Erotica जोरू का गुलाम उर्फ़ जे के जी

[komaalrani]

जोरू का गुलाम भाग २४८- पार्टी की तैयारी, सीनियर्स की पार्टी, पृष्ठ 1545

अपडेट पोस्टेड, कृपया पढ़ें, लाइक करें, और कमेंट जरूर करें

 

[ayush01111]

Ab aap aa agye hain to update bhi aa hi jayega vaise part 27 ( page 1443 ) valaa kaisa laga, uspe aapke comment ka abhi bhi wait kar rhi hun aapko kati baar respond bhi kiya

Mam update accha tha or knowledge bhi mili ki kisi company ko kaise taken over kiya ja sakta hai legal and illleagaly way se and share market ke bare me bhi it's quite knowledgeable update and I am thankfull of it

 

[Shetan]

Bas aapke green signal ka wait tha, ab thoda sa likhana bacha hai, do tin din me pakka

Koi bat nahi Komalji. Aap jitna time lena chahe lo. Kyo ki aap jab bhi time leti ho dhamaka karti ho. Thankyou so much


what is jpg

 

[Shetan]

aap ke saath se hi tino kahaniya aage bahd rhi hain, wait karungi

Bilkul sahi formet set kiya hai. Is se aap ko sahi se likhne ka bhi time mil jaega.

 

[Sutradhar]

Bas aapke green signal ka wait tha, ab thoda sa likhana bacha hai, do tin din me pakka

कोमल मैम

अपडेट ????

किसी भी कहानी पर दे दो क्योंकि अपडेट के इंतजार में स्क्रीन स्क्रॉल करते - करते उंगलियों की वही हालत हो गई है जैसे फुलवा की -

" दिनवा गिनत मोरी घिसलि उंगरिया की रहिया तकत नैना थकत मोरे रे बिदेसिया,..."

सादर

 

[komaalrani]

Mam update accha tha or knowledge bhi mili ki kisi company ko kaise taken over kiya ja sakta hai legal and illleagaly way se and share market ke bare me bhi it's quite knowledgeable update and I am thankfull of it

Thanks so much

 

[komaalrani]

कोमल मैम

अपडेट ????

किसी भी कहानी पर दे दो क्योंकि अपडेट के इंतजार में स्क्रीन स्क्रॉल करते - करते उंगलियों की वही हालत हो गई है जैसे फुलवा की -

" दिनवा गिनत मोरी घिसलि उंगरिया की रहिया तकत नैना थकत मोरे रे बिदेसिया,..."

बस एक दो दिन में

शेयर मार्केट की मारकाट के साथ

 

[komaalrani]

Bilkul sahi formet set kiya hai. Is se aap ko sahi se likhne ka bhi time mil jaega.

Thanks

 

[komaalrani]

Jo share aur company ke bare me aapne likha hai na wo sar ke uper se ja raha hai. but itna to samjh aata hai ki story ka part hai aur jaruri hai. 2nd thing, Aap badi pahunchi hui chij ho, normal writer ni ho ki tharak me likh diya. Aapko bahut chijo ke bare me bahut kuch pata hai. isliye to I am you fan. Story achchi chal rahi hai.aapki oda scene inki mother aur inke beech ice break ka bhi karwa do.

bahoot bahoot thanks bas ek do paarts aur share market aur corporate affair vaale hain aur koshish karungi baaton ko thoda km technical rakhun , aapke ek ek comment mere liye bahoot value rahkte hain

agala paart bahoot jald

 

[komaalrani]

Didi aapki update business code mein hai, sorry mai isko decode nhi kr payi lekin Komal the gr8 ne likhi hai to achi hi hogi.

koyi baat nahi agala update kaal aayega use jaroor padhiyega

 

[komaalrani]

I have come to this story after a very long time and have completely lost track of what's going on..
However, what i can say (or comment) on your update is that..this one (& maybe most of your updates) has its ears completely on the ground..the way you relate the happenings of the story with real life situations and places (like local trains, BSE, SEBI, etc) is unique in its own way...even though your story is fictional, the way you relate to day to day incidents and places is outstanding..
Great going!! Keep it up!!

komaalrani

Thanks so much next update soon .