Adultery Zindegi Ka Khel

[Yash420]

Doston main koi writer Nahi hoon fir bhi ek chota sa kosis Kar Raha hoon jisme aap sab ki sahyog ki abasykta hogi

Kahani main sayad Bahat Kuch time to time changes aayenge lakin thoda Dhiraj Rakh ke madad karte rahiya ga kyun ki main job bhi Kar ta hoon toh update Thoda delay bhi ho Sakta hai .
Kosis karunga hafte main teen update dene Ka.
Thank You



Update aap ko jaldi Milega

 

[kamdev99008]

Bhai ye scene BHOT khrab tha
Story ki bat LGA di

Dost story hai kuch bhi ho sakata hai
Bese etna mind nahi lena chahiye
Aap ko or sab ko bura lag sakta hai
Par ek lekhak ki soch kya hai ye us ke upar hi dipend karega

exactly....................
kahani mein kuchh to realistic base hona chahiye..............

yahan interfaith, incest aur cuckold ki instant fantasy ne ...........kahaniyon ke readers hi nahi chhode..........sab fabntassy mein jine lage hain
kahani logical hoti hain................ ye scene bhi logical tha........... aisa hota hai......realistic

lekin fantasy...... 'jisko hindi/urdu mein gupp bhi kahte hain......... usmein bina sir pair ke lund khada, choot gili aur chudai shuru
tab sabkuchh achchha lagta hai

bhai readers ki ginti badhane ke chakkar mein........... in achchhi kahaniyon ko .......incest, adultery section mein rakhkar aise readers ko kyon hatash (frustrate) karte ho jo sirf chudai tak hi jante hain......................kahani ki gehraiyon aur utar-chadhav ko hi nahin jaante

romance ya thriller hi rakh liya karo.................. jaise ankitarani ji ne apni kahani ko jab se incest ki bajay thriller tag mein convert kar diya............ kahani ke scene ko lekar faaltu ki bahas band ho gayi....... sirf logical comments hi aate hain.......... chahe readers kam ho gaye ..... lekin sincere readers hain............

 

[urc4me]

Rasprrad aur Romanchak Thriller. Waiting for next update.

 

[Suryaa]

for new story thread brother

 

[Killerpanditji(pandit)]

Update 5


Tabhi ek sakash us kamre main enter hota hai

Ab aage

Officer : Hello Mr. Nagesh
Nagesh: Namaste Bikram G
G Haan doston yeh Bikram Khana hai or
Army se related jitna bhi weapons import hota hai yahi sab yeh dekhte Hain

Nagesh Jo Hain
Mr Suryakant Ka sala
haan Bhai Naina Ka mama
or Jo weapons banta hai Woh Suryakant ki factory main banta hai Jo ki usko tender main Mila tha bahat din pehle or Nagesh Bhai isko sambhalte Hain

Or bahat Kuch hota hai inke factory main Jo Suryakant ko malum Nahi hai yeh apna Nagesh Bhai usko Achi Tarah secretly Rakh te Hain Kuch bando ke Saath
khair bahat Kuch karta rehta hai Nagesh Jo sayad hi Suryakant ko pata ho

Bikram : inse Milo Birendra yeh Hain Nagesh
or Nagesh G yeh Hain Mr Rathod Humari sabse kabil or imandaar officer main se ek
Nagesh : hello Mr Birendra
Birendra : hello sir
Bikram : Baith ja e a Nagesh G
Nagesh : Haan thik hai
Bikram : toh is mahine se Jo bhi weapons Ka truck Aayega Woh birendra ke under hi Aayega
Nagesh : kya hua Bikram G humse koi bhul ho gaya kya
Birendra : Nahi sir
lakin Jo hum ko Chahiye Woh Nahi mil Raha hai or uskai badle main damage Saman supply ho Raha hai
Nagesh : yeh kya keh rahain Mr Birendra
yeh ho hi Nahi Sakta hum kariban 8 Saal se army ke liye weapons de rahain hain or aap keh rahe ho ki damage Maal
Birendra : sir yeh dekhiye report
or yeh report khud Bikram sir Ka hai
Nagesh : yeh kya hai Bikram G
Bikram : Dekhiye Mr Nagesh Jo dikha usi ke binha per report Reddy Kiya hoon main

Birendra : or Haan Mr Nagesh is damage weapons ke bajah se hum dushmano se thik Tarah Ka fight bhi Nahi Kar pate Hain
kyun ki do round fire Kar ne ke baad ya toh jaam ho jata Nahi toh spring tut jata hai
ab aap batay ki hum gun thik karengai ya samne dushmaan se karengai
Nagesh : lakin birendra G ab tak toh koi complaint Nahi tha
toh ab kyun
or hum log wohi purani Kota se weapons Bana rahain hain Bhai aap log bhi thoda madad Kar doh payment main
jitna payment milta hai usi hisab se weapons banate Hain
Birendra : Toh mat banyiya
yeh agreement Tod digiye
sarkar Kisi dusre se yeh kaam Karwa lega
Nagesh gusse se
Nagesh : yeh kya bol Raha hai Bikram
isse pata hai ki yeh kis se baat Kar Raha hai
Birendra : abhi sirf baat Kar Raha hoon Mr Nagesh Baki aap Samajh daar ho
Nagesh : Tu do kowdi Ka inshaan Mera kya ukhad lega bol
Birendra : Woh time aane doh main khud tumhe bataunga
Bikram Birendra ko shaant rehne ko kehta hai or Nagesh se

Bikram : calm down Mr Nagesh
ager hum log aise ladengai toh sarhad par kon ladega

Nagesh Ka gussa Dekh kar

Bikram : Birendra tum jao main tumse baad main baat karunga
or Haan jate time tum
mr xxx se mil Lena Woh tumse milna chahte Hain
Birendra : thik hai sir
jai hind sir
Bikram : jai hind
Birendra Chala jata hai
Birendra ke Jane ke baad

Nagesh : Bikram tumhe tumhara commission toh mil jata hai phir is madarchod ko yahan kya gaand marane laya tha
Bikram : Nagesh baat ab bahat aage badh chuka hai or army walao nai Kisi professional ko laane ki baat Kar rahe the
toh Maine apna dimag laga Kar Birendra ko laya
iske aage piche koi Nahi hai raaste se hata dengai

Phir dono baat karne lage or plan bhi
Nagesh Bikram Ka plan sun Kar bahat Khush hua or ek suitcase Bikram ko dia jo sirf 2000 ki note se bhara hua tha

Neetu bus se toh utar gayi apni gusse ke chalte or aage ko badhne lagi phus pushate hue

Neetu : pata Nahi Apne aap ko Samajh ta kya hai Ghar main maa Behan Nahi hai kya

Tab Neetu ko laga ki koi Uske piche chal Raha hai or who palat ke dekhti hai
tab ussai pata chal ki Woh kitni badi bhul Kar chuki hai bus se utarkar
tab Neetu apni aas Pas nazar ghumati hai tab ussai pata chala ki Woh kahan pe utar gayi yeh jagah toh Puri Tarah sun shaan hai

woh aadmi Kisi ko call karta hai

Aadmi : Kahan hai be loude jaldi aa aaj machli kaant nigal Gayi
M.other side : Bhai main toh Bhai ki gadi lekai aaya tha Tu Kahan hai
Aadmi : saale main us Maal Randi Neetu ke piche hoon
usko bus main Thoda sa pareshaan Kiya or Woh Randi Apne aade per utar gayi gusse se
bhai jaldi aa
tab tak us Sali ko main pakad Kar rakhta hoon
M.other side : kya bol Raha hai madarchod
kahin gaandu Tu Nashe main toh Nahi
Aadmi : tujhe aana hai toh aa Nahin toh gaand mara

yah bol ke Woh call kat deta hai
Neetu bhi wahan thodi aage Jake dekhne lagi ki kahin koi bus ya auto to Nahi aa Raha hai

tabhi Woh aadmi Neetu ke pass main ja ke khada ho Gaya

kuch sec ke baad Woh or karib Chala Gaya Neetu ke or
direct apna haath Neetu ke gaand par Rakh dia
Neetu phir se gusse main haath uthae lakin Woh aadmi uska haath bich main pakad Kar apni taraf kinch liya Neetu ko
Neetu : yeh tum kya Kar rahe ho
chodo mujhe Gabar jahil
Aadmi : tujhe chod ne ke liye Nahi pajda hai janemaan balki tujhe choad me ke liye pakda hai

neetu yeh sunkar dang reh gayi
Neetu : chod kute mujhe chod
bachao bachao Kar ke chilane lagi
Aadmi : chila jitna chilana hai chila koi yahan Teri sunne wala Nahi hai aaj toh tujhe g Bhar ke choadunga
yeh Sapna main Kai Dino se Dekh Raha tha
tabhi Neetu apni left hand ko chuda Kar Uske mooh per fir se ekchaanta laga deti hai
jis se aadmi bokhla jata hai
or Woh Kash ke Neetu ki ek chuchi ko daba deta hai
jis se Neetu ki mooh se ek jordaar cheekh nekalti hai
Neetu : chod kutte mujhe chod de
main Teri kya bigadi hoon
Aadmi : tune Nahi Randi tera yeh jawani Dekh Dekh Kar na Jane kitni Baar muth mar chuka hoon
ab toh randiyon bhi tera chehra nazar aata hai choad ne time
itna sun ne ke baad toh Neetu ke kaan se dhuan Nikal Gaya ki log uskai bare main kitni ghatiya Soch Rakh tai Hain

tabhi Woh Gunda Neetu ke shadi Ka pallu Gira deta hai
tab uski nazar Neetu ke boobs par padta hai jisse Uske mooh main Pani aajata hai
tab Neetu apni Puri takat ke Saath usko Dhaka deti hai or Gunda niche gir jata hai
tab Neetu wahan se doud ne lagi sadak par Jo bhi aaraha tha usko bachane ki guhar lagate hue
tabhi samne ek car aake ruka
Jisme sirf driver tha or koi nahi toh
Neetu : please mujhe bacha ligiye us gunde se
Driver : kya hua madam aap bhag kyun rahe ho
Neetu : oh Gunda mujhe se jor jabardasti Kar Raha hai
please help me
yeh bol ke haath jod leti hai tab uski pallu fir se neeche gir pada
or driver ki nazar jab Neetu ke seenai main pada toh aankhe phati phati reh Gaya

gunda jab Dekha ki Neetu Kisi gaadi ke pass khadi hai toh Woh return mud Gaya us construction side ke taraf
Driver : madam pehle aap thoda sa Pani p ligiye
yeh bol ke ek bottle Neetu ke taraf badha dia
neetu ne bottle lekai Pani pine lagi
kuch minutes ke baad
neetu piche mud ke dekhi kahin Woh Gunda piche toh Nahi lakin Woh ja chuka tha
Driver : madam aap gadi ke ander aajyiye MAIN AC on Kar deta hoon thoda sa aaram Kar ligiye fir main aap ko chod dunga aap jahan kahengai
Neetu : Nahi Sukriya uski koi jaroorat Nahi
main chali jaungi
Driver ; madam please aap samjhi ye Woh ager fir se aa Gaya toh
neetu ko bhi uski baat Achi lagi
or fir gaadi Ka darwaja khol ke gaadi ke ander Beth gayi
Tapti garmi main AC ke thandak main Kuch aaram sa Mila usko
kuch minutes ke baad

lakin Neetu ko paseena aane laga
or Kuch ajib si bechani si hone lagi or gala bhi sukhne laga
tab apni bag se Pani ke bottle Nikal ke pine lagi
kuch Pani ander jarhi thi toh Kuch shadi main gir Raha tha

tabhi driver ne gaadi ko aage badhane laga or Woh gaadi ko dhire dhire Chala Raha tha
Driver : kya hua madam AC or badha Doon aap ki pashina aaraha hai
Neetu : Nahi rehne do
ab Neetu ke Jawan bhi ladkhadane lagi or uski chut main sarsarhat si hone lagi jish se thoda thoda Pani bhi Nikal rahi thi
Neetu : Mann main ( yeh mujhe kya ho raha hai or itni bechani si kyun lag rahi hai
niche se bhi main puri Gili ho gayi hoon hey Bhagwaan )
yahan pe main aap ko bata Doon ki Neetu ke sex life pichle 5 Saal se kharab hai kyun ki Birendra ek Jung main bomb ke chapet main aagya tha or marte marte bacha tha us din se birendra Ka khada hi Nahi Hota Hai or Neetu ko bhi birendra se koi sikwah Nahi hai
bahat pyar Kar ti hai Neetu Birendra se
tabhi gadi ruka or driver niche utar Kar
Driver : madam main ek minutes main Aaya

yah wohi construction site hai jahan par Kuch 30 minutes pehle Neetu ko oh Gunda Jabardasti Kar Raha tha

Neetu : yeh aap kahan roke liye gadi ko
Driver : madam yeh site mere Malik Ka hai
or
kal yahin pe ek file bhul Gaye the main wohi Lene jaraha hoon
ager aap dar rahain toh mere Saath chaliye
Neetu Kuch Soch Kar thik hai main aap ke Saath chalti hoon
kon si floor
Driver : madam 5 th floor
neetu : thik hai chaliye

jab Neetu or driver 4 th floor pe pohance toh Neetu ko piche se koi pakad liya
neetu chonk Kar tum
haan main
ab Neetu ko bechani ke Saath Saath far bhi lagne lagi
Driver : sale akle akle mazaa Lena chahte the na madarchod
Aadmi : Nahi Bhai Lalit tujhe toh Maine phone Kiya tha

yeh dono Lalit or Mohan Hain
Nagesh ke khash aadmi
jo ki har gairkanuni dhanda main Nagesh ke Saath rehte Hain
mohan Neetu ko pakad kar lejane laga or Neetu bhi chatpata rahai thi or chodne ki guhar laga rahi thi

Lalit : Mohan shadi Nikal Sali ki
or Mohan Neetu ki shadi ko Nikal me laga
neetu : Bhagwaan ke liye mujhe chod do please main tumhari aage haath jodti hoon
Mohan : chod dengai tujhe pehle apni pyas toh bujha le tujhe se Sali tere liye bahat tadpe Hain
Lalit aage badh Kar Neetu ke Saadi Nikal dia
neetu bhagne ki kosis Kar ne lagi lakin Mohan doud kar Neetu ko
piche se pakad liya
or Lalit bhi pass aaker
neetu ke boobs ko tham liya

neetu Ka haal rorokar Bura tha or udhar niche bhi Pani ki dariya baha rahi thi
tabhi Neetu ko laga Jaise Mohan ne piche se uski patikot ko utha Raha hai
or oh apni patikot pakad me ke liye niche jhukne lagi lakin ismai
mohan ko fayda hua uska khada Lund sidha neetu ke gaand ke daraar main phasne laga
idhar Neetu jitna Hil rahi utna ragad ho Raha tha
dono sandwich ke Tarah chipke the Neetu ke Saath

ab Mohan patikot uthana chod Kar Neetu ke doodh ko tham Kar masal ne laga
or Lalit nitu ke chehra pakad Kar chumne ki kosis Kar Raha tha
neetu Ka toh uper or niche dono taraf se aansoo Nikal Raha tha

Neetu : chod do kamino
mujhe Jane do Nahi toh Mera pati tumhe zinda gaad dega zamin par
Mohan : tera pati humara Kuch ukhad Nahi Sakta

or tab
Lalit ne Mohan ko aankh mar Kar neeche Beth Gaya or Neetu Ka patikot utha ke niche ghush Gaya

Neetu : Nahi Nikal kamine ahh maa....if...
kyun ki tab tak Mohan ne bhi Neetu ke doodh jor Jor se dabane laga or Lalit Jo niche betha tha oh Neetu ke penty ko side Kar ke ek Baar chut ko sungha or fir apna mooh ghusane laga
lakin Neetu nai bhi apna dono taang ko jod liya jiski bajah se Lalit Ka mooh Neetu ke chut ke pass Nahi ja Raha tha
idhar Mohan bhi apna Lund ko Neetu ke gaand ki darar main ragad Raha tha or doodh bhi daba Raha tha

neetu apna haath ko niche se Lalit ke sar ko niche daba rahi thi
or Mann main Bhagwaan ki Yaad Kar rahi thi ki Bhagwaan kahin se aake ussai bachaa le


tabhi

ue..ma..a..uf......Nikal .....ku..t..e
ap.....n..i.. haath Nikal wahan se
lalit ne apna haath piche le jakar Neetu ke gaand ki daraar main apna ungli ko jor se ghushane laga
Lalit : Bhai Randi toh Pura Gili ho gayi hai
Sala ager Pani main Viagra Nahi milaya hota toh yeh Soch or Kitna dum lagati
Mohan : Sahi Kiya Bhai tera dimag Ka jawab Nahi
Yeh bol ke Woh Neetu ki blouse ko kholne laga ab Neetu me Lalit Ka sar chod dia or apna blouse ko phir se band Kar ne lagi
Tabhi Lalit Puri jor de Kar Neetu ke dono tango ko khol deta hai
Or ek jhatke main Neetu ki penty ko bhi faad deta hai
Neetu : nahii...
Tab Mohan bhi blouse ko faad deta hai
Abhi Neetu ek black bra or yellow patikot main khadi Puri quyamat lag rahi thi
Tab Mohan apna ek haath piche lejakar Neetu ke bra bhi khol deta hai
Neetu : chod do kamino Maine tumhara kya bigada hai
Ab Lalit apna mooh sidha neetu ke chut par laga deta hai or chat ne Lagta hai or idhar Mohan Neetu ke haath ko Jabardasti hata ke Uske bra Nikal deta hai

Ab Neetu bebash ho jati hai Bhagwaan ki Baar Baar bulane lagti hai
Or idhar na chahte hue bhi uski sarir ab apna control khone lagti hai
Tab Lalit apni ek ungli Neetu ke chut main ghusha deta hai
Neetu ek dum se
ahhh.....ishhh...maa......Nahi........
Keh Kar jhadne lagi
Yeh Moka Dekh Kar Mohan Neetu ke patikot Ka naada khol deta hai or tabhi
Ek laat
Mohan ke mooh par padta hai jisse Mohan dur ja Kar Gira
neetu toh bahat Dino se jhadne ke baad nidhal or besudh si ho gayi
or niche Lalit bhi pura chut ke Pani ko pi Gaya jisme Neetu ke pesab bhi samil tha
abhi bhi Woh dhire dhire chat Raha hai jisme Neetu bhi halaka moot rahi hai or Lalit ussai bhi pi Raha hai
jab Mohan Ka chikh lalaik ke Kano main pada toh Woh Neetu ko chod Kar utha Neetu wohi niche Beth gayi
woh ladka Mohan ko maar maar ke uska jabda daant sab Tod chuka tha
tabhi lalit piche se Baar Kiya ladke par lakin yeh kya ladka jhuk Kar ek punch Lalit hai haath Mai mara
or Lalit apna Pura dum laga ke cheekh utha kyun ki
uska haath toot chuka tha
mohan toh sayad kab Ka behosh ho chuka tha
lakin ab Bari thi Lalit Ka
woh ladka Lalit ko phir se utha ke niche patak dia
jisse Lalit ke pashliyan tut gayi or dardnaak chikh pure building main gunj utha
neetu bhi yeh chikh sun Kar hosh main aagyi or fatafat apna Saadi or blouse pehnne lagi

tab tak Woh ladka Lalit or Mohan ko kinch Kar uper le Jane laga
us time ladke ko koi Dekh leta toh pant main pesaab Kar deta kyun ki ladke Ka aankh pura lal ho Gaya tha dekhne se pata chal Raha tha ki aankh ke jagah par do jalti hui koyala laga rakha hai


Neetu apni kapda pehnne ke baad doud kar upper ko gayi
tab tak ladka Lalit or Mohan ko 8 th no ke floor par la chuka tha or dono ko kinare par lai jaraha tha
or unko niche fenk ne hi wala tha ki


Neetu : Ruk ja bete tujhe Mari kasam

ji Haan Bhai ye Yash hai
Yash : Nahin maa yeh log apni sari Seema par Kar chuke Hain aap par haath Dal Kar inhe jine Ka koi jaroorat Nahi
Neetu : Nahi mere Bache yeh maar Gaye toh kanoon tujhe Nahi chodega
Yash : Jo bhi ho mom main inhe Nahi choudunga
Neetu Yash ke pass ja Kar piche se lipat jati hai or ro ro Kar
Neetu : tujhe Mari kasam
Chod de bete

Yash kasam sun Kar un dono ko chod Kar ghum jata hai toh Neetu Yash ke sine main lipat Kar rone lagti hai

Neetu : main loot gayi bete main Barbaad ho gayi ab kis mooh se tere papa ke samne jaungi
Yash : aap shant ho jao mom main hoon Na Kuch Nahi Hoga
Neetu : main mar na Chahti hoon beta
Yash Neetu ke mooh par haath Rakh dia or
Yash : aaj bol Diya mom dubara mat bol na
aap or papa se Mera bajud hai
agar aap hi na rahi toh phir main bhi ji Kai kya karoonga yeh bol ke Neetu se lipat Kar rone laga

Neetu yeh sun Kar Yash ko apni chaati main chupa leti hai
phir Woh dono Nikal jate Hain Ghar ki taraf

ab aap log yeh Soch rahe honge ki Yash ko kaisai pata chal

toh jab Neetu ko Mohan douda Raha tha toh ek aadmi Dekh liya
jiski beti inke kukarmo Ka shikaar hue thi Kuch saalon pehle
so usne Jaake Yash ko bataya ki Neetu ko Mohan Jabardasti Kar Raha hai
yash pehle se janta tha ki Lalit or Mohan kaise aadmi Hain toh oh apni bike Nikal Kar jaldi se pohncha phir bhi bahat Kuch ho Gaya tha


tring .... tring.....

Naina : hello kon bol Raha hai
Unknown : hum bol rahe Hain
Naina : kya mazak hai yeh
tumhe pata hai ki tum kissai baat Kar rahe ho
unknown : sab pata hai madam
Naina Soch ne lagi kon hai yeh Jo aadhi Raat ko pareshaan Kar Raha hai lakin awaz Kuch Jani pehchani sa laga
Unknown : kya hua madam
Naina : kya aap Apne naam batane Ka kast karengai please
Unknown : ager aap ek coffee pine Ka waada karengai toh
Naina : kya main aap ko janti Nahi or main anjaan logon ke Saath coffee Nahi piti hoon

tabhi Naina Ka mobile Baja
Naina ne phone ko rakah or mobile Receive Kar ke
Naina : hello kon
Karan : madam main Karan bol Raha hoon
Naina : Haan bolo Karan
Karan : madam ek aadmi ko humane pakda hai Usmaan ke case main
Naina : good job Karan
Karan : lakina madam Woh toh
.....aadmi hai
Naina : kya



Doston please comment Kar batana ki update kaisa tha

Mast update bro

 

[Yash420]

Mast update bro

Thanks Bhai

 

[Yash420]

for new story thread brother

Thanks Big brother

 

[Yash420]

Rasprrad aur Romanchak Thriller. Waiting for next update.

Thank you Bhai

 

[Yash420]

exactly....................
kahani mein kuchh to realistic base hona chahiye..............

yahan interfaith, incest aur cuckold ki instant fantasy ne ...........kahaniyon ke readers hi nahi chhode..........sab fabntassy mein jine lage hain
kahani logical hoti hain................ ye scene bhi logical tha........... aisa hota hai......realistic

lekin fantasy...... 'jisko hindi/urdu mein gupp bhi kahte hain......... usmein bina sir pair ke lund khada, choot gili aur chudai shuru
tab sabkuchh achchha lagta hai

bhai readers ki ginti badhane ke chakkar mein........... in achchhi kahaniyon ko .......incest, adultery section mein rakhkar aise readers ko kyon hatash (frustrate) karte ho jo sirf chudai tak hi jante hain......................kahani ki gehraiyon aur utar-chadhav ko hi nahin jaante

romance ya thriller hi rakh liya karo.................. jaise ankitarani ji ne apni kahani ko jab se incest ki bajay thriller tag mein convert kar diya............ kahani ke scene ko lekar faaltu ki bahas band ho gayi....... sirf logical comments hi aate hain.......... chahe readers kam ho gaye ..... lekin sincere readers hain............

Main aap ki baat se sehmat hoon bade Bhai lakin abhi toh suruwat hai
Kahani Ka aage bahat Kuch hona Baki hai
Or ek baat Bhai yahan Neetu Ka bhi gangbang Hoga or Somya Ka bhi
Or yeh kahani Woh har kahani se alag Hoga Jo sirf yahi Soch te Hain ki khali hero hi sex karega
Lakin Bhai mere kahani Ka har character ek aham role main bandha hua hai or Woh har cheez Hoga Jo sayad reader pehli Baar padhenge or yeh main Nahi kahunga yeh meri kahani kahegi
Or reader Kam hone se bhi yeh kahani ko main Pura karunga

or Bade Bhai Sukriya aap ko is mahtawpurn comment ke liye

 

[Yash420]

Update 6



Naina : good job Karan
Karan : lakin madam woh toh .....aadmi hai
Naina : kya ..

ab aage..

karan tum ek kaam Karo tum ussai headquarter lai Kai aao main Kuch dair main aati hoon
Karan : lakin madam Woh humare saath kyun Aaye ga
Naina : mujhe Kuch Sunna Nahi hai Kisi bhi kimat par Woh mere samne hona Chahiye
main jab headquarter pohnchungi toh
Karan : thik hai madam main dekhta hoon
Naina : jaldi Karan do first
kyun ki media piche pad chuki hai
Karan : ok madam
jab Naina apni kamre se niche aati hai toh us wakt Somya or Suryakant sofe pe baith Kar koi Cheez discuss Kar rahe the

tab Somya ke nazar Naina pe padi
Somya : Kahan ja rahi ho beti
Naina : mom Woh ek important case ke chalte mujhe abhi headquarter Jana padega

Somya : uff tumhara yeh kaam
kabhi toh Ghar main bhi Raha Karo
or aise Raat ko choro uchake ke piche bhagti rahti ho Kisi din Kuch ho gaya toh
Naina : ager aap ki bhashan khatam ho gayi toh main chalti hoon mujhe jaldi Jana hai
or reh Gaya hai toh baad main suna Lena
yeh bol ke Somya or Suryakant ko
naina Ghar se Nikal gayi Jeepce
sai
Somya : Dekh liya kaisai baat Kar rahi hai
Suryakant : kya
ab aap mujhe apni beech main mat Lao
ab aap Jano or aap ki beti
Somya : Haan Haan isliye main keh rahi thi us ladke Kai barai main Jo mujhe mall main Mila tha
lakin Aap ko apni business Kahan fursat hai Jo aap Mari baat ko sunaigai
tab Suryakant ko ek call aata hai or oh balcony main chala jata hai baat Kar ne

fir Kuch dair baad police headquarter main Naina enter Hoti hai
guard salam thok Kai
Guard: jai hind madam
Naina : jai hind
karan Kahan hai
Guard : madam Karan sir toh ander Hain

Naina : thik hai
or Haan milujhe ek cup coffee Chahiye jaldi Lana
Guard : thik hai madam
Naina andar ko jati hai
Or dekhti hai ki ek aadmi ko Karan chair par bitha ke rakha hai Jo ki full tally tha

Naina : yeh kya hai Karan yeh bata paega us Raat ke barai main
Karan : madam main bhi wohi Puch Raha tha abhi
Naina : Kuch Bola
Karan : Nahi madam abhi tak toh Kuch Bola Nahi hai
Naina : thik hai
Ram Singh is Kai mooh par Pani maro or issai hosh main Lao
HR : thik hai madam

(Flash back)

Yash ke Ghar main is wakt Neetu or Yash the
Or Yash abhi apni mom ke Jo khroche aayi thi us ko garam Pani se saaf Kar ke uspe dawai laga Raha hai
Yash ki itni care dekh Kar Neetu ke aankh namm ho jati hai
Woh sochti hai ki ager aaj uska beta ager time se na aata toh sayad ab Woh is duniya main Nahi Hoti
Yeh Soch Kar Neetu aankho se Pani phir se behne laga
Jab Yash ko pata laga ki uski maa to rahi hai toh phir se Woh apni maa ko gale se lagakar chup karane laga

Yash : shaant ho jayiye mom main hoon Na
Neetu : Haan mere Bache ager Tu aaj Nahi aata toh sayad main is duniya main Nahi Hoti
Yash turant apna haath uski maa ke mooh par Rakh dia
Yash : aisa Kabhi mat sochna mom main Humesha Aap ki Saath hoon chahe Kuch bhi ho Jaye
neetu yeh sunkar Yash ko or bhi jor se bheench leti hai


wohi dusri or

Ek black jaguar car hospital ke gate se ander apni full raftar se aake ruka or usmai se Jo saksh bahar nikla ussai Dekh Kar sab apna SAR neeche Kar liye
kisi ko bhi sar uthane Ka sahash Nahi hua

Security guard : Salam Sahab Aadmi : hoon
kar ke aage ki or Nikal jata hai
yeh ek cabin tha jahan pe doh log admit the
yeh koi or Nahi doston Lalit or Mohan Hain Jo ki abhi coma main hai
or yeh inka boss Nagesh hai

thoda sa piche
jab ek aadmi Nagesh ki car ko wohi dekhta hai toh Woh foran Nagesh ko Milne upper ko jata hai kyun ki yeh bhi Nagesh Ka hi aadmi tha Jo desi sarab Ka theka chalata tha
jab Woh upper aaker Lalit or Mohan ki halat Dekh toh pehle sock ho gaya fir kaise na kaise Kar ke Nagesh ki car main Woh unlogon ko hospital leaya

Yeh hospital bhi Suryakant Ka tha jahan par Nagesh human part Ka business chalata hai
kulmilakar Nagesh us sehar main kale samrajya Ka betaz badsha hai
or uska right hand hai Gafoor
jisko log Gafoor Bhai ke naam se jante Hain
jo issai ek Baar Dekh lai Woh wohi pe khade khade pisab Kar dega
doston aage Gafoor ke bare main bataunga

Hospital ke andar is wakt Nagesh chair pe baitha hai or hospital ke Deen Mr Bipin Shukla khade Hain
Bipin : sir humne try Kar rahain Hain Woh bahat jaldi thik ho jayengai

Nagesh : abhi Woh dono kaisai Hain
Bipin : sir dono hi coma main chale Gaye Hain
koi unhe bahat bedardi se mara hai
Nagesh : gusse se kon Naya dushman paida ho gaya be
madarchod mere aadmi par haath uthaya
woh Jo lalit or Mohan ko lekai aaya tha Woh bhi wahan khada tha
jiska naam Raghu hai
Raghu : Malik main jab wahan pe pohancha toh koi Nahi tha
Nagesh : hmm
Bipin Tu Jo bhi Kar lakin mujhe jaldi yeh Dono pehle jaisa Chahiye
Bipin : lakin sir
Nagesh : lakin bakin tera gaand main Dal or Jo bol Raha hoon Woh Kar
samajha ki Nahi
Bipin : G sir

Nagesh uth Kar Gafoor ko call karta hai
kuch ring ke baad Gafoor call receive Kar liya
Gafoor : G Malik kahiye kya baat hai
Nagesh : Gafoor tum jahan kahin bhi ho turant yahan pe aajao
Gafoor : G Malik

Nagesh wahan se Nikal Kar apni aade pe aagaya
jahan pehle se Kuch aadmi or Gafoor khade the
Nagesh ko Dekh Kar sab Salam Kar te Hain
Gafoor yeh Woh Banda hai jisko Nagesh sirf Kisi ko Marne ya fir kidnapp Kar ne keliye rakha hai
Darindegi Ka dusra naam Gafoor hai yeh bahat Kam bolta hai
sirf Apne kaam ke bajah se Jana jata hai or Nagesh issai Jo bhi keh Dr iske liye Woh khuda Ka farmaan hai chahe Kuch bhi ho yeh us kaam ko Kar ta hai
6 feet 6 inch Ka Banda hai solid bodybuilder type jiski umer abhi 35 Saal hai

Nagesh Ka Kar wahan apni chair par baith Gaya or sab aadmi wahan se chale Gaye
sibaye Gafoor ke

Nagesh : Gafoor mujhe Woh aadmi Chahiye
jishne lalait or Mohan ko mara hai
Gafoor : ho Jayega Malik
Nagesh : jitna jaldi Hoga utna jaldi mujhe Chahiye
Gafoor : thik hai Malik
Nagesh : zinda hin Chahiye
jara main bhi toh dekhoon ki kon madarchod mere aadmi ko Chua hai
Gafoor : G Malik

yeh bol Kar wahan se nikal jata hai
present


Naina us aadmi se puchtach Kar ne lagi jishko Karan lekai aaya tha lakin Woh aadmi Nashe main tha
Naina : toh batao kon tha Woh
Bevda : mujhe aisa laga madam ki koi film ki shooting chal Raha hai or koi hero in logon ko kaat Raha hai
Naina : kya hua tha suru se batao
Bevda : madam main apna daily Ka Kota khatam Kar ke wahan se jaraha tha tabhi mere samne se teen car tezi se us hotel ke samne ruka or Kuch log andar Gaye or Kuch log bahar hi ruke
lakin do minutes ke andar ek Kala saya Nahi madam mujhe laga sakyat Yamraaj tha Woh main toh Soch Raha tha film ki shooting hai lakin jab Woh Chala Gaya toh main Jake Dekha toh mere hosh us Gaye kyun ki wahan pe lashe hi lashe bichi thi
yeh bol Kar Woh sarab Ka ek ghoont Bharata hai
tabhi guard bhi coffee lekai aaya
Guard : madam coffe
Naina : Haan Lao
Naina coffee ko pite hua Karan iske sharab ko wahan Rakh do
karan : thik hai madam
Lao apna bottle doh idhar
Bevda : Nahi mujhe or thoda sa Pina hai
Naina yeh sun Kar ek kinch ke tamacha jad deti hai bevda ke gaal par
or bevda kursi se niche girta hai
Naina : jitna Bola ja Raha hai utna Kar jyada Chu chapad Kiya na toh andar daal Kar tera Woh hasar karungi ki Tu chalne phirne kayak Nahi bachega
bevda yeh sun Kar thar thar kampne laga
Tabhi
Karan : madam aap please saant rahiye
Naina : ab bata aage
Bevda : silence
Naina : bol Raha hai ki Nahi
Bevda : silence
HR : bolta hai ki Nahi be
yeh keh Kar apna danda Nikal ta hai jisko Dekh Kar bevda dar Kar
Bevda : batata hoon madam main sab batata hoon
Naina : thik hai jaldi bak

Bevda : jab Woh saksh bahar ko nikla tab Woh Pura khoon se Sana hua tha or uskai haath main ek bada sa chaku tha
or sabse bhayanak uski aankhe thi
Naina : matlab
Bevda : matlab madam uski aankh na ho Kar koi jalata hua aangar ho yeh Dekh Kar main chup Gaya wahan
uske baad Jo hua tha sab bata dia bevde ne
Bevda : madam uska chehera toh Dhaka hua tha or Haan uski haath main ek shadhee Ka tukda tha jab Woh lad Raha tha toh Woh tukda wahin gir Gaya lakin madam uska kaam hone ke baad Woh us tukde ko pagolon ki Tarah dhoond Raha tha
baad main Woh tukda ussai Mila toh woh ussai chum Kar apna pocket main Rakh liya
Naina : hmm
Karan ek kaam Karo tum issai Jane doh or Woh CCTV futage Ka kya hua
Karan : madam humne usko bhi check Kar liya lekin usmain bhi Kuch clear Nahi mila
Naina : Gunda swami ke jitne bhi clue mile Hain Woh sab issai jod Kar Dekho sayad Kuch Nikle
Karan : thik hai madam

Naina wahan se Nikal Gaye Apne Ghar
jab Naina Ghar ki taraf ja rahi thi ek shoonshaan si jagah par gadi hilne laga or steering unbalanced ho Gaya tab Naina ne Kash ke break mara or gadi ROK ke dekhi toh pichla tyre main ek rod ghusha hai

woh palat Kar gayi or steapni ko Nikal Kar layi or ussai neeche Rakh Kar tyre change Kar ne lagi tyre change Kar ne ke baad jab Woh driving seat ke taraf ja rahi thi toh ek black colour ki gadi aake
Naina ke samne ruka
Or usmain se Jo saksh nikla ussai Dekh Kar Naina


Doston update posted
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