Thriller WLHTA - The Serpent Of Underworld.

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[Surya_021]

Superb updates

 

[Lord xingbie]

Update-285(No Way) ​

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Manaar woh chaaku leke jhapta mere Uppar mere liye usase bachna easy tha kyunki as i said woh slow tha bahot jyaada slow, but mujhe careless nahi hona tha kyunki uska ek waar mera game over kar shakta tha.. Usne mujhe chaaku maarna caaha firse but mere pass jagah he jagah thi toh main easily bachta raha usase ab mera bhi stamina jawaab dene laga tha as main fully recovered nahi tha toh maine ab orr derr karna theek nahi samjha..


Jaise he usne mujhe chaaku maarna caaha main niche jukh kar usase bacha or niche se he punches diye uske pait mein jisase woh bokhla k piche hattne laga or iss bich maine maari laat uske pairon mein jisase woh ladkhadaake piche girra or uske girrtey he main uspe tutt padda usko behissab kicks dene laga woh chilaaya lekin kuch kar nahi paya usne khaddey hone ki koshish ki but uska bhaari bharkam sareer kuch harkat karta usase pehle main firse laat maar maar k niche girra deta usse uski ribs ka chura bana diya tha maine or woh chilaane k alawa kuch kar nahi paaraha tha but finally mujhe dhakka maarke usne uthna caaha Or abki baar maine uthne diya usse lekin uthne se pehle uske hath pe laat deke usase chaaku durr kardiya and woh khadda hota tab tak uska chaaku mere pass tha.. Woh apna khoon se bharra thobda leke utha or maine usko chaaku dikhate hue ek smile di abtak usse bhi realise ho chuka tha ki woh galat fans gaya tha. Jo woh hawa banata tha apni woh keval drugs they woh koi jaanwar nahi tha or aaj jab usse koi apni takkar kaa mill gaya tha toh uska saara ghamand tuttke girr chuka tha.. Udhar Max bhi nervous tha maine ishaare se Abeer ko uspe khaas dhyaan rakhne ko kaha and ab Manaar ko khatam karne aage badha, chaaku mere pass tha toh Manaar darr k maare piche hattne laga but maine piche jaane nahi diya or mera pehla cut laga uski chest mein woh chilaaya lekin agle he second uski awaaj bandh hogayi kyunki maine chaaku daag diya uski ribs mein chaaku jyaada nahi gaya but uski gand fatt gayi or usne mujhe dhakka deke khudse durr kiya and chaaku nikala uski ribs se, idhar main uske dhakke se niche girra but turant he jump maarke utha and Manaar pe jhapta woh apna ghaav dekhne mein busy tha ki abki baar chaaku maine uske pait mein daag diya woh bhi ache se woh pura chaaku uske pait mein gaya or ek he second mein waapis nikaala maine logon ki cheekhein nikal gayi or Manaar niche girra apne ghutano pe maine uska chaaku uske galle pe rakha or hanste hue Max ko ghurra usse pata tha ki agla number uska hai toh usne apni pistol bheed se hataake meri taraf karni caahi but Abeer kaa toh saara dhyaan he uski taraf tha jaise he usne gun hilaai Abeer ne maari goli uske hath k Uppar jo on point lagi and uski gun durr jaake giri..Maine Manaar ko ghurra uska saara nasha, khouff or ghamand gayab ho chuka tha..


Main-Tujhe bhi wahi kahunga jo aajtak tujh jaise saikdon jaanwaron ko kaha tha, tu hoga jaanwar but I am A fucking beast... Goodbye.


Ye bolke maine chaaku uski gardan par chalaadiya and Manaar ki lifeless body niche girri orr maine chaaku niche daala.. Finally bhenchod itane din dukhi karne k baad Manaar kaa game over hua and Max bhi mill gaya.. Main khuss 2.0 bhi khuss mujhe Mera shikaar Manaar mill gaya usse Max mill jaaega agar usse caahiye hoga toh.. Main Max ki taraf gaya toh woh niche padda tha apne hath ko dabaaye hue.. Mere wahaan jaate he usne hath jod liye...


Max-Pppll.. Ppplease... Mujhe matt maaro.. Main sab bata dunga tumhe jo jo main jaanta hun.. Please mujhe matt maaro..


Main-Tujhe kon maar raha haibe.. Tujhe koi nahi maar shakta bc tujhe pata nahi hai Kitana lucky hai tu well unlucky hai tu kuch bhi lagaale but tujhe koi nahi maarne walaa.. Teri moutt bc out of the world hone waali hai tu special hai tujhe nahi pata but tu special hai bahot special.. You have no idea.. Ab dhyaan se sun jitana jaldi ho shake utana jaldi ye sehar ye state ye region he chhod dey.. Main toh kehraha hun desh chhod dey bhenchod gayab hojaa.. Yahaan se jitana durr jaaega utana behtar hai tere liye.. Samjha?? Jaa bhosdk ab..


Max-Mmm. Maain.. Nahi jaaunga.. Goli maardoge bhaagunga toh..


Main-Arrey bhosdk goli he maarni hoti toh abhi hath pe maari woh teri khopdi mein bhi toh maar shaktey they tujhe bawligand.. Main majaak nahi kar raha be tu bach gaya nahi maar raha tujhe main.. Chala jaa.. Haryana se jitana durr ho shake utana durr chala jaa..


Max-Lekin mujhe kyun jaane derahe ho tum??


Main-Lo.. Arrey maadarchod.. Sawaal kya kar raha hai.. Khusi mana maadarchod jo tu jinda bach raha hai.. Bada aaya KBC Khelne waala.. Idhar baaju mein ek clinic hai chal pehle tere hath ka ilaaj karwadeta hun fir chala jaaiyo..


Ye sunke usne mujhe firse ghurra..


Main - Ghurr kya raha haibe jaa bhosdk..


"Well unfortunately Mr AP woh kahin nahi jaane waala.."


Ye awaaj sunte he meri khopdi ghum gayi, kyunki ye maadarchod Shruti ki awaaj thi NCB waali Shruti ki main piche mudda toh woh apni puri team k sath wahaan khaddi thi..


Shruti - Thanks for the help in taking Manaar down.. Isko hum sambhaal lenge ab..


Main-Oh no no no.. No.. Isko koi nahi sambhaalega.. No way in hell.. Ye mera banda hai or ye yahaan se nikal jaaega..


Shruti - Well sorry to disappoint AP sir but humaare pass Manaar se related harr culprit ko arrest karne ka warrant hai, ye dekho.. So you like it or not ye humaare sath jaaega..


No fucking way bhenchod, maadarchod chance he naa hai jo inhe lejaane dunga main Max ko bhenchod ye jaake daal denge apni jail mein fir 2.0 aaega or in sabki gand maarke isko leke jaaega.. No fucking way, gand toh meri marregi usme.. 2.0 in sabko maardega jo uske or Max k bichmein aaenge.. Chance he naa hai..No Fucking way..


Continued..

great update bro
aakhir mannar ko baja baja kar khun bahakar uske hi chaku se upar pahuncha diya
ab max ko bhagana hai but ye shruti kaha se pahunchi agar ye le gayi max ko to badi gadbad ho jayegi
sambhal le bhai nahi to bada kand ho jayega
keep writing

 

[Sweetkaran]

Update-284(Manaar) ​

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Main, Vinny, Ami or Abeer, Max or Manaar k piche bhaag rahe they i know Manaar inka boss tha lekin mere liye important Max tha kyunki Max k Uppar ek thappa laga tha ki woh 2.0 ka shikaar hai or mujhe usse yahaan se jaane dena tha, mujhse jitana durr ho shake utana durr bhejdene waala tha Max ko main.. Mujhe ye bhi pata tha main usse kahin bhejdun usse 2.0 dhund he lega jo theek tha agar woh yahaan se durr hoga toh 2.0 uske sath kuch bhi kare bus mera naam nahi aana chahiye bus mujhe yahi chinta thi isliye he main Max ko pakkadke jail mein bhi nahi daalne waala tha kyunki 2.0 ka koi bharosa nahi maadarchod aake usko Jail se bhagaake thokdega jisme saikdon log marrenge or mera naam aaega woh alag ....


Manaar or Max ek sath bhaag rahe they woh smart they woh alag nahi hona caah rahe they but kabtak bhaag shaktey they woh, main injured tha beshak but no way wohlog Ami Abeer or Vinny se jyada derr bhaag shaktey they or wahi horaha tha Vinny Abeer or Ami just unke piche they, main thoda piche tha, ye baat unhe bhi samjh aagayi thi Issliye wohlog aage jaake rukk gaye they, humlog bajaar se bahaar aagaye they or yahaan ikka dukka log he they, jyaada bheed nahi thi.. Wohlog Abeer se koi baat kar rahe they jo mujhe sunaai nahi diya as main kaafi piche tha main aage aaya toh scene clear hua Manaar k pass banduk thi jo ussne Abeer wagairaah k Uppar taan rakhi thi or idhar se Abeer Ami or Vinny ne apni apni gun Max or Manaar pe taan rakhi thi..


Main-Kya hua be??


Abeer-Deal derahe hain sahaab humein..


Main-Deal?? Kaisi deal?


Abeer-Tujhse fight karni hai one vs one..


Manaar-Kya hua darr gaya?? Maine humesha kahaa hai ye bandukk wandukk mera kaam nahi hai main mard ki tarah ladta hun..


Main-Hehehe.. Bhosdk humaari teen banduk teri ek banduk tu trigger dabaaega usase pehle do baar thokdenge tujhe , 2 baar tujhe harra chuka hun main already or ab tujhe mard banana hai bhosdk..


Manaar- Mujhe pata tha tu nahi maanega, darrpok jo thehra dekh mujhe toh marrna hai itane log hain yahaan ek aadh ko or thok dunga jaate jaate..


Main-Inhone tera kya bigada haibe bawligand...


Manaar-Kuch nahi.. Nothing personal..Maine Tv pe bola tha ki main tujhe haraake rahunga or wahi hoga mujhe pata hai tu in logon ko kuch hone nahi dega..


Ye bolke usne apni bandukk bheed ki tarar kardi..


Vinny-Bhai thok dein??


Main-Trigger toh daba he dega woh tab tak or maadarchod ye jaanwar apni ek goli mein thodi marega khopdi mein lage naa lage itani durr or marrne se pehle kai masoom logon ko le jaaega..


Abeer - No way tu fight karega isase.. Injured hai tu bc..


Main-Well utana bhi nahi.. Or waise bhi isne mujhe challenge kiya tha national television pe toh main aise he toh jaane dunga nahi isse.. Or yahaan toh bc log dekh rahe hain sabke samne maarunga dalle ko..


Abeer-Ye jyaada hua toh main isse bichmein he thok dunga..


Main-Uski nobat nahi aaegi just wait and watch.. Ye jaanwar hai toh main kon hun ye tumhe pata he hai..


Manaae-Dekh rahe ho tumlog tumhari kitani fikar hai isse Tumhaari jaan bachaane k liye khud moutt k munh mein aaraha hai..


Usne bheed ko dekhte hue kaha or bheed ko mujhpe itana bharosa tha ki koi hill takk nahi raha tha wahan se kyunki unhe pata tha main kon hun or kyun hun..


Main - Ye caahiye toh ye sahi..


Ye bolke main aage aaya jisse dekh Manaar hansa or usne apni bandukk Max ko di or usne woh bandukk bheed ki taraf he rakhi..


Main - (Aaram se). Bhosdko dhyaan rakhna Max marrna nahi caahiye warna tumhari gand marr jaaegi..


Ye bolke main aage aaya or udhar se Manaar mere saamne aaya woh sachmuch jaanwar tha bhenchod mujhse toh double lag raha tha woh size mein but size he sabkuch nahi hota.. Obviously isse harra dunga main, najaane aise kitane he jaanwar main Uppar pohancha chuka tha.. Sawaal yahaan ye tha ki isko Kitana jaldi haraaunga main,kyunki main injured tha or main isko jyaada derr dene waala nahi tha..


Manaar ne pehli harkat ki or woh meri taraf jhapta jisase mujhe uski pehli kamjori milli jo thi woh bahot jyaada slow tha jitana bada sareer utana he slow woh tha or main uski issi kamjori k Uppar baithke usse maardunga.. Usne mujhe punches jaddne caahe but main piche yaa side hoke bach gaya unse easily or tab tak bachta he raha jabtak woh thakne naa laga, kuch he minutes mein woh slow hogaya tha, meri tarah ye bhi bhayanak drugs leta tha but meri tarah Iski body drugs ko accept nahi kar rahi thi jiss wajah se ye andar se khokhla tha jo ek minute k andar he thakk gaya..


Main - My turn..


Ye bolke main ab jhapta uspe ab woh piche hattne laga kuch derr toh woh bacha but main rukka nahi and pehla punch laga mera and uske baad maine usko ek k baad ek kai punches jadde jisase woh bokhla k piche hatta or waapis gusse mein mujhpe jhapta but main firse bacha or ulta usko punch jadd diya bus ab uska khoon kholl utha or usne apne piche se wahi bada saa chaaku nikaala jisase usne mujhe maarne ki dhamki di thi tv pe..


Main-Galat jagah aake galat kaam karke galat bandey k saamne aagaya beta yahaan se bus ek he raasta hai tere pass jo seedha Uppar lejaaega tujhe..


Continued..

Awesome update bro

 

[Sidd19]

Awesome update bhai

 

[Sweetkaran]

Update-285(No Way) ​

285


Manaar woh chaaku leke jhapta mere Uppar mere liye usase bachna easy tha kyunki as i said woh slow tha bahot jyaada slow, but mujhe careless nahi hona tha kyunki uska ek waar mera game over kar shakta tha.. Usne mujhe chaaku maarna caaha firse but mere pass jagah he jagah thi toh main easily bachta raha usase ab mera bhi stamina jawaab dene laga tha as main fully recovered nahi tha toh maine ab orr derr karna theek nahi samjha..


Jaise he usne mujhe chaaku maarna caaha main niche jukh kar usase bacha or niche se he punches diye uske pait mein jisase woh bokhla k piche hattne laga or iss bich maine maari laat uske pairon mein jisase woh ladkhadaake piche girra or uske girrtey he main uspe tutt padda usko behissab kicks dene laga woh chilaaya lekin kuch kar nahi paya usne khaddey hone ki koshish ki but uska bhaari bharkam sareer kuch harkat karta usase pehle main firse laat maar maar k niche girra deta usse uski ribs ka chura bana diya tha maine or woh chilaane k alawa kuch kar nahi paaraha tha but finally mujhe dhakka maarke usne uthna caaha Or abki baar maine uthne diya usse lekin uthne se pehle uske hath pe laat deke usase chaaku durr kardiya and woh khadda hota tab tak uska chaaku mere pass tha.. Woh apna khoon se bharra thobda leke utha or maine usko chaaku dikhate hue ek smile di abtak usse bhi realise ho chuka tha ki woh galat fans gaya tha. Jo woh hawa banata tha apni woh keval drugs they woh koi jaanwar nahi tha or aaj jab usse koi apni takkar kaa mill gaya tha toh uska saara ghamand tuttke girr chuka tha.. Udhar Max bhi nervous tha maine ishaare se Abeer ko uspe khaas dhyaan rakhne ko kaha and ab Manaar ko khatam karne aage badha, chaaku mere pass tha toh Manaar darr k maare piche hattne laga but maine piche jaane nahi diya or mera pehla cut laga uski chest mein woh chilaaya lekin agle he second uski awaaj bandh hogayi kyunki maine chaaku daag diya uski ribs mein chaaku jyaada nahi gaya but uski gand fatt gayi or usne mujhe dhakka deke khudse durr kiya and chaaku nikala uski ribs se, idhar main uske dhakke se niche girra but turant he jump maarke utha and Manaar pe jhapta woh apna ghaav dekhne mein busy tha ki abki baar chaaku maine uske pait mein daag diya woh bhi ache se woh pura chaaku uske pait mein gaya or ek he second mein waapis nikaala maine logon ki cheekhein nikal gayi or Manaar niche girra apne ghutano pe maine uska chaaku uske galle pe rakha or hanste hue Max ko ghurra usse pata tha ki agla number uska hai toh usne apni pistol bheed se hataake meri taraf karni caahi but Abeer kaa toh saara dhyaan he uski taraf tha jaise he usne gun hilaai Abeer ne maari goli uske hath k Uppar jo on point lagi and uski gun durr jaake giri..Maine Manaar ko ghurra uska saara nasha, khouff or ghamand gayab ho chuka tha..


Main-Tujhe bhi wahi kahunga jo aajtak tujh jaise saikdon jaanwaron ko kaha tha, tu hoga jaanwar but I am A fucking beast... Goodbye.


Ye bolke maine chaaku uski gardan par chalaadiya and Manaar ki lifeless body niche girri orr maine chaaku niche daala.. Finally bhenchod itane din dukhi karne k baad Manaar kaa game over hua and Max bhi mill gaya.. Main khuss 2.0 bhi khuss mujhe Mera shikaar Manaar mill gaya usse Max mill jaaega agar usse caahiye hoga toh.. Main Max ki taraf gaya toh woh niche padda tha apne hath ko dabaaye hue.. Mere wahaan jaate he usne hath jod liye...


Max-Pppll.. Ppplease... Mujhe matt maaro.. Main sab bata dunga tumhe jo jo main jaanta hun.. Please mujhe matt maaro..


Main-Tujhe kon maar raha haibe.. Tujhe koi nahi maar shakta bc tujhe pata nahi hai Kitana lucky hai tu well unlucky hai tu kuch bhi lagaale but tujhe koi nahi maarne walaa.. Teri moutt bc out of the world hone waali hai tu special hai tujhe nahi pata but tu special hai bahot special.. You have no idea.. Ab dhyaan se sun jitana jaldi ho shake utana jaldi ye sehar ye state ye region he chhod dey.. Main toh kehraha hun desh chhod dey bhenchod gayab hojaa.. Yahaan se jitana durr jaaega utana behtar hai tere liye.. Samjha?? Jaa bhosdk ab..


Max-Mmm. Maain.. Nahi jaaunga.. Goli maardoge bhaagunga toh..


Main-Arrey bhosdk goli he maarni hoti toh abhi hath pe maari woh teri khopdi mein bhi toh maar shaktey they tujhe bawligand.. Main majaak nahi kar raha be tu bach gaya nahi maar raha tujhe main.. Chala jaa.. Haryana se jitana durr ho shake utana durr chala jaa..


Max-Lekin mujhe kyun jaane derahe ho tum??


Main-Lo.. Arrey maadarchod.. Sawaal kya kar raha hai.. Khusi mana maadarchod jo tu jinda bach raha hai.. Bada aaya KBC Khelne waala.. Idhar baaju mein ek clinic hai chal pehle tere hath ka ilaaj karwadeta hun fir chala jaaiyo..


Ye sunke usne mujhe firse ghurra..


Main - Ghurr kya raha haibe jaa bhosdk..


"Well unfortunately Mr AP woh kahin nahi jaane waala.."


Ye awaaj sunte he meri khopdi ghum gayi, kyunki ye maadarchod Shruti ki awaaj thi NCB waali Shruti ki main piche mudda toh woh apni puri team k sath wahaan khaddi thi..


Shruti - Thanks for the help in taking Manaar down.. Isko hum sambhaal lenge ab..


Main-Oh no no no.. No.. Isko koi nahi sambhaalega.. No way in hell.. Ye mera banda hai or ye yahaan se nikal jaaega..


Shruti - Well sorry to disappoint AP sir but humaare pass Manaar se related harr culprit ko arrest karne ka warrant hai, ye dekho.. So you like it or not ye humaare sath jaaega..


No fucking way bhenchod, maadarchod chance he naa hai jo inhe lejaane dunga main Max ko bhenchod ye jaake daal denge apni jail mein fir 2.0 aaega or in sabki gand maarke isko leke jaaega.. No fucking way, gand toh meri marregi usme.. 2.0 in sabko maardega jo uske or Max k bichmein aaenge.. Chance he naa hai..No Fucking way..


Continued..

Awesome fabulous update bro

 

[Janu002]

Nice update

 

[Ahsan Ali]

Update-285(No Way) ​

285


Manaar woh chaaku leke jhapta mere Uppar mere liye usase bachna easy tha kyunki as i said woh slow tha bahot jyaada slow, but mujhe careless nahi hona tha kyunki uska ek waar mera game over kar shakta tha.. Usne mujhe chaaku maarna caaha firse but mere pass jagah he jagah thi toh main easily bachta raha usase ab mera bhi stamina jawaab dene laga tha as main fully recovered nahi tha toh maine ab orr derr karna theek nahi samjha..


Jaise he usne mujhe chaaku maarna caaha main niche jukh kar usase bacha or niche se he punches diye uske pait mein jisase woh bokhla k piche hattne laga or iss bich maine maari laat uske pairon mein jisase woh ladkhadaake piche girra or uske girrtey he main uspe tutt padda usko behissab kicks dene laga woh chilaaya lekin kuch kar nahi paya usne khaddey hone ki koshish ki but uska bhaari bharkam sareer kuch harkat karta usase pehle main firse laat maar maar k niche girra deta usse uski ribs ka chura bana diya tha maine or woh chilaane k alawa kuch kar nahi paaraha tha but finally mujhe dhakka maarke usne uthna caaha Or abki baar maine uthne diya usse lekin uthne se pehle uske hath pe laat deke usase chaaku durr kardiya and woh khadda hota tab tak uska chaaku mere pass tha.. Woh apna khoon se bharra thobda leke utha or maine usko chaaku dikhate hue ek smile di abtak usse bhi realise ho chuka tha ki woh galat fans gaya tha. Jo woh hawa banata tha apni woh keval drugs they woh koi jaanwar nahi tha or aaj jab usse koi apni takkar kaa mill gaya tha toh uska saara ghamand tuttke girr chuka tha.. Udhar Max bhi nervous tha maine ishaare se Abeer ko uspe khaas dhyaan rakhne ko kaha and ab Manaar ko khatam karne aage badha, chaaku mere pass tha toh Manaar darr k maare piche hattne laga but maine piche jaane nahi diya or mera pehla cut laga uski chest mein woh chilaaya lekin agle he second uski awaaj bandh hogayi kyunki maine chaaku daag diya uski ribs mein chaaku jyaada nahi gaya but uski gand fatt gayi or usne mujhe dhakka deke khudse durr kiya and chaaku nikala uski ribs se, idhar main uske dhakke se niche girra but turant he jump maarke utha and Manaar pe jhapta woh apna ghaav dekhne mein busy tha ki abki baar chaaku maine uske pait mein daag diya woh bhi ache se woh pura chaaku uske pait mein gaya or ek he second mein waapis nikaala maine logon ki cheekhein nikal gayi or Manaar niche girra apne ghutano pe maine uska chaaku uske galle pe rakha or hanste hue Max ko ghurra usse pata tha ki agla number uska hai toh usne apni pistol bheed se hataake meri taraf karni caahi but Abeer kaa toh saara dhyaan he uski taraf tha jaise he usne gun hilaai Abeer ne maari goli uske hath k Uppar jo on point lagi and uski gun durr jaake giri..Maine Manaar ko ghurra uska saara nasha, khouff or ghamand gayab ho chuka tha..


Main-Tujhe bhi wahi kahunga jo aajtak tujh jaise saikdon jaanwaron ko kaha tha, tu hoga jaanwar but I am A fucking beast... Goodbye.


Ye bolke maine chaaku uski gardan par chalaadiya and Manaar ki lifeless body niche girri orr maine chaaku niche daala.. Finally bhenchod itane din dukhi karne k baad Manaar kaa game over hua and Max bhi mill gaya.. Main khuss 2.0 bhi khuss mujhe Mera shikaar Manaar mill gaya usse Max mill jaaega agar usse caahiye hoga toh.. Main Max ki taraf gaya toh woh niche padda tha apne hath ko dabaaye hue.. Mere wahaan jaate he usne hath jod liye...


Max-Pppll.. Ppplease... Mujhe matt maaro.. Main sab bata dunga tumhe jo jo main jaanta hun.. Please mujhe matt maaro..


Main-Tujhe kon maar raha haibe.. Tujhe koi nahi maar shakta bc tujhe pata nahi hai Kitana lucky hai tu well unlucky hai tu kuch bhi lagaale but tujhe koi nahi maarne walaa.. Teri moutt bc out of the world hone waali hai tu special hai tujhe nahi pata but tu special hai bahot special.. You have no idea.. Ab dhyaan se sun jitana jaldi ho shake utana jaldi ye sehar ye state ye region he chhod dey.. Main toh kehraha hun desh chhod dey bhenchod gayab hojaa.. Yahaan se jitana durr jaaega utana behtar hai tere liye.. Samjha?? Jaa bhosdk ab..


Max-Mmm. Maain.. Nahi jaaunga.. Goli maardoge bhaagunga toh..


Main-Arrey bhosdk goli he maarni hoti toh abhi hath pe maari woh teri khopdi mein bhi toh maar shaktey they tujhe bawligand.. Main majaak nahi kar raha be tu bach gaya nahi maar raha tujhe main.. Chala jaa.. Haryana se jitana durr ho shake utana durr chala jaa..


Max-Lekin mujhe kyun jaane derahe ho tum??


Main-Lo.. Arrey maadarchod.. Sawaal kya kar raha hai.. Khusi mana maadarchod jo tu jinda bach raha hai.. Bada aaya KBC Khelne waala.. Idhar baaju mein ek clinic hai chal pehle tere hath ka ilaaj karwadeta hun fir chala jaaiyo..


Ye sunke usne mujhe firse ghurra..


Main - Ghurr kya raha haibe jaa bhosdk..


"Well unfortunately Mr AP woh kahin nahi jaane waala.."


Ye awaaj sunte he meri khopdi ghum gayi, kyunki ye maadarchod Shruti ki awaaj thi NCB waali Shruti ki main piche mudda toh woh apni puri team k sath wahaan khaddi thi..


Shruti - Thanks for the help in taking Manaar down.. Isko hum sambhaal lenge ab..


Main-Oh no no no.. No.. Isko koi nahi sambhaalega.. No way in hell.. Ye mera banda hai or ye yahaan se nikal jaaega..


Shruti - Well sorry to disappoint AP sir but humaare pass Manaar se related harr culprit ko arrest karne ka warrant hai, ye dekho.. So you like it or not ye humaare sath jaaega..


No fucking way bhenchod, maadarchod chance he naa hai jo inhe lejaane dunga main Max ko bhenchod ye jaake daal denge apni jail mein fir 2.0 aaega or in sabki gand maarke isko leke jaaega.. No fucking way, gand toh meri marregi usme.. 2.0 in sabko maardega jo uske or Max k bichmein aaenge.. Chance he naa hai..No Fucking way..


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Good update

 

[only_me]

Update-284(Manaar) ​

284


Main, Vinny, Ami or Abeer, Max or Manaar k piche bhaag rahe they i know Manaar inka boss tha lekin mere liye important Max tha kyunki Max k Uppar ek thappa laga tha ki woh 2.0 ka shikaar hai or mujhe usse yahaan se jaane dena tha, mujhse jitana durr ho shake utana durr bhejdene waala tha Max ko main.. Mujhe ye bhi pata tha main usse kahin bhejdun usse 2.0 dhund he lega jo theek tha agar woh yahaan se durr hoga toh 2.0 uske sath kuch bhi kare bus mera naam nahi aana chahiye bus mujhe yahi chinta thi isliye he main Max ko pakkadke jail mein bhi nahi daalne waala tha kyunki 2.0 ka koi bharosa nahi maadarchod aake usko Jail se bhagaake thokdega jisme saikdon log marrenge or mera naam aaega woh alag ....


Manaar or Max ek sath bhaag rahe they woh smart they woh alag nahi hona caah rahe they but kabtak bhaag shaktey they woh, main injured tha beshak but no way wohlog Ami Abeer or Vinny se jyada derr bhaag shaktey they or wahi horaha tha Vinny Abeer or Ami just unke piche they, main thoda piche tha, ye baat unhe bhi samjh aagayi thi Issliye wohlog aage jaake rukk gaye they, humlog bajaar se bahaar aagaye they or yahaan ikka dukka log he they, jyaada bheed nahi thi.. Wohlog Abeer se koi baat kar rahe they jo mujhe sunaai nahi diya as main kaafi piche tha main aage aaya toh scene clear hua Manaar k pass banduk thi jo ussne Abeer wagairaah k Uppar taan rakhi thi or idhar se Abeer Ami or Vinny ne apni apni gun Max or Manaar pe taan rakhi thi..


Main-Kya hua be??


Abeer-Deal derahe hain sahaab humein..


Main-Deal?? Kaisi deal?


Abeer-Tujhse fight karni hai one vs one..


Manaar-Kya hua darr gaya?? Maine humesha kahaa hai ye bandukk wandukk mera kaam nahi hai main mard ki tarah ladta hun..


Main-Hehehe.. Bhosdk humaari teen banduk teri ek banduk tu trigger dabaaega usase pehle do baar thokdenge tujhe , 2 baar tujhe harra chuka hun main already or ab tujhe mard banana hai bhosdk..


Manaar- Mujhe pata tha tu nahi maanega, darrpok jo thehra dekh mujhe toh marrna hai itane log hain yahaan ek aadh ko or thok dunga jaate jaate..


Main-Inhone tera kya bigada haibe bawligand...


Manaar-Kuch nahi.. Nothing personal..Maine Tv pe bola tha ki main tujhe haraake rahunga or wahi hoga mujhe pata hai tu in logon ko kuch hone nahi dega..


Ye bolke usne apni bandukk bheed ki tarar kardi..


Vinny-Bhai thok dein??


Main-Trigger toh daba he dega woh tab tak or maadarchod ye jaanwar apni ek goli mein thodi marega khopdi mein lage naa lage itani durr or marrne se pehle kai masoom logon ko le jaaega..


Abeer - No way tu fight karega isase.. Injured hai tu bc..


Main-Well utana bhi nahi.. Or waise bhi isne mujhe challenge kiya tha national television pe toh main aise he toh jaane dunga nahi isse.. Or yahaan toh bc log dekh rahe hain sabke samne maarunga dalle ko..


Abeer-Ye jyaada hua toh main isse bichmein he thok dunga..


Main-Uski nobat nahi aaegi just wait and watch.. Ye jaanwar hai toh main kon hun ye tumhe pata he hai..


Manaae-Dekh rahe ho tumlog tumhari kitani fikar hai isse Tumhaari jaan bachaane k liye khud moutt k munh mein aaraha hai..


Usne bheed ko dekhte hue kaha or bheed ko mujhpe itana bharosa tha ki koi hill takk nahi raha tha wahan se kyunki unhe pata tha main kon hun or kyun hun..


Main - Ye caahiye toh ye sahi..


Ye bolke main aage aaya jisse dekh Manaar hansa or usne apni bandukk Max ko di or usne woh bandukk bheed ki taraf he rakhi..


Main - (Aaram se). Bhosdko dhyaan rakhna Max marrna nahi caahiye warna tumhari gand marr jaaegi..


Ye bolke main aage aaya or udhar se Manaar mere saamne aaya woh sachmuch jaanwar tha bhenchod mujhse toh double lag raha tha woh size mein but size he sabkuch nahi hota.. Obviously isse harra dunga main, najaane aise kitane he jaanwar main Uppar pohancha chuka tha.. Sawaal yahaan ye tha ki isko Kitana jaldi haraaunga main,kyunki main injured tha or main isko jyaada derr dene waala nahi tha..


Manaar ne pehli harkat ki or woh meri taraf jhapta jisase mujhe uski pehli kamjori milli jo thi woh bahot jyaada slow tha jitana bada sareer utana he slow woh tha or main uski issi kamjori k Uppar baithke usse maardunga.. Usne mujhe punches jaddne caahe but main piche yaa side hoke bach gaya unse easily or tab tak bachta he raha jabtak woh thakne naa laga, kuch he minutes mein woh slow hogaya tha, meri tarah ye bhi bhayanak drugs leta tha but meri tarah Iski body drugs ko accept nahi kar rahi thi jiss wajah se ye andar se khokhla tha jo ek minute k andar he thakk gaya..


Main - My turn..


Ye bolke main ab jhapta uspe ab woh piche hattne laga kuch derr toh woh bacha but main rukka nahi and pehla punch laga mera and uske baad maine usko ek k baad ek kai punches jadde jisase woh bokhla k piche hatta or waapis gusse mein mujhpe jhapta but main firse bacha or ulta usko punch jadd diya bus ab uska khoon kholl utha or usne apne piche se wahi bada saa chaaku nikaala jisase usne mujhe maarne ki dhamki di thi tv pe..


Main-Galat jagah aake galat kaam karke galat bandey k saamne aagaya beta yahaan se bus ek he raasta hai tere pass jo seedha Uppar lejaaega tujhe..


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Update-285(No Way) ​

285


Manaar woh chaaku leke jhapta mere Uppar mere liye usase bachna easy tha kyunki as i said woh slow tha bahot jyaada slow, but mujhe careless nahi hona tha kyunki uska ek waar mera game over kar shakta tha.. Usne mujhe chaaku maarna caaha firse but mere pass jagah he jagah thi toh main easily bachta raha usase ab mera bhi stamina jawaab dene laga tha as main fully recovered nahi tha toh maine ab orr derr karna theek nahi samjha..


Jaise he usne mujhe chaaku maarna caaha main niche jukh kar usase bacha or niche se he punches diye uske pait mein jisase woh bokhla k piche hattne laga or iss bich maine maari laat uske pairon mein jisase woh ladkhadaake piche girra or uske girrtey he main uspe tutt padda usko behissab kicks dene laga woh chilaaya lekin kuch kar nahi paya usne khaddey hone ki koshish ki but uska bhaari bharkam sareer kuch harkat karta usase pehle main firse laat maar maar k niche girra deta usse uski ribs ka chura bana diya tha maine or woh chilaane k alawa kuch kar nahi paaraha tha but finally mujhe dhakka maarke usne uthna caaha Or abki baar maine uthne diya usse lekin uthne se pehle uske hath pe laat deke usase chaaku durr kardiya and woh khadda hota tab tak uska chaaku mere pass tha.. Woh apna khoon se bharra thobda leke utha or maine usko chaaku dikhate hue ek smile di abtak usse bhi realise ho chuka tha ki woh galat fans gaya tha. Jo woh hawa banata tha apni woh keval drugs they woh koi jaanwar nahi tha or aaj jab usse koi apni takkar kaa mill gaya tha toh uska saara ghamand tuttke girr chuka tha.. Udhar Max bhi nervous tha maine ishaare se Abeer ko uspe khaas dhyaan rakhne ko kaha and ab Manaar ko khatam karne aage badha, chaaku mere pass tha toh Manaar darr k maare piche hattne laga but maine piche jaane nahi diya or mera pehla cut laga uski chest mein woh chilaaya lekin agle he second uski awaaj bandh hogayi kyunki maine chaaku daag diya uski ribs mein chaaku jyaada nahi gaya but uski gand fatt gayi or usne mujhe dhakka deke khudse durr kiya and chaaku nikala uski ribs se, idhar main uske dhakke se niche girra but turant he jump maarke utha and Manaar pe jhapta woh apna ghaav dekhne mein busy tha ki abki baar chaaku maine uske pait mein daag diya woh bhi ache se woh pura chaaku uske pait mein gaya or ek he second mein waapis nikaala maine logon ki cheekhein nikal gayi or Manaar niche girra apne ghutano pe maine uska chaaku uske galle pe rakha or hanste hue Max ko ghurra usse pata tha ki agla number uska hai toh usne apni pistol bheed se hataake meri taraf karni caahi but Abeer kaa toh saara dhyaan he uski taraf tha jaise he usne gun hilaai Abeer ne maari goli uske hath k Uppar jo on point lagi and uski gun durr jaake giri..Maine Manaar ko ghurra uska saara nasha, khouff or ghamand gayab ho chuka tha..


Main-Tujhe bhi wahi kahunga jo aajtak tujh jaise saikdon jaanwaron ko kaha tha, tu hoga jaanwar but I am A fucking beast... Goodbye.


Ye bolke maine chaaku uski gardan par chalaadiya and Manaar ki lifeless body niche girri orr maine chaaku niche daala.. Finally bhenchod itane din dukhi karne k baad Manaar kaa game over hua and Max bhi mill gaya.. Main khuss 2.0 bhi khuss mujhe Mera shikaar Manaar mill gaya usse Max mill jaaega agar usse caahiye hoga toh.. Main Max ki taraf gaya toh woh niche padda tha apne hath ko dabaaye hue.. Mere wahaan jaate he usne hath jod liye...


Max-Pppll.. Ppplease... Mujhe matt maaro.. Main sab bata dunga tumhe jo jo main jaanta hun.. Please mujhe matt maaro..


Main-Tujhe kon maar raha haibe.. Tujhe koi nahi maar shakta bc tujhe pata nahi hai Kitana lucky hai tu well unlucky hai tu kuch bhi lagaale but tujhe koi nahi maarne walaa.. Teri moutt bc out of the world hone waali hai tu special hai tujhe nahi pata but tu special hai bahot special.. You have no idea.. Ab dhyaan se sun jitana jaldi ho shake utana jaldi ye sehar ye state ye region he chhod dey.. Main toh kehraha hun desh chhod dey bhenchod gayab hojaa.. Yahaan se jitana durr jaaega utana behtar hai tere liye.. Samjha?? Jaa bhosdk ab..


Max-Mmm. Maain.. Nahi jaaunga.. Goli maardoge bhaagunga toh..


Main-Arrey bhosdk goli he maarni hoti toh abhi hath pe maari woh teri khopdi mein bhi toh maar shaktey they tujhe bawligand.. Main majaak nahi kar raha be tu bach gaya nahi maar raha tujhe main.. Chala jaa.. Haryana se jitana durr ho shake utana durr chala jaa..


Max-Lekin mujhe kyun jaane derahe ho tum??


Main-Lo.. Arrey maadarchod.. Sawaal kya kar raha hai.. Khusi mana maadarchod jo tu jinda bach raha hai.. Bada aaya KBC Khelne waala.. Idhar baaju mein ek clinic hai chal pehle tere hath ka ilaaj karwadeta hun fir chala jaaiyo..


Ye sunke usne mujhe firse ghurra..


Main - Ghurr kya raha haibe jaa bhosdk..


"Well unfortunately Mr AP woh kahin nahi jaane waala.."


Ye awaaj sunte he meri khopdi ghum gayi, kyunki ye maadarchod Shruti ki awaaj thi NCB waali Shruti ki main piche mudda toh woh apni puri team k sath wahaan khaddi thi..


Shruti - Thanks for the help in taking Manaar down.. Isko hum sambhaal lenge ab..


Main-Oh no no no.. No.. Isko koi nahi sambhaalega.. No way in hell.. Ye mera banda hai or ye yahaan se nikal jaaega..


Shruti - Well sorry to disappoint AP sir but humaare pass Manaar se related harr culprit ko arrest karne ka warrant hai, ye dekho.. So you like it or not ye humaare sath jaaega..


No fucking way bhenchod, maadarchod chance he naa hai jo inhe lejaane dunga main Max ko bhenchod ye jaake daal denge apni jail mein fir 2.0 aaega or in sabki gand maarke isko leke jaaega.. No fucking way, gand toh meri marregi usme.. 2.0 in sabko maardega jo uske or Max k bichmein aaenge.. Chance he naa hai..No Fucking way..


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Super update Bhai

 

[111ramjain]

Nice update

 

[Vk248517]

Update-285(No Way) ​

285


Manaar woh chaaku leke jhapta mere Uppar mere liye usase bachna easy tha kyunki as i said woh slow tha bahot jyaada slow, but mujhe careless nahi hona tha kyunki uska ek waar mera game over kar shakta tha.. Usne mujhe chaaku maarna caaha firse but mere pass jagah he jagah thi toh main easily bachta raha usase ab mera bhi stamina jawaab dene laga tha as main fully recovered nahi tha toh maine ab orr derr karna theek nahi samjha..


Jaise he usne mujhe chaaku maarna caaha main niche jukh kar usase bacha or niche se he punches diye uske pait mein jisase woh bokhla k piche hattne laga or iss bich maine maari laat uske pairon mein jisase woh ladkhadaake piche girra or uske girrtey he main uspe tutt padda usko behissab kicks dene laga woh chilaaya lekin kuch kar nahi paya usne khaddey hone ki koshish ki but uska bhaari bharkam sareer kuch harkat karta usase pehle main firse laat maar maar k niche girra deta usse uski ribs ka chura bana diya tha maine or woh chilaane k alawa kuch kar nahi paaraha tha but finally mujhe dhakka maarke usne uthna caaha Or abki baar maine uthne diya usse lekin uthne se pehle uske hath pe laat deke usase chaaku durr kardiya and woh khadda hota tab tak uska chaaku mere pass tha.. Woh apna khoon se bharra thobda leke utha or maine usko chaaku dikhate hue ek smile di abtak usse bhi realise ho chuka tha ki woh galat fans gaya tha. Jo woh hawa banata tha apni woh keval drugs they woh koi jaanwar nahi tha or aaj jab usse koi apni takkar kaa mill gaya tha toh uska saara ghamand tuttke girr chuka tha.. Udhar Max bhi nervous tha maine ishaare se Abeer ko uspe khaas dhyaan rakhne ko kaha and ab Manaar ko khatam karne aage badha, chaaku mere pass tha toh Manaar darr k maare piche hattne laga but maine piche jaane nahi diya or mera pehla cut laga uski chest mein woh chilaaya lekin agle he second uski awaaj bandh hogayi kyunki maine chaaku daag diya uski ribs mein chaaku jyaada nahi gaya but uski gand fatt gayi or usne mujhe dhakka deke khudse durr kiya and chaaku nikala uski ribs se, idhar main uske dhakke se niche girra but turant he jump maarke utha and Manaar pe jhapta woh apna ghaav dekhne mein busy tha ki abki baar chaaku maine uske pait mein daag diya woh bhi ache se woh pura chaaku uske pait mein gaya or ek he second mein waapis nikaala maine logon ki cheekhein nikal gayi or Manaar niche girra apne ghutano pe maine uska chaaku uske galle pe rakha or hanste hue Max ko ghurra usse pata tha ki agla number uska hai toh usne apni pistol bheed se hataake meri taraf karni caahi but Abeer kaa toh saara dhyaan he uski taraf tha jaise he usne gun hilaai Abeer ne maari goli uske hath k Uppar jo on point lagi and uski gun durr jaake giri..Maine Manaar ko ghurra uska saara nasha, khouff or ghamand gayab ho chuka tha..


Main-Tujhe bhi wahi kahunga jo aajtak tujh jaise saikdon jaanwaron ko kaha tha, tu hoga jaanwar but I am A fucking beast... Goodbye.


Ye bolke maine chaaku uski gardan par chalaadiya and Manaar ki lifeless body niche girri orr maine chaaku niche daala.. Finally bhenchod itane din dukhi karne k baad Manaar kaa game over hua and Max bhi mill gaya.. Main khuss 2.0 bhi khuss mujhe Mera shikaar Manaar mill gaya usse Max mill jaaega agar usse caahiye hoga toh.. Main Max ki taraf gaya toh woh niche padda tha apne hath ko dabaaye hue.. Mere wahaan jaate he usne hath jod liye...


Max-Pppll.. Ppplease... Mujhe matt maaro.. Main sab bata dunga tumhe jo jo main jaanta hun.. Please mujhe matt maaro..


Main-Tujhe kon maar raha haibe.. Tujhe koi nahi maar shakta bc tujhe pata nahi hai Kitana lucky hai tu well unlucky hai tu kuch bhi lagaale but tujhe koi nahi maarne walaa.. Teri moutt bc out of the world hone waali hai tu special hai tujhe nahi pata but tu special hai bahot special.. You have no idea.. Ab dhyaan se sun jitana jaldi ho shake utana jaldi ye sehar ye state ye region he chhod dey.. Main toh kehraha hun desh chhod dey bhenchod gayab hojaa.. Yahaan se jitana durr jaaega utana behtar hai tere liye.. Samjha?? Jaa bhosdk ab..


Max-Mmm. Maain.. Nahi jaaunga.. Goli maardoge bhaagunga toh..


Main-Arrey bhosdk goli he maarni hoti toh abhi hath pe maari woh teri khopdi mein bhi toh maar shaktey they tujhe bawligand.. Main majaak nahi kar raha be tu bach gaya nahi maar raha tujhe main.. Chala jaa.. Haryana se jitana durr ho shake utana durr chala jaa..


Max-Lekin mujhe kyun jaane derahe ho tum??


Main-Lo.. Arrey maadarchod.. Sawaal kya kar raha hai.. Khusi mana maadarchod jo tu jinda bach raha hai.. Bada aaya KBC Khelne waala.. Idhar baaju mein ek clinic hai chal pehle tere hath ka ilaaj karwadeta hun fir chala jaaiyo..


Ye sunke usne mujhe firse ghurra..


Main - Ghurr kya raha haibe jaa bhosdk..


"Well unfortunately Mr AP woh kahin nahi jaane waala.."


Ye awaaj sunte he meri khopdi ghum gayi, kyunki ye maadarchod Shruti ki awaaj thi NCB waali Shruti ki main piche mudda toh woh apni puri team k sath wahaan khaddi thi..


Shruti - Thanks for the help in taking Manaar down.. Isko hum sambhaal lenge ab..


Main-Oh no no no.. No.. Isko koi nahi sambhaalega.. No way in hell.. Ye mera banda hai or ye yahaan se nikal jaaega..


Shruti - Well sorry to disappoint AP sir but humaare pass Manaar se related harr culprit ko arrest karne ka warrant hai, ye dekho.. So you like it or not ye humaare sath jaaega..


No fucking way bhenchod, maadarchod chance he naa hai jo inhe lejaane dunga main Max ko bhenchod ye jaake daal denge apni jail mein fir 2.0 aaega or in sabki gand maarke isko leke jaaega.. No fucking way, gand toh meri marregi usme.. 2.0 in sabko maardega jo uske or Max k bichmein aaenge.. Chance he naa hai..No Fucking way..


Continued..

Awesome update