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Fantasy Warrior of love( magic and si fi )

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Jkking

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Hamne bate karte huye diner finish kiya aur veer aur preet apne kamre me chale gaye main reet aur sneha ko baho me bhar let gaya..
Mera hath dono ke sar se lekar kamar tak ghum raha tha.. Dono ki ukhdi ukhdi sanse mere kano me sahad ghol rahi thi kabhi hotho ko chumta kabhi sine ko kabhi kamar ko dabata kabhi tane huye chatio ko mujhe swarg ka Sukh mil raha tha dono ne kab mera Lado pakda pata hi nahi chala main bhi garam ho gaya tha.. Dono dhire dhire mulayam hatho se mere Lado ko sehla rahi thi .. Main bechain ho raha tha Maine khud ko kabu kiya aur unka hath Lado se hata diya..
Sneha.. Jaan kya hua achha nahi laga..
Main.. Bahut achha laga lekin main bekabu ho gaya to bade tut jayegi na...
Reet.. To tod dijiye na hum to aphi ki hai..
Main.. Nahi jaan aise choro ki tarah nahi aisa kiya to main khud se najar kaise milayunga..
Kamse kam ma pitaji ki manjuri mil jaye phir jamana kuch bhi kahe..
Sneha.. Lekin tab tak hum kaise ruk payenge..
Main.. Jaan thoda sabar kar lo tabtak main aise hi pyar deta rahunga na..
Sneha .. Thoda aur pyar kariye na..
Reet.. Aap ke chune se jisam ka har kan apme shama Jane ko karta hai..
Main.. Mera bhi jaan .. Phirse main romance me lag gaya dono romance me hi jhad gayi dono ka sharam se bura hal tha lekin ye bhi pyar hi tha..

Idhar Delhi me commander apni ship ke sath pahuch gaye aur ghar ka pata bhi laga liya aur watchman se mera pata bhi laga liya bas chu ke .... Raatko hi unka ship Simla ke liye nikal gaya..

Shubha mujhe apne hotho pe dawao mahsoos hua to meri nind khul gayi ankhe khulte hi same sneha aur reet thi dono bari bari mere hotho ko chum rahi thi..Maine sneha ko baho me daboch liya..
Main.. Haye meri jaan ye kya kar rahi ho..
Sneha... Aap ko utha rahi thi..
Main .. Aise ..
Reet.. Ye tarika achha hai isme Jada maza hai..
Main.. Are meri jaan mujhe bhi ye tarika bada pasand aaya ..abhi nind puri tarah khuli nahi thoda aur utha do..
Dono muskura uthi Maine dono ko bari bari deep kiss kiya dono chahak uthi...phir hum Naha ke taiyar ho gaye ...veer ko bula ke breakfast finish kar humne apna safar suru kiya..
Main.. Aab next stopej hogi chandigadh waha khana kha kar sidhe Simla ...

Pura din haste gate hum chandigadh me pahuch gaye waha se Punjabi dhabe me mast sa khana kha kar humne apna safar jari rakha ..

Ship Simla ke ek jungle me ruki thi thik hamare farmhouse ke karib..ship ka invisible mode on tha isliye kisi ke liye use dhund ya dekh pana namumkin tha...
Commander.. Ye raha wo farmhouse jaha mahan king aane wale hai..
Sainik.. Hamara next step kya hai commander..
Commander.. Hame mahan king pe najar rakhna jabtak king Santana na ajaye ..bas ekbar unke darshan ho jaye phir king Santana ko khabar de denge..
Sainik.. Ji commander..
Sham hone ko thi hum simla me hasin wadiome pahuch gaye the ladkiya to hasin wadio ke najaro me khone se lage the..
Main.. Jaan maza araha hai na..
Reet.. Ye jagah to swarg jaisa sundar hai..
Main.. Ha sach kaha jaan hamare desh me kitni hi sundar jagah hai bidesho se badh ke ..
Hamari car pahuch gayi Simla hamare farmhouse me..


Do wadio ke bich bana sundar kamal ke ful ki tarah hamara farmhouse papa ne bade man se kharida tha hamare liye ..
Hamare aate hi farmhouse ka care taker agaya....
Main.. Bahadur hamara saman andar le aao ..
Bahadur.. Ji sahab....
Hum andar agaya bahut hi shandar ghar tha Charo taraf khula khula dono taraf unchi unchi wadia hariyali hi hariyali bich me 6 kamro ka ghar dur dur tak faila bagicha ghar ke bahar chota sa gurden ..dil ko mohan raha tha..
Ghar me AC nahi laga tha angethi thi bahadur angethi me agg laga chala gaya raat ka khane ka intezam karne..
Veer preet apna ek room lekar chala gaya..
Main dono ko baho me bhar angethi ke pass baith gaya kabhi reet ke gardan ko chumta kabhi sneha ke dono mere sine se lag is mousam ka aur pyar ke muhurt ka anand lene lagi....yehi to chahiye life me swarg se bhi sundar tha ye pal..

Idhar commander khushi se jhum raha tha..unke screen me hamari tasbir saaf pata chal rahi thi sayad unhone hamare aane se pehle hi micro dron camera kamre me bhej diya tha jo najar nahi arahi thi..
Commander.. Yehi hai yehi hai hamare mahan king ..inki hi talash thi hame .. Jald se jald king Santana ko iski jankari do..
Tabhi controller ne king Santana se connect kiya..
King Santana.... Kya progress hai commander..
Commander.. Hame wo mil gaye wo hamse kuchi duri pe hai aap ka hi intezar ho raha hai..
King Santana.. Kuch maslo ke karan main nahi aa pa raha hu main ye jimmedari aap par chodta hu aap mahan king ko sath lekar loutenge ..
Commander.. Lekin king Santana agar wo na aana chahe to..
King Santana... Agar wo hamare mahan king hai to jarur aayenge jabtak wo nahi aate app wohi rukenge unke sath ..
Commander.. Thik hai king hum apke adesh ki purti karenge....
King Santana.. Hamara mustakbil aab apke hatho hai ...
Commander.. Main mahan king ko lekar hi aayunga aap nishchint rahe..
King Santana.. Hum besabri se mahan king ki pratiksha kar rahe hai..connection cut kiya jata hai..
Commander.. King Santana apne bete ke liye pareshan ho rahe hai ,unka beta uchhakankhi hai king banne ke liye kya nahi karega lekin aab ye sambhab nahi hai hamare mahan king ke hote huye unka king banna mumkin nahi hai......aab mahan king ko kaise batayu sab .. Aise bataya to kahi wo kuch galat na samajh baithe phir humko hi na saza de de.. Pehle unke karib Jana hoga phir sachhai batani hogi ..

Raat ka khana lag gaya tha simple sa tha roti aur chicken curry ..bahadur iswaqt itna hi intezam kar paya..

Humne khana khaya ..
Veer.. Bhai kal ka kya plan hai..
Main.. Plan ka hona hai Simla me hai bhai sath me car bhi hai ghumenge phirenge ash karenge aur kya ..sabhi has pade..
Veer.. Chal good night ...
Main.. Chal ja aur preet ko Jada tang mat karna..
Veer.. Tu bhi Jada tang mat karna..hum dono hi muskura uthe aur tino ladkio ka sharam se bura hal ho gaya..
Bed pe aate hi Maine dono ko kiss karne laga dono hi bahut sensitive thi jaha bhi hath lagata unki siski fut jati jo mujhe bada maza deti....
Aaj maine apni ek had par kar di..Maine reet ke salwar me hath dal Soft Ball's ko pakad masalne laga mere hatho ke Chuna se reet bekabu hone lagi sneha ke ankho me bhi Lal dore tairne lage..
Maine dono ke top ko utar diya dono ahar se ankhe band kiya huye lambi lambi sanse le rahi thi Maine dono ke bich pet ke bal let kabhi reet ke Soft Ball's ko sehlata kabhi sneha ke dono ke hotho ko chumte huye main niche agaya aur pehli baar Maine Soft Ball's ko kiss Karna chatne suru kar diya sneha aur reet to jaise pagal si ho gayi thi unki siskio ki awaj to bahar tak ja rahi thi..Maine reet ke nipps ko apni jaban se ched raha tha aur ek hath se dusre ko masal raha tha..
Phir sneha ke nippls ko chedta aur dusre Soft Ball's ko masalta dono Sukh aur uttejna ke satwe asman pe pahuch gayi dono hi rah na payi aur mere Lado ko pakad liya aur uth ke baith gayi ..
Main dekhne laga Dono kya karti hai..
Dono huk ke kapde ke upar se hi mere Lado pe apna chehra ragagne lagi.. Tabhi sneha ne andar hath dal mere Lado ko pakad bahar nikal liya aur kasam se mere Lado ka akar dekh dono ke ankhe chamakne lagi ..
Main.. Pasand aaya jaan ..
Sneha.. Ye to bahut bada hai..
Reet.. Ye ye kaise le payungi..
Main.. Are meri jaan abhi se dar gayi..
Reet.. Dari nahi bas thodi si ghabrahat hone lagi hai..
Sneha.. Jo bhi ho main taiyar hu..
Main..are ruko ruko ye kya kar rahi ho abhi mana kiya hai na..
Sneha.. Aab ruka nahi jata aap kuch to kare jisam JAL raha hai..
Main.. Achha Thik hai tum dono ko aaj shan't kar deta hu..
Maine reet ko pakda aur leta diya aur uske salwar ki Gath khol salwar utar diya reet ne sharam se apna chehra dhak liya..main.. Are jaan aabhi to sharam ka ye had bhi par kar rahe hai..main dono tango ke bich agaya usne Lal rang ki panty pehni hui thi Maine ek jhatke me panty ko khol diya reet ghanta gayi Maine usko mukabla diya bina hi dono tango ko kaske pakad faila diya gulabu unchuyi si Putti mere samne khul gayi sneha saram se let gayi aur chor najro se mujhe aur reet ko dekhne lagi..
Main jhuka aur apne hotho side reet ke Putti se laga diya reet ne aaaaahhhhhhh ki ek lambi siski ki phir to jaise siskio ki jhadi laga di ..main kisi bhukhe billi ki tarah apni Japan reet ke Putti pe pher raha tha reet mera war Jada der seh Nahi payi aur mere sar ko apni Putti pe daba jhane lagi main pura amrit pi gaya..
Kuch 3 min wo mere sar ko kas ke dabaye padi rahi phir uska jisam dhila pad gaya ..
Maine sar utha ke pucha .. Jaan ji kaisa laga...lekin reet to apna chehra hatho me chupane huye thi ..
Maine reet ko choda aur sneha ki aur badh gaya aur usko kiss karne laga WO bhi be sabar thi Maine uska bhi salwar utar diya aur panty bhi kasam se kya Putti hai dono ki bilkul gulabi pankhudi ki tarah anchuyi ..dono hi apna Putti saaf rahti thi bilkul Baal nahi the ek bachhe ki tarah ..
Maine der na karte huye Putti pe tut pada ..sneha pehle hi garam thi mere chedne se uski siske ke sath badbadane bhi lagi.. Aaahhh ummm khaaa jaaaooo aaahhh ummm aaaur naaahi seeeh paaaatatttiii huuuu aaahhh khaaa jaooo jiiii aaaaahhh.. Main jaise pagal ho gaya tha lekin sneha Jada der seh nahi payi aur jhad gayi ..Maine pura ka pura pi liya..
Dono ko shan't kar main bich me let gaya..
Dono mujhe hi dekh rahi thi..
Main.. Kya dekh rahi ho..
Sneha.. Aap ne hame to thanda kar diya lekin aap ke is ka kya ye to ab bhi garam hai..
Main.. To kardo thanda maine kab mana kiya hai bas akhri had ko abhi mat todna ..
Dono uth ke baith gayo aur mere Lado ko pakad sehlane lagi phir chumne aur choosene lagi main Sukh ke satwe asman me tha donl bari bari choose ja rahi thi main kamar hila raha tha jaise unke muh ko chod raha hu 10 min bita 20 min bita dono thak gayi thi lekin mujhe abhitak shan't nahi kar payi thi 30 min baad mera lava phut gaya dono me bade maze se chat Chat ke mere Lado ko saaf kar diya..
Domo thak ke behal ho gayi thi 30 min tak karpana Muskil hai main bhi apni time limit dekh hairan tha Lado to bada hua tha ye to pata tha lekin meri time limit bhi badh gaya ye aaj pata chala .. Aisa raha tha main kisi bhi ladki ke 5 se 6 baar jhadne ke baad ek baar jhadunga ... Achha hai mere pass meri do jaan hai warna ek hoti to uski halat kharab hi jati..
Maine dono ko baho me bhar so gaya..

Idhar veer preet ko pagal kiye huye tha pehle to dono hamare room pe kan laga hamara khel sunte rahe jab dono garam ho gaye to apne kamre me agaye..
Veer preet ko kiss karne laga phir silsila chalta raha aur akhir me veer ne wo kar diya jo dono ne ajtak nahi kiya tha veer ne aaj preet ko khol diya..
Preet..aaajh ummm aahhh dhire dhire aaahhh ummm..
Veer.. Meri jaan I love you ..veer puri takat se preet ko chod raha tha akhir me dono jhad gaye ..veer ne apna pani preet ke andar hi chod diya preet bhi jhad gayi..
Kuch pal baad dono ko ehsas hua dono ne kya kat diya..
Preet.. Jaan ye hamne kya kar diya shadi se pehle.
Veer.. Mujhpe biswas hai na I love you very much..
Preet.. I love you too jaan..Lekin agar abhi bachha agaya to..
Veer.. To kya mera bachha hoga main piche nahi hatunga ....Lekin agar tumhe dar lag raha hai to kal medical se dawayi LA dunga..
Preet.. Nahi mujhe dar nahi hai..
Veer.. To bas aab hum pati patni ban gaye hai bas rasme baki hai..
Raat masti bhari rahi shubha taiyar ho hum nikal gaye
 

Jkking

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humne ye thik kiya ke bahar hi nasta karenge ..
Hum ek restro me pahuch gaye.... Restro chota tha lekin we'll managed lag raha tha..
Main.. Veer order kar main jara washroom se aata hu..main unko table pe chod aage badh gaya restro ke washroom ke taraf .main aage badh hi raha tha tabhi kisi se takra gaya..
Main.. Ohhh sorry aap ko chot to nahi lahi..
Admi.. Nahi nahi sorry to mujhe kehna chahiye..
Main ek jhalak admi ko dekh kar aage badh gaya aur washroom me chala gaya..fresh ho bapas agaya order achuka tha....
Main.. Chalo suru karo kiska intezar kar rahe ho tumsab..
Reet.. Aap bhi na humne kab apse pehle khaya hai..
Main.. Chalo aab suru karo..sneha aur reet mujhe khilane lagi aur main unko ..hamare dekha dekhi preet bhi veer ko khilane lagi..
Veer..wahh meri kismat bhi khul gayi tab..
Preet.. Has padi..nasta kar hum pura din Simla ke famous jagaho pe gumte rahe sham ko lout rahe the tabhi thik hamare farm house ke pass raste me koi leta pada tha..
Maine car ki break lagayi..
Main.. Aab ye kya hua kon hai ..main utar uske pass pahucha to dekha ye to wohi admi tha jo mujhse takraya tha shubha..
Main.. Kya hua hai aap ko kya hua hai..
Admi karah raha tha dekhne me admi kafi majboot lag raha tha aur Jada chot bhi nahi lagi thi..phir hua kya hai..
Main.. Veer tu car chala main inko lekar chalta hu..
Veer.. Car me dal de..
Main.. Nahi yaar car me utni jagah kaha hai dekh bade kiya ko kadkathi ..main car ke sath hi chalunga ..
Veer.. Thik hai aab superhero se kya bahas karna..
Veer ladkio ki car me lekar badhne laga Maine admi ko uthaya aur tezise doudne laga mujhe wo admi utna bhari Nahi laga meri raftar car ke barabar hi rakhi..
Car thik hamare ghar pe pass ruki main slow ho gaya aur usko lekar andar agaye..
Ek room me Lita diya..
Veer.. Isko hua kya hai doctor bhi kaha milega ..
Main..bahadur ko bula wo bula lega doctor usko pata hoga..
Veer.. Thik hai ..veer bahadur ko bulane chala gaya..
Admi ko hosh aane laga..
Reet.. Jaan dekhiye inko hosh araha hai..
Main..aap kon hai aap ko hua kya hai..
Admi..mera naam Joni hai mera baag mera saman aare mera batwa kaha hai..
Main.. Hame to nahi pata aap hame road pe pade huye mile the..
Joni.. Unlogo ne mujhe lut liya ..
Main.. Kin logo ne..
Joni.. Maine jin logo se lift li thi in logo ne mujhe kuch khilaya aur main behosh ho gaya ..
Main.. Ohh to ye mamla hai..
Sneha.. Aab aap kya karenge..
Joni.. Pata nahi lekin sukriya meri madat ke liye ..
Main.. Aap abhi aram kare raat honewali hai abhi aap kaha jayenge raat yahi bita lijiye..
Joni.. Sukriya lekin main kal jayunga kaise mere paise batwa bag I'd sab wo log le gaye..
Main.. Koi baat nahi aap kaha se hai..
Admi.. Delhi se hu yaha ghumne aaya tha..
Main.. Delhi se hum bhi Delhi se hai hum apko chod denge tab tak aap yahi rahiye..
Joni.. Thanks aap bahut helpful person hai..
Main.. Take rest .. Chalo jaan ..hum unko chod agaye apne kamre me..
Sneha.. Jaan kisi unjan ko aise ghar me rakhna thik hoga kya..
Main.. Jaan jab main yaha hu to darne ki kya baat hai..
Reet.. Dar nahi rahe hai lekin sabdhan rahna jaruri hota hai..
Main.. Kuch nahi hoga Chalo fresh hote hai pura din ghuma hai ..
Reet .. Thik hai jaan....
Idhar hamare kamre se nikalte hi Joni khada hua aur ek taraf dekh bola..
Joni.. Mission ka pehla padao kamyab hua..aab agla padao malik ka ghar ..

Raat ko humne khana khaya Joni ji bhi sath the ..
Main.. Joni ji aap kya karte hai..Maine ye sawal ek khas maksad se pucha tha ..
Joni.. Main security ka kaam karta hu ..Maine Joni ke dimag pe najar dali unke man me chal rahi baat main sunna laga aur jo suna wo jaan me main bhi soch me pad gaya..
Khana kha kar hum apne apne kamre me agaye ..
Raat phir pyar bhara bita aaj ka din aur Simla rukne wale the kal ghar loutne na tha ..
Hum nikalne wale the ki Joni ji bhi agaye..
Joni.. Kya main bhi aap ke sath chal sakta hu..
Main.. Ha kiu nahi chaliye waise bhi aap yaha kya karenge..
Hum nikal gaye tino ladkiya piche aur hum tin samne kisi tarah adjust ho gaye thodi muskil ho rahi thi phirvi manage ho gaya..
Joni.. Sorry mere wajah se aap sab kitna taklif utha rahe hai..
Main.. Taklif kahe ki kisi ki madat karne se khushi hi milti HAI..
Hum aaj bhi nasta lunch bahar hi kiya pura din ghumte rahe Joni ji hamare sath hi lage rahe ..
Karib 4 pm ho raha tha hum mall agaye shopping ke liye ladkio ke liye ..
Hum ledies section ki aur badh rahe the tabhi ek talwar mere pichese mere upar war hone hi wala tha ke main hat gaya ..
Reet aur sneha chikh uthi .....main unko lekar side me hat gaya..
Samne 10 log the unko dekh mukhe yaad aaya ye to jagira ka bhai hai ..
Main.. Ek baar mar khakar bhi nahi sudhra ..
Ladka.. Sale tune mere bhai ke sath kya kiya hai ..
Main.. Ohh wo ab bhi jinda hai kya ..
Ladka..aaj tum mese koi nahi bachega ..
Main.. Dekh tu bhi apne bhai ki halat dekh kuch Sikh mujhse uljha to teri bhi wohi halat hogi jo tere bhai ki hui hai..mere baat ka uspe koi asar nahi hua takat ka ghamand hota hai kuch logo ko jinko hum gunde kehte hai..
Joni.. Aap tension na le main dekhta hu in logo ko..
Main.. Rahne dijiye main khud nipat lunga veer ladkio ko lekar ja ladies section me main abhi aaya..
Veer.. Thik hai bhai.. Veer unko lekar badh gaya..
Main.. Aab aao ..tabhi do log hath me talwar liye mere upar war kiya Maine tejise aage badh gaya unka war mere piche chala gaya Maine do punch dono ke chatio pe Mara dono ki dilki dhadkan rukne ko thi .
Main wohi nahi ruka aage badha aur jo bhi mujhpe war karne aata uski ya to hath tut ta ya per aur JP Jada uchalta uski gardan ..2 min Me pura maidan saaf ho gaya..
Joni.. Aap to bahut achha ladte hai..
Main.. Mujhse natak karne ki jarurat nahi ..
Joni.. Natak kaisa natak..
Main.. Dekhiye mujhe pura to pata nahi lekin ye janta hu aap jo dikh rahe hai wo nahi hai apne jo kahani sunayi hai wo jhuth hai aap mere najdik aana chahte hai lekin kisliye abhi pata nahi lekin mujhe Jada waqt nahi lagega pata hone me..
Joni.. Aap se jhuth bolne ka mera koi irada nahi tha mahan king Mujhe maaf karde..wo ghutne ke bal baithne lage ...
Main.. Are ye aap kya kar rahe hai..
Joni.. Mujhe maaf kar dijiye mahan king ..
Main.. Ye aap mujhe mahan king kiu keh rahe hai mera naam nikhil hai main koi king nahi hu ..
Joni.. Aap ko apki sachhai nahi pata hai aap hamare mahan king hai ..
Main.. Jo bhi ho aabhi aap shant ho jaiye hum abhi logo me hai badh me baat karenge..
Joni.. Ji mahan king ..main waha ruka nahi hajar sawal liye aage badh gaya ..


 
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Ladies section me tino ladkiya khadi thi pareshan ghabrayi hui ..
Mere aate hi reet aur sneha mere gale lag gayi.. we have
Reet.. Jaan aab yaha nahi rukenge yaha kuch na kuch galat ho raha hai..
Sneha.. Ha ye log kiu hamara picha nahi chod rahe hai..
Main.. Daro nahi jaan meri mehbuba hokar dar rahi ho aab jiske pass takat hoti hai musibat bhi usko dhund hi leti hai...chalo shopping puri karo ..
Kisi tarah dono ko mana main aur veer apni apni ke liye unke pasand ke kapde liye phir kuch aur saman lekar ghar ki aur chal pade ..mere man me sawalo ka pahad tha Joni ji mere baju me hi the lekin aab unke swabhaw me badlaw agaya tha wo mujhe aise dekhte jaise main koi bada hu wo mere chote hai..
Ghar pahuch sabhi apne apne kamre me agaye mujhe Joni ji se baat karni thi aur ye jagah sahi nahi tha reet aur sneha pehle hi pareshan thi aur pareshan karna thik Nahi tha to maine reet se kaha..
Main.. Jaan tum dono desh ho jao main jara veer aur Joni ji ke sath tahal ke aata hu ..
Sneha.. Hum bhi chale..
Main.. Apni halat dekho thak ke chur ho gayi ho tum dono rest karo warna raat ko pyar kaise karogi..
Dono sharma gayi..
Main..Haye ye tera sarmana ye Teri adaye dil me churiya chalti hai..
Reet.. Hato ji aap bhi na jaiye sham ho rahi hai thand badh jayegi tahal ke aaise ..
Maine reet aur sneha ko baho me bhar hotho pe halka halka sa chum unki ankho me dekh .. Jaan main bas abhi aaya ..dono hasne lagi unko laga main koi romantic dilog marunga..
Main unko chod bahar agaya room se aur pukara...veer Joni ji chaliye thoda tahal ke aaate hai..
Veer.. Aaye bhai ..
Joni to turant hi nikal kar agaye....
Hum bahar nikle to Joni ji bole.. Is aur mahan king..Joni mujhe rasta dikhane laga..
Veer.. Joni ji ye mahan king kya hai..
Main.. Veer chup raho aur chalo jaha le ja rahe hai..
Veer chup ho gaya hum jungle me pahadi ki aur badhne lage ..kuch dur jungle me jate hi Joni ruk gaya hum bhi ruk gaye..
Joni ne kaha.. Oprator darwaja kholo.. Tabhi khali jagah me achanak ek darwaja khulne laga ..sirf pehle do darar dikhi phir dhire dhire kisi lift ke darwaje ki tarah darwaja khul gaya..
Joni.. Mahan king aaiye ..
Maine khud ko kabu kiya veer ke range kanpne lage Maine veer ka hath pakad aage badha..
Veer.. Yeeee yeee hum kaha ja rahe hai yeeee kon haiii...
Main.. Veer himmat rakh sab pata chal jayega..
Hum Joni ke piche piche darwaja par kiya tabhi darwaja band ho gaya andar light hu light thi ek bada sa galiyara tha aur us galiyare ke akhir me ek darwaja tha aur Dono diwar pe bhi kayi darwaje the jo lights thi wo ajeev thi dharti ke lights se alag ..wo diwar ka hissa thi chat pe bhi jaise lights thi ..
Joni chalte huye gakiyare ke akhri darwaje ke karib pahuche tabhi darwaja khul gaya ..darwaja khulte hi hamare hosh udne ko ho gaye..
Samne jaise koi high-tech since fiction movie ka set ho.. Do bade bade screen jo hawa me bane the na koi led na kuch ..uske samne do log the jo abhi ghutne ke bal jhuke huye the gate ki tarah yani jis aur main tha us aur muh karke..
Gate ke samne bhi do log the ghutno ke bal jhuke huye..
Sabhi dekhne me insan jaise ho the unmese 2 ladkiya lag rahi thi..
Main aur veer andar agaye..
Main.. Ye sab kya ho raha hai Joni ji aap mujhe batayenge..
Joni.. Mahan king ko salam kar rahe hai..
Main.. Inko kahe khade ho Jane ko aur ye mujhe mahan king kehna band kare aur mujhe bataiye aap hai kon aur ye sab kya hai...
Veer.. Ha tum Sab kon ho kya kar rahe ho yaha..
Joni.. Mahan king aap pehle aiye aur baith jaiye.. Joni ne us cabin me bane ek kursi jo midle me thi us aur ishara kiya..
Mujhe jaldse jald janna tha ho kya raha hai sab to main kursi pe baith gaya... Veer mere pass hi khada raha..
Joni.. Mahan king hum insan nahi hai .. Tabhi commander ne kaha.. Real form activate dekhte hi dekhte sabhi ka roop badalne laga wo insan se ajeev dikhne wale insano jaise hi jeev me badal gaye unka rang badal gaya unki kad kathi badal gayi ..
Joni.. Mahan king ye hai hamara asal room ..main commander gargol hu sarlima ka commander and chif aur ye hamare sainik..
Main.. Sarlima.. Ye kaha hai aur aap log yaha kiu aaye hai..
Gargol.. Mahan king hum yaha hamare do sainiko ko dhundne aaye the sayad aap ko pata hoga jungle me made pade the..
Main.. Kya wo dono apke hi sainik the..
Gargol.. Ji mahan king sur jo phal aap ne khaya hai uske karan hum yaha aaye hai..
Main.. Achha to aap ko wo phal chahiye lekin wo to Maine kha li..
Gargol.. Mahan king jo apka tha aap ko mil gaya isse hame koi pareshani nahi..
Main.. Mera nahi nahi wo phal to in dono ...
Gargol.. Mahan king aap ko pata hi hoga wo phal koi aam phal nahi hai us phal me asimit shaktiya thi jo aab appme hai apke andar us phal ke bij hai jo aap ko shaktiya deti hai..
Main.. Kya beej lekin abtak to phal hajam ho gaya hoga..
Gargol.. Aap apke jisam me shama gaya hai aab apse alag nahi ho sakta ..
Veer.. Abhi aapne kaha wo phal nikhil ka tha to isko mil gaya iska kya matlab hai..
Gargol.. Ye hamare mahan king ke punarjanm hai wo phal sirf aur sirf inke hi pass jati kisi bhi bahane se ye bhabisya bani thi..
Main.. Kaisi bhabisya bani aur ye mahan king kon hai..
Gargol.... Aap hamare masiha hamare sarlima ke Noor mahan darakht ke wo rahnuma hai jinke karan aaj 10 start system khushi aur shanti se rahta hai ...
Main.. Kya 10 star system ..
Gargol.. Ji mahan king ..
Main.. Plzzz mujhe mahan king mat kaho nikhil kaho..
Gargol.. Shama mahan king hum apka naam nahi le sakte ..
Main.. Ajeev hal hai..
Veer.. Rahne de nik sun aage kya kehte hai bahut hi interesting story hai..
Main.. Ha tujhe aab dar nahi lag raha interesting lag raha hai..
Veer.. Bhai sach kahu bahut dar lag raha hai sath sath bahut Jada excitement bhi hai ..
Main.. Aage bataiye..
Gargol.. Aap hamare sarlima ke pehle king the jinhone sarlima ko ek kiya phir aap ne pure 10 star system ko ek sath joda aur ek mahan kingdom banayi jise sab sarlima kingdom kehte hai .... Aap ke bansaj aaj bhi king banate HAI..
Main.. Mere bansaj ..
Gargol.. Ha aap ke bansaj apke bete unke bete ajtak hamare king bante hai abhi aapke 21 wi bansaj king bane huye hai unka naam king Santana hai...
Main.. Kitne bansaj..
Gargol.. 21wi..
Main.. Aap kya keh rahe hai mere sar ke upar se ja raha hai..
Veer.. Mere bhi 21wi bansaj matlab agar ek bansaj ki umar 100 rakho to 2100 saal..
Gargol.. Nahi ek bansaj ki umar 5000 se 10000saal rakho to hote hai 1lakh 5000 saal aap ki ganna ke hisab se..
Main.. Kya 5000 se 10000 hajar saal..Maine veer ko dekha uske hosh ude the..

 

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Gargol.. Mahan king aap ko gaye huye utna hi samay hua hai ..sur mahan darakht ne lakho saal baad ek bhal diya hai jo aap ko mila..WO phal sirf aap ke liye hi deti hai ..
Main.. Ye mahan darakht kya hai..
Gargol.. Mahan darakht mahan darakht wo hai jisse jivan ki suruwat hui har us grah pe jaha jivan hai waha mahan darakht ka beej hai yaha bhi ye jo ped hai jeev hai sabhi ka janm us ek beej se hua hai ..wo jivan ki devi keh sakte hai ..
Kabhi na kabhi darakht ka beej jo space me faila tha kisi na kisi tarah graho pe agaya phir suru hui jivan .. Isliye har grah me jivan nahi hai sirf unhi grah me hai jaha wo beej pahuch PAYE the..
Main.. Kya keh rahe hai yani jivan ka suruwat usi darakht ke beej se hui hai..
Gargol.. Ha ye hamara manna hai uska ek praman apne khud diya tha ..
Main.. Maine kab...
Gargol.. Lakho saal pehle darakht ne apko Chuna tha aur phal apko diya tha aap ne WO phal khaya tha aap me asimt saktiya agayi thi aur phir apne ek aise grah me jivan suru kiya jaha kuch na tha biran tha aap ke shakti se us grah me aab jivan hai ..
Main... Pata nahi aap kya kya bol rahe hai lekin mujhe kuch bhi yaad nahi..
Gargol.. Ye sab aap ke piche janam ki ghatnaye hai..aab apko hamare sath chalna hoga aap ki praja aap ka singhasan aap ki pratiksha kar raha hai..
Main.. Kya mujhe chalna hoga kya keh rahe hai aisa nahi ho sakta mera pariwar hai mera ek jivan hai yaha.. Aur mujhe punarjabam pe biswas nahi aur agar mera punar janam hua bhi hai to bhi main king nahi ban sakta aap ke already king hai aur unke baad unke bete ka adhikar hai main ek anjan achanak king ban gaya to problem hogi..
Gargol.. Mahan king problem to honi hi hai hame aap ki jarurat hai aap ka bataya hua kingdom aab khatre me hai aap ke hi ek bansaj ke karan ..
Usne apni ek kingdom bana li hai dark world ..wo masumo pe atyachar karta hai kitne hi grah usne tabah kar diye kitne hi nasal barbad kar diye uski bhukh MIT nahi rahi .. Hum usse lagatar Jung me hai ..hamare kitne hi sainik made gaye hai lekin wo piche hatne ko taiyar Nahi usko jivan ka koi mol nahi pata bas lalach hi uska dharm ban gaya hai.. Aur aap hi sochiye aap ka janam hone ke piche kya koi wajah nahi hai apko apko purani takat Milne ki wajah kya hai aap ki saktio ka koi udesya us dharti pe nahi hai..
Main.. Lekin mera pariwar yaha hai Maine jo jivan yaha gujara hai wo yaha hai..
Gargol.. Mahan king aap ki manjil itni choti to ho Nahi sakti aap sirf ek grah pe rukne ke liye nahi janne hai ..aap ka pariwar bhi aap ke sath chalenge bas aap man jaiye .
Main.. Mujhe sochne samajhne ka waqt chahiye ..chalo veer mera sar ghum gaya hai ..
Veer.. Ha bhai mera bhi ..
Hum bahar Jane lage tabhi gargol bola..
Gargol.. Mahan king hum tabtak Nahi jayenge jabtak aap sath chalne ko taiyar nahi ho jate ..
Hum aage badhne lage gate apne app khulte gaye hamare piche gargol Joni ke roop me agaye..

Bahar andhera ho gaya tha hame ehsas hi nahi hua bahut der ho gayi thi..
Main.. Chal yaar jaldi chal tino pareshan ho rahi hongi hame der ho gayi hai..
Veer... Bhai tu itni tension me bhi ye sab kaise soch leta hai..
Main.. Pata nahi yaar mujhe kahi na kahi gargol ko baat sahi lagti hai ajkal mujhe ek Sapna aata hai jisme main kisi king ke bhesh me hu aur yudh kar raha hu ..
Veer... Jab ye powers real hai to unki story bhi real hi hogi .. Tum hi unke mahan king ho...
Main.. Lekin yaar main kya karu ek normal jindagi ko chod aise anokhi jindagi ko chunna asan nahi hai..
Veer... Bhai ye faisla to tujhe hi karni hogi ..hum bate karte huye ghar tak pahuch gaye gate pe hi tino ladkiya khadi thi chadar dale..
Main..are tumlog bahar kiu ho thand lag jayegi ..
Sneha.. Aapko itni der kaha ho gayi dekhiye andhera ho gaya hai..
Main.. Meri jaan bas hum bato me lag Gaye the usme der ho gayo chalo andar chalo ..
Main dono ko lekar andar agaya veer preet ke sath andar chala gaya jate huye Maine isharo se veer ko kuch bhi batane se mana kar diya..
Joni bhi piche piche room me chala gaya..
Raat ko humne khana khaya phir pyar me kho gaye..

Idhar sarlima me..
King Santana ne taiyariya suru kar di thi jisse raynan gusse me tha..
Raynan.. Pitaji ye aap kya kar rahe hai..
Santana.. Beta jo mujhe karna hai wohi kar raha hu aur ek baat beta satta ki lalach achhi nahi hoti wo hamare mahan pita hai ye sab jo aaj hai sab unka bataya hua hai hum unko insab se dur nahi kar sakte..
Raynan.. Wo mar chuke hai unka samay samapt ho gaya hai ye hamara samay hai hum yaha ke Rajkumar hai wo ek anjan hai..
Santana.. Tum kya unse badh ke ho kya tumhe apne mahan pita ke liye koi samman nahi hai ..
Raynan.. Hai bahut hai lekin unko mare lakho saal ho gaye hai aab unka haq nahi hai insab pe..
Santana... Tum behek gaye ho putra tumko samajhna chahiye mahan pita ke samne hum sab kuch bhi nahi unhone ye 10 star system basaya hai baki baar unke janam ka udesya bhi wo pura karenge uske liye koi bhi unke raste ka toda bane koi bhi bardast nahi karega aur baat ko samjho unke hote huye koi bhi aab tumhe king ke tor pe Kabul nahi karega..
Raynan.. Pitaji ye mere sath to anyai hai na ..
Santana.. Tum hadse jada mahatwakangshi ho putra apne aap ko kabu karo ..
Raynan.. Pitaji jo ho raha hai sahi nahi ho raha hai...
Santana.. Yehi sahi hai putra tum ye nahi dekh pa rahe ho unko hamari nahi hame unki jarurat hai..
Raynan man me.. Dekhta hu kya kar lete hai mahan king..

Raat beet gayi thi shubha shubha meri nind mulayam rasile hothoke chuwan se khuli ..
Main.. Good morning jaan ..
Sneha aur reet.. Good morning jaan..
Hum uthe aur sath me nahake taiyar huye..
Aur Jane ke liye taiyar ho gaye hame loutna tha aaj Delhi ..
Bahar aaye to Joni bola.. Mahan king mere liye kya agya hai..
Main.. Aap lout sakte hai ,
Joni.. Nahi main lout nahi sakta apke bagair..
Main... Thik hai aap ko jab main bulayu tabhi aisega..
Joni.. Ji mahan king..
Reet.. Ye kya ho raha hai jaan ye aap ko mahan king kiu keh rahe hai..
Main... Badh me batayunga jaan abhi chalo ..
Hum waha se chal pade ..Joni ko wohi chod diya..
 

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Sneha.. Bataiye na ye Joni kon tha aur apko mahan king kiu keh rahe the..
Main.. Jaan aab to ajeev chijo ki aur naye naye sawalo ki adat dal lo ..Joni insan nahi hai wo kisi dusre start system se aaya hai aur kehta hai main unke mahan king ka punarjanam hu ..aur kahi na kahi mere andar uski baat ko sahi samajh raha hai ..
Sneha.. Kya aap ka punar janam hua hai..main ha usne bataya ( phir suruse lekar sab kuch bataya unko jise sun dono bhi hairan hui )
Reet.. Agar ye sach hai to hame yaha se Jana hoga na..
Main.. Ha lagta to hai ek tarah se achha hai kiu ke hamara samaj hamare riste ko nahi apnayega aur agar hum waha chale jate hai to hamara rista judne me koi dikkat nahi hogi..
Reet.. Sach me ye to socha hi nahi..
Sneha.. To chalte hai na waise bhi yaha rakha kya hai papa ma ko bata yaha se chalte hai..
Main.. Tum dono pagal ho gayi ho kya ..
Reet.. Aap ke sath rahne ke liye kuch bhi karna pade wo karne ko taiyar hu ..
Main.. Pagli ho dono..preet tum chup kiu ho..
Preet.. Kya main bhi chal sakti hu aap ke sath main aur veer..
Main.. Are aab tumko kya ho gaya...
Preet.. Mujhe bada dar lag raha hai kahi humne galati to nahi kar di..
Veer.. Kya ho gaya jaan..
Preet.. Wo ho gaya jo nahi hona tha..
Veer.. Kahi ..
Preet.. Ha wohi .. Preet kafi ghabrayi hui thi..
Main.. Veer kya baat hai bata ..
Veer.. Bhai wo hamne hade tod di preet preg..
Main.. Pregnant ..ohhh god ye kar diya tum dono ne..
Veer.. Bhai bas kabu nahi raha ..
Main.. Are yaar shadi tak ruk jate..
Reet... Aab to badi muskil ho gayi veer to abhi collage me hi hai upar se inke gharwale..
Veer.. Hum Ghar chod denge..
Main.. Ruk ruk jaldbazi mat kar sochte hai koi na koi rasta nikal hi aayega..
Veer... Mujhe koi rasta nahi dikh raha hai ..
Main.. Tu chinta mat kar main hu na koi na koi rasta nikal lunga preet ghabrao nahi..
Preet.. Thik hai nik abhi to kisi tarah ye baat chupa lungi Lekin Jada der nahi chupa payungi..
Main.. Thik hai jald hi kuch karta hu..
Pura din nikal gaya is bich humne kayi baar car roki nasta lunch aur diner bhi kiya raat ko bhi main driving karta raha Charo so Gaye car me hi main car chalata raha..aur soch bhi raha tha aab kya karna chahiye itni jaldi sabkuch kaise badal raha hai pehle reet sneha phir powers aab nayi duniya nayi jimmedariya kya main insab ke liye taiyar hu ..
Raat kuch 2 baje ke karib hum new delhi town pahuch gaye..tino so rahe the aur iswaqt ghar loutna thik nahi tha Maine car ko ek khali jagah pe roka aur Socho me gum ho gaya..

Tabhi pata nahi kaha se kuch man chale car waha agaye car se jate waqt hamari car me ladkio ko dekh unki niyat bigad gayi..

Ladka.. Dekh be kya maal hai yaar kasam se khataranak mal hai bhai ..
Ladka 2.. Are phul ke sath kate bhi hai ..
Ladka.. Chal na dekhte hai..
Wo car se utar hamari aur badhne lage mujhe laga yaha rukna thik nahi bekar me ye ladke mere hatho mare jayenge..
Maine car aage badha diya ..
Ladka.. Dekh be samne wala ladka sada ban raha hai pakad pakad ..in logo ne bhi car start ki aur hamara picha karne lage main kuch fut Jake hi car ROK di aur car se nikal..khada ho gaya..
Wo bhi akar khade ho gaye..
Main.. Maine tum logo ko ek mouka diya tha humse dur rahne ka lekin tumlog kutte ki dum hai sidha nahi ho sakte..
Ladka...aabe dilog kya mar raha hai chal na ek raat ki .. Wo aur kuch bol pata ke Maine uska jabda pakad liya wo kuch bol nahi paya..
Ladka 2.. Chod warna usne gun nikal li . .
Main.. Gun niche kar warna main iska jabda tod dunga aur Teri gardan ..
Ladka 2.. Chod isko warna shoot kar dunga..
Main.. Kar na kar.. Tabhi usne gun shoot kar diya lekin Maine usi ladke ko aage kar diya aur goli sidhe jakar us ladke ke kandhe pe lagi..
Golio ki awaj sun veer aur bakio ki nind tut gayi..
Reet.. Ye kaisi awaj thi suniye aap kab hai..
Main.. Tumsab car me hi ruko main abhi aaya..
Tabhi Maine us ladke ko utha ladka no 2 ke upar phek diya ladke ke hath se gun Putti gayi..
Maine gun uthayi aur dusre ladke ke per ko nishana bana fire kar diya ladka tadap utha sath me galiya bhi dene laga..
Main.. Ye tum dono ki saza hai aab se na tum sahi se kha Paoge aur na tu sahi se chal payega aab agar kabhi kisi ladki pe buri najar dali na to aaj ki raat yaad rakhna aur ha is gun ka licence to hoga nahi main le ja raha hu ..
Main gun ko apne kamar me rakha aur car me agaya..
Veer.. Bhai kya ho raha tha wo ladke kon the..
Main..manchale the Delhi ke manchale in jaise ke karan aaj ladkiya surakshit nahi hai isliye thoda sabak sikhaya ..
Sneha.. Sahi kiya aap ne in jaiso ko to sar me goli mar deni chahiye ..
Main.. Philhal per aur kandhe pe mari hai aglibar sar hi udas dunga..
Reet... Aap kiu insab me pad rahe hai ..
Main.. Jaan main nahi pada unki galati thi unlogo ne tumpe gandi najar dali uska sabak to milna hi chahiye tha na..
Maine car aage badha diya kuch dur aage gaye hi the ke mujhe ek ganda nala dikha Maine gun ko nale me phek diya..
 

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Ye pinto bhai ki stories seeds of love (Pyar ka dewta ) sirf kuch k name change hain
Ha aapne sahi kah mujhe v padh ke aisa hi lga. ...
 

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Aab tak ki sary story ka shray pintu bhai ko jata hai Mai is story ka 2nd writer hu jo ke age ki story likh rha hai .pintu Bhai mere fav writer the is lie main chata ho on ki story complete ho
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Bhai jahn SE story bnd hui hai wahn SE story likhna suru kro ..
 
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