Incest Wo ALBELA SA

[Rahul Chauhan]

Dekho writer ji... mene aate hi ek baat boli thi aapki to story ke comments me...aapne shyad na use padha or shyad na ab meri is baat ko samjhange......
Phali baat aap story resstart kar rahe ho a very good job but yaar maximum audience yaha purani h jinhone (ye to albela h wali ke total update padhe honge .........rahi baat wo story band hone ki ...uske comments and views dekh sakte h aap... Wo us time pe 3rd most popular story thi...to mene tan (jab aapne ek do update diye the)bhi bola tha ye story yaha Tak sabke jhan me h ....me khud ki bhi bolu to ye story h hi itni pyari ki ek ek seen yaad h yaar....mene phala bhi bola tha thoda sa background daal ke new updates dedo....ab purane update pe kese rewiws de??..jo hum already padh chuke h......Maan aap thoda bhot parivartan daal rahe ho but aap restart ki jagha usi ko thoda short dalke aage se suru kariye ....


Believe me bhot alg level ka apka storyline plus popularity badhagi.......

Rahi baat like Target ki to that's not a big deal but aapne gusse gusse me sab audience ko Target me le dala to phali baat yaha itni sari stories likhi gyi h koi pese ke liye nahi likhta ....sab apni Khushi se likhte h......
Or reword milaga to wo jab competition aata h tab prize pool bhi hota or bhot kuch xforum deta bhi h....

But wo kismat ki baat h ager ab aap lalach ke chalte story likhna chahate ho to wo Mera hisab se na apke liya aacha h na hamare liye.....
I reapet again Target dena coments review ke liya bolna good...but ..guss nahi please calm down I are a writer also a well educated student also a. Future. Dr......to sir please it's a humble request....
Me end me yahi bolungi...chalo me dungi har update ka rewiws per fir timely and aache se updates de paoge????,not possible ji ...so here so many writes jo apne sokh se likhte h even some are big business men and readers are also at next level...so please thoda patients rakhe.......

And ha umeed ha aap agla update jaldi denge ....but ho sake to story line se aage..........

And yep this is not a order or shikayat ya problem..... it's just a opinion form me.
.. please bura mat Maan na ....and ha all the best aap life me ajo bhi karo aacha results mile ..good bless u

Bhai ye bahut chutiya writer hai yarr

Bahut hi chutiya writer hai ,iske kahne se koi comment thodi karega waise bhi isne puri story alag mod de diya hai ,isne Sandhya ko alag dikha Diya hai wo Raman se raaz janne ke liye ye sab ker rhi hai ,chutiya writer update Dena ho de nhi to mat de tere kahne se koi comment nhi karega jab story aachi lagegi to sab comments karega

 

[Sexybabu]

Bhai ye bahut chutiya writer hai yarr

Bahut hi chutiya writer hai ,iske kahne se koi comment thodi karega waise bhi isne puri story alag mod de diya hai ,isne Sandhya ko alag dikha Diya hai wo Raman se raaz janne ke liye ye sab ker rhi hai ,chutiya writer update Dena ho de nhi to mat de tere kahne se koi comment nhi karega jab story aachi lagegi to sab comments karega

Shi kha bhai ek aur bay Rahul bhai update nhi aa rha hai

 

[Rahul Chauhan]

Shi kha bhai ek aur bay Rahul bhai update nhi aa rha hai

Bhai Mai kal dunga update 1:00 pm
Aapko to pata hoga wo story pahle se hi hai Mai to usme bas pics aur gif add kerke post ker rha hai ,maine writer se baat bhi ki thi , permission leker unhone bola ki jaha tak pahle story hai wah tak pahucha doon uske baad sayad wo story ko complete karenge

Okk bro Mai kal new update posted karunga

 

[kmmalik]

Nice and wonderful start carryon

 

[kmmalik]

Waiting for next update

 

[StoneCold]

Bhai log Gaali maat du yaar ............ Writer aur Shayar ko bass Comments ki zurat hoti woh bhot acha l7kh raha hai uska haq banta comments ka ..............

 

[VengefulDevelopment]

Ha Bhai ....per usme abi time hai .....abi apna londa pagel huwa para hai ...abi isko pyar wyar me biswas nhi hai ....apne maa se dhokha khaya huwa hai na bhai ....isliye isaa ho gya hai...

Bhai aapki story bahut gajab ki ek dam romanchik

 

[VengefulDevelopment]

Bhai log Gaali maat du yaar ............ Writer aur Shayar ko bass Comments ki zurat hoti woh bhot acha l7kh raha hai uska haq banta comments ka ..............

Bilkul bhai

 

[Bosskhatri]

Mai na karne wala koi coment
Is story ke sare sur or taal hi badal gai hai

 

[Bosskhatri]

Khani ka bagroun kya tha or kya bna diya gya hai
Jitna pda tha us hisab se khani me chacha hi main villen hua tha ab isme purana khandahar purane makan ka koi jikar hi nhi hai
Hero badala bhi le rha tha purane tarike se ........
Isme to sare story hi badal diya gya hai