Incest Wo ALBELA SA
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VengefulDevelopment
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Bro her update ke bad comments krta hn me pher bad me next update ka krta hn
dev61901
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Bhai e sandhya ka to theek ha per apna londa to sabse hi muh moda hua ha use to jaise pure ganv se hi nafrat ha shayad payal uske dil me wapas pyar jaga paye
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Ha Bhai ....per usme abi time hai .....abi apna londa pagel huwa para hai ...abi isko pyar wyar me biswas nhi hai ....apne maa se dhokha khaya huwa hai na bhai ....isliye isaa ho gya hai...
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Yasasvi3
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Dekho writer ji... mene aate hi ek baat boli thi aapki to story ke comments me...aapne shyad na use padha or shyad na ab meri is baat ko samjhange......
Phali baat aap story resstart kar rahe ho a very good job but yaar maximum audience yaha purani h jinhone (ye to albela h wali ke total update padhe honge .........rahi baat wo story band hone ki ...uske comments and views dekh sakte h aap... Wo us time pe 3rd most popular story thi...to mene tan (jab aapne ek do update diye the)bhi bola tha ye story yaha Tak sabke jhan me h ....me khud ki bhi bolu to ye story h hi itni pyari ki ek ek seen yaad h yaar....mene phala bhi bola tha thoda sa background daal ke new updates dedo....ab purane update pe kese rewiws de??..jo hum already padh chuke h......Maan aap thoda bhot parivartan daal rahe ho but aap restart ki jagha usi ko thoda short dalke aage se suru kariye ....
Believe me bhot alg level ka apka storyline plus popularity badhagi.......
Rahi baat like Target ki to that's not a big deal but aapne gusse gusse me sab audience ko Target me le dala to phali baat yaha itni sari stories likhi gyi h koi pese ke liye nahi likhta ....sab apni Khushi se likhte h......
Or reword milaga to wo jab competition aata h tab prize pool bhi hota or bhot kuch xforum deta bhi h....
But wo kismat ki baat h ager ab aap lalach ke chalte story likhna chahate ho to wo Mera hisab se na apke liya aacha h na hamare liye.....
I reapet again Target dena coments review ke liya bolna good...but ..guss nahi please calm down I are a writer also a well educated student also a. Future. Dr......to sir please it's a humble request....
Me end me yahi bolungi...chalo me dungi har update ka rewiws per fir timely and aache se updates de paoge????,not possible ji ...so here so many writes jo apne sokh se likhte h even some are big business men and readers are also at next level...so please thoda patients rakhe.......
And ha umeed ha aap agla update jaldi denge ....but ho sake to story line se aage..........
And yep this is not a order or shikayat ya problem..... it's just a opinion form me.
.. please bura mat Maan na ....and ha all the best aap life me ajo bhi karo aacha results mile ..good bless u
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