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15. GUDIYA

UPDATE 5


Us raat mere liye sona mushil tha. Lakh koshish karne par bhi neend nahi aa rahi thi. Mujhe bas yahi darr sata raha tha ke vo gudiya ab bhi ghar mein hi thi aur kahin phir kal raat ki tarah mere kamre ki sidhiyan chadhne ki koshish na kare. Par phir mummy ko apni bagal mein leti dekh kar tasalli ho jaati thi ke unke rehte vo mera kuchh nahi bigad sakti thi.
Darte darte kab meri aankh lag gayi mujhe pata hi nahi chala.
Aur ek baar phir aahat hui toh meri aankh khuli. Har baar ki tarah is baar bhi maine bagal mein dekha toh darr ke maare jaise jaan hi nikal gayi. Mummy meri side mein nahi thi.
"Mummy kahan gayi?" Mere dimag ne fauran sawal toh uthaya par koi jawab nahi diya. "Shayad apne kamre mein vaapis chali gayi?"
Kamre ke bahar phir vaisi hi aawaz aa rahi thi jaise ki kal raat aayi thi. Ek ghisatne jaisi aawaz jaise koi badi mushkil se chal pa raha ho.
Main jaanti thi ke vo aawaz kya thi.
Vo ek baar phir uth aayi thi. Basement se nikal kar mere kamre ki seedhiyan chadh kar mujh tak pahunchne ki koshish kar rahi thi.
"Nau" Aawaz aayi
Vo 9 seedhiyan chadh chuki hai matlab 3 kadam aur aur vo kamre ke andar aa jaayegi.
Kya karegi vo mere saath? Kya maar daalegi mujhe? Mummy kahan gayi? Sawal phir dimag mein uthe aur maine zor se cheekh maari jo shayad maine khud hi nahi suni. Bukhar se mera gala beth gaya tha aur aawaz hi nahi nikal pa rahi thi. Maine phir koshish ki par kamyabhi haath nahi aayi. Mere gale se sirf hawa hi nikli, aawaz nahi.
"Dus ....." Aawaz phir aayi.
Kehte hain ke jaan par aa bane toh ek cheenti bhi apne aapko bachane ki poori koshish karti thi main toh phir bhi insaan thi, chhoti thi toh kya. Main jaanti thi ke cheekhna chillana kaam nahi aayega. Maine fauran apne chaaro taraf dekha ke shayad koi bachav karne ke liye cheez mil jaaye par kuchh bhi aisa nazar
nahi aaya.
"Gyarah ....."
Aur iske saath hi mere kamre ki door knob ghoomi. Main jaanti thi ke vo bahar khadi darwaza khol kar andar aane ki koshish kar rahi hai.
"Vo gudiya toh landgi hai ... chalegi kaise ... aapke kamre ki seedhiyan chadhegi kaise"
Mujhe phir Papa ki kahi baat yaad aayi aur iske saath hi khud ko bachane ka tarika bhi dimag mein aa gaya.
Gudiya langdi hai aur mujhe pakad hi nahi sakti. Mujhe sirf bhagna hai. Bhaag kar Mummy Papa ke kamre tak pahunchna hai.
Main fauran apne bed se uthi aur tabhi usi waqt mere kamre ka darwaza khula.
Jo himmat maine thodi der mein batori thi vo darwaza khulte dekh hawa ho gayi. Bhaagne ka mera plan fauran darwaze ko phir se band karne ke plan mein badal gaya. Darwaza thoda sa khula hi tha ke main fauran darwaze ki aur lapki aur jhatke se darwaza phir band kar diya taaki vo mere kamre mein na aane paaye.
Aur iske saath hi mujhe 2 aawazen sunai di.
Ek toh kisi ke girne ki aawaz aur doosri ek bahut jaani pehchani aawaz.
Mere Bhai ki aawaz.
Main vahan darwaze ke paas kitni der tak khadi rahi main nahi jaanti par vo bahut lamba waqt tha. Mujhe samajh nahi aa raha tha ke hua kya par phir uske baad koi doosri aawaz nahi aayi.
Na kisi ke chalne ki aawaz.
Na ghisatne ki aawaz.
Na ginti ki aawaz.
Kuchh der baad maine himmat karke darwaza khola aur neeche ki taraf dekha. Neeche sidhiyon ke paas mera bhai gira pada tha aur uske aas paas bahut sara khoon tha jo uske sar se nikal raha tha.
Agle din subah ghar mein hungama macha hua tha. Kabhi Mummy ke rone ki aawaz aati toh kabhi Papa ke chillane ki aawaz toh kabhi kisi aur ke aane jaane ki aawaz. Kabhi police, kabhi ambulance kabhi koi toh kabhi koi, jaane kitne log aaye aur kitne gaye. Har kisi ki zubaan par ek hi sawal tha,
"Ye hua kaise?"
Kisi ne mujhse nahi puchha, kisi ko maine nahi bataya. Kabhi nahi. Aaj tak nahi. Ghar par manhoos hone ka label ek baar phir chipak gaya.
"All right" Mehra ghar se bahar aakar bola toh mera dhyaan toota "I will buy the house"....

THE END

 

[The Immortal]

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16. MASOOM

UPDATE 1


Vo sar par apna pallu daale ghar se nikli. Bahar garmi bahut zyada thi aur dhhop kaafi tez jabki ye sirf April ka mahina tha. Usne T.V par bhi suna tha ke ye saal pichhle 50 saalon mein sabse garam hoga.
Dopahar ke waqt gaon ki sadken aksar sunsan hi rehti thi. 1 bajne tak log apne apne ghar mein ghus jaate
the aur shaam 4 ya 5 baje se pehle nahi nikalte the.
Khaali sadakon par tez kadam badhati vo gaon se thoda bahar bane church ki taraf badhi.
Pichhe se ek car ke aane ki aawaz sunkar vo sadak ke kinare ho gayi. Vo jaanti thi ke car kiski hai. Rozana ye car isi waqt yahan se guzarti thi. Par aaj pichhe se aati car tezi ke saath guzri nahi balki uske paas pahunch kar dheemi ho gayi.
"Kaisi ho Sirisha?" Mercedez ka sheesha neeche hua
Usne ruk kar car ki taraf dekha aur dil ki dhadkan jaise apne aap tez hone lagi.
Vitthal par gaon ki har ladki fida thi, Uski apni dono badi behne bhi. Vo dekhne mein tha hi aisa. Lamba, chauda ...... vo kya kehte hain angrezi mein .... haan, tall dark and handsome. Vo hamesha mehenge kapde
pehenta tha, mehengi gaadiyan chalata tha. Usne toh ye bhi suna tha ke Vitthal ke papa ka India ke har
bade shehar mein ek ghar tha.
"Aapko mera naam kaise pata Vitthal sahib" Vo khidki ke thoda kareeb hote hue boli
"Tumhein mera naam kaise pata?" Vitthal ne muskurate hue sawal ke badle sawal kiya
"Kaisi baat karte hain. Aapko toh har koi janta hai" Vo thoda sharmate hue boli
"Hmmmmm" Vitthal muskuraya "Kahan ja rahi ho?"
"Church tak"
"church? Sirisha par tum toh ek Brahmin ho........"
"Mujhe vahan jaake akele bethna achha lagta hai, isliye is waqt jaati hoon. Koi nahi hota church mein,
ekdam shanti, aaram se bethke bhagwan ko yaad kiya ja sakta hai" Sirisha ek saans mein bol gayi
"Aaaram se, shanti se mandir mein bhi betha ja sakta hai. Ya mandir ke pujrai tumhein pasand nahi aate us
gore father ke saamne?"
Father Peter ka naam is tarah sunkar Sirisha aur bhi sharma uthi. Vo bahar kisi desh ke the, kaun sa pata nahi par yahan India mein vo Christian dharam phelane ke liye aaye the. Vo apne aapko ek missionary kehte
the. Jab vo church mein khade hokar bolte the toh Sirisha ke dil ko ek ajeeb sa sukoon milta tha. Kitna thehrav tha unki baaton mein, unki aawaz mein.
Jo bhi baat kabhi Sirisha ko pareshan karti, vo aksar confession box mein beth kar Father Peter se keh deti thi. Yun church mein unke saamne sab kuchh confess kar lena use bahut pasand tha.
"Tumhein pata hai ye log yahan gareeb logon ko paisa dekar Christian banate hain?" Vo abhi apni soch mein hi gum thi ke Vitthal bola
Uski baat sunkar ek ajeeb tarah ka gussa Sirisha ke dil mein bhar gaya. Usne Vitthal ki baat ka jawab dena zaroori nahi samjha aur car se hatkar aage ki taraf chal padi.
"Arrey itni garmi mein kahan ja rahi ho? Aao main chhod deta hoon" Pichhe se Vitthal chillayaUski baat sunkar Sirisha ek pal ke liye sochne par majboor ho gayi.
Church abhi thoda door tha aur aaj
garmi kuchh zyada hi thi. Vo church tak pahunchte pahunchte paseena paseena ho jaayegi aur is halat mein
church jana use achha nahi lagta tha.
"Gaadi mein A.C. chal raha hai. Main chhod doonga tumhein" Kehte hue Vitthal ne gaadi ka darwaza khola.
Sirisha ne pallu apne sar se hataya aur gaadi mein pichhe ki seat par jakar beth gayi. Par us waqt church jaane ka us waqt Vitthal ka shayad koi irada nahi tha.
"Kahan ja rahe hain ham?" Gaadi jab ek church jaane ke bajay ek doosre hi raaste par mudi toh Sirisha ne puchha
"Kahin nahi. Chinta mat karo tumhein church chhod doonga main" Vithhal pichhe dekh kar muskuraya.....

 

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UPDATE 2


Uske baad jo hua vo Sirisha ke liye ek sapne jaisa hi tha, ek aisa bura sapna jise sochkar hi uske dil ghabra jata tha aur gussa se vo laal ho jaati thi. Vitthal ne gaadi roki aur uske saath backseat par aa gaya tha.
"Chhod do mujhe, jaane do" Wo zabardasti karne laga toh Sirisha rote hue boli.
"Bas ek baar .... kuchh nahi hoga .... maza aayega tujhe bhi" Vitthal ne uski saree kamar tak utha di thi
"Ye paap hai, tum aisa nahi kar sakte mere saath"
"Arrey koi paap vaap nahi hai" Usne apni pent ki zip kholi aur niche ko khiskayi.
Uske baad Sirisha jaise ek zinda laash ban gayi thi. Vo car ki pichhli seat par padi bahar chidiyon ke chehchahane ki aawazen sunti rahi. Usko maalum tha ke jahan vo log ruke hue hain, vahan is waqt door door tak koi nahi hota isliye rone chillane ka koi fayda nahi tha.
"Jitni mast tu uper se dikhti hai, usse kahin zyada mast tu andar se hai" Vitthal ne ek pal ke liye apna sar uper uthakar bola aur phir se jhuk kar uski chhatiyan choosne laga.
Sirisha ka blouse khula tha aur bra ko Vitthal ne khinch kar uper kar diya tha taaki uski dono chhatiyon ke saath khel sake. Niche se usne saree ko Sirisha ki kamar tak chadha diya tha aur apni nangi taango ke beech Vitthal ko mehsoos kar rahi thi.
"Ye taang thodi uper kar na pls" Vitthal andar daakhil hone ki koshish kar raha tha par andar ja nahi pa raha tha.
Sirisha ne bina kuchh kahe uski baat maanti hue apni ek taang ko thoda sa hawa mein utha diya. Vitthal ne ek baar phir uske shareer mein daakhil hone ki koshish ki. Sirisha poori tarah se band thi aur zara bhi geeli
nahi hui thi isliye andar jaane ki ye koshish Vitthal ke liye kaafi takleef se bhari mehsoos hui.
"Ek kaam kar ... thodi der munh mein leke choos de na ... geela ho jaayega" Vitthal ne kaha toh Sirisha ne gusse mein uski taraf dekha aur bina kuchh kahe apna munh doosri taraf ghuma liya.
"Arrey naraz kyun hoti hai, main toh bas puchh hi raha tha" Vitthal ne neeche ko jhuk kar uska gaal chuma aur phir apne haath par thoda sa thook liya aur laga kar phir se koshish ki.
Thodi takleef hui par is baar lund bina ruke Sirisha ke andar tak daakhil ho gaya.
"Aaaaahhhhhhhhhh .... kitni tight hai tu .... aaj tak chudi nahi kya kabhi?"
Is baar bhi Sirisha ne jawab dena zaroori nahi samjha. Dard ke maare uski cheekh nikalte nikalte reh gayi thi aur aankhon mein aansoo bhar aaye.
"Maza aa gaya .... ohh meri jaan .... bahut garam hai tu ... bahut tight"
Aur bhi jaane kya kya bakta hua Vitthal akela hi manzil ki taraf badh chala. Sirisha ki dono chhatiyan uske haathon mein thi aur uske gale ko choomta hua vo dhakke par dhakke laga raha tha. Uske niche dabhi Sirisha badi mushkil se apne aapko car ki seat par rok pa rahi thi. Ek toh itni chhoti si jagah aur uspar Vitthal ke dheere dheere tez hote dhakke, har pal usko lagta tha ke vo khisak kar niche gir jaayegi.
"Aaaaaahhhhhh" Achanak Vitthal ne uski ek chhati par apne daant gadaye toh uski cheekh nikal gayi.
"Sorry" Vo daant dikhata hua bola "Control nahi, teri hain hi aisi, itni badi aur itni soft"
Sirisha ka dil kiya ke mukka maar kar uske dono daant tod de.
"Jaldi karo" Vo pehli baar boli
"Jaldi kya hai ... achhhi tarah se maza toh lene do" Vitthal phir dhakke lagane laga
"Tujhe maza nahi aa raha?"
Sirisha kuchh nahi boli
"Arrey bol na ... maza nahi aa raha. Kaisa lag raha hai mera tere andar?"
Vo phir bhi kuchh nahi boli
"Poori geeli ho chuki hai tu aur kehti hai ke maza nahi aa raha?"
Vitthal ne kaha toh Sirisha ka dhyaan pehli baar is taraf gaya. Uski taango ke beech ki jagah poori tarah se geeli ho chuki thi aur ab Vitthal badi aasani ke saath uske andar bahar ho raha tha.
"Meri car ki seat tak geeli kar di hai tune"
Vo sahi keh raha tha. Khud apni kamar aur koolho ke niche Sirisha ko car ki geeli seat mehsoos ho rahi thi. Khud uska apna shareer use chhod kar Vitthal ke saath ho chala tha aur use pata bhi nahi chala tha.
Vo poori tarah se khul chuki thi aur uska shareer jaise Vitthal ke har dhakke ka swagat kar raha tha.
"Nikalne wala hai mera" Vitthal ne kaha aur kisi pagal kutte ki tarah haanfta hua dhakke lagane laga.
Thodi der baad usko church ke saamne chhod kar Vitthal chalta bana. Sirisha ne ek pal ke liye saamne church ke darwaze par nazar daali aur phir andar jaane ke bajay palat kar vaapis ghar ki taraf chal padi.
Vo is halat mein church kaise ja sakti thi?
Vitthal ne jo bhi uske shareer ke andar chhod tha, ab vo bahar nikal kar uski taango par behta mehsoos ho
raha tha.
Us din jo hua tha, uska zikr Sirisha ne kabhi kisi se nahi kiya. Father Peter se bhi nahi.....

 

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16. MASOOM

UPDATE 3


2 hafte baad hi use vo khabar sunne ko mil gayi thi. Gaon mein har koi isi baare mein baat kar raha tha.
Vitthal ki shaadi Rajalakshmi se hone ja rahi thi. Vitthal ki tarah hi Rajalakshmi ka pariwaar bhi aas paas ke ilaake bhi kaafi jana mana tha. Par jahan Vitthal ke gharwale sirf vyapari thi aur sirf kapdo aur jooto ka dhandha karna jaante the, vahin Rajalakshmi ke gharwale paise ke kaarobar mein the. Karze par paisa dena aur byaaz kamana, yahi unka kaam tha aur politician aur bade bade logon ke saath unka bahut uthna bethna tha. Ye kehna galat nahi hoga ke vo taaqat aur pratishtha mein Vitthal ke pariwar se 100 guna zyada the.
Do raees aur abde pariwar ke beech ho raha ye rishta jaise us waqt har kisi ki zubaan par tha.
Jab Sirisha ko Vitthal ki shaadi ke baare mein pata chala toh vo khud jaise nafrat ke ek andhe kuen mein gir gayi. Dheere dheere nafrat badla lene ki ek bhaari ichha mein tabdeel hone lagi. Use aisa lagne laga jaise vo Vitthal se badla lene ke liye, usse tadapta dekhne ke liye kuchh bhi karne ko taiyyar thi.
Par aisa kuchh na toh vo kar paayi aur na hi use karne ko mauka mila. Zindagi yun hi dheere dheere aage badhti rahi aur vo apne aap mein kudhti rahi, jalti rahi. Kai baar dil mein khyaal aaya ke sabko bata de ke Vitthal ne uske saath kya kiya tha par vo bakhubhi jaanti thi ke aisa karna sirf khud use hi badnaam karta.
Uski zindagi apni school ki kitabo aur church ke beech simat kar reh gayi thi.
"Tu itni badi bhakt kaise ban gayi? Apni umar ki ladkiyon ko dekha hai? Sajne sawarne se fursat nahi milti unhen aur tu hai ke bas pujarin ban bethi hai" Uski maan ne ek din use kaha tha.
"ujhe achha lagta hai Church jana. Vahan bhagwan ke saamne bethti hoon toh aisa lagta hai jaise mera kuchh nahi chhupa unse, sab dekh rahe hain vo" Jawab mein Sirisha bas itna hi keh paayi thi.
2 mahine guzar gaye aur usne phir kabhi Vitthal ko nahi dekha. Father Peter bhi ab apne desh vaapis ja chuke the. Ab confession box mein bethkar usne dil ka haal sunne wala aur use samajhne wala koi nahi tha.
Aur phir barsaat ka mausam bhi aa gaya. Poore August ke mahine bhi baarish ne rukne ka naam nahi liya. Badal har waqt aasman mein chhaye rehte aur kabhi bhi achanak barasne lagte. Gaon ki sadkon par har taraf kichad jama ho gaya tha aur chhat par har waqt padti baarish ki boondon ki aawaz jaise kabhi kabhi pagal
hi kar deti thi. Aur agar baarish rukti bhi thi toh hawa mein itni nami hoti ke insaan bethe bethe hi pasine se naha jaaye aur phir barish ki dua karne lage.
Aur ek din, jabke uska poora pariwaar uske chhote bhai ka birthday manane ke liye ikattha hua tha, kuchh aisa hua jiska darr Sirisha ko hafto se sata raha tha. Vo apne chhote cousin ke saath bethi balcony mein khel rahi thi ke achanak vo anjaan bachcha sabke saamne bol pada.
"Didi aap kitni moti ho gayi ho. Dekho aapka pet kaise bahar ko nikal aaya hai"
Poore ghar mein har kisi ki nazar Sirisha ke pet ki taraf ho gayi thi. Jaise Sirisha ke pet ka vo uthaan dekha toh sabne tha par intezaar kar rahe the ke pehle kaun bolega.
Us din Sirisha ko na school jaane diya gaya aur na church.
"Hamein yun sharminda karke tujhe kya mila?" Uski maan ne rote hue usse puchha tha "Kya kami reh gayi thi hamari taraf se jo tune hamein ye din dikhaya? Kaun karega ab tujhse shaadi? Is umar mein apne baap ka naam is tarah uchhalke tujhe kya haasil hua? Vo toh achha hua ke vo ye din dekhne se pehle hi chal base?
Aaj agar vo zinda hote toh khade khade hi mar jaate"
Subah shaam is tarah ki baaton ka jaise ek silsila hi chal nikla. Kabhi uski maan toh kabhi rishtedaar. Har koi use yahi baatein sunata rehta aur har kisi ki zubaan par ek hi sawal tha,
"Bachche ka baap kaun hai?"
Aur jab Sirisha se aur bardasht na hua toh usne haar kar us dopahar ke baare mein sabko bata diya jab use raah chalte Vitthal mil gaya tha.
"Agar badnaam hona hi tha toh meri masoom bachchi akeli badnaam nahi hogi. Apne hisse ki badnami Vitthal bhi uthayega" Baat khatam hone par uski maan ne kaha tha aur har koi hairani se unki taraf dekhne laga tha.
"Isko daai ke paas le chalen? Vo jaanti hain ke bachcha kaise girate hain" Uski badi behen Indra boli
"Tera dimaag kharab hua hai? Us aurat ko bachcha janna toh aata nahi, girayegi kya khaak" Sirisha ki maan ne kaha.....

 

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16. MASOOM

UPDATE 4

Agle din hi Sirsha apni maan ke saath shehar ke ek hospital mein gayi thi. Tests se saabit ho gaya tha ke vo pregnant thi.
"Kuchh kiya ja sakta hai?" Uski maan ne doctor se puchha
"Jitni jaldi ho sake, iski shaadi kara dijiye" Doctor ne jawab diya. Vo uske pita ke ek purane dost the aur aksar unke ghar aate jaate the
"Ab aap hi bataiye ke is manhoos se shaadi kaun karega? Is bachche ka kuchh nahi ho sakta kya?"
Bahar ab bhi baarish ka mausam tha. Aasman mein badal is kadar phele hue the ke din mein bhi raat ka ehsaas hota tha. Kamre mein jal rahe bulb ke chaaro tarah ajeeb ajeeb tarah ke keet patange ud rahe the.
"Bachche ka intezaam main kar toh sakta hoon" Doctor bahut dheemi aawaz mein bola "Par paida hone ke baad. Bachcha is waqt giraya nahi ja sakta. Aapki beti vaise hi bahut dubli patli hai aur uper se 3 mahine ki pregnant hai. Agar jo dates ye hamein bata rahi hai vo sahi hain toh aur 3 mahine mein ye full term ho jaayegi. Is waqt kuchh bhi kiya toh mamla bigad sakta hai. Bachche ke saath saath iski jaan ko bhi khatra ho sakta hai"
"Aur agar bachcha paida kiya" Uski maan ne munh banate hue kaha "Agar paida kiya toh uske baad kya?"
"Main bachcha rakhna chahti hoon maan" Sirisha achanak bol padi
"Bevakoof mat ban"
"Ye bachcha mera hai. Main ise paida karna chahti hoon. Apne paas rakhna chahti hoon"
"Aur kharche kaun uthayega? Kaun dekhbhaal karega tum dono ki?"
"Mera hone wala pati" Sirisha ne apni maan ki aankh se pehli baar aankh milayi
"Aur kaun karega tujhse shaadi?"
"Vitthal. Mujhse shaadi vahi karega jo meri is halat ke liye zimmedar hai"
"Aapki beti itni bevakoof hai nahi" Doctor jo ab tak maan beti ki baatein sun raha tha beech mein bol pada.
"Vaise bhi aapko iski shaadi toh karni hai hi toh Vitthal se hi ek baar baat chalake dekhiye. Koshish karne mein kya harj hai?"
Aur phir jaisa ke Sirisha chahti thi, uski maan use lekar Vitthal ke ghar ja pahunchi. Hairani sabko tab hui jab Vitthal ne bina koi na nukur kiye is baat ki haami bhari ke usne Sirisha ke saath zabardasti ki thi. Aur usse bhi badi hairani tab hui jab vo Sirisha se shaadi karne ke liye bhi fauran taiyyar ho gaya.
"Shayad itna bura ye hai nahi jitna main soch rahi thi" Pehli baar Sirisha ke dil mein Vitthal ke liye ek naazuk jagah bani thi.
Baat ud chuki thi aur saath mein ud chuka tha Vitthal ke pariwar ka naam. Har taraf ho rahi badnami se bachne ka unke paas ab ek hi rasta tha aur vo ye ke jis gareeb ladki ka unke bete ne fayda uthaya, vo use apne ghar ki bahu banaye. Aur iske liye sabse pehla kadam tha Rajalakshmi ke saath tai ho chuki Vitthal ki shaadi ko todna.
Kisi ne kaha ke Vitthal ek kaayar tha isliye shaadi ke liye maan gaya tha.
Kisi ne kaha ke uske gharwale police ke maamle mein padna nahi chahte the isliye shaadi ka zor dala gaya tha.
Kisi ne kaha tha ke Sirisha ne Vitthal par rape case kar diya tha isliye shaadi ki baat chala di gayi thi.
Kisi ne kaha, aur jo ki khud Sirisha ne bhi socha tha, ke Vitthal us badsurat Rajalakshmi se shaadi nahi karna chahta tha isliye use fauran Sirisha ka haath thaam liya tha. Rajalakshmi raees aur ek bade gharane se zaroor thi par har koi jaanta tha ke vo dekhne mein sundar toh kya, ek aam ladki se bhi gayi guzri thi,
Aur uper se kitni moti bhi toh thi vo. Uske mukaable Masoom si dikhne wali Sirisha toh jaise aasman se utri ek pari thi. Vitthal ne zabardasti Rajalakshmi se ho rahi apni shaadi se bachne ke liye Sirisha ka sahara liya tha.
Vajah jo bhi thi, Vitthal shaadi ke liye maan gaya tha aur usne kaafi samajhdar se kaam liya tha. Aur usse kahin zyada samajhdari dikhayi thi Rajalakshmi ke gharwalo ne. Andar se bhale hi unhein hi is tarah rishta tod diye jaane par be-izzati mehsoos hui ho par uper se unhone kuchh bhi zaahir nahi hone diya. Aur to aur, unhone toh Vitthal ke pariwar ke saath apni bol-chaal bhi jaari rakhi thi.
Rajalakshmi ke teeno bhaaiyon ne Vitthal ko apne naye farm-house par aane ka niyota tak bhej diya taaki dono pariwar ke beech jo kuchh bhi hua tha, vo khata kiya ja sake aur vo log bina dil mein kuchh rakhe aage badh saken. Vitthal bhi yahi chahta tha ke is saare kaand mein kisi ko koi nuksaan na pahunche isliye usne fauran haan kar di.
Usi din Farm-house ki taraf jaate hue Vitthal ki car ka accident ho gaya aur usne mauke par hi dam tod diya tha. Na toh us truck ka pata chala jisse Vitthal ki car ki takkar hui thi aur na hi us truck driver ka.

 

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16. MASOOM

UPDATE 5


3 din baad Vitthal ka kriya karam kar diya gaya. Ek baar phir baaton ka bazar garam ho chala tha. Kuchh ko bharosa tha ke Vitthal ke saath jo kuchh hua usmein bhagwan ka haath tha. Ek masoom ladki ke sath kiye gaye uske salook ki saza bhagwan ne use di thi. Bhagwan naraz the aur yahi vajah thi ke is saal is qadar
barsaat hui thi.
Kuchh logon ka maanna tha ke Vitthal mara nahi balki use mara gaya hai. Rajalakshmi ka pariwar wale izzat aur robdaar log the. Apni beti ki yun shaadi tod diye jaane se sare-aam hui badnami ko vo kaise bardasht kar sakte the. 3 Bhaiyon ki vo akeli behen thi. Apni behen ka badla liya tha bhaiyon ne.
"Kuchh bhi ho bhaiyya" Kriya karam mein shaamil hone aaye logon mein se kisi ne kaha tha "Ham kaun hain bolne wale? Police ne toh ladke ka shareer thanda padne se pehle hi accident bolkar file band kar di thi. Accident kaise hua, kyun hua ye jaane ki koshish tak nahi ki gayi thi.
Hairat ki baat thi ke itne din se lagatar ho rahi barsaat us din ruki thi jis din Vitthal ki chita ko aag di gayi.
Sabko laga tha ke Vitthal ki maut ka Sirisha ko bahut sadma hoga. Aakhir vo uske bachche ka baap tha aur uska hone wala pati. Aur shayad aisa hua bhi. Sirisha poori tarah matam mein shaamil thi. Logon ke baat maane toh ye sadma tha ya
kuchh aur par Due date aayi aur nikal gayi par Sirisha ko bachcha nahi hua.
Aur jab hua tab tak Due date ko ek poora mahina nikal chuka tha. Yaani tab Sirisha poore 10 mahine ki pregnant thi.
Hospital ka poora kharcha Vitthal ke pariwar ne uthaya. Shehar ke ek mehenge hospital mein bachche ko janam diya gaya aur paida hone se pehle hi Vitthal ke pita is baat ke elaan kar chuke the ke bachche ko Vitthal ka naam diya jaayega aur use paal posne ka poora kharcha vo khud uthayenge.
Vo khud apne pairwar ke saath bachcha ho jaane ke baad Sirisha se milne bhi aaye the aur bachche ka naam-karan kar gaye the.
Poora din Sirisha ko akele rehne ka bilkul mauka nahi mila. Logon ka aana jana laga raha. Koi na koi usse milne aata rehta. Tarah tarah ke gifts koi nayi maan ke liye lata toh bachche ke liye.
Koi uske ghar ka tha toh koi Vitthal ke ghar ka jinhone shayad takdeer ke aage haar maan li thi aur apne bete ki nishani, uske bachche ko apna liya tha.
Aane walo mein koi shakal soorat se bachche ko Sirisha jaisa batata toh koi Vitthal jaisa.
Agle din jab uski maan ghar se kuchh saman laane ke liye gayi toh Sirisha ko pehli baar bachche ke saath akele hone ka mauka mila. Usne pyaar se apne bachche ko god mein liya aur uski taraf tuktuki lagakar dekhne lagi.
Ek nazar mein hi use ehsaas ho gaya tha ke bachcha na toh uske jaisa dikhta tha aur na hi Vitthal ke jaisa.
Bachche ki aankhen bhoore rang ki thi aur brown eyes na toh Sirisha ki thi aur na Vitthal ki.
Un dono ki kya, poore gaon mein bhoori aankhen kisi ki nahi thi.
Sivaay Father Peter ke.

THE END.

 

[Casinar]

PAAP

14. PEEPAL

UPDATE 6

Listen dude. I am sorry. Main aap dono ko nahi dekhna chahta tha. Please dont come near me. Stay away. I dont want trouble and i dont want to fight.
Aaaaaahh....huh huh huh huh huh .... no no
What are you? Your face ... your face .....
[Ladki ke hasne ki aawaz]
Hey Bhagwan !!!! Please .... jaane do, kuchh nahi dekha maine ....
[Rone ki aawaz]
Door raho mujhse. Mere kareeb mat aana.
[Kutte ke jaise gurrane ki aawaz]
Dont touch me ... stay away ... go away .... no, no , no ... Aaahhhhhhh
[Dam ghutne ki aawaz]
Please dont ... your hand ... so cold .. so cold ... dont touch me ... so cold .... your face, your eyes ...
[Rone ki aawaz]
Please ... let me go. Main kuchh nahi dekha... Please ... Oh god !!!!! Haaaaa ......
No no no
[Dheere dheere door hoti ghaseetne ki aawaz, ladki ke hasne ki aawaaz, payal ki aawaz, rone ki aawaz]
"Iske baad sab shaant hai sir. Recording hoti rahi aur tape khatam ho gayi par koi aawaz nahi hai" Constable Inspector ki taraf palat kar bola.
"Hmmmm" Inspector uthkar kareeb aaya.
"Uska mobile bhi mila. Us raat ki ye ek tasveer hai khandhar ki. Dekhiye"
Constable ne ek tasveer open karke mobile Inspector ko thamaya.
"Kuchh bhi toh nahi dikh raha"
"Vahan nahi sir. ye saamne talab ke paas dekhiye. Koi nahi khada par pani mein parchhai dekhiye. Ek ladka aur ek ladki. Bilkul vaise jaisa ki usne tape mein bataya hai"
"Tape kahan mila?" Inspector ne puchha
"Mandir mein gira mila sir. Aur uski laash Peepal ke ped ke neeche mili".

THE END.

Immortal bhai main bata nahin sakta ke main kitna khush hoon Vampire bhai ke inn kahaniyon ko yahan dekh kar.
i had thought that i will NEVER see these stories again in my life, but i am so happy to see them again today.... Vampire was one of my favourite writer. there were only a few at exbii/xossip including deepak bhai and jatin bhai... and when in 2010 Vampire bhai was posting haveli and paap i was one among his readers to read and comment on his threads.... like i had got issues with admin for some underage content in our script vampire bhai also got the same, we both fought for the need of the story that age was important but admin had severely condemned us for not mentioning any underage characters in our stories.... vampire bhai had finally left because he refused to go with admins..... he had even deleted his own threads....
bro you are a gem to save all these stories which is for our pleasure today.
thank you very very much for posting them here bhai
P.S Sorry main ne itne dinon se nahin dekha kyunke khud apne threads ko update karne aur likhne mein magan hoon ke khayal nahin kiya kiss ke stories ko post kar rahe ho.
lage raho bhai and thanks again.

 

[Indian]

Thanks Bhai for Posting this Marvelous story.
Vampire bhai is a great writer & their all stories were awesome.

 

[The Immortal]

Immortal bhai main bata nahin sakta ke main kitna khush hoon Vampire bhai ke inn kahaniyon ko yahan dekh kar.
i had thought that i will NEVER see these stories again in my life, but i am so happy to see them again today.... Vampire was one of my favourite writer. there were only a few at exbii/xossip including deepak bhai and jatin bhai... and when in 2010 Vampire bhai was posting haveli and paap i was one among his readers to read and comment on his threads.... like i had got issues with admin for some underage content in our script vampire bhai also got the same, we both fought for the need of the story that age was important but admin had severely condemned us for not mentioning any underage characters in our stories.... vampire bhai had finally left because he refused to go with admins..... he had even deleted his own threads....
bro you are a gem to save all these stories which is for our pleasure today.
thank you very very much for posting them here bhai
P.S Sorry main ne itne dinon se nahin dekha kyunke khud apne threads ko update karne aur likhne mein magan hoon ke khayal nahin kiya kiss ke stories ko post kar rahe ho.
lage raho bhai and thanks again.

casi bhai apko sorry feel karne koi jarurat nahi hai . mai samajh sakta hun 3 story run karna + pics & sayri post karna + contest + koi member apse help mangata hai (jis mai main bhi hun) to aap khule dil se uski help karte ho, itni sari activity ke baad apki apni life hai jisme apko samay dena padta hai , kitna muskil ho sakta hai apke liye dusri stories padh ke apna review dena iska mai andaaza bhi na laga pau . so please aap sorry na feel kare .
muje khusi hai ki mere thode se effort se apko apni kuch favorite stories padhne ko mil rahi hai,

aur ek baat , thanx to mai bolna chahta hun apko ki apne dubara apni kalam ko uthaya aur likhna suru kiya , jiski wajah se hame Sanjana , sanvi aur my favorite Aditi ke encounters padhne ko mil rahe hai .
xossip par mai as a silent reader tha maine bohat sari stories padhi wahan , kuch stories thi jo meri favorite rahi hai Jo Maine 3-4 baar padhi hai , actually mai bore ho jata hu kisi bhi cheez se bohat jaldi , lekin The innocent wife Maine lagbhag 25 se 30 baar padhi hai aur aaj tak kabhi bore nahi hua .
so thank you bhai fir se likhne liye .
aur aap chahe to mujhe Immo bol sakte hai short and good to hear.
once again thanx bhai.

 

[The Immortal]

Thanks Bhai for Posting this Marvelous story.
Vampire bhai is a great writer & their all stories were awesome.

sukriya Indian bhai .
vampire bhai is a great writer , bas dua karta hu ki vampire bhai ko dubara dekh sake , unki kalpnao ko padh sake .

Baat ek raat ki ye wahi story hai na jisme padmini ka samana ek psycho se padta hai . agar wahi hai to jaldi hi post kar dunga . mai writer ka naam bhul gaya hu apko yaad ho to mujhe bata dena .
thank you for your valuable time . keep reading.