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Adultery Wife Fulfilled Sex Desire Of A Cancer Patient (Completed)

What will Happen?? Aab Kya Ho Sakta Hain??


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Manali Bose

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Bhai ap koi bhi logic dijiye lekhika mahoday rahul aur manali ke bachaw me koi dusra logic rakhengi hi.
Unhe apne mn se likhne dijiye.
Lgta hai wo khud confused ho gyi hai

Mai kisi ko defend nehi kar rehi hun.. Mai bass character justification dea rahe hun.. Kaun sahi hain aur kaun galat, yeh toh readers hei taay (decide) karega, jaise aap log.. mai nehin.. Mera kaam hain har character ke point of view ko aap logo ke samne rakhna.. Aab har kisi ka point of view sahi nehi hota, uss mei aap debate jaroor kar sakte ho.. Confused mai nehi hun.. About the Story, I am very much crystal clear in my mind.. Mere "After Story Discussions" mei shayad aap log thode confused ho rahe ho, as you readers are unaware of what will happen next in the Story.. Isiliye aap logo ne yeh baat maan hei liya ki Manali confirm (jaroor) koi doosra affair karne jaa rahe hain.. Pad aisa nehi bhi ho sakte hain.. There are lots of possibilities available for Manali as well as the Story....
 

Sexy launda

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Mai kisi ko defend nehi kar rehi hun.. Mai bass character justification dea rahe hun.. Kaun sahi hain aur kaun galat, yeh toh readers hei taay (decide) karega, jaise aap log.. mai nehin.. Mera kaam hain har character ke point of view ko aap logo ke samne rakhna.. Aab har kisi ka point of view sahi nehi hota, uss mei aap debate jaroor kar sakte ho.. Confused mai nehi hun.. About the Story, I am very much crystal clear in my mind.. Mere "After Story Discussions" mei shayad aap log thode confused ho rahe ho, as you readers are unaware of what will happen next in the Story.. Isiliye aap logo ne yeh baat maan hei liya ki Manali confirm (jaroor) koi doosra affair karne jaa rahe hain.. Pad aisa nehi bhi ho sakte hain.. There are lots of possibilities available for Manali as well as the Story....
Ap apne story me rahul ko manali ke character ko justify krne ki kosis kr rhi hai ko wo jo kr rhe hai shi kr rhe hai, khaskar rahul ke character ko.
Aur ajit to chutiya bna hi hai.
Updates bhi apne itne late aane lge hai.
Lagbhag 10 din me ek update.
Pr koi bat nhi writer ap hai story ki
 
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mahadev31

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Mai kisi ko defend nehi kar rehi hun.. Mai bass character justification dea rahe hun.. Kaun sahi hain aur kaun galat, yeh toh readers hei taay (decide) karega, jaise aap log.. mai nehin.. Mera kaam hain har character ke point of view ko aap logo ke samne rakhna.. Aab har kisi ka point of view sahi nehi hota, uss mei aap debate jaroor kar sakte ho.. Confused mai nehi hun.. About the Story, I am very much crystal clear in my mind.. Mere "After Story Discussions" mei shayad aap log thode confused ho rahe ho, as you readers are unaware of what will happen next in the Story.. Isiliye aap logo ne yeh baat maan hei liya ki Manali confirm (jaroor) koi doosra affair karne jaa rahe hain.. Pad aisa nehi bhi ho sakte hain.. There are lots of possibilities available for Manali as well as the Story....
aapki kahani achchi lag rahi hai isme koi doubt nahi ?..pyar aur nafrat jatane ke liye koi reason hona chahiye ....waise hi kahani ke baare me kehne ke liye hamare paas reason hai aur aap apne style me likhiye hum use apni style me samajhenge ??...warna sirf nice update likhne me kya maja aayega ..par agar aapko kisi comment ka bura lage to bol dena bindhast hame bura nahi lagega .... kuch writer block kar dete hai jisse hum comment na kar sake ...
 

Manali Bose

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ajit ka ghar to waise bhi rahul tod hi chuka hai ,ab aur kya baaki hai ,,

Upar aapne likha ki rahul ajit ka ghar nhi todna chahta... Kuch bacha hai kya ab is ghar ya rishte me????

....mujhe ye samajh nahi aaya ki ghar kaise bachega dono ka jab manali kisi aur se chudne jayegi

Ap logic to shi dijiye,yha pr apka logic hi bekar hai rahul ajit ka ghar nhi todna chahta,

...to phir rahul ne manali ke saath sex karke aur itne idea deke ajit ka ghar to tod hi diya na ??..

Kyunki RaHul shayad apne dost ke ghar nehi todna chahta..

To My Dear Readers; aap log please mere shabdo pad gaur kare.. Maine kahein ki "Kyunki RaHul shayad apne dost ke ghar nehi todna chahta.."

Maine "shayad" shabd ke prayog kiye hain aur kahein hain.. jiss ke aarth hain (which means) "Probably"; it doesn't mean "Confirm"..

Rahul Manali ko continuously yeh samjhane ke kosish kar raha hain ki wo Manali ki ghar nehi todna chahta.. Uska aisa koi intention nehin hain.. Wo sirf Manali ko apne zindegi mei khuss aur sexually satisfied dekhna chahta hain.. Yeh Rahul Ka "Point of View" hain.. Wo iss tarah se Manali ko doosre kisi affair mei engage karne ke kosish kar raha hain..

Aab Rahul aap logo ke liye ek Villain ho sakta hain, Manali ek so called "Characterless Woman" ho sakti hain, if you think so.. Aap logo ko yeh lag sakta hain ki Ajit yahan Hero nehi balki ek dumb-ass fool hain.. Pad mere liye yeh sab hei Story ka ek ek Significant Character hain..


Yeh readers taay karegi ki kaun kya hain, aur kis kis ko kya kya "Adjectives" se sambhodit kiya jaa sakta hain..
 

Manali Bose

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Ap apne story me rahul ko manali ke character ko justify krne ki kosis kr rhi hai ko wo jo kr rhe hai shi kr rhe hai, khaskar rahul ke character ko.
Aur ajit to chutiya bna hi hai.
Updates bhi apne itne late aane lge hai.
Lagbhag 10 din me ek update.
Pr koi bat nhi writer ap hai story ki

Story mei narration toh Ajit dea raha hain naa.. Toh Ajit kaise Rahul ko defend karega!! Mai "After Story Discussions" mei jo keh raha hun uss se shayad aap ko yeh lag raha hain ki mai Rahul aur Manali ko defend karna chahti hun.. Rahul ke baat mai nehi kar sakti, pad mai apne aap ko toh defend kar sakti hun naa?? Har koi chahei wo kitni bhi badi jurm kyun naa kare, usse apne aap ko defend karne ka mauka toh milta hain naa.. Aur wo khud ko defend karte bhi hain, yehin Human Nature hain.. As a writer, I am neutral, & as a character I should biased on myself only, right??
 
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mahadev31

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To My Dear Readers; aap log please mere shabdo pad gaur kare.. Maine kahein ki "Kyunki RaHul shayad apne dost ke ghar nehi todna chahta.."

Maine "shayad" shabd ke prayog kiye hain aur kahein hain.. jiss ke aarth hain (which means) "Probably"; it doesn't mean "Confirm"..

Rahul Manali ko continuously yeh samjhane ke kosish kar raha hain ki wo Manali ki ghar nehi todna chahta.. Uska aisa koi intention nehin hain.. Wo sirf Manali ko apne zindegi mei khuss aur sexually satisfied dekhna chahta hain.. Yeh Rahul Ka "Point of View" hain.. Wo iss tarah se Manali ko doosre kisi affair mei engage karne ke kosish kar raha hain..

Aab Rahul aap logo ke liye ek Villain ho sakta hain, Manali ek so called "Characterless Woman" ho sakti hain, if you think so.. Aap logo ko yeh lag sakta hain ki Ajit yahan Hero nehi balki ek dumb-ass fool hain.. Pad mere liye yeh sab hei Story ka ek ek Significant Character hain..


Yeh readers taay karegi ki kaun kya hain, aur kis kis ko kya kya "Adjectives" se sambhodit kiya jaa sakta hain..
par shayad ka koi matlab nahi raha kyunki manali ke dimaag me ajit ke liye kuch bacha nahi hai ye last update me samajh aa gaya warna ajit kab ghar aayega isse manali ko matlab nahi hai ye kehna ,,,,aur ab rahul ke liye taiyar hona isse kya saabit hota hai ......agar aap shayad( ??) ajit ko cuckold dikhati ho to dono ka saath rehna galat nahi lagega ...par ek sawaal ( aap batayengi to jyada samajh aayega ) ajit ka sperm kam hai aur penis size bhi kam hai aur wo jyada time bhi sex nahi kar sakta ?? matlab wo poori tarah se bekaar hai kya ??
 
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