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[Manali Bose]

abhi tak writer apne marji se hi likh raha hai ..kisike kehne se nahi .aur jab unka update ready hota hai to de dete hai ,,pichhali baar ke 3 update bahut jaldi diye hai ...

Exactly........ yehi mai kehne ke kosish kar rehi the........

 

[Manali Bose]

update ka intejaar hai ...kab aayega ...saare comments ka jawaab poora de diya ab update ki baari hai ..

Sahi baat hain bhai main bhi yahin bol raha huun aap jawab na do chalega but update to de do...

Isiliye sabse jyada focus mai updates mei hi karti hun.. don't worry.... yaha iss thread mei tark-bitark (debate) chalti hi rahegi.. lekin mere liye sabse jyada important hain story ko likhne ke andaaz..... that's why mai story ke looks, coloring the sentences, changing the font, design, using the emojiss and Gif, yeh sab kam kar diye hain, ya keh sakte hain karne bandh kar diye hain.... aab se sirf story aayegi, in a very simple way and in a very ordinary design.... Xforum itne saare options dete hain like color font, style, word size, emojiss, can applying Gifs, can upload photos; so maine soche the ki kyun naa in sab ka acche se istemal kiya jaaye during writing and posting the Update..... baaki sab websites mei itne saare features and subidha nehi provide kiye jaate ek writer ko..

But abhi se simplicity will be and should be the better way to post upcoming updates.... Ok..

 

[KEKIUS MAXIMUS]

writer ji ...aapne jo XFORUM ke baare me kaha wo bilkul sach hai me writer nahi par jaisi yaha theme hai waisi kahi bhi nahi % ..

aap apne style me likhengi to padhne me aur maja aayega ..

jaise aap har cheej ki photo daalkar samajhate ho .chahe wo saban ho ya scrub ya darwaja ..

aap kisi ek reader ke tokne se apna style change mat kijiye ..

aap jis tarah font colour ,style use karte ho waisa kisi bhi story me nahi dekha ..

 

[KEKIUS MAXIMUS]

about story .......me na apne aap ko ajit ya manali ya rahul ki jagah rakhta hu ...

bas story me jo pasand aaye yaa galat lage wo yaha kehta hu ...

ye ek fantasy story hai ..me bhale manali ya kisi bhi character ko bura kahu par story ko pasand karta hu ye maayne rakhta hai ..

 

[KEKIUS MAXIMUS]

aap agar is forum pe saari kahaniya padhte ho to pata chal jayega ki reader kitna pressure daalte hai ki aisa hona chahiye ya aisa nahi ..incest me thoda adult aa jaaye to story na padhne ki baat karte hai ya chhod dene ki ..

par is story par jo reader hai wo aisi demand nahi rakhte hai bas apni raay dete hai ki manali galat hai ya rahul yaa ajit ( aap saare comment dekh chuki hai ) ..kahani ke character ko achcha ya bura kehna galat nahi hai ...

galat tab hoga jab reader kahe ( only example ) ki manali ko kaka se bhi chudwao yaa bahut saare dosto se ..par koi bhi aisi demand nahi rakh raha bas apne dil me jo hai wahi batata hai ki ye( manali ) mujhe galat lagta hai aur ye( ajit ) sahi ..

 

[KEKIUS MAXIMUS]

har ek ki kahani ko lekar apni raay hoti hai ...aap sabki nahi sun sakti ..bas apne dil me jo hai wahi likho ....character ko achcha yaa bura kehna sabka adhikar hai ..last comment dekho usme ajit ko galat aur manali ko sahi kaha hai kyunki aadme affair kare to sahi aur aurat kare to galat .

 

[Manali Bose]

writer ji ...aapne jo XFORUM ke baare me kaha wo bilkul sach hai me writer nahi par jaisi yaha theme hai waisi kahi bhi nahi % ..

aap apne style me likhengi to padhne me aur maja aayega ..

jaise aap har cheej ki photo daalkar samajhate ho .chahe wo saban ho ya scrub ya darwaja ..

aap kisi ek reader ke tokne se apna style change mat kijiye ..

aap jis tarah font colour ,style use karte ho waisa kisi bhi story me nahi dekha ..

Thanks for the Lovely compliment on me.....

about story .......me na apne aap ko ajit ya manali ya rahul ki jagah rakhta hu ...

bas story me jo pasand aaye yaa galat lage wo yaha kehta hu ...

ye ek fantasy story hai ..me bhale manali ya kisi bhi character ko bura kahu par story ko pasand karta hu ye maayne rakhta hai ..

I know that Mr. Leon......

 

[Manali Bose]

aap agar is forum pe saari kahaniya padhte ho to pata chal jayega ki reader kitna pressure daalte hai ki aisa hona chahiye ya aisa nahi ..incest me thoda adult aa jaaye to story na padhne ki baat karte hai ya chhod dene ki ..

par is story par jo reader hai wo aisi demand nahi rakhte hai bas apni raay dete hai ki manali galat hai ya rahul yaa ajit ( aap saare comment dekh chuki hai ) ..kahani ke character ko achcha ya bura kehna galat nahi hai ...

galat tab hoga jab reader kahe ( only example ) ki manali ko kaka se bhi chudwao yaa bahut saare dosto se ..par koi bhi aisi demand nahi rakh raha bas apne dil me jo hai wahi batata hai ki ye( manali ) mujhe galat lagta hai aur ye( ajit ) sahi ..

Mai yeh pahele bhi keh chuki hun ki mai iss cheez ko lekar ekdam bhi mind nehi karti hun, mujhe even story ke criticism se bhi koi dikkat nehi hain.. Pad agar koi yeh sochta hain ki mai comments padhne mei aur reply dene mei time waste karti hun, aur iss wajah se hi update late aate hain, then yeh galat soch hain.. yehi mai sirf clear kar dena chahti hun.... bass aur kuch nehi....

 

[Manali Bose]

har ek ki kahani ko lekar apni raay hoti hai ...aap sabki nahi sun sakti ..bas apne dil me jo hai wahi likho ....character ko achcha yaa bura kehna sabka adhikar hai ..last comment dekho usme ajit ko galat aur manali ko sahi kaha hai kyunki aadme affair kare to sahi aur aurat kare to galat .

All type of criticism is welcome here with broad heart.... Mere khud ke bhi ek raay (opinion) hai apne story ke characters ko lekar.. shayad mai Manali ki prati thodi bias ho sakti hun, but voh as an observer.. but as a writer mai poori unbiased tarike se story ko narrate karti hun, tabhi toh aap log yahan debate kar paate hain.. Mai agar chahta toh Ajit ko villain bana kar story likh sakti the, pad maine aisa toh nehi kiya.. kyunki as a writer I should be honest with my writing..

 

[Manali Bose]

Congratulations for 50 updates

Thank You So Much........