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Chapter 1 :Ulajhte Raaste
Chapter 1 :Ulajhte Raaste
Chapter 2: Wo Ladki Kaun Hai?
Chapter 3: Shayad
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Superb Updatee
Yeh DCP toh kuch jyaada hi rangeen mizaaz ka nikla. Ab shayad Sugandha iss rangeen mizaaz ko safhed karegi.
Nice Updatee
Bahot hi romantic update tha. Baarish mein apni crush ke saath bike mein kahi jaana is the best moment that you never forgot.
Toh packet Kabir ne Hospital mein chupaya par kab chupaya.
Nice Updateee
Ab yeh Aditya kaha gaya ab usko fikar nhi ke hospital mein bhi smriti pe attack hosakta tha. Aur uske room ke bahar koi guard nhi. Kahi yeh Aditya bhi unnlogo se mila hua toh nhi jo Smriti ko maarna chahte hai.
Aur yeh log hospital se nikalke kaha gaye. Kahi ussi pharmacy mein toh nhi.
Nice Updatee
Ek pal ko toh laga Sugandha bhi kahi gaddar toh nhi. Aur yeh Anubhav aur Sugandha couples hai.
Thank you king for your support to the storySuperb Update
Super fantastic update Bhai
Awesome fabulous update Bhai
Jabardust update Bhai
Shandaar update Bhai
Awesome update Bhai superb
Thank tou black water... Story ko pasand karne ka shukriya dear... Asha hai story apko age bhi pasand ayegiJhakash update Bhai
Sugandha bholi bhali hai... Ye kehna sahi nahi hoga... Par ye keh sakti hoon ki dil saaf hai uska... Aur raaz ki baat bataun to is kahani me agar kisi par ankh moond kar viswas kiya hai Smriti ne to wo Sugandha hi hai...SUGANDHA bichari bholi bhaali kirdaar hai sab us bichari ke hi piche pade hai.. are koi is smriti, kabir aur aditya ki bhi aisi ki taisi kar do
Sugandha ke baare me ek baat batana chahungi... Wo ek bohot acchi wakil hai... Kab bolna hai kab chhup rehke situation ko tolna hai isipe uska poora career tika hai... Ye uska hunar hai...waise sugandha dono launde ko ek saath flat pe le ke jaa rahi hain..... lagta hain pura bartan aur kapre shab saaf karwayegi... dono se... ...
dekh rahe ho yeh dono bechare ankhio se goli maare khel rahe hain aur madam ko lagta hain drama ho raha hain.... inko larna ho toh... bagal waali ko dekh ke smile kyun kiye ... ussi pe lar parengi.... khair hame kya bhugte anubhav...
ab sugandha kamasutra kee wastawik gyan lene aati hogi... alarm activate karwa ke puri colony ko thori na batana hain... aaj kaun sa pose..
tu khuni nahin tu khuni... dono ek doosre ko credit de rahe hain... lekin sala dono nakam rahe.... smriti abhi tak mari kahan hain... wo toh jinda hi bach gayee...... hospital mein bhi mauka tha... nukili kuhni se uski peeth mein ek aadh chhed kar deta...
Uska nishana chuka to wo thoda lad khada gaya... Maine usika fayda uthate huye uspar ek mukkar jad diya.... opportunist.......
ab yeh teeno planning kar rahe hain kee smriti ko tapkaye kaise... do baar toh bach gayee... ab teesri baar mein uska happy birthday kar hi dena hain...
toh launda ko manipulate karna aata hain... aise hi kar ke smriti se hulu lulu kiya hain lagta hain... aur ab idhar anubhav ko manipulate kar ke sugandha se breakup karwana chahta hain... phir yeh anubhav ke pechhe anubhav iske pechhe too much fun......
waise iska chhota bhai jald hi sara game samajh gaya.. jab bhi iska chanth baapu peetne aata pehle se hi rona chalu... aur uska shakal milta hain aur iska nahin... kaheen mata jee mhmmmm mhmmmm ne fair ugly toh na lagayee thee......
sahi hain smriti kee help karne ke liye usse pehle uske layak banna bhi hoga... jab tak smriti theek na ho jaati tab tak isse apne aap ko toh saare iljaam se rafa dafa karna hoga nahin toh bina wardee ke kya manipulate manipulate khelega... anubhav lagta hain kabir ko kuchh jyada hi pasand karta hain... ek baar toh haath utha ke thobra saaf kiya doosri baar colalr pakar ke sahi kiya thoda tedha ho gaya hoga...
waise yeh prada waali aaj itni shant kaise thee... koi brand ka naam yaad na aa raha tha kya...
Ronny ka sach aur hospital ka hamla... In dono baaton ka khulasa ane wale updates me hoga... Maybe 2 hardly 3...Superb Updatee
Toh Smriti ko diabetes hai. Ek aisi bimaari jo marte dum tak rehti hai. Jyaada badh jaaye toh problem aur jyaada kamm jaaye toh bhi problem.
Chalo yeh ek achha hua Anubhav aur Kabir ne dosti ka haath badhaya hai.
Aur yeh DCP minister Aditya aur ab yeh ronny yeh sablog mile hue lag rahe hai. Aur bina koi wajh se Kabir ko fhasana chah rahe hai. Par Kabir bhi koi kachha khilaadi nhi.
Dekhte hai aage kya hota hai.
... Kitna asleel hai ye ladkadekh lo yeh kare aur hum bole bhi na.... aur itna kahe tuufan macha rahi ho aap... kuchh garbar hain ka...
pata nahi kyun par is kavita ko dekh apni xp ki stories yaad aa rahi haiis kahani ko jab bhi read karu to ek hi kavita yaad aaye lagtar...
Main Tujhko Bhool Jaau,
Yeh Zaroori To Nahi.....
Dil Ki Baat Zubaan Par Laau,
Yeh Zaroori To Nahi....
Haan,Yeh Sach Hai Ke Mujhe Tujhse Bepanaah Mohabbat Hai!!!
Par Tujhe Iss Baat ka Main Ab Yakeen Dilaau,
Yeh Zaroori To Nahi.....
Musafir Hoon Main Bhi Aur Musafir Ho Tum Bhi!!!
Kisi Raah Par main Tumse Phir Mil Paau,
Yeh Zaroori To Nahi.....
Duniya Ki Iss Bheed Mein,Main khud Ki Pehchaan Bhi Kho Baithi Hoon!!
Kabhi To main khud Ko Bhi Kareeb Se Jaan Paau,
Yeh Zaroori To Nahi.....
Tujhko Tujhse Bhi Zyaada main Jaanti Hoon!!!
Par Baar-Baar main Iss Baat Ko Dohraau,
Yeh Zaroori To Nahi....
Jo Ashq Ki Lehar Khamoshi Mein
Aankhon Se Beh Jaati Hai Unhe Beh Jaane Do!!!
Inn Ashq Ko Main Aaankhon Mein Apne Qaid kar, Tujhse Nazrein Churaau,
Yeh Zaroori To Nahi....
"Khwaish" Yeh Jaanti Hai Ke Insaan Ki Har KHWAISH Mukammal Nahi Hoti!!!!
Yeh Jaankar Main Yuhi Halaat Se Apni Haar Maan Jaau,
Yeh Zaroori To Nahi....
Kisi kavi ki kavita hai ye.... Well..... Aur shayad is story ke kirdaaro ki bhi soch aur vichar hai...... Lekin..
ahem... ahem..... ab meri baat bhi sun lo.....
ये भटकाव अच्छा नहीं इश्क बुरी बला होती है लग जाये तो आसानी से पीछा नहीं छूटता। हम आपको मना तो नहीं कर सकते पर इतना जरुर है की प्रीत का स्वाद जो चखा जुबान ने फिर बेगाने हुए जग से समझो.....
Btw brilliant update with awesome writing skills Sasha!
Edited ~ kash is kahani mein hero Nischal hota aur heroine Meera.. to kahani kuch aur hoti