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Thriller WLHTA - The Serpent Of Underworld.

Kya AP ko headquarters jaana caahiye?


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okay to start krne se pehle ek baat review kaafi lambe hain, kafi sare questions hain, bahut sare guesses hain. I don't know main kitna sahi hun. AP bhaj maine bas apki story ko samjhne ka kosis kiya hun aur kuch nhi. Toh agar mere guesses galat hain toh bhi thik, 50 % sahi hai toh fir kya kehna aur agar 100% sahi hai jo hoga nhi toh fir main AP the great 2 hun 🤣. Now start krte hain review sorry reviews.


Review on AP after becoming party president :

Yahan se AP ki life me ek naya chapter start hua. Deva bhai ne apne health conditions dekhte hue AP ko party president bna diya aur AP ne is post aur work ko bahut hi ache se handle bhi kiya. Starting me jab AP party office pahucha and usne Deva bhai ki kursi par baithne se mna kiya aur dusri kursi par viraajmaan hua bas usi moment ne ye sabit kr diya ki AP ka ye chapter bahut chhota hai jo sahi bhi tha. AP ka kursi par baithne se mna krna apne bhai ke parti respect show krta hai. AP chahe kitna bhi mahaan kaam kyu na kr le ya fir kitne hi unche post par kyu na pahuch jaye lekin wo Deva bhai ka place nhi le sakta. And ye baat AP khud bhi jaanta hai . That's why AP respects Deva bhai and we as readers do the same. Now AP ka politician wala chapter close hua jisne AP ko thoda control me rkha hua tha. Ab wo fir khula saand hai. Dekhte hain aage kya hota hai? Sudha chaudhry ka kya hota hai? Ab dekhna ye hai ki Deva bhai sudha, balvant jaise logon ko kaise handle karte hain and most important iss political war mein Deva Bhai ki intelligence dekhne ki bahut iccha hai AP bro. Because Deva bhai ka intelligence, anger, political ideas ye sab humne story ke first part me hi dekha tha jab 1st villain of this story surendra singh ka part chal rha tha. Ab fir se Deva bhai ke uss part ko dekhne ki bahut iccha hai. I hope AP bro aage chal kar Deva bhai ke uss part ka darshan krwayenge.


Review on Balvant :
AP ko take down krne ke liye kafi lambe samay se planning chal rhi thi . Puri cabinet hi iske piche lga hua tha aur take down kiya bhi lekin ye tabhi possible hua jab AP & Deva bhai ne khud ye hone diya bhale hi us time AP ko ye pta nhi tha ki in sab ke piche kon hai. Now ek bada naam saamne aaya hai Balvant Patel, aur jis tarah se ise dikhaya gya hai ye toh badi kutti chiz hai. Toh isme sawaal ye hai ki kya Balvant bhi underworld se connection rakhta hai? Aur agar haan to kahan tak, kitne andar tak ? Kya wo itna upar hai underworld me ki agar zarurat ho to MOD bhi uska kuch nhi bigad sakta. ? Ya fir Balvant kewal politics me hi gundagiri chalata hai aur underworld me iski jyada deep connection hi na ho. Ab yahan do point ho sakta hai.
1st point - Agar Balvant ka underworld se jyada connection nhi hai toh fir kya Balvant and cabinet group me itni capacity hai ki wo 2.0 ke plan ka counter attack kr paye agar 2.0 inlogo ke khilaf apna plan bnata hai toh, kyuki sabhi ko pta hai ki 2.0 ka plan brutality se bhara hota hai, kyuki 2.0 ke plan ko tiara aur American underworld na jhel payi toh fir ye balvant chiz hi kya hai. 2.0 ke planning se balvant ko toda toh ja sakta hai lekin main issue ye hai ki balvant ka bhale hi underworld se connection na ho lekin wo hai toh Central government se. Jiske party ke log puri Central government chalata hai usse take down karna kisi bhi angle se easy nhi hai tab tak jab tak ki koi uske party ke wo person jo central government ke dark chizon ko jaanta ho aur wo central government ke khilaaf ho kar AP ke sath ho jaye. Toh use takkar dena itna easy toh nhi hai. AP ke saamne balvant ek chattan ki tarah hai jise todna tuf hone wala hai. Aur isme Balvant ko todne ke liye jiski sabse jyada zarurat hai wo hai Deva bhai kyuki AP bhale hi kafi intelligent ho lekin jab Deva bhai ki baat aati hai politics me toh log unki baat kewal sunte nhi balki dil se accept bhi krte hain. So basically Deva bhai ke help ke bina Balvant ko todna AP ke liye dificult hoga. So Balvant jo todna AP ke liye bahut difficult hone wala hai. It won't be easy.
2nd point - agar balvant ka underworld se deep connection hai ya fir wo khud underworld me vvip's hai jiska MOD bhi kuch nhi kr sakta toh fir AP balvant ko rokega kaise kyuki balvant toh ab rukne se raha , wo AP and Deva bhai ke piche ayega hi ayega . And master Mogui ne AP se kaha tha ki underworld ki duniya ko chalane ke liye kafi vvip's and bade bade businessman, politician bhi shamil hai jiske bare me complete jaankari AP ko ya MOD ko bhi nhi hai. Aur agar Balvant ka naam un chand top vvip's ke list me hai toh fir 2.0 ya 1.0 dono hi use touch nhi kr sakta kyuki League ke Leader Mogui iski permission kabhi nhi denge aur 1.0 ya 2.0 dono hi master Mogui ke khilaaf nhi jayega. (Main yahan 3.0 ki baat nhi kr rha hun. Uska level hi alag hai. Wo toh behanchod Balvant jaise 100 ko kha jaye aur dakaar bhi na le because he doesn't give a fuck about permission and alls) . Aur agar AP balvant ko nhi rokta hai toh balvant toh surely AP ke piche ayega aur sirf AP ke piche hi nhi balki Deva bhai ke piche bhi. Aur isiliye Balvant ko rokne ke liye AP ko usse bhi upar chadhna hoga underworld me aur ye sirf Serpent of underworld ke post se hi possible hai. So if balvant is in the list of underworld's vvip's then this can be the 1st biggest reason for becoming a Serpent of the underworld .


Now come to Sudha Chaudhry :
Sudha Chaudhry aur uske family ke upar ek daag toh lg hi gya hai lekin akad ab bhi baki hai. Uski akad kewal central post ke kaaran nhi hai balki wo balvant patel ke kaaran bhi hawa me hai . Use lgta hai ki central post aur balvant ka sath hai toh wo kisi ko bhi barbaad kr skti hai khas kar Deva and family ko Lekin wo bhul rhi hau Deva and party central government jitni badi nhi toh usse jyada chhoti bhi nhi hai yahan ministers ke, sudha ke haarne ki jo sabse badi wajah banne wali hai wo hai AP and Deva bhai ko underestimate krna aur AP ki intelligence, network, AP ke hidden loyal person and AP ki underworld connection ye sab dusra kaaran hai Sudha ke haarne ka. Kyuki AP ko sare ministers ke baare me saari jankaari hai ki koi minister kis hadd tak apni power aur apne paise ka upyog kr sakta hai lekin AP ke bare me logon ko bas itna hi pta hai ki AP Deva ka chhota bhai hai jo apne young age ke kaaran publicity me rehna aur logon ko maarna pasand hai, lekin unhe ye bilkul nhi pta ki underworld ki jis position ko paane ke liye log apni puri zindagi lga dete hain , AP ne wo mukam, wo dar, wo respect, wo network, wo connection sirf 1.5 yrs me earn kr liya. Jab Sudha Chaudhry niche giregi toh mujhe nhi lgta ki Balvant ya koi aur minister ise bachane ayega aur tabhi AP Balvant ke khilaaf Sudha ke help se apna plan bna sakta hai.
Lekin abhi AP ke liye ek plus point ye hai ki balvant ke father means home minister of India Rajendra Singh Chaudhry ke kaaran balvant shaant hai aur unhone AP ko permission bhi de diya hai ki agar zarurat pade toh chadh jao balvant ke upar, matlab agar aage chalkar kuch issue hote hain to atleast rajendra ji central government ko publicly, deeply involve hone se rok toh sakte hain . Jiska benefit AP ko hi milega kyuki jab AP publicly apna hardcore power use krta hai toh itna khatarnaak hota hai lekin jab wo media, public se hide rehkar apna plan bnayega toh bahut hi jyada hardcore plan hoga. AP thoda bahut media and public ke kaaran hi control mein rehta hai. Dekhte hain AP iss Sudha naam ke kaante ko kaise nikalta hai.


Now come on love story :
Oh bro you don't know, main kitne lambe samay se Riya and AP ke ek hone ka wait kr rha tha. At the end dono sath aa hi gye aur to aur dono me kissing bhi ho gyi, great! . Lekin apne ek reader ko reply diya tha ki abhi tak sure nhi hai ki hamari official bhabhi riya hogi ki nhi. Apne kaha tha koi bhi ho skti hai. Toh kahin apne fir se dono ko dur krne ka toh nhi socha hai na 😡. Aur agar aap 1.0 and 2.0 dono ke liye alag alag gf rakhne ka socha hua hai toh maza aa jayega. Ghar me cute, pyaari Riya and underworld me hot spicy chilli with sweetness Sara. And 3.0 ko toh gf, pyar se koi matlab hi nhi hai usse toh kewal apne mission se matlab hai toh usse ignore. And no more comments on your love story. I'm enjoying it.


Mangal ki shaadi :
Isme toh apne apni baat sach sabit kr diya . itna daru piya apne ki hospital me admit bhale hi na hona pada but waisi condition ho hi gyi thi. Aur apne jo mangal and meenu ko gift diye, matlab gajab, ऊँचे मकान ऊँची पकवान. Aur AP bhai master Norman ne jo gift diya tha Mangal ko dene ke liye wo toh apne diya hi nhi, kahin khud hi toh dakaar nhi gye. Waise us gift me kya tha?
Aur ye kya AP toh bacchon jaisi harkate krne lga hai, zidd krne lga hai ki agar koi mujhe sunyega toh main shaadi me hi nhi aunga Matlab mana ghar me sabse chhota hai toh uski zidd sab maante hain lekin kab tak? Kisi new chatacter ki toh entry krwao jo sirf AP se zidd kre aur AP bhi sirf uski hi zidd puri kre. Jo AP ko apne kaan pakadne par majbur kr de. Samajh me aya kiski baat kr rha hun? Are abhi bhi nhi samajhe.... Socho socho bhai log......
Chlo main bta deta hun new cute little princess ki baat kr rha hun. Ab samjhe ya ab bhi nhi. Lo abhi tak nhi samjhe.
Thik hai main hi clear kr deta hun. AP bro politics, businesses, publicity wagerah sab sahi hai lekin family mein Deva bhai and Deepika bhabhi ko 2 se 3 toh bnao👨‍👩‍👧 Really bro I'm waiting for this . Ye entry kab krwa rhe ho?


Now come to the drugs & Nidhi Pandey :
Toh Namit ke baad drugs ka dhandha Nidhi Pandey ko diya gya aur usne handle bhi bahut ache se kiya. 95℅ purity ke drugs market me le aayi lekin wo overconfident ho gyi aur isi me uske bhai aur baap dono hi thuk gye. Lekin Nidhi ko jyada fark nhi pada dono ke marne se, aisa kyu? Bhai ka toh samajh me aya lekin baap ke marne par bhi jyada fark nhi pda, kyu? Ye janna hai mujhe. . Abhi ke liye Nidhi underground hai. Nidhi ke underground hone ke baad SD ke next pillar Vilas ki entry hui Patrrick ke sath aur sath mein Dino and Mike ki bhi. Jis tarah se Nidhi ko AP ne portraite kiya tha uss hisab se Nidhi kaafi intelligent hai aur yaha par Nidhi abhi ke liye underground hai lekin kab tak agar usse apne father and bhai se matlab nhi hai toh uski family mein koi toh hoga jiski fikr wo krti hai mother ya koi boyfriend ya koi friend aur in future Nidhi uss person ke liye AP ki help kr sakti hai and AP usse aur uski close one ko safety provide krega kyuki Nidhi bhale hi underworld mein SD ke sath kaafi involve hai lekin wo Drugs and human trafficking mein involve nhi thi usse force kiya gya tha ye krne ke liye. Aur mein yahan par Nidhi ka side isiliye le rha hun kyuki puri story mein acchaai aur buraayi ki baat nhi chal rhi hai balki kam galat aur jyada galat ki baat chalti aa rhi hai suru se hi. Aur aaj ke time mein acha wahi hai jo kam galat hai.


Review on Shruti & team :
Ab is drugs wale game me ek nayi team bhi aa chuki hai Team Shruti from NCB aur starting mein hi AP se 2 baar haar bhi chuki hai jiske kaaran shruti AP se gussa bhi hai aur AP ke piche bhi padi hai. No doubt shruti best hai apne work mein and usse best bnata hai uski beauty with brain. Aage chalkar do hi chij ho sakti hai ya toh shruti AP se mil jayegi , not publicly but internally ya fir wo NCB chor degi jo possible nhi hai. So at the end ya toh shruti AP ke sath mil jayegi ya fir jaise un dono ke bich abhi tu tu main main wala scene chal rha hai wo continue rahega. Waise dekha jaye toh Shruti AP se impress toh hai . Abhi tak shruti ko AP ka plan ka pta nhi chala hai jiske kaarn shruti ke team members kidnapped hue the , toh agar agae chal kr pta chalta hai to shruti ka kya reaction rahega aur AP ko kya reply degi? Ye sach mein dekhne layak hoga. kya wo AP se nafrat kregi? Ye sare sawalo ke jawab aage milenge toh padhte hain dekhte hain aage kya hota hai.


Ahuja's Review :
Toh yaha AP ne acha game khela. Usse pta tha yahan attack nhi hoga aur confirmation lene ke baad AP ne ahuja's ko security provide kiya jisme usne Ahuja's ki family ke akad and ego ko tod kar chur chur kr diya. ye AP ke liye ek plus point hai kyuki ab Ahuja Deva bhai ki madad krne ke liye bounded hai aur ye help central ministers se fight krne me benefit hoga. But but but ahuja par attack hua bhale hi wo AP ke kaaran success nhi hua lekin J ko 3.0 ne order de diya Jessica ne jo team bnaya hai The Entity ke case ko solve krne ke liye usse khatam krne ke liye. Jab J ye kaam krega toh yakinan ye case bahut hi high level tak chala jayega aur uske baad The Entity ko find krne ke liye obvious MOD ko bulaya jayega aur tab ja kar interesting part start hoga AP vs AP yr fir ye kahun 1.0 vs 3.0. Aur iss case mein 3.0 ko toh pta hoga ki wo kya kr rha hai lekin 1.0 ko iska koi idea hi nhu hoga aur yahi story ko interesting bnayega. Aur agar MOD bhi The Entity ko find out nhi kr payega then ho sakta hai ki AP aka MOD and EMO aka Serpent of underworld milkar iss case ko solve krega jisse story aur bhi jyada interesting hogi.


Review on 2.0 :
2.0 ki entry hoti hai sahil pandey ko finish krne ke dauraan. Ab 2.0 aaye aur kuch na ho aisa ho hi nhi sakta. Aur is baar bhi yahi hua. 2.0 ke aane se 3 things hai jo hamesa hoti hai :
1. 2.0 hamesha frustrate aur anger mode me rehta hai
2. 2.0 aaye aur log na mare aisa ho hi nhi sakta
3. 2.0 ka khouf na faile, ye bhi nhi ho sakta..
2.0 ne ye sab kiya. Wo ladki jisne Meenu ke ghar me drugs gift kiya use thok kar apna frustration and anger show kiya ; Phan cartel, sahil pandey and pankaj pandey ko maar kar apna killing game pura kiya and Nepal me apne anger mode me fir se khouf failaya.
2.0 ne Phan cartel, sahil and pankaj pandey ko around 2-3 hrs me finish kiya. Ab sawal ye hai ki agar ye same kaam 1.0 krta toh kitna time leta. Now again read the character of these three people and clans. In sabki intelligence, power, network kafi strong tha lekin jab 2.0 aaya toh ye sab kisi kaam ka nhi rha. Ye haar baar ka hai 2.0 aata hai mission ko 1.0 ke liye short kr deta hai aur wapas so jata hai. 2.0 ke aane se story fast hoti hai. Kewal yahi story nhi balki har story me ek aisa point aata hai specifically crime and action based story me jahan kisi character ko ya story ko speed ki jarurat hoti hai. And story ko same way, same interest, same flow mein rakhkar story ko middle me slow se fast krna and then fir se slow krna without losing story's effect bahut difficult hota hai. story ko speed dena writer ke liye sabse challenging part hota hai. Aur ye skill aap mein AP bhai best hai. 2.0 ke aane ke baad story fast hui lekin kahin bhi aisa nhi lga ki story apne track se niche utari ho. Same flow and same effect ke sath apne story ki speed ko maintain kiya. That's why your writing skills force me to read your story.
In sabke bich MOD par ek naya blame bhi lga ki MOD ne Nepal me kisi ko maara. Investigation and search krne par ye pta chala ki MOD toh nirdosh hai lekin MOD ko negative bnane ke liye kisi ne uske khilaaf sazish rachi thi.
Pokhara me jessica 2.0 ki koi bhi baat sunne ke liye ready nhi thi lekin jahan tak mujhe yaad aa rha hai wo 2.0 se naraaj hai isiliye ye kr rhi thi. Ye baat tab ki hai jab 2.0 ko masters ne Magnificent seven ko pakadne ka mission diya tha us time Jessica ko 2.0 se ek help chahiye thi ek case ko solve krne ke liye but usne mna kr diya tha kyuki wo apna time us chhote se case me barbaad nhi krna chahta tha aur apne place par Sara ko bhej diya tabhi se Jessica 2.0 se naraaj hai. Bas isiliye Jessica 2.0 ki koi bhi baat nhi sunn rhi thi. Jiska result bahut hi kharaab rha High Commands ke liye. 2.0 ne official bol diya ki wo HC ka koi bhi task ab in hand nhi lega. But ye jyada lamba nhi chalega jab AP wapas underworld jayega tab kisi reason se ya kisi master ke kehne par wo HC ka kaam bhi pura krega.
2.0 ke ek purane dushman ne AP ke jaise dikhne wale bande ko MOD bna kar asal MOD ki chhavi dhumil krne ki kosis ki jo success nhi hui. And during this fight 3.0 ki entry hui.


Review on ISS agent Mady :
ISS ki agent Mady ko bhi utni hi power mili hai jitni MOD lekin ek bada antar ye hai dono mein ki MOD apna power underworld me hi show kr sakta hai wo khul kr kabhi bhi kisi ke saamne nhi aa sakta jabki Mady puri tarah se publicly MOD ko pakad sakti hai aur underworld ke khilaaf kuch bhi kr sakti hai. Toh kahin na kahin ye MOD ke liye khatarnaak bhi hai kyuki Mady ka sirf ek kaam hai underworld ke MOD ko pakadna ya fir thok dena aur yahi Mady ko dangerous bnata hai. Waise 2.0 and Mady ka milan hua nakli MOD ko pakadte wakt as AP . Mady ko koi idea nhi hai abhi tak ki AP MOD bhi ho sakta hai. Lekin just imagine jis wakt Mady ko ye pta chala ki AP hi MOD hai tab wo kya kregi. AP bhai apne Mady ko jitna intelligent portrait kiya hai mujhe aisa kyu lag rha hai ki wo din dur nhi jab Mady AP and MOD ke connection ko find out kr legi aur uske baad MOD vs ISS dekhne mein maza ayega. Ya kahin aisa toh nhi ki jab tak Mady ko ye pta chale tab tak AP Mady ke itne close ho jaye as a friend jisse Mady ek chance toh AP ko degi ye btane ke liye ki AP MOD ban kr kya krna chahta hai, uska mission kya hai, kaise MOD hi Russian ya fir American underworld ko Asia me enter hone se rok sakta hai? Kyuki agar MOD ne underworld chhor diya toh Asia ke liye kitna bura ho sakta hai ye koi soch bhi nhi sakta hai. Aur main aisa isiliye keh rha hun kyuki 3rd part ke kisi update me kisi master ne kaha tha ki Asia me agar katleaam hone se koi rok sakta hai toh wo sirf 2.0 hi hai dusra aur koi nhi. Kyuki Russian and American underworld Asian Underworld khatam krna chahti hai. And may be this is the 2nd biggest reason for AP to become The Serpent of Underworld.


Review on 3.0 :
2.0 ka nakli MOD ke sath combat fight ke dauran 3.0 ne entry liya. 3.0 ne apne mind capabilities ke kaaran ye pta kr liya ki china and Russian sath mil kar MOD ko khatam krne ka mission bnaya tha Saeed Abbas ke through aur mission ka boss koi Russian tha lekin 3.0 ne ye mission ko hi khatam kr diya sath mein Saeed aur nakli MOD ko bhi. Aur yahan par ye bhi pta chala ki wo nakli MOD AP ka hi clone tha aur ye clone sirf ek nhi balki bahut sare hain lekin kitne?. Ye clones bhi tez aur dangerous hain 1.0 , 2.0 , 3.0 ke jitne toh nhi lekin normal people se jyada toh hain. Jis tarah se 3.0 ne kisi J naam ke bande se baat kiya aur J ko order diya kuch logon ko maarne ka specially Myanmar, Thailand, Korea, Vietnam or India ke targets ko jo karib 300 people the kyuki uske khilaaf planning china aur russia milkar kar rha tha toh baki log toh waste hi the 3.0 ke liye isiliye usne sabko marwa diya. Isse ye toh confirm ho gya ki 3.0 ko sare clones aur uske khilaaf hone wale plan ke bare me jaankari thi, puri nhi obviously but itna toh malum tha ki uske clones bnaye gye hain aur uske khilaaf planning kiya ja rha hai MOD samajh kar jabki 1.0 ya fir 2.0 ko iski koi bhanak bhi nhi hai abhi tak.
3.0 ne nakli MOD ko "my creation" kaha tha toh kya un clones ko banwane wala 3.0 khud tha ya koi aur? 3.0 sab clones ko apne under lena chahta hai aur fir unsabko aur jyada better bnana chahta hai . Aisa krne par sare clones 3.0 ko apna bhagwaan samjhne lagega aur wo 3.0 ke liye kuch bhi krega. Basically 3.0 sare clones ke sath apni khud ki ek team bnana chahta hai aur us team ke dam par underworld par raaj krna chahta hai. Kahin yahi uska main mission toh nhi? Ye J kon hai jisne underworld me mauth ka nanga nach kiya 3.0 ke kehne par? Kya hum readers use pehle se jaante hain ya fir wo ek naya character hai. Aur agar 3.0 ka mission ye nhi balki kuch aur hai then Chinese and Russian dono ke khilaaf ek sath fight krne liye power ki zarurat toh hogi hi and this can be the 3rd reason for becoming The Serpent of Underworld.
Abhi tak 3.0 ko bahut hi kam dikhaya gya hai last part mein sirf do baar, pehli baar Paul ke sath combat fight mein and dusri baar jab EMO and AP island par fase hue the and iss part mein do baar , pehli baar jab nakli MOD ke sath fight ho rha tha aur dusri baar jab AP ahuja ko security provide kr rha tha tab. Agar dekha jaye toh 3.0 ne bahut hi kam baar entry liya hai aur usse bahar aane ke liye toh na kisi drug ki jarurat hai aur na hi gusse ki aur na hi na hi jab AP marne wala hota hai. 3.0 jab chahe aa sakta hai, usse 2.0 ke jaise kisi reason ki jarurat nhi . Matlab saaf hai jab 1.0 and 2.0 kisi aise situation mein fans jaye jahan se wo khud nhi nikal sakta hai fir koi uska help nhi kr payega tab 3.0 khud ko saamne layega otherwise wo andar hi andar khud ka intelligence increase kr rha hai. Ab aage dekhte hain jab 3.0 puri tarah se saamne aata hai toh wo sari situation ko kaise handle krta hai aur wo family and friends ke sath kaisa behave krta hai.


Review on The Entity :
The Entity ka jikr kafi time se hota aa rha hai , ye kuch samay ke liye aata hai apna khauf failata hai aur wapas so jata hai jiske bare me kisi ko koi jaankari hi nhi hai ki ye kon hai, ek team hai ya koi clan ya fir koi syndicate lekin is baar ye pta chala ki The Entity koi aur nhi balki 3.0 khud hai. Ab the Entity me order J ko diya jata hai aur ye banda apni team ke sath mauth ka tandav karta hai lekin sawal ab bhi yahi hai ki 3.0 ne un 300+ underworld vvip's ko maarne ka order kyu diya , aisa kya tha, kyu tha aur masters ko ye pta kyu nhi hai? Aur tab kya hoga jab Sare masters ko ye pta chalega ki the Entity khud AP ka another version 3.0 khud hai. Yahan tak khud AP ko bhi ye pta nhi hai. Kahin aisa toh nhi ki The Entity me 3.0 ke alawa koi aur bhi high ranking league official bhi mila hua hai aur kisi ko ye baat pta bhi nhi?
Now AP ke underworld join krne ke pehle se hi The Entity exit krta hai aur 3.0 ka janm hi AP ke underworld join krne ke baad hua toh fir 3.0 hi The Entity kaise hua? AP bhai iska jawab toh aap hi de sakte hain toh dekhte hain iska jawab kab milta hai.


Trying to understand AP's Clones :
Jab AP underworld me tha toh us time 3.0 ko kuch samay ke liye temporary Serpent of underworld bnaya gya tha Russia and America ke plan ko rokne ke liye , indono underworld ka plan tha Asian underworld ko barbaad krna ya usse take over krna . Aur uske iss plan ko 3.0 ne na kewal roka tha balki Russia ke 77% undetworld ko Asian underworld me shamil kr liya tha. But isse Russian underworld khuss nhi tha lekin wo rule ke according hua tha isiliye Russians chahkar bhi Serpent ke khilaaf nhi ja sakta tha aur yahin par Russian MOD ke khilaf ho chuka tha. But again Russian chah kar bhi apne 77% area ko wapas nhi le sakta tha. Jab Russian rule ke through MOD ka kuch nhi kr paya toh usne Jaby ko prison se release krwaya and usse MOD ke khilaaf khada kr diya. But MOD ke intelligence ko dekhte hua Jaby use pakad nhi pa rha tha toh usne plan bnaya aur 2.0 ko kidnapped kr liya. us time Jaby ne AP ko samjhne ke liye us par, uske blood, mind and body ka analysis krwaya tha . Aur AP ke bare me sabkuch jaankar na sirf Jaby balki Jaby ke bosses tak me kohraam macha hua tha aur tab un sabne mil kar ek plan bnaya tha . So plan tha AP ka blood and DNA use karke "Gene Editing" se dusare logon ko bhi AP ki tarah banane ka, powerful nahi but almost there.. AP ke jitana fast dimag, AP ki tarah surprising body etcetera etcetera..
Leave everything bus AP ka dimag bhi inmein ajayega toh bhi they can rule underworld easily.. And then much more.. Basically they want to create their own super army.. Lekin ye bahut risky tha iss plan ka success hone ka chances bahut hi kam tha agar 100 logon me experiment kiya jaye toh kisi 1 me yeh success hota. Aur isiliye AP ko kidnapped kiya gya tha. AP ko kidnapped krne ke baad Jaby ne total 58 logon par ye experiment kiya jisme se 49 mar chukey the aur 9 indefinite Coma mein they. Jab AP ke team ne AP ko Jaby ke lab se dhund nikala tab us lab mein sirf 49 dead body hi mila tha wo 9 coma wale ek bhi nhi. Toh sawal ye hai ki maine ye sab fir se kyu likh rha hun kyuki mera ek sawaal hai kya wo 9 mar chuke hain ya nhi? Kyuki agar wo Sare mar chuke hain toh fir AP ka clone kahan se aaya jo nakli MOD ban kr ghum rha tha aur jise 3.0 ne maar diya tha? Kya wo Sare coma wale abhi bhi zinda hain aur na sirf zinda balki usse dangerous bhi bnaya ja rha hai Russia mein ? main Russia isiliye bol rha hun kyuki nakli MOD wala idea bhi Russian ka hi tha aur Russian ka hi 77 % area asian underworld ke under hai filhaal . Aur agar wo log zinda hain toh kitne ? 9 ke 9 ya kam? Jaise 3.0 ne nakli MOD ko maarte time AP ke uss clone se baat kiya tha uss hisab se 3.0 pehle se hi ye sab janta hai lekin 1.0 aur 2.0 dono ko hi iss baat ki bhanak tak nhi hai. And I'm not asking I'm damn sure ye baat 3.0 ko pehle se hi pta tha lekin usse ye nhi pta tha ki insab ke piche kon hai aur isiliye usne 300 vvip's ko target kiya hua tha jo underworld mein corrupt bhi tha and apne power ke kaaran galat tarike se kaam kr rha tha rules ke against. 3.0 ne asian underworld ke corrupt vvip's par najar toh rkhe hue tha lekin yahan game to Russian underworld khel rha tha aur jab 3.0 ko ye baat nakli MOD ko maarte time pta chala toh uske liye ye 300 log waste lga toh 3.0 ne J ko maarne ka order de diya jisse Asian underworld mein ek khaouf bhi faill gaya ki agar corrupt ho galat tarike se kaam kr rhe ho toh The Entity hai tumlogon ke liye jisse Asian underworld me corruption kam hua hoga obviously kuch samay ke liye hi. Ab main sawaal ye hai ki agar un 9 log jinke body me AP ke blood ko insert kiya tha agar wo Sare marr chuke hain toh fir AP ke clone ko kaise aur kisne bnaya? Kya 3.0 bhi insab mein shaamil hai? Aur agar 3.0 bhi insab me mila hua hai toh uska main mission kya hai ? Sawaal kafi hain aur jawab ek bhi nhi , toh dekhte hain AP in Sare sawaalo ka jawab kaise deta hai aur Sare jawaab hum readers ko kitna pasand aata hai?


Trying to understand 3.0 :
Now 3.0 un sare clone ko search kr rha hai better bnane ke liye lekin kyu? Mujhe aisa kyu lag rha hai ki 3.0 un Sare clone ke sath milkar apni ek team bnana chahta hai jo intelligent & dangerous ho aur iss team ke dum par Sare underworld ka supreme banna chahta hai and supreme banne ke baad underworld ko apne anusaar run krna chahta hai. Ab tak ki story ko padh kar ye samjh aya hai ki 3.0 ke liye uske mission se jyada important kuch nhi hai , na family, na friends, na love nothing kuch bhi nhi. Lekin kya ye sach hai? Aur haan toh kitni?
Mujhe ache se yaad hai EMO and 3.0 ka conversation jab dono island par fans gye the and 3.0 ne hi EMO se kaha tha Red John ko India specifically Haryana me bhejne ke liye and Red John mara gya 1.0 ke hathon. Isi conversation me EMO ne sawaal kiya tha 3.0 se ki kya uske liye family, masters important nhi hai, kya wo family and friends ko bhi maar dega? Tab 3.0 ne kaha tha ki main pagal nhi hun jo kisi ko bhi maar dun . " 10000%..Main kissi ko bhi maar shakta hun but it depends waise he bina baat main meri family yaa masters ko nahi maarunga because main kitana bhi ruthless hun, hun toh unki wajah se he naa, then i respect them. But but but agar wohlog galat time par meri galat side par aagaye toh yes i will most probably end up hurting them too. But i dont think that'll happen.. But inke alawa koi bhi ho I'll most probably kill them.. But uske liye koi reason hona caahiye aise he bina baat kissi ko maarne mein utana maja nahi aata wahin mere pass reason ho toh it makes it fucking great. "
Aakhir aisa kya mission hai jiske kaaran 3.0 apni family ke khilaaf bhi jane ke liye ready hai? Mujhe yaad hai jab AP training mein tha us time 3.0 sari skills, knowledge, learning everything inside rehkar hi sikha tha. Aur jab wo pehli baar bahar aaya AP se pehle wale MOD Paul ko maarne ke liye tab sabko uss jaanwar ke bare mein pta chala tha except masters Mogui , Bovice & Norman becoz wo pehle se hi jaante the. Toh jab 3.0 andar hi andar itna sab jaan kar, research krke khud ko is kaabil bna sakta hai toh kahin ye toh nhi ki usi samay usse apne Father ke adhure sapne ke bare mein pta chala aur apne father ke adure sapne ko pura krna apna mission bna liya. Sayad main galat bhi ho skta hun but till now puri story se yahi ek point lgta hai jise 3.0 apne liye ek mission bna sakta hai - apne father ke adhure sapne ko pura krna. Toh agar 3.0 ke supreme banne se, uske khauf se underworld ke crime ya fir India mein crime rate kam hota hai, Toh fir ye khauf mujhe pasand hai.
Agar 3.0 ke darr se crime kam hota hai, innocent log safe rehte hain toh khauf acha hai. 3.0 ke darr se hi agar crime kam hota hai toh sahi hai kyuki crime is not a thing jise aap khatam kr sakte ho it's a thinking you can't end this but yes you can decrease the crime rate that's it what can we humans do, fir chahe wo darr se hi kyu na ho. Jaise for example bache exam mein fail hone ke darr se padhta hai, doston ke bich uska number sabse kam ayega iss darr se padhta hai jiska result sukhad hi hota hai. Kuch log apne izzat khone ke darr se koi galat kaam nhi krta hai. Toh kahin na kahin darr se agar kuch burayi kam hoti haitoh darr sach mein acha hai.


Review on Mannar :
Abhi tak story mein dino , Mike, pattrick, Vilas insabka sirf intro hi diya gya hai isiliye abhi sirf Mannar par hi review likh rha hun. Isme koi doubt nhu ki Mannar bahut hi ghatiya aur kutti chiz hai. Isne aate hi apna ghatiya kand suru kr diya jisme teen innocent maare gye jiske kaaran AP hath dho kar Mannar ke piche pad gya aur ye jaruri bhi tha. Lekin mujhe abhi tak ye samjh nhi aya ki AP iss chutiye ke trap mein fans kaise gya. Jo banda har situation ko samjh kr apna ek extra plan B ready rakhta hai wo iss mein fans kaise gya? Iss sawal ne mujhe pareshaan kiya hua hai. Lekin iske bavjud jis tarah se AP ne apni and Jack ki jaan bachayi wo sach mein tarif ke layak hai. Yahan par AP ne fir ye sabit kr diya wo kabhi bhi, kisi bhi situation mein apne team ko picche nhi chhodta. Aur ab isme koi sakk nhi ki AP mannar ka wo haal krega jo Dino and Mike ke sath Pattrick tak ko hila ke rakh dega. Pattrick ke intro k time ye btaya gya tha ki Pattrick apna khauf bnaye rakhne aur apna ego satisfy krne ke liye kabhi kabhi vvip's ki family member ka kidnapp kr leta hai toh aisa kyu lg rha hai ki Mannar ke baad uske boss AP ke kisi close one ko utha lega ya fir AP ke kisi close one ko hurt krega. Aosa bhi ho sakta hai ki Mannar ka badla lene ke liye wo AP ke kisi friend ka family member ko goli naa maar de. Agar aisa hota hai toh fir AP ke gusse ka saamna Vilash tak nhi kr payega aur fir 2.0 saamne ayega and we all know that 2.0 apne family and friends ke liye kisi ki bhi jaan lene se pehle ek baar bhi nhi sochega. Uske baad 2.0 tabhi rukega jab wo vilash ke pure samrajya ka the end kr chuka hoga kyuki hum sab jaante hain ki isme Deva bhai bhi AP ke sath honge kyuki " No one hurts my family and lives " Aur jab tak 2.0 rukega tab tak wo SD tak ko hila kr rakh dega.


Now some questions :
1.
Kya tiara clan abhi bhi AP par najar rakhe hue hai apna badla lene ke liye, kya tiara clan MOD ko bhul chuki hai ya fir bas moke ki talaash me hai ? moka mila aur MOD par attack kr diya. Mujhe aisa kyu lg rha hai ki tiara clan aage chal kr AP ke liye ek major issue ban skta hai ya fir kahin aisa toh nhi ki in future 2.0 tiara se bhi deal krega - " tiara ko help chahiye hoga kisi mission mein and MOD help krega with conditions that they will never go for his family " , something like this. Tiara ki wo lady agent jo AP par najar rakhe hue thi, kahin aisa toh nhi use hum readers jaante hain aur hume pta bhi nhi?


2. AP ka kehna hai ki jab tak AP ko wo nhi mil jata jo use chahiye tab tak wo underworld wapas nhi ayega apne mann se. Toh AP ko kya chahiye , Serpent of Underworld ki post ya fir Kevin ka badla ? Ya fir kuch aur jiska zikr ab tak story me hui hi nhi.


3. Kya AP ab bhi interested hai CBI se badla lene ke liye? Kyuki dekha jaye toh isme directly CBI ka koi hath nhi tha use to order diya gya tha AP ko criminal bnane ke liye. To Kya CBI chief Anjana, kirti , varsha, meera in sab ki wapasi ki koi umeed hai bhi ya nhi?


4. Nidhi pandey ke character ko jis tarah portrait kiya hai us hisab se kahin aisa toh nhi ki wo AP ke saamne ghutne tek de aur AP ki help kre in future then AP use SD se safe rakhne ke liye deal kre.


5. What about Ananya? Kya wo wapas story me ayegi? Agar haan toh kaise as AP's GF or only for side characters?

6. Jab 2.0 phan cartel walon ko search kr rha tha tab uska restaurent ke owner ke sath verbal fight hui thi jo koi ladki thi aur jis tarah se wo attitude show kr rhi thi toh kya wo aage chal kr koi new character add hone wali hai , koi most important? Ya fir wo bas fekne wali thi, lamba - lamba fek diya . Kya ye hamari hone wali bhabhi bhi ho sakti hai?


7. Kya Sheetal ki fir se wapsi hone ke chances hain?


8. Laxmi college roorki wale friends Neha, Mukesh, Vikash, Akshay in Sare character ko miss kr rha hun AP bhai. Ise kab wapas la rhe ho.


9. Sam, Ravi, Rohit, Abeer, Rishi, Ritika Mam, neha mam, Anjali, Jiya Pooja, Rajat, Deepak, Priyanka . Kya ye log single hi rahenge ya inko bhi mingle krne ki planning hai.


10. Kya ab AP ke kisi close one ke death ki koi chances hai? Aisa no ho toh jyada acha hai kyuki hum readers already Kevin ko bhul nhi pa rhe hain. Kisi aur member ka jana heart breaking hoga.


11. Harris and daemon ki entry kb rkwa rhe ho kyuki ye dono character kaafi interesting hai


12. And most important question, Deva bhai and Deepika bhabhi ko do se teen👨‍👩‍👧 kab bna rhe ho with girl baby? Really AP bhai main iska lambe samay se wait kr rha hun.


13. Kya ye story iss part me complete ho jayega ? kyuki ab tak around 280 updates ho chuka hai aur abhi tak story mein kuch khas nhi hua hai 2 ya 3 chizon ko chor kar. Abhi bahut kuch baki hai jaise Chloe ko safe krna, bovice ka mission, 3.0 ka mission, serpent of underworld, hamari official bhabhi ki entry, vilash se lakar SD tak ka the end, sudha chaudhry and balvant ka take down, Deva bhai ka PM banna ya central government banna, Kevin ka badla, Russian and American ko control mein rakhna and Russian minister ka task jiska AP ne wada kiya tha EMO ko prison se bahar nikalte wakt ki wo future mein uss female minster ki help krega. Mogui ki narajgi AP se hai usse bhi sahi krna hai, Kaafi kuch hona baki hai ya fir ye kehna jyada acha rahega ki abhi tak kuch bhi nhi hua hai . Toh fir ye story kaise iss part me complete ho sakti hai. Agar AP bhai issi part mein iss great story ko the end krna chahte hain toh ye part 1000+ updates tak jayega other wise next part suru krna hoga. Dekhte hain kya hota hai kyuki at the end of the day ye sab krna AP ko hi hai. So just read the story, enjoy the story and feel the story. That's what we readers can do.


And last thing , THANKS FOR THIS BEAUTIFUL , LOVELY & THRILLER STORY.
 

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AP 316 bro ek question h... Kya aap thoda explain kr skte ho ki bovice ka wo konsa mission h jiski story mei baat hui h.... Kyuki HCMC Vietnam Fuzhou etc kafi places ka jikr hua h.... Kya ye mission Chloe ko chudane ka h? Ya abhi iske bare m baad m khulasa hoga?

Also if anyone else know the answer please tell me
 

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First thanks a lot for this wonderful review. One of my favorite reviews of all time aise reviews mujhe or jyaada motivate kartey hain to write more and more. Now question answers kuch naam hain jo tum thode galat samjh gaye like Home minister ka naam Baldev Hai and all but motive sahi hai so no worries..
Kya tiara clan abhi bhi AP par najar rakhe hue hai apna badla lene ke liye, kya tiara clan MOD ko bhul chuki hai ya fir bas moke ki talaash me hai ? moka mila aur MOD par attack kr diya. Mujhe aisa kyu lg rha hai ki tiara clan aage chal kr AP ke liye ek major issue ban skta hai ya fir kahin aisa toh nhi ki in future 2.0 tiara se bhi deal krega - " tiara ko help chahiye hoga kisi mission mein and MOD help krega with conditions that they will never go for his family " , something like this. Tiara ki wo lady agent jo AP par najar rakhe hue thi, kahin aisa toh nhi use hum readers jaante hain aur hume pta bhi nhi?
Nahi Tiara clan currently AP se durr hochuka hai kyunki unki gand fatt gayi thi and maamla ab unki aukaat se Baahar ho chuka hai so filhaal Tiara ka koi role nahi hai but iska ye matlab nahi ki aage bhi nahi hoga maybe aajaaein aage yelog.


2. AP ka kehna hai ki jab tak AP ko wo nhi mil jata jo use chahiye tab tak wo underworld wapas nhi ayega apne mann se. Toh AP ko kya chahiye , Serpent of Underworld ki post ya fir Kevin ka badla ? Ya fir kuch aur jiska zikr ab tak story me hui hi nhi.
Secret batata hun :shhhh: Serpent ki post lene k baad he AP Kevin ki death ka badla le shakta hai.
3. Kya AP ab bhi interested hai CBI se badla lene ke liye? Kyuki dekha jaye toh isme directly CBI ka koi hath nhi tha use to order diya gya tha AP ko criminal bnane ke liye. To Kya CBI chief Anjana, kirti , varsha, meera in sab ki wapasi ki koi umeed hai bhi ya nhi?
AP kabhi kuch nahi bhullta toh yes badla still chaalu hai and yes ye sab log waapis aaenge.
Nidhi pandey ke character ko jis tarah portrait kiya hai us hisab se kahin aisa toh nhi ki wo AP ke saamne ghutne tek de aur AP ki help kre in future then AP use SD se safe rakhne ke liye deal kre.
Ye toh aage he pata chalega :D

5. What about Ananya? Kya wo wapas story me ayegi? Agar haan toh kaise as AP's GF or only for side characters?
Yes woh jarur waapis aaegi, kya banke aaegi woh secret hai.

Jab 2.0 phan cartel walon ko search kr rha tha tab uska restaurent ke owner ke sath verbal fight hui thi jo koi ladki thi aur jis tarah se wo attitude show kr rhi thi toh kya wo aage chal kr koi new character add hone wali hai , koi most important? Ya fir wo bas fekne wali thi, lamba - lamba fek diya . Kya ye hamari hone wali bhabhi bhi ho sakti hai?
Aivein he side character add kardiya tha she ain't coming back.
Kya Sheetal ki fir se wapsi hone ke chances hain?
Yes chances toh hain :approve:
Laxmi college roorki wale friends Neha, Mukesh, Vikash, Akshay in Sare character ko miss kr rha hun AP bhai. Ise kab wapas la rhe ho.
Most probably kabhi nahi aane waale wohlog as characters already bahot jyaada hain and unko or add karne pe khichdi ban jaaegi so nahi.
Sam, Ravi, Rohit, Abeer, Rishi, Ritika Mam, neha mam, Anjali, Jiya Pooja, Rajat, Deepak, Priyanka . Kya ye log single hi rahenge ya inko bhi mingle krne ki planning hai.
Mostly single yes.
Kya ab AP ke kisi close one ke death ki koi chances hai?
Yes kaafi high chances hain.
Harris and daemon ki entry kb rkwa rhe ho kyuki ye dono character kaafi interesting hai
Woh dono aage bahot important role play karenge story mein jaisa maine kaha main ek bahot bada plot change kar raha hun currently so soon story underworld ko taraf jaaegi so yes SAB KUCH BADALNE WAALA HAI.


And most important question, Deva bhai and Deepika bhabhi ko do se teen👨‍👩‍👧 kab bna rhe ho with girl baby? Really AP bhai main iska lambe samay se wait kr rha hun.
Honestly ye kabhi nahi hoga first main reason itani jyaada family bakchodi main khud handle nahi kar paaunga so no chance main aisa koi scenario banaaunga and secondly Underage characters allowed bhi nahi hain xf pe..
Kya ye story iss part me complete ho jayega ?
Well here is the thing story ko main tab khatam karunga jab mera mann bharr jaaega writing se ya main busy hojaaunga bahot jyaada toh story end karne ko main 10 updates mein kardun. Lekin filhaal maine iska ek or part fully plan kar rakha hai toh iff all is well iss story k 800-1000 updates baaki hain.

I hope i answered all your queries thanks for the wonderful review.
 

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AP 316 bro ek question h... Kya aap thoda explain kr skte ho ki bovice ka wo konsa mission h jiski story mei baat hui h.... Kyuki HCMC Vietnam Fuzhou etc kafi places ka jikr hua h.... Kya ye mission Chloe ko chudane ka h? Ya abhi iske bare m baad m khulasa hoga?

Also if anyone else know the answer please tell me
Yes mission Chloe k liye he hai bhai. :thanks:
 
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