Adultery Zindegi Ka Khel

[Yash420]

Doston main koi writer Nahi hoon fir bhi ek chota sa kosis Kar Raha hoon jisme aap sab ki sahyog ki abasykta hogi

Kahani main sayad Bahat Kuch time to time changes aayenge lakin thoda Dhiraj Rakh ke madad karte rahiya ga kyun ki main job bhi Kar ta hoon toh update Thoda delay bhi ho Sakta hai .
Kosis karunga hafte main teen update dene Ka.
Thank You



Update aap ko jaldi Milega

 

[Yash420]

nice update

Sukriya Bhai

 

[Yash420]

Bhai ek ponit tak toh bahut bura lag raha tha lekin right time tume yash ki entry krra kr bacha liya nhi toh shyad mai story aage nahi padta wese update kafi acha tha aur maja aata agar fight seen toh ache se explain krte baki awesome update keep it up waiting for next

Bhai Thanks for your review
Or rahi baat fight ki toh main kahani ko thoda first forward main Chala Raha hoon is ke liye sayad Bahat Kuch choot Raha hai
Or aage se dhyan rakhunga

 

[Anyone]

Really

bhai yeh seen mujhe bhi bahut bura lag but writer ne jarur kuch soch kr likha hoga

Dost story hai kuch bhi ho sakata hai
Bese etna mind nahi lena chahiye
Aap ko or sab ko bura lag sakta hai
Par ek lekhak ki soch kya hai ye us ke upar hi dipend karega

 

[Yash420]

Really

bhai yeh seen mujhe bhi bahut bura lag but writer ne jarur kuch soch kr likha hoga

Jaroor
Bhai bahat Kuch socha hai
Jo aage chal Kar pata lag gega aap ko

 

[Yash420]

Dost story hai kuch bhi ho sakata hai
Bese etna mind nahi lena chahiye
Aap ko or sab ko bura lag sakta hai
Par ek lekhak ki soch kya hai ye us ke upar hi dipend karega

Thanks dear for support me
But ager mujhe koi mere Kami ke bare main batayega Nahi toh phir main aage Sudhar launga kaise
So har comments mujhe Achaa Lagta hai chahe Woh positive ho ya negative ho

 

[gamechanger5]

Dost story hai kuch bhi ho sakata hai
Bese etna mind nahi lena chahiye
Aap ko or sab ko bura lag sakta hai
Par ek lekhak ki soch kya hai ye us ke upar hi dipend karega

Bilkul bhai ji

 

[Anyone]

Thanks dear for support me
But ager mujhe koi mere Kami ke bare main batayega Nahi toh phir main aage Sudhar launga kaise
So har comments mujhe Achaa Lagta hai chahe Woh positive ho ya negative ho

Ye hue na bat dost ye asli lekhak ki pahchan hai
You are great bhai

 

[Anyone]

Bilkul bhai ji

Thanks bhai ji
And good night
All firend

 

[Yash420]

Doston aage kahani main bahat Kuch hone wala hai Jo sayad aap sab ko aatpata lage lakin Bhai main dhire dhire sab Kuch clear karte jaunga aap sab ko
kyun ki kahani Ko main us ke happy ending tak le Kai jaunga
Or Haan aap sab ko entertainment Kar ne ki kosis karunga is kahani ke madhyam se
Thank You For everything

 

[SKYESH]

Tomorrow i will check and revert dear...


Thanks for informing

Update posted Bro
Plz read and give your feedback