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Romance Yeh bhi Muhabat hi hai (COMPLETED)

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great great great.... one who has such a loving sister to talk with, to share the problem, to share the pain inside the heart
such a sister is a great support
thanks god vijay had such a sister who understands and share his pains..
aisah behaved odd yes, and vijay said abusive words to her in anger, they also slapped each other....
and now he wants to go back to ask for forgiveness, will he succeed?
lets see in the next update
#thanks casi bro this story is very electrifying my dear
thanks very much rowdy bro, read it till the end dear
 

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too good, fantastic, lovely update bro
i enjoyed it thoroughly....
their meeting again, the help of Pooja, and how Pooja said she will be the watchman...just like i said earlier she is too helpful
and their conversation, but the cold behaviour of aisha broke Vijay...
wow bro you even gave importance to tiger the dog, this proves how far you care about wht yo write and this makes you a great writer..
the kiss in front of Pooja was important, in such a circumstance one cannot see who is around, the hug and the kiss were both important and you did well by describing that...
the last part was indeed funny and their laughs was equally important and you justified it so well
very very good bro

mindblowing update....
thanks very much rowdy bro
 

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fantastic, mindblowing extraordinary update bro
wooooow
such detailed descriptive narration it is just a delight to read the whole of it which i really enjoyed very very much bro..
in the beginning i also thought like both brother and sister thought that their parents are aware of the meeting of last night between vijay and aisha... but the matter was not that... extremely thriling update bro..all want to know what really happened.... aisha was not dressed according to she should have been for her engagement...what happened then
#why the parents of vihay are sasking him about their meeting with aisha? what did aisah say to all the fmily members in the get together at her place?
this is a great suspense... vijay's dad took him alone to his room to talk so let us now see ehat they talked about.....


thanks loads for the appreciation rowdy bro
 

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wow what a serious conversation between dad and son?
this usually happens that a son starts crying when talking to his dad

and wow what a sister man!1 she runs to support her bro and shouts at her father thinking that he hit him wow wonderful pdate bro
as i said the dad said the same may all brothers get a sister like Pooja.. she is very special as a sister
reading the next bro, so why and how aisha returned the doctor? what did she say to him that the doctor return?

thanks very much rowdy bro
 

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oh so that was it!! it concerned Vijay's elder brother vimal oh!!
pooja will be relieved thanks god... she still have days to live in the house with her beloved brother vijay...
well okay so the family members came to terms to get vimal and Anna married thats good, so a family member increases in vijay's house...
you have said this character of Anna is very imporrtant in the story so will watch what unfolds ahead... bro for now i stop here, will continuedthe read sometime later
it is very very interesting yes and want to know more how things went on for them but time does not allow so i take a reast here.... will continue next time
LL UPDATES ARE FANTASTIC AND WORTH A READ AND YOU JUST ROCK CASI BRO. THIS IS A FANTASTIC LOVE STORY MY DEAT.
:yourock:

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Casi bro sorry due to hectic schedules I was unable to continue the read here. I wanted to complete the read but had stopped here at update 50.
So gonna read the next and hope to complete all by this night...
 

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Update 51

Aaakhir mein donon taraf ke paraiwaaar walon ne 10 din ke andar andar Vimal aur Anna ki shadi ki tayaariyan ki. Shadi mein Aisha aur parents bhi invited the. Rhanveer lane par tent pitched kiya gaya mehmaanon ko receive karne ke liye.

Inn bhaag dawd mein Vijay ko Aisha se milne ka na baat karne ka mawka mila. Magar woh raat din uss ke bare mein sochta raha aur Vimal ke shaadi ko lekar har tayaariyan ke dawraan Vijay sochta, ‘Kaash meri aur Aisha ki shaadi ki tayaariyan bhi eise dhoom dhaam se hota!!’

Shaadi ke ek din pehley court mein civil marriage ki donon ne aur donon taraf ke pariwaar present the uss waqt bhi aur Vijay bhi, balke Vijay ek witness raha marriage certificate par.

Dusrey din sab kuch Vijay ke yahan huwa. Ab shaadi ki details to nahin likhunga bus Vijay aur Aisha ke chand lamhon ko relate karta hoon. Aisha ne ek bahot hi khub surat saree pehni huwi thi, jo pink colour ki thi aur blouse kaafi tang aur choti thi jiss se uss ka figure ubharta tha. Ussski khubsurat gori kamar enkhon ke saamne tha aur Vijay har waqt Aisha ko dekha karta tha aur baat karne ki koshish bhi ki kayi baar magar har baar Vinod chacha beech mein ajaatey! Woh Aisha par khub nazar rakh raha tha kyunke uss ko pata tha Vijay yehin kahin hai…. Aisha ke baal khule huwe the aur reh reh kar woh apni ungliyon ko baal mein phertey huwe pichey ke taraf kiya karti thi aur Vijay unn adawon par marta tha hamesha se…. aur Aisha ko pata tha ke Vijay usski sabhi adawon ko pyar karta hai aur uss ko unn adawon mein dekhna passand karta hai.

Vijay ne note kiya ke Aisha ek mature young woman lag rahi thi uss saree mein…. eisa lagta tha ke woh ek shaadi shuda awrat hai. Kuch badi bhi dikhti thi. Tab Vijay ne socha ke sexual relations to Aisha ke saath uss ne pura ek saal kiya tha, to jism Aisha ki zaroor uss wajah se kuch ziada ubhar gaye hein aur ziada mature ho gayi hai…. Vijay Aisha ko apni patni manta tha. Yeh to tab se jab Aisha koyi 12/13 saal ki thi tab se…Aur udhar Aisha ne bhi Vijay ko apna pati samajh liya tha unn dinon magar uss ke pita ki objection ki wajah se aaj ka din dekhna tha inn donon ko. To ab Vijay yeh kehta dil hi dil mein, ‘woh rahi meri biwi, kitni khub surat lag rahi hai aur main apni biwi se baat tak nahin kar sakta… keisa rishta hai yeh?!’

Phir Vijay ne apne aap ko behlaney ke liya khud se yeh kaha, ‘Meri patni se mera ladaayi huwi hai, hum donon ek dusre se baat nahin kartey. Hum ek dusre ko dekhtey hein, mann hi mann bahot pyar kartey ek dusre ko magar abhi ladhaayi hone ke wajah se baat nahin kar rahe hein…’ yeh soch kar Vijay muskuraya aur socha bachon jeisa behave kar raha hai…. Pooja ne ussko apne aap se hanstey huwe dekha to aakar poocha, “Kia baat hai bhai kyun khud se baatein kar rahe ho aur hans bhi rahe ho?” To hanstey huwe Vijay ne apni ungli se Aisha ka ishara kiya aur Pooja se kaha, “Woh dekh meri patni, teri bhabhi, kitni sundar dikh rahi hai nah?” Pooja ne ek sympathetic smile di apne bhai ko aur kaha, “Han bhai woh zaroor tumhari patni banegi, dekh lena….” Tab Vijay ne reply kiya, “Arey pugli, banegi nahin, hai, hai… abhi hum donon ki ladhaayi chal rahi hai iss liye baat cheet nahin hai donon mein!” aur donon bhai behen hanss pade.

Keise bhi din guzra, jhamele kum huwe, reception khatam huwi, log wapas jane lage aur teenon ghar ke log reh gaye. Anna ko ghar ke andar lejaya gaya. Ab kyunke woh nayi naveli dulhan thi, ghar ka naya member thi to ussko ziada importance diya ja raha tha. Pooja har waqt uss ke saath rehti thi badhbadh karti huwi. Vimal aur Anna baithe the lounge mein ek double sofe par aur Anu unn donon ke beech ghuss kar baith gayi. Anna bahot khub surat thi, khub gori, thoda bahot vilayati mem ki tarah dikhti thi. Usske baal katey huwe the kaandhe tak. Kuch chup chap si dikh rahi thi, ab yeh uss ka pehla din tha ghar mein to kissi ko ziada pata nahin tha uss ke barey mein.

Ab Aisha ke gharwalon ko bhi Vijay ke ghar ke andar jana pada. Pooja ne kissi bahane se Vijay ko Aisha se milwane ka intezaam kiya. Yeh tab huwa jab shaam huwi aur Vinod chacha pine ke liye Anirud chacha ke yahan gaya. Vijay ke kamre mein dhire se Pooja ne Aisha ke haath khinchtey huwe legayi…. Vijay tab baahar tha aur Pooja ne chupke se ussko ishara kiya ke Aisha uss ke kamre mein hai.

Kamre mein Aisha uss din ko yaad kar rahi thi jiss din woh Vijay se sorry kehne ko ayi thi jab woh choti thi aur jab Vijay uss se baat nahin karta tha aur na uss ke yahan jata tha. Yeh iss liye tha ke Aisha ne Vijay ko ek thapad mara tha…. Uss din Aisha kitna royi thi woh Aisha yaad kar rahi thi aur Vijay ke kamre ko dekh kar purani yaadein Aisha ke dimaagh mein flash backs ki tarah tasvirein dikhane lagi… Aisha ke enkhen nam huwi aur woh unn dinon ko miss karne lagi jab woh aksar subha school jane se pehle issi kamre mein Vijay ka wait kiya karti thi….

Kuch der baad Vijay andar aya. Aisha apni enkhon ko ponch rahi thi to turant Vijay ne ussko baahon mein zor se liya aur poocha kia baat kai kyun ro rahi thi. Aisha ne kaha “Kuch nahin purane din yaad agaye the….” Vijay bola, “Agar tum chaho to weh din dubara wapas aa sakte hein jaan bus tumhari han ka intezaar hai mujhey, tum jaanti ho….” Aisha ne kaha, “tum achchi tarah jaanti ho ke ye ab namumkin hai to kyun sapnon ki dunya mein ji rahe ho tum? Bhool jawo Vijay sab bhool jawo ab!”

Vijay ne thoda ghusa kiya aur poocha, “To tum ne uss doctor ko kyun bhaga diya? Hmm bolo?” Aisha nichey zameen par dekhtey huwe boli, “woh meri marzi.” To vijay bola, « Acha? okay thik hai. Bus mujhko tum yeh batawo ke tum ne eisa kia kaha uss doctor ko ke woh chup chap chala gaya? main kayi dinon se tum se milne ki koshish kar raha tha aur yeh Vimal bhai ka maamla beech mein aan pada, tum batawo to mujhe kia kaha tha tum ne uss doctor ko… » Aisha ne poocha, «Vimal kab se iss ladki se pyar karta tha? Tumko pata tha kia ?» Vijay ne reply kiya, «Mujhko kia ghar mein kissi ko bhi nahin pata tha bilkool. Woh pregnant hai tumko pata hai?” Aisha ne kaha, “Han tumhari mummy ne mama se kaha tha ussi din!” To Vijay ne kaha, «To chalo hum donon bhi wohi kartey hein na yaar… main tumko pregnant kardeta hoon tab tum ko koyi nahin rokega mujhse shaadi karne se ! » Aisha boli, « Main Anna nahin hoon ! »

Vijay ne Aisha ko bahon mein lete huwe kaha, «tum ekdum pari lag rahi ho aaj jaan…tum ko khane ko jee kar raha hai !» Aisha ne kaha, «to khaalo mujhey! Weise kha to chuke ho mujhe tum kab ke!»


To be continued…………………………..

Very beautiful and heart touching update bro.
I can feel how Vijay must be feeling watching his love in the wedding dressed so beautifully .
You have so beautifully described Aisha's beauty, her manners, her way of moving her hair from her face etc. Those little things are of great importance when one is in love with a girl.
Theie meeting in his room was a wow... but so sad they could not be together for long.
Splendid update bro.
This thread and story touches the heart and remains very close to the heart.
 

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Update 52

I DEDICATE THIS UPDATE TO ALL THE READERS OF THIS STORY, TO ALL THOSE WHO ARE LOVESTRUCK OR THOSE WHO HAVE GONE THROUGH SUCH DAYS AND SITUATIONS IN LOVE

Vijay Aisha ko kaske bahon mein ek lamba passionate kiss kiya aur Aisha ne bhi kiss ko achi tarah se respond kiya. Aisha ki bahein Vijay ke jism ko zor se apne aap par chipkaya huwa tha aur Vijay ke haath Aisha ke komal, nazuk kamar par the jab ke uss choti si choli mein puri kamar baahar jo thi. Vijay ahiste ahiste, howley howle apne ungliyon ko Aisha ki kamar par pher raha tha jiss se Aisha ke jism mein ek aag jeisi daud rahi thi aur woh apne aap par kaabu nahin rakh paayi aur khud ko puri tarah se Vijay ke hawale kar diya tha, Vijay diwanon ki tarah Aisha ko chumtey huwe, usski ki jeeb se unn meethe rasson ko nichortey huwe, woh bhi badan mein kashmaksah ki leher mehsoos kar raha tha aur lund bilkool khada ho gaya tha jissko Aisha ne apne saree ke upar jaanghon par achi tarah se feel kiya.

Dhire dhire Vijay ka ek haath Aisha ke chaati par ponhcha aur dusra haath usski chutron par, uss se Vijay ne Asha ki nichey wale hissey ko apne dick par aur kaske dabaya aur Aisha jeise ke behosh ho rahi thi uss waqt aur uss ne donon enkhen bilkol bandh kar li thi aur Vijay ko apne aap ko ek baar phir samarpan kar diya tha. Uss waqt aasmaan se upar wala bhi dekhta hoga to sochega ya eisa hi lagega ke yeh donon to ek dusre ke liye hi banne hein aur pati patni hi hein. Ek shunya ka bhi koyi shaque nahin hota ke yeh pati patni nahin hein. Insaan to kia Bhagwan bhi sochega ke kyun inn donon ki aaj tak meyl nahin huwa hai, inn donon ki shaadi to swarg mein hogayi hogi khud Bhagwaan sochta hoga !

Kehte hein nah ke shaadiyan dunya mein nahin balke upar se hokar ate hein, do dilon ke rishte aasmaan se judh kar atey hein to kyun iss dunya mein insaan do dilon ko milne se rokte hein aur chahne walon ko tarpate hein aur juda karte hein ? Khoon ke ensoo rote hein kabhi muhabat karne wale, kabhi pariwaar walon ki wajah se to kabhi samaajh ki banawati usoolon ki wajah se, ya to kabhi aur kahin jhooti insaan ke banaye huwe tehzeebon ki wajah se… kissi na kissi kaaran iss dunya ko pyar karne walon ko juda karne ki aur tarpaane ki, dukh jhelne ki, rulane ke bahana mil hi jaati hai. Kitne pyar karne wale to bilkool hi nahin mil paye iss khokli makkaar dunya aur samaaj ki wajah se…. Kitne muhabat karne walon ne ek dusre se milne ke liye atmahatya kiye, iss irade se ke marne ke baad to woh aakhir mil payeinguey, kitnon ne qurbaniyan diye apne muhabat ke gala ghont kar kissi aur se rishta jodke, sirf iss samaajh ko ya pariwaar ko khush rakhne ke liye…. Kayi muhabat karne wale jiss ke rishte aasmaan se ban ke aye iss dunya mein, upar wale ne unnko ek dusre ke liye paida kiya aur milkar saath rehne ke liye bheja magar dunya ne unn ko juda kiya aur kissi aur se rishta joda…. Seinkron eise log hein iss dunya mein jo samaajh ki ya kissi aur nafrat ka shikaar hokar muhabat mein naakaamyaab rahe, jab ke khuda ne unn do dilon ko ek honé ke liye paida kiya tha…..

To hamara Vijay aur Aisha weisa hi ek jodi lag rahe the uss waqt jissko upar wale ne ek duje ke liye hi banaya hai mudat pehley se hi. Ab kaun yahan tang ara raha hai inn donon dilon ke beech. Rukawat ke roop mein khud Aisha ka pita hai. Magar kia uss ke pita ko thoda sa bhi khayaal aya hoga key yeh donon ek dusre ke liye baney hein! Yeh unn logon mein se hein ke agar khud Bhagwan ek insaan ke roop mein unn ko aakar yeh kahein ke Aisha aur Vijay ko ek dusre ke liye banaye gaye hein to bhi yeh inkaar kareinguey aur apni man maani kareinguey… Eise to hum Laila-Majnu, Shirin Farhaad, Romeo Juliet aur seikron eise kahaniyon ko jaantey hein magar kitne eise Vijay aur Aisha jeise aur laakhon chahne wale honguey jinnko juda kiya gaya ho!!!??

Behrehaal, Vijay Aisha ko apne bistar tak lekar gaya aur Aisha khud bistar par leth gayi jeise woh khud chahti ho ke Vijay ussko apne aaghosh mein lein…… Vijay Aisha ke peth par apna munh rakh kar apne honton ko halke se pherta gaya upar ke awr aur uss ke chaati par ruka phir blouse ko kholne ki koshish shuru ki…. Tab achanak Aisha uthi aur jhat se bistar se uthri yeh kehte huwe, “Nahin Vijay yeh ab thik nahin main chalti hoon…” Vijay achaanak thanda par gaya aur heyraani se Aisha ko dekhtey huwe bola, “Kia hogaya achaanak? Abhi abhi to tum thik thi, suno to jaan!” Par Aisha darwaze tak chali gayi thi aur usse khol kar baahar nikal kar sidhey tent mein gayi aur jab dekha ke koyi bhi nahin hai tent mein to apni ghar chali gayi…. Vijay ne usska picha kiya jitna jaldi ho saka par Aisha jaa chuki thi…. Vijay tent mein khada soch mein dooba raha kuch der tak yeh sochtey ke kia baat hein jo Aisha ko weise behave karne par majboor karta hai har waqt….. kia ussne apne pita se koyi vaada kiya hai ke kabhi bhi woh Vijay ke paas nahin jaegi? Kia uss ne kassam khaayi hai kissi se ke Vijay se door rahegi hamesha? Agar weisi baat hai to kyun kabhi Vijay se kuch bhi nahin kehti? Kia woh nahin sochti Vijay par kia beet raha hoga? Kab tak eisa chalega unn donon ke beech? Kab tak samaajh ke khokley dastoor ki vajah se ye do premi apne aap se ladhte raheinguey? Kab tak do masoom dilon ke beech daraar bana rahega? Aakhihr kab tak? Vijay tang agaya hai inn baton se aur eise haalaat se. Vijay apne dil o dimaagh par dabaav daaltey huwe sab sehta raha itne dinon tak par khud sawaal karta gaya ke aakhir kab tak yun chalega ?? kab tak ?

Vijay ne risk lena chaha, socha ke chaahe jo bhi ho aaj woh faisla karke rahega chahe chaaku chale ya bandook woh aaj Aisha se sab ugalwake rahega. Vijay Aisha ke yahan ponhcha. Darwaza khatkhataya. Aisha ki maa nikli. Vijay ne Aisha se milne ki maang ki. Usski chachi ne kaha, « Vijay beta, kyun khatra mol lena chahte ho agar tumhare chacha ko pata chala ke yahan ho to qayamat ajaegi, chale jawo please. » Vijay ne thaan liya tha chahe jo bhi ho woh Aisha se baat kiye bina nahin jaega, aur apne chachi ko dhaka de kar Aisha ke kamre mein ghussa. Aur koyi nahin tha ghar mein. Vijay ne Aisha ke donon baazuwon ko zor se pakar kar ussko jhigjhora aur oochey swar mein poocha, « AAJ TUMKO BOLNA HOGA, KIA BAAT HAI, KAB TAK MAIN YUN TUMHARE ZULMON KO SEHTA RAHUNGA ? KYUN EISE BEHAVE KARTI HO ? KIA IRADA HAI ? MUJHSE PYAR KARTI HO YA NAHIN ? MERI DULHAN BANOGI YA NAHIN ? MAIN TUMHARA INTEZAAR KARUN YA NAHIN ?» Yeh itne lavz kehkar vijay ke enkhon se ensoo chalak pade, woh emotional to tha hi, aur eise mawkon par aksar ro diya karta tha….. Aisha buth bani khadi rahi bina koyi jawaab diye, jeise koyi pathar ban gayi ho! Vijay ne phir ussko zor se hilaya aur jawaab manga magar Aisha jeise hosh mein nahin thi, weisa behave kar rahi thi, ek dum pathar ke murat jeise…. Vijay ke ensoowon ka bhi assar nahin tha usspar uss waqt….. Vijay ne ziada zor se aur ghusse mein poocha, “Agar tum ko meri nahin banna hai to uss doctor ko kyun inkaar kiya aur kia kaha tha ussko ke woh chala gaya bina kuch kahe? JAWAAB DO AISHA JAWAAB DO MUJHKO. TUMHARI KHAMOSHI MERI JAAN LELEGI…. DEKHO MAIN MARKE TUMKO DIKHADUN? ABHI KE ABHI ISS SINE MEIN KUCH BHONK LETA HOON…. EK CHAAKU BHONKLUN APNE SINE ME AUR CHEER DALUN ISS DIL KO JISS MEIN SIRF TUMN BASSI HO, KIA KEHTI HO? MERA SAR BHOOT SANWAAR HAI AISHA MAIN EISA KAR SAKTA HOON ISSI WAQT AGAR TUM NE KOYI JAWAAB NAHIN DIYA TO!!! ABHI ATA HOON EK CHAAKU LEKAR…..” Yej kehkar Vijay kitchen ke taraf gaya chaaku lene, usski chachi hadbadati usske piche gayi chaaku chinney ke liye tab Aisha bhi aayi kitchen mein aur Vijay ke haath ko pakra aur ussko ek zor se thapad maartey huwe chilla kar ROTEY HUWE MOTI MOTI ENSSOWON KE SAATH kaha, “Marna chahte ho kaayar? To pehley mujhko maaro, maar dalo mujhko, mere sine mein ched kardo iss chaaku se! Tumko pata hai ke main kia seh rahi hoon itne dinon se? KIA MAIN KHUSH HOON? KIA MAIN DIN BHAR MAWJ MASTI MEIN JEETI HOON? MUJH PAR KIA BEETTA HAI KABHI PUCHA HAI KISSI NE? MAIN KISS KISS DAWR SE GUZRI HOON YE MALOOM HAI TUMKO? MAIN NE KITNE KHOON KE ENSOO ROYE HEIN YEH POOCHA HAI KABHI? JAB MAIN DUSRON KO APNE APNE JIWAN SAATHI KE SAATH DEKHTI HOON TAB MUJHPAR KIA BEETTI HAI YEH SOCHA HAI KISSI NE KABHI?...... Vijay ekdum shant hogaya Aisha ki iss roop ko dekh kar… Vijay ka munh khula ke khula reh gaya ekdum jeise bilkool hawa nikal gayi ho….. Ab Aisha itne zoron se rote huwe bol rahi thi ke awaaz Vijay ke ghar tak ponchi aur wahan tak kia, raat ka waqt tha aur Anirud chacha ke ghar tak bhi awaaz chali gayi aur Aihsa ke pita ne bhi sun liya aur sab log chale aye wahan Aisha ke ghar yahan tak ke Vimal aur usski nayi dulhan bhi, Pooja, Annu SAB KE SAB … log bhar gaye ghar mein, lounge mein, kitchen mein… magar koyi beech mein nahin bol raha tha aur Aisha ussi sur mein chilatey huwe kaha, “PAPA AAP KUCH NAHIN BOLEINGUEY AAJ KOYI BHI NAHIN BOLEGA, AAJ MAIN BOLUNGI AUR SAB SUNEINGUEY, AGAR KISSI NE MUJHKO ROKNE KI KOSHISH KI TO MAIN APNE AAP KO MAAR DALUNGI….. Aisha par jeise bhoot sanwaar ho gayi ho…. Sab sun rahe the woh roti bilatti bolti jaa rahi thi…. Ek katha kehna tha ussko aaj, Aaj usski ki baari thi…….

Agle update mein sirf Aisha ki baatein suneinguey ensoowon ke saath, dil thaam kar wait karna yaaro, ab ayi uss dukhyaari ki baari apni dil ke dukhrey sab ko sunane ko…..


To be continued…..with tears…….

Terrific update casi bro. Terrific, intense, strong and fabulous update. You really are a genius my dear. Thanks for the dedication bro.
The way you started the update with both Vijay and Aisha holding each other kissing and lost in each others embrace was so very romantic and loving.
You then came to the society's dirty meaningless issues and barriers because of which so many lovers either got separated or died.
Then the last part where vijay decided to make Aisha talk.... that was very intense when he threatened to kill himself if she wont talk.
And lastly when Aisha started to talk it was the retarded BOMB which was to explose.....
Fantastic update bro.
Can't stop praising you and your writings my dear.
Thanks very much casi bro.
 

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superb
a father and mother will always be afraid lest their son gets hurt or in anyway gets in trouble
mother and dad are all now worried because they are thinking ?Aisha's father can harm hin if he has had sexual relationship with aisha
on the other side the love for Vijay towards both his sisters who went to sleep on his bed all night, the dad talked about how far the three love each other
and in the morning how the mother said their dad talked about pooja's wedding it was then that vijay realised pooja was now a marriage material lol
well lets se ahead now
Thanks loads for the appreciation Rowdy bro
 
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