gaye hai iss duniya mai usse rehte huye, aur iss duniya ke baare mai jante huye, per aab taak wo ye duniya ke baare mai jyada kuch jaan hi nahi paya hai.​

Per ek baat achi huyi thy ya fir buri, Veer jo saab bhulana chahta tha wo aab kabhi aab bhula nahi payega chahe wo uska pichle janam ka naam hi kyu na ho, ye thy buri baat, per achi baat ye thy ki wo apni pichli jindegi ki sabhi yaade aur wo secret skill aur sabhi skill jisko usne padha tha aur practice kiya tha wo sabhi uske sath aab bhi thy.​

Veer jaab se iss duniya mai aaya aur jaab se hosh sambhala hai taab se hi mystrious Clan ka secret ko practice karne lag gaya, per wo abhi bhi jade hand aur Ghostly Trace 1st level ke bottleneck mai hi hai dusre level mai ja hi nahi paraha hai, aur wo subha subha har roj iss pahad ke upar wanhi practice karta rehta hai aur apne pichli jindegi ki skill bhi,​

Jade hand,​

Ghostly Trace,​

Purple demon eye.​

Chaliye thoda iss duniya ke baare mai bhi jaan lete hai,​

iss duniya ko soul land kaha jata hai. Saab jaab janam lete hai iss duniya mai unke sath sath unka ability bhi janam leti hai aur usko yanha martial soul kaha jata hai. Aur wanhi soul ko train karke ye takatwar hote hai. Kisi ka bahut acha hota hai to kisi ka martial soul bekar hota hai. (Jese jese aage kahani badhegi iss duniya ke baare aap sabhi jante jaoge)​

abhi Veer dhyaan mai hi betha hua tha aur uske charo aur ek purple colour ka dund ho raha tha wo bhi behed hi halka sa, Veer pichle 6 mahine se jade hand aur Ghostly Trace ka 1st level ko paar karne ke liye kosis kar raha tha per haar baar nakamiyab.​

abhi thodi der hi huya tha ki Veer ka ankhe khul jati hai, aur uska ankhe khulne se pehle hi wo dund bhi mit jata hai.​

Veer apna ankhe khol ke : fir se fail. Mai abhi taak jade hand aur Ghostly Trace ka 1st level ko bhi successfully paas nahi hua hun, aaj pure 6 mahine ho gaye hai.​

kyun ho raha hai ye?​

per purple demon eye jo ki depend hai purple air se wo bhi in dono se thoda improve ho gaya hai.​

per abhi tak jade hand improve nahi hua aur iske sath hi Ghostly Trace bhi.​

maine jaab ye pichle jindegi mai training liya tha maine yesa situation kabhi bhi face nahi kiya tha.​

Isme kul 9 level hai per mai abhi tak 1st level ko bhi successfully paas nahi ho pa raha hun to baki level mere liye behed hi muskil hone wala hai.​

kya ye mere pichle duniya se alag hai issliye yesa ho raha hai?​

yese wanha beth ke Veer kuch der sochta rehta hai fir Sun rise dekhta hai, yanha pahad ke upar se wo nazara kuch aalag aur behed khubsurat lag raha tha.​

Chalo jaane ka samaya ho gaya hai aur ye bolke wo pahad ke niche ke aur utarne lag gaya. Wo pahad koi 100 meter uncha hoga hi, aagar koi abhi usse dekhta to wo dekhta hi reh jata ek 6 saal ka bacha wo itne ashani se pahad se utara raha tha jesse wo uska roj kam ho, kahi na khai wo Veer ka roj ka kaam hi tha.​

Veer apne ghar ke aur tezi se bhagta hai pahad ke niche aane ke baad, uska ghar iss village ke akhri kone mai tha wo bhi tuta futa sa makan. Uske ghar ke darwaja pe hi ek hathoda ka symbol laga hua tha lohe ka jo ki iss duniya ka Blacksmith ko hi milta.​

jaab wo ghar ke ander gaya to usko khane ka acha khusbu aaraha tha, wo khana jo wo subha pahad ke upar jane se pehle hi aag mai rakh ke gaya hua tha.​

Fir wo khana nikal ke apne papa ko bulane laga khane ke liye.​

Veer : papa, khana tayar hai aajao....​

ye uska roj ka kaam tha khud ke liye aur apne papa ke liye khana banana. Jaab se Veer khana banane laga hai taab se uske pita nahi banate hai, aur pehle jo thoda pite thy aab wo jyada ho gaya hai, uske pita baas din bhar sote rehte thy aur fir dopeher ko thoda kaam karte fir sham se raat tak pite thy fir so jate thy ye unka duty tha, iske alawa aur kuch nahi chahe unka beta khaye ya na khaye aur usko jo bhi ho jaye unko koi parwah tha hi nahi.​

Fir bhi Veer ne iska koi bhi apati nahi jatayi wo har sambhav kosis karta ki uske papa ko khus rakh sake. Chahe jo ho jaye, uske iss duniya mai apna kehne wala tha chahe jesa bhi ho, kyun ki pichle jindegi mai to wo ek anath hi tha.​

Jaab Veer ne apne papa ko bulaya to wo ander ke room se bahar nikle ankhe pure laal, baal bikhre huye, gande fate huye kapde pehne. ​

aake sidhe table pe beth jate hai Veer bhi bina kuch kahe khana parosh deta hai aur fir dono khana khane lagte hai.​

abhi khana kha hi rahe thy ki unka darwaje pe khat khat ki awaj hoti aur ek admi bahar se hi awaj lagaye ja raha tha.​

admi : beta, Grandpa aaye hai..tumhe lene ke liye.​

jaab Veer ne ye suna to wo apne papa ko dekha,​

thodi der baad,​

Veer ke papa (Mohan) : jao per dopeher taak wapas aajana.​

fir kya tha Veer ne jaldi jaldi khana khatam karke nikal gaya ghar se uss admi ke sath.​

chaliye ek din piche chalte hai ki ye janne ke liye ki Veer kanha ja raha hai aur wo admi kon hai.​

Pichle sham ki baat hai, abhi Mohan apne work area mai kaam kar raha hota hai ki Grandpa Jack (ye wanhi admi hai jiske sath Veer gaya tha) aajate hai,​

Grandpa Jack : Veer...Veer...​

Veer : Grandpa Jack aajayiye ander....​

jack ander aata hai aur mohan ke taraf dekhta hai, wo kabhi bhi mohan ko pasand hi karte thy, aur hamesha sochte thy ki ek yesa pita ke paas Veer jesa acha beta kesse ho sakta hai. ​

fir mohan ke dekhke,​

Jack : kal soul Awakening ceremony hai, aur Veer aab 6 saal hai to usko jana chahiye.​

jaab Veer ne ye suna to usko ek umid nazar aayi ki sayad iske jariye wo apne skill ko next level mai le ja sakta hai.​

per idhar jack ki baate mohan ko kuch pasand nahi aayi to wo sidhe hi mana kar diya.​

fir kya tha jack aur mohan ki bich tu tu mai mai ho gayi fir gusse mai jack chale gaye ye bolke ki kaal aayenge Veer ko lene aur mai bhi dekhta hun ki tum kesse mujhe rokh te ho.​

jack ke jane ke baat mohan aur Veer ke bich me iss baat ko leke thodi bahut baate huyi fir mohan apne bete ke ankho mai sayad kuch dikha jiske chalte wo maan gaya aur aaj jaab jack aaye to Veer ko unke sath bhej diya.​

Very nice story boht badhiya plot h story ka

Zabardast awesome interesting

 

[Asif khan]

Update – 2​

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Jack ke Veer chalte huye village ke bilkul bicho bich aajata hai, janha se ek bada sa hall tha. Jaab Veer yanha pahuncha to yanha 5-6 bache bhi moujud thy jinka bhi aaj soul Awaken kiya jayega.​

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Iss duniya mai paida hone sath hi soul Awaken ho jata hai, per jaab wo 6 saal ka hota hai to uska test hota hai ki wo konsa soul hai.​

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Aur Veer bhi aab 6 saal ka hai to uska bhi aaj soul Awaken kiya jayega. Aur iss duniya mai loog kehte hai ki martial soul se aap kuch bhi kar sakte ho. Veer bhi kaal se yanhi soche ja raha hai ki uska khud ka martial soul kya hoga?​

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Uss hall ke paas moujud bacho ke samne pahunch ke jack bolte hai,​

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Jack : kids aap saab aagaye, chalo mai iske baare mai thoda bata deta hun,​

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Ye hamare village ki pride hai aur wanha ek bada sa pathar pada tha jisme ek handprint tha usko dikhate huye ye baat bola tha jack ne, ye handprint hamare village ke soul saint ne hi chodi thy 100 saal pehle, hamare village ke ek loute aur pehle soul saint.​

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Abhi jack aage kuch bolte ek 24-25 saal ka ladka Ashman mai udte huye, ghar se khudte huye uss hall ke samne aajata hai, aur bade hi smoothly wanha niche jamin pe land bhi kar jata hai. Saare bache baas uss ladke ko hi dekh kar wow…wow…karne lagte hai aur unke ankho mai Excitement saaf dekha ja sakta tha. ​

Jaab jack ne uss ladke ko dekhe to aage badh ke unko greet bhi kiya,​

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Jack : greetings, War soul master. Sorry apko takleef dene ke liye.​

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Wo ladke ke face pe arrogance saaf dekha ja sakta tha wo wanhi look mai bolta hai,​

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Ladka : mera paas jyada samay nahi hai, hamme suru karna chahiye jaldi.​

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Jack : thik hai. Fir bacho ke taraf mud ke,​

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Bacho ye teacher Max(wo ladka ka naam) hai war soul master Nouding city se, ye aapko help karenge apki martial soul Awaken karne mai. Aap sabhi unko help karoge aapki awaken ke time.​

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Aur mujhe asha hai ki aap sabhi bhi soul master ban sakte hai.​

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Jack ke baate sunke Max bolta hai,​

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Max : thik hai, yanhi saab aap pichle saal bhi bole thy. Apko kya lagta hai ki ye easy hai soul master banna?​

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Mai pehle hi 6 village ja chuka hun unme se kisike bhi paas soul power tha hi nahi tha, aur martial soul ki baat hi mat kijiye saab bekar thy.​

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Max baate sunke jack ne ek gehri sanse chodte huye apne sar ko han mai hilate hai,​

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Jack : han ye sahi hai, sirf koi clans ki successor hi easily soul master banta hai, ye hamare jese ordinary people ke liye behed hi muskil hai.​

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Max jack ke baate pure sunne ke baad kuch nahi bolta wo uss hall ka bada sa darwaja kholne lagta hai, ​

Pehle to wo apna hath ka dono fingers ko jod ke kuch karta hai jiske chalte ek gadhe purple colour ka dund uske charo aur fail jata hai aur wo saab dund uske body se hote huye uske wo joint finger ke paas chala jata hai, fir Max apna hath sidhe uss darwaja pe marta hai apna hath, jaab ye saab hota hai to darwaja pe bhi 2 ring type kuch ghumta hai ek white colour ka tha aur ek yellow colour ka fir darwaja khul jata hai.​

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Max : aajao sabhi….​

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Ye kehke aage badh ke uss hall ke ander chala jata hai max aur uske piche piche sare bache bhi aur jack wanhi bahar hi rukh jate hai, bache to ye saab dekhke kafi khus bhi ho rahe thy. Jaab saab ander aajate hai to darwaja bhi band ho jata hai, ye tabhi khulega jaab saab kaam khatam ho jayega.​

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Max to ander aake ek jagah khada hogaya, per bache wo hall ko hi dekhne lage, chahe bahar se kitna hi tuta futa dikhe ander se kisi alishan kamre se kaam nahi tha.​

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Max : bacho ek row mai khade ho jao….​

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Max ki baate sunke abhi taak jo bache ghum ke baas hall ko ander se dekh rahe thy wo ek row mai Max me samne khade ho jate hai.​

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Per ek ladka Veer ko piche se Dhaka de deta hai aur khud uski jagah pe hi khada ho jata hai, Veer bhi dhake ki wajah se Max ke paas pahunch jata hai aur piche mud ke uss ladke ko dekta hai jo ki Haas raha hota hai. Fir Veer bina kuch bole row ke akhri mai khada ho jata hai.​

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Iss village ke bache kabhi bhi Veer se dosti ki nahi pata nahi kyun? Sabhi baas Veer ko chidhate thy uski maa jo nahi thy, aur pita thy jo ki na ke barabar hai.​

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Sare bache khade hone ke baad Max bolta hai,​

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Max : bacho jesa ki jack ne bataya hai mera naam fir bhi mai bata deta hun, mera naam Max hai, aur mai ek great soul master hun abhi level 26 per hun aur abhi mai aap sabhi ka guide ye teacher hun. Aur abhi mai aap sabhi ki martial soul Awaken karunga ek ek karke.​

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Ye kehke max ne apne jeb se 6 patharo ko fenka, aur pathar bhi niche girne ke wajaye hawa mai hi ghumne lage yellow colour ka hoke. Wo sabhi pathar ek circle banake ghum rahe thy.​

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Apni baate jari rakhte huye,​

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Max : chahe kuch bhi ho jaye aap sabhi darna maat. Fir row ki left end mai khade bache ki taraf ungli karte huye,​

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Tum pehle aajao, aur iss circle ke bicho bich khade ho jao…..​

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Wo bacha bhi bina dare haste huye aake circle ke bich mai khada ho jata hai.​

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Fir Max apna soul power un patharo mai inject karta hai aur uss bache ko uska ankh band karne ke liye kehta hai wo bacha bhi max ki baate manke ankhe band kar leta hai. ​

Max bhi apna aage ka kaam karne lagta hai, aur ek word bolta hai Lone Wolf Transformation. Aur issi ke sath hi wo badal ne lagta hai,​

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Pehle uska ankhe green colour ka ho jata hai, fir uske charo aur ek white colour ka aur ek yellow colour ka ring aajati hai jo ki kafi glow kar rahi thy aur sath hi sath wo ring baas uske charo aur ghum rahi thy, aur sath hi sath uska body bhi change hone lagta hai fir ek purple colour ka wolf uske sar ke upar aajate ek howl ke sath.​

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Ye saab dekhke sare bache dar ke bhagne lagte hai per Veer baas use hi dekh raha tha aur kafi excitement bhi lag raha tha. Baki ke bache wanha se bhagne huye to Max ne ek aur howl kiya, fir kafi zor se,​

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Max : bhago maat, aur maine kaha tha na ki darna maat jo ho jaye. Ye mera martial soul Lone Wolf hai.​

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Agar koi bhi soul master banega wo bhi ye saab ability use kar payega.​

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Max ki baate sunke Veer apne mann mai : human transformed ek wolf mai ? Itna hi nahi unka ability bhi ek wolf ke Jessa hi hai. Ye sach mai bahut acha hai ki kesse ek soul master apna martial soul use kar raha hai.​

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Max baate sunke bhi wo sare bache aab darna band kar diye aur aab wo baas max ho hi dekh rahe thy.​

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Fir Max ne apna aage ka kaam suru kiya, apne martial soul ke power se wo bacha jo abhi ring mai khada tha usko hawa mai uthane laga aur uske charo aur ek energy ne gher liya, jo ki wo 6 stone ki madat se ki thy.​

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Fir aage uss bache ko instruction dene laga,​

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Max : apna right hand aage karo….​

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Wo bacha bhi apna righ hand aage karke uss taraf dekhne laga, abhi thodi hi der huyi thy ki uske right hand ko ek blue smoke ne gher liya jaab wo smoke hata to uske samne ek tool tha jo ki uske right hand ke palm mai ghum raha tha.​

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Max : sickle ye tumhara martial soul hai, ye ek tarah se koi kaam mai bhi nahi aa sakta hai. Aur ye ek tool martial soul hai.​

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Chalo aab tumhare soul power ko test karte hai aur dekhte hai ki tum soul master baan paoge ki nahi.​

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Ye keh ke max ne ek ball uss ladke ke taraf hawa mai hi chod deta hai. Wo ball bhi hawa mai udte huye uss ladke ke samne aajata hai.​

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Max : agar tumhara soul power hai to isse train kiya ja sakta hai aur ye ek attacking tool bhi ban sakta hai.​

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Ladka : teacher mujhe kya karna hai?​

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Max : apna martial soul ko apne dimag hi betha lo dubar usse bulane ke liye uske baare mai hi sochna padega.​

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Wo ladka bhi wanhi karta hai to aab tak jo sickle uske palm mai ghum raha tha wo dhire dhire chota hoke gayab hone lagta hai.​

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Max : aab tumhare hath aage karke uss ball per rakho.​

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Wo ladka wahi karta hai per uss ball mai koi bhi changes nahi aate hai.​

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Max : tumhara koi bhi soul power nahi hai issliye tum soul master baan hi nahi paoge. Aab piche jake khade ho jao.​

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Isike sath wo ladka jo abhi tak hawa mai udd raha hota hai wo dhire dhire niche utar ta hai fir piche jake apne jagah pe khada ho jata hai.​

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Yese fir ek ek karke aage aate gaye aur martial soul Awaken karte gaye, 3-4 bacho ke baad,​

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Max : ye saab baas useless martial souls hai koi bhi attacking, defensive aur nahi hi assisting soul hai. Ye saab tool martial soul hai per saab bekar.​

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Fir baari aati hai ek ladki ki, uska bhi wanhi hota hai per iss baar ek alag sa soul nikal ta hai aur wo tha, Blue Silver Plant.​

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Max : fir se bekar, ye hai Blue Silver Plant ye ek standard per useless martial soul hai.​

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Aab bari aati hai Veer ki, Veer ke sath bhi wanhi hua per uss ghere ke ander Veer ko kuch alag sa mehsus huya, usko ek garmi feel ho rahi thy. Aur sath hi uska wo sabhi skill bhi wo stone absorb kar raha tha yesa mehsus ho raha tha Veer ko. ​

Aur usko yesa bhi lag raha tha ki jese uske ander se koi chiz unlock ho rahi hai.​

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Aur uss ghere ke bahar,​

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Max : ye kya...ye…. Ye iss liye socha max ne kyun ki wo sabhi bache ke comparison mai jaab Veer us ghere mai khada hua wo ghera auro se jyada glow karne lag gaya.​

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Per jaab max ne Veer ki hatho ko dekha to wo bhi nirash ho gaya kyun ki uske right palm mai bhi uss ladki ki tarah Blue Silver Plant hi tha.​

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To max ne apna sar ko naa mai hilate huye kaha, ek aur useless martial soul.​

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Per uss ghere ke ander to kuch aur hi ho raha tha, Veer ke right palm mai abhi Blue Silver Plant tha per uske left palm jo abhi niche tha usme bhi ek aur martial soul dikhayi de raha tha, aur wo tha ek hammer.​

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Veer ko bhi wo feel hota hai wo apna sar niche karke dekhta hai per wo na batane ka faisla karke apni left palm ko band kar deta hai apna martial soul ko yaad karke.​

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Fir Veer bhi jake khada ho jata hai per uska soul power ka test hua hi nahi tha aur max ne darwaja bhi khol diya aur bache ko jane ke liye bhi keh diya aur apne aap mai hi baad badate huye apne chizo ko sametne laga.​

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Max : aab yesa laag raha hai ki har baar ki tarah hi iss baar bhi saint village mai aake mera time waste hi hua.​

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Sabhi bache chale gaye per Veer wanhi khada raha.​

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Veer : teacher apne mera soul power test nahi kiya hai.​

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Max Veer ko jawab deta hai bina palte hi,​

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Max : maine ye kabhi nahi dekha ki Blue Silver Plant ka soul owner ka soul power hota hai, isiliye test karna bekar hai.​

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Veer : mujhe baas ek baar try karne dijiye teacher.​

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Iss baar max ne palat ke veer ko dekha jo abhi taak dusre taraf dekh raha tha. Pata nahi per kesse wo uske ankho mai dekhke uss ball ko Veer ke taraf badha deta hai.​

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Kyun ki usse lag raha tha ki ye bacha baki bacho se alag hai.​

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Max : thik hai jaab itna waqt kharab hua hai to aur thoda hi sahi.​

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Veer bhi uss ball mai apna hath rakh deta hai apna soul power dekh ne ke liye, aur sath hi wo ye bhi dekhna chahta tha ki uske ander jo changes ho rahe thy wo kya hai.​

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Wo ball ko jaab Veer touch kiya to ball behed hi jyada glow karne laga.​

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Max ko bhi jhatka laga kyun ki wo ball baas lagatar glow badhta hi ja raha tha.​

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Max : kya….ye....​

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Jessa mera crystal ball glow kar raha hai, kya ye bacha full soul power ke sath born hua hai. Wo ye saab apne mann mai soch raha tha.​

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Fir Max ne wo ball wapas le liya aur Veer ko kehne laga,​

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Max : kid, tum full soul power ke sath born huye ho.​

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Veer : teacher ye full soul power kya hai ?​

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Max : abhi jo tumhara situation hai.... aur jo strength hai martial soul ka jaab wo awaken hua hai….wo saab tumhare soul power ke upar hi depend karta hai.​

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Tumhare sath jo bhi bache thy unka koi bhi soul power nahi tha, per tumhare case mai ye alag hai sirf alag hi nahi balki kafi alag hai.​

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Wo sare bache jiska kuch bhi soul power nahi hai wo kabhi bhi soul master ban hi nahi sakte.​

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Agar soul power exists hota hai awaken ke time hi agar wo halka sa hi kyun na ho, usko aap train karke powerfull bana sakte ho dhyaan mai beth ke. Wo normal soul power hota hai. Aur soul master ka journey starts hota hai uske baad aur jese jese tum takatwar hote jaoge tumhara martial soul wese hi saktisali hote jayenge.​

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Aagar tumhare soul power jyada hoga awaken ke time to tum usse aur jyada jaldi train kar paoge aur higher stage mai pahunch paoge.​

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Aur jaab koi full soul power ke sath born hota hai uska future unpredictable hota hai.​

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Sari baate sunne ke baat, Veer apne mann mai,​

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Veer : ye crystal ball mera Qi ko completely absorb kar chuka hai, kya ye soul power jo iss duniya mai kehte hai wo Qi ho sakta hai.​

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Max : aab tum martial soul level 10 hai, ye soul master ka pehla stage hai aur iska naam hai soul worrior, jo ki aab tum ho.​

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Aur soul worrior ka sabse lowest soul power level 1 hai aur sabse maximum level 10 hai.​

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Max : maine aaj tak kisko bhi nahi dekha hai jo ki full soul power ke sath janam liya hai. Jaab mera awaken hua tha taab mera soul power level 2 tha.​

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Veer : kya ye sirf level 10 taak hi ho sakta hai? Kya ye upar nahi ja sakta hai.​

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Max : without soul ring ye posible nahi hai tum chahe jitne bhi kosis karlo. Tum next stage mai kabhi bhi ja nahi paoge. Aur har 10 level ke baad tumhe ek soul ring chahiye aage ki stage mai jane ke liye.​

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Veer : soul ring kya ye wanhi hai jo apke charo aur ghum rahe thy? Aap level 26 mai hai isiliye aapke paas 2 soul ring hai.​

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Max : han….per tumhara case special hai. Ye bahut hi rare case hai jo ki full soul power ke sath paida hua hai. Per ye ek waste bhi hai. Kyun ki tumhara martial soul ek farm tool hai aur agar aur koi martial soul hota Blue Silver Plant se to mai….​

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Max ne apni baate ko adhe mai chod ke apna sar ko naa mai hilate huye wanha se chale jate hai.​

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Aur Veer bhi apne mann mai kuch sochne lagta hai,​

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Veer : yesa lag raha ki mujhe abhi soul ring chahiye second level mai jane ke liye. Per mai soul ring hasil kese karunga ? Teacher….​

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Jaab Veer piche mudta hai to max wanha se ja chuka hota hai bahar ki taraf aur Veer bhi aajata hai per uss waqt bahut jyada late ho gaya tha.​

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Idhar bahar jaab max bahar nikla to jack bhi uske samne aajate hai.​

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Jack : kesa gaya..kya koi kid hamare village se soul master ban sakta hai ?​

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Max bhi ek sushti bhari sans chodke,​

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Max : ek hai, jo ki full soul power ke sath janma hai.​

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Jack : kya full soul power ke sath ?​

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Max : per afsos ki baat ye hai ki uska martial soul Blue Silver Plant hai.​

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Jack : Blue Silver Plant….full power ke sath janma hai per blue silver plant. Ye….​

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Jack : master kya ham isse train nahi kar sakte?​

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Max : kar sakte hai, per….iska power increase hone se bhi kya hoga, aap kya soch te hai ? Wo evolve hoke kya hoga ? Ye rahega to ek useless martial soul hi. Ye sach mai waste hai ek full soul power ka.​

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Aab mujhe jana chahiye mujhe aur bhi village jana hai.​

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Fir Max wanha se chale jate hai. Aur jack baas dekta hi rahta hai.​

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Jack apna sar ho na mai hilate huye : full soul power per useless martial soul.​

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Jaab tak Veer bahar aata taab tak max bhi chala gaya hota hai to Veer old jack ke paas aajata hai uske mann mai chal rahe sawal ko leke.​

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Veer : grandpa jack ye soul ring kya hai ? Aur mai usse kese hassil karu ?​

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Jack : Mujhe iska koi bhi idea nahi hai veer. Per itna suna hai ki soul ring ke liye soul beast ko hunt karna padta hai. Jo ki kafi khatarnak hota hai.​

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Veer : soul ring, soul beast….​

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Jack : Veer….tum hi wo ho jo full power ke sath paida huye ho aur tumhara martial soul Blue silver plant hai.​

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Veer : han….​

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Jack Veer me kande pe hath rakh ke, ​

Jack : Veer maine ye kabhi nahi socha tha ki tum itne extraordinary honge. Ye bahut galat hai ki tumhare dad tum per koi bhi effort nahi dete hai. Aur aagar tumhara martial soul kuch aur hota ya fir attacking martial soul hota, ya fir tumhare pita se tumhe kuch acha martial soul milta to tum hamare village ka dusra soul saint ban sakte thy. ​

Aab mujhe batao kya tum soul master training school mai admission lena chahte ho. Tum martial soul ka saab knowledge wanha se sikh sakte ho. ​

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Veer : mere papa pehle agree honge fir baad mai…. ​

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Jack : thik hai aab baas uske paas se hi permission lana hai, chalo mai tumhe chod deta hun tumhare ghar. ​

Fir jack aur Veer chal dete hai Veer ki ghar ke taraf. ​

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Jaab ye dono Veer ke ghar pahunchte hai to Mohan abhi so raha hota hai. ​

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Jack : mohan…mohan…. ​

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Jack ke yese chilane se mohan bhi uth jata hai aur adhi hi nind mai chidne lagta hai, usse ye pasand nahi tha ki uska nind ko koi kharab kare. ​

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Mohan : koun hai, kyun chila rahe ho ? ​

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Mohan chilate huye wo ander ki kamre se bahar nikal aata hai. Jaab bahar aata hai to jack aur Veer ko dekhta hai. ​

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Mohan : ohh, old jack..kya baat hai? ​

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Jack : aaj tumahara bete ka soul Awakening day tha, kya tumhe pata nahi ki ye kitna important hai. Baki parents apne bache ko wanha pe bheja hua tha, per tum baki dino Jessa aaj bhi treat kar rahe ho. ​

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Mohan jack ko kuch nahi bolta hai aur aake Veer ke samne khada ho jata hai, ​

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Mohan : Veer, kessa gaya aur tumhara martial soul kya hai? ​

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Veer : papa acha gaya, aur mera martial soul ek blue silver plant hai. ​

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Mohan (mann mai) : kya ye…. ​

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Jack : ye ek blue silver plant hai per Veer full soul power ke sath born hua hai. Aur maine ye decide kiya hai ki hamare village ke taraf se isse beginner soul master school jo Nouding city mai hai wanha bhejunga padhayi ke liye. Aur village iska sara karcha uthayega. ​

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Mohan : blue silver plant..blue silver plant, kabhi nahi….​

Excellent fantastic shandar lajawab dhmakedar update

 

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I am sorry friends, 9 baje ghar louta kaam se to fully tired hun to aaj nahi asakta update, per kal paka aayega. Once again sorry.

 

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Update 3​

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Mohan : kabhi nahi !!!! Ye kafi jor re kahi thy mohan ne….​

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Jise sunke jack ko bahut gussa aagaya…..​

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Jack : kya? Tumhe pata hai ye itna precious chance hai Veer ke liye. Ye hamare village ki khush nasibi hai, kyun ki hamare village ne ek soul saint master diya hai iss kingdom ko isiliye haam haar saal ek bache ko school bhej sakte hai padhne ke liye wo bhi free mai. Warna dusre village kitne muskil ka samna karte hai ye pata bhi hai tumhe. Samajh rahe ho na tum ?​

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Ye chance ko agar Veer ache se use kare to Veer future mai ek successful person ban sakta hai.​

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Mohan : successful hone se kya hoga ? Aur Veer ke jane ke baad mera khane ka kya hoga, koun dega mujhe ? Aur sabse badi baat blue silver plant ko train karke kya fayeda. Ye to baas ek useless martial soul hai aur hamesha rahega.​

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Ye sari baate mohan ne jack ko bina dekhe hi keh raha hota hai.​

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Jack : per Veer full soul power ke sath born hua hai. Jitna jaldi wo apna pehla soul ring pa lega, agar wo kamjor bhi kyu na ho, usko train kiya ja sakega aur wo soul warrior se soul master baan jayega.​

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Soul master, samajh rahe ho na. ​

Aur ye kayi saal ho gaye hai jaab hamara village mai pehli baar koi soul master banega. Warna to koi soul worrior hi ban jaye wo badi baat hogi.​

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Mohan : to tumhara maksad iske piche ye tha, mai sahi keh raha hu na? Maine mana kiya na wo nahi jayega. Aab tum ja sakte ho.​

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Jack (jor se) : mohan……​

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Mohan : mai sun sakta hun, tumhe chilane ki koi jarurat nahi hai. Aab tum ja sakte ho.​

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Veer : grandpa jack, gussa mat hoyiye, papa sahi keh rahe hai. Blue silver plant ek useless martial soul hai. Aur mai bhi ye soch raha hun ki yahi acha hoga ki mai na padhu martial soul ability ke baare mai. ​

Thank you grandpa jack aapne itna saab kiya mere liye….​

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Jack : Veer, mai gussa nahi hun….thik hai mujhe abhi jana chahiye. Fir jack jane lagte hai Veer ke ghar ke bahar aur Veer bhi unke sath hi tha unko chodne ja raha tha. ​

Jack jate jate darwaje ke paas rukh jate hai aur wapas palat ke mohan ko,​

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Jack : mohan sayad tumne pehle hi ye decide kar liya hai ki yese hi rahoge, per Veer abhi bacha hai, kya tum Veer ke baare nahi soch sakte ek baar bhi, usko sikhna chahiye aur ye uske liye jaruri bhi hai jine ke liye, aur jine ke liye kuch to skills pata hona chahiye.​

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Usse roko nahi, agar tum wo na de sako to….jisse ke liye future mai kabhi Veer tumhe galat samajhega ye hone na do.​

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Mai abhi ja raha hun aagar tum apna mind change karte ho to mujhe aake mil lena. Abhi bhi 3 months hai school mai registration ke liye. ​

Fir jack chale jate hai aur Veer unhe ghar ke bahar chod ke ander aajata hai.​

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Jaab Veer ander aata hai to uska dad abhi beth ke pi rahe hote hai….​

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Mohan : Veer mere liye aur leke aao….​

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Veer bhi bina kuch kahe jake ek bottle utha ke le aata hai aur mohan ka glass bharne lagta hai jaab glaas bhar jata hai mohan ek hi jhatke mai usse khatam kar deta hai.​

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Mohan : kya tum disappointed ho mere decision se? Kya tum soul master banna chahte ho?​

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Veer : nahi papa mai blacksmith banna chahta hun aapki tarah. Ham usse hi to jite hai mai usse kese chod sakta hun. Aur aapne promise bhi kya hua hai….mujhe sikhayenge farm tools banna.​

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Mohan : soul master ka kya use hai pata hai? Aur useless martial soul ko apne dimag mai se nikal ke batao aur yesa socho ki tumhare paas best martial soul hai.​

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Ye sari baate mohan gusse mai puch raha hota hai jiska effect uske ghar mai pad raha hota hai, sari chize hil rahe thy. Aur Veer usse saaf mehsus kar raha hota hai.​

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Veer : papa gussa may kijiye, mujhe soul master banna hi nahi hai, mai hamesha apke sath hi rahunga, aur mai isme hi khush hun aur hamesha apke liye khana bhi banaunga.​

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Mohan : mujhe dikhao tumhara martial soul.​

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Veer : thik hai….​

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Ye kehke Veer apna martial soul release kar deta hai, uska blue silver plant baki ke blue silver palnt se alag tha jo saaf dekh sakta tha mohan.​

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Jaab mohan ne ye dekha to face pe ek smile aagayi, per usse show hi nahi kiya,​

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Mohan (mann mai) : ye same hai uske Jessa….​

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Aur ek hi jhatke mai khada ho jata hai, aur mohan ko iss tarah se khade hone se Veer bhi do kadam piche chala jata hai.​

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Veer : papa…?​

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Mohan khade hoke ander ke kamre ki aur chala jata hai ye kehke ki mujhe koi distrub nahi kare. ​

Mohan ke jane baad Veer uske piche,​

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Veer : per mere paas ek aur martial soul hai. Fir apna left hand aage karke wo hammer ko summon karta hai.​

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Pata nahi keese mohan sayad uska yehsaas paake kamre se bahar aajata hai. Aur Veer kodekhne lagata hai aur apne atit ke pane mai kho jata hai,​

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Kuch loog thy jo Chal ke uske samne se aarahe thy, aur mohan ghayal hua pada tha, aur ek mahila kuch bol rahi hoti hai.​

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Mahila : unhe jane do, mai tumhare sath chalungi.​

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Aur wo mahila bhi wanhi mohan ke samne hi khadi thy, aur uske hath mai ek bacha tha. Fir wo bache ko mohan ke hath mai thama deti hai, mohan bhi usko pakad leta hai.​

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Mohan : nahi….​

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Mohan : nahi….Sital….​

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Fir wo mahila agae badh jati hai aur asaman ki taraf hath karke uska martial soul ko summon karti hai, ye bhi blue silver palnt hi tha per alag yesa lag raha tha ki ye sabse last evolve tha, jo ki bade se tree ke jesse nazar aaraha tha.​

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Aur uss mahila ke charo aur ek red colour ka ring ghum raha tha.​

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Jaab wo mahila ye kar rahi thy to wo sare admi jo inke taraf aarahe thy wo bhi hamala kar diya.​

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Mohan : nahi…..sital…..nahi…..​

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Fir apne hosh mai aake wo aage badh ke veer ka left hath ko pakad leta hai….​

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Mohan : ye….​

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Veer : kya kuch galat hai papa?​

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Mohan : ye twin martial soul hai. Ye twin martial soul hai. Beta….​

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Ye kehke mohan Veer ko kash ke gale laga leta hai.​

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Veer : papa….​

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Ye pehla din tha jaab veer ke papa ne usse hug kiya hua tha, usko kafi acha lag raha tha.​

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Veer : wait, mera inner power yese increase kese ho raha hai? Kya ye saab iss hammer ki wajah se ho raha hai. Aagar yese hi chalta raha to mai papa ko hurt kar dunga.​

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Veer : papa mai aapko aur hug nahi kar sakta.​

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Kyun ki abhi wo hammer ki wajah se pura ghar hilna suru ho gaya tha. ​

Mohan bhi Veer ko chod deta hai.​

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Mohan : isse wapas lelo….​

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Veer bhi usse wapas rakh leta hai to saab rukh jata hai.​

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Mohan : ye hamesha yaad rakhna, tum apna plant protect karna hammer ki madat se. Hamesha.​

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Veer apna dono hath ko dekhte huye : papa mai promise karta hun.​

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Dopeher ka time tha…..​

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Tan..tan….tan….​

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Veer ek lohe ko tukde ko jo garam tha ek hammer se mare ja raha tha,​

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Veer (mann mai) : iss duniya mai twin martial soul rare hai. Isiliye dad ne yesa bola ki hammer soul ko na dikhaun kisiko.​

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Abhi Veer hammering kar hi raha hota ki mohan bhi kamre se bahar nikal aata hai aur ek nazar Veer pe deke wo jake beth jata hai.​

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Veer bhi ek nazar apne pita ko dekh ke wapas apne kaam mai lag jata hai….​

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thodi der baad,​

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Mohan : ruko….​

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Fir mohan khade hoke veer ke paas aajata hai. Aur Veer ke hath se hammer le leta hai aur usko wanha se side mai kar deta hai….​

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Mohan : agar tum yese hi kaam karte rahe to tum isse kabhi bhi bana nahi sakte​

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Veer : to mujhe kya karna chahiye?​

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Mohan : dekho….​

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Ye kehke mohan hammering karne lagta hai. Aur Veer usse ache se dekhne lagta hai.​

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mohan : dekh liya maine kitne baar mai ye kiya.​

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veer : papa ye 81 strike hai...​

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mohan veer ke jawab sunke : right....(mann mai ; isne ek pal bhi apni ankhe nhi jhapkayi aur pehli baar mai hi thik answer de diya, ye sach mai talented hai)​

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Fir veer hammering wese hi karne lagta hai to usse ho nahi pa raha tha to mohan usse apne hatho se sikhane lagta hai.​

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Ye Veer ke jivan mai sabse acha din tha jaab uske dad ne uska hath pakad ke kuch sikhaya tha.​

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Yese hi kayi din nikal gaye aur Veer bhi aab ache se hammering karne lag jata hai bilkul apne papa ki tarah per abhi tak wo 81 strike pura nahi kar paya tha aur issi bich wo apne mystrious Clan ka kuch chota mota hidden weapon bhi bana diya tha.​

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Veer : finally, kuch to hidden weapon ban hi gaya hai. Aab mere pas kuch jyada material nahi hai jisse mai jyada se jyada aur behetar hidden weapon bana saku. Aagar kahi se jugad ho jayega to mai ek arrow shooter bhi bana sakunga. ​

Inn 3 mahine se papa baas mujhe sikha hi rahe hai apna hammering skill, aur aab maine 24 time strike kar sakta hun ek hi baar mai, abhi 81 strike bahut dur hai.​

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Per aab ye baad ki baat hai abhi mujhe mere skill ke bare mai kuch sochna hoga​

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Fir uthke kitchen ki taraf chala jata hai aur khana nikalna lagta hai veer, fir apne papa ko bulane lagta hai,​

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Veer : papa aajao khate hai….​

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Per mohan aaya hi nahi,​

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Veer : aam tor pe to papa aajate thy itne waqt mai, kya wo bimar pad gaye hai?​

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Abhi Veer uss kamre mai jane hi wala tha ki, mohan main door se ander aata hai.​

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Veer : papa kanha gaye thy itne subha ye apne mann mai sochta hai fir, papa chalo khate hai.​

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Mohan : thik hai.​

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Fir Veer apna aur apne pita ka khana laake table pe rakh deta hai,​

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Mohan : Veer aaj tumhe hammer train karne ki koi jarurat nahi hai. Tum apna luggage pack kar lo, kal tumhe jack Nouding city le jayenge.​

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Veer : Nouding city? Kis liye?​

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Mohan : kya tum padhna nahi chahte ho martial soul ke baare mai. Aur tumhe banna nahi hai soul master? Jack tumhe chod aayega beginner soul master school mai. Tum wanha padh sakte ho jo tumhe chahiye.​

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Veer : papa aapne aapka mind kyun change kiya?​

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Mohan : tum jana chahte ho ya nahi ?​

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Veer (mann mai) : to issliye papa subha subha chale gaye thy, kyun ki unko grandpa jack se milna tha.​

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Veer : aagar mai chala jaunga to apka khane ka kya hoga.​

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Mohan : tumhe sach mai lagta hai ki mujhe tumhara jarurat hai? Tum jao….tumne ye path chuna hai, sirf wanhi hammering technique use karna jo maine tumhe sikhaya hai aur wanha ka blacksmith shop mai apprentice ban jana, wo kafi hoga tumhara income ke liye.​

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Mai tumhe itne ashani se Nouding city nahi bhejunga, jane se pehle promise karo mujhe kuch.​

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Veer : mai promise karta hun.​

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Mohan : tumne ye pucha hi nahi mai kya chahta hun aur tum pehle hi promise kar diye. As a men kabhi bhi tumhara promise break maat karna.​

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Veer : aap kahe aur wo mai na maan ye kabhi nahi hoga. Kyun ki aap jo bhi kahenge wo mere bhale ke liye hi hoga.​

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Mohan : thik hai, mai ye promise chahta hun ki, ​

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mujhe usse kuch farak nahi padta ki tum kese tumhara soul power train karte ho, kabhi bhi koi bhi soul ring iss hammer mai add nahi karoge, aur koi bhi iska existence bhi jese na jaan paye, aur koi bhi ye na jaan paye ki tum ek twin martial soul ke malik ho.Kya tum ye kar paoge?​

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Veer : blue silver plant ka kya?​

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Mohan : wo tum kabhi bhi use kar sakte ho, jesse chahe.​

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Veer : iska matlab mai sirf blue silver plant use kar sakta hun, right?​

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Mohan : yes….​

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Veer : thik hai papa….mai ye promise karta hun apse, koi bhi ye nahi jaan payega ki mai twin martial soul owner hun.​

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Mohan : thik hai chalo khana khate hai….​

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Jaab Veer jane wala tha school ussi din subha subha jack bhi aajate hai veer ke ghar Veer ko lene ke liye. ​

Jack Veer ke ghar ke ander jaake,​

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Jack : Veer, tumne tumhara saman pack kar liya hai?​

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Jaab Veer wo sunta hai to,​

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Veer : ssssshhhh, ye bahut loud hai grandpa jack, papa ko disturbance pasand nahi hai jaab wo sote hai taab.​

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Jack : Veer, aab bhi tum tumhare dad ke baare mai soch rahe ho, tumhare school jane ke wajaye.​

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Veer : grandpa jack mujhe aur kuch samay de.​

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Fir Veer bhi chup chap apna saman lata hai aur jack ke sath chala jata hai bina apne pita ko bataye, kyun ki pichle raat ko hi wo bata diya tha aur mohan ne bhi han kar di thy aur mohan ne ye bhi bola tha ki subha subha usse disturb na kare.​

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Per Veer jane se pehle ek letter chod deta hai, jo ki jaab mahan utha taab wo padha.​

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Letter,​

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Papa mai grandpa jack ke sath ja raha hun, aap apna khyal rakhna, bhulna maat, khana bana diya hai kha lena.​

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Aaj mohan veer ko bahut miss kar raha tha wo khana ko dekhte huye, aur Veer ke baare mai soch raha tha, per Veer jane se pehle hi mohan ne usse keh diya tha,​

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Mohan : Veer, aagar kabhi bhi ye lage ki ye decision galat hai to wapas aake blacksmith ban jana. Aur jo bhi ho mai tumhare sath hun.​

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Raste mai Veer aur jack,​

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Jack : Veer, tum jyada village ko miss karoge….ya apne piyakad pita ko….​

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Veer : dono ko…. Grandpa jack, kya aap mujhe school ke baare mai kuch bata sakte hai? Aur aas paas ke area ke baare mai bhi?​

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Jack : han..han..kyun nahi..kya janna chahte ho?​

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Veer : papa ne kaha hai ki mujhe blacksmith shop mai kaam karna hai school ke baad.​

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Jack : kya kaam karna hai blacksmith shop mai? Wo pagal ho gaya hai kya? Tum aabhi bahut chote ho uske liye. Tum baas apne padhayi pe dhyaan do.​

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Yese hi baate karte karte dono Nouding city pahunch gaye, Veer to baas city ko hi dekh raha hota hai, bade bade alishan ghar, unchi unchi building bhi thy, aur bahut hi jyada khubsurat tha, wo dono ek market ke ander se chale ja rahe thy school ke aur. ​

Lajawab bemissal amazing update
To ab veer ko boht kuch sekhne ko mile ga

 

[NewWriter23]

Acha update bro aise he bhadte raho sab acha ja raha h

Nice update

Awesome update

Nice update

शानदार जबरदस्त भाई

Nice update bhai

Awesome super update

very nice update bhai

Nice update

superbb shandaar jabardast update bro

Thank you everyone

 

[NewWriter23]

Brilliant update bhai

Nice and awesome update...

Awesome

Bahot behtareen zaberdast shaandaar update bhai

Bahot behtareen zaberdast shaandaar update bhai

Brilliant update bhai

Nice update

Good update

Superb Update bro

Thank you guys

 

[NewWriter23]

Superb update bhai sandar jabarjast Maine ise Isi forum pr padha tha Sayad saal bhar to ho hi gya hoga Maine vha tk padha tha jb veer school jata hai to vha hostal me kuchh dost bnata hai jo vha pr aane vale students se pratiyogita karte hai or jitne vale ko apna leader bna lete hai bahut hi jabarjast tha vah uske baad Sayad writer ne thoda break liya tha yah vhi story hai aap Ise aage bdha rhe ho mujhe dekh kr Bahut Accha lga maine writer ke naam pr dhyan nhi diya tha Sayad vo Aap hi Ho... Keep it up bhai...

Thank you brother

 

[NewWriter23]

Superb update bhai sandar jabarjast

Superb update bhai sandar jabarjast maza aaya dobara padh kr...

To apni heroin ki intry ho gyi or veer ne apna master chun liya hai... Superb update bhai sandar jabarjast

Zabardast update

Thank you

 

[Ajay]

I am sorry friends, 9 baje ghar louta kaam se to fully tired hun to aaj nahi asakta update, per kal paka aayega. Once again sorry.

Ok bhai waiting