Fantasy WHITE VS BLACK (CLOSED)

[mashish]

Update 2​

Raj wanha se apne kamre mai ane ke baad baas Mr. Max ke bare mai hi soch raha tha, aur uske hath wanhi invitation card moujud tha baas soch raha tha ki khole ya khole. Sach keh Raj bahut jyada shock tha kyun ki usko bahut kuch pata chala (jesse magic, dusri world, etc...) per ye baat to baas aam baat hai aage usse jo pata chalega wo to kabhi wo expect bhi nahi kiya hoga, aage usko uski jindegi ki sabse badi raaz ke bare mai pata chalega, ye baat to aage pata chalega mai baas flow flow mai likh gaya.​

bahut soch bichar ke baad Raj ne wo Invitation letter kholta hai, to uske front page pe bade size se school ka naam likha gaya tha aur thik naam ke upar ek angel bani huyi thy jiske hath upar thy aur uske hath ke upar ek flags tha, 4 colour thy uss flag mai ek deep red, ek deep blue, ek deep green and ek black (ye flag Trident school ke flag tha). Per asal mai in charo colour ke ander agar dhyaan se dekhe to uske ander bhi logo thy har ek colour ka ek logo jo ki Trident school ke 4 branch ko show karte hai.​

Raj usko ache se dekhta hai fir page palat deta hai, usme ek admi jo lagbhad 60-65 saal ka lag raha tha uska photo tha aur uske niche likha tha, JOHN DANIEL Principal of Trident school of magic. Raj unko ache se dekhne lagta hai, uss admi ke photo se bhi ye andaja nahi laga sakta ki wo kitne powerful honge kyun ki photo mai bhi unke face pe jo pride, arrogance, clam, etc... thy wo saaf dekha ja sakta hai. Raj unko ache se dekhne ke baad page palat deta hai. Usme pe ek letter likha gaya tha.​

Letter......​

Dear Mr. Raj​

We are pleased to inform you that you have a place at Trident School of Magic. Please find enclosed a list of all necessary books and equipment.​

Term begins on *********. We awaiting you. If you accept this invitation please sign on the mark of candidates.​

Yours Sincerely,​

Deputy Headmistress​

SUSSANNE DEL​

baas itna hi likha tha aur akhir mai Candidate ka naam likha tha aur uss naam ke upar kuch space choda gaya tha janha candidate ko sign karna tha, aur niche ek note bhi likha tha,​

Note : aagar aap agree hote ho magic school mai ane ke liye to hi sign kijiye ye apka invitation ke sath sath registration form bhi hai, agar nahi to kuch bhi mat kijiye isse jala (burn) dijiye. Aur jalane ke baad aap saab kuch bhul jayenge aapko jo bhi bataya hoga ya phir dikhaya gaya hoga magic ke bare mai wo sari baate.​

fir last page mai thoda bahut school ke bare mai bataya gaya hai, jesse ki.....​

School 800 saal pehle bana tha kitne founder hai, jinka hath tha ye school banane mai, abhi principal kitne no. Ke hai etc.....(ye baate agar aage jaruri huyi to bata dunga).​

Raj sara kuch padhta hai per abhi tak kuch decide nahi kar pata hai ki wo jaye ya na jaye, isiliye wo uth ke wapas uss lake ke taraf chal deta hai, kyun ki usko thodi shanti chahiye thy jisse ki wo kuch soch sake aur ek acha sa decision le sake.​

chaliye Raj ko sochne dete hai ham kahi aur chalte hai....​

Ek rajya jo pure safed hi dikh raha tha usme har din ki tarah aaj bhi shanti thy, per iss shanti ke bicho bich bhi kuch ghatna ghat ti thy to uss rajya ke raja aur uske sathi mil ke samadhan kar dete thy.​

Aare yaar mai rajya ka naam hi nahi likha, iss rajya ka naam hai Snow Country kyun ki pure saal baraf (snow) se Dhaka hua rehta hai. Isiliye uska naam Snow country rakh diya tha iska founder ne.​

Iss country ke side mai ek Ghana jungle tha jisme daku rehte thy unka thikana kanha hai ye koi bhi nahi janta hai kyun ki wo bich bich mai apna thikana badal lete thy jisse inka asli thikane ke bare mai raja aur mantri mandal kabhi pata bhi nahi laga paye.​

Wese iss rajya to bahut se market hai per ek main market bhi hai jo har din chahal pahal se bhara hota hai, aaj bhi tha,wanhi market mai ek ladki jo dikhne kafi khubsurat thy, white skin, choti patli si naak, red lip, kale baal, badi badi blue eye jo usko bahut jyada khubsurat aur cute bana rahi thy aur sath mai white dress, yese lag rahi thy ki koi pari niche dharti pe utar aayi ho. Wo aaj ghum rahi thy, wo abhi ek dukan mai jane hi wali thy ki aaj phir se dakuo ne hamla kar diya tha market mai. Aur dhire dhire market ko loot rahe thy. Har baat ki tarah iss baar bhi yanhi koyi 10-12 daku honge sabhi ke hath mai koyi na koyi hatiyaar tha, jesse ki bhale, talwar, etc....​

jaab sare daku wo dukan ko lutne aaye janha pe wo ladki thy to ek daku ki nazar uss ladki ke pad jati hai, to usne jake ek admi ke kaan mai kuch kaha, wo admi inn dakuo ka sardar tha. Usne bhi sunke uss ladki ko dekha aur fir uss admi ko kuch kaha, to wo admi apne sath 3 aur daku ko leke uss ladki ke taraf badhne lagta hai, aur sardar baki sabhi ko leke aage nikal gaya.​

Idhar wo ladki bhi samajh juki thy ki ye daku kis bare mai baat kar rahe hai aur aage kya hoga, uske liye wo bhi bilkul ready ho gayi thy.​

Jaab wo 4 daku iss ladki ke samne aagaye to....​

Daku 1 : ye ladki hamare sath chal, hamara sardar ka dil tujh pe aagaya hai sath chalegi to tu rani banke rahegi warna....​

ye kehte huye apna hath bhi badha raha tha wo daku uss ladki ko pakad ne ke liye. Per daku 1 uss ladki wo pakad pata usse pehle ek chikh charo aur gunj uthi.....​

aaaaaahhhhhhhhhh......​

ye chikh wanhi daku 1 ka tha kyun ki wo ladki ne iska hath hi kat diya tha. Aab uss ladki ke hath mai ek talwaar thy jo kafi had tak ek snow ki tarah dikh rahi thy, (iss talwar ke bare mai baad mai baat karenge). Per aab wo khun se sani huyi thy. ​

jaab baki 3 ye dekhte hai to wo aage badh jate hai apne sathi ka badla lene ke liye, per wo pahunch pate unka sar niche jamin pe pada hua tha.​

Aab baas daku 1 hi bacha tha unn charo mai se...wo ladki apni talwaar ko paas mai padi ek kapde se pochte huye uss daku 1 ke samne aake khadi ho jati hai.​

Ladki : tu soch raha hoga ki tu bach gaya.....per nahi.....bacha iss liye ki tu ek kaam karega mera uske baad tujhe mai mukti dila dungi.....​

daku 1 darte huye : kyyyyaaaaaa!!! Kaaaaam!!!!​

ladki : baas jake apne sardar ko bol de ek baar mai sabhi aajaye mere paas jyada time nahi hai ek hi baar mai hisab kitab kar denge.....​

Chal bhag yanha se abhi.....​

wo sardar aur uske sath baki 7 daku dusre aur gaye thy lootne ke liye isiliye ye kand ke bare mai unko kuch pata nahi hai.​

ladki ki baat sunke wo daku 1 apna kata hua hath leke bhag gaya sardar ke paas khabar dene ke liye.​

aage ek choti si ladhayi dekhenge uske baad wapas Raj ke paas chalenge ki Raj kya decision leta hai.​

Superb update

 

[Naina]

Update 2​

Raj wanha se apne kamre mai ane ke baad baas Mr. Max ke bare mai hi soch raha tha, aur uske hath wanhi invitation card moujud tha baas soch raha tha ki khole ya khole. Sach keh Raj bahut jyada shock tha kyun ki usko bahut kuch pata chala (jesse magic, dusri world, etc...) per ye baat to baas aam baat hai aage usse jo pata chalega wo to kabhi wo expect bhi nahi kiya hoga, aage usko uski jindegi ki sabse badi raaz ke bare mai pata chalega, ye baat to aage pata chalega mai baas flow flow mai likh gaya.​

bahut soch bichar ke baad Raj ne wo Invitation letter kholta hai, to uske front page pe bade size se school ka naam likha gaya tha aur thik naam ke upar ek angel bani huyi thy jiske hath upar thy aur uske hath ke upar ek flags tha, 4 colour thy uss flag mai ek deep red, ek deep blue, ek deep green and ek black (ye flag Trident school ke flag tha). Per asal mai in charo colour ke ander agar dhyaan se dekhe to uske ander bhi logo thy har ek colour ka ek logo jo ki Trident school ke 4 branch ko show karte hai.​

Raj usko ache se dekhta hai fir page palat deta hai, usme ek admi jo lagbhad 60-65 saal ka lag raha tha uska photo tha aur uske niche likha tha, JOHN DANIEL Principal of Trident school of magic. Raj unko ache se dekhne lagta hai, uss admi ke photo se bhi ye andaja nahi laga sakta ki wo kitne powerful honge kyun ki photo mai bhi unke face pe jo pride, arrogance, clam, etc... thy wo saaf dekha ja sakta hai. Raj unko ache se dekhne ke baad page palat deta hai. Usme pe ek letter likha gaya tha.​

Letter......​

Dear Mr. Raj​

We are pleased to inform you that you have a place at Trident School of Magic. Please find enclosed a list of all necessary books and equipment.​

Term begins on *********. We awaiting you. If you accept this invitation please sign on the mark of candidates.​

Yours Sincerely,​

Deputy Headmistress​

SUSSANNE DEL​

baas itna hi likha tha aur akhir mai Candidate ka naam likha tha aur uss naam ke upar kuch space choda gaya tha janha candidate ko sign karna tha, aur niche ek note bhi likha tha,​

Note : aagar aap agree hote ho magic school mai ane ke liye to hi sign kijiye ye apka invitation ke sath sath registration form bhi hai, agar nahi to kuch bhi mat kijiye isse jala (burn) dijiye. Aur jalane ke baad aap saab kuch bhul jayenge aapko jo bhi bataya hoga ya phir dikhaya gaya hoga magic ke bare mai wo sari baate.​

fir last page mai thoda bahut school ke bare mai bataya gaya hai, jesse ki.....​

School 800 saal pehle bana tha kitne founder hai, jinka hath tha ye school banane mai, abhi principal kitne no. Ke hai etc.....(ye baate agar aage jaruri huyi to bata dunga).​

Raj sara kuch padhta hai per abhi tak kuch decide nahi kar pata hai ki wo jaye ya na jaye, isiliye wo uth ke wapas uss lake ke taraf chal deta hai, kyun ki usko thodi shanti chahiye thy jisse ki wo kuch soch sake aur ek acha sa decision le sake.​

chaliye Raj ko sochne dete hai ham kahi aur chalte hai....​

Ek rajya jo pure safed hi dikh raha tha usme har din ki tarah aaj bhi shanti thy, per iss shanti ke bicho bich bhi kuch ghatna ghat ti thy to uss rajya ke raja aur uske sathi mil ke samadhan kar dete thy.​

Aare yaar mai rajya ka naam hi nahi likha, iss rajya ka naam hai Snow Country kyun ki pure saal baraf (snow) se Dhaka hua rehta hai. Isiliye uska naam Snow country rakh diya tha iska founder ne.​

Iss country ke side mai ek Ghana jungle tha jisme daku rehte thy unka thikana kanha hai ye koi bhi nahi janta hai kyun ki wo bich bich mai apna thikana badal lete thy jisse inka asli thikane ke bare mai raja aur mantri mandal kabhi pata bhi nahi laga paye.​

Wese iss rajya to bahut se market hai per ek main market bhi hai jo har din chahal pahal se bhara hota hai, aaj bhi tha,wanhi market mai ek ladki jo dikhne kafi khubsurat thy, white skin, choti patli si naak, red lip, kale baal, badi badi blue eye jo usko bahut jyada khubsurat aur cute bana rahi thy aur sath mai white dress, yese lag rahi thy ki koi pari niche dharti pe utar aayi ho. Wo aaj ghum rahi thy, wo abhi ek dukan mai jane hi wali thy ki aaj phir se dakuo ne hamla kar diya tha market mai. Aur dhire dhire market ko loot rahe thy. Har baat ki tarah iss baar bhi yanhi koyi 10-12 daku honge sabhi ke hath mai koyi na koyi hatiyaar tha, jesse ki bhale, talwar, etc....​

jaab sare daku wo dukan ko lutne aaye janha pe wo ladki thy to ek daku ki nazar uss ladki ke pad jati hai, to usne jake ek admi ke kaan mai kuch kaha, wo admi inn dakuo ka sardar tha. Usne bhi sunke uss ladki ko dekha aur fir uss admi ko kuch kaha, to wo admi apne sath 3 aur daku ko leke uss ladki ke taraf badhne lagta hai, aur sardar baki sabhi ko leke aage nikal gaya.​

Idhar wo ladki bhi samajh juki thy ki ye daku kis bare mai baat kar rahe hai aur aage kya hoga, uske liye wo bhi bilkul ready ho gayi thy.​

Jaab wo 4 daku iss ladki ke samne aagaye to....​

Daku 1 : ye ladki hamare sath chal, hamara sardar ka dil tujh pe aagaya hai sath chalegi to tu rani banke rahegi warna....​

ye kehte huye apna hath bhi badha raha tha wo daku uss ladki ko pakad ne ke liye. Per daku 1 uss ladki wo pakad pata usse pehle ek chikh charo aur gunj uthi.....​

aaaaaahhhhhhhhhh......​

ye chikh wanhi daku 1 ka tha kyun ki wo ladki ne iska hath hi kat diya tha. Aab uss ladki ke hath mai ek talwaar thy jo kafi had tak ek snow ki tarah dikh rahi thy, (iss talwar ke bare mai baad mai baat karenge). Per aab wo khun se sani huyi thy. ​

jaab baki 3 ye dekhte hai to wo aage badh jate hai apne sathi ka badla lene ke liye, per wo pahunch pate unka sar niche jamin pe pada hua tha.​

Aab baas daku 1 hi bacha tha unn charo mai se...wo ladki apni talwaar ko paas mai padi ek kapde se pochte huye uss daku 1 ke samne aake khadi ho jati hai.​

Ladki : tu soch raha hoga ki tu bach gaya.....per nahi.....bacha iss liye ki tu ek kaam karega mera uske baad tujhe mai mukti dila dungi.....​

daku 1 darte huye : kyyyyaaaaaa!!! Kaaaaam!!!!​

ladki : baas jake apne sardar ko bol de ek baar mai sabhi aajaye mere paas jyada time nahi hai ek hi baar mai hisab kitab kar denge.....​

Chal bhag yanha se abhi.....​

wo sardar aur uske sath baki 7 daku dusre aur gaye thy lootne ke liye isiliye ye kand ke bare mai unko kuch pata nahi hai.​

ladki ki baat sunke wo daku 1 apna kata hua hath leke bhag gaya sardar ke paas khabar dene ke liye.​

aage ek choti si ladhayi dekhenge uske baad wapas Raj ke paas chalenge ki Raj kya decision leta hai.​

Ho na ho ye talwar wali ladki Raj ki heroine banegi..

 

[Killerpanditji(pandit)]

Ye ek magical story hai, jisme ek anath ladka dusri duniya mai chala jata hai, aur wanha jake usko apne baare mai pata chal ta hai ki wo kon hai uske maa baap kon hai wagera wagera, aur samay ke sath sath wo uss duniya walo ke liye idol ban jata hai. Kese hota hai wo story mai dekhenge.​

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Mai iss story site mai naya hun, to asha hai ki aap sabhi mere sath bane rahenge, aagar kahi galti ho jaye to apna dost manke maaf kar dijiyega.​

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Aur pehle se hi mai clear kar deta hun mera story bahut se story se inspired hai jesse ki Harry potter aur bahut se story hai to agar apko kuch bura lage to maafi mangta hun apse.​

Congratulations for new story

 

[SHADOWKILLER]

Waise ek tarah se ek bahot tough decision hai hai Raj ke liye....
Ek taraf wo duniya jaha wo pala badha, bada hua... jisko wo sach maanta aa raha hai..
wohi dusri taraf Yun achanak se pata chalna ki is duniya atirikt koi aur bhi magical world hai, jaha magical school bhi hai... waha ushe jana hai apne andar chupe magic powers nikharne ke liye..
Ye sab jaanke Koi bhi aam insaan shock mein chala jayega, Haan excited aur dar bhi lagega... Raj bhi inse alag nahi..
Lekin max aur us latter dwara batayi gayi baatein aur Raj ke andar chupe raaz... Raj ko dusro se alag karta hai..
well.. gaur talab baat ye hai ki Raj kounsa raah chunta hai... abhi jo chal raha normal life.. usko ya magic school jaha se nayi jindagi ki suruwat hogi...

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dusri taraf snow country mein wo jo ladki un daaku logo ki band baja rahi apni talwar se... aur jis tarah tevar dikha rahi hai, aur wo dialogues... isse to yahi lage ki ye koi aam ladki nahi hai... ya to waha ke raj gharane talluk rakhti hai ya phir koi powers se paripoorn story character.. jiski aham bhumika hogi is kahani mein aage chalke..

Khair... Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills

Awesome update

Nice update

Thank you guys

 

[SHADOWKILLER]

Superb update

Congratulations for new story

Thank you

 

[SHADOWKILLER]

Ho na ho ye talwar wali ladki Raj ki heroine banegi..

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[Killerpanditji(pandit)]

Update 1​

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(Kahani Hero ki jubani chalegi)​

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Hi mera naam Raj hai, aur mai kal 18 saal ka hone wala hun, isi liye behed dukhi hun kyun ki anath ashram ke rule ke hisab se mujhe parso hi anath ashram chodna padega, na mera paas paise hai na hi mere paas koi job isiliye aaj mai bahut pareshan hoke library mai betha hua tha.​

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Library mai bethke padhna mujhe bahut acha lagta tha, isliye mai hamesha anath ashram ke paas mai bane library mai aata jata rehta tha aur har wo kitab padhta tha jo mujhe acha lagta tha.​

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Jese ki apne suna ki mai anath ashram mai rehta hun to basically mai ek anath ladka hun, aur head bolte hai ki jaab mai muskil se 1 ya 2 mahine ka hounga taab hi kisi ne mujhe anath ashram ke bahar chod ke chala gaya tha, aur sath mai kuch nahi tha baas ek locket ko chod ke per aaj tak maine na hi kisine wo locket ko khola hai kyun ki wo khulta hi nahi hai, aur mujhe nahi pata ki ye locket kis chiz ka hai.​

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Mai hamesha har kisi ke sath hash ke, khul ke milta tha, aur mere sath bich bich mai bacho ko kayi parents aate thy aur adopt kar lete thy per mujhe koyi nahi kiya pata nahi kyun, sayad mera sakal surat unhe pasand nahi aaya, fir bhi mujhe koyi gham nahi tha.​

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Aur mera hasmukh nature aur sabhi se milna julna nature ke liye har koyi anath ashram mai mera dost hai to mujhe kabhi akelapan mehsus hi nahi hua. Per kal saab badle ne wala tha.​

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At present…..​

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Mai Raj har roj ki tarah aaj bhi library mai ghum raha tha aur ek acha kitab ki talash kar raha tha jisse mai padh saku. Har koyi mujhe baas ek hi naam se janta hai “KITABI KIDA”, aur mujhe bulate bhi hai iss naam se per mai sunke baas hass deta hun. ​

Yese hi kitab dhundte dhundte mujhe ek kitab mil jati hai, ye kitab ke upar black leather se wrapping ki gayi thy aur bilkul new bhi dikh rahi thy, per pata nahi kyun mujhe wo intresting laga isiliye maine usko utha liya, aur aake table pe beth gaya, aur kitab khulne hi wala tha ki ek bacha mere paas aagaya.​

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Bacha : Raj bhai, head apko bula rahe hai.​

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Raj : thik hai tu chal mai aaya.​

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Mera itna kehna tha ki wo bacha wanha se chala gaya aur mai bhi uthke wanha se wo kitab ko le liya aur wanha se anath ashram wapas aagaya. Aur wapas aate hi sidhe head ke cabin ke aur chal pada unse milne kitab ko apne room mai rakh ke.​

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Cabin ke bahar jake…..​

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Raj : may I come in head sir….​

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Head sir : yes yes come in Raj….​

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Fir ander gaya aur unke samne jake khada ho gaya, unke samne ek sakhs bethe huye thy dikhne mai yanhi koyi 40-45 saal ke lag rahe thy. To maine bhi unko hello kaha to unhone bhi mujhe hello kiya. Fir mai chup chap khada ho gaya.​

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Head sir : Raj inse milo ye hai Mr. Max ye TSM school se hai, aur inko tumhara koyi project acha laga to ye tumse kuch akele mai baat karna chahte hai to jake inse baat karlo.​

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Head ki baate sunke mujhe kuch samajh nahi aaya aur head sir ye kiss project ki baat kar rahe hai mai wanhi soch raha tha, yanhi soch ke mai head sir ko kuch jawab deta,​

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Max bol padte hai,​

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Max : Raj apse kuch bate karni hai aur aap jo project ke bare mai soch rahe hai wo 4 mahine pehle diya tha wanhi project ke bare, to kya ham baas 10 minutes baat kar sakte hai akele mai.​

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Mujhe kuch samajh hi nahi aaraha tha ki ye konsa project hai jab ki maine koyi project diya hi nahi kahi pe, fir bhi mai raji ho gaya pata nahi kyun unki ankho mai kuch tha jesse ki kuch jaruri baat batane wale thy mujhe,​

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Raj : thik hai….chaliye….​

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Fir mai aur Max chal dete hai wanhi anath ashram mai bane ek talab ke aur wanha aam tour pe koyi aata jata nahi tha. Wanha pahunch ne ke baad,​

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Raj : mister Max aap kis project ke bare mai baat kar rahe hai, aur maine to koyi TSM school ke bare mai kabhi suna bhi nahi hai.​

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Max : wo baate baad mai jo bataunga pehle usake upar dhyaan do aur mai jo puchunga uska jawab do….​

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Kuch der soch ke….​

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Raj : thik hai boliye….​

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Max : kya tumhe kabhi yesa laga tum khash ho….​

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Raj : nahi….​

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Max : mera matlab nahi samajh pa rahe ho tum kuch yesa jo tum unexpected samajh rahe ho ki wo nahi hoga fir bhi wo ho pa raha hai….aur kuch unusual jo ki sirf tum khud jante ho.​

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Raj : kabhi kabhi per bahut si baate hai….​

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Max : mujhe bata sakte ho….​

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Raj : thik hai, ​

Pehli baat mai ek kitab baas kuch hi ghante mai pura padh sakta hun each and every word ko yaad karke yesa lagta hai ki mera memory power bahut jyada strong hai.​

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Dusri baat jaab gussa hota hun to yesa lagta hai ki koyi chiz mere ander se bahar ana chahti hai per wo apne aap normal bhi ho jati hai.​

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Tisri ye baate kisiko bhi nahi bataya hai mai janwaro se baat kar sakta hun pata nahi kesse har tarah ke animal language bhi bol sakta hun.​

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Kabhi kabhi mere hatho se kuch saman gayab bhi ho jate hai per baad mai wo wapas bhi aajate hai. Yese bahut si baate hoti hai, per usse iska kya lena dena hai.​

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Max Raj ki sari baate sunke….​

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Max : thik hai, tumhe aaj kuch anokhi chiz mili jisse tum attract huye ho….​

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Raj : han ek kitab mili….​

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Max : thik hai ye kehke uske samne apna hath kar deta hai aur ek chota sa fire ball create kar deta hai,​

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Fir Raj ko dekh ke ye pata hai kya hai,​

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Raj ye dekh ke darne lagta hai, aur piche hatne lagta hai…..​

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Raj : dur raho tum mujhse….dur raho……​

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Max : daro nahi Raj, ye kehke fire ball withdraw kar leta hai, mai tumhe darane ke liye wo nahi dikhaya balki jo bate mai bolu usse tumhe yakin aaye issliye bataya.​

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Raj abhi bhi dar raha tha fir bhi himmat juta ke puch leta hai kya….​

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Max : mai ek wizard hun, aur mai iss duniya se nahi magical land se belong karta hun, aaj jo kitab mili hai tumhe wo koyi kitab nahi ek invitation letter hai TRIDENT SCHOOL OF MAGIC se hai. Jisme tum select huye ho aage ki padhayi ke liye jisse tum tumhara magic and weapon skill aur behetar kar sako. To mai baas tumahara jawab lene aaya hun agar han hua to tum mere sath chaloge aur na hua to mai wapas chala jaunga.​

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Raj Max ki baate badi hi dhyaan se sun raha hota hai, aur use shock bhi lagta hai ki ye kya hai aaj ki science ki duniya mai bhi magic mai believe karte hai wagera wagera….​

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Raj : aap kya kehna chahte hai…..​

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Max : mai ye kehna chahta hun ki tum wo school chalo aur magic sikho…..​

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Raj : per mere paas to koyi magic nahi hai….​

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Max :tum kya ho ye tum khud bhi nahi jante ho…​

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Raj : matlab…..​

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Max (mann mai) : ye mai kya bol gaya abhi sahi samay nahi aaya hai Raj saab kuch batane ka….​

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Max : kuch nahi Raj yanhi ki tum ek ache wizard ban sakte ho, mai tumhe force nahi karunga invitation ko ache se padh lena fir invitation ke akhir mai yes or no likhne ke liye space hai usme apna answer likh dena mujhe pata chal jayega….​

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Ye keh ke Wanha se gayab ho jata hai max, Raj ko shock mai chod ke….fir Raj thodi der wanhi khada rehta hai aur fir apne room ke aur chal padta hai. ​

Nice start

 

[Killerpanditji(pandit)]

Update 2​

Raj wanha se apne kamre mai ane ke baad baas Mr. Max ke bare mai hi soch raha tha, aur uske hath wanhi invitation card moujud tha baas soch raha tha ki khole ya khole. Sach keh Raj bahut jyada shock tha kyun ki usko bahut kuch pata chala (jesse magic, dusri world, etc...) per ye baat to baas aam baat hai aage usse jo pata chalega wo to kabhi wo expect bhi nahi kiya hoga, aage usko uski jindegi ki sabse badi raaz ke bare mai pata chalega, ye baat to aage pata chalega mai baas flow flow mai likh gaya.​

bahut soch bichar ke baad Raj ne wo Invitation letter kholta hai, to uske front page pe bade size se school ka naam likha gaya tha aur thik naam ke upar ek angel bani huyi thy jiske hath upar thy aur uske hath ke upar ek flags tha, 4 colour thy uss flag mai ek deep red, ek deep blue, ek deep green and ek black (ye flag Trident school ke flag tha). Per asal mai in charo colour ke ander agar dhyaan se dekhe to uske ander bhi logo thy har ek colour ka ek logo jo ki Trident school ke 4 branch ko show karte hai.​

Raj usko ache se dekhta hai fir page palat deta hai, usme ek admi jo lagbhad 60-65 saal ka lag raha tha uska photo tha aur uske niche likha tha, JOHN DANIEL Principal of Trident school of magic. Raj unko ache se dekhne lagta hai, uss admi ke photo se bhi ye andaja nahi laga sakta ki wo kitne powerful honge kyun ki photo mai bhi unke face pe jo pride, arrogance, clam, etc... thy wo saaf dekha ja sakta hai. Raj unko ache se dekhne ke baad page palat deta hai. Usme pe ek letter likha gaya tha.​

Letter......​

Dear Mr. Raj​

We are pleased to inform you that you have a place at Trident School of Magic. Please find enclosed a list of all necessary books and equipment.​

Term begins on *********. We awaiting you. If you accept this invitation please sign on the mark of candidates.​

Yours Sincerely,​

Deputy Headmistress​

SUSSANNE DEL​

baas itna hi likha tha aur akhir mai Candidate ka naam likha tha aur uss naam ke upar kuch space choda gaya tha janha candidate ko sign karna tha, aur niche ek note bhi likha tha,​

Note : aagar aap agree hote ho magic school mai ane ke liye to hi sign kijiye ye apka invitation ke sath sath registration form bhi hai, agar nahi to kuch bhi mat kijiye isse jala (burn) dijiye. Aur jalane ke baad aap saab kuch bhul jayenge aapko jo bhi bataya hoga ya phir dikhaya gaya hoga magic ke bare mai wo sari baate.​

fir last page mai thoda bahut school ke bare mai bataya gaya hai, jesse ki.....​

School 800 saal pehle bana tha kitne founder hai, jinka hath tha ye school banane mai, abhi principal kitne no. Ke hai etc.....(ye baate agar aage jaruri huyi to bata dunga).​

Raj sara kuch padhta hai per abhi tak kuch decide nahi kar pata hai ki wo jaye ya na jaye, isiliye wo uth ke wapas uss lake ke taraf chal deta hai, kyun ki usko thodi shanti chahiye thy jisse ki wo kuch soch sake aur ek acha sa decision le sake.​

chaliye Raj ko sochne dete hai ham kahi aur chalte hai....​

Ek rajya jo pure safed hi dikh raha tha usme har din ki tarah aaj bhi shanti thy, per iss shanti ke bicho bich bhi kuch ghatna ghat ti thy to uss rajya ke raja aur uske sathi mil ke samadhan kar dete thy.​

Aare yaar mai rajya ka naam hi nahi likha, iss rajya ka naam hai Snow Country kyun ki pure saal baraf (snow) se Dhaka hua rehta hai. Isiliye uska naam Snow country rakh diya tha iska founder ne.​

Iss country ke side mai ek Ghana jungle tha jisme daku rehte thy unka thikana kanha hai ye koi bhi nahi janta hai kyun ki wo bich bich mai apna thikana badal lete thy jisse inka asli thikane ke bare mai raja aur mantri mandal kabhi pata bhi nahi laga paye.​

Wese iss rajya to bahut se market hai per ek main market bhi hai jo har din chahal pahal se bhara hota hai, aaj bhi tha,wanhi market mai ek ladki jo dikhne kafi khubsurat thy, white skin, choti patli si naak, red lip, kale baal, badi badi blue eye jo usko bahut jyada khubsurat aur cute bana rahi thy aur sath mai white dress, yese lag rahi thy ki koi pari niche dharti pe utar aayi ho. Wo aaj ghum rahi thy, wo abhi ek dukan mai jane hi wali thy ki aaj phir se dakuo ne hamla kar diya tha market mai. Aur dhire dhire market ko loot rahe thy. Har baat ki tarah iss baar bhi yanhi koyi 10-12 daku honge sabhi ke hath mai koyi na koyi hatiyaar tha, jesse ki bhale, talwar, etc....​

jaab sare daku wo dukan ko lutne aaye janha pe wo ladki thy to ek daku ki nazar uss ladki ke pad jati hai, to usne jake ek admi ke kaan mai kuch kaha, wo admi inn dakuo ka sardar tha. Usne bhi sunke uss ladki ko dekha aur fir uss admi ko kuch kaha, to wo admi apne sath 3 aur daku ko leke uss ladki ke taraf badhne lagta hai, aur sardar baki sabhi ko leke aage nikal gaya.​

Idhar wo ladki bhi samajh juki thy ki ye daku kis bare mai baat kar rahe hai aur aage kya hoga, uske liye wo bhi bilkul ready ho gayi thy.​

Jaab wo 4 daku iss ladki ke samne aagaye to....​

Daku 1 : ye ladki hamare sath chal, hamara sardar ka dil tujh pe aagaya hai sath chalegi to tu rani banke rahegi warna....​

ye kehte huye apna hath bhi badha raha tha wo daku uss ladki ko pakad ne ke liye. Per daku 1 uss ladki wo pakad pata usse pehle ek chikh charo aur gunj uthi.....​

aaaaaahhhhhhhhhh......​

ye chikh wanhi daku 1 ka tha kyun ki wo ladki ne iska hath hi kat diya tha. Aab uss ladki ke hath mai ek talwaar thy jo kafi had tak ek snow ki tarah dikh rahi thy, (iss talwar ke bare mai baad mai baat karenge). Per aab wo khun se sani huyi thy. ​

jaab baki 3 ye dekhte hai to wo aage badh jate hai apne sathi ka badla lene ke liye, per wo pahunch pate unka sar niche jamin pe pada hua tha.​

Aab baas daku 1 hi bacha tha unn charo mai se...wo ladki apni talwaar ko paas mai padi ek kapde se pochte huye uss daku 1 ke samne aake khadi ho jati hai.​

Ladki : tu soch raha hoga ki tu bach gaya.....per nahi.....bacha iss liye ki tu ek kaam karega mera uske baad tujhe mai mukti dila dungi.....​

daku 1 darte huye : kyyyyaaaaaa!!! Kaaaaam!!!!​

ladki : baas jake apne sardar ko bol de ek baar mai sabhi aajaye mere paas jyada time nahi hai ek hi baar mai hisab kitab kar denge.....​

Chal bhag yanha se abhi.....​

wo sardar aur uske sath baki 7 daku dusre aur gaye thy lootne ke liye isiliye ye kand ke bare mai unko kuch pata nahi hai.​

ladki ki baat sunke wo daku 1 apna kata hua hath leke bhag gaya sardar ke paas khabar dene ke liye.​

aage ek choti si ladhayi dekhenge uske baad wapas Raj ke paas chalenge ki Raj kya decision leta hai.​

Excellent update bro

 

[Killerpanditji(pandit)]

Update posted agar kuch galti ho gayi hai to maaf kar dena, next update on Thursday.​

Thanks update ke liye

 

[SHADOWKILLER]

Nice start

Thank you brother