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Romance Ye kaisi Mohabbat

Hellohoney

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Mast update he bhai ye sala game kon khelraha he jo daks pe ateck karega waiting for next update
 

Mbindas

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Chal kam se kam ye to pata chala ki aapne ye forum nahi chhoda h.
Or update ka kya kehna kamal ka tha.
 

Lone survivor

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Chal kam se kam ye to pata chala ki aapne ye forum nahi chhoda h.
Or update ka kya kehna kamal ka tha.
Bhai es kadar apne readers ki feeling ke sath nahi khel sakta main
Waqt ki kami ki vajah se sab ho raha hai aur uske liye mafi chahta hu
 

Lone survivor

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Update-46
Kafi der picha karne ke baad Daksh pareshaan hogya tha kyuki usse abhi tak kuch bhi unusual nahi dikha

Vo sochne laga ki agar vo log uski family ko nuksaan pahuchane ke liye aaye hote to unka picha kar rahe hote lekin abhi tak aisa kuch nahi hua tha

Daksh man me
Kahi maine yaha aake galti to nahi kardi
Aisa bhi to ho sakta hai ki main overprotective hokar sab soch liya hu

Lekin fir ek khayal aaya ki agar aisa hai to fir uske aadmi kaha gaye, uske ek bhi camera kaam kyu nahi kar raha hai

Vo log professional hai to matlab dhokha dene ki to baat hi nahi hai
Yaha kuch aur hi chal raha hai

Lekin kya?

Kahi Priya ki to planning nahi hai mujhe vapas bulane ki?

Nahi nahi, Priya etna sab nahi soch sakti
Vo us halaat me nahi hai ki etna sab soch sake

Fir kya ho sakta hai, kon ho sakta hai

Mere sare dusman bhi mare ja chuke hai aur mujhe yaha se gaye bhi bahut waqt ho gaye fir ye sab ek dam se kya hone laga

Kuch to gadbaad hai
Mujhe pata karna padega

Daksh kuch soch ke ek number dial kar deta hai

Samne se awaz aati hai
Hello
Daksh- Daksh bol raha hu

**** kya baat hai murda log bhi aajkal phone karne lag gaye
Daksh- city me kon naye bande aaye hai

**** koe nahi aaye bhai
Kya hua?
Daksh- tumhre sehar me bande hathiyaar leke gum rahe hai aur tumhe ye bhi nahi pata

**** apne hi log honge bhai
Agar koe bahar ka aata to pata chal jata
Daksh- aaya hai esliye puch raha hu

**** agar aisa hai to vapas sidhe bhagwan ke pass hi jaenge
Daksh- mujhe sab jinda chahiye

**** Daksh Bhai daldal se door jane ke baad jamin ki aadat to nahi pad gaye
Daksh- ek baar jo daldal me gus jata hai fir usse nikal pana namumkin hai

**** baat to thik hai
Aap batao kya madad kar sakta hu aapki?
Daksh- mujhe jo bhi naye bande aaye hai unki history chahiye puri ki puri

**** thik hai
Abhi pata karata hu
Aur kuch?
Daksh- kuch logo ko mere ghar ke bahar bej de
Vaha jo bhi ajeeb lage unhe utha lo
Aur kuch bande ko ghar ke pass dhyan rakhne ke liye chhod do

**** thik hai bhai
Aur Daksh phone kaat deta hai

To ye banda tha Malik ka beta
Malik to yaad hai na jisne Daksh ko martial arts sikhae thi
Aur ye vo hai jiske pass Daksh Roy ko leke gaya tha

Phone katane ke baad Daksh sochne lag jata hai ki aage kya karna hai

Kyuki abhi vo Priya Aur Maa ka picha nahi karna chahta tha lekin man me ek dar bhi tha ki agar kuch hogya to

Bechara buri duvidha me fas chuka tha aur uske pass jada raste nahi the

Family ke mamle me vo compromise bhi nahi kar sakta tha

Esliye usne socha jab tak vo ghar na pahuche tab tak unka dhayan rakhunga aur uske baad baki ka kaam dekhunga

Ye soch kar vo firse unka picha karne laga lekin Priya aur Maa ek farmhouse type jagah par ruk gaye aur dono andar chali gaye aur unke hath me bahut bada beg tha jisse dekh ke hi Daksh samjh gaya ki usme paise hai

Vaha bahut se farmhouse bane hue the lekin Daksh apni car se nahi utar sakta tha kyuki agar koe usse dekh leta to problem ho jati

Aur vo na vaha se andar ka pata kar sakta tha ki andar chal raha hai esliye vahi chhup ke car me hi batha raha

Lekin pura tayar thi ki agar kuch hua to agle hi second yaha lashe bicha dega

Daksh sochne laga ki etne sare paise leke Maa aur Priya yaha kya karne aaye hai
Kya koe unhe blackmail to nahi kar raha hai?

Daksh bahut time tak unka intzaar karne laga lekin vaha se koe bahar nahi aaya
Ab usse bhi thodi thodi tension hone lagi thi

Ab Daksh ne andar jane ki soch li lekin usse bahar ka bhi dhayan rakhna tha esliye usne Malik ke bete ko phone kiya aur aadmi bula liye

Unhe bahar khada karke khud chhup chhup ke andar jane laga

Daksh ko apni to koe parvah thi nahi lekin andar uski Maa aur uska pyaar tha esliye vo thodi savdhani barat raha tha

Ek window se andar kuda aur gate par khade bande ko sabse pehle latkaya

Body vahi chhod nahi sakta tha esliye ek kamre me daal ke band kar diya

Fir edar udhar dekhte hue aage jane laga lekin usse pehle gun par silencer laga liya tha

Daksh etna trained tha ki logo ki najaro se bach ke kaise nikalna hai ye usse bahut ache se pata tha

Esliye usse andar gusne me jada problem nahi hue lekin es bich do teen gunde latak gaye the bechare

Daksh first floor par pahucha aur vaha se niche dekhne laga jaha Priya Maa aur kuch log usse saaf saaf dikh rahe the lekin vo unki baat samjh nahi pa raha tha

Vo log aamne samne bathe the aur kuch baatein kar rahe the aur unke side me hi bahut sara paisa pada hua tha

Chalo dusri taraf ki baatein sunte hai

Maa dheere se
Vo aagya hai ab acting start karo

Aadmi Priya aur Maa par gun tante hue chhila chhila ke baat karne laga

Tujhe jab 10 khokhe ki bola tha to tu kam kyu laye
Jindagi pyaari nahi hai kya tujhe

Ab tu dogune degi nahi to teri ye sundar si beti ko yahiiiiiiiiiiiiii

Bas etni hi aawaz nikal pae aur uska sir tarbuzz ki tarah fat gaya

Vaha jitne bhi log the unki vaise hi fat gaye kyuki sabko Daksh ke bare me pata chal chuka tha

Vo to esliye kaam karne ko raji hue the ki Maa ne Unhe promise kiya ki unhe kuch nahi hoga

Lekin apne boss ka sar udne ke baad sabki gand faat chuki thi


Kuch hi second baad vaha goliyon ki bochaar hone lagi aur Priya Maa ko chhod ke vahi jamin par bikhar gaye

Priya aur Maa Bas aankh phade logo ko marte hue dekh rahi thi

Thodi der baad sab kuch ek dam shant hogya

Priya bahar ki taraf bhagi kyuki usse pata tha Daksh unse nahi milega vahi maa under ki taraf ki usse ander hi pakad le

Daksh vahi chhup chhap shanti se nikalne laga usse laga ki Priya aur Maa ko normal hone me thoda time lagega tab tak vo nikal jaega

Priya- daksssssssshhhhhhhhhhhh
Bahut pyaar aur bahut dard bhari aawaz Daksh ke kano me padi

Daksh ko ek second bhi nahi laga ye pahchane me ki ye kiski aawaz hai

Agle hi second uski aur Priya ki moments flashback ki tarah uski ankhon ke samne gujarne lagi

Aur dheere dheere uska chehra apne aap piche mudne laga

Aur jaise hi Priya aur Daksh ki najar mili

Priya ki ankhon me se samundar nikalne laga

Vo Bas ek tak apne pyaar ko dekhti rahi aur aashon bahati rahi

Ab aur intzaar karna dono se namumkin tha esliye ek dusre ki taraf bhagne lage

Lekin tabhi kahi se ek goli chalti hai jo sidha Daksh ke sarir me gus jati hai

Aur Daksh jo bhag raha tha vo sidha Priya ki god me jake gira

Samne se dusri goli chalne se pehle Priya ki gun se Goli nikali aur samne wale ke dil me gus gaye......


Flashback

Priya- lekin maa plan kya hai?
Maa- dekho, Daksh ne pakka kuch camera vagra lagaye honge aur kuch log bhi hire kar rakhe honge jinki help se vo hum par najar rakh paye
To mera plan ye hai ki hum un bando ko pehle pakde

Priya- aur unse Daksh ka pata
Brilliant idea
Maa- unko Daksh ke bare me kuch nahi pata hoga

Priya- to fir hum unko pakad hi kyu rahe hai?
Maa- jab Daksh ke pas koe Intel nahi bachega
Aur usse ye bhi nahi pata chalega ki uske bande ek dam se kaha gayab ho gaye to vo bhaga bhaga yaha aaega

Priya- lekin ye bhi to ho sakta hai ki vo aur logo ko hier karke bej de
Maa- bilkul ho sakta hai lekin jab usse uske ghar ke bahar gang ke log dikhenge to vo khud aaega

Priya- matlab?
Maa- matlab ye ki hum kuch gunde heir karenge jo humare ghar ke bahar humari hi jasusi kare
Taki jab Daksh ke log gayab ho aur vo hume check karke to usse kuch galat dikhe
Usse aisa lage ki hum problem me hai

Priya- fir to usse vapas aana hi padega
Lekin vo sabko door se hi marke chala gaya to
Maa- possibility hai
Lekin jab ye sab hoga tab hum paise leke ek anjaan jagah jaenge aur mujhe pura yakin hai ki Daksh humara picha karega


Priya- lekin hum paise leke kaha jaenge
Maa- sirf usse dikhane ke liye ki koe hume blackmail kar raha hai aur hum problem me hai
Fir jab vo hume dekhega to thori acting karenge
Mujhe yakin hai vo sabko maar dega
Aur ussi time hume usse gayab hone se pehle pakadna hai

Priya- bahut muskil kaam hai
Maa- aur koe rasta nahi hai humare pas

Priya- mujhe pata hai maa
Aap tension mat lo
Humara Daksh vapas aaega
Maa- humara Daksh vapas aaega.....
 
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