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Update 5……
Werewolf
Kya mein v altered ban gya hoon.?
Par altered toh bhut hi difficult process hoti hai aur kisi insan ko altered ban ne mein kfi time v lgta hai. Mujhe lgta hai jo suitcase mein jo tha wo kisi compnay ka new product hoga saed kisi company ne altered process ko boost krne ka koi trika khoj liya hoga.
Lagta hai us suitcase ne mujhe kisi werewolf ki species ka altered insaan bna dia hai. Pr mein kabhi kisi altered ko je kehte nhi suna ke uske pass system v hai. Ja toh wo ise secret rkhte hai ja je sirf mere sath hi ho raha hai. Par mein baki altered logi ki tarah change kyu nhi ho pa raha hoon.
Sahil ko je toh pta lag gya tha ke uski nazr jo pehle kamjor thi abh wo theek ho gyi lekin uske ilava uske sharer mein koi aur badlav nhi aeya tha.
Sahil ne suna tha ke jab koi altered banta hai use super strength milti hai. Kyu na mein ise check karu…… sahil ne sahmne ek perd dekha aur uske pass jakr ruk gya aur ek punch mara tree par lekin uske hath mein itni dard hoi ke wo jor se chila parda.
Jab usne apna hath dekha toh uska hath thorda chil chuka tha aur thorda khoon v a gya tha.
[ you have been injured]
[-2 HP]
[98/100 HP]
-2 je kaisa system hai na muje koi power de raha hai…. Mein abh is system ko pane se khush hoyu ja dukh manyo. Je system toh mere samj mein hi nhi a raha hai.
[ your heart rate has been increased]
[50 BPM]
Heart rate je batane ki kya jarurat thi muje toh is heart rate ka kuj smj nhi a raha hai muje toh meri body mein koi change nhi dikh raha hai.
Sahil ne socha kyu na wo kuch aur test krke dekhe saed kuch sahmne hi a jaye. Toh sahil ne running shuru ki. Par uske pass apni speed ko calculate karne ke koi equipment v nhi the aur hote v kaise wo tha toh ek jungle mein. Isileye use aisa hi lag raha the ke wo normal speed se hi dord raha hai.
Par mein mera koi body part transform kyu nhi ho raha hai werewolf mein. Pr phir v sahil ne kabhi apne hath kabhi apni legs aur kabhi apni arms pr focus kiya par uska koi v body part transform nhi ho paeya. Akhir kar sahil ne har man li aur focus karna shord dia.
Abh sirf sahil ke pass ek hi rasta bacha tha. Aur woh tha quest ke mission ko pura krna. Pr usme sirf ik hi asaan tha aur wo tha do kilo meat khane wala. Par sahil ke ghr ke halat itne v ache nhi the ke wo roz itna meat lha sake. Aut uske pass sirf 50 hazar the jo ajj ke mehngai ke jamane mein kitne hi din nikalte. Aur dusra quest gym wala aur gym toh woh tabhi ja pye ga jab woh is jungle se nikle ga. Aur tisra quest 14 days mein pehli var transform hona.
Par sahil ko is baat par zakeen nhi ho raha the ke woh 14 days ke vaad transform ho pye gya kyuke use abhi tak je v pta nhi chala tha ke wo altered v bana hai ke nhi.
Chlo mere paas 14 days toh hai hi mein kuch na kuch kar hi loonga…… mujhe ghr se bahr puri raat ho gyi hai meri mom meri fikr kr rhi hongi mujhe jaldi se is jungle se niklna hoga.
Sahil ne bhagna shuru kar dia….aur akhir kar use ek rasta mil hi gya sahil ne socha kyu na is raste par bagha jaye je kahi toh niklta hi hoga aur thordi hi der mein use road mil hi gya. Aur road pe laga board dekh kar use pata chal gya wo kaha hai. Aur usne apne ghr ki tarf baghna shuru kar dia jo us jagah se kuch 20 minutes hi dur tha.
Jab sahil ghar ke pass pahuncha toh usne darwaze ke bahr se hi suna ke uski behn gana ga rhi hai. Usne ek aur baat notice ki ke wo lagatar bagh kar aeya hai pr uski sanse ek dam theek thi aur use thaka v feel nhi ho raha tha. Lgda a saed mein altered ban hi gya a akhir kar.
Aur sahil ne chupke se door khola aur dekh sahme koi nhi hai aur jldi se apne kmre mein chala gya aur jldi se apne kaprde utarne shuru kr deye kahi koi uske khoon se bhare kaprde na dekh lawe.
Jad sahil ki behn ne sahil ko kmre mein guste hi kprde utarte dekh usne jldi se apna chehra dusri tarah ghuma liya.
Je kya hai sahil jaldi se apne kprde dalo joyti jor se chilayi.
Sahil ne v sabse pehla apne kprde jldi se apne school bag mein dal deye aur nye kprde dal kar bola ke mein kprde dal leye hai abh palat jayo.
Tabhi sahil ki mom room mein enter krti hai aur sahil ko gusse se puchti hai kahan the tum rat bhr.
Sahil:- mom meine apko bola tha ke mein vishu ke sath ja raha hoon aur mein usi ke ghr ruk gya tha.
Joyti:- mom meine bola tha na.
Mom:- pr ise hme kuch batana toh chaheye tha na hme agr ise kuch ho jata toh hamara kiya hota.
Sahil:- mom sorry glti hogi agge se aisa nhi hoga.
Mom:- agge se aisa hona v nhi chaheye.
Sahil chali asha hai mom ne jyda gussa nhi kiya…… aur sahil room mein badges doondne lag jata hai….
Joyti:- kya doondh rhe ho woh meri side hai wahan mera saman hai.
Sahil:- mein bandage doondh raha hoon mere hath mein chot lagi hai.
Joyti:- dikhayo kaha lagi hai.
Sahil jab apna hath joyti ko dikhata hai kahan hai chot kahi nhi hai aur tumhara nak wo v theek lag raha hai abh je kaise huya.
Sahil:- wo jayda vrdi chot nhi thi theek ho gyi meri nak.
Sahil mn mein lgta hai meri chot apne aap heal ho gyi hai abh toh muje paka zakeen ho gya hai ke mein altered ho gya hoon.
Tabhi sahil ke phone par bhut saru notifications ati hai aur joyti jab palat kar sahil ka phone uthane lagti hai ke sahil jldi se agge kar apna phone utha leta hai. Aur dekhta hai raka ke messages the.
[ kahan ho tum namurad]
[ tum saed rule bhul rhe hoo]
[ tumhe jldi se mere paas ana hoga]
[ jaise hi je din khatm hoga tum mere pass hone chaheye nhi toh tumhari family ko mar donga]
Je message pardhte hi sahil bhut dukhi ho jata hai. Abh mera aur meri family ka kiya hoga mein kiya kahoon ga raka ko ke kaha hai uska suitcase. Kiya agr mein usko bolo ke mein uski wajah se altered ho gya hoon saed wo mujhe maaf kr de aur apne sath kaam krne ke leye rakh de. Par mein je sabit kaise karun ga mein toh transform nhi ho pa raha hoon. Woh toh mujjhe mar denge.
Agr mein je bolo….. Ki….. Suitcase wo gang wale le gye….. Kiya karu mein……
Milte hai gale update mein……………..
Kya mein v altered ban gya hoon.?
Par altered toh bhut hi difficult process hoti hai aur kisi insan ko altered ban ne mein kfi time v lgta hai. Mujhe lgta hai jo suitcase mein jo tha wo kisi compnay ka new product hoga saed kisi company ne altered process ko boost krne ka koi trika khoj liya hoga.
Lagta hai us suitcase ne mujhe kisi werewolf ki species ka altered insaan bna dia hai. Pr mein kabhi kisi altered ko je kehte nhi suna ke uske pass system v hai. Ja toh wo ise secret rkhte hai ja je sirf mere sath hi ho raha hai. Par mein baki altered logi ki tarah change kyu nhi ho pa raha hoon.
Sahil ko je toh pta lag gya tha ke uski nazr jo pehle kamjor thi abh wo theek ho gyi lekin uske ilava uske sharer mein koi aur badlav nhi aeya tha.
Sahil ne suna tha ke jab koi altered banta hai use super strength milti hai. Kyu na mein ise check karu…… sahil ne sahmne ek perd dekha aur uske pass jakr ruk gya aur ek punch mara tree par lekin uske hath mein itni dard hoi ke wo jor se chila parda.
Jab usne apna hath dekha toh uska hath thorda chil chuka tha aur thorda khoon v a gya tha.
[ you have been injured]
[-2 HP]
[98/100 HP]
-2 je kaisa system hai na muje koi power de raha hai…. Mein abh is system ko pane se khush hoyu ja dukh manyo. Je system toh mere samj mein hi nhi a raha hai.
[ your heart rate has been increased]
[50 BPM]
Heart rate je batane ki kya jarurat thi muje toh is heart rate ka kuj smj nhi a raha hai muje toh meri body mein koi change nhi dikh raha hai.
Sahil ne socha kyu na wo kuch aur test krke dekhe saed kuch sahmne hi a jaye. Toh sahil ne running shuru ki. Par uske pass apni speed ko calculate karne ke koi equipment v nhi the aur hote v kaise wo tha toh ek jungle mein. Isileye use aisa hi lag raha the ke wo normal speed se hi dord raha hai.
Par mein mera koi body part transform kyu nhi ho raha hai werewolf mein. Pr phir v sahil ne kabhi apne hath kabhi apni legs aur kabhi apni arms pr focus kiya par uska koi v body part transform nhi ho paeya. Akhir kar sahil ne har man li aur focus karna shord dia.
Abh sirf sahil ke pass ek hi rasta bacha tha. Aur woh tha quest ke mission ko pura krna. Pr usme sirf ik hi asaan tha aur wo tha do kilo meat khane wala. Par sahil ke ghr ke halat itne v ache nhi the ke wo roz itna meat lha sake. Aut uske pass sirf 50 hazar the jo ajj ke mehngai ke jamane mein kitne hi din nikalte. Aur dusra quest gym wala aur gym toh woh tabhi ja pye ga jab woh is jungle se nikle ga. Aur tisra quest 14 days mein pehli var transform hona.
Par sahil ko is baat par zakeen nhi ho raha the ke woh 14 days ke vaad transform ho pye gya kyuke use abhi tak je v pta nhi chala tha ke wo altered v bana hai ke nhi.
Chlo mere paas 14 days toh hai hi mein kuch na kuch kar hi loonga…… mujhe ghr se bahr puri raat ho gyi hai meri mom meri fikr kr rhi hongi mujhe jaldi se is jungle se niklna hoga.
Sahil ne bhagna shuru kar dia….aur akhir kar use ek rasta mil hi gya sahil ne socha kyu na is raste par bagha jaye je kahi toh niklta hi hoga aur thordi hi der mein use road mil hi gya. Aur road pe laga board dekh kar use pata chal gya wo kaha hai. Aur usne apne ghr ki tarf baghna shuru kar dia jo us jagah se kuch 20 minutes hi dur tha.
Jab sahil ghar ke pass pahuncha toh usne darwaze ke bahr se hi suna ke uski behn gana ga rhi hai. Usne ek aur baat notice ki ke wo lagatar bagh kar aeya hai pr uski sanse ek dam theek thi aur use thaka v feel nhi ho raha tha. Lgda a saed mein altered ban hi gya a akhir kar.
Aur sahil ne chupke se door khola aur dekh sahme koi nhi hai aur jldi se apne kmre mein chala gya aur jldi se apne kaprde utarne shuru kr deye kahi koi uske khoon se bhare kaprde na dekh lawe.
Jad sahil ki behn ne sahil ko kmre mein guste hi kprde utarte dekh usne jldi se apna chehra dusri tarah ghuma liya.
Je kya hai sahil jaldi se apne kprde dalo joyti jor se chilayi.
Sahil ne v sabse pehla apne kprde jldi se apne school bag mein dal deye aur nye kprde dal kar bola ke mein kprde dal leye hai abh palat jayo.
Tabhi sahil ki mom room mein enter krti hai aur sahil ko gusse se puchti hai kahan the tum rat bhr.
Sahil:- mom meine apko bola tha ke mein vishu ke sath ja raha hoon aur mein usi ke ghr ruk gya tha.
Joyti:- mom meine bola tha na.
Mom:- pr ise hme kuch batana toh chaheye tha na hme agr ise kuch ho jata toh hamara kiya hota.
Sahil:- mom sorry glti hogi agge se aisa nhi hoga.
Mom:- agge se aisa hona v nhi chaheye.
Sahil chali asha hai mom ne jyda gussa nhi kiya…… aur sahil room mein badges doondne lag jata hai….
Joyti:- kya doondh rhe ho woh meri side hai wahan mera saman hai.
Sahil:- mein bandage doondh raha hoon mere hath mein chot lagi hai.
Joyti:- dikhayo kaha lagi hai.
Sahil jab apna hath joyti ko dikhata hai kahan hai chot kahi nhi hai aur tumhara nak wo v theek lag raha hai abh je kaise huya.
Sahil:- wo jayda vrdi chot nhi thi theek ho gyi meri nak.
Sahil mn mein lgta hai meri chot apne aap heal ho gyi hai abh toh muje paka zakeen ho gya hai ke mein altered ho gya hoon.
Tabhi sahil ke phone par bhut saru notifications ati hai aur joyti jab palat kar sahil ka phone uthane lagti hai ke sahil jldi se agge kar apna phone utha leta hai. Aur dekhta hai raka ke messages the.
[ kahan ho tum namurad]
[ tum saed rule bhul rhe hoo]
[ tumhe jldi se mere paas ana hoga]
[ jaise hi je din khatm hoga tum mere pass hone chaheye nhi toh tumhari family ko mar donga]
Je message pardhte hi sahil bhut dukhi ho jata hai. Abh mera aur meri family ka kiya hoga mein kiya kahoon ga raka ko ke kaha hai uska suitcase. Kiya agr mein usko bolo ke mein uski wajah se altered ho gya hoon saed wo mujhe maaf kr de aur apne sath kaam krne ke leye rakh de. Par mein je sabit kaise karun ga mein toh transform nhi ho pa raha hoon. Woh toh mujjhe mar denge.
Agr mein je bolo….. Ki….. Suitcase wo gang wale le gye….. Kiya karu mein……
Milte hai gale update mein……………..
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