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UPDATE 50 - I Became "Chowkidaar"!!!!

Mujhe kuch samajh mein nehi aa raha tha. Pramod kaka bhi kahan hain, pata nehi chal raha tha. Abhi tak maine unhe dekha bhi nehi tha. Sirf Rahul ka ek jhalak dekha tha, jab wo jaldi se (surreptitiously) mere room se nikal kar apne room mein gaya; pad wo jitna bhi jaldi hi 'escape' karne ke kosish kyun naa kare lekin aankhir kar wo mere nazro ko dhoka nehi de paya tha, yeh cheez shayad usse (Rahul) bhi nehi paata tha, shayad kyun keh raha hun, usse bilkul bhi yeh pata nehi tha ki maine uska 'chori' pakad liya tha.

Anyway, kya Pramod Kaka kahi (anywhere) gaye hain? Aur phir issi pal ka phaida (advantage) Rahul ne Manali par uthaya toh nehi hain!! Ohhh, shit!!!!

Main yeh sab soch hi raha tha ki tabhi Rahul apne room se bahar aa kar dining hall mein mujhe dekha toh wo bhi thoda chonkh utha! Wo mere pass aaya, mujhse mila aur naadan aur anjaan ban kar (ban ne ke kosish kar) dhong karte hue, sath hi mein haklate hue kahan, "arreyy.... aajjit, tu kab lauta? tu toh kal lautne wala tha na?"

Maine jawab diya, "haa, pad kaam bohut jaldi khatam hua, aur flight bhi mil gaya isliye chala aaya. abhi lauta hu.."

Maine apne ghar aane ke wahi excuse diya jo Manali ko kuch pal pahele kahan tha. Waise I am not suppose to tell the reason of coming back early to my own house. But still yeh mere courtesy ya etiquette tha, jo main usse aise politely jawab de raha tha aur usse itne dino se tolerate bhi kar raha tha.

Mujhe dekh kar Rahul ke ander ka sthiti (situation) tab 'aasman se gida ho aur pair (tree) pe jaa ke aatka ho' wali jaisa ho gaya tha. Main uske duvidha (dilemma) aur nervousness ka phaida utha kar uske nervousness ko aor badaane ke liye suscpiciously poocha, "kyun tu khus nehi hain, main jaldi aaya hu yeh dekh kar??"

Rahul thoda hichkichate hue jawab diya, "nehi, nehi bro, aise koi baat nehi hain. I am very happy to see you so early. Aab bohut gappe marenge, Mumbai ke bade mein. Tu pahele fresh ho jaa."

Maine socha usse aab ke liye chhor du. Pahele video recording mein chhan-bin (investigate) karlu; kya hua hain in kuch minutes ya ghante mein, jiss ke kaaran Rahul aur Manali dono hi bohut ajeeb tarah se pesh (behave) aa rahe hain.

Yeh sab toh main find out karlunga baad mein pad tab mere dimaag mein jo savaal phirse paida hua voh maine Rahul ko pooch daala, "by the way, where is Pramod Kaka?"

Rahul: Wo abhi mere kuch davaayi (medicines) lene baahar (went outside) gaye hain. Abhi laut aayega.

Mera shaq (doubt) sahi nikal raha tha. Mujhe Rahul par bohut gussa aa raha tha. Wo mere biwi ko chhor ne ka naam hi nehi le raha tha, chahein aandhee (storm) aaye yaa tufaan. Maine aor ek lafz bhi naa bol kar seedha uske samne se apne room mein chala gaya. Mujhe aab kuch phadak nehi padta Rahul mere aise odd behavior ko lekar kaisa sochega, ya kiss tarah se dekhega.

Mera bass chalta toh abhi ke abhi Rahul ko dhakka maar ke apne ghar aur zindegi dono se nikaal deta. Pad mere sharafat aur insaaniyat mujhe yeh kaam karne se rok raha tha. Main apne sharafat aur insaniyat ke fando (knot) se bandha hua tha. Shayad mera yehi gun/ gunavatta/ qualities (sharafat aur insaaniyat) aab mera weakness ban chuka tha.

Anyway, main room mein jaa ke bag rakkha, aur change karne laga kapde. Ussi waqt mere boss ka call aaya. Unhone kahan ki kal se (from Tuesday) mera night shift suru hoga. So, boss ne mujhe kal raat ke 10 baje (At 10 PM) office attend karne ko kahan!!

Aab boss se kaun argument karta. Aur karke bhi koi phaida nehi hota, boss ne jo keh diya so keh diya. Mere liye wo apne decision toh nehi change karta kabhi. Maine socha ki accha hi hua. Saara din Rahul mere samne hi rahega, aur raat ko mere office jaane ke baad Pramod Kaka rahega.

Mai reheta hun Lake Town mei, aur mera office hai Salt Lake Sector V (five) mei.. Agar 10 baje se mera shift suru hoga toh mujhe apne car lekar ghar se lagbhag 9:30 (PM) baje nikal na hoga. Raat ko traffic bhi utna nehi rahega, aur agar mai VIP Road se bypass (EM Bypass Road / Eastern Metropolitan Bypass) hokar niklunga toh shayad 15 mins ke ander hi ander office pohunch jaunga.. Iska matlab mai subha se raat ke 9:30 (PM) baje tak ghar par hi rahunga. So, Kaka ko utne raat mei (after 9:30 PM) Rahul kisi aor jagah pe kisi aor bahane jane ko nehi bol sakta tha. That's why, din mein main toh raat mein Kaka directly ya indirectly Rahul ke upar 'chowkidaari' toh kar hi lega.

Boss ka yeh order mere liye "blessing in disguise" ki tarah hi tha. Main fresh hua, ki tabhi Pramod Kaka Rahul ka kuch medicines kharid kar finally ghar lauta. Main Pramod Kaka se mila. Pramod Kaka mujhe dekh kar bohut hi khus hua, aur main bhi. Bohut dino baad hum mile the. Kaka mujh ko bhi apna ek aur bhatija hi samajhta tha.

Humne bohut baate kare uss raat ko. Halaki Manali se utna baat nehi ho rehi the. Shayad ek invisible deewar (wall) hum dono ke beech uth chuka tha. Humare rishtey mein ek daraar sa padhne lag gaya tha uss kaamine Rahul ke wajah se. Pad main Rahul ka sikayat (complain) Pramod Kaka se kar nehi sakta tha. Kyunki iss se mera hi reputation Kaka ke samne kharab hota. Main hi tab naamard ghosit (declared) ho jaata. Isliye shayad Rahul confident tha ki main chhaa kar bhi Rahul aur Manali ke bade mein kuch baata nehi paunga Kaka ko. Nehi toh mujhe yeh bhi kehna hoga ki Rahul mere hi samne, mere hi raazamandi se mere biwi ko choda tha (check "UPDATE 24 : Can Ajit alone satisfy Manali? Or is there any TWIST?"). Uss accidental threesome ke bade mein bhi baatana hoga jo mere aur mere mardangi ke liye bohut sharmindegi ka ek dhabba tha.

Anyway, dinner table pe Pramod Kaka aur Rahul ne Mumbai trip ke bade mein poocha toh maine uske bade mein baat-chit karna chalu kiya. Aur phir maine office mein laga hua mere naye (new) shift, night shift ke bade mein sab ko aagah kiya (jaankari diya).

Maine Pramod Kaka ko kahan, ki aap ka yahan aane se mujhe madat hi hua hain. Kyunki Mumbai jane se pahele mujhe Rahul ke liye bohut chinta ho raha tha.. Aap aa gaye hain toh aab main khusi se office kar paunga, especially night shift kar paunga. Kyunki Manali ke lawa ghar mein ek aor rahega Rahul ka sahaara ban kar. Nehi toh "emergency situation" mein Manali ke liye sabkuch akele samhalna thoda tough ho jaata. Aab main nischint hokar night shift kar sakunga. Isliye main boss ke kehne par raazi ho gaya kal se night shift karne ko.

Darasal mera nischint hone ka kaaran kuch aur hi tha..... Mere baaton ka sahi aur asli matlab kuch aur tha jo un teeno mein se kisi ko bhi shayad samajh mein nehi aaya hoga. Main Rahul ko kaise bhi karke Manali se aab dur (far) rakhna chahta tha. Kyunki jitna Rahul Manali ke kaarib (nazdik / near/ close) aa raha tha utna Manali mujhse dur (far away) jane lag gayi the. Aab yeh mere bardaasht (tolerance) ke pade yani bahaar jaa raha tha.

Night shift karun ya day shift, mujhe at least aatt ghante (8 / Eight hours) office par kaam ke silsiley mei rahena padta tha. Voh aatt ghante (8 hours) Rahul ke liye aatt (8/ Eight) janmo ke barabar tha. Rahul chahta toh uss aatt ghante ke bhitar mere Manali ke sath kahi baar (multiple times) sharirik sambandh (physical relation/ closeness) bana sakta tha, and then mere mojudgi mei aaram karke (rest lekar) khud ko phirse "agle din (next day)" ke liye taiyyar rakh sakta tha; I mean agle din (next day) jab mai phirse office jaata, tab Rahul bhi mere ghar ko khud ka "Kaam (Lust) Office" bana kar uss mei apna "kamasutra" chala sakta tha..


Mai 8 ghante apne 'khoon paseena' (blood and sweat) sab ek karke office mei kaam (work) karta aur Rahul mere ghar mei apna 'rass - paseena' (cum and sweat) ek karke mere biwi ke upar apna 'kaam' karta.. Phir jab mai thakk kar bohut tired hokar ghar laut ta tab Rahul bhi thakk kar apne room mei aaram (rest) kar leta.

Uska (Rahul ka) bhi tab meri tarah 8 ghante hi duty reheta aur baaki samay wo rest karta. Phadak sirf yehi reheta ki mai apne office mei kaam karta aur wo mere ghar pe mere hi biwi ke kaam tamam karta. Iss se uske bimaar sharir pe thoda mehnat aur kasrat bhi jaroor padta, lekin mere ghar mei rehete (in my presence) Rahul rest lekar uss mehnat ko "adjust" ya "nullify" kar deta. Iss kaaran uska daily health situation ka balance bhi acche se maintained hota reheta..

Yeh saare posibilites tha.. Yeh sab Rahul kar sakta tha during my night shift, pad beech mei Pramod Kaka ka factor aa gaya.... Rahul ko yeh sab karne se rokne ka bandovasht (arrangement) already aab ho chuka tha Pramod Kaka ke aane se..

Anyways, Pramod Kaka ne Rahul ki halat ke bade mein apna chinta vyakt kiya. Pramod Kaka ke aankh mein aansu aa gaye the. Aur aayega bhi kyun nehi, wo Rahul ko apne bete ke tarah bachpan se dekh-val karke bada kiya, lekin unki saari mehnat cancer ne maano vifaal (fail) kar diya tha. That time I was really feel sorry for Pramod Kaka. But kismaat ke aage kiska jorr chalta hain!

Rahul Pramod Kaka ko jhoota dilaasa dete hue kahan, "don't worry, kaka.... mujhe kuch nehi hoga.. dekho main ekdam fit hun.... see...."

Pramod Kaka bhi Rahul ke baaton ko positively liya taaki Rahul ka hoshla aise hi bada rahe. Pad main aor bhi kuch kahan, jo shayad Rahul ka hoshla doosre taraf se badata nehi balki ghata (decrease) sakta tha. Uske kaamukta ko rokne ke liye mujhe yeh karna hi pada. Nehi toh uske havass ke railgaari (train) mere zindegi se takra kar mujhe hi 'pattri' (track) se utaar phenkh sakta tha.

Maine Rahul ko ek indirect message ya chetavni (warning) diya taaki wo mere biwi ke pass aane ke jurrat ya kosish bhi aor naa kare. Usse aab samajhna chahiye ki uska 'honeymoon trip' aab khatam ho chuka hain. Usne jo chaha uss se jyada usse mila, aab wo jyada kuch expect naa hi kare toh accha hain. Aab wo ek sharif, bechara, cancer ki maariz ke tarah hi apne aakhri kuch bache hue din guzaare.

Isliye maine Rahul ko (aur Manali ko bhi, kyunki Manali bhi wahan present the) sunate hue Pramod Kaka se kahan, "don't worry, Pramod Kaka. Hum dono mil kar Rahul ka dhiyan rakhenge. Din mein main chowkidari karunga aur raat mein mere office jane ke baad aap.. Ha ha.... Thik hain naa??"

Maine jaan buz kar Manali ki naam nehi liya, taaki Rahul samajh sake ki Manali sirf aur sirf mere hain, aur Manali pe uska koi haq nehi banta, aur wo aisa karne (haq jatane ke) ke kosish bhi naa kare.. Kyunki din mein agar main raheta (also Pramod Kaka bhi rehete) toh mere absence mein raat mei Pramod Kaka rahenge ghar par. Isliye mujhe aab koi fikar ya chinta nehi tha.

By the way, Pramod Kaka mere baaton ka jawab dete hue kahan, "haa.. haa.. bilkul sahi kahan tumne Ajit.... Aab se hum dono mil kar Rahul ka khayal rakhenge, usko kuch bhi hone nehi denge...."

Main hass (smile) kar kahan, "yeh hui naa baat, Kaka....."

Uske baad aise hi idhar udhar ke kuch baate hua humare beech (mere aur Pramod Kaka ke beech). Humare conversations ka part Rahul bhi tha, aur beech beech mei Manali bhi kitchen se aake yaa apne kaam chhor ke ya nipta ke humare (I, Pramod Kaka and Rahul) conversations mei take part leke join kar rehi the..

1-A-Picture-of-AJit Mr. AJit Roy
1-B-Picture-of-ManaliMaNaLi Basu🔥🔥
1-C-Picture-of-So-Called-Muscular-Rahul"So Called" Muscular Boy RaHuL


1-D-Picture-of-Kaka-Pramod-Kaka-naam-toh-suna-hi-hoga-ha-ha-emojiss& Finally, KaKa, Pramod Kaka, naam toh suna hi hoga..

Dinner ke baad hum apne apne room mein chale gaye. Aab ghar mein teen (3) nehi chaar (4) log the. Main aur Manali humare room mein, aur Rahul and Pramod Kaka Rahul ke yani doosre room mein chale gaye sone.

Room mein jaa kar main Manali se thodi normal baate karne ke kosish kiya. Uska gussa thanda par chuki the tab. Main bhi uss maahol ko bohut tactically handle kar raha tha. Main tab Manali se koi suspicious question ya baatein nehi kiya. Aur karne ko tha bhi nehi kyunki main already sabkuch recording ke through dekh kar aaya tha; seewaye (except) Pramod Kaka ke pharmacy mein jaa kar Rahul ke davaayi le aane ke beech ka samay mein kya kya hua tha voh chhor kar.....

Apne ander ke saare doubts ko maine tabhi ke liye apne ander hi rakkha. Kyunki mere pass toh video recordings hain jisse main baad mein bhi play karke sabkuch already jaan hi jaunga, toh usko yeh sab betuki savaal karke abhi phirse unnecessary gussa ya awkwardness dene ke koi iccha tab mere ander bilkul bhi nehi tha..

Main bohut thande dimaag se Manali ke sath off the topic idhar udhar ke baate karke maahol ko easy bana raha tha. Halaki main Manali ke upar bhi bohut gussa tha kyunki iss baar usne bhi deliberately roleplay mein part lekar involve hue the Rahul ke sath, jaanbuz kar. Pad mere ander ke dabe hue (suppress) uss gusse ko tab main baahar aane nehi diya. Kyunki abhi waqt gussa dekha kar Manali ko apne se aor dur dhakel dene ko nehi tha, balki pyaar se baat karke Manali ko apne karib laa te hue damage control karne ka tha, jo damage humare rishtey mein in kuch dino ke ander hua tha.....

Rassi agar jyada jor se baandhoge toh voh rassi ek samay tut jaata hain. Isliye kisi ko baandh kar rakhne ke liye rassi ko aaraam se baandh na padta hain, naa ki kass kar. You (readers) know what I mean to say.....

Mere calm aur meethi baaton se prabhavit (impressed) hoke Manali bhi aab dheere dheere mere sath baaton mein engage ho rehi the. Baat karte karte hum dono so gaye. Aaj sirf baat hi sahi (sex naa sahi)...... Kyunki main dheere dheere apna kadam rakhna chahta tha apne biwi ko phirse haasil karke apna banane ke mukaam/ maksat/ iraade (intention) pe. Isliye main uss raat chhaa (want) kar bhi apne biwi se sharirik sambandh mein lipt nehi hua, halaki mann toh bohut kar raha tha karne ko.
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AJit and Manali were sleeping at their Bedroom
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Agla din yani Tuesday aaya. Main poora din ghar mein hi raha, "chowkidari" ke kaam par; apne biwi ki satitva / modesty ka chowkidaari kar raha tha main. Halaki iss kaam mein Pramod Kaka bhi anjaane mein mera sanghat de raha tha.

Rahul ka chehra dekhne laayak tha. Mujhe ander hi ander bohut maza aa raha tha Rahul ko aise tadap te hue dekh kar, pad darr bhi tha yeh soch kar ki shayad Rahul ka yehi tadapna kahi Rahul ko aor jyada daring and desperate kadam uthane se ya karne se majboor naa kar dea!! Kyunki shayad Rahul aab ander hi ander se Rakshas (devil) ban chuka tha.. Iss rakshas ko agar kahi se bhi thode time ke liye khulla chhoot mila toh wo mere biwi par tut padega, naa hi kuch sunega aur naa hi kuch dekhega. Tab wo toh phir aise mauke ka intezar mein hi dhoondta phirega.
3-Rahul-in-a-beast-mood-obviously-with-Manali
RaHuL in a Beast mode; obviously with MaNaLi.....

Dopaher ko (at noon) lunch karne ke baad Rahul aur Pramod Kaka apne room mein jaa kar baatein karne lage. Manali ghar ka kaam niptane lagi aur main apne room mein jaa kar so gaya, aur phir ekdam sham ko utha. Sona pada (took nap) kyunki mera uss din night duty jo tha.

Dekhte dekhte raat ho gaya, mera office jane ka time aa gaya. Night shift tha isliye office se hi car bheja tha. Boss ne mujhe personally call karke kahan tha ki mujhe khud apne gari ka petrol kharach karke office aane ke jaroorat nehi hain.. Boss ke mutabik yeh office ka responsibility ke under aata hain, kyunki office ne hi mujhe night shift karne ko kahan hain. So, it's their duty to accommodate transportation to their colleagues. Isliye mera khud ka car rehete bhi mujhe office ke bheje hue gaari se jana hoga.

Manali ne mere liye jaldi se table par dinner lagwa diye the. Dinner maine jaldi kar liya tha, voh bhi akele. Pramod uncle, Rahul aur Manali thode baad mein dinner karta, apne usual time pe, jaise everyday karte hain. Mujhe office ke liye nikalna tha isliye main akele jaldi dinner karli. Thanks to Manali jisne mere liye jald se jald khana paka kar diye. Patni hone ka saare farz usse baakhubi paata the aur nibhana bhi aate the. Pad pati hone par bhi main kuch kuch cheezo mein apna farz shayad aada nehi kar paya tha, jiske wajah se hi Rahul Manali ke zindegi mei ek "vaajud" (existence) mein aaya.

Anyway, 9:15 (PM) ko main ghar se nikla. Office ka pool car Apartment ke samne hi khada tha. Main gari mein baitha aur office ke liye nikal gaya.

10 (PM) se 6 (AM) office mein night shift tha mera. Matlab raat 10 baje se subha 6 baje tak, 8 ghante ka shift. Waise toh main general shift mein hi kaam karta tha, matlab approx subha 11 se sham 7 baje tak. Pad general shift mein time fixed nehi raheta tha, time duration upar neeche karta tha. Lekin special shift yani Morning, Evening, or Night shift mein time fixed tha. 8 ghante matlab 8 ghante hi, naa thoda jyada naa thoda kam.

Wednesday Morning:

Office khatam hua. Subha 7 baje ke ander main apne apartment mein pohunch gaya by my office pool car. Subha ka samay tha. Aadhe (half) apartment ke log shayad tab tak yaa toh soye the yaa apne respective ghar se nikle bhi nehi the.

Main chalaki karke mere khud ke car ka chaabi (key of my car) apne sath le gaya tha. Kyunki mera plan tha ki office laut te waqt main pahele apartment ke ground floor ke garage mein apne gari mein baith kar video recording ka "uss part" ko dekhunga, jiss part ko mai miss kar gaya tha, Monday Evening/Night ka. Jab mai hotel mei naha dho kar ghar lautne ke liye ready ho raha tha, phir hotel se check-out kiya, then traffic jam ke wajah se ghar aate aate 8:30 (PM) baj gaye. Uss waqt ghar mei Pramod Kaka nehi the. Rahul ne usse apne davai lene baahar bheja tha.

Mujhe pahele voh saare scenes dekhna tha jahan pe Pramod Kaka ke absence mein wo dono kya kiya hain, kuch kiya bhi hain yaa nehi; yeh sab janne ke liye. Jab Pramod Kaka Rahul ke davaayi lene baahar gaya tha, tab wo dono ghar mein akele the. Aur main jab aaya tab maine Rahul ko suspiciouly tarike se mere hi room se baahar jaate hue dekha tha. Toh naturally mere zehen / dimaag mein doubt toh paida hua hi tha.

Ussi doubt ko mitane ke liye main recording ko play karke dekhna chahta tha. Dekhna chahta tha ki jab main hotel se nikal ne ke liye taiyyar ho raha tha aur Pramod Kaka baahar gaye the tab ussi waqt kya aisa kuch hua tha jiske liye main 'har baar' recording ko play karke dekhta hun????????

Office ke pool car mujhe apartment ke samne drop kar diya. Main ground floor ke garage mein gaya. Wahan apartment ke saare owners ke car rehta hain. Subha ka 7 baja tha. Uss samay koi bhi gari lekar baahar nehi jaata. Agar apartment se uss waqt koi nikalta bhi hain toh wo jyada tar jogging karne ke liye hi sirf nikalta hain. Aur jogging toh Bill Gates bhi gari (car) mein baith kar nehi karte hain.🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

Main apartment ke ground floor ke parking area mein gaya. Wahan gari toh bohut tha, two wheelers (Cycles and Bikes), maximum four wheelers, pad aadmi tab ek bhi nehi tha wahan, sewaye mere (except me).

Main apne pocket se chaabi (car key) nikala aur gari ko unlock karke uske back seat mein ghuss gaya. Office ke bag mein mera lapi (laptop) toh tha hi, usse khol kar spy cams se connect kiya. Phir kya; show suru............

Laptop ko ghar ke cams se connect karke parso sham (Monday Evening/Night) ka 'adventure' dekhne laga, agar koi 'adventure' Rahul aur Manali ke beech hua toh....................
 

Sexy launda

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Congratulations for 50 updates
 

sharaabi

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Bahut behtreen update aap Ka deteling is Baar mujeh bahut acha laga wese we ke samay Jada deteling acha Nahi lagta nice update and congrats for half century
 

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itni description ke sath likhna hota hai to update bada diya karo..................

kam se kam 1 scene to complete ho

agle update ka intzar
 

Manali Bose

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itni description ke sath likhna hota hai to update bada diya karo..................

kam se kam 1 scene to complete ho

agle update ka intzar
Actually mai length ke hisaab se updates ko divide karti hun.. ho sakta hain yeh mere galati hain, aur shayad isiliye aap ko lag raha hain ki update mei koi "incident" nehi hain..... Ok, if that so, then I will think about your advice....😊😇🙂
 

Manali Bose

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Ek to manali aur rahul khud glti kre fir bdla bhi le
Wah kya logic di hai aap madam ji:rolleyes::rolleyes::rolleyes:
Maine kahe hain ki shayad aise Probability ho sakti hain.... lekin koi surety nehi diye hain.....

Inke story me bhi madhuri sbse sex krti hai as like a slut to wo manali ko to support karengi hi

Maine unke story abhi tak padhi nehi hain.... but anyway....
 

Manali Bose

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Ittajar agle update ka
Ab update kab aayega ye bata de koi bhai log ...
Waiting for update
Story kam likhtahi, bkwas bahut krta hi writer
Bhai ho gaya na update aaye kitne din ho gayen writer sahiba again gayab..
Lekhika mahodaya ab aap ye sb be fizul ki bate bnd kriye,
Hm log jo bhi logic de rhe hai usme apko manali aur rahul.khi glt nhi lg rhe hai aur story apko apne hisab se hi likhna hai to sbse achha hai ap itne time me update likh lijiye.
Aur aap mane ya na mane pr sb glti manali ki hai bina kisi ladki ke marji ke koi uske sath sex nhi kr skta aur na hi rahul aisa hai ki manali ko hypnotize kr ske,ye aap sirf manali ko bachane ke liye logic de rhi hai
Kitna sab bakchodi karne lage hain bhai log I request all of u kripa karke writer sahiba ko story complete karne ko bole ek to waise heen unka update week mein aata hai aur aap sabhi bhi yaar sabhi log aaram se padhiye ye real life thode heen hain just fantasy hain...real mein kabhi aisa hote dekha hain kya aap sabne isko ek story bane rehne dijiye na...

Pahele baat mera iss thread mei reply dena ya naa dene se Update aane ke time par koi effect nehi padti.. toh agar aap sochte hain ki saare readers ko reply dete hue ya unke sath debate karte hue mera time waste ho rehi hain, aur isiliye update deri se aati hain, toh yeh sarasar galat soch hain aap ki..

Mai readers ke comments ka reply deti hun readers ko iss story ke sath aor engagement badane ke liye hi.. Yeh story mai kis ke liye likh rehi hun?? Aap logo ke liye hi naa...... warna toh iss story ka starting, interval, climax, anti-climax, and ending sab mujhe pata hain.... so, iss story ko iss forum mei post karke mujhe kuch extra toh nehi mil rehi hain.. yeh story mere dil ke bohuti kaarib hain isiliye hi mai iss story ko sabse share karna chahti hun.. That's all.... Even iss story ko publish karne ke liye hi maine xforum mei apne account kholi the.. kyunki doosre websites mei bohut saare nakhre the, bohut saare rules and regulations the story submission ke dauraan.... doosre web site mei ek part/update post karke kam se kam 20 din wait karne padti the, ki kab website ke editor review kare then story publish ho paaye.. kahi kahi baar toh mail karke mujhe hi authority se publications ke date maangni ya janni padti the.. whereas xforum is very smooth and flexible website in terms of posting stories..

Yeh story complete ho jaane ke baad shayad mai xforum bhi chhor dungi.... Anyway, baat yeh hain ki kisi ek reader ne kaha ki mai logo ko reply dene mei hi apna time waste karti hun.. story kam likhti hun aur "bakwas" jyada karti hun.... yeh baat mujhe obviously acche nehi lagi bilkul bhi.... isliye mai yeh cheez clarify kar dena chahti the....

Mujhe yeh ehsaas hue ki mere readers ko sabse jyada jo cheez matter karti hain voh hain jald se jald unhe updates milna.. isliye mai story ke presentations, looks mei aab jyada dhiyan nehi dungi.... dhiyan dungi toh sirf update ke frequency mei.... kyunki story mei sabse important cheez hain story itself.....

That's why maine latest updates mei itni colors ya font style ka istemal nehi kiye.. simple rakkha, because aakhir kar logo ko story se matlab hain, story ke saajavat (design) se nehi.....

aane wale updates mei mai emojis, different different colors ya Gif ka istemal shayad nehi karungi, agar karne pade toh jyada nehi karungi.. Photos bhi bohut kam dalungi.... kosish karungi ki jald se jald story ko khatam kar pau..

Thank You.....🙏..✍
 
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