Fantasy WHITE VS BLACK (CLOSED)

[SHADOWKILLER]

for start new story

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[Avir]

Nice One

 

[jitutripathi00]

Bahut shandaar, update.

 

[SHADOWKILLER]

Nice One

Bahut shandaar, update.

Thank you guys

 

[aalu]

akhir aisa lucrative invitation kise nahin pasand aayega... Mr. Max ne ek nayee duniya hi khol dee uske samne... uske saath jo ajeeb ho raha tha uska jawab hain wo... aur usse bhi aage... The Trident School of magic... aur ek nayee duniya ka dwar...

jaadoo yeh shabd sunte hi gudguddi romanch bhar deta hain... lekin ek nayee duniya jo iske duniya se bhinn... jaane kaisi hogi, kaise honge wahan ke log kya har koi jaadu janta hoga... kya sirf insan baste hain wahan ya doosre jeev bhi... aise kayee sawal hain...

lekin raj asmanjas mein hain,,, waise bhi pechhe hain kya usse rokne ke liye aur aisa toh na hain kee wo wapas nahin aa shakta hain... iss duniya mein na toh koi pariwar hain na koi rishtedar,,, ek anath ke liye toh zindagi aur bhi aage mushkil hogi... abhi tak khaane peen aur ek chhat ka intejam tha lekin aage in buniyadi jaroorate ke lie bhi usse khud pe hi nirbhar rahna hoga...

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NOTE:- agar drishye badle toh kisi symbol ke dwara oopar ke paragraph aur niche ke paragraph ko alag kar de isse samajhne mein aasani hoti hain bhai....

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ek barfo se ghira rajya... daakuo ka hamla jahir hain aaj ke zamane mein aisa nahin hota... jaroor yeh doosri duniya hain ya kahe kee magic land kee baate ho rahi hain... ladaka darne ke bajaye bhir gayee... jahir hain koi mamuli nahin hain... sidha chunauti sabhi ko de dee... lekin iss rajya ke sainik kahan gaye ek daakuo ke giroh ne hamla kiya aur wo log nadarad hain... waise jis jagah ke baare mein in rajya waasio ko maloom na hain toh phir in daakuo ko kaid kar ke unka thikana toh pata kar shakte hain...

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magic story ko reality se jor ke rakhna aasan nahin hota... abhi tak kahani wastawikta aur fantasy ke beech badhiya samanjashya dikhati aayee hain... aur aapne pichhe puchha tha kee spells ke baare mein... main kahoonga kee jitna sadharan shabd rakhe utna hi behtar hain... hame bhi relate karne mein aasani hogi...jaise paani kee power--- jaal prawah... akraman ke liye... defence ke liye... jal awrodh... waiseNaina jee ne badhiya udaharan diya hain...

jayda difficult naam hame yaad karne jaisa ho jayega... simple naam ko hum aasani se relate kar lenge... dhanyawaad....

 

[SHADOWKILLER]

akhir aisa lucrative invitation kise nahin pasand aayega... Mr. Max ne ek nayee duniya hi khol dee uske samne... uske saath jo ajeeb ho raha tha uska jawab hain wo... aur usse bhi aage... The Trident School of magic... aur ek nayee duniya ka dwar...

jaadoo yeh shabd sunte hi gudguddi romanch bhar deta hain... lekin ek nayee duniya jo iske duniya se bhinn... jaane kaisi hogi, kaise honge wahan ke log kya har koi jaadu janta hoga... kya sirf insan baste hain wahan ya doosre jeev bhi... aise kayee sawal hain...

lekin raj asmanjas mein hain,,, waise bhi pechhe hain kya usse rokne ke liye aur aisa toh na hain kee wo wapas nahin aa shakta hain... iss duniya mein na toh koi pariwar hain na koi rishtedar,,, ek anath ke liye toh zindagi aur bhi aage mushkil hogi... abhi tak khaane peen aur ek chhat ka intejam tha lekin aage in buniyadi jaroorate ke lie bhi usse khud pe hi nirbhar rahna hoga...

*****
NOTE:- agar drishye badle toh kisi symbol ke dwara oopar ke paragraph aur niche ke paragraph ko alag kar de isse samajhne mein aasani hoti hain bhai....

*****
ek barfo se ghira rajya... daakuo ka hamla jahir hain aaj ke zamane mein aisa nahin hota... jaroor yeh doosri duniya hain ya kahe kee magic land kee baate ho rahi hain... ladaka darne ke bajaye bhir gayee... jahir hain koi mamuli nahin hain... sidha chunauti sabhi ko de dee... lekin iss rajya ke sainik kahan gaye ek daakuo ke giroh ne hamla kiya aur wo log nadarad hain... waise jis jagah ke baare mein in rajya waasio ko maloom na hain toh phir in daakuo ko kaid kar ke unka thikana toh pata kar shakte hain...

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magic story ko reality se jor ke rakhna aasan nahin hota... abhi tak kahani wastawikta aur fantasy ke beech badhiya samanjashya dikhati aayee hain... aur aapne pichhe puchha tha kee spells ke baare mein... main kahoonga kee jitna sadharan shabd rakhe utna hi behtar hain... hame bhi relate karne mein aasani hogi...jaise paani kee power--- jaal prawah... akraman ke liye... defence ke liye... jal awrodh... waiseNaina jee ne badhiya udaharan diya hain...

jayda difficult naam hame yaad karne jaisa ho jayega... simple naam ko hum aasani se relate kar lenge... dhanyawaad....

Thank you brother

 

[Xabhi]

Update 2​

Raj wanha se apne kamre mai ane ke baad baas Mr. Max ke bare mai hi soch raha tha, aur uske hath wanhi invitation card moujud tha baas soch raha tha ki khole ya khole. Sach keh Raj bahut jyada shock tha kyun ki usko bahut kuch pata chala (jesse magic, dusri world, etc...) per ye baat to baas aam baat hai aage usse jo pata chalega wo to kabhi wo expect bhi nahi kiya hoga, aage usko uski jindegi ki sabse badi raaz ke bare mai pata chalega, ye baat to aage pata chalega mai baas flow flow mai likh gaya.​

bahut soch bichar ke baad Raj ne wo Invitation letter kholta hai, to uske front page pe bade size se school ka naam likha gaya tha aur thik naam ke upar ek angel bani huyi thy jiske hath upar thy aur uske hath ke upar ek flags tha, 4 colour thy uss flag mai ek deep red, ek deep blue, ek deep green and ek black (ye flag Trident school ke flag tha). Per asal mai in charo colour ke ander agar dhyaan se dekhe to uske ander bhi logo thy har ek colour ka ek logo jo ki Trident school ke 4 branch ko show karte hai.​

Raj usko ache se dekhta hai fir page palat deta hai, usme ek admi jo lagbhad 60-65 saal ka lag raha tha uska photo tha aur uske niche likha tha, JOHN DANIEL Principal of Trident school of magic. Raj unko ache se dekhne lagta hai, uss admi ke photo se bhi ye andaja nahi laga sakta ki wo kitne powerful honge kyun ki photo mai bhi unke face pe jo pride, arrogance, clam, etc... thy wo saaf dekha ja sakta hai. Raj unko ache se dekhne ke baad page palat deta hai. Usme pe ek letter likha gaya tha.​

Letter......​

Dear Mr. Raj​

We are pleased to inform you that you have a place at Trident School of Magic. Please find enclosed a list of all necessary books and equipment.​

Term begins on *********. We awaiting you. If you accept this invitation please sign on the mark of candidates.​

Yours Sincerely,​

Deputy Headmistress​

SUSSANNE DEL​

baas itna hi likha tha aur akhir mai Candidate ka naam likha tha aur uss naam ke upar kuch space choda gaya tha janha candidate ko sign karna tha, aur niche ek note bhi likha tha,​

Note : aagar aap agree hote ho magic school mai ane ke liye to hi sign kijiye ye apka invitation ke sath sath registration form bhi hai, agar nahi to kuch bhi mat kijiye isse jala (burn) dijiye. Aur jalane ke baad aap saab kuch bhul jayenge aapko jo bhi bataya hoga ya phir dikhaya gaya hoga magic ke bare mai wo sari baate.​

fir last page mai thoda bahut school ke bare mai bataya gaya hai, jesse ki.....​

School 800 saal pehle bana tha kitne founder hai, jinka hath tha ye school banane mai, abhi principal kitne no. Ke hai etc.....(ye baate agar aage jaruri huyi to bata dunga).​

Raj sara kuch padhta hai per abhi tak kuch decide nahi kar pata hai ki wo jaye ya na jaye, isiliye wo uth ke wapas uss lake ke taraf chal deta hai, kyun ki usko thodi shanti chahiye thy jisse ki wo kuch soch sake aur ek acha sa decision le sake.​

chaliye Raj ko sochne dete hai ham kahi aur chalte hai....​

Ek rajya jo pure safed hi dikh raha tha usme har din ki tarah aaj bhi shanti thy, per iss shanti ke bicho bich bhi kuch ghatna ghat ti thy to uss rajya ke raja aur uske sathi mil ke samadhan kar dete thy.​

Aare yaar mai rajya ka naam hi nahi likha, iss rajya ka naam hai Snow Country kyun ki pure saal baraf (snow) se Dhaka hua rehta hai. Isiliye uska naam Snow country rakh diya tha iska founder ne.​

Iss country ke side mai ek Ghana jungle tha jisme daku rehte thy unka thikana kanha hai ye koi bhi nahi janta hai kyun ki wo bich bich mai apna thikana badal lete thy jisse inka asli thikane ke bare mai raja aur mantri mandal kabhi pata bhi nahi laga paye.​

Wese iss rajya to bahut se market hai per ek main market bhi hai jo har din chahal pahal se bhara hota hai, aaj bhi tha,wanhi market mai ek ladki jo dikhne kafi khubsurat thy, white skin, choti patli si naak, red lip, kale baal, badi badi blue eye jo usko bahut jyada khubsurat aur cute bana rahi thy aur sath mai white dress, yese lag rahi thy ki koi pari niche dharti pe utar aayi ho. Wo aaj ghum rahi thy, wo abhi ek dukan mai jane hi wali thy ki aaj phir se dakuo ne hamla kar diya tha market mai. Aur dhire dhire market ko loot rahe thy. Har baat ki tarah iss baar bhi yanhi koyi 10-12 daku honge sabhi ke hath mai koyi na koyi hatiyaar tha, jesse ki bhale, talwar, etc....​

jaab sare daku wo dukan ko lutne aaye janha pe wo ladki thy to ek daku ki nazar uss ladki ke pad jati hai, to usne jake ek admi ke kaan mai kuch kaha, wo admi inn dakuo ka sardar tha. Usne bhi sunke uss ladki ko dekha aur fir uss admi ko kuch kaha, to wo admi apne sath 3 aur daku ko leke uss ladki ke taraf badhne lagta hai, aur sardar baki sabhi ko leke aage nikal gaya.​

Idhar wo ladki bhi samajh juki thy ki ye daku kis bare mai baat kar rahe hai aur aage kya hoga, uske liye wo bhi bilkul ready ho gayi thy.​

Jaab wo 4 daku iss ladki ke samne aagaye to....​

Daku 1 : ye ladki hamare sath chal, hamara sardar ka dil tujh pe aagaya hai sath chalegi to tu rani banke rahegi warna....​

ye kehte huye apna hath bhi badha raha tha wo daku uss ladki ko pakad ne ke liye. Per daku 1 uss ladki wo pakad pata usse pehle ek chikh charo aur gunj uthi.....​

aaaaaahhhhhhhhhh......​

ye chikh wanhi daku 1 ka tha kyun ki wo ladki ne iska hath hi kat diya tha. Aab uss ladki ke hath mai ek talwaar thy jo kafi had tak ek snow ki tarah dikh rahi thy, (iss talwar ke bare mai baad mai baat karenge). Per aab wo khun se sani huyi thy. ​

jaab baki 3 ye dekhte hai to wo aage badh jate hai apne sathi ka badla lene ke liye, per wo pahunch pate unka sar niche jamin pe pada hua tha.​

Aab baas daku 1 hi bacha tha unn charo mai se...wo ladki apni talwaar ko paas mai padi ek kapde se pochte huye uss daku 1 ke samne aake khadi ho jati hai.​

Ladki : tu soch raha hoga ki tu bach gaya.....per nahi.....bacha iss liye ki tu ek kaam karega mera uske baad tujhe mai mukti dila dungi.....​

daku 1 darte huye : kyyyyaaaaaa!!! Kaaaaam!!!!​

ladki : baas jake apne sardar ko bol de ek baar mai sabhi aajaye mere paas jyada time nahi hai ek hi baar mai hisab kitab kar denge.....​

Chal bhag yanha se abhi.....​

wo sardar aur uske sath baki 7 daku dusre aur gaye thy lootne ke liye isiliye ye kand ke bare mai unko kuch pata nahi hai.​

ladki ki baat sunke wo daku 1 apna kata hua hath leke bhag gaya sardar ke paas khabar dene ke liye.​

aage ek choti si ladhayi dekhenge uske baad wapas Raj ke paas chalenge ki Raj kya decision leta hai.​

Mujhe lagta hai yah ladki koi or nhi yha ki rajkumari hai... Dekhte hai Raj ne kya nirnay liya hai aage... Superb update bhai sandar jabarjast

 

[Xabhi]

Vaise spell ke mamle me Mai Naina ji Aalu bhai or devil Bhai tino se sahmat hu baki to aap hi deside krenge...

 

[andyking302]

Update 2​

Raj wanha se apne kamre mai ane ke baad baas Mr. Max ke bare mai hi soch raha tha, aur uske hath wanhi invitation card moujud tha baas soch raha tha ki khole ya khole. Sach keh Raj bahut jyada shock tha kyun ki usko bahut kuch pata chala (jesse magic, dusri world, etc...) per ye baat to baas aam baat hai aage usse jo pata chalega wo to kabhi wo expect bhi nahi kiya hoga, aage usko uski jindegi ki sabse badi raaz ke bare mai pata chalega, ye baat to aage pata chalega mai baas flow flow mai likh gaya.​

bahut soch bichar ke baad Raj ne wo Invitation letter kholta hai, to uske front page pe bade size se school ka naam likha gaya tha aur thik naam ke upar ek angel bani huyi thy jiske hath upar thy aur uske hath ke upar ek flags tha, 4 colour thy uss flag mai ek deep red, ek deep blue, ek deep green and ek black (ye flag Trident school ke flag tha). Per asal mai in charo colour ke ander agar dhyaan se dekhe to uske ander bhi logo thy har ek colour ka ek logo jo ki Trident school ke 4 branch ko show karte hai.​

Raj usko ache se dekhta hai fir page palat deta hai, usme ek admi jo lagbhad 60-65 saal ka lag raha tha uska photo tha aur uske niche likha tha, JOHN DANIEL Principal of Trident school of magic. Raj unko ache se dekhne lagta hai, uss admi ke photo se bhi ye andaja nahi laga sakta ki wo kitne powerful honge kyun ki photo mai bhi unke face pe jo pride, arrogance, clam, etc... thy wo saaf dekha ja sakta hai. Raj unko ache se dekhne ke baad page palat deta hai. Usme pe ek letter likha gaya tha.​

Letter......​

Dear Mr. Raj​

We are pleased to inform you that you have a place at Trident School of Magic. Please find enclosed a list of all necessary books and equipment.​

Term begins on *********. We awaiting you. If you accept this invitation please sign on the mark of candidates.​

Yours Sincerely,​

Deputy Headmistress​

SUSSANNE DEL​

baas itna hi likha tha aur akhir mai Candidate ka naam likha tha aur uss naam ke upar kuch space choda gaya tha janha candidate ko sign karna tha, aur niche ek note bhi likha tha,​

Note : aagar aap agree hote ho magic school mai ane ke liye to hi sign kijiye ye apka invitation ke sath sath registration form bhi hai, agar nahi to kuch bhi mat kijiye isse jala (burn) dijiye. Aur jalane ke baad aap saab kuch bhul jayenge aapko jo bhi bataya hoga ya phir dikhaya gaya hoga magic ke bare mai wo sari baate.​

fir last page mai thoda bahut school ke bare mai bataya gaya hai, jesse ki.....​

School 800 saal pehle bana tha kitne founder hai, jinka hath tha ye school banane mai, abhi principal kitne no. Ke hai etc.....(ye baate agar aage jaruri huyi to bata dunga).​

Raj sara kuch padhta hai per abhi tak kuch decide nahi kar pata hai ki wo jaye ya na jaye, isiliye wo uth ke wapas uss lake ke taraf chal deta hai, kyun ki usko thodi shanti chahiye thy jisse ki wo kuch soch sake aur ek acha sa decision le sake.​

chaliye Raj ko sochne dete hai ham kahi aur chalte hai....​

Ek rajya jo pure safed hi dikh raha tha usme har din ki tarah aaj bhi shanti thy, per iss shanti ke bicho bich bhi kuch ghatna ghat ti thy to uss rajya ke raja aur uske sathi mil ke samadhan kar dete thy.​

Aare yaar mai rajya ka naam hi nahi likha, iss rajya ka naam hai Snow Country kyun ki pure saal baraf (snow) se Dhaka hua rehta hai. Isiliye uska naam Snow country rakh diya tha iska founder ne.​

Iss country ke side mai ek Ghana jungle tha jisme daku rehte thy unka thikana kanha hai ye koi bhi nahi janta hai kyun ki wo bich bich mai apna thikana badal lete thy jisse inka asli thikane ke bare mai raja aur mantri mandal kabhi pata bhi nahi laga paye.​

Wese iss rajya to bahut se market hai per ek main market bhi hai jo har din chahal pahal se bhara hota hai, aaj bhi tha,wanhi market mai ek ladki jo dikhne kafi khubsurat thy, white skin, choti patli si naak, red lip, kale baal, badi badi blue eye jo usko bahut jyada khubsurat aur cute bana rahi thy aur sath mai white dress, yese lag rahi thy ki koi pari niche dharti pe utar aayi ho. Wo aaj ghum rahi thy, wo abhi ek dukan mai jane hi wali thy ki aaj phir se dakuo ne hamla kar diya tha market mai. Aur dhire dhire market ko loot rahe thy. Har baat ki tarah iss baar bhi yanhi koyi 10-12 daku honge sabhi ke hath mai koyi na koyi hatiyaar tha, jesse ki bhale, talwar, etc....​

jaab sare daku wo dukan ko lutne aaye janha pe wo ladki thy to ek daku ki nazar uss ladki ke pad jati hai, to usne jake ek admi ke kaan mai kuch kaha, wo admi inn dakuo ka sardar tha. Usne bhi sunke uss ladki ko dekha aur fir uss admi ko kuch kaha, to wo admi apne sath 3 aur daku ko leke uss ladki ke taraf badhne lagta hai, aur sardar baki sabhi ko leke aage nikal gaya.​

Idhar wo ladki bhi samajh juki thy ki ye daku kis bare mai baat kar rahe hai aur aage kya hoga, uske liye wo bhi bilkul ready ho gayi thy.​

Jaab wo 4 daku iss ladki ke samne aagaye to....​

Daku 1 : ye ladki hamare sath chal, hamara sardar ka dil tujh pe aagaya hai sath chalegi to tu rani banke rahegi warna....​

ye kehte huye apna hath bhi badha raha tha wo daku uss ladki ko pakad ne ke liye. Per daku 1 uss ladki wo pakad pata usse pehle ek chikh charo aur gunj uthi.....​

aaaaaahhhhhhhhhh......​

ye chikh wanhi daku 1 ka tha kyun ki wo ladki ne iska hath hi kat diya tha. Aab uss ladki ke hath mai ek talwaar thy jo kafi had tak ek snow ki tarah dikh rahi thy, (iss talwar ke bare mai baad mai baat karenge). Per aab wo khun se sani huyi thy. ​

jaab baki 3 ye dekhte hai to wo aage badh jate hai apne sathi ka badla lene ke liye, per wo pahunch pate unka sar niche jamin pe pada hua tha.​

Aab baas daku 1 hi bacha tha unn charo mai se...wo ladki apni talwaar ko paas mai padi ek kapde se pochte huye uss daku 1 ke samne aake khadi ho jati hai.​

Ladki : tu soch raha hoga ki tu bach gaya.....per nahi.....bacha iss liye ki tu ek kaam karega mera uske baad tujhe mai mukti dila dungi.....​

daku 1 darte huye : kyyyyaaaaaa!!! Kaaaaam!!!!​

ladki : baas jake apne sardar ko bol de ek baar mai sabhi aajaye mere paas jyada time nahi hai ek hi baar mai hisab kitab kar denge.....​

Chal bhag yanha se abhi.....​

wo sardar aur uske sath baki 7 daku dusre aur gaye thy lootne ke liye isiliye ye kand ke bare mai unko kuch pata nahi hai.​

ladki ki baat sunke wo daku 1 apna kata hua hath leke bhag gaya sardar ke paas khabar dene ke liye.​

aage ek choti si ladhayi dekhenge uske baad wapas Raj ke paas chalenge ki Raj kya decision leta hai.​

शानदार bhai

 

[SHADOWKILLER]

Mujhe lagta hai yah ladki koi or nhi yha ki rajkumari hai... Dekhte hai Raj ne kya nirnay liya hai aage... Superb update bhai sandar jabarjast

Vaise spell ke mamle me Mai Naina ji Aalu bhai or devil Bhai tino se sahmat hu baki to aap hi deside krenge...

Thank you brother aur aap sahi hai brother wo ladki wanha ki princess hi hai.​