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Fantasy Kaisa Yeh Ishq Hai.... Ajab Sa Risk Hai...... (Completed)

nain11ster

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nice update ..ruki ,suko ke faisle ka kya hua ?? ..ye sarpmarich lagta hai bahut taaqatwar hai ?...aur yahi mahamahim ke peechhe tha shayad ...ab usko maarne ke liye hero kya karega ...
hu yu to pyar karne laga hai serin se ?...kya accept karegi serin ..
Rukhi sukhi jail me gaya rukhi sukhi khane uske faisla adalat tay karegi :D ..

Baki Surpmarich ka safar to shuru hua hai.. aage puri detail hai
 
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nice update ..serin ne huyu ke pyar ko acceot kiya aise lagta hai ,par wo khanjar kyu bana raha hai ? .
kya sarpmarich prithvi par milega ??...
ab yaha aa gaye hai to pehle pariwar se milenge ya nahi dekhte hai ..
Aap ki jigyasa kamal ki hai Leon bhai shukr hai mujhe sawal ke jawab dene se jyada sawal ko ghumana pasand hai .. warna aap to khatarnak type hone wali ghatnayen puchh lete hain :D
 
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nice update ..par ye kaun hai sarpmarich???? kya pehle kaha iska jikar hua tha kya ????
to sab iska kiya dhara hai ...
Nahi kahani me ye sabse end me hi introduction hai iska kyonki ye ek open story thi jisme shuru se sare villan ki full detail thi... Unhe jab marne gaye tab iska pata chala tha.. so no previous detail
 
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nain11ster

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zabardast kahani ..?% .....
sabke peechhe surpmarich tha main villain ...Hu Yu ki badolat usko maarne me thodi aasani huyi ...
nandini aur ansh ki ,,,,jivisha aur nishchal ki shadi ho gayi ....?...
par kya serin ne shadi ki ya nahi ??? kya surpmarich earth par hi rehta tha hamesha aur apne dimaag se apne pyaado ko control karta tha ??? ..
ruki ,suko ko sirf bandi banaya ...
Hehehe ... Maine kahani bahut detail me likhta hun Leon bhai... Lekin kuch chijen readers ke side ki hai jo unhe imagine karni hoti hai... Agar uska bhi explain kar diya fir to nayi theory kabhi aayegi hi nahi... Samjhata hun iss baat ko vistar se...

Surpmarich ke bare me maine uski shurwati siksha dikhayi... Fir maine uske samkalin logon ke bare me bataya ...

Fir universe me jivan ke srijan ka vishay bhi uthaya... Aur aage ek takat ke nashe me chud insan ko dikhaya jo khud ko prakriti manta hai..

Itna hone ke bawjood us insan ne apna astitw kayi hazar varshon se bana rakha hai... Kahani ke is bhaag par gaur karenge to puri ek theory najar aayegi... Fir bahut kuch samjh me aa jayega...

Filhaal itna hi ki agla part ... Pre-qual se hi shuru hoga... Jahan ishq ke risk ki nayi unchai dikhai degi..

Ek baar fir Jivisha aur Nischal honge .. aur inke bich nandni dikhai degi apne dandar kirdar aur sirf ek insan ke roop me jiska super power uska insan hona hi hai...

So my request Jivisha ke shaktiyon ka itihas aur Surpmarich ke itihas ko padhe .. kyonki apne aap me aapko ke biggest fantasy lagegi jiski detail aapko next part me pura milega
 
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aur parchhe ko kya saja huyi ya nahi ,usne jeher diya tha hero ko ,,aur jeher se bach kaise gaye ???



aur ab ye sawalkar ke jariye kisne chetawni di nishchal ko , kya wo surpmarich tha ??? jisne dobara sharir dharan kar liya ??

aur last me padhkar aisa laga jaise kahani aur aage jayegi ...

Zahar se bachna to ek comment me bata hi diya tha.. ye bhi aapko khud connect karna tha jab Nischal ke body ne saanp ka zahar accept kar liya tha... Uske alwa jab Nischal aur Jivisha ki shadi hui thi tab Dono ke anguthe me ek pura sanp dant ko asthaoit kiya gaya tha... Jiski nili aur laal aakhen thi .. tab Shwetna na kaha bhi tha ki Nischal aur Jivisha ko kisi shanp ka zahar nahi diya gaya tha balki ye usse bhi kahin jyada khatarnak dravya tha ... Jo kayi hazar lakh guna zahar ko kaat de...

Baharhaal saja ke bharose hi chhoda gaya tha rukhi aur sukhi ko kyonki inhe earth par aakhiri kaam khatm karne aana tha..

Aur yahan jab aaye to family drame me fanskar rah gaye :D

Ye aakhri ka sawal to next part ki shurwat hai... Kripya dhairya banakar Ishq risk part 2 ka intzar karen is
 
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