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Shukriya aakash bhai such a wonderful appreciation , it means a lot for me bhai
Romance Ye ishq to nahi hai (Completed)
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Dear,
Mr. Notebook,
first of all thanks for writing this beautiful piece of art. Your name is of the great romance novel of NICHOLAS SPARK, and so are you writings, beautiful and heart-touching. A beautiful story of love, heartbreak, hatred & thrill. The lead pair were fabulous especially Jia, her character was awesome, she shined well in this creation. Even being cheated ( as she thought) she came back for him, took care of him, whether her intentions may differ at times, but love was always there. It is enduring, it gives you immense power to face anything, after being cheated by everyone's family. friends even love(so she thought). She never broke down, as after that much turmoil in anyone's life, how could one live, even she felt broken in her secluded times. Who wouldn't but her love maybe hatred never let her lose hope. She went for vengeance but found her love back, but in the path, she endured a lot. As love demands sacrifice and it tastes your will ( wo aag ka dariya and all).
Well how can I leave the other lead Tarun, he loved her dearly but turmoil shattered everything in his life, well it started with confusion, even that they were trying to kill her, but Tarun should have shared that with her, she heard it and took it all wrong. Trust is a must in any relationship be it friends or your life partner or anyone. Without trust nothing can stand intact, she thought of him as one of the people mongering for female flesh, who has no place for love and it all started in her life. Whatever might be the reason for the confusion, but it was all about trust.
Well he too paid along with her, 5 long years in suffering and pain, they too shared, even when they were far away but they didn't forget each other, may the reason be different for them. Actually, their family was all simple people, all of the ruckuses was created by the outsiders, well they hit the weakest part Vikram,( it happens guy couldn't take the peer pressure and broke down and was turned to drugs by his seniors, for real that much ragging happens in campus, I am lucky that I didn't have to face that.) And that weak link was the center of attraction.
It feels bad for Gaurav, she shouldn't have played with his feelings, after all, love is pure be it, anyone. But couldn't comment much as the circumstances were different. And it changed him for the better, and the beauty and the beast comment were funny, Tarun being jealous of seeing her around him.
I don't have much to say, so just love you # NO HOMO for this.
Keep writing.
An Admirer.
Mr. Notebook,
first of all thanks for writing this beautiful piece of art. Your name is of the great romance novel of NICHOLAS SPARK, and so are you writings, beautiful and heart-touching. A beautiful story of love, heartbreak, hatred & thrill. The lead pair were fabulous especially Jia, her character was awesome, she shined well in this creation. Even being cheated ( as she thought) she came back for him, took care of him, whether her intentions may differ at times, but love was always there. It is enduring, it gives you immense power to face anything, after being cheated by everyone's family. friends even love(so she thought). She never broke down, as after that much turmoil in anyone's life, how could one live, even she felt broken in her secluded times. Who wouldn't but her love maybe hatred never let her lose hope. She went for vengeance but found her love back, but in the path, she endured a lot. As love demands sacrifice and it tastes your will ( wo aag ka dariya and all).
Well how can I leave the other lead Tarun, he loved her dearly but turmoil shattered everything in his life, well it started with confusion, even that they were trying to kill her, but Tarun should have shared that with her, she heard it and took it all wrong. Trust is a must in any relationship be it friends or your life partner or anyone. Without trust nothing can stand intact, she thought of him as one of the people mongering for female flesh, who has no place for love and it all started in her life. Whatever might be the reason for the confusion, but it was all about trust.
Well he too paid along with her, 5 long years in suffering and pain, they too shared, even when they were far away but they didn't forget each other, may the reason be different for them. Actually, their family was all simple people, all of the ruckuses was created by the outsiders, well they hit the weakest part Vikram,( it happens guy couldn't take the peer pressure and broke down and was turned to drugs by his seniors, for real that much ragging happens in campus, I am lucky that I didn't have to face that.) And that weak link was the center of attraction.
It feels bad for Gaurav, she shouldn't have played with his feelings, after all, love is pure be it, anyone. But couldn't comment much as the circumstances were different. And it changed him for the better, and the beauty and the beast comment were funny, Tarun being jealous of seeing her around him.
I don't have much to say, so just love you # NO HOMO for this.
Keep writing.
An Admirer.
Ag Mahan
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Abe ladki hai wo
Well ab wo is ID se Xforum par ayegi nahi toh ye chhota sa secret rakh kar kya fayda Notebook aka ishikaaa ye paagal thi story ke peeche main paagal tha iske story ke peeche, ye wali story maine usse likhwaya tha heera thi wo is story ki aur main johri ki tarah story ko tarashta gaya, ishu ki har story ke peeche paagal tha main aur hun bhi, ishikaaa aur @FTK ye do hi mere life mein wise writer hai jinki story padhne ke baad ek sukoon milta tha, ye story shayad TIMS aur DDM ke baad mera fav tha aur isme mehnat bhi lagi thi uski bahoot
Ishu ko aadat tha alag alag ID se story likhne ka Xossip par sabse jyada story ishikaaa ne hi likh aur Xf par bhi aaj wo Top 5 writers ke beech me ati hai jinhone jyada no mein story likha, har ek story complete karke new ID banati thi taaki fame se door reh ke wo starting se kuch naya likh sake jo ki shayad hi aaj/pahle koi writer apni FAMOUS ID chhodne ki baat sochta ho
Abhi contact nahi hai iska mere saath par hope kabhi kabhi ye Xf mein fir aaye aur ek aur story padhne ko mil jaaye, writer toh best har koi hota hai par ishu alag thi aur haan i know wo abhi ye post log-out hokar padh rahi hai
Ag Mahan
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bhai koi aur stories agar unki agar iss forum pe hain toh bata do, she(now i know) writes so well, aur mil jaye padhne ko toh badhiya hain, aur kya pata koi aur new ID se wo abhi bhi likh rahi ho, pata karo, aap shayad unhe pehchan lo...Abe ladki hai wo
Well ab wo is ID se Xforum par ayegi nahi toh ye chhota sa secret rakh kar kya fayda Notebook aka ishikaaa ye paagal thi story ke peeche main paagal tha iske story ke peeche, ye wali story maine usse likhwaya tha heera thi wo is story ki aur main johri ki tarah story ko tarashta gaya, ishu ki har story ke peeche paagal tha main aur hun bhi, ishikaaa aur @FTK ye do hi mere life mein wise writer hai jinki story padhne ke baad ek sukoon milta tha, ye story shayad TIMS aur DDM ke baad mera fav tha aur isme mehnat bhi lagi thi uski bahoot
Ishu ko aadat tha alag alag ID se story likhne ka Xossip par sabse jyada story ishikaaa ne hi likh aur Xf par bhi aaj wo Top 5 writers ke beech me ati hai jinhone jyada no mein story likha, har ek story complete karke new ID banati thi taaki fame se door reh ke wo starting se kuch naya likh sake jo ki shayad hi aaj/pahle koi writer apni FAMOUS ID chhodne ki baat sochta ho
Abhi contact nahi hai iska mere saath par hope kabhi kabhi ye Xf mein fir aaye aur ek aur story padhne ko mil jaaye, writer toh best har koi hota hai par ishu alag thi aur haan i know wo abhi ye post log-out hokar padh rahi hai
Agar pata chal jaye toh bata dena, hum bhi saath ho lenge aapke...