Awesome story
Thanks very much Johny bhai
Awesome story
bahot shukriya bhaiSuperb story hai bro.
But sayad 2-3 saal pahle Mai ise xossip pe padh Chuka hoo ..
Bcz 1st update me Jo house map hai use dekhte hi yaad aa gaya
Update 10
To Vijay kamrey mein gaye aur Aisha ne uss choti si skirt pehen rakhi thi, kyun ke unn donon mein ye tey ho chukka tha bahot pehkey se ke har raat ko woh ussi skirt ko pehneigi kyun ke Vijay ko uss Ki jangh passand tha aur woh uss ko nihaarta tha aur caress karta tha har raat ko. Aur yeh raat to bahot khaas thi kyun ke Aisha ko Vijay ki khwahish ko pura karna tha. Woh promise ye thi ke iss raat ko Aisha apne aap ko tan aur mann ke saath Vijay ko samarpan karegi. Yani ke they will have sex.
Aisha ne kayi baar pehley Vijay ki iss koshish ko roka tha. Iss se pehley wale posts mein aap sab ne dekha hai dosto. To iss raat ko kia woh sach much tayaar hai uss jismani talukaat ke liye ? chalye dekhtey hein.
To Vijay Aisha ke bilkool kareeb baitha, aur kaha, ““Aaj ka wada yaad hai nah?” Aisha sharmaati huwi sar hila kar boli, “Hmmmmm” Phir Vijay ka hath dhirey se , pyar ke saath Aisha ki jangh par pohchi, aur apne hath ko uss ne dhirey dhirey phertey huwe, upar ki taraf barhaya. Aisha bilkool samt gayi aur angrayi le rahi thi….. usski choti skirt aur upar uth gayi Vijay ki harkat se, aur Vijay ki enkhen Aisha ki behad khubsurat gori aur safed upar ki hissey ki jangh ko nihaar raha tha aur khud who bhi kamp raha tha…., apney hath ko wahin kiye huwe Vijay apna mounh Aisha ki honton tak legaya aur Aisha hamesha ki tarah apni mounh ko khola aur Vijay ne uss ko gehra kiss kiya Aish ki jeeb ki rass ko pitey huwe apna hath dhirey dhirey upar barhata gaya yahan tak ke us ski ungli Aisha ki panty pargayi aur Aisha kampney lagi…..
Uss ke baad, Vijay ne Aisha ko letaya bistar par, skirt upar hi uthi huwi aur apna mounh Aish ki jangh ke bich kiya… Aish bilkool thar thar kamp rahi thi aur uska badan pura samp ki tarah reing rahi thi bistar par aur Aisha apni hathon mein bistar ki chadar ko jakra huwa tha…. Vijay ne bahot dhirey dhirey apni jeeb se, Aish ki panty ko kiss kiya aur apney denton se panty ko nichey ki taraf khinchney laga..Aisha ne phir Vijay ki baalon ko apni muthi mein jakra aur apni taraf khichna shuru kiya lekin Vijay panty ko utaarta gaya, apni hathon se Vijay ne Aisha ki donon jangh ko thama huwa tha aur hath pher bhi raha tha janghon par….. Jab panty ko bilkool nikaal diya To Aisha ne sharmate huwe apni skirt se apni sex ko dhank diya….. Lekin Vijay ne phir skirt ko upar kiya aur apna jeeb dhirey dhirey phertey huwe janghon se upar pohcha Aisha ki sex tak…… Aisha kamp rahi thi aur dhirey se dhimi awaaz mein kaha, “Vijay, please, eisa mat karo nah!” Lekin Vijay kahan sunney wala that, who to kab se iss din ka intezaar kar raha tha, bahot dheeraj dhar liya tha itney dinon se…..
Aisha ki pussy shave ki huwi thi. Vijay uss se hamesha kehta tha ke hygiene ke liye shave karni chahiye, aur ek din to Vijay ne khud Aisha ki bahon ke nichey ki baalon ko shave kiya tha. Aisha waxing nahin karti thi kabhi, Vijay n ussko ek safety razor blade kharid ke diya tha take who shave kar sake…aur dusrey din pucha tha ke kia tum ne nichey bhi shave kiya ya nahin? To Aisha ne kaha tha ke han uss ne shave kiya.
Han to Vijay ki jeeb Aisha ki pussy par gaya aur Vijay ne bahot dhirey dhirey apni jeeb ko shuru se niche tak Aish ki pussi ko chata…… chattey gya aur Aish reingti gayi bistar par dhimi awaaz mein taraptey huwe….. aur jab Vijay Aisha ki pussy ki opening par ponhcha to dekha ke who bheegi huwi thi aur ussko namkin lazat jeeb mein laga….. Aisha ne kabhi bhi kissi se eisi sexual rishta nahi kiya tha…woh ek full virgin thi….
Vijay aona jeeb se Aisha ki pussy ko chusta gaya, chusta gaya aur Aisha tarapti awaaz mein dhirey se bolti gayi, “Ishshshshsh…bas karo Vijay, please ab roko bhi…”….Lekin Vijay kahan rukney wala tha…..uss ne apni jeeb ko Aisha ki pussy ke andar jita bhi dal sak andar dala aur Aisha behaal hoti gayi……
Aakhir Vijay wahan se hatta to ab upar ki aur gaya…. Aisha ki Blouse ki bilkool nikaal pheka, bra ko unhook kiya aur Aisha ne ussko apni bahon mein lekar ek lamba kiss kiya jeeb ko chustey huwe, tab tak ahistey ahitey Vijay ne bhi apney saarey kapde bahaar nikal diya, Aisha ki skirt ko bhi nikaal diya to dono bilkool nanguey the…. Ek dusrey ko bahon mein liye, donon jism ki garmi se badan ko garmaatey huwe…..
Thori der baad Vijay ne Aisha ki haath ko apney haath mein lekar ussko apney sex ki taraf kiya..Aish nahin chuna chahti thi uski sex ko, lekin Vijay ne keise bhi karke, Aish ko apna sex pakarney par majboor kiya aur Aisha ne Vijay ki motey organ ko apne haath mein liya aur, uss se khelna shuru kiya….
Uss ke baad dhirey dhirey Vijay ne apney sex ko Aisha ki mounh tak ponchaya….. Aish ne apni mounh bandh karli aur ek taraf dekhney lagi…atb Vijay ne samjhaya ke jeise uss ne Aisha ko chusa tha nichey weise hi Aish ko bhi karni chahiye taakey donon taraf se sex ka mazaa aaye…… Aisha phir bhi nahin maan rahi thi, bahot Vijay ki banati ke baad Aisha ne uske sex ko pehley lajaatey huwe sirf honton tak layi, phir thori der baad Vijay ki binate par uskey sex ko kiss kiya, phir dhirey dhirey apney mounh mein liya…. Phir ahista ahista chusney lagi…… Vijay to jeise paagal hogya tha us schuss ki wajah se…diwane ki tarah apney purey badan ko reing raha tha, aur Aisha muskura rahi thi chustey samaye….. Phir Aisha boli, “Itna mazaa ata hai tumko meri chusney se?” Vijay ne jawaab diya, « Arey jaan, tum keise diwani ho rahi thi jab main tumko chuss raha tha…weise hi yaar… »
Tab Aisha ki chusna khatam huwi to, Aisha ko Vijay ne bistar par nangi letaya, aur khud nangey Aisha ke upar gaya…… usski, donon janghon ko khola, aur khud bich mein position liya, aur dhirey se apna mota dick ko, appney haathon se Aisha ki pussy ki opening tak ponchaya, aur thoda sa thukh lagakar apney dick ko, Aisha ki pussy mein andar dakhil kartey huwe apney kamar ko hilana shuru kiya….Aisha ko bahot darr lag rahi thi kyunke yeh usski pehli sexual intercourse thi….. Uss ney Vijay se binati ki ke woh bas karein, vijay hansa aur bola, « Abhi to shuru bhi nahin kiya hai, andar to nahin dala hai abhi… »…….. Aisha darti rahi aur Vijay ne kuch zor lagaya aura apna cock ko andar ghusaya……. Aisha chilayi, »Aaaaaah… iiiiishshshshshshsh…ah ah ah ah…bus bus, nikalo dard ho raha hai… »….Vijay ne samjhaya ke pehli baar hai issi liye dard hoga lekin thora sa….. aur Aisha ki hymen tuti, khoon nikla aur Vijay ussi mein ghusata gaya aur andar bahar karta gaya….aur bahot jaldi hi bahar nikala, aur usski saarey sperms Aisha ki pet pat phenka……..
Aisha ne kaha, « Jal rahi hai » Vijay ne jawaab diya ke yeh pehli baar hai issi liy jalegi, phir thori der baad thik hojaegi……..
Aur donon ek dusrey ko baahon mein lekar kiss kiya aur wahin parey rahey ghanton tak ussi nangi haalat mein. Darwaza andar se, lock kiya huwa tha ke kahin, koyi andar aney ki koshish to na karein, lekin kabhi bhi jab woh donon andar hotey the to koyi bhi nahin atey the iss liye donon araam se the…….
To yehi baat Aisha baithi soch rahi thi jiss din Vijay apney pita ke saath door ki ek sheher gaya huwa tha…… ab to woh har roz Vijay se humbistar hoti thi, lekin abhi Aisha uss pehli baar wali raat ko soch rahi thi aur apne aap muskura rahi thi……..
To be continued………………………
bemishaal update ke sath ek bahuayami kahani ki shuruwaat. bahad hasheen hai bhai.
Yeh bhi muhabat hi hai
Vijay ek teyiss saal ka larka tha. Woh bahot hi sentimental kissam ka tha aur ziada hi jazbaati tha. Lekin dimaagh ka bahot garam bhi tha woh. Lamba kad, 6ft2inches, gora rang, mazboot jism, taakatwar, aur khubsurat bhi tha woh. Bilkool hero. Teyis saal ke har larkon ka koyi na koyi ishk ka chakar to hote hai. To kia Vijay ke zindagi mein koyi tha?
Chalo dekhtey hein.
Vijay ke pita ke do bhai the. Ek bara aur ek uske pita se chota. Jahan Vijay rehta tha, uss ke donon chacha uss ke paroshi bhi the. Vijay ka ghar bich mein tha aur donon taraf, bagal mein do chacha ke ghar the. Voh sheher ke kuch hi doorie par rehta tha. Jahan who rehta tha uss ke donon taraf do cities the, ek uss ke purab mein aur ek paschim mein. Purab wale sheher sirf 10 kms ki doorie par tha aur paschim wale sheher sirf 3 kms ki doorie par.
Ab jahan who rehta tha, wahan ka mukhya raasta bahot hi vyast raha kartey the kyuke wahin se guzar kar donon taraf ke shehron tak saari motar gadi, bus, trucks, motor cycles vaghaira guzartey the. Main ek sketch banata hoon jiss se aap logon ko vistaal purvak samajh mein ayega.
Sketch yeh raha:
Ab iss sketch se aap logon ko pata chalega ke kaun kahan rehta hai. Sketch ko dekh kar aap logon ko pata chalega ke uss ke dayein taraf uss ka bara chacha ka ghar hai, lekin bayein taraf ki makaan par likha hai ‘Aisha’s house’ Hai nah? To yeh Aisha kaun hai bhai?
Chalo ye bhi dekh lete hein.
Yeh Aisha, Vijay ka chota chacha ki beti hai. Ab aap log sketch par yeh bhi dekheinguey, ke kitna vyast main road hai, uss main road se hokar weh log apni lane mein atey hein phir apney apney ghar mein. Uss lane ka naam hai Ranvheer lane kyunke Ranvheer Vijay ka family name hai, yani uss ka surname hai. So, Aisha ka bhi surname Ranvheer hi hai.
Ab in teenon bhaiyon mein bahot pyar tha, teenon ek doosre ke yahan atey jatey the, aur teenon ghar ke bachchey bhi aya jaya kartey the, jeise ke teenon ghar teenon family ke liye ho. Ek ke yahan kabhie koyi kaam ho to teenon pariwaar ke sabhi sadasya ek hi kaam waley ghar mein jamaa ho jatey the. Jeise ke kabhi koyi pooja vidhi ka kaam ho, ya mangni, ya vivah, ya kuch bhi ho, sab ek saath juth jatey the.
Ab yeh jo Vijay tha, jab woh....... saal ka tha, tab Aisha .......ki thi. Hamesha ki tarah, school se waapas aney ke baad, Vijay turanth Aisha ke ghar pohonch jata tha uss se cher chani karney, uss ki chachi ki bilkool aadat thi ke Vijay har roz ata hai aur bachon ke sath khelta hai. Aur yeh uske chacha ko bhi maloom tha. Bachpan se Vijay wahan jata tha aur apne chacha ke bachon ke sath khelta tha. Aisha ka ek bada bhai aur ek choti behen bhi the. Aur Vijay ka ek bada bhai aur 2 choti behnein thiin. Yani Vijay apne paraviwaar ka dusra awlad tha.
Ab bachpan se har tarah ke khel, cher chani houwa karta tha…kabhi kabhi to larayi bhi hotey the bachchon mein, aapas mein jhagartey bhi the, aur maa baap se report bhi kartey the. Lekin sab se bada chacha jo tha uss ne sabhi awraton se, aur bhaiyon se yeh ganbhirta ke saath hukm diya tha ke kabhi bhi bachchon ki vajah se apnon mein koyi bhi anban nahin honi chahiye. Bachchey to bachchey hotey hein aaj jhagrey to kal phir ek ho jatey hein.
Ab jab Vijay ...... saal ka huwa tha, to uss ka mann, Aisha ki taraf kuch ziada hi khincha jata tha. Who uss ko bachpan se hi bahot passand karta tha, aur ussi ke saath ziada waqt guzaarta tha. Yeh sabhi ko pata tha ke Vijay aur Aisha ek dusrey ke bina kabhi nahin rehtey. Yeh baat teenon gharon mein mashoor tha. Aur teenon gharon ke bachchey aur parents bhi iss baat se waakif the. Lekin kabhi kissi ne na toka na danta, to Vijay araam se aguey bahrta gaya. Bus ek shaam ko who Aisha ke saath homeworks mein help kar raha tha, aur usney Aisha ke kamar par apna hath rakha, sehlaya, aur dhirey se apna hath Aisha ki chaati par phehra. Aisha khadi hokar Vijay ko bahot zor se do thappar uske gaal par marey. Vijay kharey ke kharey rehgaya, aur usske enkhon se ensoo behney lage…… phir who apney sar nichey kiye huwe dhirey se apney ghar ko chal diye. Aisha sirf ..... saal kit hi yeh tab ki batein hein. Main aap logon ko shuruwaat se kahani ko samjha raha hoon. Abhi to Vijay teyiss saal ki hein aur main aap logon ko tab ki baton se suna raha hoon.
To uss din Vijay rotey huwe chup chap wahan se chala gaya. Aisha khari reh gayi aur usko afsos huwa ke usney Vijay ko kyun mara… who bhi baith kar roney lagi. Maa ne pucha kia huwa to kuch na boli, bas roti hi gayi. Udhar Vijay apney kamrey mein bandh tha……
Aisha .... saal ki baali umr mein bahot hi sundar nikhri huwi thi. Uss ke bahot hi khub surat baal the, jism to abhi abhi jawani ko hawa de rahi thi. Khub gori thi. Aur Vijay to usko bachpan se chahta tha. Lekin Aisha ko pata nahin tah ke Vijay uss se pyar karta hai, who to har kissi ki tarah jeise khelti thi, batein karti thi veise hi Vijay se bhi karti thi.
To be continued……….
sarahniye bhaiAll updates are linked below the cover, just click on the updates to get them to read
Iss kahani ko Rakaa ne preview kiya tha exbii (Xossip) par. he was one of the best to give story previews. posting his preview here.
Preview from Rakaa:
"Wow". You know how it feels when you read a story more than once and it's still as touching as the first time reading?
That's about all I could muster at the end of the story (embarrassingly, between a flood of tears - after all, a guy isn't allowed to cry, right?) I must admit - my skepticism was extremely high upon first hearing about this story. That's this story!
It is so beautiful. All the things that love embodies is what this story is about. Laughter, tears joy, and pain. Love changes us. It makes us better. I queried myself as to the necessity of reading yet another "teenage love story". However, upon a friend's recommendation (Shah Bhai), I decided to give it a go, and realized that I had actually come close to making a terribly big mistake in my life had I not read it. This story is simply INCREDIBLE!
This story shows how Aisha kindness and love for Vijay helped him to be more than he thought he could be. Vijay's love for Aisha gave her peace with her life. Vijay and Aisha were perfect fits for their characters. It wasn't overdone at all. I am very pleased with their performances.
Yeh Bhi Mohabbat hai will be a story that will be part of my library for years to come. And is one that I have and will continue to revisit. Vijay does an excellent portrayal of his school and college image, and his desire to be popular and cool surely strike a chord in many of our hearts.
After all, during our precocious teenage years, there are arguably few things that are more important than being cool and universally liked by peers. One's self esteem is invariably tied with how others perceive us. And so that is how Vijay is, until he meets sweet Aisha, the local preacher's daughter. Aisha lends her character a huge amount of depth and surrounds her with an innocent, heartwarming aura, so much so that by the end of the story, she can do no wrong.
As you watch their relationship blossom throughout the story, your own feelings are inextricably linked and you find yourself cheering the couple on, marveling at their sweet times spent together and secretly envious of the intense love that they have discovered. For guys, I warn you - Aisha is so incredibly pure and unselfish that she will have your hearts fluttering by the end of the story.
As for Vijay, he will no doubt reside in many girls' dreams for months to come, and he demonstrates a type of love that transcends ordinary levels, completing Aisha's life in each and every way. He shows her a love that she has not experienced before, and she helps him to discover himself and fills him with a desire to achieve higher things in life. There is a lot of hidden depth, and even when Vijay fulfils Aisha's first and foremost desire (which I shall not reveal for those that have not read the story), he says it in such an unselfish way that it evokes true admiration of his love for her. By being together, they have both achieved things that were previously not possible.
By the end of the story, the viewer's faith in love and everything pure and good is restored to unshakeable heights. Love is truly the most powerful emotion known to mankind, and this heartwarming story reminds us that despite the challenges we face on a daily basis, there are things in life that make the experience truly worth it.
To be able to witness the kind of love that Aisha and Vijay shared is truly unforgettable, and as Vijay says during the story, "We had more happiness than most people experience in a lifetime." Yeh Bhi Mohabbat hai is a truly moving story that urges us to have faith in true love and to cherish all the wonderful things that we have in our lives.
This story isn't like other teen stories, it has a heart and it's ending will no doubt bring you to tears. I definitely recommend the story to anyone who loves love stories. I promise you won't be disappointed.
Cheers,
Raaka.
behad khubsurat update bhai
Update 2
Doosrey din, School se aney ke baad Aisha ghar par har roz ki tarah Vijay ka intezaar kar rahi thi. Weise to har sham ko, school ke wapas atey hi Vijay Aisha ke yahan dawrta huwa jata tha, lekin iss din Aisha intezaar karti rahi par Vijay ka pata nahin tha.
Vijay ki choti behnon ka naam Pooja aur Anu the. Aisha ne Pooja ko apney yahan bulwaya aur Vijay ki khabar puchchi. To Pooja ne kaha ke Vijay ghar par hi hai aur homeworks kar raha hai.
Tab Aisha roney lagi. Pooja ko taahjub huwa ke Aisha kyun ro rahi hai aur jaakar apni chachi se kaha. Jab Aisha ki maa uss se puchney gayi ke woh kyun ro rahai hai to Aisha ne zor zor se rotey huwe jawab diya ke Vijay uss se khafa hai issi liye woh wahan nahin aya. Aur uss ne batayi ke kal donon mein jhagra huwa tha. To Aisha ki maa ne kaha agar Vijay nahin ayaa to tum uss ke ghar chaley jawo aur apna rona dhona uss ko dikhawo. Phir Pooja Aisha ki haath pakar kar ussko khinchtey huwe apney ghar ki or lejaney lagi. Aisha rotey huwe Vijay ke yahan ponhchi Pooja ke saath. Usske pyari pyari enkhon se moti moti ensoo tapak rahe the. Aur who siskiyan le rahi thi.
Vijay apney kamrey mein chup chap baithe huwa tha, apney homeworks ke saath. Pooja Vijay ke kamrey mein daakhil huwi aur kaha, “Bhaiya dekho to kaun aya hai!” Pichey murke Vijay ne dekha to Aisha sissakti huwi Khari thi. Vijay jaldi se daur kar uss ke paas gaya aur usko bahon mein lekar pucha, “Kia huwa? Kyun ro rahi ho iss tarah? Kissi ne mara tumko?” To Aisha aur zor zor se roney lagi. Vijay ne uss ke gaalon par apna haath phertey huwe, ensoowon ko ponchtey huwe kaha, « Arey meri pyari si gudya ko kiss ne mara ? Main abhi usska khabar leta hoon. Kaun hai woh jiss ne meri rani ko rulaya ? » Aisha ko ziada zor se rota huwa dekh kar Pooja hansney lagi aur wahan se chali gayi.
Vijay, Aisha ko apney god mein bithaya aur, ussko sehlatey huwe poocha, « Bolo nah ? kia baat hai ? » To Aisha sisakti huwi boli, “Tum kyun aaj mere yahan nahin aye ?” To muskuratey huwe Vijay ne jawab diya ,”Dekho kitna homeworks para hai! Buss issi liye” Phir Aisha siskiyan ko sambhaltey huwe kaha, “Nahin, mujhey maloom hai, tum mujhse khafa ho nah, iss liye ke kal main ne tum ko thapad mara tha?” To Vijay ne kaha, “Ab choro kal ki baton ko, jo ho gaya so ho gaya.” To Aisha ne kaha, “Nahin pehley tum bolo ke tum ne mujhey maaf kiya tab uss baat ko chorungi.” Phir Vijay ne ek lambi saans lekar kaha, “To tum ne kyun mujhey thapad mara tha? Who bhi ek nahin do zordaar thapad?” Aisha simat kar dhimi awaaz mein boli, “To tum ne kyun mujhey weise chuwa tha? Mujhey bilkool achca nahin laga aur socha ke tumharey vichaar gandey hein issi liye mere hath uth gaye tumpar.”
Uss waqt Aisha apni school uniform mein thi, aur woh Vijay ki god mein baithi thi, aur uss ka skirt ghutney ki upar tak thi, aur Vijay ka haath, uski thik ghutney par tha. To Vijay ne kaha, “Iss waqt mera haath tumharey ghutnon par hai, aur tumhare Jangh ki shuruwaat bhi dekh raha hoon, to kia tumko bura lag raha hai, aur mere vichaar gandey lag rahe hein?” Tab Aisha, sar jhuka kar boli, “Nahin” To Vijay ne kaha, “Dekho Aisha, main tumko sabhi cousins mein sub se ziada chata hoon, pyar karta hoon tum se, uss waqt se jab tum bilkool choti thi. Aur kabhi bhi mere vichaar tumharey or gandey nahin ho saktey. Kyun ke mera pyar tumharey liye sachcha hai aur pavitra hai.”
Yeh sunkar Aisha ki hriday zor se dharka aur, woh laal hogayi aur sharma si gayi aur Vijay ko ek chota sa chumband uske gaalon par dekar usske god se uthkar dawdtey huwe apni ghar waapas chali gayi.
Vijay muskuraya aur khamosh baithey reh gaye, yeh sochtey huwe ke ab Aisha ko uss ke pyar ka pata chala aur samajh mein aya.
To be continued………..