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Thriller WLHTA - The Serpent Of Underworld.

What Should Be the Future Of the Story ?


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Naik

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Humne Bhushan or Divyang ki body load ki ambulance mein or nikal he rahe they wahaan se ki 4-5 gaadiyaan humaare saamne aake rukki jinmein se guns liye bahot saare log uttare or humaare uppar guns taan di unhone..


"Koi apni jagah se nahi hillega bhenchod.. "


Main piche waali gaadi mein tha toh saamne dikha nahi but ye awaaj pehchan gaya tha main ye Nasir ki awaaj thi.. Main gaadi se uttara turant..


Main-(Chilaake) Maadarchod itane tukde kardunga ki doctors ko bhi samjh nahi aaegi ki Konsa tukda kahaan joddna hai..


Mujhe dekhte he Nasir ne turant apni gun niche daal di.


Nasir- A bandukk niche kar maadarchod... Bandukk niche karo... Hataa maadarchod..


Usne apne logon ko dhakke maarte hue kaha..


Main- Itana bada hogaya maadarchod..


Nasir -Bhai.. Galati hogayi bhai. Maafi dedo bhai..Pata he nahi tha bhai mujhe toh...Humaari kya aukaat bhai aapke uppar ungali bhi uthaa dein,bandukk toh durr ki cheej hai. Uske liye aaye they Bhai hum toh..


Main- Aaja milwa deta hun..


Nasir aage aaya usne mere pair chuwe.. Or maine Ambulance ka backdoor khola.. Jisse dekh Nasir ki gand fatt gayi..


Main- Yahi haina..


Nasir- B. B.. bhai... Yee... Ye.... Yetoh.. Bhushan bhi hai bhai.. Bhushan..


Main- Yess...


Nasir- Bhai.. Aap ... Aap sachmuch he.. Aap bhai.. Aap alag he ho...


Usne firse pair pakadte hue kaha..


Main- Badla le liya hai tera ab khuss haina??


Nasir- Dhanyavaad bhai.. Dhanyavaad..


Main- Yaad rakhna bhosdk jarurat padegi tab kaam aana hai..


Nasir- Arrey maai baap kyun sharminda karte ho aap waise bhi boldoge toh bhi jaan haajir hai..


Main- Ab gaadiyaan hatta bhadwe jaana hai..


Nasir- Ji bhai..


Usne Bhaagke apni gaadiyana hataai and idhar Main Ami Abeer Jatin Jack or Vinny nikale Ambulance k sath dusari gaadi mein..


Main-Dhyaan se sunlo be kahaani kya hai.. Sudha bakchodi jarur karwaaegi.. Hua kya tha ye suno.. Humein khabbar milli ki Divyang k kuch log yahaan rukke hue hain hum chaanbeen karne aaye toh pata chala Divyang yahin hai humaare pass bus pistols thi toh humne socha abhi nahi kar shakte kyunki inke pass rifles thi tab Abeer ne dekha ki unki ek gaadi k andar kuch rifles rakhi hui hain toh humne uss gaadi se ye rifles uthaai and jald he firing suru hogayi tab pata chala Bhushan bhi yahin hai cross firing mein Bhushan maara gaya or Divyang uppar bhaag gaya usko surrender kaa moka diya toh suni nahi usne issliye AP bhai ne usko goli maari or goli lagte he woh uppar se niche jaa girra jiss wajah se aisi haalat hai uski.. Baaki details puchein toh mana kar dena ki itani goliyaan chal rahi thi ki kisne kisko maara koi idea nahi hai.. Ratt lo ye story yahi bolna hai bus..


Sab-Copy..


Main- Ab Main Abeer or Ami toh officially police advisors hain lekin woh Jatin Jack or Vinny ko bolenge ki tumne kyun maara unhe toh bolna hai ki hum teeno AP bhai k bodyguards hain humaari duty hai unko protect karna or jab unki jaan ko khatra tha toh orr kya karte.. Bus simple..


Jatin-Got you bhai..


Abeer- Media or Sudha ki gand fatt jaaegi bc.. 1 ghanta orr 10 minutes mein humne naa keval Divyang balki Bhushan ko bhi thok diya.. Bhai pure indian Media mein aag lagne waali hai.. Sudha caahti thi tera naam orr naa hone dun or uska opposite hogaya bc.. Maharashtra se bhi jyaada popular hoga ye kand toh..


Main-Surely.


Jaanwar sahi keh raha tha socha jaaye toh bhenchod ye bahot he crazy tha ki itana jaldi maine ek International gangster ko thok diya tha .. Log baawle hone waale they mera craze multiply hone waala tha.


Ab humlog pohanchey waapis dharna sthal par abki baar barricades hatwaaye humaari gaadi wahin rukki lekin ambulance ko aage bheja maine.. Ab again media waalon ko main dikha..


Main-(Chilaake) Aajaao aajao i have a gift ..


Ab Wahaan Bhai or Sudha toh they he sathmein CBI chief Anjana bhi thi woh teeno he Balwan uncle k pass they jo apni gaadi mein baithey they or almost nikal he rahe they wahaan se.. Lekin mujhe dekh k woh bhi rukk gaye ..


Main aake Victims k pass rukka and mere side mein Ambulance rukki.. Sudha ,Bhai ,Anjana or Balwan uncle aaye mere pass. Victims ki families bhi mere chaaron taraf faill gayi wahaan ..


Main- Aage aajaao thoda..


Maine Media waalon ko thoda aage bulwaya jahaan se wohlog bhi dekh shakein..


Deva- AP.. Kya hua??


Main- Well.. Jyaada kuch nahi..


Sudha- Good.. Kyunki Anjana ki team ko please unka kaam karne do..


Main-Kya kaam??


Sudha- Inko insaaf dilwaane kaa kaam..


Main- Ohh.. Insaaf toh dilwaa diya maine..


Sudha- Matlab??


Main- Here.. Ye raha insaaf..


Ye bolke maine Ambulance kaa backdoor khola or andar ka scene dekh k wahaan mojjud sabki aankhein fatt gayi thi,Even bhai ko bhi viswash nahi horaha tha..


Main- Mere pyaare bhaiyo or behano I'm sorry main inn brave officers ki jaan nahi bacha paaya lekin inko insaaf jarur dilwa diya hai inki death kabhi waste nahi jaaegi...


Anjana- Yyeye.. Ye Toh Bhushan hai..


Balwan-What???


Sudha-Kyaaaa??


Anjana- Haan.. Bhushan hai ye.. Ye Divyang hai.. You killed Bhushan.. Oh my god..


Main- Yeah I did actually..


Unlogon ko still viswaash nahi horaha tha but Victim ki families khuss thi wohlog ne gherr liya tha mujhe koi mere pair pakkad raha tha koi mera hath chumm raha tha koi mere galle lag raha tha udhar media waalon ne chilaana suru kar diya tha apne apke questions k sath..


Main-(Chilaake) Let this be a lesson to everyone.. Tum caahe kitane he bade gangster yaa so called don ho , agar tum galati se bhi masoom logon ko tangg karoge toh I'll erase you from existence just like that.. Mujhe target karo i dont mind but masoom logon ko nahi... Agar nahi suni meri baat toh ye dekhlo Bhusan, so called international don tha ye saikdon cases they iske uppar aajtak kanoon k sath khel raha tha lekin aaj iski life k sath khel hogaya issliye please meri baat maano dont hurt innocent people or I'll hurt you back.. Thankyou..


Uske baad maine media ko hatwaaya wahaan se unhe jo caahiye tha woh dediya tha maine.. Pure india ki nind khol dene waala tha ye subah subah..


Balwan- Wow.. AP.. Just w.. Woow... Great job..


Main-Thanks uncle..


Balwan- Tu mujhe harr din pehle se jyaada surprise karta hai.. You are just something else.. Something else totally...


Main-Thanks uncle.. Ok.. I'll take your leave.. Mujhe Ghar jaana hai..


Sudha- Ek second.. Aise nahi jaa shakte tum.. Anjana ki team k sath jaana hoga tumhe.. Tell them the whole story.. Investigation hogi..


Main-Funny.. Yahaan mere logon k saamne mujhe arrest karke leke jaaoge?? Mujhe?? Tumhara ghar takk jalaa denge yelog.. Tumhe koi idea hai ?? Inke saamne se inke bhagwaan ko le jaaogi tum.. Funny...


Balwan- We'll deal with it later Sudha... AP humaara he hai ab.. Remember the alliance.. Toh I'm sure usne kuch galat nahi kiya hai..


Main-Thanks uncle.. Fir bhi dikkat hai CBI ko toh mere against warrant le aana I'll be more than happy to answer your questions.. But tabtak k liye good bye..


Continued..
Zabardast
Family walo ko insaf mil gaya or media walo zabardast news subah subah poori India me bhokal bacha
Divyang ko tow marna hi tha Lekin Kisi ne bhusan ke baare me nahi Socha Hoga
Sudha ko or ziada sunana chahiye tha or achche se jalana chahiye tha
Baherhal dekhte h ab agla qadam kis taraf Jayega Matlab kaha se seat ka settlement hone Wala h
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Surya_021

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Update-542( My Aura)
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Humne Bhushan or Divyang ki body load ki ambulance mein or nikal he rahe they wahaan se ki 4-5 gaadiyaan humaare saamne aake rukki jinmein se guns liye bahot saare log uttare or humaare uppar guns taan di unhone..


"Koi apni jagah se nahi hillega bhenchod.. "


Main piche waali gaadi mein tha toh saamne dikha nahi but ye awaaj pehchan gaya tha main ye Nasir ki awaaj thi.. Main gaadi se uttara turant..


Main-(Chilaake) Maadarchod itane tukde kardunga ki doctors ko bhi samjh nahi aaegi ki Konsa tukda kahaan joddna hai..


Mujhe dekhte he Nasir ne turant apni gun niche daal di.


Nasir- A bandukk niche kar maadarchod... Bandukk niche karo... Hataa maadarchod..


Usne apne logon ko dhakke maarte hue kaha..


Main- Itana bada hogaya maadarchod..


Nasir -Bhai.. Galati hogayi bhai. Maafi dedo bhai..Pata he nahi tha bhai mujhe toh...Humaari kya aukaat bhai aapke uppar ungali bhi uthaa dein,bandukk toh durr ki cheej hai. Uske liye aaye they Bhai hum toh..


Main- Aaja milwa deta hun..


Nasir aage aaya usne mere pair chuwe.. Or maine Ambulance ka backdoor khola.. Jisse dekh Nasir ki gand fatt gayi..


Main- Yahi haina..


Nasir- B. B.. bhai... Yee... Ye.... Yetoh.. Bhushan bhi hai bhai.. Bhushan..


Main- Yess...


Nasir- Bhai.. Aap ... Aap sachmuch he.. Aap bhai.. Aap alag he ho...


Usne firse pair pakadte hue kaha..


Main- Badla le liya hai tera ab khuss haina??


Nasir- Dhanyavaad bhai.. Dhanyavaad..


Main- Yaad rakhna bhosdk jarurat padegi tab kaam aana hai..


Nasir- Arrey maai baap kyun sharminda karte ho aap waise bhi boldoge toh bhi jaan haajir hai..


Main- Ab gaadiyaan hatta bhadwe jaana hai..


Nasir- Ji bhai..


Usne Bhaagke apni gaadiyana hataai and idhar Main Ami Abeer Jatin Jack or Vinny nikale Ambulance k sath dusari gaadi mein..


Main-Dhyaan se sunlo be kahaani kya hai.. Sudha bakchodi jarur karwaaegi.. Hua kya tha ye suno.. Humein khabbar milli ki Divyang k kuch log yahaan rukke hue hain hum chaanbeen karne aaye toh pata chala Divyang yahin hai humaare pass bus pistols thi toh humne socha abhi nahi kar shakte kyunki inke pass rifles thi tab Abeer ne dekha ki unki ek gaadi k andar kuch rifles rakhi hui hain toh humne uss gaadi se ye rifles uthaai and jald he firing suru hogayi tab pata chala Bhushan bhi yahin hai cross firing mein Bhushan maara gaya or Divyang uppar bhaag gaya usko surrender kaa moka diya toh suni nahi usne issliye AP bhai ne usko goli maari or goli lagte he woh uppar se niche jaa girra jiss wajah se aisi haalat hai uski.. Baaki details puchein toh mana kar dena ki itani goliyaan chal rahi thi ki kisne kisko maara koi idea nahi hai.. Ratt lo ye story yahi bolna hai bus..


Sab-Copy..


Main- Ab Main Abeer or Ami toh officially police advisors hain lekin woh Jatin Jack or Vinny ko bolenge ki tumne kyun maara unhe toh bolna hai ki hum teeno AP bhai k bodyguards hain humaari duty hai unko protect karna or jab unki jaan ko khatra tha toh orr kya karte.. Bus simple..


Jatin-Got you bhai..


Abeer- Media or Sudha ki gand fatt jaaegi bc.. 1 ghanta orr 10 minutes mein humne naa keval Divyang balki Bhushan ko bhi thok diya.. Bhai pure indian Media mein aag lagne waali hai.. Sudha caahti thi tera naam orr naa hone dun or uska opposite hogaya bc.. Maharashtra se bhi jyaada popular hoga ye kand toh..


Main-Surely.


Jaanwar sahi keh raha tha socha jaaye toh bhenchod ye bahot he crazy tha ki itana jaldi maine ek International gangster ko thok diya tha .. Log baawle hone waale they mera craze multiply hone waala tha.


Ab humlog pohanchey waapis dharna sthal par abki baar barricades hatwaaye humaari gaadi wahin rukki lekin ambulance ko aage bheja maine.. Ab again media waalon ko main dikha..


Main-(Chilaake) Aajaao aajao i have a gift ..


Ab Wahaan Bhai or Sudha toh they he sathmein CBI chief Anjana bhi thi woh teeno he Balwan uncle k pass they jo apni gaadi mein baithey they or almost nikal he rahe they wahaan se.. Lekin mujhe dekh k woh bhi rukk gaye ..


Main aake Victims k pass rukka and mere side mein Ambulance rukki.. Sudha ,Bhai ,Anjana or Balwan uncle aaye mere pass. Victims ki families bhi mere chaaron taraf faill gayi wahaan ..


Main- Aage aajaao thoda..


Maine Media waalon ko thoda aage bulwaya jahaan se wohlog bhi dekh shakein..


Deva- AP.. Kya hua??


Main- Well.. Jyaada kuch nahi..


Sudha- Good.. Kyunki Anjana ki team ko please unka kaam karne do..


Main-Kya kaam??


Sudha- Inko insaaf dilwaane kaa kaam..


Main- Ohh.. Insaaf toh dilwaa diya maine..


Sudha- Matlab??


Main- Here.. Ye raha insaaf..


Ye bolke maine Ambulance kaa backdoor khola or andar ka scene dekh k wahaan mojjud sabki aankhein fatt gayi thi,Even bhai ko bhi viswash nahi horaha tha..


Main- Mere pyaare bhaiyo or behano I'm sorry main inn brave officers ki jaan nahi bacha paaya lekin inko insaaf jarur dilwa diya hai inki death kabhi waste nahi jaaegi...


Anjana- Yyeye.. Ye Toh Bhushan hai..


Balwan-What???


Sudha-Kyaaaa??


Anjana- Haan.. Bhushan hai ye.. Ye Divyang hai.. You killed Bhushan.. Oh my god..


Main- Yeah I did actually..


Unlogon ko still viswaash nahi horaha tha but Victim ki families khuss thi wohlog ne gherr liya tha mujhe koi mere pair pakkad raha tha koi mera hath chumm raha tha koi mere galle lag raha tha udhar media waalon ne chilaana suru kar diya tha apne apke questions k sath..


Main-(Chilaake) Let this be a lesson to everyone.. Tum caahe kitane he bade gangster yaa so called don ho , agar tum galati se bhi masoom logon ko tangg karoge toh I'll erase you from existence just like that.. Mujhe target karo i dont mind but masoom logon ko nahi... Agar nahi suni meri baat toh ye dekhlo Bhusan, so called international don tha ye saikdon cases they iske uppar aajtak kanoon k sath khel raha tha lekin aaj iski life k sath khel hogaya issliye please meri baat maano dont hurt innocent people or I'll hurt you back.. Thankyou..


Uske baad maine media ko hatwaaya wahaan se unhe jo caahiye tha woh dediya tha maine.. Pure india ki nind khol dene waala tha ye subah subah..


Balwan- Wow.. AP.. Just w.. Woow... Great job..


Main-Thanks uncle..


Balwan- Tu mujhe harr din pehle se jyaada surprise karta hai.. You are just something else.. Something else totally...


Main-Thanks uncle.. Ok.. I'll take your leave.. Mujhe Ghar jaana hai..


Sudha- Ek second.. Aise nahi jaa shakte tum.. Anjana ki team k sath jaana hoga tumhe.. Tell them the whole story.. Investigation hogi..


Main-Funny.. Yahaan mere logon k saamne mujhe arrest karke leke jaaoge?? Mujhe?? Tumhara ghar takk jalaa denge yelog.. Tumhe koi idea hai ?? Inke saamne se inke bhagwaan ko le jaaogi tum.. Funny...


Balwan- We'll deal with it later Sudha... AP humaara he hai ab.. Remember the alliance.. Toh I'm sure usne kuch galat nahi kiya hai..


Main-Thanks uncle.. Fir bhi dikkat hai CBI ko toh mere against warrant le aana I'll be more than happy to answer your questions.. But tabtak k liye good bye..


Continued..
Superb update
 

SAMRAT ETERNITY

Bhoola :
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Update-531(Power)

Update-532(The Plan)

Update-533(The Money-1)

Update-534(The Money-2)

Update-535(The Money-3)

Update-536( Andhra Pradesh Done)

Update-537(Divyang-1)

Update-538(Divyang-2)

Update-539(Divyang-2)

Update-540(They're Monsters)

Update-541(Built Different)

Update-542( My Aura)
Let's Review Begin's:

Aura ho toh AP jaisa ho. Security incharge ko real power dikhane ke liye swayam Home Minister Baldev ko gate par receive karne bula liya. AP ka ego hi alag hai.

Baldev ke through money transfer process easy ho gaya. Jab aapke paas power ho toh uska istamaal AP se behtar koi aur nahi karta. Baldev ke through IAS Vikram ko permission dilwana, then IAS Vikram ki help se airport security ko bypass karna, then khud money Kolkata tak pahuchana, then Chang aur Jatin ke through money ko main destination tak pahuchwana — itna sab AP ke alawa koi aur kar nahi sakta.

Ek sarkar banane ke liye kitni mehnat karna pad raha hai AP ko.
Jatin ki jagah agar koi aur bhi hota toh bhi 4700 crores dekh ke behosh ho jaata.

AP ne yaha bhi sahi kaha: "Itna cash mein 25-30 lakhs upar niche ho jaata hai."
(Hundred of crores mein 25-30 lakhs kuch maayne nahi rakhte.)

Ami ke money ko lekar bhi concern genuine hai. 3.0 ka pata unhe nahi hai ki usne paise kaise arrange kiye. 3.0 ke bridge business ka bhi unhe kuch pata nahi.

AP ke dadaji ka bhi description gajab hai. Puri family mein ek se badhkar ek hai — papa underworld ke main pillar, dadaji Indian politics ke important influence rakhne wali personality. AP khud mein ek underworld. Deva Bhai bhi Indian politics ke king.

Sabka apna apna ek aura hai.

Andhra Pradesh bhi alliance mein shamil ho gaya hai. 18 seats yaha mil gayi. Yaha bhi dushman ki kamzor nabz par vaar kiya. Reddy, Balwant se khush nahi tha, isiliye Reddy AP ke saath aa gaya.

AP ne Anuradha se bro-sis family relationship jod liya.
Duniya mein money aayega jaayega lekin ristedari hamesha kaam aayegi.
Isiliye sab 1.0 ke fan hai — kyunki woh innocent ki care karta hai aur unhe apni family maanta hai.

Kuch achha ho aur usme dushman apni ungli na kare, aisa bhala kabhi hua hai?
Yaha bhi Divyang aaya bhi, gaya bhi, aur pata bhi nahi chala.
Khud gaya toh gaya, apne saath-saath Bhushan (Sanjay ka third pillar) bhi le gaya.
Ye achha hua — story ki pace kuch badli badli nazar aa rahi hai.

Ab do pillar bache hain — Megha aur Andrew.
Megha ka pata nahi ki usse AP ka saamna kaisa rehta, lekin main sure hoon Andrew ka AP se saamna dhamakedaar hoga — kyunki Andrew hi drugs ka main pillar hai aur AP 1.0 ki ladai drugs se hai.

Sudha Bawli ka ilaaj bhi zaroori hai.
Isse toh public humiliation karwana chahiye — yeh mare hue logon par rajneeti kar rahi hai.

Jis tarah AP poore country mein famous ho raha hai, ab lagta nahi woh college wali mastmola zindagi payega.

J and Team kya hai ye log?
Khud 3.0 ka samajh aata hai — woh different breed hai.
Lekin J and Team — 6 log aur poori Bhushan gang — minutes mein safai karwa di.

Jis tarah 3.0 ne apne mission ke beech mein aane wale shakhs ko gayab kiya hai — agar galti se Sanjay 3.0 ke beech aaya, toh zyada ghante bhi na lagenge Sanjay ko saaf karne mein.

AP ka aura aur badh gaya.
Pata nahi Bhushan ki haalat dekh kar bhi Balwant ko samajh aaya ya nahi — ki AP se panga nahi lete.

Overall, all updates are awesome.
Pata nahi kyu, lekin iss site issue ki wajah se bahut se readers gayab ho gaye.
Unhe nahi pata ki wo kya missing kar rahe current arc apne peak par chal raha hai.

Har update apne aap mein fire hai.
Waiting for more.

AP 316 bhai update 531 , 539 , 542 mein home minister baldev Ki jagah balwan ko mention kiya gaya hai .
 
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