Avinashraj
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Actually mai length ke hisaab se updates ko divide karti hun.. ho sakta hain yeh mere galati hain, aur shayad isiliye aap ko lag raha hain ki update mei koi "incident" nehi hain..... Ok, if that so, then I will think about your advice....itni description ke sath likhna hota hai to update bada diya karo..................
kam se kam 1 scene to complete ho
agle update ka intzar
Maine kahe hain ki shayad aise Probability ho sakti hain.... lekin koi surety nehi diye hain.....Ek to manali aur rahul khud glti kre fir bdla bhi le
Wah kya logic di hai aap madam ji![]()
Inke story me bhi madhuri sbse sex krti hai as like a slut to wo manali ko to support karengi hi
Ittajar agle update ka
Ab update kab aayega ye bata de koi bhai log ...
Wating
Waiting for update
Story kam likhtahi, bkwas bahut krta hi writer
Bhai ho gaya na update aaye kitne din ho gayen writer sahiba again gayab..
Lekhika mahodaya ab aap ye sb be fizul ki bate bnd kriye,
Hm log jo bhi logic de rhe hai usme apko manali aur rahul.khi glt nhi lg rhe hai aur story apko apne hisab se hi likhna hai to sbse achha hai ap itne time me update likh lijiye.
Aur aap mane ya na mane pr sb glti manali ki hai bina kisi ladki ke marji ke koi uske sath sex nhi kr skta aur na hi rahul aisa hai ki manali ko hypnotize kr ske,ye aap sirf manali ko bachane ke liye logic de rhi hai
Kitna sab bakchodi karne lage hain bhai log I request all of u kripa karke writer sahiba ko story complete karne ko bole ek to waise heen unka update week mein aata hai aur aap sabhi bhi yaar sabhi log aaram se padhiye ye real life thode heen hain just fantasy hain...real mein kabhi aisa hote dekha hain kya aap sabne isko ek story bane rehne dijiye na...